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xMeteorxStriker
April 19th, 2006, 09:39 AM
http://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/UnseenIdiot.bmp
Trainers-
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e151/SanctionedSorrow/trainer-033.jpghttp://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e151/SanctionedSorrow/trainer-016.jpghttp://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExTrain.pnghttp://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExTrain4.pnghttp://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/FemaleFront.pnghttp://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExTrain5.png
http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExtraTrainerAWESOMEfixed.bmphttp://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/new.bmphttp://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/Editforatq.bmp

Here are the rest there was a picture limit...
I made this guy for my stepdad who works at fedex freight it looks just like him!FedEx man! (http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExtraTrainerROBERT.bmp)
Pokemon-
Demon Pokemon (http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExPkMn.png)
Sneasel Edit (http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExPkMn2.png)
Here is my 1st and only scratch! Scratch (http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/1Scratch.bmp)
Other-
Shadow the Hedgehog (http://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/Shadow.bmp)

Gary, the Magic Fairy
April 19th, 2006, 03:50 PM
They're pretty good, except for the "hero", the hair needs shading, and the outline is a light blue, which doesn't work well with that red color. Hope that helps :)

and BTW, is there a reason for the green or brown background?

xMeteorxStriker
April 19th, 2006, 04:24 PM
the backgrounds are that way so i can import them into the hack w/o them messing up...
(they are the original characters background)
heres a new pokemon i made!
http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExPkMn2.png

His hair isnt shaded b/c (it was orignally) but i made that w/ a pic of the hero i got offline... then when i figured our hacking more i exported the actual thing from unlz.gba and pasted that but the shading colors i used werent in the pallete so i just went ahead and said screw it lol

Zone
April 19th, 2006, 05:00 PM
Your newest Pokemon's horns have a dark outline, unlike the rest of the sprite. Make it lighter.

xMeteorxStriker
April 19th, 2006, 05:02 PM
k ill fix it up thnx for the comment

EDIT: here it is
BEFOREhttp://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/justincase.png

AFTERhttp://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExPkMn2.png

xMeteorxStriker
April 20th, 2006, 05:18 PM
http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExtraTrainerAWESOME.bmp
New guy tell me what u think!

dude256
April 20th, 2006, 05:33 PM
Your lastest pic is nice, seems a tiny bit flat though. Maybe use a 2nd, darker, gray tone to shade the cape =).

Your Red spikey pokemon has a really good design, but his < leg seems kinda twisted ^^U. But maybe you were going for a crazy/wild look.

xMeteorxStriker
April 20th, 2006, 05:38 PM
Ill fix that cape up real quick!
EDIT: FIxed him
Beforehttp://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExtraTrainerAWESOME.bmp
Afterhttp://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExtraTrainerAWESOMEfixed.bmp

dude256
April 20th, 2006, 05:53 PM
Ah there ya go, he's got more depth now. Nice tare too, tares build character XD

xMeteorxStriker
April 20th, 2006, 06:03 PM
Thanx i was hoping i shaded the cape right i am not too goo at that lol
and i have no clue which one tare is lol but thanx anyways...

xMeteorxStriker
April 20th, 2006, 06:50 PM
http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExtraTrainerROBERT.bmp
Check this out peoples its my stepdad!
He works at fedex freight lol
i thought it would be fun to make a real person ha ha ha

dude256
April 20th, 2006, 06:53 PM
Thats hilarious XD. Nice sprite though. You get stuff delievered faster when you ship fedex I hope =P

xMeteorxStriker
April 20th, 2006, 07:15 PM
http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/Gangsta1.bmp
thats a gangsta i made for my friends lil project
it right here if u wanna see
http://pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=65843

Domin-8
April 20th, 2006, 08:54 PM
You didn't do a bad job, my only beef is the trainer's boys(hero whatever) heair on the back sprite. It looks like you left the blue outline from the original sprite, you may want to fix that

xMeteorxStriker
April 20th, 2006, 09:10 PM
yah i know my friend daniel made that then just kinda quit on me so i had to learn spriting... i may fix it later but dont really feel like it now lol

xTriggerFinger
April 20th, 2006, 09:29 PM
in my defense his hair was shaded in one of the pictures i made that i forgot to send to you...and secondly...well, i guess thats all

xTriggerFinger
April 20th, 2006, 10:08 PM
ok, i edited the sprites for you and sent them to you...its now your job to put them on here because i havent met the requirements to post links to other sites...

xMeteorxStriker
April 20th, 2006, 10:20 PM
lol here they are homes...http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/tback-000.bmp

xTriggerFinger
April 20th, 2006, 10:36 PM
hey, i did a pretty good job, if i do say so myself

xMeteorxStriker
April 20th, 2006, 10:50 PM
yah really good :) keep it up and get active in forums man!

xTriggerFinger
April 20th, 2006, 10:58 PM
but doesnt that require...work?

you know i dont do...work

Kitty Face
April 21st, 2006, 02:49 AM
When you sent me the PM, I was going to suggest shading in the cape, but it looks like you've already fixed it! ^_^ Good job! ;D

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
April 21st, 2006, 04:53 AM
They are all pretty good for the 1st time. But the females shirt is messed up.

:t003:DArk VEnusaur

xMeteorxStriker
April 21st, 2006, 07:09 AM
They are all pretty good for the 1st time. But the females shirt is messed up.

:t003:DArk VEnusaur
that was a little vague can u tell me what u mean so i can fix it?

xMeteorxStriker
April 21st, 2006, 08:54 AM
http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/1Scratch.bmp
Heres my 1st try at a scratch...i kinda like it but it doesnt compare to the games pokemon...

xMeteorxStriker
April 21st, 2006, 11:31 AM
EVERYONE I MADE A COMIC FOR MY GUY WITH A CAPE!!!!!!
http://www.geocities.com/duelistidentity/ExtraTrainerAWESOMEfixed.bmp (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=65927)
click on him!

ace675
April 27th, 2006, 03:42 PM
I need lots of squised comic people like in the game plz help me out

xMeteorxStriker
April 27th, 2006, 04:10 PM
im not quite sure what u mean but just explain and id be glad to help u

ace675
April 27th, 2006, 04:21 PM
Like the one in pokemon emeraild he looks all tiny.

xMeteorxStriker
April 27th, 2006, 05:05 PM
o you mean overworld sprites
my game has like 2 ha ha that i made anyways

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
April 28th, 2006, 12:41 PM
UnseenIdiot:I meant by that the shirt was messed up was by the coloring but I'm not sure that if its my computer or not. I like your capeman

:t003:Dark Venusaur

xMeteorxStriker
April 28th, 2006, 02:08 PM
o ok i think it looks good i dunno lol but thanx for the comment

ace675
April 28th, 2006, 03:18 PM
Can you give some of those spirets

xMeteorxStriker
April 28th, 2006, 03:54 PM
not right now im busy but i will ok!

cybernin
April 28th, 2006, 04:48 PM
Leave my partner alone please. He is busy......with stuff.................

I'm proud to be woring with him :)

xMeteorxStriker
April 30th, 2006, 02:44 PM
lol thanx lol i can make sprites and oh cybernin i think i found the solution to the advance map problem! YAY!

Eshamuel
April 30th, 2006, 03:47 PM
Dude, you have some cool stuff... Make more.

xMeteorxStriker
April 30th, 2006, 04:26 PM
maybe i will or already have i will post them when i get to my house keep commenting!

RLan69
May 8th, 2006, 05:31 PM
Not bad, my friend! Youy're getting better!

Spencer
May 8th, 2006, 05:31 PM
Wow, those are pretty awesome. I wish I could do freehand pixel art.

Kurosaki Ichigo
May 8th, 2006, 05:39 PM
If i see you using my Manjyome Jun's head hair, or body in anyway i will be reporting you for theft.

ace675
May 8th, 2006, 05:46 PM
Great now about the overworld i have enough ok so no thanks

Diddy Kong
May 8th, 2006, 06:04 PM
Ugh....where to begin?
The "gangsta" sprite is God awful. It's recolors are pathetically made, doesn't seem like you put your mind too it.
The May and Brendan TS's and May's Back Sprites look lazely done, like, you just put black aover May's hair and called it a Back Sprite.
I'd give all of these lower than a One. As they aren't really anything "amazing".

Persona
May 8th, 2006, 06:17 PM
okay, i looked on all your sprites in the first post.

The first trainer sprite looks fine, i don't see anything wrong with it.

second one, i recommand working on the hair.

third one, work on her pose xD

fourth one, looks fine to me.

As for your heroes, i like their back sprites. But the trainer sprite for the female needs some work. The male one looks good.

I like the guy with the hood and the one with the hat.

Your gangsta sprite needs some work, also try to fix his gun.

Your scratch sprite is not bad, good job for your first. Keep working on them though ^^

xMeteorxStriker
May 8th, 2006, 06:28 PM
Ugh....where to begin?
The "gangsta" sprite is God awful. It's recolors are pathetically made, doesn't seem like you put your mind too it.
The May and Brendan TS's and May's Back Sprites look lazely done, like, you just put black aover May's hair and called it a Back Sprite.
I'd give all of these lower than a One. As they aren't really anything "amazing".

Yah i know that was constructive ...kinda.... but you didnt give me any true advice at all so yah that was a terrible first impression for u so now i have a bad opinion about u... u too The Black Hedgehog o and gman u have no sprites at all so HAH!

The Gangsta Sprite was for Sam's Gangsta Sprite Thread and i just used his colors so yah thats all i can say. And i dont understand what u mean whats wrong with the Heroines front sprite?


So heres 2 more Sprites Mostly Recolorage but changed a little...
Theye Are Team Sandstorm Members...
Admin-http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e151/SanctionedSorrow/trainer-033.jpg
Grunt-http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e151/SanctionedSorrow/trainer-016.jpg

Oh and Dragon Slayer Thanx for the HELPFUL comment!

Diddy Kong
May 8th, 2006, 06:57 PM
Uhh...dude. You don't know me. Just because I don't "showcase" my sprites on here, doesn't mean I don't have sprites. Besides the fact that you are new, and I consider you a n00b, means, I haven't had respect for you since you posted your first post. I have sprites, that would make yours look like the feces that came out of mine.

If you want a little C&C, I'll give you some:
1. The "gangsta" sprite is a horrible re-color, don't make everything just, you have no outline of the pants and upper body makes it look as if it is one piece of clothing.
2. Your May recolor, it has one black color, you only colored the main brown, not the others. You put a blue-ish color on her hair, near the bandana.Also, there is an unnessicary purple on it.

There's your C&C you wanted.

xMeteorxStriker
May 8th, 2006, 07:02 PM
Well...I still dont like you and I already stated the infor on the gangsta sprite...
And apparanytly you dont know much either the reason my sprites colors are the way they are is b/c the palletes can not be changed with the program i use so i have limited colors cuz i plan on using the sprites in a hack and secondly if you treat "n00bs" like that your just making less people want to join so stop being a flippin jerk and shut up ok, maybe you should read the rules on constructive critisism...

O btw i looked at your comics and i didnt see anything ground breaking so now you can seriously shut up or show me some of ur work...thats good...

Lokhlan
May 8th, 2006, 10:21 PM
Eh, here's the deal. Telling people to shut up upon receiving negative C&C from them is silly. Instead of blowing up about it, try ignoring it and thinking nothing further of their comment. However, I recommend taking what they said and applying it to your art. Who knows, maybe what they said could be helpful.

If i see you using my Manjyome Jun's head hair, or body in anyway i will be reporting you for theft.
This was totally random. If you suspect someone is committing sprite theft, PM a mod, don't post random comments like that in peoples threads.

Signomi
May 8th, 2006, 10:35 PM
UnseenIdiot, may I direct you to the fifth point on the 'not allowed' list in the pixel art rules?


Do NOT:

React harshly to Someone's commenting.

The simple thing is: If you can't take criticism, then don't even bother showcasing your work. If you only do so for the sake of others praising it only, then you'll find you won't be getting what you want. People who spend quite some time commenting on your work only want to help you improve on certain areas needing improvement. It's best that you take their comments and actually use that to help you improve. Those who retaliate against anyone's commenting shall receive a notice of their actions and will be asked to stop. Failure to do so shall result in them getting a warning.

There was no real need to react in that manner, counting the little insult you managed to throw across, this is a warning, DON'T react harshly in that manner. Even if you are tempted. Keep a calm posture.

And G-Man, you're also getting a warning for flamebait. Did you know that your post can not only be personally offensive but also directly uncalled for? Put your personal feelings for him aside, they are in no way relevent, and for now on, do that. Because having to hint flamebaiting would get you no where either.

Kurosaki Ichigo
May 9th, 2006, 12:58 AM
I know, but, i wouldn't be surprised if he did, even Sigy saw how he was being on my thread, with stupid spam, and i have reported him twice about it, well once for double posting, but yeah, otherwise their fine.

xMeteorxStriker
May 11th, 2006, 08:23 PM
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The only reason i acted that way to gman was b/c ive seen how he has acted to other peoples art not giving any help what so ever how exactly is this helpful "The "gangsta" sprite is God awful."

And Black Hedgehog please leave cause your making me mad...THe Pokemon Hossier actually gave a helpful comment so is learning to be nice about things (i hope).

Now EVERYONE either leave or get back on topic!


I made some new sprites i think are prety cool looking but are very simple lol but they look cool and that is all that matters lol
http://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/new.bmp

XD001fan45
May 12th, 2006, 07:47 PM
can i have a trainer of this: http://s37.photobucket.com/albums/e97/xd001fan45/?action=view&current=character_shadow.png. could you put a gun in his hand?

xMeteorxStriker
May 13th, 2006, 03:35 PM
http://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/Shadow.bmp

Here he is if u want him taller (like an actual trainer) just tell me!

I used alot of sonic sprites to make him look good and some shadow hair from others the feet and gun are custom

Persona
May 13th, 2006, 05:21 PM
can i have a trainer of this: http://s37.photobucket.com/albums/e97/xd001fan45/?action=view&current=character_shadow.png. could you put a gun in his hand?

Read the rules. You can't request. This is not a sprite shop.

The shadow sprite looks okay. But again, you have to work on the gun. When the sprite is holding it, it makes the whole thing look bad. If you want the gun with him so bad, try re-doing it.

xMeteorxStriker
May 15th, 2006, 06:27 PM
Thanx if anyone does want me to make a sprite pm me if it seam plausable ill try it
Like what do u mean fix the gun what should i change?

Persona
May 15th, 2006, 06:31 PM
Thanx if anyone does want me to make a sprite pm me if it seam plausable ill try it
Like what do u mean fix the gun what should i change?

Try re-doing it. It just looks odd, or take it out because its kind of ruining how the sprite looks. But, the sprite itself, looks good.

xMeteorxStriker
May 15th, 2006, 06:40 PM
i might take it out i only put a gun in for him but apparently he doesnt care cuz he hasnt thanked me at all :( lol
i might take it out or fix it who knows lol (honestly the shadow sprite isnt that important to me)
Well thanx for the comment Ryan

EDIT:
Heres a totally awesome edit for someone i made best so far IMO!
http://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/Editforatq.bmp

♥RanaRocket!☆
May 28th, 2006, 07:07 AM
heh. i like those newer ones you did.
especially the middle one...
he just sorta fits together really really well.

xMeteorxStriker
May 28th, 2006, 03:03 PM
thanx i like the guy with the mohawk just because he looks completely different from the biker i took it from (garys body is like the coolest body so i use it alot lol)

♥RanaRocket!☆
May 29th, 2006, 01:54 AM
yeah! i see that now! *didnt twig straight 'way 'coz i is slow!*
just a random question, but how long do those things take you? (approxamately)

♥RanaRocket!☆
May 29th, 2006, 01:54 AM
yeah! i see that now! *didnt twig straight 'way 'coz i is slow!*
just a random question, but how long do those things take you? (approxamately)

xMeteorxStriker
May 29th, 2006, 10:09 AM
it depends on how much im changing like thoe up top took about 30 minutes XD

cybernin
June 5th, 2006, 05:46 PM
Dude, Keep Up The Work!!!!!!!

xMeteorxStriker
June 5th, 2006, 05:56 PM
http://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/ExtraPokemon3.bmp

Check out my new cool(imo) pokemon!

Persona
June 5th, 2006, 06:01 PM
http://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/ExtraPokemon3.bmp

Check out my new badass pokemon!

Try not to swear, its against the rules. As for the sprite, I don't really see anything wrong with it. Its just a random fusion with wings. Keep up the good work though.

By the way, I'm Ryan, if you remember be.

xMeteorxStriker
June 5th, 2006, 06:11 PM
Like ryan the dragon hunter or sumthin wasnt that it i know it was u tho cuz all ur old stuff got replaced with ur new name
Thanx for the comment i wasnt even thinking when i cursed ill just edit that out

Persona
June 5th, 2006, 06:15 PM
Like ryan the dragon hunter or sumthin wasnt that it i know it was u tho cuz all ur old stuff got replaced with ur new name
Thanx for the comment i wasnt even thinking when i cursed ill just edit that out

... No, my previous name was DragonSlayer(Ryan).

I didn't look at that trainer sprite you made before. I wouldn't think it was really your best, in my opinion. Though, I don't see anything wrong with it, its just a common sprite.

xMeteorxStriker
June 5th, 2006, 10:59 PM
yah DragonSlayer thats what i thought :)
so which one do u think is my best?

lambros
June 6th, 2006, 06:17 AM
hey man what program do you use for doing these sprites i have photoshop cs2 - corel draw and mavcromedia tools (flash etc)
can you please make me aguide (just notes) and pm me or send by email please please
thanks a lot
[email protected]

xMeteorxStriker
June 6th, 2006, 03:20 PM
Lol i use ms paint PEOPLE PM SOME REQUEST!

xMeteorxStriker
June 6th, 2006, 05:09 PM
http://www.geocities.com/unseenidiot/Monster.bmp
Here is a new one...

Brainpower
June 8th, 2006, 08:59 AM
Cool!,

Like them, specially the last from the second row!

xMeteorxStriker
June 9th, 2006, 09:10 PM
Thanx! Ive been doing more pokemon now cant do much more with trainers...

♥RanaRocket!☆
June 10th, 2006, 12:08 AM
i liek that pokemon you made, it almost looks like an alien 8D!!!!!!!!!!!!(good thing! i promise!)
and it al fits together really nicely, VERY well done n_n
*el flop supreme* DO MORE! >:E

xMeteorxStriker
June 12th, 2006, 10:53 PM
thanx give me some ideas !