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Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
May 11th, 2006, 04:03 PM
These are actually the lyrics of a song I composed, part of a nice story I'm working in. So you just read it, I'd appreciate that. 8D
The song is about a sheep who's asking himself why things are always the same, and despite what other animals think about him, he will be always looking for a different tune.
(Notice this is just part I)

A Different Tune, Part I

Sometimes life turns out to be rather boring
Sometimes you're flyin', sometimes you're snoring
And nothing appears to be looking amusing
And nothing could fix all the minutes you're losing...

Do you look for freedom, or narrow your eye?
Do you find your own ground or you wait 'till you die?
You know how to to take over, and obtain your own hay
But you'll never find wisdom on other sheep's way

But if you keep wasting yourself on the stream
Turning around just to fade in a dream
Don't follow the shepherd instead of the moon,
It's never too late for a different tune.

Persona
May 11th, 2006, 05:21 PM
Excellent poem, and the rhyming scheme was never off, it stayed in place and flowed by quite nicely.