View Full Version : My love for food, part one of two...

May 31st, 2006, 11:17 AM
Ok, I have this poem on mmc, so I decided to get it rated here as well. The rythm changes often, keep up

|My love for food 1|
I cannnot wait any more,
Your taste is what I desire.
I wait for an open door.
Till you are cooked in the fire.

I want the meat off of your bone,
I want the Jelly on your bread.
I will eat you while I should be going,
going to bed.

I dream about you at night,
I eat you at day.
But then I get a suprise,
at how much I paid.

I eat you and eat you,
even when I am full.
I eat you at you at a barbeque,
devouring you by a pool.

My love for you food gives me uber power
I have to desire What I love
I eat with the skill of a master
Chewing like the apperance of a dove.

Woahest me,
So truth-e-ly,

As I devour you,
your good for me.
I eat all kinds
your different personallities.

You're spicy-hot, or icy cool.
What ever I'm looking for, I can find in you.

How I love the, o sweet food.
What do I need to get to you.

As soon as he opens the door.
The flames will settle, no longer aroar.
Oh, food, how I love the
But why am I so Hungry

May 31st, 2006, 11:53 AM
Hey,I like the rhythm to it =]
That poem also describes my love for food well. XD Good job IMO :3

May 31st, 2006, 4:27 PM
Thanx, I think it expresses all us food lovers in particular. I am gonna make one of those bars ,too.

June 5th, 2006, 11:25 AM
Nice poem indeed.. I like that one line "I want the jelly on your bread" XD.. good job.

June 14th, 2006, 8:45 PM
Yeah, that was a good one, I really do like jelly on bread. I really do like food this much, I am eating pizza right now and it is 11:45 pm. I am not overweight, either, wtf.