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Tw1tch
June 28th, 2006, 11:34 AM
I've been working on this song for a few days now. I've had some difficulty with the second verse and the bridge, but otherwise the song is done. I apologize for the incompletion, but I'm having severe writers' block.

Verse 1:
I've been stabbed one thousand times
Tommorrow, one thousand more
Will this pain cease to exist?
Nevermore

These demons stalk me day and night
They are predators, I am prey
Forced in a corner the demons surround me
I cannot run away

Chorus:
These beings will forever haunt me\
Forever destroying me \ Repeat
I have made them strong / X2
And they have made me weak /

Verse 2:
Their strength comes from numbers alone
They hunt in groups to prey on one
The demons find me and victimize
Release from this "hell", there is none

(having a hard time coming up with a second stanza for this verse)

(Chorus)

(Bridge has yet to be decided)

(Chorus)

code zerro the deluge
July 2nd, 2006, 10:07 AM
hey i like it i think it is good.