Is my deck good?

[dark_croconaw]

I just built my deck and I'm not sure if it's good. Will someone please tell what I did wrong or if it's perfect.

x1 treeko 40hp
x1 grovyle 70hp
x1 bellsprout 40hp
x1 weepinbell 70hp
x1 victreebel 80hp
x1 evee 50hp
x1 vaporeon 80hp
x2 mudkip 50hp
x1 marshtomp 70hp
x1 swampert 100hp
x1 wingull 40hp
x1 pelipper 70hp
x2 cyndaquil 50&40hp
x1 darkquilava 60hp
x1 darktyphlosion 80hp
x1 growlithe 50 hp
x1 arcanine 100hp
x1 ponyta 40hp
x1 rapidash 70hp
x1 natu 50hp
x1 xatu 80hp


x1 oracle
x1 energy removal
x1 energy restore
x2 potion
x1 super potion
x1 berry
x1 gust of wind
x1 town volunteers
x1 counterattack claws


x6 water
x10 fire
x7 grass
x3 psychic
x1 multi energy

[Dark_Absol]

Yeah... But remember the quote:
"If Natu dies, you'll never get one Xatu".

[Scyther5]

Yeah theres a few things wrong with this deck, if your gonna have a swampert you'l need aleast 3 mudkips and 2 marshtomps.Same with the Typholsion, natu,ponyta,growlith, and bellsprouts. Other than that its an ok deck. just modify the amount of pokemon if you want to get the stonger ones out. Plus you may need to take some pokemon out to do this.

[dark_croconaw]

Okay, but which ones should I take out?

[Scyther5]

Okay, but which ones should I take out?
Well, thats for you to decide its all up to who you want in your deck.

[Bullados]

aye yie yie yie yie...

that thing is terrible.

You have 27 single cards, 9 evolution lines, 10 Trainers, and 27 energies.

A good deck has no more than 3 singles, 3 evolution lines, and 20 energies, and will always have at least 20 Trainers.

I refuse to fix something this bad. Read over the Deckbuilding articles at the top of this forum for additional information on how a good deck is built.

[Lanceiscool]

Hm... Maybe take one of the Types (Fire, grass or water) out, and reduce trainers while upping duplicates. 4 of the same cards are allowed, USE THAT.

[Pokedragonfire]

Bleah, it's a mess! Big mess of cards is what I think it is. You need a strategy plus something that will work.