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July 5th, 2006, 05:55 AM
"If a kiss was a raindrop, I'd send you showers.
If hugs were a second, I'd send you hours.
If smiles were water, I'd send you the sea.
If love was a person, I'd send you me."
July 5th, 2006, 11:22 AM
That was a really sweet poem. I love it. I can't see any errors. ^__^ Great job!!
July 5th, 2006, 04:59 PM
Googling this, I get numerous results on other sites, many involving blogs with this credited elsewhere. Please don't post plagiarised work. This forum is meant for your own poetry.
July 5th, 2006, 05:47 PM
If a poem hasn't been written by you, then please don't post it here.
As this doesn't seem to be yours...