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One Charmed Dude
July 26th, 2006, 10:38 AM
What you did for me
No one ever knows what I see,
I'm a hard person to understand, you see.
I need just on person to know what I know.
Mabey then I wouldn't have to go....


I stray all day and sometimes through night,
My feelings take me through an emotional fight.
I don't always win but sometimes I do,
It would help quite a bit if I just had me a clue.


What do I see when I look in the mirror?
Just a reflection that's not always clear...
I can't tell what people mean to say,
Should I go or should I stay?


I really need you to be there for me,
But I cant' tell what I should see...
Then you rush to my poor aching side
You know what to say you know not to hide.


Now that you'rewith me now that you're here,
The darkening shadows begin to clear.
Because of your aid I now can speak,
You're the one that cared when I was weak...

Furea-chan
July 26th, 2006, 10:46 AM
Wow pretty good.... I didn't ntoice any errors and it flows quite well... what's this poem about?

One Charmed Dude
July 26th, 2006, 10:48 AM
just emotions and how just one friend can help you get out of like an emotional rutt....

PS PLEASE POST REPLIES IF YOU READ THE POEM!!!!!!!!!!