please rmt!!!

[purplegreendave]

for nb

t.tar / sp. sweeper

adamant nature

male



ev's: 252 sp atk. / 252 speed / rest on sp def (that way he can take on other sp atackers)



thunderbolt

ice-beam

surf

crunch









char / phs. sweeper



ev's 252 attack / 252 def / rest speed



double edge

flamethrower

earthquake

rock slide







dragonair



ev's ????





dragon dance

ice beam

????

????





















pls build the rest of the team around that



feel free to completely rebuild it if its wrong


(items all shell bells)

[jc_rcw]

File > export to text

Do that and then I'll rate it.

[aragornbird]

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Eeew, please don’t type your NB team out. In Team Builder, go to File -> Export to Text then copy and paste the text here.

Also, Shell Bell sucks compared to Leftovers.

If you want to use a Special Sweeper, don’t use Ttar, use Starmie. It can learn the same moves but its faster and has better Sp. Attack. If you want to use a Tyranitar with special attacks, use Boah:

Tyranitar @Leftovers
Nature: Quiet
EVs: 252 HP/ 68 Spd/ 188 SAtk
- Crunch
- Thunderbolt
- Focus Punch
- Substitute

Charizard is not strong enough to be a physical sweeper without Swords Dance. Get rid of Double-Edge for it. Also, don’t put Defense EVs on Charizard. It can’t survive any Rock attacks even with max Def, so don’t even bother. Instead, max out its Speed.

Charizard @ Leftovers
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 4 HP/ 252 Atk / 252 Spd
flamethrower
earthquake
Aerial Ace
Swords Dance

Don’t use Dragonair, use it’s evolved form, Dragonite.

Dragonite (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 240 Atk / 216 Spd / 52 SAtk
Lonely Nature (+Atk, -Def)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Thunder

Your current team has a Water weakness and a Rock weakness, so a Grass and Ground Pokémon can help you out.

Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 156 HP / 140 Atk / 156 Def / 56 SAtk
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Curse
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Rest

Celebi @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 164 HP / 148 Def / 140 Spd / 56 SAtk
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Heal Bell
- Leech Seed
- Psychic
- Recover

And Snorlax rounds out the team nicely.

Snorlax (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Thick Fat
EVs: 160 HP / 176 Atk / 104 Def / 68 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Double-Edge
- Earthquake
- Rest
- Sleep Talk

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