Pokemon Trino

[Tyler]

Game Name: Pokemon Trino

Made with: RMXP

Introduction: I First Started thinking of offering a job to map for someones game but i decided to make Pokemon Trino.

Story:
This is the Story for Pokemon Trino:
In the land of Trino there once was a Pokemon called Trexous a very powerful Pokemon that could destroy the world but it used so much power in a battle against another powerful Pokemon called Rlipder while they where in the battle they both vaprized and turned to bones so they where Pokemon no more.
Future:
You are a young Boy that gets to go on a Pokemon journey to find the bones before Team Regaxey. They want the bones so they can turn them back to real Pokemon then control the world and catch all Pokemon with the 2 Legendarys, But you need to defeat them so that they cant get close to the Pokemon and turn them back yourself to save the world from disaster from Team Regaxey. Once you find the Bones you will notice that they are glowing and your wondering whats going on but then you find out that there growing back together and that they are defossilizing and turning back to real Pokemon.




Features:
New Pokemon
PokeWatch
CBS
Battle Disks
New Starters
New Region
New Hero

Screenshots:
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b273/poketropolis/whatthe.png
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b273/poketropolis/Water.png
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b273/poketropolis/Pachirisu.png

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b273/poketropolis/labout.png
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b273/poketropolis/intro.png
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b273/poketropolis/Copper.png
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b273/poketropolis/battle2.png
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b273/poketropolis/battle1.png

Team:
Owner/Scripter: Me
there are open slots for Scripts, Spirters, Mappers, and Beta Testers.

Credits:
# blizzy => Starter Kitt
# freakboy => Starter Kitt

# Avatar => Character Sets
# Fangking Omega, Mateo, Gridiron, GSC Platinum, Neon Screen, Remy Mattgcn, Cuddles, Kyledove => Tilesets

[dr perry cox]

Okay a couple of things:

*"Welcome to the region Kango. You will lots of Pokemon have fun."*

1. Do not just change one letter to form a new region name.

2. Your character is visible. Set the starting graphic to NONE and change it when the intro is finished.

3. It is a compliment to call that character unprofeesional. CHANGE IT!

4. WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!?!?!?!
*Starter Kit

1. Can you script? If you answered no, STOP USING THE SK!

2. If you answered yes, STOP USING THE SK!
And that's my 5 cents.

[Illusion Gaming]

yeah at least change the name of the region to kenjo(sounds better then kango). and yeah the starter kit sucks. and fix the professor he shouldn't have no white outline(learn how to rip better(you can't leave anything from the old background on the image)). and Pachirisu looks like you just ripped it from a screenshot and left it like that. thats a no no. once you rip a graphic that the color is all messed up or not the right color you have to recolor it. like delete all the colors but the outlines and then re-shade it in pkmn colors so it doesn't have like houndreds of different colors. other then that stuff its pretty good i guess :). oh and the hero looks old.

[Tyler]

Well the reason why i have the character there is because if i do it the starter kitt way its to hard for me to understand so i do it like this. ill change the region name and all the stuff well most likely look better since im gonna make this in sphere instead of RMXP so i can make a better game after this. But and the moment please rate these screenies. because ill use them in the game.

~Tyler

[Hero of Time Link³]

this looks cool i hope you show more screenies soon

[aKaDeMiKs]

Don't put him down. Nice work but make sure grammer and spelling is correct.

''The Water is so Calm right now"
->
"The water is so calm right now."

[The Dash]

Well, I'm going to be honest. This is just another lame Starter Kit game. From what I can see you haven't added anything new to it apart from that one poorly made Pokémon sprite. Your spelling and grammar aren't quite at the par and that makes your game look very bad and un-proffesional.
That Billy sprite is a re-make of Flanker from G/S/C so don't use that either.

There is major room for improvement but don't give up. You can make it work if you try hard enough.

[freshhh]

Looks cool, Battle system is good, your own pokemon but, your character is visible in begin, change it when intro is finished :)

[brendan mc]

its a good game( that i can see )
but you need to fix your spelling and your not a pretty good spriter
want me to fix it up for you mate the sprites anyway
i got loads of the new pokemon sprites in one of my folders mate
want me to sprite for ya?

[Tyler]

im in hawaii im wont get back till sunday so itll just have to wait till i get back to my house other wise just rate the screenies. and i know my grammer is bad so please wait until i start working with sphere and it will be totatly better than what it is now.

[The Dash]

its a good game( that i can see )
but you need to fix your spelling and your not a pretty good spriter
want me to fix it up for you mate the sprites anyway
i got loads of the new pokemon sprites in one of my folders mate
want me to sprite for ya?

No offence Brendan but your no better at spriting than him,
Just look at your sig..

[~Azura]

Yeah, I agree... (OMG) with Dashiel (OMG!) (Just joking...)
Brendan your sign looks like... lame paint spriting.

Also, Tyler, pay attention on Pokémon names: Charmander not Charmender.
And why does Billy have an HP bar (10/10)? Are we going to be able to kill other trainers? *_* That would be ... not good.

Now are you sure about going to Sphere? I think you can't script, so things will be pretty difficult for you...
Oh, stop using the Starter Kit anyways. Soo messy, buggy, laggy...

I don't mind the Region name, but you do it as you like it.

You asked us to rate the screens... I'd give a 2/10 because I liked the 4th screenie (the one with psyduck on it). Everything else needs change, tho.

No more,

~Azura.

[Tyler]

ive scripted a couple things in sphere. and the starter kitt is just like that for the battle. when i make it transform but since im not using the starter kitt and im home from vacation i can get to work on the new version in sphere.

[Blaze Dragon]

Your grammar hurts. A lot
Welcome to the region Kanjo you willl Lots of Pokemon have Fun
When it would be (I think)
Welcome to the region of Kanjo, you will have lots of Pokemon and fun

[Vipershark]

No, it would be:

Welcome to the regoin of Kanjo! You will have lots of fun, and adventures with pokemon!

Something like that.

[Tyler]

You guys i know theres bad grammer stop talking about it. im making the game in sphere now and i should be done with the first town later today.

[The Dash]

I think it would be..
Welcome to the region of Kanjo, you will have lots of Pokemon fun!

Haha sorry, I had to join in that little grammar war.
(I hit myself when I learn I'm using grammar wrong :P)

[Tyler]

Im not sure if i should switch to sphere or not i have some doubts about it and i have some doubts about RMXP so i dont know what i should choose.
I would use Game Maker if someone could teach me how to script with it, but since i dont know anyone except Gibspleg who for some reason hasnt been on for months i think he knows from someone teaching him. But please help me choose which one i should use becuase i really need to know i really want to make this game and not cancel it like all the other games that i have made in my lfe...

~Tyler

[~Azura]

Dude, if you can't really use Rpg Maker, Sphere or GameMaker, I would suggest you to learn how to use them before even trying to start your game. No game can be good (or finished, for that matter) if you can't use the maker in it's full capability.

I can always help you with something when it comes to learn RGSS, although I'm busy sometimes.

If you wish to learn, add me to msn.

Sorry if I looked too critic, but this place is so full of unfinished projects and/or mediocre games, that I felt the need to say something.

~Azura.

[dr perry cox]

Well the reason why i have the character there is because if i do it the starter kitt way its to hard for me to understand so i do it like this. since im gonna make this in sphere instead of RMXP so i can make a better game after this.

~Tyler

Sorry, um, you don't know how to make a character invisible, and you want to move on to Sphere..... In case you didn't know, Sphere.... is..... hard.

Oh and, bad grammer is one thing, but coinherent stneces (in coherent sentences) are another.

[The Dash]

I suggest you take Azura's advice. If you don't even know the basics of any of the game making tools then don't make a publicly known game. Make some test games first to help you learn the basics, I have made loads and I still don't know all of the basics.

[Tyler]

Ive been gaming for about 2 yrs now but i just cant script that good thats about it. ive been doing good with sphere. But my friend suggested to make a game in sphere together so we are.

[dr perry cox]

I can't script either, my intro doesn't say "You will lots of Pokemon have fun" with a visible hero sprite and an awful Porf./Dude Sprite.

[Osceola]

Okay, stop humiliating Tyler, yeah he has bad grammar, but so what, he can fix it later! I mean look at DarkDoom3000 or was it DarkDoom2000 I forget (Sorry DarkDoom!) but he had grammar problems but he fixed it up and made a great game, and as for brendan, even if his spriting is lame, if he and Tyler want to make a game then they can if they want, besides making games is supposed to be fun, that's why everyone making them right? Not just to out of the goodness of your heart, kill yourself to make a CBS, CMS, Storage Box, totally custom game. So quit buggin' em!

[Blaze Dragon]

Okay, stop humiliating Tyler, yeah he has bad grammar, but so what, he can fix it later! I mean look at DarkDoom3000 or was it DarkDoom2000 I forget (Sorry DarkDoom!) but he had grammar problems but he fixed it up and made a great game, and as for brendan, even if his spriting is lame, if he and Tyler want to make a game then they can if they want, besides making games is supposed to be fun, that's why everyone making them right? Not just to out of the goodness of your heart, kill yourself to make a CBS, CMS, Storage Box, totally custom game. So quit buggin' em!
We aren´t humillating Tyler, we are criticazing him for making him better at this. Or at least I am

[dr perry cox]

Okay, stop humiliating Tyler, yeah he has bad grammar, but so what, he can fix it later! I mean look at DarkDoom3000 or was it DarkDoom2000 I forget (Sorry DarkDoom!) but he had grammar problems but he fixed it up and made a great game, and as for brendan, even if his spriting is lame, if he and Tyler want to make a game then they can if they want, besides making games is supposed to be fun, that's why everyone making them right? Not just to out of the goodness of your heart, kill yourself to make a CBS, CMS, Storage Box, totally custom game. So quit buggin' em!

Q. Has a full Pokemon fangame with working CBS and other systems ever been made?

A. No.

Anyway, I haven't got a problem with him making a game, but like SO many others he will give up because of the difficulty.

Ive been gaming for about 2 yrs now but i just cant script that good thats about it. ive been doing good with sphere. But my friend suggested to make a game in sphere together so we are.

Dude, I've been gaming for two years as well. I can't script either. And don't use the age thing, 'cause I'm younger than you - but not everyone can make a game. There. Full stop. Period. That's all. Endo. Fin. Game Over. Sayonara.

EDIT: http://pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=73143

Look at that, and THEN tell me I couldn't do better.

[Trainer of Belossoms]

Wow your game looks very cool!


Trainer Of Belossoms

[SBaby]

Q. Has a full Pokemon fangame with working CBS and other systems ever been made?

A. No.

Anyway, I haven't got a problem with him making a game, but like SO many others he will give up because of the difficulty.



Dude, I've been gaming for two years as well. I can't script either. And don't use the age thing, 'cause I'm younger than you - but not everyone can make a game. There. Full stop. Period. That's all. Endo. Fin. Game Over. Sayonara.

EDIT: http://pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=73143

Look at that, and THEN tell me I couldn't do better.

Since you're still new here, I'm going to be as nice as I can. Three things. First of all, yes a working Pokemon fangame has been made before. Second, when you start talking down to people in the guise of giving them critisism, it's called flaming. And that is not allowed here. Finally, if you don't like Pokemon fan games, then why, oh why are you posting in this section? Honestly...


That said...

It looks like a few of the sprites, numbers and spelling errors just need to be fixed (which I'm sure you'll do). Other than that, everything looks alright. Getting past the battle system is the hardest part. Once you do that, you've got it made.

[Tyler]

I never said i was gonna give up im just really busy at the moment to learn how to code in sphere which is really hard but i think i can do it. and if not im gonna make a game in php because im really good at it.

[dr perry cox]

[QUOTE=SBaby;2237285]Since you're still new here, I'm going to be as nice as I can. Three things. First of all, yes a working Pokemon fangame has been made before. Second, when you start talking down to people in the guise of giving them critisism, it's called flaming. And that is not allowed here. Finally, if you don't like Pokemon fan games, then why, oh why are you posting in this section? Honestly...
QUOTE]

1. What game?

2. No it's not, it's constructive criticsm to some one who doesn't want to aceept that their game looks like crap.

3. Did I say I didn't like fangames? Short answer = No. Long Answer = Nooooooo... I said it's difficult for the best of us.

[Tyler]

Sorry I havent Posted in a while ive gone back to RMXP and ive been getting tons done with the starter Pokemon adding Items and so on I will be Posting screenshots of the Towns and more. Ive also got a new Member named Masaxgpmat he is gonna help me map and sprite.

[Kamui]

nice,
the proffesor looks cool.

[Tyler]

Im trying to get the Pictures up but at the moment im adding some of the Diamond and Pearl Pokemon and there will also be both girls and boys

[Tyler]

here are some more screenies of the updated first town i will be getting more of other places to.
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/7321/newscreenies1iz5.png
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/2931/refurtmd7.png

Please Rate them
~Tyler

[Kamui]

looks nice,
rate:
9 from 10:)

[MasaXGPMat]

Looking Good Tyler, So far i've done about 200 items in the item database soon that will be done :)

[PokeCreator_09]

The game looks okay, but I wouldn't be in a hurry to play it.

I think the biggest thing you need t owork on isn't your grammer, but your graphics. The chipsets look okay, although there are better ones out there, but you need a heck of alot better charsets. also, in the first pics, your monsters look crappy. The pic with your backsprite being one of the new pokemon looks good, but the charmander is distorted bad, s you need t oget a better pic of that. Also, when you talk t the professor, the background is distorted too, I mean, It looks like you got a supe small pictue and stretched it out so it woul fit.

I think you mapping skills are okay, could use a little improvement, but still good.

Improve the graphics and I'd say I'd want to play it. Alo, I'd use RMXP because if you cant script that goo, you can still do a lot with events.

Dont take this offensively, just trying to help improve.

~PokeCreator_09~

[Tyler]

Those Battles have all been remade i havent had enough time to take thos pics from the first Post. I know my mapping is a little bad at the moment it'll get really good once i start working on the game. I was once rated best mapping on his forum along time ago when i was a really good game maker. So just let me warm up and my maps will be very good. But thanks for the comments.

~Tyler

PS. I have almost everyones chipsets they were all in the starter kitt so yea.

[rm2kdude]

As this is in rmxp I can't really say much, now if it were in rm2k3 I would have said awesome work.

Well anyways good luck with your project.

[MasaXGPMat]

Yes this game is being made with RMXP.