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Midori Chi
August 31st, 2006, 05:43 PM
I just made a really short poem a few minutes ago that made me want to post it in here. I haven't posted here in awhile. ^^ Tell me what you think.

No matter what.
No matter where.
No matter how.
I'll always be there.

In life,
and in death,
I promise you,
with love that's left.

I'm in the sky.
I'm underneath.
I'm everywhere.
Floating like a leaf.

Don't forget me,
don't be sad.
As long as you're happy,
I'll always be glad.

fallen_angel
September 28th, 2006, 05:07 PM
Its so good! To bad its so short. ^__^

♠Shiny♠Mr.Mime♠
September 28th, 2006, 06:09 PM
i got a hyku

the aliean ate the kids homework{9}
he was very hungry{6}
but then he exploded after he ate{9}
tell me how you like it

~Blue_Melody~
October 1st, 2006, 04:39 PM
That's pretty good. But why, why so short?

Midori Chi
October 4th, 2006, 04:39 PM
Thanks! ^^
I dunno..It just turned out being short...><

phantom_zangetsu
October 27th, 2006, 10:36 PM
hee he...
well, still evenhough its short its still good...but yeah, too bad it is shaort...

Midori Chi
October 29th, 2006, 09:57 AM
Thankies! ^^
I think I'll post a new one soon, and it'll be longer. XD