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code zerro the deluge
September 18th, 2006, 10:55 AM
I'm a little bit faster
A little bit stronger
But every thing is the sme about me

I'm a little bit smarter
A little bit wiser
But every thing is the same about me

You may say I'm lazy
It's just that I'm crazy
You may say I'm forgetfull
Or just a little to wishfull
You may say I'm kinder
Or just a little bit calmer

But every thing is the same about me

I'm a little bit faster
A little bit stronger
But every thing is the sme about me

I'm a little bit smarter
A little bit wiser
But every thing is the same about me

You may say I'm happy
But sadly baby
I'm missing your love
Each and every day
And I said I would do every thing
Said I would take you on home
But I was rong dead rong baby

I'm a little bit faster
A little bit stronger
But every thing is the sme about me

I'm a little bit smarter
A little bit wiser
But every thing is the same about me

I am sorry for wat I done
And I miss your love
Every day of the week
Girl say say whats on your mind
Dont walk away leaving me in the dark baby
Cause I would do....
Anything

Kyoko
September 18th, 2006, 04:12 PM
Hmm...not bad^^ It was rather good but it seemed to change topics suddenly from changing to a break-up. I just found that a little confusing, but that could just be me. There were also some spelling errors, but all in all it was a nice poem^^.

code zerro the deluge
September 19th, 2006, 12:15 PM
thanx i just found this place yesteday.