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Act
September 18th, 2006, 01:05 PM
Tommy Glavine ^^;

Done as a forshortening experiment for school art class, and in a bit of a rush xD

http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/6889/tomglavinevg1.jpg

Wewt?

Forest Grovyle
September 18th, 2006, 03:12 PM
Wow, nice foreshortening! That came out really well. I also really like the hand holding the ball, the fingers look just right. :)

As for crit, I think the eyes need to be a bit more detailed - the pupils are one solid colour and this doesn't reflect real life. :) But I think this is a really good effort and you never cease to impress me with how you continue to improve! ^^

--FG

Act
September 18th, 2006, 06:56 PM
I adore the left arm.

As I've said elsewhere, I was on the clock for this piece as it was for a school art class, and by the time I had finished detailing everything else, I had like five minutes to do the face >.< I know it's not that good, but I also don't want it to be the focus of the piece, so maybe it evens out. IT does resemble Tommy, though.

Thanks much for the crit ^^;