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code zerro the deluge
September 27th, 2006, 09:54 AM
Back again back to the top
All you other wanna bees better stop
Because I am a boss
While you in the club I'm saying ohh my gosh

Shake your money maker like somebody about to pay ya
I see you on my radar act like da playa
Stand next to this brother like A A A
Shake your money maker like somebody bout to pay ya
Don't worry about them haters keep your nose up in the air
Stand next to this brother like A A A

I want to
Do what I really want to
I will make a beat so you can bump to
Going in and out
Upside down
Return of the king while you got a frown so girl


Shake your money maker like somebody about to pay ya
I see you on my radar act like da playa
Stand next to this brother like A A A
Shake your money maker like somebody bout to pay ya
Don't worry about them haters keep your nose up in the air
Stand next to this brother like A A A

Back again in the buisness
My rhymes and my flow shine with crispness
I will be hitting this
Cause your defense is defensless
While you still winless

Shake your money maker like somebody about to pay ya
I see you on my radar act like da playa
Stand next to this brother like A A A
Shake your money maker like somebody bout to pay ya
Don't worry about them haters keep your nose up in the air



Chorus by Pharell my cousin

Until ThenxX
October 8th, 2006, 08:56 AM
Pharrel's your cousin?

completealbumlyrics.com/lyric/130786/Ludacris+-+Money+Maker.html

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I'm not sure if this poem's based on that song. If it is, great job. If not, then..

code zerro the deluge
October 9th, 2006, 02:04 PM
it is. yes pharell is no lie.

Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
October 9th, 2006, 02:39 PM
Try being original, zerro. No one will like your poetry if you just steal other song's lines.

To be honest, many rhymes you use are just... Awful. The rhythm is completely lost, and there are some grammar mistakes.

I know you can do better than simple hip-hop-song lyrics like those. I hope to see you improve. ~ =D

code zerro the deluge
October 10th, 2006, 09:37 AM
i'll keep dat in mind. and it's not really stealing