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code zerro the deluge
October 4th, 2006, 03:55 PM
I'm crying for you
My days seem shorter
My life is sad and blue
My days grow colder
But I am a man
May you know want to
But I understand
I have done things in the past
I wish that I could have changed
Now tell me again
That you love
That you will never let me go

I am standing my last stand
From here on out
I will not glance
I will be the same
Grow up In ways
But I can not stand
To see you
With a
A another man


When you do your thing
I watch with a ring
In my palm
In my hand
Doing the American Bandstand
Walk by call my name
Go girl do your thing
Do what you do
But When you leave I'll still be crying for you

Midori Chi
October 4th, 2006, 04:41 PM
This is very good. : )
The rhythm seems a bit off here and there, but overall it's a wonderful sad poem. ^^

code zerro the deluge
October 5th, 2006, 03:11 AM
thank u. I was going in artist meltdown