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October 22nd, 2006, 11:50 PM
Hi I'm Pokemaster W-T and these are my sprites that I did my self
here is my new flower shop
October 23rd, 2006, 2:15 AM
The buildings are your best work but they are only minor changes. Maybe change the colour,shape or the name of the building to give it more originality.
Off topic: Please change your signature and biography, it isn't funny or clever.
October 23rd, 2006, 10:14 AM
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EDIT -- Please refrain from bypassing the character limit. ~Shiharu
October 23rd, 2006, 10:21 AM
Okay Poke'master, this is the second time I have had to warn you not to do this today. Do not insult other members again. You have been warned - you are seriously risking being banned.
October 23rd, 2006, 10:27 AM
I'm sorry forest grovyle it will never happen again
October 25th, 2006, 5:17 AM
Take sprite shop out of the name X.X
Ok, first, he buildings are absolutely horrible. And so is your grammar. But back to the buildings. Never ever just squish them together, it's pointless, and look at the squares ontop. You see that? That's pretty darn hideous. Try adding on to buildings first. Make a simple house two stories, then possible try working on cutting.
Your sprites lack skill also.The shading on lickitungs tail is quite horrible, as there is no shadows, and the outline of the tail is choppy, making it obvious someone did more squishing. The wings on dunsparce have no shading either, and so therefore it looks 8-bit, making it in contrast with the rest of it's body. Also, the wings look hand drawn, and done quite horribly, try just keeping it what they were at first.
October 25th, 2006, 7:27 AM
Okay then Astral Maelstrom I've Improved my dunsparce and liketounge sprite
October 25th, 2006, 8:12 AM
Still shading lacks on the wings of Dunsparce and the other Pokemon it LICKITUNG not Liketounge. So far I would give your sprites 1/10.
October 25th, 2006, 3:07 PM
Now the tail is even more deformed X.x
EVen more deformed sprites now!
Your kangashkan... thing, has no shading either, man, ever heard of a recolor with shading? And you did a bad job on the head by nod recoloring the horns. Also, the miltank thing looks like something made from clay by a 4 year old. Gone wrong. No shading on that either, more choppy ackgrounds, horrible mixes. I will just go away now.
October 31st, 2006, 5:04 AM
Wow, I didn;t realise it was April fools till I looked at your sig >>
Basically, shading, anatomy, everything is horrible, there's nothing more to say really.
October 31st, 2006, 10:33 AM
oh, guys, i though the idea was CONSTRUCTIVE criting... for people who are experienced spriters.. you somewhat dissapponit me. i havent been spriting for long, maybe i havent deleoped this 'ego' thing yet....
this IS NOT a flame. i intend for this to be an example. (not sayign this is everyone, but you could be a little more helpful and supportive, its clear this guy needs help)
(having said that, the owner of this thread alos seems to have develpoed this 'ego' thing already >.>;)
at any rate:Poke'master W-T, i see lots of faluts in your sprites, but nothing that can't be fixed, with practice youll get it just fine!
i tried fixing two of these, just as an example, one rule to remember is that the line is always ONE pixel only ONE even on the corners, its diagonal, unless its a point,a technique that can take time and hard work to get right. i found that anyway....
i KNOW these arent the BEST (omg) sprites in the world. but at least i tried, eh?
November 8th, 2006, 11:53 AM
Oh thank you very much I dont knopw what to say!
November 10th, 2006, 12:40 PM
hmm, thanksd do lol....
but seriously, keep at it, you can only get better from here on out!
November 27th, 2006, 8:50 AM
I havn't posted here for ages and I'm working on some more sprites but heres what I've done so far. http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/501/untitledvr0xb7.png (http://imageshack.us)