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fallen_angel
October 24th, 2006, 02:04 PM
Hey these are some of my poems. I haven't wrote poems in a while so forgive me if they have no constant rhythm.-_-'Thanks.

Just a friend

I am your sister,
so you say,
you don't know how I feel.

I am your friend,
so it seems,
I don't think its real.

So maybe its just gratitude,
for just accepting me,
and giving me some life.

Maybe its just a small crush,
I accumulated during the rush,
and will go away like a small touch.

Maybe it's since you came,
when I was feeling so alone,
when one had left,
taking away my sun.

So I will wait,
and see what comes,
and wish you from the bottom of my heart,
best wishes and the very best luck.

Answer me

What are friends but some fakes?
What is love that alluminates?

What is happiness in the dark?
What am I like in reality?

Answer me and answer now,
for I don't know I can't see.

What's so special about your family?
Why are people rich or poor?
Why do kids have to cry to die?

Answer me and answer now,
for I don't know why.

Midori Chi
October 24th, 2006, 02:29 PM
*claps*
Very nice, sissy! =D
I can feel the emotion in there, and having a few parts with no rhyming is a nice little touch, although I think the rhythm got off just a tiny little bit. ^_^
Overall, great job!

fallen_angel
October 26th, 2006, 03:12 PM
Thanks sis! Yeah I know. i'll try to do better next time. -_-'

Midori Chi
October 26th, 2006, 03:14 PM
Ya welcome. ^_^
Yay for trying!

phantom_zangetsu
October 27th, 2006, 10:26 PM
wahaha! hello cousin! hello fallen!

hey! that first one was cool...i like te flow of the first one....
*claps* good one! keep it up fallen!
*huggles*

fallen_angel
October 28th, 2006, 07:24 AM
hehe. Thanks phantom. ^_^ *huggles*