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Loki
November 26th, 2006, 07:32 AM
Anyway, it was posted last night, but uh... Yeah it didn't work out, so here it is again, for all to see!

Yesh, I stole the title. 'RP Plot Improvement Thread' sounded too tacky and too long- I mean, yeah. *totally not babbling*

Anyway, this thread is for posting plot's, sign-up sheets, etc, and having other's help you develop them!

Yes, this means...DON'T POST SEPERATE THREADS FOR YOUR PLOTS.

I'll try my best to give some feedback to RP's posted here, and I'd very highly appreciate it if other roleplayers, *AHEM* would help me out! ^^ It only takes a few seconds to say, 'You should expand on so-and-so', does it not? If you type at the speed of a turtle, and use your index fingers to type, I understand that it doesn't take a few seconds and you're excused.

As for all you other peoples...*ebil glare* I should hope I'm not the only person who tries to prevent all the icky seperate threads that keep popping up.

So yes, discuss, discuss, discuss! Starting now, I will close all seperate threads dealing with expansion on plots.

~ + ~

1) Take advice/criticism/help as it comes, if it bother's you, then don't make a big fuss about it. ^^ We're not all saints.
2) People who review your plot's are taking time out of their lives (yes, we have lives. >.< ...hopefully) and posting a review, so give 'em some credit, and reply as to what you think about what they said, or post up a revised version of your plot, so we don't feel like we're wasting our time.
3) Plot's discussed here, must BE here. We ain't gonna go clickin' around PC trying to find your plot.
4) Pleeease oh please oh please oh please DON'T say, "That sucks," or, "I like it". For one, you'll get in trouble for the character limit, for two, you'll get a very pissed Bijou on your tail, and for three, that's not help, advice, or criticism in the least.
5) If nobody replies to your plot, then good places to look are the 'Bad Habit's of RPers' thread, 'The Rules' and the rest of the stickied threads, because they usually include things that can help improve your plot.
6) Whiny people, you don't belong here. I don't tolerate whiny people. >.< Come on, we're all of age and we all know how to act mature, and if you don't, go learn how.

Phanima
November 26th, 2006, 02:41 PM
I was thinking of making another Naruto RP, since I missed out on the last one. But I thought I'd just make it simple so that people won't get confused. It's based on the Chunin Exam. It will involve all three stages of the exam but I've yet to write them up yet. I've just completed the plot, rules, and sign-up sheet and was wondering if anyone could give some feedback on it so far. I'm planning for this RP to be short but exciting. This is all I've done for now. Comments, criticisms, corrections, and improvements are welcome.

Plot:

To become a Chunin, a Genin must participate and fulfil the requirements of the “Chunin Exam”. The exam is constructed through three separate tests. The first stage tests a Genin’s information gathering abilities and decision making abilities. The second stage tests a Genin’s abilities in carrying out a mission while also following strict guidelines. The third and final stage tests a Genin’s skill and abilities in combat against other ninja. The third stage fights are carried out by the passing participants from the first two stages of the exam. Judges then decide those who have displayed Chunin-like attributes and are then appointed by the leading village’s Kage as official Chunin.

The recent establishment of the Hidden Village of Oni has sparked the attention of other neighbouring countries and Hidden Villages. The leading ninja, Joukaikage, has offered to host the next Chunin Exam in an attempt to establish new relations with the other Hidden Villages. Representatives from each Hidden Village have been chosen to participate in the latest Chunin Exam.

Rules:

1. Be considerate of other characters and their abilities as well as not going overboard with your own.

2. Controlling other people’s characters is prohibited, unless they are in a direct fight with your own. Even then the amount of influence in your writing must be limited.

3. Relationships with others are fine but keep it sensible.

4. There will be excessive descriptions of violence. If that bugs you then do not participate.

5. If a fight does occur between characters then I will conduct a randomised selection to decide who will win. Once it’s decided, the characters involved will continue to post so that the winner is established in the story.

6. Spelling, grammar, and vocabulary are important. Make sure your posts are adequate so that they are legible and understandable.

7. I plan for this RP to be quick and eventful. Some characters will be eliminated from the exam and thus the RP. I will decide randomly (eg. drawing names out of a hat, using a number generator, etc.) on who will be removed. Once I’ve chosen the person(s), he/she will be able to make one or two final posts on how their character dies or is removed.

8. Read the rules and make sure you understand them. If you don’t like them then don’t join. That means you should understand that people will die and/or be removed, and if that’s you, do not complain. You have been warned.

Sign-up Sheet:

Name: Your character’s first, middle, and/or last name.

Age: How young/old your character is.

Physical Description: What your character looks like (clothes and physical descriptions). Pictures can be used, but provide them through a link.

Personality: How does your character act and what does he/she feel (eg. likes, dislikes, etc.).

History: Your character’s past.

Hidden Village: The village your character comes from.

Ninjutsu: What type of Ninjutsu can your character use (include its name and how it works). Your character can only know three or less Ninjutsu.

Taijutsu: What type of Taijutsu can your character use (include its name and how it works). Your character can only know one Taijutsu.

Genjutsu: What type of Genjutsu can your character use (include its name and how it works). Your character can only know two or less Genjutsu.

Blood Inheritance Limit: Your character’s specific clan ability. Everyone can have one, but if I find your’s to be too over-powered then I will request you to edit it. If not, then you will have to remove it completely.

Fighting Style: How does your character fight by using Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and/or Genjutsu.

Strengths: Your character’s strong points (eg. emotional, physical, fighting style, etc.).

Weaknesses: Your character’s weak points (eg. emotional, physical, fighting style, etc.).

JBCBlank
November 26th, 2006, 04:08 PM
ok, the thing is that I"m planning an Rp based on this... but I need help, so anyone who is willing please help me make this one that people will jump onto! (oh... I also posted this before, but it accedently got deteted, so if you posted before could you post again please. ^_^" and I took Bijou's advice and made it all the plot! do you like it?)

Dessert Rose.
(Spirits Captured, Powers given, a world worth saving? You decide!)

The fabled Treasure Island, once a pirates paradise, now… the only refuge for the Animaigus, the spirit people, once a thriving people they are now in hiding living in constant fear of the Shiroku. The Shiroku started the War, the War of a thousand lives, the Shiroku have been using the Animaigus’s powers to take over countries and leave ruin of any town, city or village that gets in there way. As the Shiroku destroy more countries they grow stronger, and as they grow stronger the captured Animaigus get weaker. If left to do as they wish the Shiroku will destroy the Animaigus and take over the already buckled world.

The Animaigus fear for there captured comrades and know of no way to save them, all they know is that if they were to find humans who are good of heart and pure of mind, that they might stand a chance of saving them. The leader of the Animaigus, (Sephiroth ~ Final Fantasy VII), had a meeting with all the Animaigus to decree that he believes that it would be best if they were to send one of there own out into the harsh world of the unknown to find those few humans that have the hearts to use the powers of the Animaigus to their fullest. After much discussion they decided to send Sephiroth to find the ones to help defeat the Shiroku. Leaving Cloud in charge Sephiroth flew off to find the ones to save their friends and stop the War once and for all.

Be one of those few that will save this undeserving world. Or if you wish you can leave the earth to be destroyed and flee with the Animaigus to another dimension after saving the Tortured Ten, (Buttercup ~ Powerpuff girls; Mario ~ Mario Brothers; Luffy ~ One Piece; Shun ~Saint seiya; Link ~ Legend of Zelda; Cosmo ~ Fairy Godparents; Peter Pan ~ Disney’s Peter Pan; Pikachu ~ Pokemon; Patamon ~ Digimon; DarkMagician ~ Yu-Gi-Oh).


It needs more I just can't put my finger on it...
Anything you have to say will help.

Skrew this idea... no one likes it anyway... you know I might stop Rping all together... no one want's to Rp with me...

Loki
November 26th, 2006, 04:11 PM
Toomi: Hmm...to lengthen it, you should probably describe the parts of the exam as in, what they actually are, or if you don't want to reveal that...>.< Hmmm...
or list the participating villages, considering not all hidden village's participate.

Alter Ego
November 27th, 2006, 06:00 AM
*Ebil glared* Nyah, I'm all for the extinction of pointless thread bunches, so you can count me in for as much as my free time will allow. I'll try to comment on as many of the plots as possible, but do remember that I'm still a human (Make that a human who's nearing his end-of-year exams and severly behind on his labwork) so I won't always provided instant response and my comments might be less-than-diplomatic at times. If you get such, just try to focus on the essence (Ergo, the flaws I point out and the things that I suggest adding/expanding upon) and try not to take it too personally. Believe it or not, my main interest is to see people improve, honest. ^^

@ Toomi: Nyah, it's a simple but functional concept, as long as you have enough material in your mind to keep the pace up. My biggest issue is killing off RPers (Particularly making the killings completely random) as I'm very much pro-life as far as RP characters are concerned, and I think that it might discourage people from joining to know that the characters on which they have worked for goodness knows how long can be killed off at any moment by the toss of a coin. That aside, you could improve on the plot size a bit by giving some background information for those who aren't that familiar with Naruto (Poor souls ;__; ) such as what being a ninja in that world is all about, why so many people would aspire to such a dangerous occupation, the basics of chakra and maybe even some brief descriptions of the different styles. The more RPer-friendly the sign-up process is, the more people will feel inclined to join. ^^

@ JBCBlank: What this plot needs is to start being original and stop swiping stuff from everyone and his friend. First of all, where is this treasure island? Why is it called the treasure island? What are the Shiroku? Why is Sephiroth (The evil, genetically engineered, bad guy of doom with the god complex and the humungous sword who previously tried to destroy a whole planet in order to gain power) suddenly the leader of a bunch of random oppressed people (And what's with the spirit people thing, do you mean like dead folks or what?)? And how on earth can you justify Cloud co-operating with his arch-nemesis? (Last I checked, he was quite busy trying to chop Sephiroth into little chunky bits to get rid of his own inner darkness). Not only does it go completely against Sephiroth's personality and lone-wolf attitude (Not to mention his history with Cloud), but the oppressed people go under a name that I've, thus far, only seen in Harry Potter books. -.- Furthermore, how the heck did characters from completely unrelated worlds suddenly end up in the same place and become refered to collectively and why would the animagi (Still a HP ripp-off) give a rat's arse about them? Your 'plot' has no context, no structure, and no point. It's like KH without the awesome music, well-developed plot and fancy battle system, and that sucks. All you've done is slap together a bunch of random characters and places (None of which, I believe, are of your own design) and then call it a plot.

My advice? Just scrap it and consider a little something called 'logic' next time. Trust me, it would do you a world of good. -.- (By the way, dessert is something you eat, I believe you were aiming for the Desert rose which is, among other things, a special item in FF VII. Say no to plagiarism.)

Loki
November 27th, 2006, 02:38 PM
*Ebil glared* Nyah, I'm all for the extinction of pointless thread bunches, so you can count me in for as much as my free time will allow.

YOSH! THAAAAAANK YOU. You are teh awesomeness. (Yes. Teh.) Now, does anybody else want to be awesome like this good sir here?

@ Toomi: Nyah, it's a simple but functional concept, as long as you have enough material in your mind to keep the pace up. My biggest issue is killing off RPers (Particularly making the killings completely random) as I'm very much pro-life as far as RP characters are concerned, and I think that it might discourage people from joining to know that the characters on which they have worked for goodness knows how long can be killed off at any moment by the toss of a coin. That aside, you could improve on the plot size a bit by giving some background information for those who aren't that familiar with Naruto (Poor souls ;__; ) such as what being a ninja in that world is all about, why so many people would aspire to such a dangerous occupation, the basics of chakra and maybe even some brief descriptions of the different styles. The more RPer-friendly the sign-up process is, the more people will feel inclined to join. ^^

Hmm...I personally like the idea of getting killed off *would volunteer* but that's just me. xD It just seems like something that doesn't happen in RP's...ever! I've never been in an RP with a character death. But something you could explain about Naruto is the Chuunin Exam in itself. I think what you should do with the killing off of the characters is make it random, and ask the RPer if they're okay with it. And, if needed, the killing off option is something that can be used with someone that's nagging everyone, or just messing everything up and ruining the whole thing. It's an easier way to let them off then just saying up to their face 'You suck. Go die.' *Kay, that was blunt, but still.*

But I guess it's not a good thing to hide to them that they suck...well, I dunno. Ignore that last part then. xD

JBCBlank
November 27th, 2006, 04:52 PM
@ JBCBlank: What this plot needs is to start being original and stop swiping stuff from everyone and his friend. First of all, where is this treasure island? Why is it called the treasure island? What are the Shiroku? Why is Sephiroth (The evil, genetically engineered, bad guy of doom with the god complex and the humungous sword who previously tried to destroy a whole planet in order to gain power) suddenly the leader of a bunch of random oppressed people (And what's with the spirit people thing, do you mean like dead folks or what?)? And how on earth can you justify Cloud co-operating with his arch-nemesis? (Last I checked, he was quite busy trying to chop Sephiroth into little chunky bits to get rid of his own inner darkness). Not only does it go completely against Sephiroth's personality and lone-wolf attitude (Not to mention his history with Cloud), but the oppressed people go under a name that I've, thus far, only seen in Harry Potter books. -.- Furthermore, how the heck did characters from completely unrelated worlds suddenly end up in the same place and become refered to collectively and why would the animagi (Still a HP ripp-off) give a rat's arse about them? Your 'plot' has no context, no structure, and no point. It's like KH without the awesome music, well-developed plot and fancy battle system, and that sucks. All you've done is slap together a bunch of random characters and places (None of which, I believe, are of your own design) and then call it a plot.

My advice? Just scrap it and consider a little something called 'logic' next time. Trust me, it would do you a world of good. -.- (By the way, dessert is something you eat, I believe you were aiming for the Desert rose which is, among other things, a special item in FF VII. Say no to plagiarism.)

Um, #1, it's Animaigus. #2, in case you are blind, the Shiroku are the main bad guys that are draining the energy of the torchered ten for there own evil bidding. #3, Nobody know's were Treasure Island is, that's why the Animaigus went there in the first place. #4, it's still a work in progress. #5, The Animaigus are so few that there is no rivalry, they only have eachother so they have to rely on there enemy's. #6, I chose Shephiroth because he's the only one that can mingle with normal folks withouth being noticed, fly across seas, and protect himself alone.

and by the way, Desert Rose is also; A song, A book, And a very delectible dish! (plagiarism is impossible in this situation!)

The only thing I can possibly thank you for is the help with the spelling... I know I suck at spelling, tell me something I don't know!

~JBCBlank

**edit: I almost forgot, the saying goes, "Everyone and his kid brother."

parallelzero
November 27th, 2006, 05:39 PM
Um, #1, it's Animaigus. #2, in case you are blind, the Shiroku are the main bad guys that are draining the energy of the torchered ten for there own evil bidding. #3, Nobody know's were Treasure Island is, that's why the Animaigus went there in the first place. #4, it's still a work in progress. #5, The Animaigus are so few that there is no rivalry, they only have eachother so they have to rely on there enemy's. #6, I chose Shephiroth because he's the only one that can mingle with normal folks withouth being noticed, fly across seas, and protect himself alone.

and by the way, Desert Rose is also; A song, A book, And a very delectible dish! (plagiarism is impossible in this situation!)

The only thing I can possibly thank you for is the help with the spelling... I know I suck at spelling, tell me something I don't know!

~JBCBlank

**edit: I almost forgot, the saying goes, "Everyone and his kid brother."
No, he gave you lots of useful info. You just brushed it off and attacked him for what you could. You wanted critisism, then accept it. Don't whine like a little kid because you aren't perfect.

...And if you know you suck at spelling, why haven't you bothered fixing it? Go read a book or something, it helps with that sort of thing.

JBCBlank
November 27th, 2006, 06:02 PM
No, he gave you lots of useful info. You just brushed it off and attacked him for what you could. You wanted critisism, then accept it. Don't whine like a little kid because you aren't perfect.

...And if you know you suck at spelling, why haven't you bothered fixing it? Go read a book or something, it helps with that sort of thing.

Ouch.... God, i must be sleepyer then I thought.. I don't really remember typing that... hmmm... btw.. I asked for help, not critisism... and if I could get better at spelling by reading I would have won the nationaly spelling bee by now... I just suck at it... well, I'm trashing the idea anyway..... I think I'll start something based on final fanticy, I know that game more... oh yeah.. I attacked him because I don't like being told that I'm stealing.. I havn't even played Kingdom H. how should I know what kind of game it is.

~JBCBlank

Netta
November 27th, 2006, 09:53 PM
Okay, let's move to another subject. *giggles nerviously*

So, one quick question. I've already posted my plot in the other forum for which I come back to find it closed so. . . do I repost it again or do I just say, can I get some advice on my plot???

Phanima
November 27th, 2006, 11:00 PM
My biggest issue is killing off RPers (Particularly making the killings completely random) as I'm very much pro-life as far as RP characters are concerned, and I think that it might discourage people from joining to know that the characters on which they have worked for goodness knows how long can be killed off at any moment by the toss of a coin.

I've thought about that and I think I won't incorporate the killing off RP-ers until later into the exam and such. I've just found that in some of the RPs, such as the previous Naruto one and the Mario (Legend of the Falling Star or something like that) attracted a lot of RP-ers. The use of the killing system would be able to control the amount of people participating in case it gets out of hand. My main intention was to only implement the "killing off characters" idea near the end or when something big happens, such as fights and whatnot. I'll continue finishing the plot and the general information and see where it takes me.

Hmm...I personally like the idea of getting killed off *would volunteer* but that's just me. xD It just seems like something that doesn't happen in RP's...ever! I've never been in an RP with a character death. But something you could explain about Naruto is the Chuunin Exam in itself. I think what you should do with the killing off of the characters is make it random, and ask the RPer if they're okay with it. And, if needed, the killing off option is something that can be used with someone that's nagging everyone, or just messing everything up and ruining the whole thing. It's an easier way to let them off then just saying up to their face 'You suck. Go die.' *Kay, that was blunt, but still.*

I also have enjoyed the idea of seeing some characters in an RP being killed off or removed, since it would add a lot more pace and excitement to the plot. That's my opinion anyway. But again, like Alter Ego said, some people might not appreciate their specially built-up and incredibly detailed characters being wiped out just to make the story more interesting. Of course, I did imply that if people were to join the RP, they are to expect the chance of being removed, as I did give a warning. So if they are willing enough to participate and understand that there is a chance (and that's all it is, a chance) of their character being killed then everything should be alright. But for now I'll just continue to work on it and make a final decision once I get some confirmation on the finished version.

So, one quick question. I've already posted my plot in the other forum for which I come back to find it closed so. . . do I repost it again or do I just say, can I get some advice on my plot???

Um, I'm not really sure but I think it would be best if you could give us a link to where you posted it so we don't have to keep going back to read it. But I'm pretty sure you can just repost it here since it'll make things a lot easier for those who want to read over it.

Alter Ego
November 28th, 2006, 08:14 AM
@JBCBlank: **edit: I almost forgot, the saying goes, "Everyone and his kid brother."

No it doesn't, that's an alltogether different saying. -.- But you probably wouldn't know it, seeing as how you don't even know how to spell "pity". I'd go into depth about how much wrong there is in what you just wrote (And how you managed to completely ignore the whole point of my comments) but since Origin summed it up very nicely, I'll just say this: if this is the kind of attitude that you keep when RPing then it's no wonder that no-one wants to play with you, so yes, by all means quit RPing and come back when you've matured enough to tolerate some feedback besides meaningless praise, I don't deal in that. Believe it or not, criticism is the best kind of help that a writer can get, but if you can't appreciate it then I won't waste my time on you. <.<

@Toomi: Nyah, if the RPers are okay with characters dying then it's all fine and dandy, my issue was mostly with the randomness aspect. And yes, I have seen this done occassionally (I think there was an RP about the Ragnarok (From Nordic mythology) in which the first line of the plot was basically "Right, no-one is going to make it out of this alive, so make your deaths grand."), but I've never seen those RPs get far, so I dunno'. It is a nice N00B-elimination method, though, and the people who fail to spot it in the rules have only themselves to blame (You shouldn't go singing up for things you don't understand), but as long as it's voluntary I don't see it as an issue, and neither should RPers. ^^

Loki
November 28th, 2006, 02:41 PM
^__^;;;

I asked for help, not critisism... and if I could get better at spelling by reading I would have won the nationaly spelling bee by now...

I would just accept Alter Ego's criticism, because it's really actually quite in depth, and would really make your plot in general better. And as for the spelling thing, I would just use a spell-checker if you suck in general. If you don't have Microsoft Word or Appleworks or something like that, try an online spell-checker. It makes it easier for everyone. ^^

I've decided to put up some rules, FYI, so please do read them. Hopefully I don't sound like a pompous prick, if I do, then all my sincerest apologies.

As Netta said, then? Off to a different subject.

Toomi: Can't wait to see the finished product! I'll have to make room in my schedule to join...

Netta: It's probably best if you re-post it here. It's not that hard, as the thread hasn't disappeared yet, and it's easier for the people giving their time and energy to give feedback. Save them a click or two, because I personally hate surfing around trying to find the right thread, post, and plot. Don't you? ^^

Phanima
November 28th, 2006, 03:53 PM
Plot:

To become a Chunin, a Genin must participate and fulfil the requirements of the “Chunin Exam”. The exam is constructed through three separate tests. The first stage tests a Genin’s information gathering abilities and decision making abilities. The second stage tests a Genin’s abilities in carrying out a mission while also following strict guidelines. The third and final stage tests a Genin’s skill and abilities in combat against other ninja. The third stage fights are carried out by the passing participants from the first two stages of the exam. Judges (or Jonin) then decide those who have displayed Chunin-like attributes and are then appointed by the leading village’s Kage as official Chunin.

The three-stage exam incorporates the main skills, abilities, and ideas every professional ninja should understand. How to store, release, and control Chakra, making decisive decisions during missions, and understanding the situation to find the best possible and successful outcome, are three examples of Chunin-like attributes all ninja should acquire. Each stage of the exam will test these three and a number of other examples. Through this examination of abilities, instincts, and intelligence, the judges will determine who has what it takes to become a Chunin.

The recent establishment of the Hidden Village of Oni has sparked the attention of other neighbouring countries and Hidden Villages. The leading ninja, Joukaikage, has offered to host the next Chunin Exam in an attempt to establish new relations with the other Hidden Villages. Representatives from each Hidden Village have been chosen to participate in the Chunin Exam and have begun their latest mission residing in the Hidden Village of Oni.

Your role will be to become a participating Genin in the latest Chunin Exam. Each of you will arrive at the Hidden Village of Oni as representatives from your chosen Hidden Villages (you may also be a Genin from the Hidden Village of Oni). You will be participating in the events of the Chunin Exam as a training Genin with the hopes of becoming a Chunin or for other personal reasons.

Extra Information:

This is for those who are unfamiliar with the plot, concepts, and ideas of the manga and anime of Naruto. These definitions are examples of the number of terms used in the world of Naruto and in this RP.

Genin: There are six “official” rankings of ninja which determine how strong or skilled he/she is (although some Genin may be stronger than other higher ranking ninja). Genin are the second-lowest level of ninja.

Chunin: Chunin are the third-lowest level of ninja and are above Genin.

Jonin: Jonin are the fifth-lowest level of ninja and are above Chunin and Genin.

Kage: Kage are the highest level of ninja and are above Jonin, Chunin, and Genin.

The Hidden Village of Oni: This is a made up village used for this RP. It does not exist in the actual Naruto manga or anime.

Other information on specific parts of the series can be located at the following links (and yes, I’m aware that Wikipedia isn’t the best of resources but it was the only one that had this kind of information): Ninja Rankings (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chunin#Official_ranks), Hidden Villages (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hidden_Leaf_Village#Shinobi_villages), Ninjutsu (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ninjutsu_%28Naruto%29), Genjutsu (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Genjutsu), Taijutsu (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taijutsu_%28Naruto%29), and Kekkai Genkai (Blood Inheritance Limit) (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Byakugan).

Rules:

1. Be considerate of other characters and their abilities as well as not going overboard with your own.

2. Controlling other people’s characters is prohibited, unless they are in a direct fight with your own. Even then the amount of influence in your writing must be limited.

3. Relationships with others are fine but keep it sensible.

4. Each character can only know a maximum of six different techniques altogether (eg. 2 Ninjutsu and 2 Taijutsu and 2 Genjutsu, or 1 Ninjutsu and 3 Taijutsu and 2 Genjutsu, or 3 Ninjutsu and 3 Taijutsu and 0 Genjutsu, etc.).

5. There can be no relations to characters from the manga or anime of Naruto. This is an OC (original character) RP with Naruto concepts.

6. There will be excessive descriptions of violence. If that bugs you then do not participate.

7. If a fight does occur between characters then I will conduct a randomised selection to decide who will win. Once it’s decided, the characters involved will continue to post so that the winner is established in the story.

8. Spelling, grammar, and vocabulary are important. Make sure your posts are adequate so that they are legible and understandable.

9. I plan for this RP to be quick and eventful. Some characters will be eliminated from the exam and thus the RP. I will decide randomly (eg. drawing names out of a hat, using a number generator, etc.) on who will be removed. Once I’ve chosen the person(s), he/she will be able to make one or two final posts on how their character dies or is removed. This rule will apply during the ending parts of the RP or when a significant event occurs (eg. fights between characters, unexpected events, etc.).

10. Read the rules and make sure you understand them. If you don’t like them then don’t join. That means you should understand that people will die and/or be removed, and if that’s you, do not complain. You have been warned.

Sign-up Sheet:

Name: Your character’s first, middle, and/or last name.

Age: How young/old your character is.

Gender: What is your character’s gender (male/female).

Physical Description: What your character looks like (clothes and physical descriptions). Pictures can be used, but provide them through a link.

Personality: How does your character act and what does he/she feel (eg. likes, dislikes, etc.).

History: Your character’s past.

Clan: The clan your character belongs to.

Hidden Village: The village your character comes from.

Ninjutsu: What type of ninja techniques can your character use (include its name and how it works). Your character can only know three or less Ninjutsu.

Taijutsu: What type of hand-to-hand combat techniques can your character use (include its name and how it works). Your character can only know three or less Taijutsu.

Genjutsu: What type of illusionary techniques can your character use (include its name and how it works). Your character can only know three or less Genjutsu.

Blood Inheritance Limit: Your character’s specific clan ability. Everyone can have one, but if I find your’s to be too over-powered then I will request you to edit it. If not, then you will have to remove it completely.

Strengths: Your character’s strong points (eg. emotional, physical, fighting style, etc.).

Weaknesses: Your character’s weak points (eg. emotional, physical, fighting style, etc.).

It's practically the same as the first one but with a bit more detail and information in some areas.

That aside, you could improve on the plot size a bit by giving some background information for those who aren't that familiar with Naruto (Poor souls ;__; ) such as what being a ninja in that world is all about, why so many people would aspire to such a dangerous occupation, the basics of chakra and maybe even some brief descriptions of the different styles.

By increasing the plot in general, I didn't really do much except regurgitate the same information I wrote before into a now smaller paragraph. I've added some general information in the "Extra Information" section and also added in some links that might be relevant to some terms that are in the RP.

Overall though, I'm afraid that the whole RP might seem a little big and that might minimize the amount of people who will even bother to participate, but that's just my opinion. I've pretty much completed the form unless anyone has anymore criticism or comments they'd like to make to help improve it a little. So all I have to do now is work on how the first and second stages of the exam work. And if anyone has any ideas about what the stages should be about, that'd help.

Loki
November 28th, 2006, 04:30 PM
8OOOOOOOOO *MUST. JOIN.*

xD *tranquilized* I think people really should learn how to read and not be afraid of long plots. The RP sounds like SO much fun. There's probably more to improve on, but I just can't put my finger on it right now. It actually looks good to me though. I'm sure someone who'd never watched Naruto would be able to RP without any major freak-out's. The links in the extra information section is probably going to be useful for RPer's who already know about Naruto anyway. (I know I don't remember nearly every friggin technique I see.)

I find it easier to bold the main topics on a sign-up sheet, that way you can see them better, but that's not really a big issue. Just a suggestion.

YoshiRiRu
November 28th, 2006, 05:58 PM
Aiight, Bijou. Sign me up as a helper. Also, I've got a plot I'd like you and Alter to check out... Gimme a bit to type it out.

Midnight_Dragon249
November 28th, 2006, 06:28 PM
Okay, I have a few ideas here...

First is the one no one liked, but with a major plot adjustment. And if no one still doesn't like it, I'll go ahead and kill the idea entirely. It's still the same place, same EVERYTHING (well, almost), but new plot. It's more based on my fic I'm writing, that shall never see this place, unless I really feel like posting it. Meh, I'll post it in a bit. Well, the first part. ...Enough babbling.

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There is a legend in the world of Aedrys, speaking of a great war between the East and West over three mystic blades created by the God and Goddesses of this world. These three swords were the Blade of the Sun, the blade a blazing red-orange, was able to harness the Sun's great fury and call forth blazing rain, or create a blinding beam of light, and said to be forged by the Sun Goddess, Solarrin. There was the Blade of the Moon, a dazzling blue, forged by the Moon Goddess, Lunaria, said to be able to warp its wielder between any place instantaneously, as well as the wielder being able to warp the blade anywhere they wish. The last blade was The Blade of the Void, the blade a wicked black, created by the Shadow God, Kageriin, and was able to control shadows like puppets, as well as topple entire buildings with a single slash. If these three swords were ever brought together, an even greater power would be brought into the world, under the blades' wielder’s control, but this power was described simply 'Only one pure of soul shall not bring ruin to the world. Twisted of heart, or selfish of intention shall ruin the world and destroy themselves. To right this wrong, the pure must gather the blades of legend'. The three blades had been hidden by their forgers, never to be found, unless the time truly came when the whole of Aedrys was threatened. However, the greed of men did not heed these warnings, and sought the blades' great power.

This war raged for many years, until the West finally had all three blades in their possession. The West's king, a cruel Muro with a twisted heart had killed countless people, both innocent and warring. He craved only power, and didn't care what he had to do to get it. Once the three legendary blades were place together, they had vanished, and in their place was a great monster, a reflection of the king's lust for power. The beast, black as the king's heart, swallowed him up in dark tendrils sprouting from its body. The survivors of this incident named the beast, Exittaddo, 'Bringer of Destruction.' This monster then destroyed the West's capital, Doran, and the only thing that had stopped it was the Goddesses and God descending to Aedrys and destroying the wicked beast, but destroying their physical forms in the process. Their spirits took refuge in the blades they had forged, sealing the monster in a blade of its own, called the Arcumbre. This blade was made sure to be hidden well, as the Goddesses and God didn't have power to stop the beast again. The only way to access this blade was to bring together the three original blades at the Arcumbre's temple. To help guard the four blades, they 'touched' three people of Aedrys, of three different races, giving each and their bloodline a special ability, but this power has since faded from the bloodlines.

The people of Aedrys had then agreed to peace, not wanting a repeat incident. They rebuilt Doran, now a technological metropolis, and the three 'descendants' had guarded the blades, until, after a while, the people had forgotten the war and simply marked it down as a myth. The descendants, too, had forgotten where the swords rested, so the God and Goddesses used a bit more of their remaining powers to create special creatures, bound to the blades, and they were meant to keep all but the blades' respective descendants from ever entering the resting places.

One thousand years after the war was forgotten, the bloodlines no longer clearly identifiable, and the resting places left to ruin, the bloodline possessing Kageriin's power unknowingly found the Blade of the Void and took it from its shrine. Seeing the blade's great power, she began to feel the same lust for power as the ancient Muro king. The blade's guardian sensed this, but was powerless against the Blade of the Void. She had remembered the old legend, and craved the other blades' powers. This girl, a Kuria name Kurozyn, only 17, began to destroy other villages and towns, searching for the other descendants. Kageriin's spirit watched in horror as his power was being used to destroy the world he had helped create. He attempted to warn the Goddesses, and told them to somehow have their descendants claim the blades and defeat Kurozyn, whose fighting class has seemed to go out of normal people's abilities. She has the ability to call down ferocious beasts, as well as cast all elemental magic. Her skills with the sword are better than that of a well-trained swordmaster. After hearing of the descendants claiming the other two blades, Kurozyn had fled deep in the Demon's Maw Mountains. Using water and wind magic, she can view the descendants and attempt to kill them by controlling monsters she had created. But, unfortunately for the descendants, they have no knowledge of Kurozyn's location or abilities.

You play as either the Sun or Moon descendants, (if those spots are left) or one of their teammates. You will all travel as a Slayer group, people who kill monsters and protect travelers from attacks. This way, you will gain experience and knowledge from battles, to prepare you for the showdown with Kurozyn.

Name-Character's name
Gender-Dude or Dude-ett?
Race-Options in a min.
Personality-Err, you should know this.
Description-Make it race specific, but you can add your chara's personal touches.
Class-Just wait a sec, 'kay?
RP Sample-Just as long as you make decent posts and can spell...
Bloodline-I just need someone to take the place of the Sun descendant, which is a Veinn.

Races~

Humua-Human. That's about it.
Kuria-Full blood elf. They're tall, slender, and not harsh on the eyes.
KuKuria-Humua with longer, pointy ears, so half-elf, basically.
Lieroso-Animal people, y'know, human with animal attributes?
Veinn-Dragon-Humans. Because I love dragons. And veinn cannot fly. They can hover and glide, but cannot freely fly. Their faces are more human than dragon, and their skin can be whatever color you want. Their wings are generally small, and they have tails. Their ears are...like a two feathered wing...like...ear (http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9149/veinnearhw3.png).If you want a Veinn chara, please follow the description.
Muro-Demonic people, with horns, fangs, a slender tail, claws, ect. And they don't wear shoes. Their claws on their feet would just rip 'em.
Dragon-I only added this race because I have many a dragon character, so I thought that it would feel odd to me with no dragons. But please, I don't want 7 people wanting to be dragons. Anyways, dragons in Aedrys can wear clothes if they want to, although they usually don't. They're not very bulky, and stand on two feet. Their 'ears' can rage from two horns to cat-like ears, to nothing at all. Dragons also can have some sort of 'hairdo' such as Taiik (http://img157.imageshack.us/my.php?image=taiik1cv.png). Don't mind the little wings. I just doodled that. And didn't bother with the wings too much. Then there's Guardian (http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=guardian1xb.png), who wears a shirt (and pants, you just can see that.) has no fuzz, and has two horns for 'ears'. So there ya go.

So, if you want the most freedom with your chara, choose Humua, or KuKuria.

NOW, classes.

Warrior
Physical combat specialist. High power and defense. Can use heavier armor, and can use just about any type of weapon.

Chaos Mage
Black magic specialist. Able to cast impairing and destructive magic. Can’t use strong armor, but can use a dagger, as well as a stave or wand.

Healing Mage
White magic specialist. Able to cast healing and repairing magic. Can’t use strong armor or weapons.

Spell Blade
Varied specializations. Able to cast weak white and black magic, and also able to use stronger weapons and armors, such as Scale Mail, one-handed axes, and one-handed swords.

Ninja
A very agile class, allowing use of some black magic and daggers.

Assassin
Agile, like the Ninja class, but uses hand-to-hand, throwing daggers, and poisons in battle.

Musician {This class isn't a rip off of 'Soul Purpose.' I had this written down before it was ever posted.}
Odd specialization. Controls magic by playing certain types of music. Depending on what mood and beat the song has, different magic is used. Plus, you won’t get very bored.

Tamer
Tamers specialize in bows, and crossbows. They have no magic access, but have the ability to tame a wild creature to do their bidding. There may sound like no need for this class, with the use of Cyrun Gems, but Tamers can tame monster, creature, or animal.

Summoner
Summoners call forth both creatures from Cyrun Gems and can tap into the elemental streams to create powerful monsters of their own creation. Summoners can also wield both white and black magic, but their spells are weaker than a Chaos Mage’s or a Healing Mage’s.

Engineer
This class specializes in creating machines and AI robots to do their bidding. Engineers can create anything from a simple sword to a giant mechanical dragon. They can also make convenient gadgets, such as a “magic” map, that shows the owner’s location, along with anyone in that person’s group.

Thief
An offshoot of the Ninja and Assassin classes. Thieves are very agile, and can use daggers in both combat and as a long range weapon. They can’t use poisons, but have skills that allow them to steal items and money from monsters.


TOWN DESCRIPTON~And I will scan the map I drew, just as soon as I get to a scanner. And this is all that was left after Kurozyn's little killing spree.

Eeshi
Small port town on the West coast.

Zeinfel
Medium resort town on Teiyaros Island. Teiyaros is a relatively small island, north of Eeshi.

Doran
Large industrial city.

Sheiru
Small village in the middle of the Great Plains.

Reito
Small village on the edge of Reitio Forest and near Umisa Ocean.

Veirus
Medium town at the foot of the Demon’s Maw mountains.

Ryoset
Large town in the Demon’s Maw. Haven for Veinn and dragons.

Tsehi
Medium desert oasis town located in the Kinursi Desert.

Beirus
Small village on the Southern Plains.

Leis
Large, beautiful town located near Kyose Woods, Maris Lake, and Oakarza Mountains.

Kuro Outpost
Small outpost north of the Oakarzas.

Froswind
Medium town that has snowfall year round.

Revaldor
Large, grand city that is the Capital of Aedrys. In the middle of the city is the castle that houses King Veirallius and his son, Kazeryu.

ELEMENTS~

Fire
A very destructive element, possessing no healing or defensive abilities. Based on magical offense.
Subcategories of Fire are heat and explosion.
Opposite of Ice.
Ice
A defensive element, using barriers to deflect attacks and reflect magic. Based on magical defense.
Subcategories are snow, hail and cold.
Opposite of Fire.
Water
A balanced element, possessing healing, defensive and offensive maneuvers. Water is Multiuse.
Subcategories are mist, steam, and acid.
Opposite of Lightning.
Lightning
A very destructive element, having no healing and weak defensive abilities. Based on magical speed.
Subcategories are cloud and sound.
Opposite of Water.
Earth
A ‘tank’ element, having no healing abilities (unless using the ‘Nature’ subcategory), but strong defense, stamina, and strength. Based on physical defense.
Subcategories are nature and stone.
Opposite of Wind.
Wind
An elusive element, based on a ‘hit and run’ strategy, which is effective, as wind-based things are generally frail. Based on physical speed.
Subcategories are time and blades.
Opposite of Earth.
Light
The ‘healer’ element, having very weak offensive abilities, but strong healing, stamina, and defense. Also allows removal of negative effects, such as Slow, Poison, or Blind. Based on healing.
Subcategories are ray (an offensive version) and shield (an even more defensive version). Even damaging magics are classified as White Magic.
Opposite of Dark.
Dark
An offensive element, although it has weak physical traits and direct damage magic. It focuses on dealing damage through using enfeebling magic. Based on magical offense.
Subcategories are shade (a defensive version) and malice (+direct damage, -enfeebling.) Classified as Black Magic.
Opposite of Light.


MAINLY FOR THE SUMMONER CLASS, BUT YOU OTHERS SHOULD STILL READ IT.
Cyrun Gems are physical manifestations of elemental energy, formed the same way that monsters are, although gems take much more energy to form, making them a rare find. Gems have the ability to amplify magic of their element and capture monsters of their element, too. Each Cyrun Gem can hold up to 3 monsters. However, the only people who can call monsters out of the Gems are Summoners. Each different element of a Gem can only be found in a certain area, too.

MONSTERS~

Monsters are living, physical forms of the elements, created like Cyrun Gems, but they need much less energy to be created, making them much more common. Monsters are generally found in the same place that Cyrun Gems of their element are, but sometimes a Fire monster could be in a Light area. Monsters also can have two different elements, making them more versatile, but easier to find the right Cyrun Gem to catch them with.

Here's where monsters of certain elements are generally found.

Fire~Tsehi
Ice~Froswind
Water~Eeshi
Lightning~Leis (Oakarzas)
Earth~Reito (Reitio Forest)
Wind~Beirus
Dark~Demon’s Maw Mountains
Light~Leis (Kyose Woods)

I will also make a bestiary soon, and any contributions will be appreciated.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=K3090YGM Have to Megaupload it, due to not being able to attach it. It's a PowerPoint file, so don't download it unless you have PowerPoint!

OR *drumroll... A .hack// RP.

I also have another idea, but I can't find the stupid Word Document it's saved in.

JBCBlank
November 28th, 2006, 07:04 PM
^__^;;;



I would just accept Alter Ego's criticism, because it's really actually quite in depth, and would really make your plot in general better. And as for the spelling thing, I would just use a spell-checker if you suck in general. If you don't have Microsoft Word or Appleworks or something like that, try an online spell-checker. It makes it easier for everyone. ^^



I always use spell check, it says I do it fine... maybe my MW has something wrong with it.... *sigh* I'm just gonna stick to wrighting assays for my friends... Spanish is alot easier to spell in...

~JBCBlank

Loki
November 28th, 2006, 07:23 PM
Midnight Dragon:That sounds interesting so far Midnight, I'll read more of it tomorrow. The only thing is that everything combined makes it incredulously long. x_x But, that may be a good or bad thing. I haven't yet read it all. *sneaking online* I wish I could say more, but my keyboard's too loud. >.<

JBCBlank, try a different spell-checker. ^^; It's 'write', 'a lot' and 'essay'.

Yoshi: Yay! <3's for helper's! And I'll be happy to take a look at your plot tomorrow. This is your first time as an RP Master, isn't it?

Phanima
November 29th, 2006, 01:53 AM
The first stage of the Chunin Exam has been troubling me lately. The concept seems simple but I’m not sure how to carry it out. I’ve kind of analysed two different decisions. The first would be to completely scrap the first stage and advance directly to the second stage, since that’s where a lot of the action happens. Or, I was thinking of implementing the same “tenth question” Ibiki Morino gave in the anime.
There are two different scenes of Ibiki giving out the tenth question of the first test of the Chunin Exam in the anime. In both scenes Ibiki challenges the Genin to decide whether or not to actually attempt the question in order to see who is confident or stupid enough to take it. When Naruto’s class took it, everyone who attempted the tenth question passed after been given the opportunity to leave and try again later without the risk of being a Genin forever. But in a flashback in later episodes where Ibiki conducts the same exam with his little brother, all those who attempted the tenth question failed because they failed to realise the importance of being able to understand the situation.

Because of this, I’m not really sure what to do for the first stage. Should I include it, or skip it and go straight to the second stage. Because my idea was if I was to write up the first stage test, I was going to make it that each person in the RP would have to post either “accept” or “decline” to taking the tenth question and I would then randomly select whether the people who said “accept” would pass or the people who said “decline” would pass. But then if I were to do that, then that would mean my character would have to be on the winning side and people may just choose the answer I do. But then again, people might not like being booted out so quickly (even though a warning is given) because they might think it’s biased. Keep it? Skip it? Or something completely different?

Alter Ego
November 29th, 2006, 08:15 AM
@Toomi: Nyah, now that plot is starting to look about the right size. Don't fret about the length, my RP, Ancient Dynasty, was waaaay bigger than that, released in late December and still got more than enough sign-ups to kick off and keep it alive (I actually had to par the membership down a bit). Besides, I believe one of the rules asked for literate people? If anything, having a slightly lengthier plot will serve to discourage the lazy illiterates with short attention spans from joining, and you don't want those anyway, so it's actually handling part of the elimination process for you. ^^

@YoshiRiRu: Yay, another helper! ^-^ I'll be happy to look at your plot once you get it posted.

@Midnight_Dragon249: Ehh...I agree with Bijou, it's a wee bit...bulky, yes, that is the term that shall do. Such an abundance of background information can leave RPers feeling lost and confused. You could try saving up the specifics on monsters and cities/towns until the actual RP and introduce them as the story progresses. Having read through it, it does seem like a solid plot (Although the use of swords is a bit of a cliché, what is it with swords and evil powers anyway? You sure as heck couldn't cause that much damage if you sealed the evil spirit in an umbrella or an anvil. xD). On the races...you might want to mention a bit of natural abilities/disadvantages (E.g. Stereotypically speaking, Elves tend to have far longer life spans than humans, which makes it more difficult for them to handle sudden changes in life, and also tend to be slimmer and less muscularly built than humans) and maybe a bit of how people react to members of different races (For instance, I'd imagine that a demon-born wouldn't be the most trusted of people in a heavily non-demonic environment). Also, about the use of magic, how does it work in that world? Does it have DnDish touches such as risks of rapidly aging from the use of certain spells or suffering other significant (and permanent) drawbacks or is it more of a Final Fantasy/Kingdom Hearts approach where you can just zap away without a care in the world? This could cause confusion if you don't clarify it a bit.

Loki
November 29th, 2006, 03:51 PM
Okay, I read it this time, and oh my god, what a plot! It sounds awesome, but as Alter Ego said, it's rahlly....beeg. (big.)

The cities and towns things should be explained as you get there, you know? Like, maybe in OOC's, or in the post before you actually arrive, or describe where the people are headed next, etc.

And Alter Ego, swords are always evil because swords bring around death, and umbrella's bring about happiness and justice. (Especially pink one's. Only Hagrid's umbrella is an umbrella of doom.) Anvil's...well....nobody wants to lug one of those on their hips or back's. *paaaainz*

Midnight_Dragon249
November 29th, 2006, 04:04 PM
@Midnight_Dragon249: Ehh...I agree with Bijou, it's a wee bit...bulky, yes, that is the term that shall do. Such an abundance of background information can leave RPers feeling lost and confused.

Bulky, yes. But it's my little fat baby, and I love it.
I thought the bg info might clear things up a bit...Meh. This is my first plot, anyways.

You could try saving up the specifics on monsters and cities/towns until the actual RP and introduce them as the story progresses.

The monsters are pretty random, but I have compiled a short list of common ones in Aedrys. As for the towns, they're pretty set, as I don't feel like messing with the world for an RP. (Which after I read through my own stuff, it sounds more RPG than RP. Meh.)

Having read through it, it does seem like a solid plot (Although the use of swords is a bit of a cliché, what is it with swords and evil powers anyway? You sure as heck couldn't cause that much damage if you sealed the evil spirit in an umbrella or an anvil. xD).

Meh, it's better than the more insane version that had the monster sealed in a water bottle. ...I got pretty bored, but I liked the idea, okay?

On the races...you might want to mention a bit of natural abilities/disadvantages (E.g. Stereotypically speaking, Elves tend to have far longer life spans than humans, which makes it more difficult for them to handle sudden changes in life, and also tend to be slimmer and less muscularly built than humans) and maybe a bit of how people react to members of different races (For instance, I'd imagine that a demon-born wouldn't be the most trusted of people in a heavily non-demonic environment).

Myesh, I would. But it was bed-time for me. So I couldn't. I will, though, if anyone likes this heaping pile of creative fantasy (which I think would smell like lysol and cinnamon, if you ask me) enough.



Also, about the use of magic, how does it work in that world? Does it have DnDish touches such as risks of rapidly aging from the use of certain spells or suffering other significant (and permanent) drawbacks or is it more of a Final Fantasy/Kingdom Hearts approach where you can just zap away without a care in the world? This could cause confusion if you don't clarify it a bit.

I have the magic 'system' (I'm working on an RPG game, so I had to come up with a code-able system for magic) all worked out, but again, didn't have the time to post it.


Thanks for the help, BTW.

Loki
November 29th, 2006, 04:19 PM
Wow, if you didn't have time to post all that...then it's even bulkier then it already is, isn't it? o o;;

Also, to be quite frankly honest, because there was so much shtuff, I totally skipped downloading the bestiary, reading the towns, and reading the magic, so basically, it's so long that I almost don't want to read all of it, which could cause a little bit more confusion if you refer to it. But however you want to run you're RP, go and run it.

Netta
November 29th, 2006, 10:11 PM
^__^;;;



I would just accept Alter Ego's criticism, because it's really actually quite in depth, and would really make your plot in general better. And as for the spelling thing, I would just use a spell-checker if you suck in general. If you don't have Microsoft Word or Appleworks or something like that, try an online spell-checker. It makes it easier for everyone. ^^

I've decided to put up some rules, FYI, so please do read them. Hopefully I don't sound like a pompous prick, if I do, then all my sincerest apologies.

As Netta said, then? Off to a different subject.

Toomi: Can't wait to see the finished product! I'll have to make room in my schedule to join...

Netta: It's probably best if you re-post it here. It's not that hard, as the thread hasn't disappeared yet, and it's easier for the people giving their time and energy to give feedback. Save them a click or two, because I personally hate surfing around trying to find the right thread, post, and plot. Don't you? ^^


Oh of course I hate looking, but I just didn't want to get yelled at again, so here it is. First I'm going to post this now and than work on it slowly as the stupid computer seems to let me log out automatically if I don't constantly surf threw it. Than I'll go ahead and edit little at a time to get it up and going. Okay, I've finished it and I will say, it is VERY lengthy and I think I may have too much but than again, I might be wrong.

The True Plot


Twelve humans with strange devices saved two worlds from the darkness, and because of it; peace reined over both worlds and creatures known as Digimon lived peacefully together in both worlds. In Japan, the spread of digimons living together with humans expands far greater than expected. The Japanese digidestines have been around to ensure the safety. The International DigiDestines however, do not have the advantage as the government thinks of digimons as a threat created by Japan to rule the world. How wrong they were.

Darkness began to settle once again, but this time, it's different from the past villans. Past evils have tried to start with taking over the Digital World first and than the Human World. Now, evil has a new plot. A new way to conquer both worlds. This evil has started in the World of Men, but for two purposes. To rid the world of the DigiDestines known as well as to prevent new DigiDestines from being born. And the second is to rule both worlds. (Yeah I know it's very common in all the digimon seasons so far.) The origional 12 digidestines and their friends had disappeared from Japan.

With the rising darkness, the Guardians of the Digital World were blind and did not activate any powers to release immediatly to choose children to be digidestines. However, one digimon has. This digimon is shadowed and was afraid evil and darkness might try a new way of conquering the worlds. After all, Darkness cannot live without Light and Light cannot live without Darkness. If it were to happen, the powers would be released and sent to a selected group of humans to become the new digidestines.

Reality Plot


You know digimons are not real and only wished they were. You have little knowledge of the Japanese government, which kept the secret of digimons being real from the rest of the world. Even the International Digidestines keep the secret to themselves. You look at your created digimon and wish that he/she was real and that you'd be able to become a digidestines dispite knowing it's only in your wildest dreams. You hear news about mysterious things going on, but you pay no mind to it as you feel it doesn't bother you. However, you find a strange device which appears to you. You take the device in your hand and are shocked to find that it's a digivice. It is nothing like the digivices you've seen in the first two seasons and somehow you know it's called a D-Arc. When you push a button, you noticed an egg has hatched and you don't seen anything inside. You are suddenly surrounded by a thick, off white cloud and are shocked to find your digimon alive and in person.

Starting Plot


Please try to use you're own imagination to come up with how you find your digimon creation. Everyone has either dreampt of being in an adventure with a favority digimon or their own created digimons and human characters. What if, you're characters and your made up digimon were alive and real? All Digimons for that matter. What if, everything that we've seen on digimon was true? This is where you get to experience everything. From reality thrown upside down and inside out. ((I know it sounds like Digimon Tamers but that's what FDD is all about.)) This happens before the Tamers Season, about 20 years in to the future from Daisuke (Davis) and Taichi (Tai)'s group. They are all older and no longer able to do much saving like they did when they were younger. So it's up to you.

Basic Information


What is FDD? FDD is short for Fictional DigiDestined and Digimon. There are many FDD characters out there that don't have any website put up for their created digimons and their partner characters. But this is when real people put themselves into a character (or make up a personality of how they wish they were) and create stories of them with others. FDD doesn't belong to just one person. I don't know who came up with it first, but there are many people who have FDD sites out there and believe me, they are fun to read and I've always wanted to try a quick FDD rp. Yes I have my own site, but it's still a work in process and at least I'll be able to see if I have what it takes.

Here are the level translations.
Rookie = Child, Champion = Adult, Ultimate = Perfect, and Mega = Ultimate.

I want to go along with the japanese version as I've always believed to stay with the origional rather than go to the modified version.

Digivices: The digivices are already choosen and made with new colors. (Acutally, I just took the tamer's D-Arcs and invert the colors.) They are the D-Arcs, which was also dubbed as what we call D-Powers from the Tamers version which means you can use cards. (I love using cards.)

Digivolutions: Digivolving will be very different from the shows. The cards are the keys. (These will be given to you once you have been accepted.) Digivolution is the same from Child to Adult. From Adult to Perfect is slightly different, instead of having Culumon aka Calumon give the crystal activation, you get to use a card that has a crest. (I would like you're crests to be your own creation and design. You cannot use these crests, (Courage, Freindship, Love, Sincerity, Knowledge, Reliability, Hope, and Light. I would use the Japanese versions, but not everyone knows them so therefore I've left them out. Kindness is also something you cannot use as it belongs to Ken.)

What about the Ultiamte/Mega level? I'm sorry to say that not all of you will be able to reach this level. Just joking. Actually, because this is not really based on the show's rules and based on my rules, I say what the hey, let's do it. You can do one of two ways to reach the Mega/Ultimate level. One way is the warp digivolution like Agumon and Gabumon to WarGreymon, and MetalGarurumon. The term Warp is when a digimon skips a certain level to reach a higher level in half the time it would take than going in order. The other way is to have the Perfect/Ultimate level digimon digivolve to the Ultimate/Mega level. Example: Agumon digivolve too Greymon, Greymon digivolve too MetalGreymon, MetalGreymon digivolve too WarGreymon. (You cannot have both. Must choose one or the other.)

What about DNA digivolution, Armor Digivolution and BioMerging? I'm sorry to say DNA and Armor is not allowed. BioMerging will only be giving to a few characters. Sorry, I'm the one who will choose the BioMerging. (Remember, this will be the Ultimate/Mega form in which the human partner and digimon partner emerge together to digivolve. Now this will be given to the selected characters by a special digimon which I have created that will do what Dobermon did in the Tamer's show to turn the humans into data in the real world, but will not be deleted as I don't like to follow in other's footsteps.)

Rules


1. You cannot have the main digimons from the shows. (example, Agumon, Gabumon Biyomon, Palmon, Tentomon, Patamon, Gatomon, Veemon, Hawkmon, Armadillomon, Wormmon, Renamon, Guilmon, Terriermon, Impmon) But you can have a digimon you've seen on the show that didn't play a big role such as Leomon. But I really want you to have you're own created digimons. So if you don't have a created digimon or don't have the time to create one on you're own, don't worry about it.

2. Veemon and a few other main digimons have more than one digivolution line. I might accept them as a possibility if you use a different evoultion line from which was given in the show.

3. You can use different colored main digimons such as Dark, Black, White, or Silver. (My favorite digimon is Renamon and if I wanted to rp her as my partner, I'd have her become either a virus known as DarkRenamon or a vaccine known as SilverRenamon and her digivolutions, or make up my own.)

4. You can not have any of the digidestine's crests from the show.

5. You must try to have lots of fun.

6. Please be nice irl. Yes I know we get on each others nerves from time to time, but please, try to keep on a happy face ooc.

7. Be Origional. Don't copycat.

8. Make sure you're personality goes along with your backround histroy. This was brought up in another forum of bad habits of rpers board.

9. We all have an order we do post. It's obvious that the leader will be the first to start. Once you've posted, do not post again until everyone has posted. Yes this could take a long time, but it's only fair to thoughs who can't get on everyday like some of us. ^_^

10. It will be written in a type of chapter or episode. (This is my origionality for this type of rp. Rell I guess it'd be chapters since we arn't in a movie or anything.) Everyone gets to have their own episode in which everyone can participate. Like in the shows, each partner digimon had a whole episode dedicated to them and their digimon partner when digivolution came to them. That means if you're not the star of that episode/chapter, you must play a minor role.

11. No god-moding. I hate people who think they have an all powerful digimon that no one can't beat. Get real people, everyone has weaknesses, even digimons. The all I'm powerful thing and you can't touch me doesn't go in this rp. And let me tell you. This here is your first warning. If I find anyone acting like this, I will confront you about via email. (That is your second warning.) After that, no more warnings and I will ask for you to not participate as part of the group. So remember, this here is your first warning. Your second warning is in your email, after that, you're out.

12. No DNA Digivolving and no armor digivolving. Bio Merging is limited to only a few choosen.

13. This rp is for serious rpers who will take this as if it was real. Anyone can sign up, but I shall decide who gets to participate.

14. Have lots of fun. . . Oh wait, I already said that. ^_^

Sign Up Profile


Human

Name: (What is your character's name? Last name perferred, but not mandatory)

Age: (6 to 18)

Height: (5'4", 5'5" 1/2?)

Gender: (Male or Female)

Crests: (Courage, Friendship, Purity, Responsiblity, ect.)

Personality: (Funny, Distant, Afraid to show feelings ect. Please have at least a three to four lines long.)

Description: (What does your character look like? Red Hair? Brown Hair? Blue Eyes? Red Eyes? Ect. What are they wearing? Again three to four lines long.)

History: (Give a little histroy of how your character's personality came to be or give us a breif story of what happened to you that makes your character act this way.)


Digimon

Name: (Agumon, Pacemon)

Pronounciation: (Ah-goo-mahn, Pay-s-mahn. Do the best you can, even I have problems with this.)

Level: (I really perfer Child Level as a base.)

Type: (Vaccine, Viral, Data)

Groups: (Reptile, Dinosuare, Dragon, Warrior, Sorceress, ect.)

Description: (What your digimon looks like. Please go in details)

Attacks: (Pepper Breath, Petit Fire, Cat's Eye Beam ect.)

Evolutions: (Greymon, MetalGreymon, WarGreymon, GeoGreymon, ShineGreymon, MirageGreymon, ect.)

Personality: (What is your digimon's personality. It doesn't need to be lengthy as it is tough to keep in mind two personalities. Unless you're experienced in rping and can handle doing two different personalities. Some people find it challengeing.)

Example Rp: (Do a breif rp of you're character. I perfer you to start out from the beginning like how you're character grew up or what was one great challenge to them. Must be at least three paragraphs or more in length.)

Okay there it is. Is it too much information? Not enough? What about my standards? Are they too low or too high? Anyways, I hope you can all give me good advice. Oh, I did mention that it is quiet lengthy.

Loki
November 30th, 2006, 02:59 PM
Netta: IRL should be capitalized, as it's an abbreviation, and I suggest you not use it at all if you can help it. It's only three words more, and it makes you look a lot more professional. I would say that you might want to run through it again and make sure you get rid of the 's' on the end of digimon in the first sentence in the Reality Plot, because 'digimon' is plural as it is.

And, spell-check. Online, Word, whatever, but it helps. There are only a few mistakes, but there are one's that a spell-checker will catch in there. (I'm such a hypocrite. >.<)

Btw, just wondering, but would anybody be interested in doing a One Piece RP with me?

Netta
November 30th, 2006, 07:43 PM
Netta: IRL should be capitalized, as it's an abbreviation, and I suggest you not use it at all if you can help it. It's only three words more, and it makes you look a lot more professional. I would say that you might want to run through it again and make sure you get rid of the 's' on the end of digimon in the first sentence in the Reality Plot, because 'digimon' is plural as it is.

And, spell-check. Online, Word, whatever, but it helps. There are only a few mistakes, but there are one's that a spell-checker will catch in there. (I'm such a hypocrite. >.<)

Btw, just wondering, but would anybody be interested in doing a One Piece RP with me?


Okay, so I've been told about that already, but I figured since this is for me to get advice, I didn't need to worry about getting it perfect since it's not really ready for rp yet. I didn't know however, digimon with the "s" was right or wrong, but now I know thanks.

I didn't want to know about my spelling and what nots, because right now, I don't care. I will care about it if people are interested and if I'm ready to post it up in the other Rp.

Second, I wanted someone to tell me if it was too much information or too little! Weather the plot needed to have more info or much less. All I got so far is. . .

You need to spell check. But than no one says hey, I like the plot or say hey I don't like this plot becasue. . .

Anything will help! If no one says anything except just work on spelling, than that really doesn't help me out.

Was it good enough?! WAs it terrible? Do I need to put more thought into it?! What is it that I need to do to make it better OTHER than spelling and grammer???????


I'm begging please! Help me out in that one part!

Loki
December 1st, 2006, 03:03 PM
...*ahem* The reason I didn't say anything about the plot itself was because I neglected to read it thouraghly enough to give a review on it. I just said what I saw first, and if you don't want to know your spelling and grammar need work, then specify.

This is about giving advice, and this is the place where we tell you how to make your plot better, and I told you how to make your plot better, and I did give you advice. Maybe someone else will read your plot and answer your question.

YoshiRiRu
December 1st, 2006, 09:08 PM
Netta - I like it. There are only a few things that I'd like to ask. So, wait.

What is your mission in the digital world? To save the world from being taken over? What's in the digital world? What are some important places?

Something that a lot of people do with things like Naruto RPs is assume that every roleplayer knows everything about the show. When you say something like Digivice, make sure that the RPer knows exactly what you're talking about, and not faking their way through it.

Other than that, a fairly solid plot. The few gripes I have about it (A bit.. spontaneous, how you become digidestines, and the government scheme idea.) can be tolerated. Very nice, Netta. And like my esteemed colleaugue Bijou mentioned, make sure to just run your plot through a spell checker before posting.

Loki
December 2nd, 2006, 08:51 AM
^^ Thank you Yoshi, and in the meantime...


Every pirate has a dream, be it to win the mysterious treasure of Gol D. Roger, to become the best at everything, or to simply become the greatest pirate on the 5 sea’s, North Blue, East Blue, South Blue, West Blue, and the Grand Line, or just to hoard treasure and riches, these dreams never die. The Great Pirate Era has begun, and it’s far from it’s perish, even after a century since it’s birth. One Piece has faded in and out of legend, myth, and folklore, having only been claimed by, and believed in, by the D’s. One Piece has been claimed, spent, replenished, hidden, and found again, over and over until it disappeared entirely from many pirate’s dream’s, other ambition’s driving them on. One Piece became the dream upon dreams, though a handful of pirate’s still believed in this mystical treasure, spending most of their lives braving the Grand Line to claim and capture it for themselves! Each time, at the execution of the owner would announce to the world that One Piece was again, hidden, and up for grabs, stirring great turmoil’s of celebration and unfurling a great many sail’s.

As the Era of Pirates repeated itself over and over, One Piece grew larger and larger in aspects of how much treasure it hoarded from the great pirates who’d taken it for themselves. But, as I said, it disappeared entirely after the fifth owner hid it in a place only he himself had ever stepped foot in. Not even his crew knew where he’d hidden the treasure, and many of them perished, trying to find it. Now, in the time of the greatest prosperity and greatest value to anyone who may be a Pirate, the spur and dreams of One Piece are being roused again.

The mission?

Become the greatest Pirate King!!

“You won’t find where I hid One Piece!” The Pirate King Monkey D. Luffy had grinned at the same spot Gol D. Roger had been executed, “I don’t even remember where I hid it!”

~ + ~

Mission & Setting
The mission is to complete/achieve whatever dream your character can think of! Be it to find One Piece (Captain's default dream, sorry Captains.), to become the best of your profession, or to become the Pirate King (Another default,) you must achieve your dream before someone else does!! We'll start off in East Blue, and we'll take our time to sail past the Red Line into the Grand Line.

~ + ~

I will allow you to consume Devil Fruits (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Devil_Fruit), but trust me, if you try to refer to anything in the English Dub way, (Cursed Fruit, etc.) I’ll boot you in a heartbeat. (I have very strong opinions on the Dub, so don’t mess with me when it comes to the dub.) I’ll be referring to everything in the Japanese Version, so if you’re confused…well…that’s what Wikipedia is for. I will choose whether you can use the Devil Fruit you’ve chosen, but I won’t allow one’s such as ‘Goro Goro Fruit’ because it’s too godly. (Electricity, btw.)

Rules:
1) I will be VERY displeased if your character is a god-like figure. And I mean VERY. If I think you’re character is too good for rookie pirate, I won’t accept you, even if you re-do your sign-up, because more likely then not, the character will still have god-like traits as the RP progresses.
2) I will allow your character to consume two Devil Fruits, as long as you’re okay with your first post describing how your character dies.
3) No duplicate Devil Fruits.
4) Japanese Dub references please and thank you.
5) There will be a ‘three-strikes’ system, and if you bug me or post too little or make things go ridiculously fast more then three times, I’ll ask you to leave.
6) One Piece is my favorite anime series of all-time, and if you haven’t noticed, I’m going to be a prick when it comes to people whom sign-up.
7) This RP is NOT for people who have never seen One Piece in their entire lives. If you wish to join, I suggest you start watching One Piece, from Episode 1 to the end of at least the Little Garden Arc, which is episode 77. Yeah.
8) I will make an OOC thread, in which update’s will be posted, question’s will be answered, and the like.
9) REAL Devil Fruit's please. I don't want any imagination hokey-pokey's.

Now, after the pleasant experience of reading those happy rules, let’s move on to the sign-up, shall we?

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Dream: (What is your character's ultimate goal/Why is he/she sailing the Grand Line?)
Pirate Crew: (Until one crew if filled up, with a Navigator, First Mate, Doctor, Shipwright, Chef, and Captain, then another one can be made. The name can be decided by the members of the crew anywhere you like, including the OOC thread.)
Position: (Chef, First Mate, Navigator, etc)
Personality:
Appearance: (Let’s remember that we’re pirates.)
History: (Include which Blue or Line you were born in, and if possible, where in that Blue/Line.)
Devil Fruit/Weapon:
Other:



Am I too strict? (Actually, I really don't care if I'm strict or not.) Is my grammar all botched up? Is there anything- anything at all that I can add to the plot?? (It's too short...) I repeated myself over and over in the plot, didn't I? Did I forget something in the sign-up? Should I add something to the rules? (Make them nicer?)

And, the questionair that I shall repeat again: Do you think anyone would even be interested in a One Piece RP? Er, I guess I should specify, is someone who's 100% literate interested?

Đ a r κ
December 2nd, 2006, 09:37 AM
OK, I have yet another idea for an RP which is called

LEGION OF SUPER HEROES
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PLOT
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After sentries and sentries of peace and tranquility, evil began to rise in the very far off future. Thievery increased, as did fighting, and more people got hurt every day. As evil rose so did hope. Soon after the increase of evil, heroes began to rise. One hero was able to control time and space and the other hero was able to detect other heroes. These two heroes knew that they could not get rid of this evil that began to rise, on their own, so they went back in time where there were more people with powers. As they went back in time they found many heroes to help them and after they found a good amount of heroes to help, they went back to the future and battled evil every day and they even found new heroes as they fought evil. After months of fighting evil. The heroes all died do to the powers of one evil man who's name is still not known. But his power is known, which is to control life and death. And even now, he has gone into hiding while trying to form a new team of super villans. Many more people have now been finding out that they are capable of doing things that many can no do. They have now been relizing that because of the old heroes death's that they must have been given these abilitys for a reason because you can not have bad without good. So now the new heroes have been forming a team to fight off evil, knowing that evil will never die but they do know that they have to try to.

You play as a new found hero that joined the legion of super heroes trying to stop evil.

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Character Sheet
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Name:
Hero Name:
Description:
Personality:
Power: (Fallow this link to pick a power if you can't think of a power)http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Legion_of_Super-Heroes_members
Home world/town:
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So, what do you think of this?

Scarlet Weather
December 2nd, 2006, 10:45 AM
Umm... if all the canon heroes are dead, why include them? This roleplay needs a lot more in the way of plot... a LOT more. And obviously, there is no way to get rid of evil on your own- "All have sinned..."

Yeah, I'll stop there, before I get mauled for a religious reference. Anyway, hero people need a reason to exist... why do they have powers? Explain, please!

Loki
December 2nd, 2006, 11:07 AM
o O;; Are you referring to mine, or Korinku's? (I'll assume it's Korinku's...) If you're giving advice, you might want to put Username: or something like that, so we know who, unless there's only one plot to discuss. ^^

Đ a r κ
December 2nd, 2006, 11:08 AM
Art critic cubone:Well that is why I posted it here. To get some ideas to add to the plot.

YoshiRiRu
December 2nd, 2006, 11:39 AM
Bijou: Garbage. Absolute trash. Scrap it...

Hah. Just kidding. Probably a lot better than anything I could do.

Um.. what can I say about this...

I don't actually watch the show.. so what IS the One Piece? Is it a ship? A treasure hoard? A map? A single artifact? What exactly.. is it?

For some people, myself sometimes included, are turned off by the aspect of having to Wikipedia-ing the whole thing - Perhaps for things that are unclear to the story of the anime, but for simple things like the Devil Fruits, It probably should be easy enough to describe in a sentence or two, especially if it's part of the sign up sheet.

Unless you're making an RP for specifiically watchers of the show (some who may not know the Japanese terms for the certain aspects that you'd like.) then you might want to make an emphasis on explaining some of those aspects of the story, or at least linking to a place where they can read about it instead of "Wikipedia, N00BZ."

Plotwise, It's solid. I'm not sure what the "one piece" is, but other than that, i could probably find my way through it. Actually, what's the setting for the RP? Are all the RPers on the same ship, or are they independant?

Other than that, nice job, Bijou.

Korinku: Er.. it's very vague. It seems very spontaneous, and sort of predestined. I mean, what are the odds of there being only 2 super heroes, and they have the exact powers that allow them to go back in time and recruit heroes? I'd make there be a bit more drama to the story - it seems like it's just a line instead of a picture. It seems like that beginning part about the old heroes was obsolete - Make an aspect of that important! Artifacts, something like that. It has potential, but you need to make it seem a little more... "believeable."

Loki
December 2nd, 2006, 11:54 AM
God! WIKIPEDIA. NOOBZ. xDDD *Shot* Just kidding.

Thanks for the feedback, I'd better specify the mission and where/what we're doing. ^^;; I knew I was missing SOMETHING. As for the Devil Fruit, if you've even watched the first two episode's of One Piece, you'd know what it is. ^^;; But, I think I'll explain it anyway.

Mission & Setting
The mission is to complete/achieve whatever dream your character can think of! Be it to find One Piece (Captain's default dream, sorry Captains.), to become the best of your profession, or to become the Pirate King (Another default,) you must achieve your dream before someone else does!! We'll start off in East Blue, and we'll take our time to sail past the Red Line into the Grand Line.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Dream: (What is your character's ultimate goal/Why is he/she sailing the Grand Line?)
Pirate Crew: (Until one crew if filled up, with a Navigator, First Mate, Doctor, Shipwright, Chef, and Captain, then another one can be made. The name can be decided by the members of the crew anywhere you like, including the OOC thread.)
Position: (Chef, First Mate, Navigator, etc)
Personality:
Appearance: (Let’s remember that we’re pirates.)
History: (Include which Blue or Line you were born in, and if possible, where in that Blue/Line.)
Devil Fruit/Weapon:
Other:

I only posted what I added, because I don't want to clutter the entire place. ^^; How's that look? Oh, the Devil Fruit thing, riiight.

They are said to be the fruit of the Sea Devil and that the secret to their power is hidden in the Grand Line. Because encounters with them are rare (especially outside the Grand Line) a number of rumours about them have risen making it difficult to tell whether some things are fact or fiction. The average person knows nothing or very little about what they are.

The Devil Fruit, when consumed, gives the consumer a power or special trait. There are more than 100 types of Devil Fruit, they come in different shapes, colors, and all Devil Fruits have swirl marks on them of some kind. Only one bite is needed for the power of a Devil Fruit to be yours, and after that, the Devil Fruit becomes a simple, useless, disgusting fruit. Although, it has been shown that you do not even need to bite or chew it. If you swallow it whole, as Buggy did, the effects are still the same.


There, that's a lot better then I could ever explain it. o o;; And, One Piece is the great 'Mystical Treasure', I'm pretty sure I said that, didn't I?

Scarlet Weather
December 2nd, 2006, 01:29 PM
o O;; Are you referring to mine, or Korinku's? (I'll assume it's Korinku's...) If you're giving advice, you might want to put Username: or something like that, so we know who, unless there's only one plot to discuss. ^^

Korinku's... I must have missed your plot somewhere. Sorry Bijou. (Yeesh, I can never take that name seriously... it sounds like one of those weird hamsters from that random anime that somehow made it onto the action-dominated toonami. >.<) Anyway, Korinku, I looked up "Heroes" on Wikipedia... the series to be precise. It was as I suspected... you are attempting to create a roleplay based on the series, are you not? *thunder flashes*

Okay... first of all, all of the old hero junk can be either scrapped or developed on. Your roleplay's only real plot is that some freak is running around dispatching poor little people with powers. What you need to do is explain where their powers come from, why they're so special, what their purpose is, where they are headed... you get the idea. I don't write superhero rps, so I have no advice to give you here. >.< Anyway, moving on...


Hmm... I'd love to join your roleplay as is, Bijou, but I have no clue what the Japanese references would be, as all I've ever done with One Piece is read the Viz manga translation.

Netta
December 2nd, 2006, 02:52 PM
Bijou: You said you didn't read throughly on it? Than why the hell did you reply on my post if you're not going to read it.

To me that says one of two things. One you looked at it and said oh my God, there is no way I'm going to read through so much information, which translate into TOO much information. Or
Two, you were too lazy or didn't have time and decided to skim it and say work on spelling and grammer and they will be fit.

I don't mean to attack if I sound like I am, but I wanted people to read through what I wrote and give me information of weather or not I need to lesson it or put more into it. However, I do thank you for the spelling and grammer thing and for your little information about my idea.

YoshiRiRu: Thank you for your information, that was what I wanted to hear was weather someone like it or not, weather I needed to put more into it or not. Okay, so I need to put how one becomes a digidestined, what the goal is, and what is a digivice.

Well, those I can answer except for the last one. The only information I can give is a picture of what it looks like (which will be posted on my plot) and what it functions as. No one really knows according to what I've read what a digivice exactly is other than letting humans make digimon to digivolve to the next level. Which seems to be the main part of a digivice.

So, as for explaining what the digivice is, all I can do is put a picture up and it's functions. I'll put up the cards also. . . Maybe I should also add in what the card's name is and what it's function. That might help out more.

Thanks, I'll get started right away. Man this is probably going to be the most information about my rp than in the history of this forum rp. I don't think everyone will want to read the entire information, but you guys said it and I'll go with it as to weather or not people will be interested and join up will be determined.

In my opinion, I think haveing too much information to read through can cause people to say I'm interested, but I don't want to or read through such a long information.

Oh, another thing. There was someone who has posted a digimon rp and they didn't have as much information as I do. But than again it was invatation only and only could use regular digimon. Not created from your own mind. So I guess she/he didn't need to put up as much information about digimon as I have to because it's only ment for invite. Which means that she didn't need to post what a digivice looks like and only put the information of what it does. Anyways, I'll get on it like I said and we'll see if having too much information will attract people.

parallelzero
December 2nd, 2006, 03:16 PM
Bijou: You said you didn't read throughly on it? Than why the hell did you reply on my post if you're not going to read it.

To me that says one of two things. One you looked at it and said oh my God, there is no way I'm going to read through so much information, which translate into TOO much information. Or
Two, you were too lazy or didn't have time and decided to skim it and say work on spelling and grammer and they will be fit.

I don't mean to attack if I sound like I am, but I wanted people to read through what I wrote and give me information of weather or not I need to lesson it or put more into it. However, I do thank you for the spelling and grammer thing and for your little information about my idea.

YoshiRiRu: Thank you for your information, that was what I wanted to hear was weather someone like it or not, weather I needed to put more into it or not. Okay, so I need to put how one becomes a digidestined, what the goal is, and what is a digivice.

Well, those I can answer except for the last one. The only information I can give is a picture of what it looks like (which will be posted on my plot) and what it functions as. No one really knows according to what I've read what a digivice exactly is other than letting humans make digimon to digivolve to the next level. Which seems to be the main part of a digivice.

So, as for explaining what the digivice is, all I can do is put a picture up and it's functions. I'll put up the cards also. . . Maybe I should also add in what the card's name is and what it's function. That might help out more.

Thanks, I'll get started right away. Man this is probably going to be the most information about my rp than in the history of this forum rp. I don't think everyone will want to read the entire information, but you guys said it and I'll go with it as to weather or not people will be interested and join up will be determined.

In my opinion, I think haveing too much information to read through can cause people to say I'm interested, but I don't want to or read through such a long information.

Oh, another thing. There was someone who has posted a digimon rp and they didn't have as much information as I do. But than again it was invatation only and only could use regular digimon. Not created from your own mind. So I guess she/he didn't need to put up as much information about digimon as I have to because it's only ment for invite. Which means that she didn't need to post what a digivice looks like and only put the information of what it does. Anyways, I'll get on it like I said and we'll see if having too much information will attract people.

Spelling and grammar issues are a common problem amoungst RPers (Hell, even the best typo from time to time). However, the fact that she pointed it out is still valid. Nobody wants to RP with someone who makes posts that are a chore to read (excluding those people who have similar problems). I'd go into detail about issues with your plot, but everyone else has seemingly done that already for you.

Now, for the last paragraph in your post. You were making a reference to my RP, correct? I indeed have pictures of the Digivice models in there, and they can be seen by clicking on the name of the Digivice model. Please do not "jump the gun" as its said and make false accusations. I chose not to allow original Digimon to cut back on confusion between RPers, since most people prefer a visual aide when it comes to monsters and the like. Finally, it was invitational because I'd rather roleplay with those I trust when it comes to an RP I'd actually like to go far.

Oh, and I'm a he. That could have easily been discovered by briefly checking my profile.

O
December 2nd, 2006, 04:41 PM
I was going to make a OP RP so here I come. Bijou, excellent idea. Make it now. :D

And I think you should be able to have a Devil Fruit and a Weapon, cause my Invisible fruit... You can't really do much by being invisible.

Loki
December 2nd, 2006, 09:36 PM
O: I never said you couldn't have both. ^^ And, I'll make it sometime, but probably not soon, because I'm really busy, and I kind of want to add a little more to the plot... It still pains me to look at how short it is... =_=

Art Critic Cubone: Viz translations are okay, I have those too. Just as long as it's not 4kids Dub. Cursed Fruit and Devil Fruit is what bugs me the most. >.< And a few freaky other dub things. Manga is a-okay, unless I tell you specifically to refer to it differently.

Netta: I did skim it, how else would I have been able to see the spelling error's? < <;; And, whether you meant it or not, I feel as though I was attacked, but that's perfectly fine with me, as I really don't care. I just won't review your plot's, and that way, you get advice you want, and I don't have to review it.

Origin: You spelled "amongst" wrong, unless I'm being stupid and non-european intelligent. Or unless I'm just being stupid. o o;;

...WIKIPEDIA. NOOBZ. Gawd. *shot* (Sorry, I just find that incredibly funny...*retard alert*)

Ullion
December 2nd, 2006, 10:17 PM
Guys, i was feeling a temptation to make another RP, its absed on Command & Conquer Generals. Its a computer game, but i have thought of a way to actually make it into a RP, i think. I don't want to pos tthe plot yet, i just wanted to know if you people thought it would eb a good idea.

But for those who don't have a clue on what C&C is; well, its a computer game based on i guess the war thats goign on right now >.< there are 3 sides: USA, China and the GLA (Global Liberation Army). USA and China of course are allies, where the GLA are like, the Iraqs. In the game, America is the most civilized etc, where it has the best of infantry, and highly advnaced planes and tanks. China is more WW2ish that uses massive amoutns of troops to overcome enemies, adn uses semi-modern tanks. The GLA use biochemical weapons adn stealth/demolition tactics.

The main idea of the plot is that you are one unit, and are lost adn meet up with other units, fromm all sides, and everyone is lost. Now, all the poeple are trying to get back to their bases, but they don't recognize the area. They travel through portals (just amde up to make it mroe interesting >.<) and stuff and find different regions (Ie. start in jungle, go through portal and end up in a Desert).

If you people think its a good idea than i'll make the plot, adn go as in depth as i can, i am welcoming criticism.. *of course* and stuff... and in the post, i'll explain all the different units that the RPers can be, adn what the units do etc.

parallelzero
December 2nd, 2006, 10:22 PM
O: I never said you couldn't have both. ^^ And, I'll make it sometime, but probably not soon, because I'm really busy, and I kind of want to add a little more to the plot... It still pains me to look at how short it is... =_=

Art Critic Cubone: Viz translations are okay, I have those too. Just as long as it's not 4kids Dub. Cursed Fruit and Devil Fruit is what bugs me the most. >.< And a few freaky other dub things. Manga is a-okay, unless I tell you specifically to refer to it differently.

Netta: I did skim it, how else would I have been able to see the spelling error's? < <;; And, whether you meant it or not, I feel as though I was attacked, but that's perfectly fine with me, as I really don't care. I just won't review your plot's, and that way, you get advice you want, and I don't have to review it.

Origin: You spelled "amongst" wrong, unless I'm being stupid and non-european intelligent. Or unless I'm just being stupid. o o;;

...WIKIPEDIA. NOOBZ. Gawd. *shot* (Sorry, I just find that incredibly funny...*retard alert*)

See? Even I typo. And so do you, Bell. XD

More than one error is plural, so its errors, not error's. XD;

O
December 2nd, 2006, 10:29 PM
I don't think you need too much of a plot for a One Piece RP, because most of the story arcs in One Piece are just random ones.

Alter Ego
December 3rd, 2006, 02:28 AM
...

I flounce off for a few days and everybody posts. Nyah, looks like I have my work cut out for me then, eh?

@Midnight_Dragon 249: This is your first? *Blinks* Woah, in that case you're off to a grand start. Don't worry too much about the bulk, it's a far better problem to have than not having enough to say (The common problem among our RPers). However, in order to make it look less intimidating, you could try two measures:

1. Increase the amount of pargraphs. Every time you start on a new subject, make a new paragraph for it. Sure, it will still be huge, but it won't look (or feel) as overwhelming if it's a cluster of three- or four-line paragraphs as opposed to several thick walls of writing. It's a psychological thing.

2. Put some of the extra details at the end within spoiler tags. That is, the information that isn't crucially important for making an appropriate sign-up. Again, this will make the RP look smaller and less intimidating. I think it's awesome that you've put so much time and effort into creating a whole RP world, all you need to do is put a little extra thought into the presentation of it so that you can have your audience nicely addicted before they realize the full extent of what they've gotten themselves into. ^^

@Netta: Ehh...yeah, what YoshiRiRu said. I'm not familiar with the Digimon series so your digivices and mega levels are all greek to me. You lashing out on Bijou was uncalled for, though, because she actually gave you some very useful advice. Not everyone has the time and energy (or correct background information) to provide an in-depth explanation of everything that is and isn't okay with your plot (To illustrate: I, as I mentioned, don't know Digimon at all, which is why I don't feel qualified to comment on the plot beyond aesthetical things like grammar and spelling) but grammar and spelling are very important for making your plot look professional (Not to mention that a typo in the thread title can be a downright disaster) so instead of whining about what she didn't say, why don't you try to learn from what she did say? -.-

@Bijou: You-you've got an apostrophe in the plural form of sail! *Points at the end of the first paragraph* How dare you? You've disgraced the whole RP section with your unscrupulous grammar! xO

Just kidding of course (Although that grammatical error is still there and should be fixed). ^^ As for the plot itself...well, it's kind of hard to write that much when you're basing the whole thing on an existing anime (Hence why I tend to avoid plots of that kind) and adding a whole lot of background information would only attract the kind of RPers that you said you don't want (Those less familiar with One Piece). Aye, it's a dilemma, it is, all I can suggest is reference links to the correct terminology (As opposed to the dub one) and maybe creating something a bit more...binding in terms of a plotline. Personal freedom is all well and good, but it tends to leave all but a core group of RPers standing confused and unoccupied on the sidelines and the lack of a central plot (One that is shared by all concerned) tends to make progress difficult at best, but if you believe you have the skills for it (Which I think you do ^^) then by all means, go for the free format. Me, I'll stick to keeping my RPers on a leash so I can yank them along as necessary. *Is a complete control freak* xD

@Korinku: If you didn't have a proper idea to begin with, then there's not that much point in posting, you know. We're here to help, but we're not going to do you work for you. :\ As for the plot, where on earth did the two first heroes pop out from? (As I recall, getting the power to control time isn't exactly normal) How does someone who can control time (And, hence, could just freeze every opponent into place and finish them off) get defeated and why does a super-villain who can kill anyone he/she bloody well pleases need to go into hiding (Or gather up a team), especially when he/she has just killed every hero in existence? This doesn't make much sense, you know, and let's not even go into the kind of horrible historical issues that time travel implies (You know, someone born with super powers would most probably have a serious impact on what happens in the world, and just surgically removing and exporting these heroes would severly alter the space-time continum and probably create a paradox which would tear the whole thing apart) and your complete lack of setting. Where and when does this take place? How do these heroes know what needs to be done and how did they find each other? Why doesn't the big bad guy just kill off the whole lot of them and be done with it? You've got a whole lot to work on if you want this one to work.

@Killer-Swift: Ehh...that plot idea is a bit too random for my tastes (Never been big on the whole humans at war concept either). You can't just have magical teleportation portals of doom popping up for no apparent reason, and in the context of a global war, the RP characters themselves would be hopelessly insignificant. (Unless we want to go into the whole clichéd American war heroes concept, but I for one have had quite enough of that) Besides, wars are nasty...very nasty, in fact, so unless you want to completely warp the image of the thing you'll end up with a very high PG-tag to boot. Besides, this kind of war thing is rather political and could offend people (Especially portraying Americans as the great good guys against the stereotypically evil GLA people), so no, I don't really recommend going down that road. :\

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Whew, I think that's all of them. I didn't miss any of you, right? If I did, just give me a holler. ^^ I'm actually working on a plot myself (Which I hope to release in celebration of my newfound liberty once my schoolwork is over and done with for the year), but I have a terrible shortage of names, so I can't post it yet. (I suck at names, particularly for countries and suchlike T_T) Oh well, another day, I guess. ^_^

Loki
December 3rd, 2006, 06:46 AM
*gaspeth!!*

*hide's face behind Hunter-Nin mask in shame* Darn those apostrophes!! <--Bet I did that wrong too...>.<

*stabs the stupid three or four pixeled things.* (Watch me typo the apostrophes ALL over this post. xDD)

Anyway, I think I'll add a link for the Devil Fruit, because that way, it's a lot easier for people who haven't watched er... nearly as far as I have... *shot* To see the other crazy and exotic Devil Fruit in the One Piece world. ^^ That is a good idea. That way, I can shoot the quote, but I might keep it there anyway...

Yeah, the more binding thing on the plot was what I was waiting and looking for (I'm not exactly in-control, though I'm a control-freak. =.=) But I suppose O's right, I'll just stick with what I've got and see where it get's me.

*adds a rule*

Ullion
December 3rd, 2006, 10:41 AM
@Killer-Swift: Ehh...that plot idea is a bit too random for my tastes (Never been big on the whole humans at war concept either). You can't just have magical teleportation portals of doom popping up for no apparent reason, and in the context of a global war, the RP characters themselves would be hopelessly insignificant. (Unless we want to go into the whole clichéd American war heroes concept, but I for one have had quite enough of that) Besides, wars are nasty...very nasty, in fact, so unless you want to completely warp the image of the thing you'll end up with a very high PG-tag to boot. Besides, this kind of war thing is rather political and could offend people (Especially portraying Americans as the great good guys against the stereotypically evil GLA people), so no, I don't really recommend going down that road. :\




Ok, i get your point, i'll stya away from that >.> but tis a fun game, so i thought i could've tried to amke an RP on it, but you brought up a good point -- so i'll stay away from that... thanks man XD

Scarlet Weather
December 3rd, 2006, 01:56 PM
Art Critic Cubone: Viz translations are okay, I have those too. Just as long as it's not 4kids Dub. Cursed Fruit and Devil Fruit is what bugs me the most. >.< And a few freaky other dub things. Manga is a-okay, unless I tell you specifically to refer to it differently.

You mean like turning Sanji's cigarette into a lollipop? I saw one anime dub- dang, I couldn't pay attention to the rest of the episode after that. I was like "NO! THAT'S A CIGARETTE! SANJI DOESN'T EVEN HAVE A SWEET TOOTH!". I dread what they might have done to edit out Zoro's wounds after fighting "Hawk-Eye" Mihawk... "Oh, my wounds are reopenining... but you can't see the blood because mine is inexplicably invisible!" And "Cursed Fruit"? That's just dumb...

Loki
December 3rd, 2006, 02:34 PM
You mean like turning Sanji's cigarette into a lollipop? I saw one anime dub- dang, I couldn't pay attention to the rest of the episode after that. I was like "NO! THAT'S A CIGARETTE! SANJI DOESN'T EVEN HAVE A SWEET TOOTH!". I dread what they might have done to edit out Zoro's wounds after fighting "Hawk-Eye" Mihawk... "Oh, my wounds are reopenining... but you can't see the blood because mine is inexplicably invisible!" And "Cursed Fruit"? That's just dumb...

Yeah, if anyone say's "Sanji's Lollipop" I'll give 'em something to pop about. =_= No, no, no, it's "Oh, my wounds are reopening... but you can't see the blood because I'm really not that badly hurt...because it'd be traumatic if little kids saw me bleeding all over Johnny and Yosaku."

x_x No offense to any poor soul who likes the dub and hasn't seen the beasting Japanese dub. o o;;; No offense there too. *shot*

Right, anyway, enough bashing of the Nasty, I've added all my changes to the original post with my plot, so tell me how it looks now. ^^

Netta
December 3rd, 2006, 06:30 PM
Spelling and grammar issues are a common problem amoungst RPers (Hell, even the best typo from time to time). However, the fact that she pointed it out is still valid. Nobody wants to RP with someone who makes posts that are a chore to read (excluding those people who have similar problems). I'd go into detail about issues with your plot, but everyone else has seemingly done that already for you.

Now, for the last paragraph in your post. You were making a reference to my RP, correct? I indeed have pictures of the Digivice models in there, and they can be seen by clicking on the name of the Digivice model. Please do not "jump the gun" as its said and make false accusations. I chose not to allow original Digimon to cut back on confusion between RPers, since most people prefer a visual aide when it comes to monsters and the like. Finally, it was invitational because I'd rather roleplay with those I trust when it comes to an RP I'd actually like to go far.

Oh, and I'm a he. That could have easily been discovered by briefly checking my profile.


I wasn't jumping the gun. I was saying that why do I have to go into great detail with my plot when yours isn't as "big detail" as mine is. That was what I was getting at. I wasn't saying that you're plot sucks or anything, I was mainly pointing out that my rp has way more details than yours and I also said that since you only want it to be with other's you know, I would understand as to why you wouldn't need to go into great detail.

But not all of us are like you. I don't know or trust anyone in rp because I don't chat much with others. I mean look at what it says near my signature down at the bottom where it lists friends. It says I don't have any yet.

And I know why I don't which is fine by me. All I was refering was that you didn't need to go all out in info because you rp with people probably on you're friend list and they KNOW what digimon is and what not.

Since mine is not for my friends, as I don't have any yet! I have it open, but because of that, I have to go in great detail. THat was mainly what I was pointing out.

I admire that you are doing a digimon rp, but it's not my thing. I don't want to rp with the normal digimons that are on the digidex. No, mine goes far beyond to using your own imagination, creating your own made up digimon and human and using them in rp. Thus the term FDD. So please don't jump on me because I made a refrence to you're rp. I didn't mean any disrespect by it.

Netta
December 3rd, 2006, 06:36 PM
O: I never said you couldn't have both. ^^ And, I'll make it sometime, but probably not soon, because I'm really busy, and I kind of want to add a little more to the plot... It still pains me to look at how short it is... =_=

Art Critic Cubone: Viz translations are okay, I have those too. Just as long as it's not 4kids Dub. Cursed Fruit and Devil Fruit is what bugs me the most. >.< And a few freaky other dub things. Manga is a-okay, unless I tell you specifically to refer to it differently.

Netta: I did skim it, how else would I have been able to see the spelling error's? < <;; And, whether you meant it or not, I feel as though I was attacked, but that's perfectly fine with me, as I really don't care. I just won't review your plot's, and that way, you get advice you want, and I don't have to review it.

Origin: You spelled "amongst" wrong, unless I'm being stupid and non-european intelligent. Or unless I'm just being stupid. o o;;

...WIKIPEDIA. NOOBZ. Gawd. *shot* (Sorry, I just find that incredibly funny...*retard alert*)

Bijou: I didn't mean to attack you if that was what it sounded like. I was saying that you shouldn't just skim someone's plot and say needs to be worked on with just spelling and grammer. What I was trying to say was you should read the entire thing rather than just skimming it over. If I wanted it skimmed, I would have said it. I'm sorry if I did sound like I was attacking you. It was not my intent. And yes I know we all make mistakes big deal.

Loki
December 3rd, 2006, 07:52 PM
Please do not double post Netta. I'll thank you to drop the subject now.

Netta
December 3rd, 2006, 08:14 PM
Okay Bijou, I'll stop. And guys, please don't mind me. I can be a real hot head. Okay a you know what hot head. ^_^ I think I'll drop out from my rp plot.

There is too much information that I would have to go into about Digimon and I know there are people out there that don't want to know the explaination of digimon. Unless I make it for digimon fans only. Hey, that's it. My rp will be for only digimon fans only. That way they know what I'm talking about when it comes to what Digimons are and what the levels do and attacks and what nots.

I really do thank you all for your comments. Even when I whine about only wanting to have information other than just. . . Well you know. Grammer. Anyways, Sorry if I stepped on your toes. I'll even kiss them for you all if you want. I'll make the boo boo I made go away. *giggles*

Scarlet Weather
December 5th, 2006, 12:56 PM
Bijou... I just went through the trouble of reading every danged wikipedia article about One Piece that I could find, just to get a better idea of the series. Create the rp. I'm tired of waiting.

Loki
December 5th, 2006, 02:32 PM
Hmm, if you're tired of waiting, then you should probably do or elaborate on your sign-up yes? Considering you do have the sign-up sheet at hand, and the finished plot, yes? Well, I might post it sometime today. We'll see, but you're not in the position to be ordering me to post it up, because that'll only make it go slower. And I'm glad you read every danged article wikipedia had, must've taken you a few day's to do that. < <;;

And so, you'll have to wait a little longer. Patience, young grasshoppah. *shot*

Scarlet Weather
December 5th, 2006, 02:51 PM
And so, you'll have to wait a little longer. Patience, young grasshoppah. *shot*

Curses...

Hmm, if you're tired of waiting, then you should probably do or elaborate on your sign-up yes? Considering you do have the sign-up sheet at hand, and the finished plot, yes? Well, I might post it sometime today. We'll see, but you're not in the position to be ordering me to post it up, because that'll only make it go slower. And I'm glad you read every danged article wikipedia had, must've taken you a few day's to do that. < <;;

Already have- elaborated, I mean. I've got a captain, but my crew keeps changing because I get bored so I scrap one and create a few others. And as for reading Wikipedia, it actually only took me two hours to read all articles necessary to rp, including character bios for all main characters. It did take me a few days, but only because I kept getting called away from the computer. *is struck by lightning for bragging*

Loki
December 5th, 2006, 03:20 PM
o o;; Hmm, maybe I should specify:

Each RPer has one character (or two) who is apart of one universal crew. Like, one RPer is the captain, the other is the navigator, the other is the shipwright, and so on...o o;;

...And, maybe I should clarify that the Hiso Hiso Fruit, Navigator, Doctor, and Awa Awa Fruit Is reserved. ^^;; (Animal talking fruit and the Soap/Bubbles Fruit if you're too lazy to look it up.)

So, you shouldn't have an entire crew in tow, unless you've got a two man crew...which...wouldn't work...

And, I thought you meant ALL the article's. I was about to say, 'Even I haven't read all the article's...'

I'm making the OOC thread now so we don't SPAM this place up. >.<

Đ a r κ
December 6th, 2006, 03:08 PM
OK, I came up with something else that I actually gave some thought too.
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Dragon riders

Long ago in a far off land called Formera, dragons were aloud to be tamed and breeded. But soon, after two years of peace, a war broke between Formera and an evil village called Zalerame, who set out to catch all dragons and harness their power which could enhance magic extremely. Both enemy's used their very own dragons in this war and after one year, Formera conquered Zalerame and saved the dragons. But, because of what these dragons caused, Formera set out to lower the population of dragons and only kept dragons used for the army, dragons used for the police and dragons that lived in the wild and were not able to be caught. Some people did not hand over their dragons and kept them. Because of doing this, those people had to go into hiding, for the police were sent out to airest anyone in the possession of dragon without the permission of Rora, the king of Formera. After days without Zalerame causing trouble, word had broke that Zalerame had returned from the ashes and was more powerful than ever. The king then sent his army back into war but because of the decrease of dragons, Formera was weaker. Now, the people who kept dragons without permission are going into the war to help their army but without the king or anyone else knowing. But little do they don't know what they are in for. Because what no one else knows is that Zalerame is actualy after all the dragons and an ancient dragon egg that never hatched. Inside it was a bady dragon that was able to control minds and if Zalerame gets the egg, they can use the power inside it to control the minds of others.

You will play as either one of the people with an illegal dragon or you will play as an army member of Zalerame (A.K.A. bad guys).

-Class's-
Archer
Wizard/witch
Swordsman
Normal citizen

-Types of Dragons-
Electricity:Semona:http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b225/JaredBetzold/Dragons/Yellow_Dragon.jpg
An electric dragon is pretty hard to defeat because of it's body. If something or someone were to touch the dragon, he/she would get shocked. the only way to mount such a beast is if it trusts you enough. The dragon can even control were the spots on it's body will electricute something. This dragons biggest weakness is ruber for the dragon's electricity would bounce off it. This dragon flys almost at the speed of sound but a little slower than that. This dragon also shoots electricity out of it's mouth.

Ice:Morshane:http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i180/sparksdemon90/Dragons/RipTide.jpg
The ice dragon can be found in an ice cave in the north. This dragon can breath ice and make ice come out of it's scales. This dragons main weakness is fire because the fire can melt the ice this dragon creats. Another ability of this dragon is to turn water into ice .

Fire:Calmere:http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b345/erosion_101/Gal_BlackDragonOnRocks.jpg
This dragon can breath fire. This dragon is very good at flight, it's main weakness's are water and ice

Water (A.K.A. sea dragon):Liquarda:http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/r165/wolfman91sf/1159071406_sicedragon.jpg
This dragon is mostly in water sawing , it is a pretty slow at flight and can shoot water from it's mouth. It's weakness is ice and electricity.

Wind:Blora:http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f305/mystic_wing/Magic%20Being/Dragon/ice_dragon_2.gif
This dragon control were wind blows and how hard it blows. it is the most fastest dragon known of at flight. It's weakness is electricity.

-Character sheet-
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Description:
Personality:
Class:
Dragon:
Weapon:
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So, what do you guys think of this?

Midnight_Dragon249
December 6th, 2006, 05:24 PM
Heh, I like it, but I think you should let the RPers choose the dragon names. (IMHO 'Blorax' is weird.) I'm not a very good person to do a full review though. My attention span is shorter than a gnat's. But I do love dragons.

Đ a r κ
December 6th, 2006, 05:46 PM
That was suposed to say type of dragons, you can give the dragons a name though.

Olha
December 9th, 2006, 09:08 PM
Korinku,

I would be interested in your role play of Dragon Riders, but I want to know what could the dragons look like. Do they have four limbs or six? Do you want them to be any kind of dragon drawing out there? What is the dragons weak spot? Are they armored both above and below with a single scale open like in the Hobbit or are they vulnerable underneath like other's have claimed? Everyone has their own ideah of what a dragon's weak and strong spots are and I think you should say what you want the dragon's weakness to be so that there is no argueing during the rp.

I hope I am helping and not stepping the boundary line.

Netta,

I have seen the FDD sites you are talking about and think it is great that you are trying to come up with one. I would be very very interested in that rp as I have a few of my own created digimon I would love to use with my own character. But I see where you are coming from in your arguement. I think Jenn's FDD site is sweet and I hope you will put out the rp soon. With that said, I will say for you to be more of your own origional. Using the shows as a refrense is great, but not all have seen Digimon. I also think you should come up with your own evolution step too. Look at the different shows. Digimon Adventure had crests, Adveture Zero Two had Armors and DNA. Digimon Tamers had biomerging with humans and Digimon Frontier had humans digivolve into digimon through the process of finding an armor spirit. I do like how you changed the crest into the card and it is a little origional, but not as good as it could be.

Again I hope I'm not stepping on boundary lines.

Đ a r κ
December 10th, 2006, 07:48 AM
Thank you Olha, that was good advise thanks again.

Alter Ego
December 13th, 2006, 06:16 AM
@ Korinku: Meh, that plot is riddled with linguistic errors (E.g. 'Aloud' instead of 'allowed') and not all of it is making sense. I mean, why would these dragon owners want to help out a king who has prosecuted them thus far? I think a bit of explanation on that would be in order. You should also work on your exposition, the plot is written in a very choppy way and jumps from one thing to the other, a bit more logical development and structuring would go a long way to improve it. Furthermore, the descriptions of the dragon types are very bare and the huge pictures (Which obviously aren't your original art) give the RP a very amateurish apperance. I'd really recommend describing the physical characteristics of each species in proper written detail rather than just slapping on a picture. Electricity does not "bounce of" rubber, by the way, rubber simply doesn't conduct it and I don't really see rubber as such a big issue for a huge monstrosity with sharp claws and teeth which could rend it to pieces so easily. :\ Finally, the character classes have just been lobbed there without any explanation whatsoever. That's not cool, not everyone knows what form witchcraft takes in your world for instance, does it differ from wizardry? How does magic work in that world and how do dragons enhance it (And indeed, why would they do so?)? A lot of things in your plot seem very rushed and that will cause serious problems and confusion once the plot develops further, so I'd suggest clearing up those issues now. A pinch of prevention is worth a pound of cure, you know.

Ehh...hope it didn't sound like I just bit your head off or anything. ^^


That aside, I've actually got a plot of my own that I'd like to get comments on. It's a vaguely christmas-related one in the pokémon genre (Notice how all of the plots thus far have fallen under 'Other Roleplay'?). I've already gotten some initial comments on it, but the more the merrier so rate away.

There are many regions in the world of pokémon, many vast and mysterious countries full of rare pokémon, exciting scenery, great cities, magnificent gyms and skilled trainers, evil teams seeking world domination...there are regions that have everything a budding trainer could ask for and much more.

And then...there are the regions that don't. Small, discreet backwaters with little more than pokémon centers and the occassional piece of obscure folklore or rumoured sightings of rare pokémon to their name. Boring, mundane places which no self-respecting evil organisation would even dream of overtaking for the simple reason that nobody would notice them even if they did.

Among these regions, these veritable blank spots on the world map, one has distinguished itself from amongst the rest: Eseka. This region - one of the larger 'unknown' regions of the world, located far north of the main trio of Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn - has actually managed to attract a decent amount of attention during the last few years.

Little more than the occasional groups of skiing enthusiaists and ice pokémon specialists have been known to visit Eseka. It's no wonder, considering Eseka's harsh climate, featuring short, intense summers and long, frigid winters. Its cities, although modern, are nothing to write home about, and most tourists don't see the point in braving the weather with its notoriously fierce gales to get to them.

This being the case, it obviously isn’t a great level of education or a marvelous climate drawing people in. No, what has really appealed to the populace is the cultural heritage of the place. Their traditions of celebrating Christmas, to be precise. With many of the southern regions seeing little or no snowfall during winter time, and with most northern regions being uncomfortably distant - usually with even worse climates than Eseka's - the region in general has recently become a popular traveling destination for tourists, the curious, and just about anyone wishing to spend the holidays surrounded by the kind of 'genuine' winter landscape that so many songs praise.

The center of this new trend is Alvene, a rather small town handily nestled in a small valley at the crossing of two tall mountain ranges. Despite the fact that these mountains seem so intent on sealing something away from the rest of the world rather than inviting anyone in, they do provide the town - supposedly one of the oldest settlements in the region - with cover from the worst of the fierce gales which give the region's winters a bad name, making the town's climate a lot more pleasant to live in.

Not all the residents of the town are pleased with this development, however. An old Esekan tale claims that countless years ago, the region and the world as a whole came under assault by a creature from a distant realm, a terrible giant of ice who brought with him eternal darkness and winter, extinguishing all life in his wake. According to the tale, Eseka was the place in which the giant settled and from whence he then sought to spread cold and darkness across the world, and it was also in Eseka, on the very spot on which the town of Alvene was founded, where a battle of epic proportions supposedly took place between the giant and a powerful spirit of fire who had come to the aid of the humans. For three days and nights the battle raged, or so the tale goes, but eventually the fire spirit was victorious, driving back the malicious giant and sealing him deep within the earth.

The giant remains there to this day, the legend concludes, the fierce gales of winter being a sign of his struggle against the seal, and the more religiously inclined citizens of Alvene still see the yearly lighting of a giant bonfire as a ritual, a sacred duty to keep the evil locked away. They do not take kindly to having seeing this vigil cheapened for the sake of crass commercialism.

Times change, however, and most citizens have toned down their devotion to the old ways in favour of seeing the town prosper, realizing that a small - if respected - trainer school and a handful of smaller businesses aren't going to be enough to keep their beloved town on the map. Visitors are not only expected but welcomed, and with advertisements of beautiful scenery and unforgettable experiences floating about, predictions claim that the visitor count for this year will be higher than ever, despite troubling news of record low temperatures in the region.

Concerning the start-up and signing up

All characters will be expected to arrive at (or wake up in) the town of Alvene. Why they have chosen to arrive is up to you, and a short explanation will be expected in the ‘History’ part of the sign-up. I hope that stating the following is unnecessary, but just in case: this RP doesn’t start until I have written first IC, and once it has started further applicants will not be accepted without a compelling reason and an extraordinarily good sign-up. Such sign-ups should be PMed to me, so do not post a profile here once the RP has started. Violating this will lead to your sign-up being failed immediately and permanently. Reservations will not be given unless I know that you are a good RPer, and even if I do grant you one, I will expect you to complete your sign-up before the starting date.

Rules

1. Follow all standard RP section rules.

2. No powerplaying, godmodding, or character control of any kind will be tolerated. I can't stress enough how much I hate character control. Unless the controller of the character has explicitly informed both you and me that you have permission to control his/her character then you aren't allowed to. Failure to comply with this rule may result in an immediate ban from the RP or a demand to edit the offending post(s) depending on the severity of the offense.

3. If you aren't literate, don't bother. I'll be expecting a bare minimum of four lines of legible English for every IC post. If you can't manage that then click the 'previous' button on your browser right now. Don't whine about English not being your first language, it's not mine either, not being born to a language is no excuse for not learning it properly.

4. No fourth generation. That is no 4th gen. moves, no 4th gen. damage system and certainly no 4th gen. pokémon. I swear, if I see a lame, unconfirmed pokémon name like 'Glacia' on your sheet I'm going to fail you right away. <.< As far as this RP is concerned, the 4th generation hasn't come around yet. Live with it.

Sign-up sheet

Name: (Please don't put any stupid anime rip-off like 'Edward Elric' here, I think that's about the only way to fail this one)
Age: (Early teenage and up, please. I won't have any 7-year old trainer prodigies thank you very much)
Gender:
Personality: (Please write this in proper detail. Four lines is a very bare minimum, so unless you have amazing abilities of information compressing I'll be expecting a lot more than that. Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues will be shot on sight)
Appearance: (Believe it or not, I want some detail here too. Again, four lines' minimum. Supporting pictures are allowed only if they are original art (meaning no stealing from AnimeNation) and all characteristics must be described in writing. Just as reminder: Eseka is cold, seriously cold. So put something warm on your character unless you’re prepared to RP them freezing their posterior off for most of the RP.)
Pokémon: (Please note rule number four. Also, no legendaries, fakemon or fully evolved competitive-class teams. Experienced trainers are allowed, but no friggen' trainer gods, elite fours, gym leaders, league champions or other ridiculous stuff. Also, I'll be expecting at least four lines of personality and history for each pokémon. Drone pokémon will not be tolerated.)
History: (Again, put some effort into it. You don't need to go into detail, but at the very least give a brief overview of your character's life and a word or two about how and why they ended up in Alvene.)
Other: (Anything about the character that you need to get of your chest? Here's where you do it, but no ridiculous stuff like superhuman powers.)
RP Sample: (And just when you thought the worst was over...this is the most important field in the whole sign-up so give it your best. Samples from your earlier RPing are accepted, but please take them from a pokémon-related RP if you do, otherwise it will be difficult for me to judge if your skills are suitable. Fresh samples involving the character you're signing up are strongly encouraged and can compensate for lacks in the other fields, so think about it. ^^)

I wrapped it in 'spoiler' tags because it's...how do you say...vertically gifted. Yes, I think that term will do. xD

YoshiRiRu
December 13th, 2006, 06:30 AM
Alter: Er.. This is really hard. I don't know how to criticize your RP's. They're just really good. The only thing that leaves me a bit troubled is the sort of lack of direction. I don't see any real objective. I mean, okay, we're in this town in this freezing place, so what? The Ice Giant legend sort of addresses that aspect, but it seems like the "only a legend" thing, which is to be brought out if things start to get monotonous. I'm really splitting hairs here, trying to y'know, find someway to criticize it. Very well written, as usual. Good job!

Alter Ego
December 13th, 2006, 06:47 AM
@YoshiRiRu:Nyah, about the lack of direction thing...pfiffle...how to answer this without spoiling my game? Ah...I know...spoiler tags to the rescue! ^^

Big, honkin' spoiler, folks, proceed only if your life depends on it.
I've actually got a plan - the ice giant legend is only a subtle hint - don't worry about that, I just don't want to give my game away in the intro, as that would kind of hurt the drama. Suffice to say that the legend...will have its consequences later on. Mmmmyeeess...

I sure love my spoiler tags. For those who didn't check them (As if you all didn't jump on the chance) I've got plans to counter any aimlessness. Anyone who's RPed with me in charge will tell you that I'm too much of a control freak not to prod my RPers along the right track. xD Thanks for commenting. ^^

Scarlet Weather
December 13th, 2006, 01:15 PM
Hmmm... I'm back, and I'm just as evil as before. Meh, but I missed the sign-up date for the One Piece RP due to someone else taking my character's devil fruit, school, and working on my humour fic. I'm also a bit lazy feeling at the moment... but I'll commment!

Korinku: Needs way more depth. Waaayyy more depth. Why the heck are dragons obeying people if they were "captured"? Why the heck did whatsisface want to control the dragon population if they need more dragons? By the way, I agree with AE... "rubber" is not a good weakness. Well, unless somebody were to join as Monkey D. Luffy... but why anyone would do that is beyond me.

Alter_Ego: I bow to your superior roleplay skills! CREATE IT! CREATE IT! CREATE- *is shot with dart by literacy cops* Dang... gotta learn to control my caps lock angst.

And, I thought you meant ALL the article's. I was about to say, 'Even I haven't read all the article's...

I just finished. Heh, heh....

Loki
December 13th, 2006, 02:44 PM
CAPS LOCK IS WIN.

*shoots the caps lock button*

Anywhooooo Alter! (I do think I'll call you Alter. Do you care if I call you Alter?): Yeah, seriously what Yoshi said, x_x *Darn you and your ph33r skills!* Umm, it says wake up or arrive in Alvene, and also "State a reason to be there". Would that include 'I live there'? xD Or are people not allowed to live in Eseka or Alvene in general? That's something that was tugging at the hem of my skirt while I read. I might be repeating what Yoshi said, but yeah, there doesn't seem to be much conflict revealed in the plot itself, other then people are forgetting the legend or the such. Perhaps you could describe what Alvene looks like in general? Like, is it a modern super high-tech place, a barbaric place with the houses still made of twigs and straw, or just like your normal Pokemon Town iced with snow?

Yeah, after about ten minutes of straining, that's about all that I can squeeze out that might possibly be wrong with your plot. xD I dunno if you said this already or not (might've missed it) but is Eseka an island? That's the impression I'm under anyway. ^^

So yeah! And Art Critic, I'm still accepting LSU's if you want, you just can't be apart of the crew yet. You can be a freelance though. ^^ Discuss this with me in the OOC thread if you have any more questions.

Korinku: I'll join as Monkey D. Luffy!! *shot* *Bullet stretch arm and richochets* *...stabbed* Those dragons are nice and all, and I know it's a pain to describe things like Alter Ego suggested, even though it's probably the most effective way, you could...A) Do what Alter said, B) Look up different dragon types on an encyclopedia website and simply assign certain colors to them, or C) Make those images into links, because links are cleaner the IMG tags, even if they take longer to do. ^^

Alter Ego
December 14th, 2006, 12:32 AM
@Art_Critic_Cubone: Learning control indeed, put those big caps down right now, you might hurt someone. My planned release date is the 22nd of December, since that's when school ends, so you'll just have to hold your Horseas until then. ^_~ *Shot for lame pokémon metaphor*

@Bijou: Nyah, Alter is fine. In fact, I'm okay with every abbrevation or general wrangling of my username except for Ego. *Is waiting to see who the first smart-alec around here is* (< This comment will make sense if what I suspect will occur) But yeah, it's true that the resident thing could be clearer. I don't mind locals (Heck, I'll be playing one myself xD), so they're all well and good (Although having a completely local cast would be a bit too much). As for Alvene...well, I already mentioned that all cities in the region are of pretty average modernity (Yes, they have running water, electricity and whatnot) and any description of the town in particular that I tried to put in just made the plot look...awkward somehow. o.O I'll go into detail about Alvene's appearance in my starting IC anyway, so yish. Finally, Eseka is a region in itself, so I'd say either a big island (Since it does have two mountain ranges on it) or a smallish continent. Not quite Hoenn size, but still pretty big. Ehh...maybe I need to clarify the region description a bit.

Anyways, thanks for the comments and encouragement, everyone. It really does help. ^^

RentCavalier
December 17th, 2006, 12:51 PM
Dragons and the capturing of them seems a tad cliche to me.

I mean, not that cliche is neccessarily bad, but I'm constantly trying to find some other avenue to use Dragons that isn't cliche.

Are there any good, original methods of Dragon use in a plot? Or have all avenues been used up?

I ponder this...

Shiney
December 24th, 2006, 02:44 PM
OOC: One of several brainchild’s I've been working on, this is pretty much a combination of tons of tiny role-play ideas I've had over the last few months, and super glued them all together. I'd like any constructive criticism, but right now, I'm working on refining the story and trying to think of plot events.

All the lands of the humankind were peaceful from recorded history, with only minor border skirmishes from time to time to hint at human nature, and only the best relation with the golden elves of the southern seas. Before I begin with our tale, perhaps a bit of information on the homeland of humans would be in order.

The Continent, each called by various names by each country, is divided into a number of basic regions. The northern range is vastly inhospitable mountains, perceived to be barren of all but the most hardy, and simple of life. And for the most part, this mountain range extends down the western border of the land, all the way to the coast, providing a highly effective defense.

On the southernmost border of the Northern Range, A species of human has clung to life where most claim it to be impossible, with a mixture of their magic and science. The "High" Humans, "Ascended" Humans, and "Angels" as they are variously called have an advanced, if slightly racist society, these beings as fair, and as noble as elves are reputed to be, but with a rare gift. They're great, nearly oversized wings allowing for flight through the sky itself, though making conventional travel slightly more tedious, compared to other human races.

Occupying the greatest space of the land, the Empire of humanity exists all along the great plains, and mighty forests. These are the humans that you and I know. They had formed a great and benevolent empire, spanning the cities, ports, and settlements all across the massive expanses of land, and to the great eastern Sea.

The southern lands are considered by some to be the most exotic, but also the harshest in their ways. In the southwest, there is a relatively small nation, with no official name, or government. They are simply referred to as "Dragon folk" Or "People of the Dragon" Or any number of kind and unkind comparisons between them, and the magical creatures. They are fiercely territorial, and obviously have a great deal of secrets to keep. As one time, you may visit the land of the Dragon, and find a desert range there, and two years later, you could come back to the same spot, and find yourself in a jungle. The dragon people protect their secrets as a dragon does it's hoard.

Lastly, starting at the eastern edge of the southern area of the continent, but swelling out to envelope the entire southern area, the Southern Reaches is but one mass of deserts, ranging from rocky, to white sand dunes. The people of this land are unique, ranging from nearly Elvin in appearance, to human, to the bestial two-legged cat. From what would seem a house cat like any other, apart form its startling intelligence, and sharp tongue, to the massive war tigers of the South. the Ohmes are as various as the imagination itself, their form depending on a number of factors relating to the weather, the stars, moon phases, the time of year, and many other factors, creating a nigh-infinitely complex system that is rarely understood outside of Ohmes civilization. These people have no true strict government, but seem largely uninterested in the rest of the world at large, focusing on making their way on their own.

Now, with that out of the way, a minor explanation of recent events. Recently, within the Empire, a small group of knights, no larger than four had managed to pay a relatively minor wizard to send them into one of the many planes outside of our world. In their search for holy relics, they lingered longer than the spell could hold, and no longer anchored to any dimension, they were as flies within a whirlwind, caught up in travel through Time and Space, Existence and Ether.It was two years when the knights found their way to their homeland. And they were deeply changed for their experiences. The Knights of the Thorn were now the Knights of Ebony Sky. they were completely colorless, aside from their apparel, which was a bright, disconcerting maroon.

Moreover, they were no longer human. Where the Knights had been but normal people they came back nearly immortal. Their somehow could resist magicka of all kinds, and were imbued in body, mind, and soul with great prowess, seemingly becoming demigods. Worse than that, was their ability to spread. Overnight, more and more people became the same sort as the knights, and they quickly became the "Arm of the Empire" though it was the empire itself that had been subdued. And thus, they set forth, grimly executing their idea of "justice" upon the people, and those who did not agree with such ideas never lived long enough to voice more than a protest. Resistances in many places set up, but there isn't any force than can hold out within the empire against these foes for long.

It is our newfound duty, as a group of travelers, merchants, warriors, mages, whatever you fancy yourself to be, as one of the humans, Ohmes, or Angels within the empire to seek the aid of the other nations in purging the empire of these malevolent occupiers, before they can threaten all of humankind.

Loki
December 25th, 2006, 12:33 PM
This may possibly be the longest RP plot I've ever written- and the one that took the longest, ironically. (Sarcasm on the ironically.) There's something about it that just bothers me. Maybe it's the lack of a base or a sturdy plot (Or maybe it's the canon characters...) but I dunno what's wrong with it. I'd love some help on it. ^^ Or maybe it's the useless information on The Shinigami Academy. I dunno, I kept changing my mind, because I wanted a Shinigami Academy RP, but I also wanted us to fight real Hollows and use Zanpakutoh's with names...


Bleach: The Mastermind [Not yet Rated]
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The Shinigami Academy. A place full of proud histories, different people, and successful shinigami students. For many years, and hopefully more to come, this academy was left peaceful as compared to the rest of Seireitei, with a few nasty incidents on field work that were all handled professionally and properly. Souls from all the different Rukongai, and souls that resided in Seireitei flocked to this school, to learn Kidou, demon arts, Zanjutsu, swordsmanship, and sometimes even Hakuda, hand-to-hand combat and Hohou foot combat. All of these souls flocked to become Shinigami, battling hollows and working their way up the ranks, into Gotei 13. It is our dearest pleasure to welcome you to this school, and we hope that you will help us uphold the reputation of the Shinigami Academy.

For spirits newer to Soul Society’s references, we have assembled a number of definitions you will need to know for the future of your occupation here at our prestiged academy.

Shinigami: Shinigami are purely spiritual beings. As such they can only be seen by other spiritually aware entities, which excludes most humans. Shinigami naturally give off spiritual force (reiatsu), which varies greatly in magnitude with the strength of the shinigami. Travel between the human world and Soul Society is extremely limited and monitored, but some shinigami are stationed in the human world to carry out their duties, and therefore must often travel between the two. In addition, it is a crime for a shinigami to remain in the human world longer than a certain time limit. A shinigami's duties include leading Pluses (ghosts) to Soul Society in a practice called soul burial (konsō), and the cleansing of hollows (evil spirits).

Hollows: A hollow is a plus spirit that has lost its heart, and is driven to devour others (both living and dead) to fill that void. Starting out as a standard human ghost, the transformation into a hollow warps the ghost into a uniquely monstrous form, though all hollows wear a vaguely skeletal mask and have an obvious hole in their bodies. Any Plus spirit that is not guided to Soul Society by a shinigami may eventually descend into a hollow. The process normally takes months or years as the Chain of Destiny slowly corrodes, reflecting the warping of the ghost's ties to the living world. However, the process may be accelerated under certain conditions (such as the attack of another hollow or through the use of certain spiritual powers).

Zanpakutou: Most zanpakutō in their sealed form look like katanas, but the shape and form varies by the person. Zanpakutō are not just weapons, but also sentient beings. They are a shinigami's partner in battle and while they can regenerate if broken, they cannot be replaced. As a shinigami gains power, the zanpakutō can change form by allowing the inner being to manifest itself to a greater degree in the outside world. The sword and the inner being are synonymous to each other. It has also been revealed that since zanpakutō are created with the shinigami, they also tend to have a personality based on their owners. Zanpakutō are used to fight hollows and other shinigami as well as to liberate or help pluses ascend to Soul Society.

For as long as time, Hollows have been bad, and Shinigami have been good. Hollows, were the evil spirits that wreaked havoc, and Shinigami, were the spirits who stopped them. Shinigami resided in Soul Society, Seireitei to be exact, and Hollows, in Hueco Mundo.

We give you our sincerest thanks and wish you a wonderful six years here at The Shinigami Academy.

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This roleplay takes place 30 years after the events of Bleach. For unexplainable reasons, a surplus of Hollows have been appearing, all of them as powerful as the next. You are apart of the 6th round of students in the Shinigami academy, and apart of a number of students who have shown exemplary skills and abilities. Due to the greater number of Hollows as compared to the Shinigami, you are asked on various missions while still keeping up with your work as a 6th round student. You are currently at the lowest level of Shinigami, unable to call your Zanpakutoh’s name just yet, but still powerful enough to stand against regular Hollows.

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Rules:
1) At least three posts before you learn your Zanpakutoh’s name.
2) If I decline you, don’t bother editing. You’re declined, end of story.
3) This is mean, I’m sorry, but I can’t RP comfortably with certain members, therefore, you will be declined regardless, unless I absolutely adore your sign-up. (Not likely. 0.000001% chance of happening.)
4) FOLLOW PC RULES FOR CRYIN OUT LOUD.
5) Original Zanpakutou’s, I beg of you. I don’t want any Zangetsu’s or Wabisuke’s or Zabimaru’s or whatever.
6) Unlike my One Piece RP, I do not require you to know a bunch of crap for this RP. As long as you read-up a fair amount on Wiki, enough so that you don’t trip all over yourself during the RP, you may join.


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Sign-up Form:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
[B]History: [I don’t really care about this part, but include where you came from. Rukongai [#] or Seireitei.]
Personality:
Race: [You are exempt from the rule against Bounts if you are not apart of the number of Shinigami. If you are a Bount, then please change 'Zanpakutoh' to 'Doll'. You are also allowed to be an Arrancar, which is technically the villian. If you are an Arrancar, your Zanpakutoh will not have a name, Ability, nor an Appearance of the entity your Zanpakutoh represents.]
Zanpakutoh: [Name/Ability/Appearance/Appearance of the entity your Zanpakutoh represents.]
Powers(?):
Other:
Roleplay Sample: [I will ask you to post one if I am unsure of your abilites. Otherwise, feel free to ignore this.]

Đ a r κ
December 27th, 2006, 03:03 AM
NEW YEARS RP
Naruto
Akatsuki and Orichimaru's plan

As Orichimaru's plan to take Sasuke's body and have the sharingan began to come into place, akatsuki was starting to finish their plan to seal the six tailed beasts. As Orichimaru thought, he began to learn something and that was that once he obtains the sharingan and starts to copy different justu's, he may be strong enough to defeat Itachi and take his body. Plus his sharingan would be perfected and Orichimaru would become even more powerful. But, Orichimaru would not be able to find Itachi so easily. Looking back into his memories, Orichimaru headed to akatsuki's headquarters to see if they left any information on their whereabouts and instead found plans to kidnap Naruto and Gaara. Orichimaru knew why they had wanted them and could care less. As Orichimaru searched around the seemingly abandoned headquarters, he had actually stayed long enough to meet up with Deidara and Tobi who seemed to have come to find their plans to kidnap the two demond kids.

Orichimaru asked if they would let him join again and Tobi began to laugh hysterically. Deidara then looked at Tobi angrily and Tobi stopped. They began to question him about why he wanted to come back and if he was planing anything against akatsuki. Orichimaru then told them that he did have one plan and that it was to destroy Konoha. The two teammates didn't seem to care and asked why they should help him with his plan, for they did not care what happens to konoha. Orichimaru ended the conversation by telling them to just bring it up with their leader and to tell him that he could help him find the demond boys. They decided to ask their leader and to their surprise he said that Orichimaru was free to join akatsuki again only if he really could help find Naruto and Gaara. Orichimaru was very pleased and was even open to the idea of actually destroying konoha with akatsuki's help. Orichimaru did have one problem though and that was that he had to keep all of this stuff about akatsuki away from Sasuke or else his plan to get the perfected sharingan and destroy Konoha would be foiled.

Back in Konoha, it is a new year with new students at the academy and old students on high rank missions. After a couple of weeks, reports of akatsuki sights began to come up. As Tsunade looked into this, she was unsure if akatsuki was up to something or not. She began to wonder if Orichimaru had something going on. But she couldn't be to sure about that so she got a group of ninja to search around for clues to indicate whether akatsuki and Orichimaru are working together but because there where so many ninja already on missions she did not have much to choose from. Tsunade knew that akatsuki was very dangerous and put much thought into who she sent on this mission and those people where, Kiba Inuzuka, Hinata hyuga, Neji Hyuga, Shino Aburame, Ino Yamanaka, Shikamaru Nara, and Choji Akimichi. This group was formed based on being able to find things with ease, being able to be quick on your feat, strong, and not too hasty.

Tsunade was really worried about sending kids on a mission that had something to do with akatsuki she also sent Jiraiya for the wisdom that he has enenthough he is sometimes pretty foolish. After about another week, the group found two spike like bells and nothing more. Tsunade knew that the bells where from the straw hats that akatsuki members wear and could not ignore all of this. She knew that there was still a lack of ninjas now because it was the time of year where the academy students get their sensie's but she got who she could. Tsunade knew that this team would need a good medical ninja so she chose Sakura Haruno and even Shizune since she was more skilled at being a medical ninja.

She also chose Neji, Hinata, Shino, Kiba, Ino, Shikamaru, Choji, Tenten, Lee, Jiraiya and last but not least, Naruto. Back at the academy, the students (Who ever signs up) are in a training session that will make a big impact on the teams that they are in. Tsunade is hoping that these kids are very powerful and smart for she wants to have them help with this mission. Though very hard, there is power in numbers. She is planning to have their senies push them really hard, to teach them as much as they can.

-Sign up-
Name:*
Age:* (11-15)
Gender:*
Personality: (Optional)
Description:*
Abilitys:* (What you specialize in)
Starting techniques:* (You will start with clone technique, Cloak of invisibility technique, Body replacement technique technique, and Rope escape technique.)
Kekkei genkai: (Optional)
Pet: (Optional)

Rena
December 27th, 2006, 09:36 AM
Whee! Review time!
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Bijou: Well, one thing that I absoulutely LOVE is the rules. You get rid of the bad role-players and all that jazz. I would definately join the role-play, I even know a lot about Bleach too, to make it easier. Your plot for the role-play is pretty interesting, but a bit confusing. So the first part is fighting all the Hollows, and later maybe take down Aizen and his groupies? ● hates Aizen so much, though Gin is not in this hating circle, I think I'm day dreaming and rambling now ● You gave the ones new to Bleach an overview of what they need to know and it'll go to more experienced 'Bleach-ness" sign-ups.

Something about is disturbs me too; its probably the plot, not enough detail on what we'll do after we take down the Hollows.
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Korinku: I have some questions for the plot; why would they take Orochimaru right away? Orochimaru betrayed Akatsuki and in episode 135 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p3nVWDqBBbU), They were distincly planning on killing Orochimaru. And why would Deidara and Tobi laugh? I get Tobi, but my Dei~kun wouldn't laugh in his Akatsuki-ish life. And also, what is the basic plot? I know that we are academy students, but what are we going to do really?

Loki
December 27th, 2006, 12:21 PM
Yay~ Mikuru-chan would join! Yeah, I've had some sticky experiences with roleplayers that fit the banned things on my rules. (Gin is love. Hisagi is love. Basically all the Bleach claimings I've got is love. xD Kira! Kira is love. Kira reminds me of Dei-chan, just... not in personality.)

Yeah, the "after-the-hollows" thing would be for me to know, and maybe another person, but it's supposed to be a secret. *shhhh* Anywho, the question right now isn't, "What happens after" it's, "Will we ever get there?" xDD

Thanks for the feedback though, at least I'm not the only one who thinks something's weird. Just don't want to tell the world what's going on since it's supposed to be a mystery. *shhh-ot*

Loki
December 27th, 2006, 12:28 PM
Yay~ Mikuru-chan would join! Yeah, I've had some sticky experiences with roleplayers that fit the banned things on my rules. (Gin is love. Hisagi is love. Basically all the Bleach claimings I've got is love. xD Kira! Kira is love. Kira reminds me of Dei-chan, just... not in personality.)

Yeah, the "after-the-hollows" thing would be for me to know, and maybe another person, but it's supposed to be a secret. *shhhh* Anywho, the question right now isn't, "What happens after" it's, "Will we ever get there?" xDD

Thanks for the feedback though, at least I'm not the only one who thinks something's weird. Just don't want to tell the world what's going on since it's supposed to be a mystery. *shhh-ot*

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Actually, I might do something completely different. :/ I'm not so sure I like the plot anymore. I think it'll be a lot easier if we're all just Captains and Lieutenants. And it'll be a lot more fun to be powerfrill. >) I'll have to think something up again though. *scraps the first one*

Scarlet Weather
December 27th, 2006, 03:34 PM
*stares*

Egad! A mod has double posted mistakenly! The end of the chatroom is coming! *is beaten into pulp by army of crazy ninjas*

Bijou: Good job with the plot as usual. I'd say "I want to join!" but I really don't want to. I'm also procrastinating with my LSU for your One Piece rp. Yeah, I'm a lazy freak. Hit me.

Korinku: No laughing Deidara. Deidara would let Tobi laugh for a minute, then kill him. Get rid of the descriptions of why the teams were picked.

Loki
December 27th, 2006, 03:42 PM
I double posted?!? *frig!!* Actually it's because my internet is being crap right now. It's making PC disappear. ;_;

I can't even see your post, so I have to post again. I'll edit with on topic-ness after I'm able to see your post.

Editz: Okay I see it now, and thanks...I think. o o; Your LSU won't be accepted if you wait much longer. < <;;

Korinku: I didn't read your post, but Deidara...laughing....as in like, friendly laugh? That's a disturbing thought. It's good to keep canon characters in-character, even in an RP. It's professional, and you get compliments for keeping them in character. <3

Đ a r κ
December 28th, 2006, 04:53 AM
It twas edited, I got rid of the part explaining why they where chosen for the mission and I also gave a reason for why akatsuki brought him back. I hope it's better.



P.S. I purposely put twas.

Scarlet Weather
December 28th, 2006, 08:09 AM
Editz: Okay I see it now, and thanks...I think. o o; Your LSU won't be accepted if you wait much longer. < <;;

I had it ready a while back actually, but my Mom deleted it. I need to rewrite the whole thing, and it's a little past the part where my character would fit in at the moment, so I need to edit as well. Bear with me.

Shiney
December 28th, 2006, 10:48 AM
I really do hate to nag, but out of idle curiosity, did anyone have any thoughts on my roleplay idea? It's near the end of page three, but with bell's new plot and all, I cna see how it'd be easy to miss. X3

parallelzero
December 28th, 2006, 07:54 PM
So, me and Bell went over her idea, and combined it with my idea. However, the actual plot needs a bit added I think. =x

Bleach: The Prequel (Tentative title)

As the name clearly states, this RP will act as a sort of prequel to the popular series. It will take place approximately one year prior to the events of the anime and manga.

Overview

As a Shinigami of the Gotei 13, it is your duty to uphold order in both Soul Society and Earth. That much is set in stone. However, what if a single encounter ended up involving you in something more? It is your job to discover that much on your own.

While dealing with Hollows in the real world, or even just lying around here in Soul Society, you undertook a fateful encounter with a Shinigami whom of which was covered with a black cloak. The mysterious being muttered but one phrase to you: “Our time is here. We shall rise up and take back what is ours. United with Hollows, we are unstoppable.” The being disappeared soon after, and word of the threat was repeated throughout Seireitei. Word of your encounter also traveled, and you were soon summoned to Sokyoku Hill (otherwise known as the execution grounds; where a clash between Byakuya Kuchiki and Ichigo Kurosaki takes place approximately a year and a half later). When you arrived, you found yourself with a group of others, as well as Captains Aizen Sosuke and Hitsugaya Toushiro along with their Vice-Captains. Apparently, things were about to become interesting.

Mission Briefing: Welcome to Aizen Sosuke and Hitsugaya Toushiro’s investigation team. You have now been charged with the task of figuring out the connection between the recent increase in Hollow activity with the cloaked Shinigami you’ve encountered recently. You have all been chosen due to the fact that you have had an encounter with the Shinigami. Even though you are of but an inferior rank, you have been selected for this important mission. You should feel honored to have this privledge. Be warned, however, that your mission is not to be taken lightly. This could prove to be extremely dangerous, and may even cause your death.

Definitions

For those of you who aren’t 100% sure about the elements of the world of Bleach, we give you these helpful definitions courtesy of Wikipedia.

Soul Society: Soul Society consists of two portions, the cities where most people live, called Rukongai; and the walled castle where the spirit world nobility and the shinigami live, known as Seireitei Soul Society is ruled by a royal family, which is protected by a royal guard. Farther down, Central 46 Chambers serves as a supreme judiciary and legislative that is second only to the royal family. The shinigami enforce order in Soul Society as a sort of executive and military branch. All of the above, except the royal family and guard, reside in the Seireitei. The king and the royal family reside in a separate dimension in the very core of Soul Society, which can only be opened with a key, fittingly named the Royal Key. The king's practical role is unknown. The king seems to have no interest in politics and leaves the Central 46 Chambers to such affairs. According to Rangiku Matsumoto, no shinigami in the Gotei 13 has ever seen the king.

Seireitei: Seireitei is in the center of Soul Society, a circular shirō with four main entrances, each guarded by a Gate Guardian. The walls are made of deathstone, a material known to sap all spiritual and psychic energy when one portion is faced in a particular direction, similar to magnetic lodestones. The majority of the residents of Seireitei, nobility and shinigami alike, do not interact with the citizens of Rukongai. However, residents of Rukongai are allowed to apply for the shinigami academy, which is often the only escape from the poorest conditions of Rukongai, such as Renji and Rukia. Some Seireitei residents, such as ex-shinigami Yoruichi Shihouin and the Shiba clan, do maintain residences outside the castle.

Rukongai: Rukongai is divided into 320 districts (80 in North Rukongai, 80 in West Rukongai, etc.), each numbered in descending order on how far they are from the center; this results in the higher-numerated (and farther) districts decaying into slums. Thus, while District 1 is peaceful and lawful (and in many cases resembles the antiseptic lifestyle of early-Edo era Kyoto), District 80 is a hardscrabble, violent, crime-infested area that more depicts Heian era Kyoto. There is no indication that the shinigami or any other agencies patrol the streets of rukongai, and as a result, the citizenry are mainly responsible for their day-to-day welfare.

Gotei 13: The Gotei 13 has 13 divisions (hence the name). Although each of the division could have a specialization, there is too little information to reveal most of them. Notably, the 4th Division is the medic/supply division, the 11th Division is the battle division (specialization in swordsmanship), and the 12th Division is the research/scientific division. In the anime it seems that the 13th Division is in charge of controlling access to Earth, but this has not been stated clearly.

Shinigami: Shinigami are purely spiritual beings. As such they can only be seen by other spiritually aware entities, which excludes most humans. Shinigami naturally give off spiritual force (reiatsu), which varies greatly in magnitude with the strength of the shinigami. Travel between the human world and Soul Society is extremely limited and monitored, but some shinigami are stationed in the human world to carry out their duties, and therefore must often travel between the two. In addition, it is a crime for a shinigami to remain in the human world longer than a certain time limit. A shinigami's duties include leading Pluses (ghosts) to Soul Society in a practice called soul burial (konsō), and the cleansing of hollows (evil spirits).

Hollows: A hollow is a plus spirit that has lost its heart, and is driven to devour others (both living and dead) to fill that void. Starting out as a standard human ghost, the transformation into a hollow warps the ghost into a uniquely monstrous form, though all hollows wear a vaguely skeletal mask and have an obvious hole in their bodies. Any Plus spirit that is not guided to Soul Society by a shinigami may eventually descend into a hollow. The process normally takes months or years, as the Chain of Destiny slowly corrodes, reflecting the warping of the ghost's ties to the living world. However, the process may be accelerated under certain conditions (such as the attack of another hollow or through the use of certain spiritual powers).

Zanpakutou: Most zanpakutō in their sealed form look like katanas, but the shape and form varies by the person. Zanpakutō are not just weapons, but also sentient beings. They are a shinigami's partner in battle and while they can regenerate if broken, they cannot be replaced. As a shinigami gains power, the zanpakutō can change form by allowing the inner being to manifest itself to a greater degree in the outside world. The sword and the inner being are synonymous to each other. It has also been revealed that since zanpakutō are created with the shinigami, they also tend to have a personality based on their owners. Zanpakutō are used to fight hollows and other shinigami as well as to liberate or help pluses ascend to Soul Society.

Sign-up Form:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
History: or Seireitei.]
[B]Personality:
Zanpakuto: [Name/Ability/Appearance/Appearance of the entity your Zanpakuto represents.]
Kido (Demon Arts): [Only three per character, with the exclusion of shunpo (flash step). Since most of them haven’t been named yet, you are able to make up your own. However, it must follow this format (an example is given with it):
[I]Name: Shakkaho (Shot of Red Fire)
Effect: Casts a red ball of spiritual energy at target.
Incantation: Ye Lord, Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man, Inferno and pandemonium, The sea barrier surges, March on to the south! Demon Art, Shot of Red Fire!
Other:
Roleplay Sample: [I will ask you to post one if I am unsure of your abilites. Otherwise, feel free to ignore this.]

Loki
December 28th, 2006, 07:57 PM
I still think there's more definition then plot. xDD I think we can lose Soul Society, because if anyone who's watched even the first episode of Bleach should know what Soul Society is. o o; And if you haven't watched the first episode of Bleach, honestly, what are you doing in a Bleach RP? xDD

But nonetheless, you could add 'Division Seat' to the sign-up... I'm not sure if that would really matter though. < <;

Niwa
December 28th, 2006, 09:18 PM
Not trying to be negative, good plot and all, but if you are approached by the cloak figure and you dont tell anyone, since "Word of your encounter also traveled, and you were soon summoned to Sokyoku Hill" , would mean you could be accused of being a accomplice rather then being chosen as a part of the investigation team.

parallelzero
December 28th, 2006, 09:47 PM
Not trying to be negative, good plot and all, but if you are approached by the cloak figure and you dont tell anyone, since "Word of your encounter also traveled, and you were soon summoned to Sokyoku Hill" , would mean you could be accused of being a accomplice rather then being chosen as a part of the investigation team.

Not necessarily. If you ran off and notified a higher power right away, most suspicion would be non-existant. Even if the suspicion was there, it would be all the more reason to have you on the team to keep an eye on you, no?

Niwa
December 28th, 2006, 09:56 PM
Ah I see where your getting at, sorry about that, so far from what I am summing up in mind, everything appears to be in order that was the only issue I had.

Phanima
December 29th, 2006, 02:26 AM
This is unrelated to any of the posts before hand but it might be an issue for some of the RP's being discussed here. My main quarrel with RP's is the interaction between characters that aren't solely dialogues. In terms of fights and battles between characters, much like in Naruto and Pokemon RP's, is there a justified way of determining a winner in battles? Or is it better to let the people participating decide how the battle concludes?

I've utilised a random selection method in determining a winner between two characters whenever a fight or a large-scale confrontation occurs. I would randomly select one person in the battle to be the victor and PM both of the characters fighting to tell them who would win. Then the characters in the battle or fight will continue posting until the fight ends based on the random selection.
I've tried this method before on another RP forum and it didn't work too well. There appeared to be some allegations and queries on the bias of my selection since during the last RP I started. Whoever would lose the battle had to leave or quit the RP. So admittedly, the RP wasn't exactly popular.

I'm not sure how the RP-er's are like on this forum when it comes to character x character battles and RP elimination, so I was wondering if I could get some advice.

Loki
December 29th, 2006, 08:13 AM
Well, you'll notice that whenever a battle start in the RP's here, they never really...end. I've been in a battle before, and the opposing enemy told me that he would like to lose, and so that was that. o o; But in that case, he wasn't getting kicked out. < <;

I'd say that you might want to let the RPer's decide, tell them that- NO. YOU CAN'T HAVE A FUGGIN TIE. And that ONE of them has to be determined to die before this # of posts. Or else you'll pick for them. ^^

(Btw, Niwa, your avatar set is absolute WIN. I'm jealous. >O)

@ Niwa: Because I can, I'm going to answer too. < <; Anyway, Origin's right, but what we had intended was that our characters saw the figures, so we knew how to identify them. It's easier to find something you've seen before then something that's been described to you, right? ^^ Right! *shot*

Phanima
December 30th, 2006, 05:05 AM
Plot:

The National League is an organisation that operates through the holding of annual tournaments within each commercial region. Each tournament is sponsored by the National League and in return, each region advertises the NL during their respective ceremonies. Current commercialised regions include Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn. Each region has held a Pokemon League tournament from which a champion has been decided. Past champions of a Pokemon League tournament are commemorated through the induction into the Hall of Fame. This is where the greatest of trainers are acknowledged for their superior skill, strength, and wisdom. The Hall of Fame is forever, and is the main goal of many aspiring Pokemon Trainers.

The latest Pokemon League tournament has been announced by the NL board to be held upon the region known as Sky Island. The region is relatively unknown but is said to hold one of the grandest cities in the world. It sits several hundred kilometres north-east of the Orange Archipelago. Open ocean surrounds the island providing a clear path from all directions to and from the inner metropolis. The island’s main landmarks are its patented Pokemon League stadium and corresponding Hall of Fame.

Sky Island’s grand celebrations for the upcoming tournament have introduced daily festivals and supporting events. Shops, restaurants, hotels, and even hot springs, have all become available to the island’s guests during the tournament’s proceedings. The league date has been set and the support for the first official Pokemon League tournament is immense. Pokemon Trainers and spectators alike are gathering to Sky Island to witness the NL’s latest project.

Your Role:

Pokemon Trainers, who have shown progressive skills and potential in their field of expertise, have been chosen to compete within the tournament via special invitation. You and a number of other Pokemon Trainers have been invited to this tournament to participate and to exhibit your individual abilities. You will be participating within the events of the Sky Island’s Pokemon League tournament as an upcoming, humble, or self-devoted trainer with the hopes of becoming a champion, either as a professional or personal accomplishment.

Rules:

1. Pokemon battles will occur between characters in this RP. You and your opponent will decide who will win the battle and post accordingly. If neither of you can come to a decision for who will win or lose the battle, I will decide for you.

2. During Pokemon battles, if a winner or loser is not decided after 10 posts describing the battle, I will decide who will win and who will lose. (The 10 posts limit is counted for both you and your opponent together.)

3. There can be up to two Pokemon battles being posted at a time. However, each post describing the battle must contain a counter and the participating characters’ names. The counter will show how many posts have been made since the beginning of the battle. Each post you make starting, during, or ending a battle must be marked with a counter and the appropriate characters’ names. (The first post of describing the battle between Alter Ego and Bijou for example, will have “Counter: 1, Alter Ego x Bijou” at the end/beginning of the post. The second post of describing the battle between Alter Ego and Bijou for example, will have “Counter: 2, Bijou x Alter Ego” at the end/beginning of the post. This will help keep track of how long the battle will go on for.)

4. After a Pokemon battle, the winner will progress further into the tournament while the loser will be removed from the tournament. The character who loses may continue to post as a spectator or leave the RP entirely.

5. You cannot use legendary Pokemon. These include: Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres, Mewtwo, Mew, Raikou, Entei, Suicune, Lugia, Ho-oh, Celebi, Regirock, Regice, Registeel, Latias, Latios, Kyogre, Groudon, Rayquaza, Jirachi, and Deoxys.

6. You cannot use any fourth generation Pokemon from the Diamond/Pearl series.

7. You must have six Pokemon during the tournament and they cannot change.

8. There can be no relations to characters from the manga, anime, or other related Pokemon services. This is an OC (original character) RP with Pokemon concepts.

9. There may be excessive descriptions of violence during the RP. If that bothers you, then do not opt to join.

10. Spelling, grammar, and vocabulary are important. Make sure your posts are adequate so that they are legible and understandable.

11. All posts must be written in the third-person perspective.

12. Standard PC rules apply.

13. Read the rules and make sure you understand them. If you don’t like them then don’t join. That means you should understand that people will be removed from the RP due to the structure of the plot, and if that’s you, do not complain. You have been warned.

Sign-up Sheet:

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Physical Description:

Personality:

History:

Pokemon:

Other:

RP Sample:

Just a plot I ran through and posted. Any comments?

Scarlet Weather
December 31st, 2006, 11:38 AM
Um... nice plot, Toomi, says a lot with a few words. See you there.

Anyway, begin now I do with plot of my own, silly humans! (Note- this is based on a game I used to play with my friend when I was younger, so it will seem a bit odd, and it is. There are similarites to certain animes, but this is not intended to be an anime clone.)


Many years ago, the land of Aramani was a succesful country, and a world superpower. This, however, was before it was forced to fight a series of costly wars, and hire mercenaries in order to supplement its flagging armed forces. With the help of these mercenaries, the war was won- however, the country no longer had the money necessary to pay the soldiers they had hired. Angered, the mercenaries took over and stormed the treasury, only to find that it was empty. With nowhere to go and no possesions to speak of, most eventually decided to remain in Aramani and seek work there. This, however, became the country's undoing. With a rise in population and an empty treasury, they had no way of supporting themselves, and were forced to raise taxes. With the burden of such a heavy tax, many businesses folded and thousands became unemployed, and with no way to find work. That was when the crime wave began- within the space of a few years, Aramani went from economic paradise to dunghill. With no way to keep criminals in check, the government began to despair- that is, until the police arrived. Headed by a mercenary leader, the new police force promised to restore order to Aramani, of a sort, within a year. With the government's consent, they immediately began a campaign to bring in freelance workers, known as bounty hunters, in order to track down criminals. The bounty hunters were paid an amount equivalent to a criminal's "rank" which was based on a point system developed by the police's former mercenary chief. Additionally, bounty hunters had their own rank raised for every criminal they caught- the higher your rank, the more you were allowed to do in order to track down a criminal. The job only required a quick physical and a quick demonstration of talent, and became so popular that former criminals began looking for it. The job had one downside, however- the bounty hunters were forced to pay taxes. Within a few years, the government treasury had been replenished, the police force was the highest organization in the country next to the council of officials, and the police force relied on bounty hunters to take care of their dirty work.

However, a new threat to the land has appeared- a mysterious criminal calling himself DL has issued an ultimatum- either the country surrender itself to him, or he will plunge it into a war that will destroy it. It isn't an empty threat, either- besides being a suspected head of the criminal organization "Russian Roulette", he has captured the plans for the country's defense, and is threatening to sell them to another nation, Plunging Aramani into war once again. Angered and concerned, the country has offered an enormous bounty for the head of this man, and amnesty for any criminal who captures him. You are a bounty hunter, and have just received word of this- are you ready to take the challenge?

Info about Aramani:

Technology, government system, and general info: Aramani is a sort of city-country- it's basically a gigantic city with a few farms in between districts. The city is referred to simply as "the metropolis", while farm areas are referred to as "chow makers". There are several "crime district" areas, where the police never go- these are usually home to either lawbreakers or bounty hunters. Aramani is governed by both a president and a traditional "Council of Elders", both of which are elected by the people. These two branches must be in agreement in order for any law to be passed. Currently, the country is in the hands of the police force, however, as both the elders and president will listen to anything the chief says, effectively making him the most powerful man in Aramani. Aramani's technology is a bit strange- in terms of communications and transport, they are above Earth-Level, but due to the fact that gunpowder was never discovered, the weapons are a bit archaic. Common weapons include air guns, swords, and blunt objects and knives of various varieties. Due to the number of mercenaries hired during the war, Aramani has quite a few cultures within it.

Races: Being on a planet and universe far from Earth, there are a few alien species living in the world of our roleplay. Let's take a look.

Armania: The native people of Aramani, these people are basically humans with incredible Longevity- at fifty, for example, they would appear to be twenty. Unfortunately, they mature at the same rate as they age for the most part.

Garagana: From the land of Gargar in the north, these people are bizarre mixes of human and beast. Known for strength and healing ability, this race is usually the most unaccepted in normal society due to their highly-strung tempers and tribal religions and rituals.

Hiratana: From Hirata in the south, these people are human, but live in a society based around discipline and the martial arts. These people, along with the Armania, are the dominant members of society.

Chi: Let's talk about special powers! The basics- chi is life energy, which every living being is born with, and which grows stronger with age- the longer you live, the more life energy you gather, hence, the more available chi you have. Chi can be replenished simply by resting and eating, or by using an external means such as water from the sacred springs in Hirata, which replenishes it almost instantly. The use of chi cannot be classically taught, as each person's chi manifests itself differently, within one of several broad disciplines. The use of chi is based mostly on discipline- the more you can control your mind, the more you can do with your chi. Chi users usually learn control by meditating until they can summon their chi "aura"- an outward manifestation of their energy. When this is accomplished, they begin experimenting with its use until they can fully manifest it and use it as naturally as they would their body. The uses of individual chi techniques are limited only by the imagination and chi type of the user. Each chi class needs a necessary inborn trait to be within the user from birth in order for them to effectively use that type of chi. Now, on to the disciplines.

Materialization/Manipulation: This class of chi user is able to transform their chi into a solid object of some sort, then control it. This class of chi user usually has the least available energy, but the best control. If the object is broken, the person who materialized it temporarily loses all of their chi-based abilities, depending on the damage done this may last from anywhere between a week and a month. Armania are usually of this class, although Hiratana have been known to use it on rare occasions. For some reason, Garagana have never been able to use this ability, it is suspected that this is because they lack the necessary inborn imagination needed to make their aura into a complex solid object. The necessary trait for this discipline is "Imagination"- without a vivid imagination, the user cannot form a vivid enough image of their chi weapon or object to make it solid.

Regeneration/Reinforcement: These chi users cannot manipulate or launch chi outside of their body, but they can use it to accelerate their own healing process and augment their strength. Most Garagana are of this type, along with a fair number of Hiratana- however, no Armania are able to use this ability, supposedly because they lack the inborn focus needed to use this technique. The necessary trait of this ability is "Focus"- without it, the chi user would be unable to circulate their chi throughout their body effectively.

Barrier: These chi users materialize their chi as a barrier or wall of some sort- be it a stone barrier, a glowing shield, or a wall of flames. Barrier users can also use their barriers to attack by "Rushing" the enemy with them. All races share this form of chi use evenly. The necessary trait for a barrier user is "Determination". Without enough willpower and refusal to give in, their barrier would crumble. They are usually more stubborn then angry.

Destructive: DBZ, anyone? Destruction users can launch their chi as a powerful, destructive burst. This class generally has the most available chi, but the least control. This trait is evenly spread as well, but has fewer users then the Barrier class. Destructive chi requires two qualities-"Determination" and "Rage". "Rage", as it is called, is a name given to a berserk anger that all Destructive users are prone to. Though rare, occasionally a barrier-type chi user will become a destructive user if his anger escalates to the point where he cannot control it.

It should be noted that even though chi users have a specific personality trait that determines their use, that trait is not always life-dominating: Rather, it is simply the most dominant aspect of their personality. (Let me clarify- not all Materialization users spend their lives in a waking dream, but all materialization users are creative and somewhat imaginative.)

Explanations of criminal rank: This ranking system is used to determine the bounty of a criminal.

E Rank: 1-50 points. The basic pickpocket or Dine N' Dash crooks falls into this category. Not worth much.

D Rank: 50-500 points. Now we're moving up in the world. These crooks range from house burglars to low-rank mob people. Not exactly easy to get along with. Worth a fair amount of money.

C Rank: 500-1500 points: Whoah, now we're talkin'! These guys are definitely considered fairly dangerous, and include murderers, gang members, etc. Worth enough money to make a car payment.

B Rank: 1500-5000 points. These guys are definitely scary- if there's a serial killer or mass murderer in the world, they'll be B rank. Worth enough money to make a car and a house payment.

A Rank: 5000-10000: Even creepier then B-Rank, an A-Rank criminal is feared by anyone who knows him. Worth enough money to pay off your car or house for good.

S Rank: 10000-15000: Only S-Ranked bounty hunters are allowed to pursue these with government consent. All S-Ranked criminals can use chi formidably, and are considered a serious threat to society. If you can take one down and bring him in, he's worth enough money to buy your house, car, a fine night out, and a big screen TV, with enough left over to live off of for a month.

Star Rank: 15000+. Star Rank criminals- the most despicable beings on Earth. Only one is currently known- DL has been elevated to this status officially by police. The bounty for a star-ranker is upwards of six million credits.

And Finally, a blurb on phones:

Every bounty hunter has a cell phone issued to them which contains access to a file on all criminals with a bounty currently offered. The phone has text and picture capability, and rings when a criminal with a substantial bounty appears on the scene. The criminal file contains information including appearance, bounty offered, and a list of crimes, past and recent, as well as information on the weapons and tactics of the person mentioned.

It should also be noted that all bounty hunters are at least proficient in some form of martial art, or in the use of one or more types of weapons.

Rules:

1. No swearing. I can't stand it, and there are so many better words to choose from. If you must swear, say "He uttered an expletive", or "'@#$#' he yelled." The same goes for taking God's name in vain. You don't like it? Too bad, I run this rp. Oh, and the word "Hell" is Okay if used in the context of "What the hell?"... for now. If I decide to ban it later, woe betide all who say it.
2. Normal rp rules- this includes no god-modding, powerplaying, etc.
3. No "bunnying" without permission of the other user, and notifying me.
4. My word is law. I say what goes, not you. In other words, no mini-modding OR mini-running the rp. Unless your name happens to have the word "Moderator" beside it, and you have a specific reason for doing so.
5. I want at least six lines in your rp post unless you can say everything you need to in less, and proper grammar. If you can't do this, run the post through a spellcheck on a word processor or something. I want understandable posts.
6. If you have a concern, notify me. I want to hear you.
7. If you enter into a fight with another character, you must use proper "fighting etiquette". This means ending your post with an attack being launched instead of making it contact immediately, especially if said attack could do major damage if it contacts. Likewise, you are not allowed to avoid attacks indefinitely. You and the other player must decide on a winner over PM system before fifteen posts, or I will cut in and decided for you. If the fight is really cool though, I may allow you to extend it for a few extra if you want.
8. Character death is not permitted without my consent, unless the character is your own.
9. If your character dies but you want to rejoin, PM me a sign-up for another character and I'll see if I can fit you in.
10. Romance is fine, but no hentai please.
11. If you screw up in the roleplay too often, I will whack you with my patented ACC bone of justice and then kick you out for good. Your character will die an embarassing death.
12. I reserve the right to refuse you because I don't like you. (.0000000000001 percent chance of this occuring.)
13. And finally, you may manipulate NPCs as long as they aren't connected with the police station, or you aren't using them instead of your main character in the posts. If you do that, I want a new sign-up.

Sign-Up sheet.

Full name: (Can be from any Earth culture, cannot be an anime ripoff.)

Age: (As long as you're above sixteen or its Armanian equivalent, you should be Okay.)

Personality: (most important category- six lines, please, unless you can say everything you need to in less. No Mary Sues/Gary Stus. They will be shot on sight.)

Gender: (It's either one or the other people.)

Race: (No cliche Gargar unless you can do them well, please.)

Appearance: (Pics are fine, remember that your character is a bounty hunter, and is probably a bit eccentric. Do a good job of describing him.)

Rank: (E-S, and make it logical- S Class bounty hunters are obviously more experienced and older then E Class.)

Criminal Rank (If former criminal): (If your character was a crook at some point, give his rank here. Remember, his age has to be logical- he has to be old enough to commit the crimes he got his rank for, and then wait until he has either served his sentence or waited until the statute of limitations on his crime ran out. You should also give us a list of past offenses here.)

History: (Standard four lines, and feel free to keep part of your character's history under wraps and reveal it throughout the rp. If the rest of your sign-up looks good, you can skip this category altogether. Remember to update this section as your character's history is revealed, though.)

Chi Class: (Choose from the above.)

Abilities: (Give a sampling of what your character can do. If he has specific attacks, list them here and explain them in detail. Be logical- an E Class bounty hunter will probably not be able to use attacks of the same caliber as a B Class would. Feel free to add new attacks as the rp progresses, just give them some logic. Feel free to leave blank and update as needed if your sign-up is Okay without 'em.)

Rp Sample: (Show your stuff! I'll only ask for one if I really need it, but if you are weak in other areas, a good rp sample is a great way to change my mind.)

Wow... that took a while to type.

Rena
January 2nd, 2007, 08:57 AM
Ohayou 8D! I just thought of a super~duper Naruto plot - I haven't had a good Naruto role-play in such a longggg time~~! Oh, and I'm looking for a co-owner with a lot of knowledge about Naruto. Spoilers here.
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Naruto
The Reminiscent Past of Konohagakure ~~
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Weapons…

The reminiscent of the fight were these, lying around the calloused ground. They grazed the dirt and became a pilfer of rust, and dust. The sharp, pointed edges became blunt and now had no purpose to this world, waiting for their remains to be brought into the heavens, to live to the life they wanted to live. The wounded metal of then had the same fate. The once-onyx plates became ash-fallen and lost their polished shine that once roamed around the pouch of a shinobi. Old, young, kunoichi; anyone who was a ninja or a ninja in training would carry them. Most used them to injure the enemy, though most can endure the weapons. They had all kinds, throwing knives (often called kunais), throwing stars (called shuriken), fans, needles (called senbon), the species were huge.

Chakra…

This was the source of power most used to shinobi. They generated their chakra into hand seals to create jutsu’s, or techniques. Jutsu’s could be of any kind, elemental, illusionary, or martial-arts ones. These were called Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Genjutsu. Once in a lifetime, one was without the aspect of being able to use ninjutsu and genjutsu. Overall, lots seeked more.

Shinobi…Tools…Battles

It was the final fight for Uzumaki Naruto and friends. Location; the Valley of the End. Where the reminiscent of the fight between the Uchiha and the Shodaime, and two best friends. It was a threesome fight. Konoha versus Akatsuki versus Orochimaru. All were planning for the end. Konoha; a peaceful beginning. Akatsuki; the capture of the Kyuubi. Orochimaru; the destruction of Konoha. Currently on Konoha was; Haruno Sakura, Hyuuga Neji, Hyuuga Hinata, Nara Shikamaru, Akimichi Chouji, Yamanaka Ino, Rock Lee, Tenten, Inuzuka Kiba, Aburame Shino, Jiraiya, Tsunade, Hatake Kakashi, Yuuhi Kurenai, Maito Gai. And the last one;

Uzumaki Naruto, the cause of this terrible war.

On the wicked Orochimaru’s side, there was an army of sound ninjas, waiting to attack. Yakushi Kabuto, a traitor to Konoha and a medic-nin. Orochimaru himself, the snake sannin. And then there was the one who seeked power, the one who wanted to avenge his clans death. Who would take anything just to kill “him.” He defected from Konoha just to gain power.

He was Uchiha Sasuke.

On Akatsuki, the most notorious group. Known for all being S-class criminals, and wanting the 9 bijus to gain world domination. The group consisted of Uchiha Itachi; the one Sasuke wanted to kill and avenge. Hoshigake Kisame; one of the seven swordsman of the mist, known for killing many village daimyos. Zetsu; a plant with a cannibalistic nature. Byaku; an unknown member, but still, equally as strong. Tobi; a childish nature who got accepted out of luck. Hidan; a derogated one who is immortal. Kakuzu, the one wih five hearts. Deidara; the one with a pleasure for art. And the leader, Rei-sama; the one who started the Akatsuki in all.

With one dropping of a leaf, the battle began to start. It was gruesome, blood everywhere and clashing of kunai excruciated everything else. It was horrible. Many died, when there only came the three sannin, Uchiha Sasuke, Uzumaki Naruto, and the leader of Akatsuki. Then there became an argument, with words about traitors and avengers.

Uzumaki Naruto fought Uchiha Sasuke, the victor; Uzumaki.

Jiraiya fought Rei-sama, the victor; Rei-sama.

Tsunade fought Orochimaru, the victor; Tsunade but shortly, she died too.

It all came down to the match between Uzumaki Naruto and the leader of Akatsuki. Naruto had to unleash all nine tails of the Kyuubi no Yoko. While Rei-sama had to use the powers of the eight remaining bijus too try and defeat the blonde-vessel. Justice was served, and the hero and winner was Uzumaki Naruto. But he didn’t want this, and committed suicide by jabbing a kunai into his heart.
But what happened before that?

Many ask that question. What happened before the Kyuubi attacked Konoha, the legacy of the Sandaime Hokage before he was Hokage. Who was the generation before the new? What happened before Orochimaru’s betrayal, or even before he was born. Or before the organization known as Akatsuki came to life. Many philosophers and theorists ask these questions into Konoha. This was the time when the Shodaime Hokage ruled, in line with the Nidaime. And when Sarutobi had them as sensei’s. We are in 5 decades before the Kyuubi struck. What really happened.

This is the reminiscent of Konoha’s past.
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You are a newly made genin in the village of Konoha. You may be of a clan, or have none. But you are all genins that are promising and are about to get your teams. You are a ninja, and furthermore, a reminiscent of Konohagakure’s past. You will go through missions and the chuunin exams. Face drama, because you are a genin of the leaf.
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1. No, no, NO Uchihas, Hyuugas, Kaguyas, or Hakus.
2. Only clans like Akimichi, Nara, Inuzuka, Yamanaka, and all those.
3. No super~powerful players, we are just genin, newly made ones!
4. At least two paragraphs of four sentences in your posts, or eight sentences or more.
5. All forum rules are to be respected.
6. No reservations.
7. This is a high-class role-play.
8. Just be good..
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Name: Ease enough, try to keep it Japanese.
Age: 12 – 15, if you are fifteen, you failed the test 3 times.
Gender: Easy enough.
Important Items: Do you carry anything special?
Appearance: 4 – 5 lines minimum.
Personality: 4 – 5 lines minimum.
History: 5 – 6 lines minimum.
Bloodline Limit: Optional, don’t overpower the character.
Clan: What family is your character from?
Others: Anything else?
Form of Taijutsu: Are you adept of awkward at it?
Ninjutsu: Limited to three, no over-powered ones.
Genjutsu: Does it deceive the opponent, then its one, 2 maximum.

Loki
January 2nd, 2007, 11:02 AM
Mikuru-chan: NARUTO RP. >OOO Womg. I'm so confused. >.< First sentence is kind of "...what?" and then I don't get the point of the plot, and THEN I don't understand how Rei-sama could've fought Naruto if Jiraiya defeated him. xD But you did describe chakra and weapons and stuff, albeit in a sort of confusing way for me.

I don't remember much from Naruto, (God those fillers were just the end of it for me) but it sounds fun, all it needs is some direction, and the plot, some organizing and less complicated sentences. ^^; Because, not to sound high on my throne, but if I can't understand it, there's gotta be a few others who're going to stand there like, "...What is this even about?"

But you may want to specify what you want with the clans. Do you want us to be apart of minor clans if we are apart of a clan at all? ^^ *is something I'm personally wondering*

Anywho: WOMG A 100% JELLYBEANS RP. 8OOO I remember when you used to RP as Jellybeans. *seems like so long ago, even though it was probably only like, a month.*

Đ a r κ
January 2nd, 2007, 11:45 AM
@Mikuru-chan: I really like your plot but I agree with Bijou word for word.

I am thinking of making a plot based on New X men:academy X, but I fear that it would be too much like the marvel RP. What do you all think because I don't want to make an RP that would almost be the same as another RP?

Rena
January 2nd, 2007, 11:52 AM
Bijou; it's what you get when you have had too much coffee and played to much Maple Story. Anyways, I edited some things, like the victor of the Jiraiya and Rei-sama fight. But yes, you can be parts of minor clans, or even custom clans, or no clan. The plot is just basically the adventures of the genins, like the missions, chuunin exams, and all that jazz. If you think those sentences are confusing, wait till you see how I role-play on another site, the number of difficult words are horrible x3.

-- It was about 5 months ago I role-played as Jellybeans xD --

The birds were singing in a melodic pitch, it was digusting, they seemed to be happy, unaware of the danger before their eyes! The calloused path seemed to prod the layer between Kleven's elastic adidas, and her flesh. She didn't notice, as she was blankily walking to her venue, the proffessor who was supposedly named Willow. There was an ample cobblestone building overlooking the gaze of Kleven's aquamarine eyes.

She took a vast breath, she wasn't apt to do this, a cerulean cascading tear came from her, as it fell to the ground in brooding silence around her. She stopped. Kleven wasn't just ready to drop it, she had a notion, or as she called it, a 'nightmare' haunting her.

She came to nowhere, it was a 'dead end', she stood obverse to the sterling, aluminum building, it was plaited with steel, with a pygmy amount of windows, lined in scanty rows, one by one. The door, the door was a different story, it seemed like a small door that could easily be infiltrated, but Kleven's prediction was wrong, the door was stuck tight, it seemed like a security door but the girl surprisingly opened it revealing a utopia of taintness.

There was a room where the clocks had stopped, and with them, had time as well. There were three chairs and a fountain. How we got there I still don't know, but at this point I was used to the uncertainty and fancied I shouldn't percieve any of this as normal, or at least an acceptable definition of normal. While I was in this room, I noticed each chair was exactly the same; each had three identical legs and one that was very different. Most people wouldn't have noticed this because this odd leg was upside down, and since chair legs don't talk back or look at you, more than likely it goes unnoticed by ordinary people because we tend to only acknowledge what will acknowledge us back.

As for the fountain, it just seemed to float over to the right side of the room. By floating, I do mean that it looked like it was lost out in space with no regard for gravity or any other laws of physics. This interested me, so I skipped over to it and held my hand out. Yet, I could not feel the water; though through it I could see it quite clearly.

I was greeted by a woman, she looked mature, with a a teal suit that was perfectly sanitary. I spoke up "Excuse, I'm here to see, Proffessor Willow, Kleven Farthoba?" I said, my legs were shaking as she replied, "Oh yes, just go up those stairs!" she said with a jolt of quirkyness as she pointed to the stairs.

I went up the stairs, every step was a new journey, as I walked to reach my destiny. It seemed forever as I got up to the floor, percieving to an attractive women, I spoke up "There's no need for any explaining, Professor, I've already decided on a Chikorita." she bared to mention the details.

Oh yesh, that is me.

Loki
January 2nd, 2007, 12:16 PM
Blankily? xDD And I get the plot now, but you might want to mention that somewhere, just for clarification for the uncool people who don't read this thread?

*Womg, too many weird sentence structures. *Only gets like, two sentences in* But I'm a loser like that.*

Scarlet Weather
January 2nd, 2007, 04:38 PM
This is just a bit of utter randomness before I say something on topic, but... I've been thinking about various things today, including speculating about what shippings people would come up with if my life was an anime complete with fanbase. Anyway, when I popped into this thread to see if anyone had even commented on my plot, which I'm going to assume no one did because Mikuru's plot kicked its sorry butt, I noticed that Toomi's "Battle Counter" thing looked like the traditional way shipping pairings are arranged, and it started me thinking about what that shipping would be called. In the end, the best I could come up with was "E-Shipping" or "Disscussionshipping". So yeah, I thought I'd share that little bit of weirdness with you all.

Now, to say something on topic-

Mikuru-Chan: Lyk, ZOMG UR PLOT ROCKS MEH SOCKS ON TEH TEFLON BLOCKS!!1!1! *Ahem* I mean, excellent plot, and all that. I don't see why you needed to write and ending for the series as part of the plot, but Ok. I'll be there with my best character, don't doubt it.

Korinku: If it is the same as another existing plot, don't bother. If you still want to make it, try tweaking it a bit.

Phanima
January 2nd, 2007, 05:31 PM
@Art_Critic_Cubone: First off, thanks for reviewing my synopsis ;). Following that, your RP sounds well-adjusted but when I first started reading, it was a bit much to take in all at once. However, the concept and makeup of the plot was pretty solid and the rules are great. Not sure if you're still dedicated to the plot anymore but I'd suggest posting it really soon or a little bit after Korinku's, Mikurur's, or any other recently made RP's. Ranking system, objectives, sign-up sheet, and basic terminologies appear fine as well. (First time reviewing, not sure if that helps :P.)

@Mikuru-chan: The plot is kind of confusion near the beginning, with the launching straight into the final confrontation, but the objective and explanations are good and understandable. The whole concept is actually really interesting. Setup and rulings seem fine as well.

I, myself, have kinda altered my Pokemon RP...a lot. The battle system is similar to that of my previous one but I thought it'd be too complicated to understand. So I developed another strategy except this one seems complex as well. I'm not sure how people will take it, and there are a lot of rules, so that might scare away some of the more...not as vibrant RP-ers, but hopefully it'll make sense.

Plot:

The National League is an organisation that operates through the holding of annual tournaments within each commercial region. Each tournament is sponsored by the National League and in return, each region advertises the NL during their respective ceremonies. Current commercialised regions include Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn. Each region has held a Pokemon League tournament from which a champion has been decided. Past champions of a Pokemon League tournament are commemorated through the induction into the Hall of Fame. This is where the greatest of trainers are acknowledged for their superior skill, strength, and wisdom. The Hall of Fame is forever, and is the main goal of many aspiring Pokemon Trainers.

The latest Pokemon League tournament has been announced by the NL board to be held upon the region known as Sky Island. The region is relatively unknown but is said to hold one of the grandest cities in the world. It sits several hundred kilometres north-east of the Orange Archipelago. Open ocean surrounds the island providing a clear path from all directions to and from the inner metropolis. The island’s main landmarks are its patented Pokemon League stadium and corresponding Hall of Fame.

Sky Island’s grand celebrations for the upcoming tournament have introduced daily festivals and supporting events. Shops, restaurants, hotels, and even hot springs, have all become available to the island’s guests during the tournament’s proceedings. The league date has been set and the support for the first official Pokemon League tournament is immense. Pokemon Trainers and spectators alike are gathering to Sky Island to witness the NL’s latest project.

Your Role:

Pokemon Trainers, who have shown progressive skills and potential in their field of expertise, have been chosen to compete within the tournament via special invitation. You and a number of other Pokemon Trainers have been invited to this tournament to participate and to exhibit your individual abilities. You will be participating within the events of the Sky Island’s Pokemon League tournament as an upcoming, humble, or self-devoted trainer with the hopes of becoming a champion, either as a professional or personal accomplishment.

Rules:

1. Pokemon battles will occur between characters in this RP. You and your opponent will decide who will win the battle and post accordingly (PM each other, send e-mails, etc. but do not inform any other participating members of this RP of your decision, except for me. The other members can find out who is the winner once the battle has been posted.). If neither of you can come to a decision for who will win or lose the battle, I will decide for you.

2. If Pokemon battles are taking too long then I will inform you and your opponent to quickly end the battle.

3. There can only be one Pokemon battle being posted at a time. Other characters can become spectators for the match or continue on other business outside the tournament.

4. Each Pokemon will have an individual stamina counter for certain manoeuvres used in battles (only in the tournament, outside battles don’t require one). Each time you post your Pokemon successfully hitting your opponent’s Pokemon with an attack or dodging one, your Pokemon’s stamina counter decreases (kind of like a Pokemon’s HP). When a Pokemon’s counter reaches 0, the Pokemon is knocked out or faints. Each Pokemon has a stamina counter beginning with 10 points. Whenever you post your Pokemon successfully hitting your opponent’s Pokemon, your Pokemon’s stamina counter will decrease by 2 points. Each time you post your Pokemon successfully dodging (also includes defending with moves like Protect, etc.) you opponent’s attack, your Pokemon’s stamina counter will decrease by 3 points. You must post the following line during each Pokemon battle for each Pokemon you are using: (Put the Pokemon’s name here)’s Stamina: 10. You must adjust the value of the counter during your next post.

5. Your Pokemon can use moves that it can learn from levelling, taught using TM/HM’s, taught using a tutor, and taught as an egg. If the moves for your Pokemon are out of order or unreasonable, I will ask you to edit them.

6. You cannot use legendary Pokemon. These include: Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres, Mewtwo, Mew, Raikou, Entei, Suicune, Lugia, Ho-oh, Celebi, Regirock, Regice, Registeel, Latias, Latios, Kyogre, Groudon, Rayquaza, Jirachi, Deoxys, Yuxie, Emurit, Agnome, Dialga, Palkia, Heatran, Regigigas, Giratina, Crescelia, Phione, Manaphy, Darkrai, Sheimi, and Arseus.

7. You can use fourth generation Pokemon from the Diamond/Pearl series but you must provide a link or source to the details of the Pokemon. (Both Wikipedia and Serebii.net are common sources.)

8. You must have six Pokemon during the tournament and they cannot change.

9. There can be no relations to characters from the manga, anime, or other related Pokemon services. This is an OC (original character) RP with Pokemon concepts.

10. Spelling, grammar, and vocabulary are important. Make sure your posts are adequate so that they are legible and understandable.

11. Standard PC rules apply.

12. Read the rules and make sure you understand them. If you don’t like them then don’t join. That means you should understand that people will be removed from the RP due to the structure of the plot, and if that’s you, do not complain. If any of the above rules are broken beyond reasoning, the offender will be immediately removed from the RP. You have been warned. (Yes, I know there are a lot of rules. Don’t understand something? Just ask. I can’t stand those who assume they know what’s going on and post something completely different from the plot.)

Scarlet Weather
January 3rd, 2007, 12:53 PM
Hmm...

Toomi: Thanks for the review on my plot, I am going to create it and will update soon with a few more bits of information. As for your plot, I personally think that your original system was better for battles- it gives the roleplayers a chance to really show their stuff, and not worry about "Oh, I'm down to X stamina, I can't do that now." Really, it's a little less then logical, since a Pokemon can take hits without its stamina going down but it has to launch them. Theoretically, the winner would be the weaker Pokemon in that case. A more logical system would be your original one of forcing the other two roleplayers to come to an agreement or making the choice yourself. It isn't logical to state that launching an attack does more damage then receiving one anyway.

Đ a r κ
January 3rd, 2007, 05:02 PM
New X men, Academy X
LITTLE X men stand tall

One hundred years ago, there was a battle. This battle was for the possession of a mystical stone. This stone could take out the whole human raise if in the wrong hands. Who where the ones in this battle you ask? It was the mutants against the humans. Yes way back then, mutants still lived but they where always in hiding so they where very rarely seen. After people began to see these mutants they became scared and sought to get rid of every single one of them. The humans left to find an ancient stone which was, by the humans called the Ending stone. The mutants called this stone, the choice stone for if you have this stone, you have a very big choice to make. After hearing about the humans and them going to find this stone, the mutants fallowed them and sought to get rid of the humans after they found the stone and after five months of looking, they finally found the stone on top of a five story mountain. As the battle began, the mutants had already been winning. After a good five hours, a spirit appeared out of the blue. The spirit spoke to the humans and the mutants telling them that this stone should not be used for such a horrid purpose. After talking the spirit took the stone, brain washed everyone and flew away to find a new place to hide the stone.

Now, humans and mutant are getting along very well except for a couple of bad mutants every now and then but there is always some one that is different. The mutants that still cant control their powers completely still go to Xavier's school for gifted kids. But, what the professor doesn't know is that there is a small, but very evil group forming who want possession of the Choice stone that way they can destroy all of th humans and all of the fellow mutants who appose them. After sending Cyclopes, Jean, Colossus, Ice man, Kittie, Rouge, Wolverine, Storm and, Beast to stop this team of evil. Once the X men team found the evil group, they found out that the leader was Selene, a very powerful villain seeing that she has immortality and can drain life forces. Selene and her team, Shinobi shaw, Sauron, Multiple man, Jade dragon, and Pyro battled with this X team and sadly killed every one of them. Professor Xavier sensed this outcome and began a memorial for them. After a year, Selene and her team prevailed in finding the Choice stone. But instead of destroying all of the humans, she gave them a choice, they could either disobey her and be destroyed or obey her and live.

Before anyone could replie to Selene, professor Xavier spoke to every one telekinetic telling them to just accept her offer and that the X men will take her down. The humans agreed to Xavier's plan and accepted Selene's offer. Since there where no more mutants that where a level higher than five, Xavier had to get the best people he could but he had to be sure that he was making the right choice with who he chose. So he observed the students telepathically and kept track of their movements and how well they do and after he finds the right mutants he will send them to go and bring down Selene and her team. But in order to do that, they must have the Choice stone for that is the only way to bring her down. Eventhough she is immortal, the power of the stone can take even her down.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Power:

So, what do you think? Not sure if the title is so good though.

Green
January 3rd, 2007, 05:23 PM
@Korinku- Sorry, I'm not much of an X-men fan.. ^^;

I thought up an idea for a RP earlier today. I'm not really one for making RP threads but it seemed like a good idea. But seeing as how this is my first time making one, I need some input before posting it.

Dieing Memories: A Bleeding Heart


A long time ago, in the feudal era of Japan samurai leaders called daimyo lead armies of samurai warriors and Pokemon into battle. Their goal was to conquer all the other samurai armies, and eventually Japan. The fighting was ruthless, and thousands of men and Pokemon died. After years upon years of fighting, one ruler won over the rest and Japan went into a time of peace. But all was not calm. Even though the other daimyo and samurai had been conquered, one force had not. Clans of ninja’s, or stealth fighters, still infested the mountains of Japan. The ninja’s did not believe in the universal force of Japan, or the newly appointed Shogun, and so they started to attack the Shogun. The Shogun would not stand for this, and so he began to exterminate the ninja clans. Almost all were slain except for a few elusive clans. By this time most of Japan had moved on, and started a new period in Japanese history. Some of the ninja in one of these last clans also believed in this new period, so they defected from the clan of ninja’s and went to the Shogun. The defected ninja told the Shogun the secrets and where-a-bouts of one of the most powerful ninja clans, and so the Shogun sent endless armies of Samurai and Pokemon to the ninja village, and tried to get rid of the ninja forever. The attack caught the village off-guard and almost killed all of its inhabitants. Only seven young ninja were able to escape. Now, they must use their new skills and try to protect themselves and slay the Shogun who destroyed their village.

You take the role of a young ninja, who has just recently completed their training. You and six other young ninja are the sole remaining survivors of the once mighty ninja clan. You must travel through the land with your Pokemon, and try to learn ways of entering the Shogun’s palace and you must figure a way to defeat him. The palace is filled with traps and guards, so you must be careful.

Rules:

1. Follow other RP rules

2. No 4th Gen. Pokemon that haven’t been confirmed (such as Mumajii). Only ones that have English translation

3. Fill out the form! It’s there for a reason.

4. A set number of players have been laid down. It is simply to hard to keep up with lots of different RPers.

5. You must post at least once a week or PM me telling me you’ll be away. If you don’t you’ll be dropped from the RP.



Members:

1. Green
2. Open
3. Open
4. Open
5. Open
6. Open
7. Open

Form:


Name: (First and Last)

Gender:

Age: (Between 14 and 22)

Body Structure: (How your body is built)

Physical Appearance: (How you look physically [eye color, hair color, etc…])

Clothes: (What clothes you’re wearing, natural outfit and ninja outfit)

History: (No cliché’s, and put some detail into it)

Pokemon: (You must have between 2 and 4)

Weapon of choice: (Shuriken, katana’s, etc...)

RP Sample: (Easy enough)


Well, it seemed better in my head

Loki
January 3rd, 2007, 06:59 PM
Korinku: I'm not an X-men fan either, I haven't a single clue what your talking about. xD I know GodofPH was an X-men fan, though, I don't think I know anyone else who likes the series.

Green: Well, I know I've been lame lately and not fully reviewing and reading plots, but I did catch that you spelled 'Dying' as 'Dieing'. xD I don't think that's correct, although I could be wrong if I'm being ignorant of the different spellings of words. *I R Retard.* But it seems kind of fast and thrown together when I skimmed it. The ninja thing just kinda pops out of nowhere like a jack-in-the-box (God those make me jump sky high) but I'm not sure how you could fix that. You might give them a mini-introduction or something. Or maybe it's just me. >.<

Green
January 4th, 2007, 06:17 AM
I don't know, I typed it up in Word and it didn't spell check it so.. *shrugs*. Yeah, it was pretty much thrown together, I was using our laptop and I was being rushed so I had to skimp on the end. I think I'll just not post it, at least for a while until I can fix it. But thank you for reviewing it ^.^

Loki
January 4th, 2007, 08:44 AM
BTW, Mikuru-chan, on your Naruto Plot, you never mentioned how you'd run the teams. Like, in my Naruto RP, the teams were all played by one person, (because they were all from different villages) but is the team going to be like, combinations of the RPer's who are participating?

Rena
January 4th, 2007, 10:30 AM
Bijou-chan;; Well, I was planning on having them on the same teams, and someone else and I could RP the jounins, who are just pawns [Muhaha] This is similar to a Naruto RP at a different forum, they had pawn jounins, and RP-ers on the same teams, the number of people is going to be based off a complex formula [Not really, just estimating] So far, I've only seen two good Naruto RP's; yours and the one I'm talking about. ^^

Scarlet Weather
January 6th, 2007, 09:57 AM
Eheh.... ACC loves pawn jounin. I can play chess and sacrifice them!

Char: But you've never won a game!

ACC: So? I only lose 'cause I'm cursed...

Char: Uh-huh. Whatever.

Anyway, moving on. I'm wondering about my roleplay plot- I drew some inspiration for a force of bounty hunters being the ones who bring in most criminals from Black Cat, but I didn't really clone too much else. However, I'm wondering whether or not I should give characters more choices- like, should I allow them to be something besides bounty hunters, pursuing DL for their own reasons?

xxxSakura
January 8th, 2007, 08:12 AM
Last night, while I running down with a high fever {Sunday night, it started since Saturday night}, I went online and read a Naruto cross Bleach fanfiction. I'm a huge Bleach faniac [new word created by me! Fan + maniac!] as many people in the other Pokemon forum, PE2K, will know, and I was so engrossed in reading that fanfiction. I was supposed to be sleeping by 11 p.m., but I watched Bleach till 4 a.m. + and I have school in the morning like 7 a.m. [Don't worry, I'm a high-metabolic, nocturnal lass, I stayed up till 9.45 a.m. once] But I was coughing so badly that I couldn't go to school. Enough about me, I'll shut up on this.

So I spent my whole night thinking about a RP that involves Bleach and Naruto [see, so hardworking, right? My friend will say, 'I puke!']. So I came up with something I have in mind, but I'm not too sure about it, so I came here to ask for opinions on developing the plot.

Let's see... Araa~ This takes place after Aizen's rebellion, take note. Well, my idea is to start off with an astonishing number of Hollows invading the world of Naruto {I feel like saying the City of Townsville >.>}, and the Shinigami were alerted of this. Since the numbers were really too big, the vice-captains and captains were ordered to attend to it immediately. And meanwhile, Aizen is thinking of forming an "alliance" with the Akatsuki {with him as the contorl, duh}, and he sends different Arrancar there as well.

After that, I have no idea how it could be developed. Perhaps Naruto-tachi will be brought to Soul Society? I mean, the "main" side of this story is leaning on Bleach. Opinions and critisicm are accepted ^^;

Loki
January 8th, 2007, 03:40 PM
The only issue I have with the idea is my own personal idea. :/

I hate Naruto. >.< Okay, to prevent getting my head ripped off by the fanatics (Which is already a word, but Faniac's is okay. xD) I harbor a very passionate dislike for him which rivals my deep hatred for Ash.

That's probably the only, and biggest reason I wouldn't join. And, I'm also not really one who enjoys having canon character's around unless I'm super desperate for that type of RP. Canon character's are just hard for some people to RP, and when they don't RP them right I just...I just... *MROW!* < <;; But the idea itself is interesting, though Akatsuki working for Aizen seems kind of...far-fetched? ^^;

xxxSakura
January 9th, 2007, 04:29 AM
The only issue I have with the idea is my own personal idea. :/

I hate Naruto. >.< Okay, to prevent getting my head ripped off by the fanatics (Which is already a word, but Faniac's is okay. xD) I harbor a very passionate dislike for him which rivals my deep hatred for Ash.

That's probably the only, and biggest reason I wouldn't join. And, I'm also not really one who enjoys having canon character's around unless I'm super desperate for that type of RP. Canon character's are just hard for some people to RP, and when they don't RP them right I just...I just... *MROW!* < <;; But the idea itself is interesting, though Akatsuki working for Aizen seems kind of...far-fetched? ^^;

*gasps* Bell hates Ash & Naruto? [Didn't you start a Naruto roleplay earlier on? xDD;;] Hmm, I am actually thinking of non-canon characters, but I haven't developed a bit on that as well. Perhaps... Those that sign up as Shinigami will help to introduce the shinobi the world of BLEACH ^^ I'm trying to make this such as there won't be any use of canon characters, perhaps one or two, but that should be all. {Captain/Chuunin senseis}

OK, I think I should be able to develop this xDD Let's see, Hollows attacking the villages, and those who signed up as Naruto players tried to resist them. Then those who signed up as Bleach players came to their world to help them, and there goes nothing! Poof~

Let's see... Araa~ This takes place after Aizen's rebellion, take note. Well, my idea is to start off with an astonishing number of Hollows invading the world of Naruto {I feel like saying the City of Townsville >.>}, and the Shinigami were alerted of this. The players {Naruto part} tried to resist them, and were able to take down some, but more kept coming.

Since the numbers were really too big, the captains were ordered to attend to it immediately. Along with them they brought each 3 Shinigami {Bleach players} to the world. And meanwhile, Aizen is thinking of forming an "alliance" with the Akatsuki {with him as the control, duh}, and he sends different Arrancar there as well. How will the Akatsuki react? Will they allow themselves to be controlled?

Đ a r κ
January 13th, 2007, 11:29 AM
BATTLE FOR HAGENE

Every ten years there is a competition. This competition has gained a bad reputation over the years and has even been called an annihilation of ninjas. This battle brings together a select number of ninja from every country to take place in a competition that will decide who will become Hagene. The Hagene is a ninja who has defeated ninja from all over the world and is treated like the Hokage or mostly like the co-Hokage. So far there has only been eight Hagene out of nine competitions. One hundred years ago, the Hagene was a boy named Mika, from Konoha. Ninety years ago the Hagene was a girl named Shina, from the lightning village. Eighty years ago the Hagene was a boy named Banuka, from Konoha. Seven years ago the Hagene was a girl named Yumanu from the village of mist. The others where Shinya from the sound village, Hinora from the sand village, Rinkura from the grass village, Hangura from the rock village, and Unaka from the lightning village. In the ninth competition, all of the ninja that competed had died. Now it has been ten years and is the start of the tenth competition, there will sadly and most likely be deaths and serious injuries. You are a ninja that has been asked to take place in this competition and you have accepted the offer and will either be leaving for Konoha (If you are from another country) or will be going to the stadium (If you are from Konoha).

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Name: (No Hyuuga's, Uchiha's, Uzumaki's, etc.)
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Bloodline: (Optional)
Fighting style:
Summon: (Optional)

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I am still trying to think of stuff to make the plot longer.

Loki
January 13th, 2007, 11:39 AM
I mean, I hate the character Naruto. xD

Anyway

@Korinku: I don't think you need all the names of the Hagene in there. :/ Unless it plays an important part, it doesn't really count as apart of the plot. You could try describing why the Hagene exist, or what the competition includes, or why the shinobi from the 10th competition all died? And Korinku, don't you think it'd be THAT much cooler if you incorporated all your little Naruto plots into one big plot?

xxxSakura
January 14th, 2007, 01:09 AM
*gasps* oh, OK. I kinda hate Naruto as well, but not very hate. Just a dislike for him, that's all. So anyway, I think I might be able to gather the whole idea and everything should be able to come together...

A few months after Aizen's rebellion, reports of astonishing numbers of Hollows invading the human world keep flodding in. Then, an unusual report of large Hollows invading the world of Naruto {I feel like saying the City of Townsville >.>} alerted the Shinigami. The ninjas {Naruto players} tried to resist them, and were able to take down some, but more kept coming.

Some of the skilled Shinigami {Bleach players} were ordered to go to Naruto's world immediately and purify these Hollows. And meanwhile, Aizen is thinking of forming an "alliance" with the Akatsuki {with him as the control, duh}, and he sends different Arrancar there as well. How will the Akatsuki react? Will they allow themselves to be controlled?

After the Shinigami manage to send the Hollows to SS with the help from the ninjas, the Arrancar started coming. Some of the ninjas spotted a fight between two Arrancar and two members of the Akatsuki [This will just be a slight glimpse, not the whole fight, so people like Bell won't get mad, lmao]. They were brought back to SS for questioning, and will soon learn more about the Arrancar. And, well, the extra tip is that they get to stay in the real world! They won't meet Ichigo and his family, whom the summer house belongs to, though.

I'm trying to modify some of the parts ;_____;

Alter Ego
January 14th, 2007, 02:15 AM
And I...live? Whoa, it's been a while since I posted here, hasn't it? Kind of hard to catch up again...=_=

So yeah, I'll have something useful to say once I've actually read through some of these plots properly, but be warned: I probably won't have much to comment on with RPs directly connected to existing animes (Except for the pokémon world and possibly Naruto) because I'm not confident enough with my knowledge about them. Just as an outsider's note, though, I find explanations along the lines of "This is a combination of anime X and anime Y" kind of off-putting, partly because it's going by the assumption that anyone reading knows precisely what these animes are about and partly because it leaves me wondering whether there's any original content to be found. What ever happened to good old fashioned original, self-made settings? -.-

Anyway, that's enough space wasting in one go. Hopefully my next post will be more helpful. ^^

xxxSakura
January 14th, 2007, 04:17 AM
And I...live? Whoa, it's been a while since I posted here, hasn't it? Kind of hard to catch up again...=_=

So yeah, I'll have something useful to say once I've actually read through some of these plots properly, but be warned: I probably won't have much to comment on with RPs directly connected to existing animes (Except for the pokémon world and possibly Naruto) because I'm not confident enough with my knowledge about them. Just as an outsider's note, though, I find explanations along the lines of "This is a combination of anime X and anime Y" kind of off-putting, partly because it's going by the assumption that anyone reading knows precisely what these animes are about and partly because it leaves me wondering whether there's any original content to be found. What ever happened to good old fashioned original, self-made settings? -.-

Anyway, that's enough space wasting in one go. Hopefully my next post will be more helpful. ^^
Have you read it properly? I wasn't following the real plot, you know. In fact, most people who joins an anime RP, say, Naruto RP, knows what the heck is going on with all the ninjas and jutsu.

Alter Ego
January 14th, 2007, 04:33 AM
Have you read it properly? I wasn't following the real plot, you know. In fact, most people who joins an anime RP, say, Naruto RP, knows what the heck is going on with all the ninjas and jutsu.

EDITNESS: In retrospect, I think this whole thing came off as overly defensive, so I cut that bit out. I don't know Bleach, and quite frankly I haven't been able to locate the whole of your plot as it seems to be spread out in tattered quotes and whatnot across the thread. o.O Anyway, of course you aren't following the original plot (It wouldn't be much of an RP if you already knew precisely what was going to happen, would it?) What I'm saying is that it's a bad idea to introduce a plot with "Okay, this is a combination of two animes" because there are soooo many clueless N00B plots that start like that and trust me, you don't want to be lumped with them. How about you organize it all into a single, properly presented plot instead of an ordinary paragraph among so many others? It's really hard to comment on something if you can't tell where it begins and ends or even if it's all there, and I really can't offer much advice beyond aesthetics since it's such an anime insider thing. :O

Đ a r κ
January 14th, 2007, 09:01 AM
I was just thinking about something good to put in my plot which would make the people who became Hagene akatsuki members but I don't know the name of every single one of them. Does anyone know every akatsuki member's name?

Loki
January 14th, 2007, 09:09 AM
Deidara, Hidan, Itachi, Kisame, Tobi, Kakuzu, Zetsu.

There are still two member's yet unnamed. ^^ Hope that helps out.

Đ a r κ
January 14th, 2007, 09:56 AM
Eh I think I will hold back on the naruto RP's for a while. Besides I haven't been getting any inspirations for ideas.

EDIT: Actually, I just remembered a couple ideas that I was thinking about last week.

Dark Ninja

Long ago there were ninja who where shunned by all of the countries. They could do things that no other ninja would ever think possible such as being able to cause death by a single touch, or even stun someone just by a look in their eyes. The countries actually tried to get rid of these ninja but when the countries sent hundreds of their own ninja, they where all killed by only five of these strange people who called themselves "Dark Ninja" but to the other countries, they where demons. Before the Dark Ninja could cause any more trouble, the countries made a treaty with the Dark Ninja that said "So that everyone can be happy, we have come to a decision that we will allow you ninja to have your own country but you can not participate in anything that includes the five other countries." The Dark Ninja accepted this treaty, left the other countries alone, and made their own country that would not be known to anyone. So the Dark Ninja made their own country and taught students. It was like any other country. Then ten years later one ninja from every country (Except the Dark country) grouped together and formed a team called the "Curse Markers". They still remembered what the Dark ninja caused and wanted them to be gone for good so they went to each country and cursed marked most of that country's ninja. The ten countries (Leaf, Sound, Sand, Wave, Grass, Rock, Lightning, Rain, water fall, Cloud, and Mist) where furious and thought that it was the Dark ninja so they sent one million ninja to the Dark country to make a sneak attack. This time they where successful and ridded the world of the Dark Ninja...or did they? The ten other countries celebrated but they didn't know that some kids from the Dark ninja had escaped and seeked revenge, for they thought that the other ten countries had made that treaty just to trick them. Now, the still living Dark Ninja kinds have taken place in the ten country's schools. But what everyone doesn't know is that all of this was caused by the curse markers who are still loose in each village.

Break it down: The Dark Ninja kids want revenge on the five countries (Leaf, Wave, Sand, Rock, Sound, Rain, waterfall, Grass, Mist, and Lightning) because they believe that they where set up but a group of people called the Curse Markers had cursed people from the other countries to make it look like it was the Dark Ninja and thus the five countries sent a million ninja to defeat the Dark Ninja. They killed almost all of them except for some kid ninja (About twenty) who are now in the five country's schools trying to get revenge although they cant do the dangerous things that the older Dark ninja could do. the Curse Markers are still alive and still keep a look out for Dark Ninja, for example the twenty dark ninja kids.

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Name:
Age:
Gender:
Country: (Leaf, Sound, Sand, Rock, Wave, Mist, Rain, waterfall, Grass, Lightning, or Dark)
Personality:
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Fighting style:
Summon: (Optional)

Loki
January 14th, 2007, 12:46 PM
Hmm, I'm not sure I really get the plot... but it sounds interesting!

The thing is, unless this is what the curse marker is, you should probably add something that makes it so that the Dark Shinobi don't...er... kill everyone by touching them or looking at them. Like a seal. (I might've missed a part)

You might also want to specify what countries, cause there sure are a heck of a lot more countries then five, if you're talking about Naruto.

And, there's LOT'S of grammatical error's in there, if you post it, you might want to ask someone to proofread it for you. Sounds interesting, I might join if you post it.

Đ a r κ
January 14th, 2007, 01:18 PM
OK well since the only Dark ninja left are kids they cant really do any of that kind of stuff because they are too young but they can still do some pretty powerful stuff. Anyways, I edited it. Oh and what should this be rated?

Scarlet Weather
January 14th, 2007, 02:49 PM
Hmm... back.

Korinku: Nice plot, classic story idea. (Countries being drawn into a destructive war, and two groups being manipulated by villains that no one would have ever suspected.) Anyway, I'd like it if you would explain a little more about how the ninja kids use their powers. Is it just like Naruto, or do you have a better idea? You should add stuff like that to the plot. (I mean, half of mine is an explanation about the fictional country it's set in!)

Đ a r κ
January 15th, 2007, 10:47 AM
I have this idea that keeps popping in my head but before I post the plot, how many of you like YU-GI-OH or have YU-GI-OH cards?

...He he, I just reminded myself of this funny thing that I saw on T.V. that included YU-GI-OH. He he.

Alter Ego
January 15th, 2007, 10:54 AM
*Raises hand* Ohh! Me! Me! I like the series and although I don't own any of the cards I do know how the game is played. ^^ Dunno' how you translate any of that into an effective RP, though. What did you have in mind?

Đ a r κ
January 15th, 2007, 11:29 AM
YU-GI-OH Evolution

After the invention of the dual disk was created, scientist wanted to make something even more interesting and more fun. After going over ideas the scientist put their ideas together and began working on a new way of dualing, they called it the " Evolve disk". By wearing this device, the user can put a monster, lets say Hero kid, into a special slot and will then turn into said monster giving the user the ability's of that monster. Kaiba was of course the first person to learn about this new devise and was worried about the user's life points and how being attacked would affect the user. The Evolve disk did not affect the user much, it would affect them the same way it would with a regular dual disk. After the scientist explained this to Kaiba, he was very interested but forced the scientist to stop working on it for if the Evolve disk were to be in the wrong hands, that person could cause a great amount of havoc. The very next day, a group of people snuck into the lab and stole the Evolve Disk. They brought it back to their hide out and got one of their smarter members to complete the disk. After a long nights work, the group had finished the Evolve Disk and began to use them in duals and even started to steal from stores. Once the scientist learned that their projects were stolen, they turned to Kaiba. He told them that there wasn't really anything to do except get another group of people to take a Evolve disk and try to stop the thieves. The scientist agreed, they then finished the Evolve disks that they still had, found a group of kids that were very good Dual monster players and gave them a stack of cards to choose from to make their decks. The kids given their very own Evolve disk's and are now out searching for the thieves

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Age:
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Description:
Favorite card:
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I am still trying to think of a way to make the thieves more evil

Scarlet Weather
January 15th, 2007, 02:21 PM
Eh, Kori, I'm not sure I like that. Half of the fun of a Yu-Gi-Oh rp is strategic dueling, which is kind of limited if you "become" the cards, and the other is character interaction. Besides, the odds of Kaiba trusting a few kids to do his work is like, nil. It would be nice to have a Yu-Gi-Oh rp, but this plot needs a bit more of a makeover.

Alter Ego
January 16th, 2007, 02:03 AM
Agreeing with ACC on this one, the chances of Kaiba leaving something this important in the control of anyone but himself are...well, non-existent really. Also, if the effects of the system don't differ from those of the regular disc then how could people cause havoc with it? (Not to mention that Kaiba usually isn't one to give a hoot about the risks xP) Besides, a lot of monster effects would be really weird under this system (E.g. Hydrogeddon or Nimble Momonga. Would you create copies of yourself? If so, which would you control? And what about the 'on destruction' effect ones like Newdoria or Sangan? And how would being sent to the graveyard (Or removed from play for that matter) feel? How would you look if you set yourself face down? This whole system kind of isn't in line with the whole way the game works. .__.

I'm also agreeing on the strategy thing, the main problem I see with a YGO based RP is how you'll deal with the duels. I mean, just player vs self-controled NPC could get really dragged out and repetitive, but just imagine a PvP with endless arguments of "I had a face-down" or "I wasn't going to use that", always drawing into just the right card and what have you. It could get ugly, except maybe if you pre-determine the winner of each PvP at the beginning and then just let the RPers act out the details (Kind of like professional wrestling ^^).

So yeah, that plot doesn't really seem to work as is, although I agree with the art critic that it would be nice to have a proper YGO plot. Hmm...I'll try to think on it and maybe come up with one of my own. We'll have to see. ^^

Loki
January 20th, 2007, 07:43 PM
Here's an RP, what do you think? Is there anything I should add or get rid of, or anything that doesn't make sense?

[(-P`r`i`d`e-)]

Before Sora came and sealed the hearts of the worlds, the worlds had lost their hearts to the darkness. Thus nobody world’s were created and the residents of the nobody worlds are the nobodies of the residents in the original worlds. The world that never was is a nobody world. These worlds reside in a parallel universe, the twilight universe, to the original. The twilight universe and its worlds is the final resting place for all nobodies. For each nobody must walk the path of twilight at one point or another and the twilight universe is what awaits them at the end of the path. The twilight universe and our universe live in a balance each keeping the other equal in darkness and light. When the balance in our universe was threatened, nobodies and the world that never was appeared in order to keep the balance in check. Now the balance of the twilight universe is in danger.

[[x xE n v y//]]

[[ . . .W r a t h=//

I have also discovered something else about this universe. Apparently here nobodies are actually able to feel emotions. Since this is their final resting place, they are able to retain their memories of their original forms along with something resembling a heart. While their hearts are only shadows and not as strong as original hearts, they are still functioning nonetheless.

[\\L.u.s.t.//]

[\\G.r.e.e.d . . . & &

Now back to the problem that is facing the twilight universe. Apparently a new group of nobodies have arisen and are stirrin’ up some trouble. They have grown jealous of our universe and their shadow hearts have been consumed with hatred and envy. They seek to gain control of the entire twilight universe by collecting the shadow hearts of its residence with the dusks and lower nobodies. Then with that source of power they hope to create a nobody version of kingdom hearts. With that they want to gain control of both universes. They call themselves the Sinners. They each take on the trait of one of the 7 sins that plague each heart. They travel in pairs to execute their missions in the real universe, save for one: Pride, who stays in the Twilight Universe at all times, the leader, and the source of their jealousy and hatred . And last, they are strong and must be stopped.

X (||G-l-u-t-t-o-n-y||) X

{-- S-l-o-t-h}}x x

Your Royal Highness
King Mickey

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The sinner pairs are listed above, between the plot. As you can see, Pride is by himself, while Envy and Wrath are partners, Lust and Greed, and Gluttony and Sloth.

||Name ||
||Gender ||
||Age ||
||Side || Light, Darkness
||Title || See below
||World of origin ||
||Current World ||
||Weapons ||
||Magic || Up to 3
||Attacks ||
||Appearance || Paragraph is a must and you may include a picture in link form, so long as you describe it as well. Sinners must have the japanese kanji (http://japanese.about.com/bl50kanji_sins.htm) of their respective sin tattooed somewhere on their bodies.
||Personality || At least 1 paragraph description.
||History || At least 1 paragraph description.
||Other ||

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~ x Titles | |

-Keyblade Master: Controls one of the keyblades [Only three]

-Sinner: Is one of the new bad guys. Please include what sin you wish to play. [We obviously don’t have enough Rper’s, so we will all be Rping sinners, but you only have to provide a sign-up if the sinner is your main character, but otherwise, you only have to do it if you want to, or describe the nobody in your posts as you go.*]

-Rebel: Someone who wants to help the light side, like Leon, Aerith, or the Disney characters.

* Ignore that.

- + -

~ x Worlds | | The worlds in the twilight universe are the nobodies of the original worlds. Though they look the same, they carry different names then the original worlds. -


♥ Destiny Islands -- > Chance Islands
♥ Disney Castle [ Timeless River] -- > Enix Kingdom
♥ Traverse Town -- > Lost Haven
♥ Wonderland -- > Maze Gardens
♥ Olympus Coliseum -- > Atlas Stadium
♥ Deep Jungle -- > Shadowed Woods
♥ Hundred Acre Wood -- > Playful Forest
♥ Agrabah -- > Sandy Plains
♥ Atlantica -- > Neptune
♥ Halloween Town -- > Ghoul village
♥ Neverland -- > Ever after
♥ Hollow Bastion / The Radiant Garden -- > Serene City
♥ Twilight Town -- > Lost City
♥ The Land of Dragons -- > Imperial realm
♥ Beast's Castle -- > Rose Palace
♥ Port Royal -- > Tortuga
♥ The world that never was -- > Deep Dive City


Everything in this RP belongs entirely and completely to Paopu/ [Dis] i l l u s i o n. Only 1/100 was edited by me

Netta
January 20th, 2007, 08:51 PM
Okay, I know I have been a flaming hard head, but I promise. . . this time I will take what you all give me. ^_^" Okay, I have done a lot of reviving and thinking and planning and I'm almost exhausted. Anyways, I've modified greatly my Digimon Fictional DigiDestines and Digimon greatly. There is a lot more information and even a simple layout of the Digital World and explanations. I think some will say I went way too far but people keep saying not everyone knows what a Digimon is or how it Digivolves or what the hell is Digivolve so this goes great into detail. Most of the information is mine, but there is a few that arn't mine and had found them on one of the many sites that said you may take this information just don't claim it as yours which I'm not going too.

I'll put the information on the attachment or maybe I'll post it down and than put it on the attachment if people are impressed. . . or maybe I'll just attach the information ahhhhhhhhh!!!!! I'll just put it all down here. So here I go. Good luck reading. I worked hard on this and that is why you barely get to see me. Again I'm going to post this and than edit it as my computer likes to log me out of this site if I work too long.


Basic Information


What is FDD? FDD is short for Fictional DigiDestined and Digimon. There are many FDD characters out there that don't have any website put up for their created Digimon and their partner characters. But this is when real people put themselves into a character (or make up a personality of how they wish they were) and create stories of them with others. FDD doesn't belong to just one person. I don't know who came up with it first, but there are many people who have FDD sites out there and believe me, they are fun to read and I've always wanted to try a quick FDD roleplay. Yes I have my own site, but it's still a work in process and at least I'll be able to see if I have what it takes.

Here are the level translations.
Rookie = Child, Champion = Adult, Ultimate = Perfect, and Mega = Ultimate.

I want to go along with the Japanese version, as I've always believed to stay with the original rather than go to the modified version.

Child: This is the base or starting point of a Digimon. They aren’t as powerful as their higher forms, but they can be trouble.
Adult: This is the second state or level of a Digimon’s life. They are much more powerful, stronger, and sometimes faster than their lower forms. They usually grow to a massive size.
Perfect: This is the third state or level of a Digimon. They range from different sizes and shapes and are much more stronger, powerful, and faster than their lower levels.
Ultimate: This is the final state or level of a Digimon’s life. Like the Perfect level, they range from different size and shapes and are far more powerful than any Digimon out there.
Status Change: This usually happens when a Digimon at the Ultimate level cannot go to a higher level. Thus they are changed to become more powerful and stronger with great defense and offense but their speed is greatly reduced.
Digivices: The Digivices are already chosen and made with new colors. (Actually, I just took the tamer's D-Arcs and invert the colors.) They are the D-Arcs, which was also dubbed as what we call D-Powers from the Tamers version, which means you can use cards. (I love using cards.)

Digivolutions: Digivolving as it is mostly called will be very different from the shows. The cards are the keys as well as the Totem Powers. (These will be given to you once you have been accepted. The Totem Power will be given to the others according to their higher-level Digimon.) Digivolution is the same from Child to Adult. From Adult to Perfect be slightly different, instead of having Culumon or Calumon give the crystal activation, you get to use a card that has a crest. (I would like you're crests to be your own creation and design. You cannot use these crests, (Courage, Friendship, Love, Sincerity, Knowledge, Reliability, Hope, and Light. I would use the Japanese versions, but not everyone knows them so therefore I've left them out. Kindness is also something you cannot use as it belongs to Ken.)

What about the Ultimate level? I'm sorry to say that not all of you will be able to reach this level. Just joking. Actually, because this is not really based on the show's rules and based on my rules, I say what the hey, let's do it. You can do one of two ways to reach the Ultimate level. One way is the Warp Digivolve like Agumon and Gabumon to WarGreymon, and MetalGarurumon. The term Warp is when a Digimon skips a certain level to reach a higher level in half the time it would take than going in order. The other way is to have the Perfect level Digimon Digivolve to the Ultimate level. Example: Agumon Digivolve too Greymon. Greymon Digivolve too MetalGreymon. MetalGreymon Digivolve too WarGreymon. (You cannot have both. Must choose one or the other.) If you choose the Perfect to Ultimate Digivolution, you will be given a Totem Power. If you choose to Warp Digivolve, you’ll be getting a blue, shinning card.

What about DNA Digivolution, Armor Digivolution, BioMerging and Spirit Evolving? I'm sorry to say DNA and Armor is not allowed. BioMerging will only be giving to a few characters, but the ones who didn’t get this will get the Totem Powers. Sorry, I'm the one who will choose the BioMerging. (Remember, this will be the Ultimate form in which the human partner and Digimon partner emerge together to become one being. Now this will be given to the selected characters by a special Digimon, which I have created that will do what Dobermon did in the Tamer's show to turn the humans into data in the real world, but will not be deleted as I don't like to follow in other's footsteps.) Spirit Evolving will only be granted to anyone who had his or her partner Digimon deleted.
Downloading other Digimon’s Data: This is a big yes only there is a catch. Your Digimon partner downloads a defeated Digimon’s data to become stronger. When a Digimon is deleted, their bodies burst into red particle bits of data, which contains their strength. A new thing to this will also be a Digi-Core, which is the heart of the Digimon and will be given to the Tamer in order to unlock their Crest Card, BioMerging, and Totem Powers. There will also be a Digi-Stripe, which holds the Digimon’s attack, defense and speed. The Digi-Strip will also be downloaded into the D-Arc where it allows a new card to be created which holds either an attack of the defeated Digimon, a defense or speed booster.
How it Works? It can be one of three that I’ve mentioned. If you decide to let your partner Digimon download the defeated Digimon’s data than that is all you can do for that one defeated Digimon. If you choose to download the Digi-Core into your D-Arc you must remember how much Digi-Cores you’ve collected. If you choose to download the Digi-Strip, you must choose one of the following four: The special attack of the defeated Digimon, a speed boost, a defense boost or a special ability card.
Downloading Digimon: When your partner Digimon downloads another Digimon, they become stronger, faster, and powerful by a little. The chart below is what you need to keep. The way it works is every 25-downloaded Digimon becomes slightly stronger than the average. Here is how it works, you download 25 your child level Digimon becomes a weak Adult level. Add 25 more downloads to the already 25 earned will allow your Child level Digimon to be as powerful as the average Adult level. So on and so forth. Just add on from the first 25 your get. When your Digimon Digivolves, the same thing applies. You don’t have to have 275 downloads to become powerful. You’ve noticed that when your Child level downloads 10 defeated Digimon, they unlock the next level. This of course needs more than just downloading 10, you also need to show you care for your partner in order for it to work as in the shows it happens when the Tamer cares for their partner that they reach a new level. You’ll also notice that I didn’t put down the unlocking of the next level. This is because you need your Crest Card to reach the next level. The Ultimate level is also using a different method. If you are Biomerging or doing a Spirit Evoultion, you cannot Download defeated Digimon data.

This was a chart and I'll try to fix it now to get it work out perfectly here.


Child


Strength
5 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Weak Adult
10 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Adult strength able to Digivolve to the Adult Level.
15 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Weak Perfect
20 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Perfect strength

Adult


Strength
5 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Weak Perfect
10 Downloaded Defeatred Digimon

Perfect Strength
15 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Weak Ultimate
20 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Ultimate Strength

Perfect


Strength
5 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Weak Ultimate
10 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Ultimate Strength


Ultimate


Strength
5 Downloaded Defeated Digimon

Stronger Ultimate


Downloading Digi-Cores: This is when the Tamer downloads the Digi-Core in their D-Arc to hold onto in order to receive your Crest Card. You need to have a total of 5 Digi-Cores in order to unlock and receive your Crest Card.
Downloading Digi-Strip: This is to gain more cards. Everyone gets a starter pack, but to get more and better cards to modify your partner Digimon, you need to download the Digi-Strips into your D-Arc. This will depend. If you defeat a Digimon that has an attack you want to use later on with your own Digimon for an upcoming battle, you take the defeated Digimon’s attack and use it to modify your Digimon partner to have that attack for the remainder of that one battle. If you decided to have a Speed Boost Card, than it would make your Digimon partner to be faster than the normal level of that Digimon. If you choose to have a Defense Type Boost you can allow your Digimon partners defense to that of the next level stage. I will also allow certain Ability cards, which is something unique to another Digimon that your Digimon partner doesn’t have.
For these three above, I will have an example by using Ruki or Rika and her partner Renamon as an attachment.


Digimon Information
(This is not my information)
What is a Digimon?


The compound word Digimon is a hint in itself - it is short for digital monster. There are a number of differing accounts, but everyone agrees that digimon are creatures that are made up of data. All of their properties and attributes are stored in their digi-core, a physical sphere inside the digimon, which acts much like a CPU or brain for the digimon. All digimon are created in the Digital World.
What is the Digital World?
The Digital World, sometimes shortened to Digiworld, is the world in which Digimon live. It is an alternate dimension to the real world, the world in which we live. It is intricately linked to our world through computers, electronics and digital communication, and it evolves and changes as computers, electronics and digital communication changes in our world.
There are many different continuities of the Digital World which all have different properties and are all usually completely separate from each other, like the Digital Worlds from Adventure, Tamers, Frontier, Savers, the Wonder swan games, the Digimon World games, V-Tamer, Next and all of the other manga. It has been theorized that the historically accurate Digital World timeline from the video game Brave Tamer could be seen as the beginning of the Digital World.
From 1939-42, the ABC Computer (Atanasoff-Berry Computer), the very first computer, lays the foundations of the Digital World, and then from 1943-46, the ENIAC computer (Electronic Numerical Integrator And Computer) builds upon these foundations. From there, numerous iterations of the Digital World start to appear, each linked to different, parallel universes of Earth.
The Digital World that is focused on in the two series of Digimon Adventure runs closely parallel to two other worlds - a dream world where thoughts and dreams become reality, and a dark world that can make people's darkest thoughts reality. The Digital World itself draws some of the energy from the dream world to make thoughts reality, and at the same time the digital communication of the real world increases. The energy that the Digital World draws from the dream dimension starts to give form to the thoughts, dreams, beliefs and history of the population of our world, combining this with digital data, creates the very first Digimon.
Properties of a Digimon
Essentially, Digimon are simply data given physical form, therefore each digimon must have properties, which distinguish themselves from each other.
Name:
This is the name of the Digimon's species, always ending in "mon".
Level:
This is the evolutionary stage the Digimon is currently at, see below for details.
Attribute:
This can de defined as one of five types - Data, Vaccine, Virus, Variable and Free. See below for details.
Type:
(AKA Group or Sort). The general grouping the Digimon belongs to, usually based on their appearance or abilities.
Techniques:
(AKA Attacks) The unique attacks or techniques the Digimon is able to use to attack or defend. Every Digimon at the Rookie/Child level have at least two techniques.
Data Size:
This property is measured in G, standing for GB or gigabytes, but is not given for many digimon so is not used as a classifier much. The data size increase when a digimon eats.
Family:
A very general classifier for the family of species a digimon belongs to, see below for details.

Attributes
A theory states that several years ago, personal computers started spreading a mysterious computer virus spread into the network. The virus kept absorbing data, it continued to change quite like a creature, and one after another it kept multiplying. The virus passed for a while, and later artificial intelligence was invented. The virus being a "learning type" understood AI and spread great damage. After that someone hacked into the computer, which the virus came from, and utilized the AI of the virus to develop a "vaccine" to oppose it (This seems like the origin of the present Vaccine kind Digimon). Moreover, people began sending and receiving e-mail (This seems like the origin of the present data kind Digimon), and thus Digimon with different attributes were born.
Vaccine, Data and Virus digimon all have a mutual relationship. The role of a Vaccine digimon is to prevent attacks from Virus digimon. These digimon usually have a strong sense of justice, but this doesn't apply to them all. Data digimon are used for sending and receiving e-mails. They take in Vaccine digimon and in turn are protected from Virus digimon. Virus digimon were made to destroy data. Many of them are brutal, but there are still exceptions. In general,

Vaccine > Virus
Data > Vaccine
Virus > Data





However, certain amounts of digimon don’t have one of the three mutual attributes. Digimon with the Free attribute are descendents of digimon from Ancient times. This attribute doesn't have an advantage or disadvantage over any others. Hybrid digimon whose data has successes the Warrior 10 have the Variable attribute. They copy the attribute of their opponent.


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Data

Vaccine
Kyuubimon





The main three attributes, Vaccine, Data and Virus, affect the appearance of the digimon. For example, digimon that usually have the Vaccine attribute have been observed to have the Data attribute, and have a different appearance, like the Data and Vaccine versions of Kyuubimon, shown above. A digimon's attribute may change with influence. It is also thought that digimon at the Baby stages have no attribute.
Families
Families originated from the card game, where the different card backgrounds indicated the family that the digimon was associated with.
Nature Spirits (NSp) -- Represent the Northern sector of the Digital World. Primarily Insect, Reptile and Animal type digimon.
Wind Guardians (WG) -- Represent the Eastern sector of the Digital World. Primarily Plant, Angel and Flying digimon.
Metal Empire (ME) -- Represent the Western sector of the Digital World. Primarily Machine digimon.
Nightmare Soldiers (NSo) -- Represent the Southern sector of the Digital World. Primarily Demon, Undead and other mythical digimon.
Deep Savers (DS) -- Represent the oceans of the Digital World. Primarily aquatic and water digimon.
Virus Busters (VB) -- Represent heroic and courageous digimon that fight for good against evil.
Dark Area (DA) -- Represent evil and powerful digimon who want to take over the Digital World.
Jungle Troopers (JT) -- Represent mainly plant-based digimon.
Dragon's Roar (DR) -- Represent dragon-looking digimon.
Unknown -- Digimon that are either too unique or too weak to be placed with another group.

(My information with a little guidence from the chart above.)


The Digital World

Northern Sector

Digital Prairie- Vast wilderness where many solo Digimon’s live and some have gangs of Digimon. Mostly Animals live in this territory and a very few Reptiles and Insects..
Digital Forest- Maze Forest where many Insects and a few Reptile Digimon’s live with a very few Animal living in the territory.
Digital City- One of largest cities where mostly Insects, Reptile and Animal type Digimon lives in harmony with a few other types of Digimon. Two bars, Four Hotels, 2 Concert Halls, and A Digital Academy where Baby II Digimon stays until they Digivolve to Child level. Some stay on to Digivolve to Adult. Open to all. The Mayer is Leomon.

Eastern Sector

Vegetation Valley- Vast valley where most of the plant type Digimon live. Some in groups and some solo. This has many small restaurants through out the entire Valley.
Digital Range- Many flying types of Digimon live around or near the Mountains. Most are very Solitary Digimon and don’t take kindly to strangers wondering on their territories.
Guardian City- This is where the Angel type Digimon live. There is one large Palace where the Guardians of the Digital World sleep. They are MagnaDramon, Seraphimon, Ophanimon, and Cherubimon. The City is the second greatest city. Has mostly Academies. There are smaller Academies as well. 5 Large Academies which are the Guardian Academy, Power Academy, Ability Academy, Magic Academy, Protection Academy. The Mayor is AngeWomon.
Guardian Academy is open to mostly Angel type Digimon. Mainly because they will be studying and working to become a Guardian to some parts of the Digital World where they will be granted. HolyLordAngemon is the Principle.
Power Academy is open to any Digimon who wishes to become stronger and learn angelic stragedies to fight against thous of the darkness. Angemon is the Princeble.
Ability Academy is open to any Digimon who wishes to learn more Abilities and to strengthen their own abilities. MangaAngemon is the Princible.
Magic Academy is open to any Digimon who wishes to learn more about the different elements of the Digital World and possibly learn to harness a slim amount. Usually made for Digimon who has Elemental Abilities to strength and learn to harness their element. Silfymon is the Principle.
Protection Academy is open to any Digimon who wishes to protect others when it’s needed. Basically becoming great warriors of justice. Ankelomon is the Principle.

Western Sector

Digital Factory- Where many machine type Digimon’s work. The boss is HiAndromon and is a kind and gentle boss. Almost all of the machine type Digimon work here to receive Bit.
Metal City- The third largest city in the Digital World. This is a huge section where there are many shops. There are three large shops and one small shop. Weapon Shop, Armor Shop, Item Shop, and Power Shop is the smallest. Under the large shops are smaller shops that sell rare type items, weapons, and armors. This is where most machine Digimon live also.
Machine Junkyard- This is a large of uncharted territory where junks, scraps, and different metals and old discarded stuff is put. This has been the best place for many gangs of machine like Digimon who are also bandits and criminals who always wants more. They can never get enough.

Southern Sector

Nightmare Jungle- This is where many solitary and a few gangs of demon and undead like Digimon live. They don’t take kindly to anyone entering their territory. There is a small town nearby which only has two hotels and one restaurant. There are a few demon and undead like Digimon who live here. They want to try to live a peaceful life as well as break the harsh reputation of all the demon and undead like Digimon.
Plunder City- The last large city in the Digital World. This is a place where mostly mythical type Digimon live. There are a few demon and undead type Digimon who wish to try living with others in peace and try hard to be of justice and peace. This is a moving city. This is also where the railroad starts and the Digimon Trains are the only ones who are granted to go any place they want. There are a few passenger Digimon Trains, but most are Delivery Trains.
Plentiful Town- This is usually a large town, small city that has everything Digimon needs to live in peace and harmony. It has small shops with everything and has plenty of it to go around thus it’s name. There are many types of Digimon who live here. The mayor is Leppamon.

Ocean Sector

Underwater City- This is fourth largest city, which has everything any aquatic and marine type Digimon needs to survive. It isn’t mentioned as a city above water mainly because it’s under the surface of the lands. The mayor is Seahomon.
Digital Glaciers- This is a place full of artic temperatures. This is where most of the Digimon who loves freezing live. This place has a huge Ocean and works with the Underwater City to protect each other. This is a place where the Digimon accept any and all who travel and always welcomes strangers who enter their territory with warm greetings and open arms, claws, pads,. . . you get it.

Shadow Sector

This is one of the new Sectors, which recently was created.
Underworld Gate- This is a large gate, which is always closed and guarded by two Cerberumon, who take turns guarding the gate. This is to keep any Digimon from venturing under and to keep the evil and shadowed type Digimon inside and escaping.
Shadow City- This place is where the heroic and courageous Digimon live. They are always on the job taking turns. Two Cerberumon are powerful, but if they should fail, the heroic and courageous Digimon would be there to push them back. This City holds and hides the Gates to the Underworld. Three Knightmon protect the basement from anyone entering. When Knightmon is knocked down to pieces, they always regenerate to continue the fight because they are programmed too. Many believe Knightmon has no real life to it. The Mayor is Justimon.
Darkened Jungle- This is where plant type Digimon live. It is a large village where most of the houses are in the trees with vine bridges that connect from one to the other. They are always open to having visitors, but at first meet, they may put you under arrest to make sure you are not evil in disguised.

Dragon Sector

This is one of the new Sectors, which recently was created.
Dragon’s Roar- This is a huge valley with mountain ranges and rainforests and jungles stationed through out this sector. There is also deserts and many ruins. This is the land and home of all the Dragon type Digimon out there. They are by far the strongest and most Protected and Guardian Masters of the Digital World.
Dragon City- This is the golden city that is the largest over the other four, mainly because dragon type Digimon are by comparison to the other types. . . very huge. There is a Palace where the Council of Dragons meet. Unlike the Angel type Guardian’s who only concern themselves with the Digital World, the Dragons are given greater and much more important roles. To Guardianship to the two Worlds. The Human World and the Digital World. The mayor here is X-Vmon. They are very open and can be friendly, but be warned, they aren’t ones to take lightly. These dragons believe that they are the strongest type or group in the entire Digital World. Others would fight to differ, but every group has their own ideals. It’s best that you go along with them being the strongest.
Digital Palace- This is located inside the Dragon City. Here it is believed that the Dragon Princess resides here with her Guardian Dragon. This is also where the High Council Dragons meet. They are Magnamon, MagnaDramon, Greidimon, DeviDramon, AeroV-Dramon and Gojiramon. These six decide what is best for the two worlds. The Dragon Princess is said to be the Ambassador of the Digital World. (I will play this character when we get to the final chapter.) Nothing else is known about this Dragon Princess.

Lower Sector

This is the last new Sector, which recently was created.
Misfit Village- This is a very small village with one small food shop and one small hotel. They are very rich in bit and have everything they need to live happily. These are the Digimon who are weak and not placed in any group. But each one has their own specific place. The mayor of this little Village is Ninjamon who protects and guards the village.
Primary Village/Secondary- This is the place that is made for babies. The surface of this large village is made of soft rubber. There are many types of toys both large and small for the little ones to play. There is also a small river for Digi-Fish to eat. The protector of the village is Elecmon, Lunamon, Reptilimon, Calumon, and Impmon. The mayor is Leomon who is able to Digivolve to his Ultimate form if needed for extra protection. Lunamon and Calumon are the Digimon who play with the hatched baby Digimon. Elecmon and Reptilimon help care for the baby Digimon, and Impmon can Digivolve to BeezleBuumon to help protect the village with Leomon’s Ultimate form. Reptilimon is sometimes seen playing with the baby Digimon and will usually deny it by making up an excuse. In one part of the village is many eggs of different colors and designs. There are also some baby cradles, which appears when an egg hatches. Primary Village is where the Baby Digimon are born as eggs and also where they sleep. Secondary Village is next door where the Baby Digimon play. It is also very rare, but there have been a few new Digimon born on this side.

((Okay, It says I have to start a new post as this has exceeded the 5000 limit so I'll post the rest on a second post.))

Netta
January 20th, 2007, 09:05 PM
Examples of Digivolutions


Digivolution from Child to Adult level.


First Time: Ruki and Renamon are locked in a tough battle with Dokumon. A spider Digimon with amazing ability to spin webs quickly. Renamon has been captured in it’s web and now targeting Ruki who is frozen with fear as the spider unleashes an attack. Renamon had told Ruki to run to safety, but Ruki refused. With her sorcery ability, Renamon teleports out of her web trap and appears in front of Ruki taking the hit for her as Ruki is shocked.


“Renamon!” she calls out weakly as she kneels to Renamon’s body that is now laying down.


“Ruki, I’m sorry, but I feel it’s time for me to go.” She says weakly as Ruki begins to develop tears in her eyes.

“Renamon you can’t leave me. You can’t be deleted.” Ruki’s tears threatening to leave her eye sockets.

“I have to go. I will be with you always.” As Renamon closes her eyes, Ruki is over come with a short term of grief.

“RENAMON!” she yells loudly as her D-Arc shines brightly.

D_I_G_I_V_O_L_U_T_I_O_N_ scrolls down the screen of the D-Arc as it releases blue data strips to form behind Renamon who is suddenly over shot with energy as she leaps up.

“Renamon!” she calls as her body begins to peel off starting with her nose and paws and works it’s way down to her entire body as the blue glowing strips of light surround her in a protective orb of light. “Digivolve too!” she growls as blue flames form to her paws, than to her single tail which rips from the top into nine tails and flames finishing as Renamon falls down to all fours with her finishing flames which than explode the orb of light as she appears in her new form. On all fours and nine tails with flame on the tips and flames on her paws. With a final leap and turn around she poses. “Kyuubimon!”

The once humanoid golden fox was now a golden fox on all fours with nine tails and a red and white candy cane like bow over her furred neck mane. The black and white yin yang symbols on all four legs and purple markings under her eyes.

After

Ruki takes out a card as it spins around and she takes it while taking out her D-Arc as it glows. “Digi-Modify!” she slices the card to her D-Arc as the D-Arc red and expands the inside data of the card. “Digivolution Activate!” she shouts as she holds it up over her head with energy winds surrounding her and than dispersing.

D_I_G_I_V_O_L_U_T_I_O_N_ scrolls down the screen of her D-Arc.
It goes into the Digivolution above.
END



Digivolving from Adult to Perfect.


With her newfound card, Ruki looks at it unable to comprehend why it was a picture of a crest and tag. The symbol in the middle of it was that of a strange-formed capital T with three small triangles on either side of it. Seeing Kyuubimon in the clutches of Vajiramon’s arms she quickly works to see what it would do.


“DigiModify!” she calls out as she slices the card through her shinning D-Arc and it red the data. “Crest of Trust Activate!” she finishes as her D-Arc shines brightly.


M_A_T_R_I_X_ _D_I_G_I_V_O_L_U_T_I_O_N_ scrolls down the screen of the D-Arc as it moves away to show Kyuubimon released from the clutches and her running towards a spinning and glowing symbol of the T with strange triangle marks around it. She is halted in her run as it hit her forehead and embeds into it as her body glows a bright blue flame in which she leaps high into the air, rolling herself into a ball. “Kyuubimon Matrix Digivolve too!” she shouts as an explosion of blue flames, she appeared spinning around in a humanoid form spinning quickly with two full moons moving in together behind her. As she slowed down her spin, it showed parts of her legs, waist, chest and finally her head as she bends down and stands up quickly as the two moons come together and created a strange eclipse.

“Taomon!” she calls out in her new form.
Everyone can make up there own somewhat close to how this started. Like the crest’s symbol flying into some part of the Digimon’s body. Again must be creative.
END



Digivolving from Perfect to Ultimate.


Here you can use your imagination, but it has to start something like this.

Taomon finds herself knocked down and nearly ready to De-Digivolve back to her lower forms. Yet she holds on with as much as she can and stands back up. She faces BeezleBuumon for her finally attack. Ruki is unsure of what to do next, the card she used was her crest card to reach this level, but to go further was beyond her knowledge of how it’s done. Before long, Ruki is shocked to find that a card is shaking violently and glowing brightly as it turns into a blue shining card. She looks to it and nods her head as she slices the card through her D-Arc, which was glowing.


“DigiModify!” she calls out as she slices the card through her D-Arc, which reads the card’s data. Energy winds pick up around her. “Matrix Digivolution Activate!” she called out more as she held up the card.

M_A_T_R_I_X_ _D_I_G_I_V_O_L_U_T_I_O_N_ scrolls down her D-Arc’s screen as the D-Arc is shown and released silver bright lights around it and flies to Taomon. The light hit and explodes away the clothing and parts of her body to look a bit more like her last form.
This is the starting from Perfect to Ultimate, what happens next is up to you. Use your imagination.
END




BioMerging from Child to Ultimate.


Here is the start of how it happens if you are chosen to BioMerge.

Ruki thinks about her friends and family and finding how amazing she was at how much she changed and how she wanted to protect the ones she had found she loved. With this though in mind, her D-Arc shines brightly.


“BioMerge Activate!” she calls out as her D-Arc shines and she covers it up while bringing it to her chest and her clothes turn to flames and move away from her body as light beams surround her body.

Renamon is found moving towards Ruki from behind. “Renamon BioMerge too!” she calls out as the two combine into one body. A shadow is seen leaping away quickly and standing on a lake is Renamon who begins to fall into the water with her feet as they turn to heeled boots. Her paws move into the water also from the sides as it lifts up to form a type of cocoon. Pink pedals fly out as the image of Renamon, Kyuubimon, and Taomon’s head is shown and quickly disappears as it shows a human in black standing. Colorful fox like beams of light fly towards her body and forms her armor as it shows her legs, thighs, chest and Ruki’s profile form the side as she turns around to face everyone and is faded to show a new form turning around slowly. She than leaps into the air doing a front flip and lands in a glowing white symbol on the ground. “Sakuyamon!” she calls out as she grabs her monk staff and poses.
You’ll notice that with this one, you have to show the Child, Adult, and Perfect head shot of your Digimon partner and than the shown of the side profile of your human character moving to the Ultimate head. Everything else you need to make up on your own.
END



Digivolving from Child to Ultimate.


Here is one of two ways to doing it. You must choose one.

Taomon is suddenly thrown and sent flying through the air and slams into the ground. Her body glows as her Digivolution leaves her and she returns to Renamon her Child form. She slowly gets up and glares at the shadowed Digimon who just kicked her butt. Ruki ran to partner to see if she is okay.


“Renamon?” she asks and before she finishes.

“I’m fine, but I am not going to give up so easily. Ruki I need your help. Allow me to become one with you. Let me feel your energy, your emotions, and your heart.” Said Renamon as Ruki didn’t want to, but seeing the unknown Digimon gaining, Ruki gives in and nods with termination in her face.

She is suddenly surprised that all of her Digi-Cores and Digi-Strips she’s collected form together and appearing in her hand is a card with the strange looking fox totem of Renamon. She slices it through her D-Arc taking no time to think on it.

“DigiModify. Totem Digivolution Activate!” she calls out as she finishes her slice as the D-Arc reads the cards and shakes violently.

T_O_T_E_M_ _D_I_G_I_V_O_L_U_T_I_O_N_ scrolls down the D-Arc as it shows the totem of a fox, which looks like Renamon. It sends out a beam that slams into Renamon’s body suddenly turning into a type of uncolored body form as she does a front flip and lands.

“Renamon Warp Digivolve too!” she calls out as a beam of blue light shots up and hits her uncolored Kyuubimon form which than turns and opens it’s mouth to shot another blue beam to the uncolored Taomon who than brings up it’s arms and swings them down while her head looks up to unleash a larger blue beam high into the air.

Out of the beam appears the Totem of the Fox Renamon and is suddenly exploded in blue flames to form a black formed human wearing a golden yellow fox mask and long silver hair flowing behind her. She is quickly surrounded by colorful fox beams which forms her armor as she leaps high into the air slowly doing a back flip and grabbing her golden staff in the air as it falls and lands on the light glowing symbol on the ground. “Sakuyamon!” she calls out posing.
END


That is one way of doing it and you can create your own way as long as it shows the Child level body, Adult level body, and Perfect level body. The start needs to be that way, but to finish it, you can do what you want as long as it shows something like the Totem.

Can be used with the same as above. A Totem Card and slicing it through the D-Arc.

T_O_T_E_M_ _D_I_G_I_V_O_L_U_T_I_O_N_ scrolls down the screen of her shaking violently D-Arc as it shines brightly releasing beamed blade and the Fox Totem slowly moves into Renamon’s body. “Renamon Warp Digivolve too!” she calls out as the beams of light shine brightly around her. She is seen standing on the other end of the lake as her feet sink in to reveille the heeled boots. She brings out her arms to her sides as the water moves towards her to reveille a human hand clad in gloves. Her Renamon head is melted away with quick ripples as it shows the Fox Totem and forms around the body as she appears in a humanoid form wearing black and the fox face helmet with her long silver flowing hair. The colorful beams of fox lights fly to her and surround her body to form her golden and purple armor. It shows her feet, legs, thighs, chest and finally her face is hidden with her hands covering it as it shows the head of Renamon, Kyuubimon, and Taomon which than fades away to reveille the newly formed Digimon turning around slowly. She leaps high into the air doing a front flip while grabbing her staff in mid air and landing on her symbol.


“Sakuyamon!” she finishes with a pose.
Again it was just like BioMerging only without the human and with the Totem Power. This is the other way you can do it and make it up on your own as you start it off. Remember that you must show the heads of the Child level, Adult level, and Perfect level Digimon and than the final form should be known. For both of the Digivolutions, don’t forget to show the Totem Power of your Digimon somewhere in the Digivolution.

END


Spirit Evolution.

Only given to the ones who had their partner Digimon deleted. This would be how I’d like it to be done.

Taomon’s body had began to be shadowed as it slowly began to fade into data bits except with the Digi-Core and the Digi-Strip swirling around it flies out and slams into Ruki’s D-Arc as she doesn’t notice. Tears filled her eyes and streamed down her face as she watched her partner deleted.


“TAOMON!”
The shadowed Digimon laughs and looks to Ruki as it gets ready to attack her. Ruki looks up with fear and shock, still grief of losing her partner is suddenly felt a presence. As if time had stopped she gasps seeing the ghost like form of Renamon.

“Execute.” Echoed Renamon’s voice as the form fades and Ruki glares to the beast.

Her D-Arc forms the armor of Sakuyamon and shines brightly as Ruki holds out her hands as the Digi-core and Digi-Strip of Renamon forms into her hand in a single ring around her hand.

“Execute!” she shouts as she acts like it’s a card and slices it down into her D-Arc as it reads it while glowing. “Renamon’s Spirit Activate!” she finishes as she is sent away and her clothes disappear in blue flames as two square plates of data lines formed in front and behind her.

Ruki’s body seems to extend on her feet and arms as it shows the outer gloves and boots of Sakuyamon to her body, which now lay straight in a T. The armor forms around her body as blue flames explode around her letting her long hair grow. The image of Renamon, Kyuubimon, and Taomon appear in a ghost like figure and quickly fade as Ruki’s eyes glow white as the armor head of Sakuyamon forms and explodes in blue flames as she appears showing her humanoid Sakuyamon form with a smile as she leaps high into the air doing a back flip and grabbing her staff in mid air and landing in the middle of a glowing symbol on the ground.

“Sakuyamon!” she says as she poses.
Again this is just a summary. The way I’ve described with how the Spirit appears and comes out as well as the Digivolution. Because Sakuyamon is more of a human spirit, she had the single Digi-strip around her hand. If Sakuyamon was more of a beast looking like SaintGalgomon, she would have had more than one Digi-strip forming around her hand and it is harder to control. So it depends on what the final form is. If it looks human-ish like Sakuyamon or Justimon or Galentmon than it’s one strip. If it looks something like Cherubimon, MetalGarurumon, MagnaDramon than it has multiple strips and is harder to control as it is a beast form. However, both are equal in power, strength, and ability.
END



Downloading:


Renamon had Digivolve into Kyuubimon much to Ruki’s surprise. She watches with amazement as Kyuubimon lowers her head down as the area around her grows darker. Her nine tails fanned out and the blue flames grew larger. Dokumon charged at Kyuubimon to finish her off.


“Fox Tail Inferno!” she growls as she unleashes the nine fireballs that fly out and slam into Dokumon who screams in pain and her body is slowly turned to red particle data bits.

Kyuubimon closes her eyes and holds up her head as the red particle data bits fly into her body as she downloads it into her own data.
END



Digi-Core Downloading.


Renamon had Digivolved into Kyuubimon much to Ruki’s surprise. She watches with amazement as Kyuubimon lowers her head down as the area around her grows darker. Her nine tails fan out and the blue flames grow larger. Dokumon charged at Kyuubimon to finish her off.


“Fox Tail Inferno!” she growls opening her eyes and glaring at Dokumon as she unleashes her nine fireballs that fly out and slams into Dokumon who screams in pain and her body darkens as the left chest of the Digimon shines brightest the color of white.


Ruki holds out her D-Arc to the orb of light. “Digi-Core Download!” she calls out as a beam of light flies outs and hits the Digi-Core and it flies into her D-Arc’s screen where it is stored. The body of Dokumon turns into red particle data bits and blows away.
END


Digi-Strip Downloading.


Renamon had Digivolve into Kyuubimon much to Ruki’s surprise. She watches with amazement as Kyuubimon lowers her head down as the area around her grows darker. Her nine tails fan out and the blue flames grow larger. Dokumon charged at Kyuubimon to finish her off.


“Fox Tail Inferno!” she growls opening her eyes and glaring at Dokumon as she unleashes her nine fireballs that fly out and slams into Dokumon who screams in pain and her body grows dark as a huge white Digi-strip surrounds it’s body.


Ruki pulls out her D-Arc as it glows. “Digi-Strip Download!” she calls out as the Digi-Strip flies out and enters the screen of the D-Arc as it finishes the body of Dokumon fades and turns into a red light, which flies away. Ruki pushes a button on her D-Arc and the screen glows as it creates a card in the air through green data lines of squares. After it finishes, Ruki smiles as it’s Dokumon’s attack.
END


Cards Information

Use of Digimon Cards

This is with Ruki/Renamon and Takato/Guilmon from Tamers.


As a young boy walks in a park wearing blue jeans and white shirt thinks while his goggles over his head rests comfortably. His partner is a red dinosaur with black rings and markings around it’s body enjoying the world when the dinosaur’s eyes turn and he looks to his right where a golden streak is shown kicking the dinosaur into the bushes. Shocked the boy ran to his partner.

“Guilmon are you okay?” he asks when he notices a young girl wearing blue jeans and a white tee shirt with blue sleeves and a broken light blue heart in front.

Upon her head is a pair of sunglasses and her hair up in a ponytail the color of auburn red. Standing in front of her was a tall, slender golden yellow fox standing on hind legs with purple sleeves and purple markings under her eyes and around her front thigh legs. The yin yang symbol was on her sleeves near her pawed hands.

“What a weakling. Let’s get this on.” Stated Ruki sternly as the boy Takato stood up.

“Okay, go easy on me. I’ve never done this before.” Takato says weakly.

Never done what before?” Ruki asks with slight confusion when it clicks. “Oh how cleaver. Renamon.” She orders as Renamon steps towards Guilmon and leaps into the air with her arms crossed in front of her chest as a shining diamond forms in the middle.

“Diamond Storm!” she calls out as the diamond shatters into pieces of crystal shards around her body and is sent flying to Guilmon with the uncrossing of her arms.

“Wait! Call her off.” protests Takato as the shards hit Guilmon on the head, but he is unharmed and growls while he walks towards Renamon keeping his red eyes upon her as she lands on a tree branch.

“Pyro Sphere!” shouted Guilmon opening his mouth and releasing a huge fireball to Renamon who dodges it by leaping off the branch towards Guilmon.

Guilmon jumps into Renamon’s landing as the two roll around in the dirt, Guilmon having his mouth locked onto one of Renamon’s arms. However, Renamon finds herself pinned as Takato rants on about how terrible it is and how Guilmon doesn’t listen.

“Renamon that’s sloppy!” growls Ruki as she takes out a card from her back pocket and brings out her blue and silver D-Arc which she slices the card through on the top. With her D-Arc glowing in response, energy winds pick up around her body. “Digi-Modify, Armor Activate!” she calls out as she finishes the slice of the card and holds it up as her D-Arc shines and red the card.

Renamon rises up her free hand as data bits formed around her pawed hand and formed a square like armor, which she places to Guilmon’s head on the side.

“Guilmon please listen to me.” Takato worries as Guilmon returns to normal and looks towards Takato.

“Takatomon?” he asks confused and just as Renamon places the armor to Guilmon’s head he turns his head as she releases the attack only to be pushed away from the force and Guilmon running to his tamer. “I’m sorry, I listen now. Guilmon did good?”

“What is that thing? I’m not getting any data on it.” Ruki says as she looks to her D-Arc as it formed a picture of Guilmon but nothing on him.

“Who is this guy?” asked Renamon in her mind as she tries to pinpoint his data.

“Renamon don’t just stand there attack!” orders Ruki as Renamon looks to her slightly surprised. “Renamon what are you waiting for? Do it now!”

With that Renamon leaps high into the air ready to attack as Guilmon and Takato gasp in shock at the oncoming Renamon.
END



Card Slashing.

The same thing happens over and over again, but the cards depend on the words. Taking out a card as the D-Arc glows.


“DigiModify!” slicing the card through the D-Arc as energy winds pick up around the tamer and the D-Arc reads the card. “Speed Activate!” after finishing the slice and holding it up in the air, TriAmbermon suddenly gets faster and becomes a streak of colors.

Modifying Cards.







Starting Deck (Should be 50 to start off with.)
5 Speed Chip Boosts- Speeds up your Digimon.
5 Power Chip Boosts- Makes your Digimon’s Strength Stronger.
5 Energy Chip Boosts- when your Digimon is near death or out of energy.
5 Defense Chip Boosts- Lets your Digimon’s Defense stronger.
5 Hyper Chip Boosts- Makes your Digimon’s Special Ability stronger.
5 Strength Chip Boosts- Makes your Digimon’s Physical Attacks stronger.
4 Hyper Wing- Gives your Digimon wings to fly
4 Digi-Gnomes Alias- Able to create an illusion of your Digimon.
3 Gnome Clones- Creates two clones of your Digimon to help in-group fights.
3 Counter Force- Able to counter energy attacks.
3 Counter Strike- Able to counter physical attacks.
2 Expand Chip- Expands the Digimon’s body to an overwhelming size.
1 Meramon’s Flames- Engulfs the Digimon with flames for protection.

Speed Chip Boost- Say Speed Activate
Power Chip Boost- Say Power Activate
Energy Chip Boost- Say Energy Power Activate
Defense Chip Boost- Say Defense Power Activate
Hyper Chip Boost- Say Hyper Chip Activate
Strength Chip Boost- Say Strength Activate
Hyper Wing- Say Hyper Wing Activate
Digi-Gnomes Alias- Say Digi-Alias Activate
Gnome Cones- Say “Digimon’s Name like Renamon” Clones Activate
Counter Force- Say Counter Force Activate
Counter Strike- Say Counter Strike Activate
Expand Chip- Say Expand Body Activate
Meramon’s Flames- Say Meramon’s Flamed Body Activate.
(Remember that this is only the starting cards that everyone starts off with. Your Crest Card’s and Blue Cards comes through out your journey. Once you use the card(s) you must minus it from your deck as it is already de-pleaded and you cannot access it again unless you have gotten another one by defeating a Digimon. The only exception is the Crest Card and the Blue Cards as well as the Totem Cards as the single card can be used as many times as needed.)

There you have it. Everything you need to know about Digimon and what my expectations are. Someone told me that not everyone knows what Digimon is, so if this doesn't tell you what Digimon is, than nothing will except for you to break down and actually watch Digimon.

Here is my Role Play.
Past Plot

Eight children were paired up with strange creatures to save two worlds from destruction and darkness. With their crest traits, they managed to destroy the four Digital Masters and one all powerful being of evil, born from emotions of pain, torment, hurt, anger, sadness. The world was safe, but a few years later, a new evil was born and had managed to take a new plot. To once again destroy the worlds, but using a human child. To return back to peace, three more children were chosen and together with help from unlikely creatures, defeated a past enemy. With the worlds safe, harmony began to form in both worlds. Peace had reined over the worlds, but in one part of our world has only known about these special creatures known as Digital Monsters or short, Digimon. Japan was the only country that knew about these Digimon and the spread of Digimon living together with humans expanded far greater than expected. The Japanese DigiDestines have been around to ensure the safety. The International DigiDestines however, do not have the advantage as the government though of Digimon as a threat created by the Japanese Government to conquer the rest of the world. How wrong they were.

Darkness began to settle once again, but this time, it came from a place unlike the past. This Darkness formed in the most coldest and farthest place of the United States. Because of its cold climate and uninhabited nature from any known humans was an ideal place for it to spread. This place is unknown as of late, however, it wasn’t unlooked by another shadowed creature.

With the rising darkness, the Guardians of the Digital World were blind and did not activate any powers to choose children except one. This Unknown Digimon was afraid that evil and darkness might try a new way of conquering both worlds. After all, Darkness cannot live without Light and Light cannot live without Darkness. If it were to happen, the powers would be released and sent to a selected group of human children to become the new DigiDestines.

Reality Plot


You know Digimon are not real and only wished they were. You have little knowledge of the Japanese Government, which kept the secret of Digimon being real from the rest of the world. Even the International DigiDestines keep the secret to themselves under orders of the Japanese Government. You look at your created Digimon and wish that he or she were real and that you would be able to become a real DigiDestine, despite knowing it's only in your wildest dreams. You hear news about mysterious things going on, but you pay no mind to it as you feel it doesn't bother you. However, you find a strange device, which appears to you. You take the device in your hand and are shocked to find that it's a Digivice. It is nothing like the Digivices you've seen in the first two seasons and somehow you know it is called a D-Arc. When you push a button, you noticed an egg has hatched and you don't seen anything inside. You are suddenly surrounded by a thick, off white cloud or mist and are shocked to find your Digimon alive and in person.


Starting Plot


Please try to use you're own imagination to come up with how you find your Digimon creation. Everyone has either dreamt of being in an adventure with a favorite Digimon or there own created Digimon and human characters. What if, your characters and your made up Digimon were alive and real? All Digimon for that matter. What if, everything that we have seen on Digimon was true? This is where you get to experience everything. From reality thrown upside down and inside out. ((I know it sounds like Digimon Tamers but that's what FDD is all about.)) This happens before the Tamers Season, about 20 years in to the future from Daisuke (Davis) and Taichi (Tai)'s group. They are all older and no longer able to do much saving like they did when they were younger. So it's up to you.

Rules

You must make sure you read the Attachments before you go on as it holds the important details. I hope they are easy to understand.

1. You cannot have the main Digimon from the shows. (Example, Agumon, Gabumon Biyomon, Palmon, Tentomon, Patamon, Gatomon, Veemon, Hawkmon, Armadillomon, Wormmon, Renamon, Guilmon, Terriermon, Impmon) But you can have a Digimon you've seen on the show that didn't play a big role such as Leomon or Gazimon. But I really want you to have your own created Digimon. So if you don't have a created Digimon or don't have the time to create one on you're own, don't worry about it.

2. Veemon and a few other main Digimon have more than one Digivolution line that follows the same looking form. I might accept them as a possibility if you use a different evolution line from which was given in the show.

3. You can use different colored main Digimon such as Dark, Black, White, or Silver. (My favorite Digimon is Renamon and if I wanted to role-play her as my partner, I'd have her become either a virus known as DarkRenamon or a vaccine known as SilverRenamon and her Digivolutions, or make up my own.)

4. You cannot have any of the DigiDestine's crests from the show.

5. You must try to have lots of fun.

6. Please be nice in real life. Yes I know we get on each others nerves from time to time, but please, try to keep on a happy face out of character. (I should know I’m a flaming hothead.)

7. Be Original. Don't copycat.

8. Make sure your personality goes along with your back round history. This was brought up in another forum.

9. We all have an order we do post. It's obvious that the leader will be the first to start. Once you've posted, do not post again until everyone has posted. Yes this could take a long time, but it's only fair to though who can't get on everyday like some of us. ^_^

10. It will be written in a type of chapter or episode. (This is my originality for this type of role-play. Well I guess it would be chapters since we are not in a movie or anything.) Everyone gets to have there own episode in which everyone can participate. Like in the shows, each partner Digimon had a whole episode dedicated to them and their Digimon partner when Digivolving to the next level. That means if you're not the star of that episode/chapter, you must play a minor role. Everyone will also have a type of hidden past revealed if your character has something like that.

11. No god-mode. I hate people who think they have an all-powerful Digimon that no one can beat. Get real people, everyone has weaknesses, even Digimon. The all I'm powerful thing and you can't touch me doesn't go in this role-play. And let me tell you. This here is your first warning. If I find anyone acting like this, I will confront you about it via email. (That is your second warning.) After that, no more warnings and I will ask for you to not participate as part of the group and will have you ignored or taken out. So remember, this here is your first warning. Your second warning is in your email, after that, you're out. I don’t like to exclude others so please, No god-mode.

12. No DNA Digivolving and no armor Digivolving. Bio Merging is limited to only a few chosen, and Totem Powers will be given to those who have their partner Digimon deleted. Sorry, once your Digimon Partner is deleted, they will not be able to be revived like in the first two seasons of Digimon.

13. This role-play is for serious role-players only who will take this as if it was real. Anyone can sign up, but I shall decide who gets to participate.

14. Your posts must be at least three or more paragraphs long. Meaning you need three separate paragraph or more.

15. Have lots of fun . . . Oh wait, I already said that. ^_^


Sign Up Profile


Human

Name: (What is your character's name? Last name preferred, but not mandatory)

Age: (6 to 18)

Height: (5'4", 5'5" 1/2? How much feet and inches is your character? Doesn’t have to be my example.)

Gender: (Male or Female)

Crests: (Purity, Responsibility, and so forth.)

Personality: (Funny, Distant, Afraid to show feelings and so forth. Please have at least a three to four lines long.)

Description: (What does your character look like? Red Hair? Brown Hair? Blue Eyes? Red Eyes? And so forth. What are they wearing? Need to be three to four lines long. You can have a picture of your character posted here instead of writing it out.)

History: (Give a little history of how your character's personality came to be or give us a brief story of what happened to you that makes your character act this way. Three or more separate paragraphs long please.)


Digimon

Name: (Agumon, Pacemon)

Pronunciation: (Ah-goo-mahn, Pay-s-mahn. Do the best you can; even I have problems with this.)

Level: (I really prefer Child Level as a base.)

Type: (Vaccine, Viral, Data, or Free)

Groups: (Reptile, Dinosaur, Dragon, Warrior, Sorceress, so on and so forth.)

Description: (What your Digimon looks like. Please go in details. Will accept a picture if you don’t want to describe it.)

Techniques: (Pepper Breath, Petit Fire, Cat's Eye Beam so on and so forth. Must have a description of how the attacks are unleashed.)

Evolutions: (Greymon, MetalGreymon, WarGreymon, GeoGreymon, ShineGreymon, MirageGreymon, so on and so forth.)

Element: (You must have one of these elements throughout the Digivolution. Fire, Light, Wind, Ice, Thunder, Water, Earth, Wood, Steel, and Dark.) Only one element on the team. I will not have two elements of the same type.

Personality: (What is your Digimon's personality. It doesn't need to be lengthy as it is tough to keep in mind two personalities. Unless you're experienced in role-playing and can handle doing two different personalities. Some people find it challenging. Most Digimon who are paired up with humans take on the same personality as their human partners, but if you wanted your Digimon to have a different personality from your own character, that is okay. Just keep in mind that you need to keep both personalities in tact.)

Spirit Digimon


Name: (Name of the Digimon Spirit such as Sakuyamon, Justimon.)

Pronunciation: (Sa-koo-yah-mahn, Just-e-mahn. Again try your best.)

Attribute: Variable (Doesn’t have a choice to be Vaccine, Virus, Data, or Free)

Group: (Legendary Warrior, Knight, Warrior, Wizard,)

Element: (Based on your Digimon partners attacks for the Ultimate level.)

Techniques: (Kitty Rings- The silver stripes glow and fly off the back as they turn into spinning silver flames which slashes at the foes, Pepper Breath- Opens mouth and releases a fireball to slam into foes.)

Only used if you decide to delete your Digimon partner in the series. Mind you not everyone will be granted this. There will be only a selected few.


Example Role-Play: (Give a brief role-play of you're character(s). I prefer you to start out from the beginning like how your character grew up or what was one great challenge to them. Must be at least three separate paragraphs or more in length.)

So tell me what you all think. I know it took two posts, but hey, someone wanted to have an explanation of Digimon so I got it. I also decided I wanted it to be my way of Digivolutions, than I realized I had to explain how the cards work and what are the starting cards. After all, A Modified D-Arc will be posted up also and this controles and helps your partner Digimon digivolve as well as helps you to locate other Digimon and other Digivices. Digivices is what helps a Digimon partner to Digivolve the D-Arc is just a modified version of it.

Of course all this information will be attached once I get this approved, but I also have to learn to attach and I'll work on it right now. But please, let me know if anyone doesn't know what Digimon is. With that, would people be interested in role-playing?

Đ a r κ
January 20th, 2007, 09:19 PM
@Bijou: Well being a KH fanatic, I like the idea and would love to sign up but what about dawn? You know Light, dawn, Darkness, Twilight, X, cross road.

@Netta: Sorry, I know nothing about digimon. I used to but not anymore.

Loki
January 20th, 2007, 09:24 PM
What? Dawn? Crossroads? I'm not super knowledgable about KH, sorry, but anyway, Twilight used to be there, but I'm keeping it simple for retards like me. xP So all in all, I have no idea what you're talking about. xD

Netta
January 20th, 2007, 09:31 PM
@Bijou: Well being a KH fanatic, I like the idea and would love to sign up but what about dawn? You know Light, dawn, Darkness, Twilight, X, cross road.

@Netta: Sorry, I know nothing about digimon. I used to but not anymore.


Korinku: That is fine. That is why I have two long posts. It explains what Digimon is, how I want the Digivolutions to work, my version of the Digital World, and groups, and types, and all that stuff. It even has examples. *laughs at self* This is why I put down the infromation because people don't know what Digimon is and at least this way, they will get an ideah of Digimon at least Fictional DigiDestines and Digimon or FDD as it's known. Normally I would have posted it on the attachment, but I haven't figured out how to use it just yet and am working on it right now.

Đ a r κ
January 20th, 2007, 09:49 PM
What? Dawn? Crossroads? I'm not super knowledgable about KH, sorry, but anyway, Twilight used to be there, but I'm keeping it simple for retards like me. xP So all in all, I have no idea what you're talking about. xD

Eh it's ok, it isn't anything really important, just some stuff that a kingdom dork like me would know.:D By the way, I too am working on a kh rp and i'm trying to make it one of my best rp's. Here's the title

Key's of Destiny

Scarlet Weather
January 21st, 2007, 11:30 AM
Alright, here goes...

Bijou: I don't know why so many people love Kingdom Hearts. I just don't like it that much- however, your roleplay sounds okay, so go ahead if you want.

Netta: I'm not a huge digimon fan- I thought the first two animated seasons were horrible, loved the third, and kind of fell asleep during the fourth. I think the fifth one might be good, but I'm not sure... anyway, I say sure, go ahead.

Korinku: Umm... I know Destiny Bladers refers to the Keyblades, but that title might need a change- if anything, it sounds like a Beyblade roleplay. (And I remember Beyblade- that show was a little odd. Super powered spirits living in TOPS?)

typeZERO
January 21st, 2007, 08:08 PM
I've been talking with my friends about how great it would be to make a megaman EXE RP on PC. Well , I was planning on one and thought about putting the plot and sign up sheet here for your guys' opinions. It's based off of Megaman battle network 6 and will have the following: Beast out , cross fusion , and full sychro. So if you can , tell me what you think.

plot

It's been thirty years since the calamity of the cybeasts Gregar and Falzer. New technoligy has been created , more people have gotten navis , and more calamities have occured along with this. For some reason , navis have been reported to go wild and attack other navis in the cyberworld and people in the real world. Investigators captured a navi and ran a test on him. While scanning a mark showed up on his forehead and his danger ratings went off the charts. The mark was that of the cybeast , Gregar , and a mark of Falzer. They found more Navis with the marks , and had to put them in a container to protect everyone from their immense power. A weird virus seemed to have spread all over the cyberworld. They named this cyber disease the Beast Virus.

Three weeks after the the naming of the virus , teens and kids alike joined up with their navis to help find out what or who made the virus. These people have cybeast infected navis too , but the navis themselves were able to tame the cybeasts within them. But they are cautious , for they can still go out of control even if they tamed it. A suspected group has been seen and their organization name is the Crimson Calamity. You are one of the children and it is time to investigate what has been going on in the organization and see if they're making any harmful files or objects that can cause danger in both worlds...

But beware...For they have many powerful navis and can probably obliterate their opponent if they're powerful enough. And they might have Beast Virus infected navis too.

Sign up sheet
Name:
Age: (10-18)
gender: (male or female)
Navi's gender: (same as above)
Navi's name: (can choose if they end in man if they're a boy or if not then a name you make up.)
Navi's abilities: (can only have three. Excluding cybeast transformation and use of battle chips. No overkill and no immortality abilities.)
Navi's default weapon: (sword , fists , buster , or none.)
Personality: (at least five or six sentences long)
appearance: (five or six sentences)
navi appearance: (same as above. Include their beast out and cross fusion appearances.Also include full synchro appearance.)
Navi's personality: (Same as above. 5 or 6 sentences.)
History: (don't really care as long as it's 4 sentences and makes sense.)
other: (any other info about your character?)

Rules
1.No god modding , only little control over others.
2. Again , no overkill abilities.
3:all pc rules apply
4.posts have to be at least 4 sentences. And make sure there's no forum talk like this: Dude , u got ur butt 0wnzed!

Scarlet Weather
January 22nd, 2007, 04:36 AM
Lightning: Uh... a little explanation might be in order. I don't know what the heck Megaman is about, so everything you just stated sounds like gibberish to me. Yeah. A little clarification is in order, I'd say.

typeZERO
January 22nd, 2007, 09:21 PM
well , every game and season have a different plot and info on what's happening , so , I'll just give you info on the game. if that's enough. warning to mmbn megaman battle network fans , spoiler warnings of plot and ending.

Spoiler warning: Plot and/or ending details follow.
Lan and his family have moved to Cyber City. At his new school, he makes friends with three individuals who go by the names Mick (Kojiro), Tab (Asuta) and Iris. To Lan's surprise, one of two teachers is former WWW (World Three) member Mr. Match (Hinoken), or Shuuko, depending on the version. However, WWW has returned and is causing trouble that not even the Official NetBattlers can control, so MegaMan decides to investigate. Here, MegaMan discovers that the Cybeasts Falzar and Gregar have something to do with a mysterious conspiracy. When a WWW navi captures one of the Cybeasts, MegaMan captures the other Cybeast and gains the "Beast Out" ability. Now armed with Beast Out, Lan and MegaMan must fight WWW and stop whatever they're up to. At first it seems that Baryl (Barrel) and Colonel were the culprits of the conspiracy, but later in the end he admits that he was working for Dr. Wily himself. Dr. Wily raised Baryl when his own father was off fighting in a war, and in his kindness for Baryl, he was distracted from his plans for revenge of the Net society. He also created Colonel, the "perfect navi" who had the ability to feel kindness and had powers of machine manipulation. However, once Baryl's father, his only true friend was killed in battle, Wily began to feel the past thoughts of revenge and modified Colonel to become a military grade Navi. The other programs were modified into a separate Navi named Iris. She was to be a military control Navi, until she met Lan, who showed her that humans were not bloodthirsty killers. As a precaution, Wily planted a program forbidding these Navis to merge by having then explode if they were ever to do so. To hatch his latest scheme to destroy the Net and the world, he built 2 enormous Copybots and installed the Falzer and Gregar Cybeasts in it...until Baryl decided what was truly right and began to battle Falzar/Gregar (depending on which version). MegaMan also began to battle the other Cybeast, until in a twist, the Cybeast took over MegaMan's body once again. Colonel and Iris began the risky merging, and with their heightened powers they ripped the Cybeast from MegaMan's body. However, instead of separating, they planned to sacrifice themselves to destroy the Cybeasts once and for all. With this, Wily regained his repressed kindness, and atoned for his crimes, and became a good person again. Baryl lived on to deliver Lan Iris's copybot at his graduation. After the credits, the game shows us the world after 20 years. Dr. Wily, now a good person, has designed new incarnations of Colonel and Iris. Iris is a program that finds problems in the net and fixes them while Colonel automatically searchs out viruses and criminals and deletes them. Also, Lan Hikari, now a scientist, is revealed to have married Mayl . They have a son named Patch (Raito).

Scarlet Weather
January 23rd, 2007, 12:57 PM
Um... first of all, what the heck is a navi? Second, what is a Cybeast? And third, how does all of this work? That's kind of what I meant....

typeZERO
January 23rd, 2007, 07:06 PM
okay I'll answer those questions
1.a navi is like a cybernetic human , which is stored in a PET-Personal Terminal- and can do things like check your mail , check your checking account , all of the stuff you do online.
2.the cybeasts are huge animal like cybernetic creatures. The falcon cybeast , Falzer , was used as a program to destroy Gregar and was created by a scientist. The scientist lost control of Falzer and it started to destroy the cyberworld. The lion cybeast , Gregar , was made from the fragments of GOSPEL , the huge lion like virus that started to destroy the cyberworld.They were finally sealed in a pit before they were let out again.

3.well , if you mean the roleplay well , I'll explain.

Okay so the villians are the suspected Crimson Calamity gang. You can transform into about like ten or 8 or more cross fusions ,which is like a spirit fusion of navis. You can also beast out , where you can transform into your falzer or gregar forms. Plus there is the Cross beast fusion , which is when you cross fuse or beast out while you're in a cross fusion or beast form. Like if you cross fuse while in beast form you will turn into a Cross beast fusion. Same thing works with beast out then cross fusion. You can make your own navi , add an ability for it , selct its default weapon , and choose its appearance. This roleplay will have you deleting viruses and fighting and deleting evil navis. I'll probably add a twist in the plot at the last part of the roleplay if it succeeds and we get to the end. You'll also be able to make a 2nd character and navi but 2 is the limit.

Loki
January 23rd, 2007, 07:26 PM
A MEGAMAN RP. I'll definetely review this tomorrow, but in the meantime...

Check your spelling. :/

Technology, not Technilogy or however it's spelled in your plot. Also, I find it easier if you have a seperate sign-up form for your Navi. :/ It's just more organized to me, but it's your call.

typeZERO
January 23rd, 2007, 07:35 PM
Lol , yeah I was using my mom's laptop which had no spellcheck , this teaches me to read more...-_-

Also yeah I thought about making a seperate sign-up sheet for navis because then it wouldn't be all cluttered up. I'll edit that when I post a thread for the RP , which should be by thursday california pacific time.

Loki
January 24th, 2007, 02:53 PM
Okay, read the plot and I have to say it looks pretty interesting. Although, you'll notice that the Megaman Knowledgable Population that RP's is very little, as I don't even know what a Cybeast is. Oh wait, no I do now, nevermind.

Anyhow, you might want to explain that in your plot or something.

It seems as if it's a pretty good RP though. Spelling is the biggest issue. That 'Technoligy' thing is really bugging me. xDD

parallelzero
January 24th, 2007, 10:16 PM
Yup, really rough. I'm gonna add some stuff to the actual plot to make it longer, I think.

Danny Phantom: Calling All Phantoms

Plot
It has been almost three years since a boy of Amity Park, Danny Fenton, received ghost powers. After stumbling into a ghost portal created by his parents, Danny was suddenly provided these strange powers at the age of fourteen. Over these three years, young Danny made many a foe out of ghosts from the Ghost Zone. Skulker, Nicolai Technus, Desiree, Walker, and Danny’s nemesis, Vlad Masters are a few of these enemies.

As ghost activity began to rise higher and higher, Danny eventually had to reveal his secret identity to his parents. Of course, they accepted it, and began to aid their son in his fight. As a result, Team Phantom was created for the purpose of tracking ghost activity and dealing with it appropriately. The original members of the team were Jack, Maddie, Jazz, and Danny Fenton, alongside his friends Tucker Foley and Samantha “Sam” Manson. More recently, the group has been beginning to receive help from ghosts as well, and Dani Fenton (Danny’s female clone created by Vlad) joined the group as well. Armed with a new arsenal full of gadgets, this group has become quite powerful.

That isn’t to say that the villains in this tale have been just sitting around the entire time. A majority of Team Phantom’s foes are now gathered under the organization known as H.A.U.N.T, which is under the leadership of Vlad Masters. Over the years, Vlad had been experimenting in attempt to create the perfect team of villains capable of finally succeeding in combat against Team Phantom. What these experiments are exactly remains unknown. What is known, however, is that both the world of the living, and the Ghost Zone will be endangered if H.A.U.N.T succeeds in accomplishing its goals. However, that’s why you’re soon to be enlisted in Team Phantom.

Overview
Basically, you’re either a ghost or a human who has somehow received ghost powers, and you’ve ended up getting yourself involved in the conflict between Team Phantom and H.A.U.N.T. However, which side are you on?

I have one word of advice: If you don’t understand something, or don’t know who a certain character is, check the Danny Phantom Wiki Page.

Form

Name:
Age: (If you’re a ghost, just state how old you look)
Gender: (If you’re one of those creative types who likes to somehow gender flip partway through, I don’t mind, buuuut just tell me first.)
Ghost or Human with Powers?:
Appearance: (Give a human appearance and a ghost appearance, unless you’re just a ghost)
Personality:
Powers: (I mean aside from the usual stuff. ie: floating, super strength, speed, walking up walls, phasing through things, etc.)
Other: (Whatever I’m missing)

RP Sample:

Light_Azumarill
January 26th, 2007, 09:35 AM
Eeee! A Danny Phantom RP! XD Yes, well, anyway, I'd definitely join it. I'd add more to the plot, like you said, and really I think it's the only thing that's lacking. The rest of it sounds good. ^^ Maybe add a section to the sign-up like Team Phantom/H.A.U.N.T.: so that people can plainly state what side their character will be on, but that can also just be stated somewhere like in the personality. *shrug*

Alter Ego
January 26th, 2007, 09:56 AM
@Origin: Nyah, agreeing with LA's comments here. Your plot is definitely well written, though, as even I who have never watched that show feel like I've got a fair idea of what it's about. Good job. But yeah, it could use some more direction for the start. I mean, the two sides will obviously clash but...how? Where? When? Maybe you could provide some current schemes for both sides so people could just kind of work their way onward from there. ^-^

Đ a r κ
January 26th, 2007, 10:14 AM
KINGDOM HEARTS III

KEYS OF DESTINTY

Past

After receiving a letter from King Mikey, Sora and his friends (Riku, Kairi, Donald, and Goofy) set off to Disney castle to speak with the king. The king spoke of a new evil organization that planed on obtaining the power of the keyblade and wanted to rule the worlds. This evil organization called themselves, Chasers. These where ordinary people who had the ability to control the shadows and much, much more. Using nobody and heartless alike, these Chasers are looking for people who are, or have been in possession of a keyblade. The king then spoke of a war that was about to take place. It was said that every one thousand years a war takes place that proves who the keyblade master is and that person will weild the ultimate keyblade which is called CrossRoad. It brings together everyone who has a keyblade, and because of this war, the Chasers are going to be there waiting for everyone. Xehanort is one of the Chasers. He is in fact the leader of the Chasers and is the one who wants to rule the worlds and have the power of the keyblade.

Present

The Chasers have sent heartless and nobody to each world to find the hearts of each world. Sora and his friends have set off to find these Chasers, stop their plan to rule the worlds and to try to stop this war from happening. But, another organization has also formed during this. They call themselves The Masters. This organization brings together different key bladers who are going to work together to win the war. Two other things that have happened during all of this is a new form which is called Varonis form. It is much like the valor form except it makes the users outfit turn green and it allows the user to teleport to short distances. The other thing is the way the keybladers use their form changing. Instead of forming together with a freind, they must think of a very powerful and strong memory. As the war gets closer, a new planet begins to form called, Crossroad. This planet is the planet where the war shall take place.

Default Characters
Sora
Kairi
Riku
Donald
Goofy

Forms
Valor
Wisdom
Master
Varonis (New):Reserved
Final
ANTI


Worlds (Will add more as the story goes on)
Beast's Castle
Olympus Coliseum
The Land Of Dragons
Port Royal
Agrabah
Halloween Town
Twilight Town
Hallow bastion/ Radiant Garden
Wonderland
Deep Jungle
Neverland
Destiny Islands

Keyblades
Kingdom key= 0 Points (Free to everyone)
Oathkeeper= 12 points
Fenrir= 15 points
Oblivion= 13 points
Sweet Memory= 4 points
Hidden Dragon= 8 points
Star seeker= 7 points
Gull Wing= 5 points
Fallow The Wind= 6 points
Monochrome= 5 points
Photon Debugger= 5 points
Mysterious Abyss= 4 points
Fatal Crest= 9 points
Hero's Crest= 8 points
Circle Of Life= 8 points
Wishing Lamp= 5 points
Bond Of Flame= 7 points :Reserved
Rumbling Rose= 7 points
Guardian Soul= 6 points
Sleeping Lion= 6 points
Decisive Pumpkin= 8 points

Magic (Each one of these are open for two people only.)
Fire
Blizzard
Thunder
Cure
Gravity
Stop
Aero

Sign up

Name: (One of the defaults or your own character)

Age: (10 - 20)

Gender:

Personality: (Four good sentences of description)

Description: (Four good sentences of description)

Starting Form: (Only one)

Starting Magic: (Only two)

Location: (Which world are you in. If you are one of the defaults, you must be in the same world as the other people who pick default are in. For example: Sora= Destiny Islands. Riku= Destiny islands)

Title: (Chasers/ Masters/ Loner. This is only for the people who make their own character)

Keyblade/s: (One or two. 1-20 points. If you make your own custom keyblade, run it by me and i'll tell you wether it is acceptable or not.)

Moves: (Can be moves you made up or moves from the game)

Da Rules
1.All PC rules apply
2.No god modding, very little control over others
3.NO less than four sentences when you post.

parallelzero
January 27th, 2007, 05:59 PM
Okay, I added a bit more to the plot, and I added two new sections to the form. I just need a little feedback before I decide to put it into action.

Danny Phantom: Calling All Phantoms

Plot
It has been almost three years since a boy of Amity Park, Danny Fenton, received ghost powers. After stumbling into a ghost portal created by his parents, Danny was suddenly provided these strange powers at the age of fourteen. Over these three years, young Danny made many a foe out of ghosts from the Ghost Zone. Skulker, Nicolai Technus, Desiree, Walker, and Danny’s nemesis, Vlad Masters are a few of these enemies.

As ghost activity began to rise higher and higher, Danny eventually had to reveal his secret identity to his parents. Of course, they accepted it, and began to aid their son in his fight. As a result, Team Phantom was created for the purpose of tracking ghost activity and dealing with it appropriately. The original members of the team were Jack, Maddie, Jazz, and Danny Fenton, alongside his friends Tucker Foley and Samantha “Sam” Manson. More recently, the group has been beginning to receive help from ghosts as well, and Dani Fenton (Danny’s female clone created by Vlad) joined the group as well. Armed with an arsenal full of gadgets, both old and new, this group has become quite powerful.

That isn’t to say that the villains in this tale have been just sitting around the entire time. A majority of Team Phantom’s foes are now gathered under the organization known as H.A.U.N.T, which is under the leadership of Vlad Masters. Over the years, Vlad had been experimenting in attempt to create the perfect team of villains capable of finally succeeding in combat against Team Phantom.

Although motivated by the increase in ghost activity, that is not the soul purpose. Vlad has grown especially bitter over the years as he continued to clash with Danny. These feelings have brought him down an inescusable path that involves testing on humans and ghosts alike. With the help of the technical genius of the ghost Technus, the tests have escalated into a threat that Team Phantom can't ignore.

Both the world of the living, and the Ghost Zone will be endangered if H.A.U.N.T succeeds in accomplishing its goals. Most people would say something along the lines of "Why is the Ghost Zone endangered? Ghosts can't die." New information has been recieved that H.A.U.N.T successfully developed a weapon capable of completely destroying ghosts, making them even more of a threat.

For whatever reasoning, you have joined up with one of the two side: Team Phantom or H.A.U.N.T. It will be your duty to engage the enemy in a variety of environments while keeping order between the realm of the living, and the realm of the dead. From now on, your life will be extremely dangerous, but it is unavoidable.

Useful Tip

I have one word of advice: If you don’t understand something, or don’t know who a certain character is, check the Danny Phantom Wiki Page.

Form

Name:
Age: (If you’re a ghost, just state how old you look)
Gender: (If you’re one of those creative types who likes to somehow gender flip partway through, I don’t mind, buuuut just tell me first.)
Ghost or Human with Powers?:
Team Phantom or H.A.U.N.T?:
Appearance: (Give a human appearance and a ghost appearance, unless you’re just a ghost)
Personality:
History:
Powers: (I mean aside from the usual stuff. ie: floating, super strength, speed, walking up walls, phasing through things, etc.)
Other: (Whatever I’m missing)

RP Sample:

Zaiku
January 27th, 2007, 09:01 PM
@Korinku: All right a Kh RP, I seriously gotta join that!

Midnight_Dragon249
January 28th, 2007, 10:44 AM
@Korinku: Oooh, a KH RP~! But, if possible, could we use a custom keyblade?

Tensaiji
January 28th, 2007, 11:34 AM
KINGDOM HEARTS III

KEYS OF DESTINTY

Past

After receiving a letter from King Mikey, Sora and his friends (Riku, Kairi, Donald, and Goofy) set off to Disney castle to speak with the king. The king spoke of a new evil organization that planed on obtaining the power of the keyblade and wanted to rule the worlds. This evil organization called themselves, Chasers. These where ordinary people who had the ability to control the shadows and much, much more. Using nobody and heartless alike, these Chasers are looking for people who are, or have been in possession of a keyblade. The king then spoke of a war that was about to take place. It was said that every one thousand years a war takes place that proves who the keyblade master is and that person will wind the ultimate keyblade which is called CrossRoad. It brings together everyone who has a keyblade, and because of this war, the Chasers are going to be there waiting for everyone. Xehanort is one of the Chasers. He is in fact the leader of the Chasers and is the one who wants to rule the worlds and have the power of the keyblade.

Present

The Chasers have sent heartless and nobody to each world to find the hearts of each world. Sora and his friends have set off to find these Chasers, stop their plan to rule the worlds and to try to stop this war from happening. But, another organization has also formed during this. They call themselves The Masters. This organization brings together different key bladers who are going to work together to win the war. Another thing that has happened during all of this is a new form which is called Varonis form. It is much like the valor form except it makes the users outfit turn green and it allows the user to teleport to short distances.

Default Characters
Sora
Kairi
Riku
Donald
Goofy

Forms
Valor
Wisdom
Master
Varonis (New)
Final
ANTI


Worlds (Will add more as the story goes on)
Beast's Castle
Olympus Coliseum
The Land Of Dragons
Port Royal
Agrabah
Halloween Town
Twilight Town
Hallow bastion/ Radiant Garden
Wonderland
Deep Jungle
Neverland
Destiny Islands

Keyblades
Kingdom key (Free to everyone)
Oathkeeper
Fenrir
Oblivion
Sweet Memory
Hidden Dragon
Star seeker
Gull Wing
Fallow The Wind
Monochrome
Photon Debugger
Mysterious Abyss
Fatal Crest
Hero's Crest
Circle Of Life
Wishing Lamp
Bond Of Flame
Rumbling Rose
Guardian Soul
Sleeping Lion
Decisive Pumpkin

Magic
Fire
Blizzard
Thunder
Cure
Gravity
Stop
Aero

Sign up

Name: (One of the defaults or your own character)

Age: (10 - 20)

Gender:

Personality: (Four good sentences of description)

Description: (Four good sentences of description)

Forms: (Only one)

Magic: (Only two)

Location: (Which world are you in. If you are one of the defaults, you must be in the same world as the other people who pick default are in. For example: Sora= Destiny Islands. Riku= Destiny islands)

Title: (Chasers/ Masters/ Loner. This is only for the people who make their own character)

Keyblade/s: (One or two)

Moves: (Can be moves you made up or moves from the game)

Da Rules
1.All PC rules apply
2.No god modding, very little control over others
3.NO less than four sentences when you post.


Dude, you have to reserve a spot for me when you make the roleplay. I'm taking Varonis suit with Gravity and with the Bond of Flame keyblade.:D Make sure no one takes that.

Scarlet Weather
January 28th, 2007, 12:05 PM
Korinku: Eh, I didn't like Kingdom Hearts that much. Killing heartless wasn't fun at all, and it doesn't help that even though I love role-playing games, I'm really bad at them. I can say, however, that I'm wondering how everyone utilizes these forms- Sora does it by merging with Donald, Goofy, or both as I recall, but how does everyone else do it?

Origin: Not a huge Danny Phantom fan, but I'm seriously thinking about joining your rp. It looks entertaining. I'm not sure whether "human with ghost powers" should be an option, since Danny and Vlad were specialized cases, but it's your rp, and if it gives me a chance to come up with a creative explanation for a character's powers I'm really not complaining. Good job.

Đ a r κ
January 28th, 2007, 12:34 PM
Thank you ACC, I have thought about what you said and have come to an idea and it is now in the plot.

Edit: Here is a preview of the next RP that i'm working on.


Island Of Mysteries

Random_Fan
February 1st, 2007, 07:19 PM
Hmm...odd, it seems that my RP hasn't showed up, and I put it up this morning. I used to come here a lot, and I know from before that moderators had to check it out before letting it be put up...but it's been awhile already. Did I do something wrong?

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The Star in the Sky

It can only be said that stars are actually sun. There are many above us, and some of us admire them. Some of us make a living looking at the stars in the skies. They show a light to us that we love. They are symbols that we love. It can only be said that only a few can really take in star gazing for what it really is, and that would be a reminder of how small we are.

To many, it’s been a long while since they seen a star. Or at least took the time to look up and admire. In life, in this world, we pass these and go on about ourselves, getting ready for what is really important to us. To some would be our loved ones and to others would be to bring food to the table. We do this all the time.

So when a star is brighter than it should, and stays that way for several days, why doesn’t anyone notice? Why does it take a month for scientists, some who look into the sky every day, to see this star in the sky? See it growing, larger than other stars? Why must it take a priest to say it’s the Star of Bethlehem warning us for some, and very few at that, to actually look into the sky?

One month, the star went unnoticed. After the end of that December it was, coming to January, three days before the first of January, it went all over the world. There was news everywhere of the star. All they had for it was that it was an incredibly huge star, and nothing more.

The day before the first of January, right as we all would count down for the New Year, the star seemed to just turn off from the sky. Then in the next moment, it burst with light.

The Pokémon world has been peaceful and dangerous at the same time. The star exploding really caused uproar, everywhere. They didn’t need to find the news that every Pokémon, anywhere, had disappeared from both wild and captivity. That meant that the only living beings in the Pokémonless world were humans. Picture it as if all animals had disappeared from the face of the Earth. Wow. Way to start the New Year.

What happens in the year that follows is all that this RP is about. You do what you want. Do you want to find the mystery of the star, or just walk around aimlessly? Either way, time is running out. The change is coming, the world is changing. It’s time for a world without Pokémon. And then in just long months that follow, the remaking of Pokémon.

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First of all, I’d like to say that no, this isn’t about a bunch of people running around for an aimless goal without Pokémon. After the first three days without Pokémon, in RP time, things will change. You’ll see. (or just look at the join sheet) >_>

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Rules

Come on guys, you should know them by now. Don’t screw this RP up with three word posts, flames, spamming, character controlling, and advertising. It’s wrong and makes the RP and I look bad. Don’t make me look back, I just returned from a long absence from this site. If you do something like this, then you’re out of the RP.

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Sign-up Sheet

If you guys were wondering where this plot will go, all you have to do is look at one little detail here and you’ll see. And I’ve even explained right next to that detail.

Name: (This is crucial for the RP, and you know it. For all I care, pick Lala Girl as your name. No, I’m not serious about that, but come on, be serious about your name. ;) )

Age: (You know what this is. Any age matters, but if you plan on something below nine years old, don’t act older than you should.)

Gender: (There is no way you’re starting without this thing to tell you apart.)

Location: (What region and city are you in? Be aware that if no one joins this RP but say only two, we need to stick in the same region, or else it could just get boring. I’m picking Kanto, though if a majority is somewhere else, then I’m making my character take that ferry to the most populated region.)

Pokémon to Become: (DUN DUN DUN! See, I told you. Anyways, after the first 3 days in RP time, you’ll notice your body features are slightly changing. By April in RP time, you’ll be full Pokémon. As me being the RP Game Master, I need to know that you’ll pick a Pokémon that is not a legendary. And don’t go picking something like Charizard. If you want Charizard, you need to pick Charmander. Same goes for every other evolution Pokémon. If you are wondering if you can evolve, yes you can, but only after April 1 in RP time. Don’t evolve the second April 1 hits unless you have a stone evolution Pokémon and have a stone with you.)

Description: (Even though this will be changing as the RP goes, it’s still needed. 3 or more sentences please.)

Personality: (It’d be nice if your personality matched the Pokémon you become, but it isn’t necessary. You can be the nicest person in the world and be in the most dangerous, mean looking Pokémon body. 3 or more sentences please.)

History: (This, I’ll let you do without. It’s your choice if you want to add this, we’re not going to be looking at your history much. However, if you put a history, there’s a chance you can use it at dramatic moments in the RP. That way, you won’t have to be thinking about a twist you’d like to add all the time and just look here. More than just one sentence. I know you can do that.)

Love: (This RP isn’t action, but there will be if you want. As in you battling other people. I’m making this RP for dramatic reasons though. Here, I want you to put if you are single and interested or not interested, or if you are just plain in love already. However, only pick in love if you plan to RP with someone else and be in love with them in the RP. That means that yes, you can invite your friends to RP and ask to be each others lover. If you want lover, but don’t have anyone to RP with, then you can simply ask someone that signed with single and interested if you want to have an already established relationship. I’m having mine as single and interested, but if you want, PM me to be having an already established relationship. This works for me only if you’re the opposite gender. If you want some female/female and male/male, well, that’s your deal. Ask someone else, not me. >_>)

Other: (Whatever it is you want on here. 3 or more sentences)

RP Sample: (I almost forgot about this. Show me you’re writing. If it’s good, then your accepted. Show me a paragraph or two. Possibly more if you want.)

My Sheet

Name: Tom Rivor (Some might remember Rivor from an old RP. Not the same person, or related, if those that were there when I used to RP a lot.)

Age: Fifteen

Gender: Male

Location: Kanto

Pokémon to Become: Psyduck (PMD says I was like a Psyduck, so I’m going with that.)

Description: Tom has Black hair, somewhat at a long length. Many would say from behind, he looks like an old rock band members, from when there were what they would call “hair bands.” His face is young, and you can almost never tell when he is reluctant, sorry, or thinking. His eyes are a dark green color. He believes he needs a shave, and a few would agree with the little shag he has going on. He’s a little taller than his dad, at 5’9.

Personality: Tom likes to be the one that makes a joke or two, but he’s no joker. In fact, at any moment, he can become very serious. Usually, he’ll hear something loud and clear as an order, but still be unable to follow through either because he forgot or just couldn’t be helped to do so. Everything he does is usually at the last minute. At the same time, he tries to do everything that is a given opportunity. He grabs onto any opportunity, even if he doesn’t follow through with it. Overall, Tom’s a really nice guy.

History: Some of Tom’s friends would usually make friendly fun of him by his eyes. Tom’s eyes are different than that of the rest of his family. No one else in his family has green eyes, it’s only him. He feels special because of that. He also had tried to sustain a relationship with a girl before, but it ended up falling in his face. He couldn’t offer much but what a friend could, and though that may have been enough, Tom agreed that a friend is someone you trust and can cry on. None of that was happening in the relationship. He moved and never saw his girlfriend again. Partly because she had gone on a Pokémon journey. He has also experienced tragedy in his family, with the death of his younger brother when he was nine. Like any other person, he doesn’t like to talk about the day. He also hates to be reminded that his brother isn’t with him anymore, with everyone saying sorry and whatnot.

Love: Single and Interested

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Final Notes

Guys, in the past of me making RPs, I used to be very picky. If something in my RP was not going my way, I would politely ask for the poster to change their post. However, I’m just gonna push play on this one and let it rip.

Here, do whatever you want, as long as it doesn’t involve getting another RPer killed. Unless that RPer said it was okay. I’m not going to hold anything against you. If you want to get Ash and co. involved, fine, whatever. I’m not very fond of the anime, but I’m just going to let it go.

I’ll also like to say that even though you may only have one character, you can have sub-characters. These characters can range from your RP Mom or Dad to the guy down the street that always says high to you. I’ll let you do that without sign-up forms as long as you keep your sign-up character as the main character to your story. I don’t want to see that guy down the street doing every minute he spends in a day in your post when you’re nowhere around. If you want that, make a character sheet. There’s a way around that, and that is that if your character is somewhere else, and you believe it’s needed to show what this character down the street is doing for a later twist, then fine. But don’t show too much of this character and not your sign-up character.

Now, lastly, don’t wait for me. Guys, if I’m not here for an entire week of the RP, trust me, I’m not coming back. Just go on without me. Remember, this RP is currently directionless. As you go on, you can give a direction yourselves. I want this to be entirely told by you guys and me, not just me.

Alright, as to end this, I’ll say that I’ll be saying when the days change, so if something is up with you and another RPer, I’ll post saying something like, “It’s time to wrap it up guys,” telling you that the next day or week in RP time is near. Yes, I’ll switch it from weeks too. Like many, I’m anxious to become full Pokémon too, so this is going to be a speedy for April.

Okay, I don’t believe I have anything left to say. With that, let us begin.

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I don't believe there's anything wrong with it...

Random_Fan
February 1st, 2007, 07:27 PM
Nevermind, it just showed up. >_>;

Loki
February 1st, 2007, 07:27 PM
No, I'm sorry that was totally my bad, I was really busy today so I didn't get the chance to glance at the Pokemon RP Section.

But really, it's usually smarter if you wait ... more then 12 hours. < <;; Because you know, I have a life too, even though that's hard to believe, I know. xD

If you wait two or three days, it'll show up for sure. ^^

Please don't double post.

Scales
February 1st, 2007, 08:17 PM
Since this is offtopic I will post it

Im thinking of making a Halo Roleplay. Is anyone interested?

Đ a r κ
February 1st, 2007, 08:26 PM
Island Of Time & Myth

It is said that those who don't know history are doomed to repeat it. Well, a group of people are about to learn what that means, the hard way. Long ago on an island far out in the Atlantic, a man tried to steal an ancient stone that controls the very fabric of time and space. A group of seven adults, had tried to stop this evil man from obtaining this stone. These adults had ability's. The power of fire, water, earth, nature/ speech to animals, gravity, wind, telepathy, and Jinxes. The evil man was an old member of this group. he is the one possesses the ability of jinxes which cause things that wouldn't normally happen to people (Imagine just standing on a sidewalk, then your foot gets stuck in a hole that suddenly appeared). His name is Melez. He was always the member of the team to cause trouble but, the rest of the team never suspected that one of their own would cause so much terror. The group failed in saving the stone and Melez then sentenced them to death by using the stone. Melez then used the stone to make things to his likings. But just like any human, he grew old. And knowing that he could not cheat death, he used the power of the stone to make sure that he would come back to life in the years soon to come. But before he died, he jinxed the stone, that way no one would be able to get to it.


Now, five thousand years later, the stone has returned to it's unknown spot on the island. As the stone returned, so did Melez, but in the form of a teen ager. The stone has been acting weird do to the jinx that was put on it years ago. Now the stone has been making time drifts on the island and some are being turned into myths. But this is only on the island because the stone's power can not reach farther than the island but as the days go by, the stone's power is getting farther and farther and will soon cover the earth completely. Now, a group of kids have woken to a present. Some have been given an egg, jewelery, etc. These gifts contain the seven (Fire, water, earth, nature/ animals, gravity, wind, and telepathy) powers of the elders. These kids have been chosen to be the warriors of time. They must go to the island and fight their way through the time drifts in order to find the stone. How these kids will get to the island is unknown now, but their destiny to stop Melez, rewrite time and save the stone has been set.

-Spots open-
Melez:
Spot 1.
Spot 2.
Spot 3.
Spot 4.
Spot 5.
Spot 6.
Spot 7.

Sign up

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Personality:

Description:


Gift: (And also explain it's characteristics.)

Ability: (One of the seven ability's. Not Jinxes)

Scarlet Weather
February 2nd, 2007, 04:15 AM
Well, now that I'm finished being confused over Bijou's apparent gender swap... (just kidding, don't fry me!) I'm ready to rate an rp.

Korinku: If the team got put to death, wouldn't Melez share their fate as a member?

Random_Fan: Interesting RP idea. By the way, you definitely want to make "Love" subject to change if you haven't already.

Đ a r κ
February 2nd, 2007, 04:25 AM
@OOC: No, because he is the one who killed them. I have edited the plot to say that he killed them.

Random_Fan
February 2nd, 2007, 05:15 AM
Hmm...Yeah, I'm guessing now that it is put up. The love was there to create a dramatization of events as we get nearer to April first, and as we pull from April first, so I thought it'd be nice to have. >_>

I'll give it another short while until I decide to make any sudden changes. If nothing, then it's back here and I won't put it up until I see a better change I guess. Or at least one that people will read and join at. >.>;

Loki
February 3rd, 2007, 08:30 PM
OH MY GAWD: You noticed?! I didn't think anyone but Lightning Rider (who addressed me as 'He') noticed! Me and David genderswapped. :x Dude. You are so awesome. You NOTICED. xD But, it's gone by now. xD

Anyhow, Korinku, you want to explain why the stone was acting weird? ^^; That would probably explain it, and lengthen it a little more.

By the way... does anyone have anything else to add to the little advice I got for my KH RP? xD It's on the other page, so I guess that's why it was bypassed- and Korinku posted his own, so I'm just wondering.

Scarlet Weather
February 4th, 2007, 04:57 AM
Well, when someone besides Toomi gives me advice on MY rp plot, which is maybe tow to four pages back, I'll let you know. XD Just kidding, just kidding, advice on the way...

Okay, that plot idea is freakin' cool, Bijou. And you're talkin' to a guy who hates Kingdom Hearts, here. I might just want to join this one....

Alter Ego
February 4th, 2007, 05:36 AM
@Art_Critic_Cubone: Hmm...comments, eh? Well, besides the fact that the main villain could use a bit more credit to his name (Anyone could have gone and made a vague treath like that, you know. What has this guy done to prove his big words and merit a ginormous bounty being placed on his head?) I think the chi system could use some improvement.

I mean, with this system your character can only be good at one thing and one thing only, which kind of gives certain types an unfair advantage over others. What good is the barrier kind - for instance - if anyone who knows a single thing about chi is aware of the fact that they can't do anything except cover behind the barrier they created and can simply wait until the chi user runs out of the funky shizzle that makes them tick? I mean, they are going to run out, right? If not, then that is pretty lame. If yes, how is chi replenished? Is it like chakra in Naruto (I.e. Replenished by rest) or something else? Also, I should think that the Materialization/Manipulation people are seriously screwed. I mean, the moment they use their power against someone stronger they're dead meat because all that other person has to do is break the thingie and BAM, you're dead. Doesn't look like an appealing career choice to me. T_T

The way I see it, you should try to merge those different kinds into a few larger ones, or at least allow the possibility of following more than one discipline. Reinforcement, for instance, seems like a logical complement for regeneration (I mean, that's basically just 'reinforcing' your metabolism, right? The principle seems like that of reinforcement but applied to different places than the muscles), similarly, barrier would seem to fit under materialization (After all, you are basically just willing a barrier of energy into existence :O). Making the disciplines wider would allow more room for creativity with the specifics of a character's skills which, to me at least, would make the RP more appealing. The way it is, just imagine a master of the barrier discipline explaining his life's work as "I make barriers. Yeah. But because I've made barriers longer than you do my barrier is better than your barrier. In your face!". Not very inspiring, is it? xD

Other than that, it looks just fine and dandy. ^-^

@Bijou: Ehh...I must admit being vaguely confused. I mean yeah, the good and bad guys are going to have a big squabble over the Nobodies, but...care to be a bit more specific? Kingdom Hearts can only be formed through the release of countless real hearts, and if the heart of all worlds has been sealed (As you pointed out) then the possibility to accomplish that at all has been disabled. That was kind of the whole point with sealing all those keyholes. -.- Besides, what's with the three keyblade masters thing? I mean, if there can only be three then I'm afraid that all of those have been taken already because of Sora, Riku, and Mickey (And let's not forget Kairi swinging her little floral keyblade in the world that never was either, that makes four keyblade weilders out of the three possible ones, and that's not counting Roxas separately :O), unless you are somehow planning to A) have the mysteriously disappear off the face of the world, or B) Somehow have them pass along the keyblading to others, which doesn't seem very likely or logical. Finally, how on earth did the good guys get wind of these plans to begin with? The twilight realm was pretty much sealed off and I don't think that any of the original heroes would be in the mood to hike back over there just for the heck of it.

So yeah, a bit of explanation and clarification, please? ^-^

Đ a r κ
February 4th, 2007, 06:19 AM
OK, I have added a new ability, have explained why the stone is acting weird and have put in an extra sentence to lengthen it a bit more. Is there anything else that I could do to make the plot better?

Scarlet Weather
February 4th, 2007, 10:37 AM
Alter_Ego: Yeah, I didn't explain that much about DL because he's supposed to remain a vague mystery throughout most of the plot, but I didn't realize I wasn't giving him enough credit. Poor DL. As for my "Chi" systems, I was basing it off of, for the most part, the concept of "Nen" from Hunter x Hunter and the concept of Chi in the comic book version of "Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon" (where it is specifically stated that as someone gets older, their life force grows, causing their chi to become more powerful.) The reason I didn't combine reinforcement and regeneration was because I didn't want to make a complete clone of Hunter x Hunter's nen classes. (Hence the addition of the barrier and destructive class.) I gave regeneration to the beast-people because I figured that being part animal, their strength would already have increased, and I didn't want to make any one type of person more powerful then another. In response to what you pointed out about barrier users, I must remind you that chi is only one form of attack- martial arts skills and natural strength could be used by them for offense, while they could simply activate and deactivate their barrier as needed to block attacks. Materialization/Manipulation users can reabsorb their weapons, so they could simply avoid the powerful blows that would destroy their weaponry. But you are right in saying that they have a major weakness there and that my chi system needs more explanation. I'll get right to work on that... and thank you for taking the time to comment.

Korinku: Better. But keep in mind that you might want to describe exactly what "Jinxes" do. What the hell is a jinx? Is it just a bad-luck spell, or what? Does it curse somebody for life, or is it temporary? Is it simply the power to alter probability and make accidents that wouldn't normally be probable happen? WHAT? But yeah, I do like the rp, if only because it gives me the chance to insert a character of mine that I couldn't fit in anywhere else.

Edit: Updated my RP plot. Go back and comment on it. I dare you...

Loki
February 4th, 2007, 06:53 PM
AE: WOAH. Now you gots me confused. xDD Unfortunately, all the hunky dorie detailed crappy crap isn't something you should talk to me about. xD Talk to Paopu, who made the plot originally~ And considering Paopu's probably PLAYED the game before... xD *shot*

To be honest I've never played Kingdom Hearts. I can't, because it makes me upchuckerz. :x *you didn't see that* SO I had absolutely no idea what you just said. 8D *shot* Twilight Worlds? Deh? Whaz dat? *shot*

Alter Ego
February 5th, 2007, 01:57 AM
@ACC: Eh, you already mentioned increased healing rate in the description of the beast folk, so are you now saying that it's a discipline for them rather than something they have on account of being part-animal? It's kind of confusing. xP Anyway, if there can be no difference in strengths and weaknesses between races, what's the point of having them at all? Also, Regeneration on its own seems kind of underpowered. I mean, just imagine one of those folks running into a destruction-class person of comparable power. Being able to heal your wounds faster doesn't really help once you've been blasted into little meaty chunks by enormous balls of energy, does it? Similarly, Barrier is underpowered because it would take a great deal of concentration to manage dropping the barrier just in time to attack and the raise it again before the counter-attack.Even so, they would be at a disadvantage against the comparatively overpowered destruction-class super saiyain people who could let all hell loose the moment that barrier drops. xP Besides, barriering still looks very dull...imagine giving up DBZ-style blasting powers for the unbridled joy of creating...wow, a barrier. All that work and you'll still only have one move. Would they at least be able to shamelessly abuse the barriering thing by smacking their opponents over the head with it? A bit more balance for the powers, please.

@Bijou: That does beg the question, if you've never played KH and don't have a clue about the setting that RP is supposed to be played in, then how on earth were you expecting to pull that RP off? The RP master should always make sure to...umm...master the RP, I guess. xP If you don't, then I can see the plotline getting really, REALLY messed up, especially if the RPers don't understand it that well either. So yeah, maybe stick to the territory you know? ^-^

Đ a r κ
February 5th, 2007, 04:20 PM
OK, I have explained about jinxes.

I was thinking about this while reading my book in 5th block and I want to see what you guys think.

THE END

Soul's and Human's

Far out of our galaxy is a planet called heart. It has all of the contents needed for life. It's inhabitants are a race called souls. They are aliens, although they take the form of us humans, but there intelligence is far greater than ours. They have been observing earth for thousands of years but we have never payed attention to all the signs given to us (Crop circle's, ect.). These signs have been telling us to leave earth or suffer the consequences. The C.I.A. have known about this ever since the first crop circle and have been trying to find ways to avoid these aliens. They have kept this from us because they don't want people to think that the world was about to end and cause a riot. What the souls have in plan for us is horrific, but what they really want is earth, because deep within the earth is of course the core. Why would they want it you ask? Because, it's power can help them in getting control of the sun. Then after they get the power of the sun, they can go on to take the power of the other suns in the entire solar system. The souls have now sent meteors to earth witch contain teleporting devises in them, then the soul's will use those to get to earth. After they get to earth they will wipe out our entire population. The only way we can survice is by entering the teleportation devises and destroy the soul'd power sorce.

Witches/ Wizards

At Wiz Wiken's school for witches and wizards, the headmaster is preparing his student's for the soul's. Yes, the C.I.A. has informed the wizards and witches about the soul's as well. The C.I.A. knows about alot of things that we don't. Almost everyone knows what a witch or a wizard is, but i'll tell you anyway. A witches and a wizard's are people who study and perform in the art of magic. A witch is a girl wizard and a wizard is of course a boy wizard. At Wiz Wiken's school, the kids learn how to perfect their magic ability's and use them to help people. They have also noticed the meteors that are close to hitting earth and are studying the most useful magic for this invasion.

Dragonist

Dragonist, the name kinda gives away, what they are. They are people who breed dragons and use the magic given to them from the dragon's egg. Once, the breeder touches the egg, he/ she gains that dragon's ability's. There are a few type of dragons, there is the aqua dragon, which are usually blue and swim in water. The breeder of the aqua dragon gains the ability to move water. The fire dragon, the most common dragon, it breaths fire out of it's mouth and fly's. The breeder of this dragon gains the ability of fire. Ezektra is an electricity dragon, it's scales have the ability to pull static to them, then when the dragon touches something, it will get electrocuted. The breeder of this dragon, gains the exact same ability, but is also the only person who can fly on this dragon's back. And finally, the Grohara. This is the rarest of dragons, due to it's ability which is to turn into a ghost-like figure. The breeder of this dragon gains the ability to walk through anything and is also the only person who can ride on this dragon's back while it is in it's ghost-like form. The dragonist have been told of the soon to come invasion and are preparing for the soul's attack.


Sign Up (For Soul's)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Good/evil: (I never said that they were all bad.)
Weapon:

Sign Up (For Witches and Wizard's)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Wand: (Explain your wand)
Broom?: (Do you have a broom stick? If so, explain it)
Spell's: (What are the spell's that you know?)
Pets: (Black cat, mouse, owl, or frog. Explain your pet.)

Sign Up (For Dragonist)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Dragon: (What does your dragon look like?)
Dragon's/ Your ability's: (What can you and your dragon do?)
Weapon:

Sign Up (For C.I.A. agents)

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Weapon/ s: (Think of anything you have wanted to be created but is too far-feched to be real.)

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Don't be too harsh, I only thought of this for 15 minutes until my teacher told us to put up our books.

Loki
February 5th, 2007, 04:33 PM
Korinku: As much as I love new RP's, I think you should slow down, and list all of your idea's on a word document, and try to incorperate them all into a really good plot that can keep the RP moving for a long time. :/ You've got so many different idea's, and they're all great, but they just, stand-still. But, that's just my opinion. You might want to go into more depth about why the mer-people want to show themselves to the public, and please tell me the C.I.A. isn't the Central Intelligence Agency. :// That'd be kind of... weird for an RP that includes Mer-people, Wizards, Witches, and Dragon-Tamers.

AE: I've played it before! (Not that that really counts for anything, as I couldn't even get off the Destiny Islands) And anyhow, it's an RP that I made with a friend who has played KH. ^^;

BUT I did understand the Keyblade Master stuff- "Wielder's" I guess I should've said, but that still doesn't solve the problem, I'm just babbling. Well, forget it. I don't think I'll post it at this rate anyhow. xD

Đ a r κ
February 5th, 2007, 04:47 PM
Korinku: As much as I love new RP's, I think you should slow down, and list all of your idea's on a word document, and try to incorperate them all into a really good plot that can keep the RP moving for a long time. :/ You've got so many different idea's, and they're all great, but they just, stand-still. But, that's just my opinion. You might want to go into more depth about why the mer-people want to show themselves to the public, and please tell me the C.I.A. isn't the Central Intelligence Agency. :// That'd be kind of... weird for an RP that includes Mer-people, Wizards, Witches, and Dragon-Tamers.

AE: I've played it before! (Not that that really counts for anything, as I couldn't even get off the Destiny Islands) And anyhow, it's an RP that I made with a friend who has played KH. ^^;

BUT I did understand the Keyblade Master stuff- "Wielder's" I guess I should've said, but that still doesn't solve the problem, I'm just babbling. Well, forget it. I don't think I'll post it at this rate anyhow. xD

Well, I couldn't really think of any other way to have everyone know about the soul's but I guess it wouldn't hurt if they didn't know about the invasion. Why can't it be the C.I.A.? I don't see how that would be weird. And don't worry, I won't be posting this anytime soon, because every day I come up with new ideas in my 5th block class so i'll try to add the new idea I get to this. I don't know why, but it is always in my 5th block class when I get most of my idea's.

Alter Ego
February 6th, 2007, 09:17 AM
@Korinku: Agreeing with Bijou here. Inspiration is all well and good, but you should take more time to hone your ideas if you want to make an RP that really lasts. Most of mine are fusions of three or four individual ideas, and that's not counting the inspiration-born NPCs as the separate ideas they are. Besides, if you want to maintain even reasonable RP quality then there's a limit to how many RPs you can run simultaneously, although the specifics of that limit depend on your available computer time. Personally, I've found that limit to be three. xP

On the CIA thing...can you say 'cliché'? The CIA is only paralleled by the FBI in its blatant overuse in conjuncture with anything and everything, and besides, do you honestly think that anyone could write a plausible CIA representation? I think not. Trust me, it didn't work for Alias and it won't work for you. Just say no to the government conspiracies. xP

Scarlet Weather
February 6th, 2007, 01:22 PM
Umm...

AE: Yo, I guess I didn't make things clear. Your chi only manifests itself as ONE unique ability in a class of disciplines. Let me put it this way: Let's say my character is of the Destruction class, and his chi can be channeled into an uber-powerful super-saiyan-esque energy blast once per day. That's ALL he can do with his chi. Against a barrier-type person, he could blast them, but if they brought up a wall, they could shield themselves partially, at least, then beat him into a pulp. You dig? And as for the others, everyone has ONE unique power, except reinforcement/regeneration, where all members essentially have the same ability. And Destructors don't become Barriers- it's vice-versa. I put multiple races just for the heck of it, since my friend and I did that when we were like, I don't know how young and came up with this game in the first place, and also because it adds variety to the characters. If one race were stronger then the others, everyone would want to play it, I'd think. Anyway, my chi system is similar enough to Nen from Hunter x Hunter that I'm seriously considering just linking to the wikipedia article on that for an explanation, but if I did that the whole thing may as well just be a Hunter x Hunter roleplay and that wasn't what I intended. And it isn't that they teach a discipline, persay, it's that someone is born with the ability to use that type of chi. Oh, yes, Barrier people can shamelessly beat people with their wall, I edited that into the roleplay plot. (I want to ask "Did you even read my updates, since some of your questions are already answered in the plot itself now?" but I'm fairly sure you did and it's probably just bad communication on my part. Right?)

Korinku: What in the name of Articuno's back hair and Moltres's bizarre wings are the CIA and aliens doing alongside fantasy characters? I mean, I know originality is valued but... yeah, the CIA are involved with conspiracies all over the place, I'm sure, but nothing as cool as that. I think.

Bijou: Oh... you never played it either. THAT's why I like it! XD

Korinku (again): "Think of Jinx from Teen Titans" may seem like a logical explanation to you, but I haven't seen that show in the past three years, and I've pretty much forgotten all of the characters. Could you at least change the name of the power so it seems a little more obvious to EVERYONE?

Alter Ego
February 7th, 2007, 12:14 AM
@ACC: To be honest with you, I only found out about the updates after I had posted and didn't manage to edit all of the redundant questions out. To prevent stuff like this from happening you could just make a notification (Note, this means a new post. A one-line edit to a previous non-plot post is not a very effective method as people are not likely to look at it again) of the updates, m'kay? Saves plenty of headaches for all concerned, yes? Anyway, thanks for clarifying the system, although on the once per day thing: can you control the amount you release in one go to increase the number of times you can do it? As in, say...unleashing two super-saiyainesque blasts at half power instead of one at full per day? Also, would one with the regeneration ability be able to accelerate the trait from a weak flow all day to insanely fast but only for a short period? Just something that struck me. Other than that, the powers are looking better now, mmmyeesss...I think they're pretty balanced. Speaking of balance, there are other ways to balance out the races than make them all the same. Some, for instance, could have greater physical strength and stamina but could suffer in chi control or dexterity, others could be better at control and generally enjoy a high IQ but be physically frail...that sort of thing. Still, that's your call. Nyu, don't think I can find anything else to improve on. ^-^

Scarlet Weather
February 7th, 2007, 04:57 AM
AE: Sweetness! I'm preparing to start the roleplay as we speak! And you're right when you say that you could control the amount of chi in your super-saiyanesque blast... that was kind of a bad example on my part. Anyway, on to the creation!

Korinku: In that CIA roleplay, who in their right mind would play a Mer-Person if they could be a dragonist or wizard? Mer-people are vastly underpowered. And I still want to know in certain terms what "Jinxes" are, with something a little more descriptive then "Like Jinx from Teen Titans".

Phanima
February 9th, 2007, 06:35 PM
This was inspired by Lightning Rider's RP and a few other concepts that I've been juggling around with. I'm still kinda wary on how the battling will go and I'm not really sure if I should make the Battle Chip feature more dominant or not. It's called "The Battle Network Tournament", a MegaMan RP.

Plot:

The result of the official N1 Grand Prix net-battle tournament left a large number of the population confused and disappointed in its public coverage. The destruction of the tournament’s facilities forced the premature conclusion of the competition as well as the official announcement of the tournament champion. The committee assigned to the publication of the unfortunate fallout of the competition has decided to re-establish the tournament and its proceedings.

The committee has announced that a new tournament will be held and will be known as the Battle Network Tournament. The competition has also been announced to being held within the region of Megalopolis.

Megalopolis has been credited for its efficient and rapid evolution into the latest technological age. The mass population survives on the heart of the Megalopolis Tower where most of the city’s problems and services are handled. The Megalopolis Tower has also been announced to be where the latest Battle Network Tournament is to be held.
The tower stands within the centre of the city where many of the citizens’ daily activities are monitored and handled. Many of the businesses that surround the bustling metropolis connect to the tower in order to maintain a stable and efficient hold over their companies. This is where most of the city’s services are routed and dealt with. This tower also provides the perfect environment for the latest holding of the Battle Network Tournament, and is where the world’s greatest Operators and Net Navis are brought together to battle.

Your Role:

You as a Net Navi’s Operator have enrolled yourself into the Battle Network Tournament in Megalopolis. As a Operator, you will be conducting and working together with your Net Navi, as well as other Operators and Navis in order to progress through the tournament. There will be a number of events that will occur during the tournament proceedings and whether you are participating for professional or personal reasons, many of you share the same goal, to become the Battle Network Tournament champion.

Background Information:

PET: PETs are instruments that are primarily used for containing a Net Navi, but also host a vast number of other built-in devices. Operators use PETs to communicate with their Net Navis, as well as to receive and send calls and e-mails, surf the internet, download Battle Chips, and a number of other custom features.

Net Navi: Net Navis are customisable mini programs that are stored within a PET. There personalities, colour scheme, clothing, abilities, physical appearance, and a number of other features are each unique to themselves and their Operator. Interactive and independent, once initiated, Net Navis operate upon their own will and intelligence provided through customised preinstalled programs.

Operator: Operators are those who contain Net Navis as their own, whether as partners, companions, or even slaves. Operators use Net Navis to handle a variety of tasks that often involve electronic devices and the internet. Some use Net Navis for battle against unwanted programs and viruses, and at times even other Net Navis in conditions such that of a tournament or competition. Operators also decide how their Net Navis’ think, look, and act. Battle Chips are also only accessible to a Net Navi through the assistance of an Operator.

Battle Chips: Most standard Net Navis have a custom tool or weapon that allows him, her, or it to combat against other programs and viruses. Battle Chips are much like a Net Navi’s custom weapon but provide the Navi with more power, defence, or other abilities depending on the chip used. Each chip has a one-time effect before becoming unusable until the Net Navi disengages from combat with another program or virus. Battle Chips are much like secondary weapons for a Net Navi that are only accessible through the input of an Operator.

Battle Network Tournament: The BNT is a fictional competition designed for this RP. Operators command their Net Navis to battle one another throughout the tournament in order to decide who is the strongest, the most skilled, and the most strong willed.

Rules:

1. The concept of this RP is based around Net Battling, so participants will be engaged in battles with one another. Because of the structure of the plot, participants will be defeated and thus eliminated from the tournament and depending on the situation, the RP as well. The outcome of Net Battles will be completely up to the two participants engaged in battle and no one else (send each other PM’s, e-mail each other, etc.). Of course, if neither of you can come to a decision, I will decide who will win and who will lose.

2. Net Battles will last for a maximum of 15 posts for one-on-one battles and 20 posts for two-on-two battles. This should give both participants enough time to describe their battle in descriptive detail as well as come to a decision on who will win the battle. The maximum number of posts applies to all participants in a specific Net Battle.

3. Battle Chips can be used to add dramatic effect to the battle but will not give an advantage to any participant. They serve no other purpose than to make Net Battles seem more dramatic and exciting, since the outcome of the match will be decided by the participants engaged in the battle beforehand.

4. No relations can be made to characters or Net Navis from the manga, anime, or any other MegaMan related services. This is an OC (original character) RP with MegaMan concepts.

5. Spelling, grammar, and vocabulary are all important. Make sure your posts are legible and understandable. Also, any posts in the first-person perspective will not be allowed. All posts must be written in the third-person perspective.

6. Standard PC rules should also be followed.

7. If there is something you don’t understand and can’t be bothered finding out about or if you just don’t like anything about the rules or RP, then don’t bother joining. I’m giving you fair warning on what to expect in the RP so do not complain when something happens and you don’t like it. Read the rules and make sure you understand them.

Scales
February 16th, 2007, 09:48 PM
Toomi this sounds like a cool megaman plot. I have always wanted to relive the Grand Prix

Loki
February 17th, 2007, 07:22 AM
ACC: *raises hand* Not that I'd join, but I'd be a mer-person if I did. Assumption's like that are no fun- Bad habit ACC, *tsk tsk* Baaaad habit! xDD

And Toomi, I've been itching for a good Megaman RP, I'd probably join, but since I've been in a horrible mood lately... < <;; I guess it'd depend on who else signed-up. xDD;

Alter Ego
February 17th, 2007, 10:08 AM
@Toomi: Nyu, it looks like a decent plot overall, but somehow it just left me with a...well, bland feeling. Now I'm familiar with the whole battle network setting thing, but even so the whole plot just didn't strike me as involving enough. I mean yeah, there's a tournament...so what? Even for people who know what a big thing netbattling is and how that whole system works I think a bit of a recap and establishing of context would be in order. I mean, at least some elaboration on what happened during the grand prix and people's reactions to it. Considering what happened, wouldn't they be more cautious about throwing big tournaments like that? That sort of thing. Also, the plot seems kind of aimless as well, but if you have planned out some great events for the tournament that will give the RP the momentum it needs then pay this comment no mind. ^-^

Đ a r κ
February 17th, 2007, 12:11 PM
THE END

10 BIRDS

There is a legend of ten birds. five caused evil while the other five prevented the evil. Each five had a name, Earth's Death was the name of the evil ones. There ability's are things that happen almost every day. The name and ability of those birds are, Storm bird: controlling storms, 0 Bird: control over freezing temperatures, Sun Bird: control over the sun and it's heat, Quaker Bird: earthquakes, Demon Bird: turn into a ghost, can control people through eye contact. The other five where called Earths Saviors. Bird of Life: can heal wounds and rid demons, Tele Bird: move things with it's mind, Mother Bird: control nature and talk to animals, Intele Bird: has high intelligence, Pro Bird: can create force fields. Earth's Death are the cause of the bad things that have accured on earth such as the ice age, and the earth turning into a giant snow ball millions of years ago. But Earth's Saviors are the ones who have cleaned up those messes. The 10 Birds are dead but their spirits live, giving their abilitys to people who they trust to use their powers as the want them too. 10 people have gained these abilitys. Earth's Death is starting to plan earth's demize by trieing to make the earth turn into a snow ball again.

Soul's and Human's

Far out of our galaxy is a planet called heart. It has all of the contents needed for life. It's inhabitants are a race called souls. They are aliens, although they take the form of us humans, but there intelligence is far greater than ours. They have been observing earth for thousands of years. Long ago when the earth was a giant snow ball, the sun's rays bounced off earth and out into space. Those rayes flew all the way to Heart. Because Heart already had a sun, their planet grew amazingly hot do to the other sun's ray's. After valcanos erupted on earth and undid the snow ball affect, everything went back to normal. The Souls grew angry with earth and planed on revenge. They have given us signs of their invasion but we have never payed attention to all the signs given to us (Crop circle's, ect.). These signs have been telling us to leave earth or suffer the consequences. What the souls have in plan for us is horrific, but what they really want is earth, because deep within the earth is of course the core. Why would they want it you ask? Because, it's power can help them in getting control of our sun. Then after they get the power of the sun, they can go on to take the power of the other suns in the entire solar system and gain ultimate power over the universe. The souls have now sent meteors to earth which contain teleporting devises in them, then the soul's will use those to get to earth. After they get to earth they will wipe out our entire population. The only way we can survice is by entering the teleportation devises and destroy the soul's power sorce.

Witches/ Wizards

At Wiz Wiken's school for witches and wizards, the headmaster is preparing his student's for the soul's. Almost everyone knows what a witch or a wizard is, but i'll tell you anyway. A witches and a wizard's are people who study and perform in the art of magic. A witch is a girl wizard and a wizard is of course a boy wizard. At Wiz Wiken's school, the kids learn how to perfect their magic ability's and use them to help people. They have also noticed the meteors that are close to hitting earth and are studying the most useful magic for this invasion.

Dragonist

Dragonist, the name kinda gives away, what they are. They are people who breed dragons and use the magic given to them from the dragon's egg. Once, the breeder touches the egg, he/ she gains that dragon's ability's. There are a few type of dragons, there is the aqua dragon, which are usually blue and swim in water. The breeder of the aqua dragon gains the ability to move water. The fire dragon, the most common dragon, it breaths fire out of it's mouth and fly's. The breeder of this dragon gains the ability of fire. Ezektra is an electricity dragon, it's scales have the ability to pull static to them, then when the dragon touches something, it will get electrocuted. The breeder of this dragon, gains the exact same ability, but is also the only person who can fly on this dragon's back. And finally, the Grohara. This is the rarest of dragons, due to it's ability which is to turn into a ghost-like figure. The breeder of this dragon gains the ability to walk through anything and is also the only person who can ride on this dragon's back while it is in it's ghost-like form. The dragonist know of the soon to come invasion and are preparing for the soul's attack.
Sign Up (For Birds)

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Earth's Death or Earth's Saviors:
Bird: (Which Bird are you? Include your ability.)

Sign Up (For Soul's)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Good/evil: (I never said that they were all bad.)
Weapon:

Sign Up (For Witches and Wizard's)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Wand: (Explain your wand)
Broom?: (Do you have a broom stick? If so, explain it)
Spell's: (What are the spell's that you know?)
Pets: (Black cat, mouse, owl, or frog. Explain your pet.)

Sign Up (For Dragonist)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Dragon: (What does your dragon look like?)
Dragon's/ Your ability's: (What can you and your dragon do?)
Weapon:
____________________________________________________________________________________________

TEEN TITANS
Secret Titans

It has been two years since the titans fought the brotherhood of evil. Beast Boy has kept trying to make the girl he thinks is Terra remember who he thinks she is. The rest of the titans have gone back to their some-what normal lives, although it has been much easier with having the villains gone, with the exception of a few who still roam Jump city. Three of those villains formed a group and almost defeated the titans but failed. But what the titans didn't know was that an even powerful force was forming on a far off planet called Quarail. It is cold and it's surface is all snow. There is rarely any sun. A man named Lemier had been studying the titans by using a creature that can turn into any substance it touches. Lamier used that creature to learn of earths substances and what to expect when he makes his attack. He has finally finished his army which contains aliens that are like the same creature the titans faced before and he is starting his attack. He planes on capturing as many titans as he can, then use their power energy to take over the world. As these creatures landed on Jump city, the titans jumped right into action. After days and days of planning and fighting, the titans began to fall one by one. But before everyone was defeated, Robin called a group of people who had been given a spot in the teen titans. They where the teen titans secret force, "The Secret Titans". The call that Robin made was the very last call made on the walkie talkie which meant that every titan had been captured or died. Now, the titans and the earths last hope is in the hands of five young teens.

Your mission is to save the rest of titians by going to Quarail and sneak into the dungeon room that is gaurded by hundreds of the mysterious creatures. Your other mission is to go to Quarail, find Lamier and his power source and destroy it before he obsorbs the rest of the titans power.

Sign Up
Hero Name:
True Identiy:
Gender:
Age: (13-16)
Personality:
Description:
Ability/ s:
Weakness:
History: (Include how the titans found you.)
_________
You can all ignore these.

typeZERO
February 24th, 2007, 11:32 PM
Wrath of the Ninja
500 years ago , a war was waged across the world between the deities of the world. Volcanoes erupted , lightning storms destroyed villages , and the oceans raged and created mass tsunamis. The evil deities wanted power and fought for it. One person from the Ryuuka clan stood up to them , though. He had a powerful sword that can destroy a mountain with a stroke. This sword was the legendary ninja sword , Neo Ryuukahou (Neo dragon and phoenix fire). He battled with the deities for ten days and ten nights. Finally ,with one final blast , killed the evil deities. His clan was then honored and his sword was then put into a stone called the Stone of the Heavens. But , 500 years later , the Ryuuka clan was massacred and killed off from existence except for a few members. The sword was then stolen and a plea for help was sent by the remaining members. They said that if the sword's power was awakened then the whole world could be destroyed. Ten divine weapons have been created long before the Neo Ryuukahou was created. These weapons could be held by no evil and was meant to destroy weapons such as Neo Ryuukahou. Ten ninjas were found that had the power to wield these divine weapons and were called the 'chosen ones'.

You are one of the ten chosen ones. Your mission : Kill the dark ninja named Kagemaru and destroy his evil minions named Shadow Fiends and destroy and banish the Neo Ryuukahou once and for all.

The Divine weapons.(I'm only doing a preview of some of the weapons , as I don't have much time.)
Kazehou: Has the appearance of a normal katana but its hilt has a phoenix shape and its hand guard is in the shape of flames. The blade has the kanji for phoenix on it and has a bluish glow.This sword has power over wind.

Ritureki:This weapon is a lance with the blade in the shape of a lightning bolt.The handle part is of solid gold and it is circled by electricity. It has a yellow glow and the emblem on the blade has a gryphon on it.

Aiyandiku:It is a bow and arrow weapon with the arrow tip in the shape of a dragon's head. The bow is in the shape of dragon wings and the arrows are engulfed in flames and has a red glow. This weapon has the power over flames.

Furisama:A flail that can be swung like a nunchaku. It has the picture of a chimera depicted on the blades.It is cold to the touch and has a bright blue glow. It has power over ice.

Sign Up
Name:Last/clan name first please. Just like anime style names.
Age:17-35
description:Needs to be 4 sentences or more and a bit detailed.
personality:same as above.
divine weapon: Only one person per weapon. Pick out of the listed weapons above.
projectile weapons: Shurikens and kunais excluded (everyone has them.)
History: 4 sentences minimum.

JBCBlank
February 26th, 2007, 07:36 PM
I wasn't sure what to call it, but I tought it was good, it's an Rp only for the people who loved the first Power rangers.. the plot is pretty mucht the same, fight the bad guys monsters and save Angel Grove!


Go, go Power Rangers
Go, go Power Rangers
Go, go Power Rangers
Mighty Morphin' Power Rangers

Go, go Power Rangers
Go, go Power Rangers
Go, go Power Rangers
You Mighty Morphin' Power Rangers

If you are alive you know that song, even if you’re dead you know it, it is the mighty anthem of the Power Rangers. The song that brought joy to our hearts on Saturday mornings. The song that said karate kick butting was on the way!

And as you can see this is a Power Rangers Rp, but not any old Power Rangers Rp, it’s the Mighty Morphin’ Power Rangers!

The plot is.. .well if you know the show you know the plot.

All I have here is a sign up and it’s very specific if you don’t have what I want then you aren’t allowed! Here it is!

Sign up:
Name: (you can only have one of the original Ranger names yep that means there are only 6 spots so hurry and get them!)
Gender: (Male or female, remember just because you have the name of an original Power Ranger doesn’t mean you are them it’s just a name.)
Appearance: (use a pic if you want.)
Ranger color: (Color has to correspond with your Ranger name if you are suffering use Wiki.)
Zord: (Also must correspond with your Ranger name, we’re starting with the Dinos! If you’re Ranger name stuck around for a couple of seasons you can put all of the Zords here.)
Personality: (Pretty basic tell me what you’re like.)
History: ( A brief history.)
Weapon: (Must also correspond with your Ranger name.)
Rp Sample: (it can be from an old Rp if you like.)

Spaces taken:
Red Ranger:
Blue Ranger:
Pink Ranger:
Yellow Ranger:
Black Ranger:
Green/White Ranger: JBCBlank is Playing Tommy.

Here is my Sheet so that it can be used as an example.

Name: Tommy
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tommy (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/3/33/TommyOliverDinoThunder.jpg)
Ranger color: Green (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/9/95/GreenRanger.jpg)/White (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/9/94/WhiteRanger.jpg

)
Zord: Dragon Zord (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/f/fd/Dragon_zord.JPG)/White Tiger Zord/Falcon Zord (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/c/cf/FALCON_ZORD.JPG)
Personality: Tommy loves to practice his Karate when people aren’t looking, he gets embarrassed easily if someone sees him even when he’s in Ranger form, for that he has a bad habit of getting gravely ignored but he’s working with Zordon to get over it.
History: As a young kid Tommy was very shy, he started taking karate lessons with his cousins and found that he could express himself that way so he kept doing it, after doing that for a few years he read a flier that said that someone was looking for 6 teenagers to help save the world, thinking that maybe it was just a play or an expedition he took down the flier and fallowed the instructions, and the next thing he knew he was standing in the command center looking up at a giant talking face, he was scared at first but then agreed wanting to make a difference in the world he became the Green Ranger!
Weopon: Dragon Dagger, Saba, Dragon Shield

parallelzero
February 26th, 2007, 08:40 PM
@JBC: Except... it still needs some form of plot; even an explanation as to what the Power Rangers are. Just because you say you can only join if you watch the show doesn't mean you get a one way ticket out of explaining the details. Basically, you need a few paragraphs of some form of explanation or it won't be accepted. oo;

Scales
February 27th, 2007, 12:27 PM
I liked power rangers (A long time ago). Id join it JBC

JBCBlank
February 27th, 2007, 05:07 PM
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/3/36/General_PR_Logo.jpg

Go, go Power Rangers
Go, go Power Rangers
Go, go Power Rangers
Mighty Morphin' Power Rangers

Go, go Power Rangers
Go, go Power Rangers
Go, go Power Rangers
You Mighty Morphin' Power Rangers

If you are alive you know that song, even if you’re dead you know it, it is the mighty anthem of the Power Rangers. The song that brought joy to our hearts on Saturday mornings. The song that said karate kick butting was on the way!

And as you can see this is a Power Rangers Rp, but not any old Power Rangers Rp, it’s the Mighty Morphin’ Power Rangers!

The plot is.. .well if you know the show you know the plot. But if you need some more here.

((Taken from Wikipedia, LONG LIVE WIKI!!!))
What is a Power Ranger?
A Power Ranger is a person who morphs from an unpowered form into a powerful superhero wearing a brightly colored battle suit featuring a helmet with an opaque visor; in many cases, the helmet serves to protect his or her secret identity. A morphed Ranger generally possesses superhuman strength, durability, and hand-to-hand combat ability; unmorphed Rangers may possess other innate abilities (such as telekinesis, super speed, invisibility, great hand-to-hand combat ability, etc.) that are usually not directly related to his or her Ranger powers.

Plot sequence

A normal Power Rangers episode can be broken down into an everyplot. The plot sequence is generally as follows:
1. Rangers are seen in everyday life with a dispute to resolve.
2. Rangers are attacked by an evil foe's minions/footsoldiers.
3. Rangers fight minions/footsoldiers.
4. Rangers morph.
5. Rangers defeat the minions/footsoldiers.
6. Evil enemy strengthens the minion and makes minion grow to gigantic proportions, followed by Rangers summoning giant machines known as Zords and/or their combined form, the Megazord.
1. Optional: Rangers find that their current powers are insufficient to defeat minion and discover a new power, such as a Battlizer armor for the Red Ranger, or a sixth Ranger and/or a new Megazord.
7. Rangers fight and defeat that particular giant minion.
8. Rangers are shown back in everyday life, having learned a life lesson which solves the earlier dispute.

Elements of a Power Rangers season

Each team of Power Rangers, with few exceptions, obey a general set of conventions, outlined at the beginning of Mighty Morphin Power Rangers and implied, though not stated explicitly, throughout many of the other incarnations. These include the Power Rangers being forbidden to use their Ranger powers for personal gain or for escalating a fight, explaining why the Rangers don't just step on the small monsters with their Megazord. The Power Rangers are also forbidden to disclose their identities to the general public, barring extenuating circumstances (although this rule was disregarded in Power Rangers: Lightspeed Rescue and Power Rangers: S.P.D., in which they were public servants [rescue squad, police officers, etc.]) (Following a Spartacus-inspired scene by Angel Grove's townspeople, this rule was also disregarded at the conclusion of Power Rangers in Space.) The penalty for disobeying these rules, at least in Mighty Morphin Power Rangers, would be the loss of their power.
The arsenal available to the Power Rangers is also somewhat standardized: each Ranger is generally armed with a weapon such as a laser gun and/or a sword. Each Ranger also has a secondary set of weapons that can often combine to form a larger weapon (usually a cannon). As the series progresses, one or more of the Rangers are also usually given a motorcycle for long-distance travel, as well as individual Zords. In many series, a Ranger is also given additional Zords or weapons. In some cases, one Ranger may receive something that other Rangers may not have; an example of this is the Battlizer given to the Red Ranger of each series since Power Rangers in Space. Although much of the arsenal can also be found in Super Sentai, there are usually at least some that are not, generally added for the express purpose of marketing toys designed and sold by Bandai.
Power Rangers series regularly have villains of their own make which do not appear in the Sentai footage, though for budget and footage reasons there are always carry-overs from the Japanese source material. Less commonly, some series use only the Sentai designs and footage, though despite this some sets have to be replicated for original footage if they need it and an English speaking actor if at least one actor's face was shown, this was the case with Vypra in Lightspeed Rescue and Toxica in Wild Force. There was also one instance when to maintain the trend of the Sixth Ranger for a series where only five existed in the source footage, the Titanium Ranger was created for Lightspeed Rescue.
In seasons following Power Rangers in Space, it became common for each team to be part of a separate storyline from those of previous incarnations. A tradition in later seasons came about such that two teams of Power Rangers teamed up to take on a villain. In Power Rangers: Wild Force, the tenth incarnation of Power Rangers, this is taken to the next level, as ten Red Rangers teamed up in the episode "Forever Red". The only seasons not to feature this team up are Power Rangers: Ninja Storm, due to a shift back to non-SAG talent when production was moved to New Zealand and Power Rangers: Mystic Force, due to a relatively short series length.

List of Power Rangers villains
((In case you don’t know. Also from Wiki! Click on the name for a description.))

• Master Vile (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Master_Vile#Master_Vile)
• Lord Zedd (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lord_Zedd)
• Rita Repulsa (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rita_Repulsa)
• Goldar (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goldar)
• Scorpina (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scorpina#Scorpina)
• Rito Revolto (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rito_Revolto)
• Squatt (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Squatt#Squatt)
• Baboo (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Villains_in_Mighty_Morphin_Power_Rangers#Baboo)
• Finster (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Finster#Finster)
• Hydro Hog (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hydro_Hog#Hydro_Hog)

My main plot: The Villains (*shown above*) will send monsters down to us, Putties (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Putty_Patrol) mostly in order to destroy us and take over the world…. (*yes the old take over the world ploy*) so we have to stop them, from completing there main plan. What is it? I’m not goanna tell you yet!

All I have here is a sign up and it’s very specific if you don’t have what I want then you aren’t allowed! Here it is!

Sign up:
Name: (you can only have one of the original Ranger names yep that means there are only 6 spots so hurry and get them!)
Gender: (Male or female, remember just because you have the name of an original Power Ranger doesn’t mean you are them it’s just a name.)
Appearance: (use a pic if you want.)
Ranger color: (Color has to correspond with your Ranger name if you are suffering use Wiki.)
Zord: (Also must correspond with your Ranger name, we’re starting with the Dinos! If you’re Ranger name stuck around for a couple of seasons you can put all of the Zords here.)
Personality: (Pretty basic tell me what you’re like.)
History: ( A brief history.)
Weapon: (Must also correspond with your Ranger name.)
Rp Sample: (it can be from an old Rp if you like.)
RANGERS
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/9/97/MMPRgroup.jpg
Spaces taken:
Red Ranger:
Blue Ranger:
Pink Ranger:
Yellow Ranger:
Black Ranger:
Green/White Ranger: JBCBlank is Playing Tommy.

Here is my Sheet so that it can be used as an example.

Name: Tommy
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tommy (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/3/33/TommyOliverDinoThunder.jpg)
Ranger color: Green (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/9/95/GreenRanger.jpg)/White (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/9/94/WhiteRanger.jpg

)
Zord: Dragon Zord (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/f/fd/Dragon_zord.JPG)/White Tiger Zord/Falcon Zord (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/c/cf/FALCON_ZORD.JPG)
Personality: Tommy loves to practice his Karate when people aren’t looking, he gets embarrassed easily if someone sees him even when he’s in Ranger form, for that he has a bad habit of getting gravely ignored but he’s working with Zordon to get over it.
History: As a young kid Tommy was very shy, he started taking karate lessons with his cousins and found that he could express himself that way so he kept doing it, after doing that for a few years he read a flier that said that someone was looking for 6 teenagers to help save the world, thinking that maybe it was just a play or an expedition he took down the flier and fallowed the instructions, and the next thing he knew he was standing in the command center looking up at a giant talking face, he was scared at first but then agreed wanting to make a difference in the world he became the Green Ranger!
Weopon: Dragon Dagger, Saba, Dragon Shield

Scales
February 28th, 2007, 07:10 PM
JBC that was an immence improval. But there is one crucial thing I dont like about it. You have to use a character allready made. That is a big turn off for me.

Loki
February 28th, 2007, 07:52 PM
I'm sorry JBC, but just throwing in a wiki article... that doesn't really cut it either. :/ We're not looking out to rip off wikipedia completely here. Therefore, the wiki article doesn't count as apart of your plot. Try putting the plot of the show in your own words, each paragraph you write yourself will count as your plot. You can't just throw a wiki article in there.

That's unfair to other RP maker's who spend good time working on their plots.

JBCBlank
March 2nd, 2007, 05:53 PM
Ok.. let me try to clear a bit up then.. ok... must make clearer and must make three paragraphs out of, bad guy shows up, Rangers arive, Rangers summan Zordes, Badguy is distroyied... Hmm.. *goes off to think*

~JBCBlank

Đ a r κ
March 2nd, 2007, 06:30 PM
..:Unleash The Beasts:..

May/ 30/ 09

Dear Diary: I can't believe it, the Akatsuki have finally obtained the final tailed beast; "The Nine Tailed Fox" from a boy name Naruto Uzumaki! Oh, I feel so sorry for him and not only him but for all of the other people who where killed by Akatsuki. But in the end, no one can oppose the Akatsuki, at least, no one known now. Please, someone help us for what is going to happen next!

June/ 1/ 09

Dear Diary: After days of tracking down the hosts of the tailed beasts and killing them in order to obtain the tailed beasts' powers, the Akatsuki have finally begun the ending of their plan for world domination. Due to the lack of funds coming from shinobi labor, the villages have fallen. And since the Akatsuki seem to be the only shinobi force, they are simply beginning to take over the other countries, using the abilities that they have taken from the tailed beasts. Isn't there anyone who can save us from this monstrous force?

June/ 3/ 09

Dear Diary: Just as it seemed that it was the end for everyone, a new force has risen from who knows where! They appear to be no younger then a full grown teenager, but they seem to be able to take on the Akatsuki. It is odd though, they have strange abilities that would be thought to be coming from a tailed beast...but Akatsuki has all of them. Could there be more tailed beasts than the ones everyone thought where out there? This is an amazing event that I have never seen in my life! These kids could be the heroes of today, but I hope that they are enough to defeat Akatsuki, because if they don't prevail...we will most likely...die.

June/ 4/ 09

Dear Diary: When I found this out, I almost had a heart attack. The leader of Akatsuki has been revealed....I...I just can't believe it. It's an Uchiha. I thought that they where all wiped out except for Sasuke and Itachi. The leader of Akatsuki is...Uchiha Obito!

-Overview-

Akatsuki has obtained the abilities of the tailed beast and are using them to dominate the world. The leader of Akatsuki, Obito Uchiha, has been revealed. A new force has risen that plans on defeating Akatsuki. This team consists of five people with the abilities of five beasts: "Two Legged Sante" who can control wind and combined chakra with wind; "Four Legged Woyel" who can control any form of water; "Three Legged Penaku" can control the water element; "Five legged Maka" can create multiple tails; "Eight Legged Aracudo" can create webbing that drains chakra and can be combined with chakra to become a fierce weapon. These five beasts roamed the earth as spirits, waiting for something bad to happen and once Akatsuki began the ending of their plan, the beasts sealed themselves in a group of kids that they thought were worthy. Akatsuki has learned of this new force and is preparing to take them down. This new force is attempting to not only defeat Akatsuki, but also help the villages raise their funds.

-Beasts & their abilities-
1.Two Legged Sante: Can combined chakra and wind, can control wind, High speed, Massive amount of chakra.
2.Four legged Woyel: Control over any form of water, High speed, high strength, Massive amount of chakra.
3.Three Legged Penaku: Controls the water element at will (Like the way Gaara uses his sand), high speed when in water, massive amount of chakra, Almost unlimited defense.
4.Five Legged Maka: Massive amount of chakra, High speed, high flexibility, can create multiple amount of tails.
5.Eight Legged Aracudo: Mass amount of chakra, High speed, Can create webbing that can drain chakra, can coat webbing with chakra to create a fierce weapon.

-Sign up-
Name: (You can be in your own clan or in Hyuuga, Aburame, Nara, or Inuzuka. You don't need to be in a clan if you don't want to.)
Age: (13- 17)
Gender:
Personality: (At lest four lines, more than four lines is appreciated)
Description: (Same as above)
Techniques:
Kekkei Genkai/ Bloodline: (Only if you character is in a clan )
Fighting style:
Beast: (One of the five beasts)
History: (Two...or one paragraph)

RULES
1.PC rules apply
2.Don't go crazy with power
3.Very, very, very little control over other characters unless you get permission form the owner of that character.
4.If you are going to join this RP, make sure you will be able to stay with it and be active.
5.Only one person to each of the clans that I said before.
6.NO Uchihas

((The whole, Obito thing is just something that my friend believes, and since no one really knows who the leader of Akatsuki is, I just put Obito down.))

Loki
March 3rd, 2007, 08:11 AM
Sounds like fun Korinku (Sorry I can't get out of the habit of calling you that~) But, I can't say that I really like the names of those beasts. x_x; Shouldn't they be similar in like, how the tailed beasts all have a different number of tails?

Well, I guess that doesn't really matter, but it'd be nicer if they sounded... better. :x And also, the Telekenesis thing doesn't really quite make it fair to the other beasts, since the Wind controllers also have telekenesis- and the other's only have control of water, or earth, or chakra touch. :/

(By the way, chakra draining isn't really that impressive since it's obviously a bloodline limit that flows in Sound, or an ability that can be learned.)

And, um. You spelled a LOT of simple things wrong. < <; I'd run it through the spell check one more time.

Like, "Teen ager"?

This sentence, I find, is the worst of all:


But in the end, no one can oppose the Akatsuki, at least, no one known now.


But either way, I <3 Naruto RP's. ^^ I'll consider joining if you post it~

typeZERO
March 3rd, 2007, 08:41 AM
I entirely agree with Bijou! nice RP korinku , or Telepathic. :P

Đ a r κ
March 3rd, 2007, 10:31 AM
Well, I ran through another spell check and nothing seemed to be wrong. I did fix that one sentence though. And about the names, I can't think of anything that is similar between the animals I am basing them off of. Owl, Wolf, Monkey, Spider, Ankylosourus.

Loki
March 3rd, 2007, 10:48 AM
Why an Ankylosaurus? o O;;

Anyhow. Legs, maybe? Owl is two legged, a monkey can be five legged if you count the tail, a wolf has four, and a spider has eight. As for the Ankylosaurus' four... *I still don't know how a dinosaur got into the crop*

May/ 30/ 09

Dear Diary: I can't believe it, the Akatsuki ha[color=red]ve finally obtained the final tailed beast; "The Nine Tailed Fox" from a boy name Naruto Uzumaki! Oh, I feel so sorry for him and not only him, but for all of the other people who where killed by Akatsuki. But in the end, no one can oppose the Akatsuki, at least, no one known now. Please, someone help us for what is going to happen next! (Weird sentence.)

June/ 1/ 09

Dear Diary: After days of tracking down the hosts of the tailed beasts and killing them in order to obtain the tailed beasts' powers, the Akatsuki have finally beg[un the end of their plan for world domination. Due to the lack of funds coming from shinobi labor,(What?) the villages have fallen. And since the Akatsuki seems to be the only shinobi force, they are simply beginning to take over the other countries, using the abilities that they have taken from the tailed beasts. Isn't there anyone who can save us from this monstrous force?

June/ 3/ 09

Dear Diary: Just as it seemed that it was the end for everyone, a new force has risen from who-knows-where! They appear to be no younger then a full grown (teenager), but they seem to be able to take on the Akatsuki. [color=red](Caps!!)(it) is odd though, they have strange abilities that would be thought to be coming from a tailed beast...but Akatsuki has all of them. Could there be more tailed beasts than the ones everyone thought where out there? This is an amazing event that I have never seen in my life! These kids could be the heroes of today, but I hope that they are enough to defeat Akatsuki, because if they don't prevail...we will most likely...die.

June/ 4/ 09

Dear Diary: When I found this out, I almost had a heart attack. The leader of Akatsuki has been revealed....I...I just can't believe it. It's an Uchiha. I thought that they where all wiped out except for Sasuke and Itachi. The leader of Akatsuki is...Uchiha Obito!

-Overview-

Akatsuki has obtained the abilities of the tailed beast and are using them to dominate the world. The leader of Akatsuki, Obito Uchiha, has been revealed. A new force has risen that plans on defeating Akatsuki. This team consists of five people with the abilities of five beasts: "Two Winged Sante" who can control wind and combined chakra with wind; "Four Legged Woyel" who can control any form of water; "Multiple horned Ankylus" can control the earth element; "Two Armed Maka" can (NO Caps!!) (Drain) chakra through touch; "Eight Legged Aracudo" can create webbing that drains chakra and can be combined with chakra to become a fierce weapon. These five beasts roamed the earth as spirits, waiting for something bad to happen and once Akatsuki began the ending of their plan, the beasts sealed themselves in a group of kids that they thought were worthy. Akatsuki has learned of this new force and is preparing to take them down. This new force is attempting to not only defeat Akatsuki, but also help the villages raise their funds.


I'm sorry. But you didn't run it through the spell checker. :/ That's just proof right there.

(The fact that you spelled 'Revealed' wrong, and the spell checker didn't get it? That just doesn't happen. And, you didn't fix the 'teen ager' thing, even though I pointed it out, which is why I didn't edit that part for you. A spell checker would've gotten that as well.)

Đ a r κ
March 3rd, 2007, 11:15 AM
(I must have been really sleepy when I wrote this.) I switched the dinosaur with a Flamingo, that way there can be a one legged beast.

Tensaiji
March 3rd, 2007, 11:21 AM
..:Unleash The Beasts:..

May/ 30/ 09

Dear Diary: I can't believe it, the Akatsuki have finally obtained the final tailed beast; "The Nine Tailed Fox" from a boy name Naruto Uzumaki! Oh, I feel so sorry for him and not only him but for all of the other people who where killed by Akatsuki. But in the end, no one can oppose the Akatsuki, at least, no one known now. Please, someone help us for what is going to happen next!

June/ 1/ 09

Dear Diary: After days of tracking down the hosts of the tailed beasts and killing them in order to obtain the tailed beasts' powers, the Akatsuki have finally begun the ending of their plan for world domination. Due to the lack of funds coming from shinobi labor, the villages have fallen. And since the Akatsuki seem to be the only shinobi force, they are simply beginning to take over the other countries, using the abilities that they have taken from the tailed beasts. Isn't there anyone who can save us from this monstrous force?

June/ 3/ 09

Dear Diary: Just as it seemed that it was the end for everyone, a new force has risen from who knows where! They appear to be no younger then a full grown teenager, but they seem to be able to take on the Akatsuki. It is odd though, they have strange abilities that would be thought to be coming from a tailed beast...but Akatsuki has all of them. Could there be more tailed beasts than the ones everyone thought where out there? This is an amazing event that I have never seen in my life! These kids could be the heroes of today, but I hope that they are enough to defeat Akatsuki, because if they don't prevail...we will most likely...die.

June/ 4/ 09

Dear Diary: When I found this out, I almost had a heart attack. The leader of Akatsuki has been revealed....I...I just can't believe it. It's an Uchiha. I thought that they where all wiped out except for Sasuke and Itachi. The leader of Akatsuki is...Uchiha Obito!

-Overview-

Akatsuki has obtained the abilities of the tailed beast and are using them to dominate the world. The leader of Akatsuki, Obito Uchiha, has been revealed. A new force has risen that plans on defeating Akatsuki. This team consists of five people with the abilities of five beasts: "Two Legged Sante" who can control wind and combined chakra with wind; "Four Legged Woyel" who can control any form of water; "One Legged Flaniku" can control the earth element; "Five legged Maka" can drain chakra through touch; "Eight Legged Aracudo" can create webbing that drains chakra and can be combined with chakra to become a fierce weapon. These five beasts roamed the earth as spirits, waiting for something bad to happen and once Akatsuki began the ending of their plan, the beasts sealed themselves in a group of kids that they thought were worthy. Akatsuki has learned of this new force and is preparing to take them down. This new force is attempting to not only defeat Akatsuki, but also help the villages raise their funds.

-Beasts & their abilities-
1.Two Legged Sante: Can combined chakra and wind, can control wind, High speed, Massive amount of chakra.
2.Four legged Woyel: Control over any form of water, High speed, high strength, Massive amount of chakra.
3.One Legged Flaniku: Controls the earth element, high strength, massive amount of chakra, Almost unlimited defense.
4.Five Legged Maka: Massive amount of chakra, Hight speed, high flexibility, Drains chakra through touch.
5.Eight Legged Aracudo: Mass amount of chakra, High speed, Can create webbing that can drain chakra, can coat webbing with chakra to create a fierce weapon.

-Sign up-
Name: (You can be in your own clan or in Hyuuga, Aburame, Nara, or Inuzuka. You don't need to be in a clan if you don't want to.)
Age: (13- 17)
Gender:
Personality: (At lest four lines, more than four lines is appreciated)
Description: (Same as above)
Techniques:
Kekkei Genkai/ Bloodline: (Only if you character is in a clan )
Fighting style:
Beast: (One of the five beasts)
History: (Two...or one paragraph)

RULES
1.PC rules apply
2.Don't go crazy with power
3.Very, very, very little control over other characters unless you get permission form the owner of that character.
4.If you are going to join this RP, make sure you will be able to stay with it and be active.
5.Only one person to each of the clans that I said before.

((The whole, Obito thing is just something that my friend believes, and since no one really knows who the leader of Akatsuki is, I just put Obito down.))

It sounds good, Tele. Count me in! Would it be alright if I'm able to control 2 characters from different clans?

Loki
March 3rd, 2007, 11:29 AM
Hmm, that's a good idea, but a flamingo with earth? >.< Umm... Let me try looking up a few things~

You could try number of eyes~ (That'd be freaky, but it could go like, one-eyed has terrible sight but is very strong, and like, 8 eyed can see through people but is weak. That's still freaky though. xD; Forget that.)

But anyhow, I dunno~ It's complicated to think up new things. >.< You could try number of wings~ Phoenix, Lark, (Flamingo. Hahaha~), Dove, Crow. Meh. Bad suggestions. Oh well, I guess it's not that big of a deal. xD;

Erureido: Since we're talking about the RP, you don't need to quote it. ^^;;

Đ a r κ
March 3rd, 2007, 11:50 AM
Erureido, it depends. Here I will just show an example.

Made Up Clans
1.Mokuna
2.Denara

Character 1- Name: Shera mokuna
Character 2- Name: Aron Denara
^Accepted

Character 1- Name: Shera Mokuna
Character 2- Name: Aron Mokuna
^Rejected
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But if you are talking about the clans that I previously posted:

Character1- Name: Aron Hyuuga
Character 2- Name: Amy Nara
^Rejected (It wouldn't be fair if somone had two clans)

Character 1- Name: Aron Hyuuga
Character 2- Name: Amy Mokuna
^Accepted (As long as it is a clan you make up, then it is ok)
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And besides, I don't really want anyone having two characters unless we need another.

Tensaiji
March 3rd, 2007, 11:57 AM
Bijou: Sorry! I didn't know. I wanted to be talking to a specific roleplay.

Tele: I guess you can make it by elements. Like a pheonix has enormous power and was sealed inside an Uchiha that cannot die by voilence, but of old age and is reborn into another strong Uchiha. Wind would be a Bald Eagle that controls where the wind goes and follows it wherever it goes. Lighting would be a Thunderbird which, when flaps its wings, can create a thunder storm or alot of electricity. Pretty much you should create them as the "Legendary Elemental Brids."

I also think that they should go into a specific clan. I thought about a few:

Pheonix- Uchiha
Bald Eagle- Hyuuga
Thunderbird- This one is tough because no one has a clan in the series that specalizes in electricity. Maybe a made-up clan?

Đ a r κ
March 3rd, 2007, 12:16 PM
Well, after looking on the wiki, I figured that I could use a penguin as a three legged beast (Including its tail but not including its fins). What do you guys think?

Scarlet Weather
March 3rd, 2007, 12:26 PM
Eru: Yes, elements might fit a five-beast thing anyway, but I notice that you only picked birds. I don't know about that... it really limits what kind of creatures Tele can make up. And making them correspond to a clan is kind of a problem, especially since the Uchiha are all dead except for Sasuke, Itachi, and (for rp purposes only) Obito (Actually, Obito was such a do-gooder in canon that I'm fairly sure that him being the leader of Akatsuki is a load of pure-d bull). You can't freely create your own ninjutsu abilities if you aren't able to make up your own clan, and that cuts back on a roleplayer's ability to be creative with their character. Besides, Hyuuga doesn't really specialize in wind...

Tele: Aw... me hearts penguins muchly... but then you might as well count its arms as well. Anyway, I think I'm joining this one. And unlike Dark Ninja, with this one I'm fairly sure I can stay active!

Kujakii the Light Child
March 3rd, 2007, 01:32 PM
Telepathic: Master of RPGs. Anyway. If you havent seen my RPG Club CWRAB, check it out here in the RP Lounge.

typeZERO
March 3rd, 2007, 09:31 PM
Eru: sorry , I completely agree with ACC.

anyways , I'm still waiting for a reply on my RP. If you haven't seen it then just look for Wrath of the Ninja with ctrl+f.:paranoid:

Scales
March 3rd, 2007, 10:14 PM
Eru: sorry , I completely agree with ACC.

anyways , I'm still waiting for a reply on my RP. If you haven't seen it then just look for Wrath of the Ninja with ctrl+f.:paranoid:

Sorry lightning but I dont like Ninja roleplays. Everyone just refrences from Naruto and bleach. Might as well call it a naruto roleplay

Phanima
March 4th, 2007, 02:59 AM
Plot:

The role of the Avatar has come to pass through history as the world’s sole spirit and saviour. The end of the One-hundred Year War saw the Avatar progress into his most powerful and dangerous form, the Avatar State. Sacrificing his rendition of immortality, the Avatar successfully ended the war and placed the fate of the world in the peoples’ hands. Losing his ability to reincarnate, the last Airbender ended the line of the Avatar and the fate of his race.

Another one-hundred years have passed since the Fire Nation’s defeat and the Avatar’s last stand. Harmony has reigned over the four countries since the conclusion of the war and many of the countries’ people have returned to peaceful and prosperous lives. The establishment of stable governments, international support between countries, and the introduction of two subsidiary Bending disciplines have brought the four countries into a new age.

However, a new threat has arisen. A rogue group of Benders have been recognised for various crimes against the four countries and are currently being pursued under the command of the nations’ leading military officials and tactical advisers. An international pursuit of the criminal organisation has disrupted the four countries’ one-hundred year armistice, in which the governments have worked to establish after the One-hundred Year War. The group’s true ambitions remain unknown and their crimes against the four countries appear nothing more than acts of terrorism. The group is known as; Boshoku.

Your Role:

You derive from one of the seven remaining Bending discipline families that exist in the world of the Avatar. You will start out from wherever your History permits and will eventually meet up with the other participants of the RP, in your search for the Boshoku. The focus of your journey will be to confront the organisation for whatever reason your character has employed, regardless of whether it is good or bad. This is your role from the beginning of the RP, but it may change during the course of the story depending on the situations you face.

Rules:

1. There can be no relations to characters from the actual show or other related services. This RP is focused on original characters but uses Avatar concepts.

2. Spelling, grammar, and vocabulary are important. Make sure that your posts are legible and understandable. Also, first-person perspective will not be allowed. All posts must be written in the third-person perspective.

3. The dominant rules that apply to this RP include; power-playing and god-mode. Both will not be tolerated without the consent of a participant’s approval. Otherwise, standard PC rules apply.

4. No character can become an Airbender or use Airbending techniques.

5. If you decide to involve yourself with another character in battle, make sure you discuss the outcome with whoever you are opposing. Power-playing will not be accepted without consent.

6. Based on the five Chinese elements, two new Bending disciplines have been incorporated into the RP. These include; Woodbending and Metalbending. Characters will only be allowed to know one Bending Discipline.

Sign-up Sheet:

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Physical Description:

Personality:

History:

Bending Discipline:

Other:

RP Sample:

Extra Information:

Boshoku: A small group of criminal Benders who have been committing crimes against the four countries. Their individual identities are unknown and their mission has yet to be clarified. Nothing is known about this powerful group of rogue Benders who have been terrorizing the countries’ people.

Woodbending: Woodbending is a subsidiary form of Earthbending. Woodbenders are capable of controlling the life and movement of plants and plant-life. Woodbending focuses on the manipulation and growth of plants, which allow Woodbenders to produce medicines, provisions, and even weapons when needed.

Metalbending: Metalbending is another subsidiary form of Earthbending, but at a much smaller scale. Metalbenders are trained to harness the strength and energy of minerals in the ground, rocks, and other materials. Metalbending is especially prominent in the construction of buildings, tools, and other man-made structures that often involve metal and steel.

Another RP I came up with after being inspired by someone else's idea :nervous:. This is kind of like a fusion between Naruto's Akatsuki and Avatar, The Last Airbender's concepts. Comments?

Loki
March 4th, 2007, 11:31 AM
AVATAR THE LAST AIRBENDER! :xx *Turns into the foamy guy who's like, the Avatar's biggest fan*

Dude. That is just flat out awesome. I'd totally join~ Sounds like lot's of fun, but, you might want to make a way that the RPer's would join up for sure, otherwise you'll have a bunch of people wandering around looking stupid.

BTW: Metalbending is apart of Earthbending. :x And Wood/Plant-bending is apart of Waterbending. :xxx *Shot for being an A:TLA dunce*

parallelzero
March 4th, 2007, 11:39 AM
I'd probably join too. However, I have a suggestion as well. There are people like me who've seen enough of the show to want to join, but not enough to know everything about items such as bending. It may be benefitial for you to add a little section going into detail about bending so that you don't have people joining and constantly screwing up.

Phanima
March 5th, 2007, 10:56 PM
Extra Information:

Avatar: The Avatar is the world’s sole spirit and saviour, born into the world as a human. He or she possesses the ability to harness and control all four elements, spanning across; water, earth, fire, and air. The Avatar is also capable of ascending into his or her most powerful and dangerous form, the Avatar State. In this form, the Avatar’s powers become almost limitless and can only be triggered by his or her deepest emotions or by unlocking all seven bodily Chakras. However, during this form, the Avatar is also at his or her most vulnerable. If the Avatar should be killed during the Avatar State, then he or she will lose the power to reincarnate as the next Avatar, following the alignment of the four elements.

Waterbending: Waterbending is a hydrokinetic ability to control water, steam and ice, and to heal physical wounds and spiritual wounds, which have to deal with energies and pressure points. Waterbenders are taught the slow and elegant art of Waterbending through the use of manipulating flowing water. Waterbending is a defensive martial art that focuses on control through turning an opponent’s strength against him/her, rather than directly harming the opponent. A body of water or steam must also be present in order to Waterbend. Evasive and defensive maneuvers are the primary aspects of Waterbending.

Earthbending: Earthbending is the geokinetic ability to control the earth, dirt, and dust. Earthbenders use the earth to create strong defences as well as to deal powerful strikes through indirect attacks. The martial art of Earthbending features heavily rooted stances and strong kicks and punches to employ the mass and power of the earth. Earthbenders are also subject to using the movements of animals to perform certain techniques. These include the tiger, which is utilised when initiating hard blows, and the crane, which is used to land gently back on the Earth. Unlike other Bending elements, Earthbending maintains a strong balance between offensive and defensive capabilities.

Firebending: Firebending is the pyrokinetic ability to create and control fire. An exclusive number of Firebenders also express the ability to generate and manipulate lightning as a secondary outlet for heat. Firebending is a martial art that features quick, successive, and ferocious attacks that evoke the wild nature of fire. Unlike other Bending elements, Firebending has minimum defensive and evasive maneuvers but rather relies on swift and powerful strikes to overcome an opponent.

Airbending: Airbending is an aerokinetic ability to control and create currents of air. Airbenders have become adapted in the martial art of Airbending through using their bodily energy to harness and control the flow and nature of the wind. Airbending focuses primarily on swift and evasive techniques that promote constant circular movements to deflect direct and ranged attacks. Maneuvers employ the entire body with smooth coiling and uncoiling movements utilizing dynamic footwork, open-hand techniques, and throws. Unlike other Bending elements, Airbending lacks fatal finishing moves but harbors great defensive and evasive capabilities.

Woodbending: Woodbending is a subsidiary form of Waterbending, which focuses on the deconstruction and compression of organisms. Following similar traits to Waterbending, Woodbending is an evasive martial art that imposes self-defence over power. Woodbenders are capable of controlling the life and movement of plants and plant-life. Woodbending focuses on the manipulation and growth of plants, which allow Woodbenders to produce medicines, provisions, and even weapons when needed.

Metalbending: Metalbending is a subsidiary form of Earthbending, but at a much smaller scale. Metalbenders are trained to harness the strength and energy of minerals in the ground, rocks, and other materials that derive from the Earth. Metalbending is especially prominent in the construction of buildings, tools, and other man-made structures that often involve metal and steel. The martial art of Metalbending further develops the offensive and defensive abilities of Earthbending, through the refined compression of minerals and materials.

Boshoku: A small group of criminal Benders who have been committing crimes against the four countries. Their individual identities are unknown and their true ambitions have yet to be realised. Little is known about this powerful rogue group of Benders who have been terrorizing the countries’ people and land.

Reference Information:

The four elemental countries: Water Tribe (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Water_Tribe), Earth Kingdom (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Earth_Kingdom), Fire Nation (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fire_Nation), Air Nomads (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Air_Nomads).

EDIT: I added a few things to the Extra Information section. Is there anything else I should add/remove?

Scales
March 5th, 2007, 10:58 PM
Well Toomi. It seems this roleplay took you a while to put together. I probably would join it if I had nothing better to do or if I started watching Avatar at somepoint.

Phanima
March 5th, 2007, 11:04 PM
Yes, you should watch Avatar some time soon. It's very hoopy. The RP on a side note, will probably require some people to have a general understanding of the story and show, since even the information I've put in might not be enough. Not sure if I should add/remove anything though.

Scales
March 6th, 2007, 10:37 PM
Here is a roleplay I have been thinking about

The New Generation

Rated PG 14

PLOT
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A few years after the defeat of Team Rocket and Team Aqua/Magma. They have decided to delve deeper. Team Rocket, Aqua and Magma have joined forces with a few other gangs and have merged into one ultimate pokemon laundering organization. Team Omni. They are recognized with White Magma uniforms.

After the domination of pokemon Gold/Silver and Crystal Team Omni had 1 powerfull leader. Giovanni who was studying pokemon for 3 years found out something. A mysterious plant found in Ilex Forest had a strange ability. Once ingested the plant would be able to change DNA. Which once ingested any DNA that would be admisitered to the patient would hybrid with the DNA and eventualy become it. Meaning if the plant was ingested into one patient and Charmander DNA would be administered to the patient the patient would warp into a Charmander.

So Giovanni decided to administer this treatment to highly advanced trainers that would be able to use this pokemon ability. One by one Team Omni has plundered trainers and their pokemon. They have kidnapped them and sent them to the Generation Labs. These have long been abandoned and have recently been opened again. It is located underground a few miles east of Vermilian. The trainers pokemon are in holding cells to the north of the complex and the trainers are in the medical labs to the south. This is where the story starts, the medical labs recreational center.

YOUR ROLE
~~~~~~~

You play as an advanced trainer. You could be the pokemon league champion or something else. There is one catch however. You must done something so extraordinary that team Omni recognizes you. The more extraordinary the rarer the pokemon your DNA will mix with

Transformation
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The transformation process will work like this. The trainer will ingest the plant. Then he will be injected with pokemon DNA. The rareity of the pokemon is based on how the trainer has upset Giovanni. Then they will be released. In under an hour a small transformation will begin. In exactly 24 hours a perfect Hybrid will be formed. A pokemon with the human mind and thought.

Final Notes
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Team Omni has found DNA of rare creatures. Including pokemon seen in the games. Be it Ho-Oh or Lugia. They have almost all the DNA for every pokemon. However team Omni has found a flaw in the plant. Even though it will hybrid with the human the legendary potential can only be reached by much practice in using the powers of the Pokemon

Once all the characters have been inserted with DNA then in under 1 hour changes will start to take place and after 1 day you will see definate change.

There are over 40 other trainers here. Some of them are really famous and some of them are not. But you are one of them. There is a 1.1 percent chance that the DNA will not mix and the trainer will die so we will not see every rare trainer in the roleplay

Rules
~~~~~

1. All PC rules apply

2. Spelling and grammer is not very crucial but recommended.

3. Please stick to this roleplay like glue. I need dedicated roleplayers

4. You can have legendarys. Actualy it is recomended. You have up to 4 people being legendary

5. One of the biggest rules is NO POWERPLAYING OR BUNNYING

6. If you are a legendary then you will not be able to go through the full potential of it. You will barely be able to skim its powers. Legendary roleplaying is used for people who will not powerplay with it.

7. Last but not least please have fun



Sign-up Sheet
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Name: (self explanitory)

Age: (Please above 10)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Pokémon to hybrid with: (This is where it gets tricky. Only 4 people in the roleplay can hybrid with legendarys. But I implore you to choose your favorite.)

Description: (what your character looks like before DNA administration)

Personality: (What your character acts like NOTE: Remember your personality will change after administration)

History: (What happened that was so big that made you one of Omni's favorites? This is a crucal part to the roleplay)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

SLOTS
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1. Grim (Legendary)
2. (Legendary)
3. (Legendary)
4. (Legendary)
5.
6.
7.
8.


This roleplay will start once 4 people have been accepted. This is a free roleplay meaning that if a person leaves the roleplay or is inactive for more then a week then he will be booted out and someone else will be able to have his slot.



So what do you think?

Shiney
March 7th, 2007, 07:26 AM
That actually looks fairly good, if a bit slim compared to some of the ORP plots. Extra roughage never hurt, but I think I may join myself. One note though, it doesn't really explain some more details about the process of being alterred, and whatnot. futhermore, are we just hybrid with the species DNA in general, or hybrid with the specific pokemon DNA? Lastly, if only four people cna be legendaries, to keep a view of fairness, I assume that non legendary hybrids can be as poweeful? I'm hoping to play an old world, myself.

Scales
March 7th, 2007, 10:07 AM
That actually looks fairly good, if a bit slim compared to some of the ORP plots. Extra roughage never hurt, but I think I may join myself. One note though, it doesn't really explain some more details about the process of being alterred, and whatnot. futhermore, are we just hybrid with the species DNA in general, or hybrid with the specific pokemon DNA? Lastly, if only four people cna be legendaries, to keep a view of fairness, I assume that non legendary hybrids can be as poweeful? I'm hoping to play an old world, myself.

Yeah I forgot a few plot points. Im going to edit it and add a little more detail

EDIT: I made it so that Legendary's wont be able to achive their full potential unless they have practiced with it for a very long time. If this roleplay survives that is

Đ a r κ
March 9th, 2007, 08:02 PM
Manaphy
And The 3 guardians

Long ago, an ancient tale was past down from generation to generation. It spoke of a very mysterious pokemon that up to this day has not been found by any human and it goes like this:
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Your echo is clear but to our ears it is not. We swim with you at the beach but we fail to see you. You are Manaphy, your sound unhearable and your sight unseeable. An egg you will stay until that day when the chosen one comes to your rescue and gives you their light. Hesitant they will be to your arrival but time will show them the truth. Darkness will engulf you but the light will restore you.
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After years of no one finding a clue of Manaphys existence, people began to get skeptic about Manaphy and soon everyone forgot about Manaphy and moved on with their lives. But what no one ever thought about was why Manaphy was not seeable or hearable in the story. Everyone expected Manaphy to just be swimming around underwater and that someone would be lucky enough to see him but they were wrong. There is another story that talks about three legendary pokemon who are said to have come to earth, then left. It goes like this:
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Long ago there were three pokemon who were rarely seen, but everyone knew that they weren't fake. They were given a name that went along with what people who saw them said. One, who had a light blue skin tone and a dark blue face was given the name: Agunomu. Another also had a light blue skin tone, but this one had a dark pink face. This one was called Emuritto. The last one too had light blue skin but its face was yellow. Its name was Yukushii. Three humans worked together with these three pokemon to help stop an evil organization from taking over the world. No one knows what this organization used to power the devise they used which helped them almost accomplish their mission, but after the world was saved, the three pokemon who helpped, disappeared from everyone and everything. Then as the three humans got home, they began to tell people the story of Manaphy. The real reason why no one has found Manaphy is because the three guardians are hiding the egg from human sight.
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It has now been one hundred years, technology has become very different and many things have changed. Four new evil organizations have formed. Team Time, Team Outer, Team shadow and Team Pebble. Each teams plan is world domination but they each have different ways of achieving that goal. Team Time is planning on capturing Dialga, travailing back in time and forcing everyone to fallow them. Team Outer is planning on capturing Palkia, travailing into space and threatening to destroy the earth with meteors. Team Shadow wants to capture Daakurai, go into peoples minds and force them to fallow them. Team pebble is not a very evil team, they just want to capture Aruseusu and use its power to threaten people. But four pokemon are standing in these organizations way. These four pokemon guard Palkia, Dialga, Aruseusu and Daakurai. Hiidoran who guards Dialga, Rejigigasu who guards Palkia, Giratina who guards Daakurai and Kureseria who guards Aruseusu. But as these organizations plan, a truly evil group has formed and is also planing on world domination. Their name is Team M.O.M. which stands for "Mystery Of Manaphy". They plan on finding Manaphy and turning it into a shadow pokemon, then using its enhanced powers to power their devise that controls time, space and knowledge.
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One day as a boy walks alone on the beach, an egg appears on the shore (This meaning that the three guardians trust him). He is confused because he has never seen such an egg before. It turns out that this boy actually works for Team M.O.M. He turned in the egg to his boss, Mr. Shole. Mr. Shole observed this egg and after a months worth of study, he found out that it was the Manaphy egg. The boy who found the egg then remembered something that his great grandmother spoke about. It was a story about Manaphy. "Darkness will engulf you." He thought before stealing the egg and running. Mr. Shole then sent members of the team after this boy. After running for days, the boy got tired and noticed a day care. He stopped by and told the day care lady to keep the egg and never give it to anyone and that it was a life or death situation. The woman agreed and saved the egg in a safe spot in her garden. The pokemon knew what it was and protected it with their lives, barely letting anyone coming close to it.
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-Your Role-
You are a new trainer in the region of Sinnoh, who is just now starting their journey on the world of pokemon. You have no clue as to what will happen in the future. One of the three guardians will fallow your path as you travel on your adventure, helping you when you mostly need it. Over time you will find out about these five organizations and what they plan to do. It is your destiny to save the Manaphy egg and stop these organizations from fulfilling their plans. But before everything goes wak, a festival is soon to come in a couple of days which will have a Pokemon contest, a minny pokemon league, a breeding contest and a ranger get together.
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-Chosen ones Sign Up-
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Your first pokemon: (What will your pokemon be once you get it or catch it? What will its attacks be?)
Location: (Where is your character at the moment)
Guardian: (Which of the three guardians will fallow you(Only for the first three people to sign up including myself )
History: (Remember, you are a brand new trainer who barely knows about the world of pokemon.)

-Other Sign Up-
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Your pokemon: (You can be a starting trainer and not have one yet, or you can already be a trainer and if so, what pokemon do you have and what are their attacks.)
Location: (Where is your character at the moment)
Occupation: (Trainer, Ranger, Breeder, coordinator, ect.)
History:

RULES
1.PC Rules apply
2.No power playing.
3.Very little control over others.
4.Check your spelling, it is not a race when you post.
5.If you are going to join, be absolutely sure that you will stay and be active.
6. If you are planning on catching a pokemon, PM me and I will tell you if you catch it or not.
7.Have fun.
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Does anyone know where I can find a pic of the Manaphy egg. Nothing more nothing less.

Scales
March 9th, 2007, 09:58 PM
Telepathic that looks like a cool roleplay. I would join it, since things in my roleplay go by pretty quickly i need a roleplay where you play as a trainer again

Đ a r κ
March 10th, 2007, 12:15 PM
I don't know, it seems to me like it is missing something but I don't know what.

Scales
March 10th, 2007, 01:29 PM
This is a traditional Doom like zombie thriller. Like New Generation it will have many parts.

The first part is 12 Days before midnight Part one: Opening.

Part Two: The Edge of it all

Part Three: Inferno

Part Four: The Maw

12 days before midnight

Rated PG 16

PLOT
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For many centuries God and Lucifer quarrled about who would be able to inhabit earth. Since God basicly controled Lucifer he could not do anything. But now he had a new way to get to earth. Lucifer has found a portal to Earth. Right in the middle of New York. But now he has sent Demons and Vampires up to Earth to inhabit it.

Now a portal to hell has opened in the middle of Central Park Newyork. Vampires and Demons have escaped from it. Zombie viruses are also infecting people around the portal. Soon the entire world will be inhabited unless something happens.

God already knows of this and has sent Angels to Earth. But God doesnt have as many Angels to control the Demons. What will happen? Will the Demons take over the world or will the Angels be able to help. Lucifer's portal has clouded the already night sky. The humans must survive for 18 days when sunrise comes again. But will they last that long.

YOUR ROLE
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You are a human who is in the middle of this rampage. In the first post the portal will open and everything will take place. What will happen? Will you help destroy them or will you join their ranks?

Transformation
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If you wish it you can have your character turn into a vampire or zombie. Demons are mainly things created by Lucifer so hands off.

Final Notes
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Lucifer only has 1 portal. He only has so many demons and Vampires. It takes a while to create more so this could be an advantage.

Vampires and Zombies have many weaknesses. Vampires can die if they have enough bullets to the head or the heart. Zombies only have 1 weakness. The brain must be destroyed by any means.

Rules
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1. All PC rules apply

2. Spelling and grammer is not very crucial but recommended.

3. Please stick to this roleplay like glue. I need dedicated roleplayers

4. Your character can turn into a zombie or a Vampire. Zombiefacation must be done either by virus's or a bite. Vampireisum is from a bite on any part of the body.

5. One of the biggest rules is NO POWERPLAYING OR BUNNYING

6. Remember that if you mutate your character to that of a zombie or vampire then it will be exposed to the hunger and weaknesses of it.

7. Last but not least please have fun



Sign-up Sheet
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Name: (self explanitory)

Age: (Please above 10)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Vampire, Zombie or human: (You can start as a Vampire or a Zombie but you must state how you became so.)

Description: (what your character looks like)

Personality: (What your character acts like)

History: (What happened before the portal opened)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

SLOTS
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1. Grim
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.

People can be booted out of the roleplay because of inactivity. If you are inactive for more then a week you will be booted out and someone can have your slot.

Mika
March 10th, 2007, 04:02 PM
-mews-

Okay... Alter recommened me doing this so...

-posts the newer version of Drache Memiors-

>.<;;; Rate pleaseh but don't be overtly flamey.




Fragments of Alarayne | The Memory of the Goddess

Once upon a time, there existed a giant tree that was the source of all Pokemon and nature. The tree existed in the center of a small continent in the center of the world, serving as a central point of unity between her bordering countries. A war, however, caused this tree to wither away and the land soon fell into chaos. Grieving over the loss, the goddess severed the island from the rest of the world. Stabilizing the tree, she flew up high above the earth and was heartbroken by the sight of man and pokemon no longer co-existing as equals. As she ascended into the heavens she left the Legendary Guardians with an edict : “If the time comes once more that the tree is threatened by evil men, you must wake me, lest the world be destroyed.” The Legendary Guardian bore the Child of the Forest, who headed off on a journey to the tree of mankind's salvation, thus marking the beginning of the creation of a new, unified world.


It stayed this way for over two hundred years, never changing aside from the inevitable spinning of the circle of life. Then, one summer’s eve, two girls arrived on the first official voyage sanctioned by the birds since the creation of the island. The mainland had changed in these few centuries. These girls, Luna and Maxie, the Poison/Psychic Duo, were going to prove it. What they didn’t count on was someone showing up and they really didn’t expect a full scale war to hit the island within seven months of mainstream people being allowed access to the snooty rich island but against all odds, the catastrophe occurred. A young girl sought asylum on the island, asylum from an evil few had even dreamed about and on her shoulders lay a heavy burden, more so than any twelve year old child should ever have to bear.

Her burden was revealed in the form of warships, airships from Evergrande City that carried hundreds of solders from the Global Police Task Force. They were led by one Lance Blackthorn, the leader of the special unit squadron, the Pokemon G-Men. He stormed into Luna’s palace with a demand, a demand for Alarayne’s of the asylum for one young girl or face imminent invasion and deportation. Luna, having befriended the young girl in question, refused, insisting on their departure of Lance and his squadron immediately. His claims of the girl’s involvement with evil syndicates and an underlying plan to destroy the holy tree were, in her mind, ridiculous. How could such a sweet child ever dream of doing such retched things? She would be proven wrong by an incident not two months later.

The girl had been living in an abandoned military base hidden snuggly under a waterfall when she received word via carrier Pidgeot from her currently acting parental unit, proclaiming that the time for her ‘mission’ had come at last and failure to complete her mission would result in instantaneous termination. Unable to refuse, the girl was forced to comply and with a sad, heavy heart, ventured into the ruins, past what was allowed for most people, and headed straight for the first of five seals that would unlock the pillars of light surrounding the entrance to the holy grounds. She was met with opposition by Luna after releasing the seal and after a short ordeal, was victorious as far as fighting was concerned. As she slipped into the fog of the night, she was left with a chilling haunting threat. In a last ditch attempt to salvage the girl‘s sanity, Luna threatened the girl with the news of the Global Police Task Force’s arrival in the area and proclaimed that she would cooperate with the task force if she continued to release the seals. The girl simply turned and after a long hard look of pure emptiness, slipped back into the night.

But not even the girl could have saved the island from its eventuall demise. Wrought with despair over the thought of the girl supposedly destroying the already declining tree, Luna felt her sanity slowly slipping out of her grasp. Unable to cope with the idea of losing her island to a former friend, she created a chain reaction of earthquakes to occur several miles off shore and cleverly, caused them to erupt at the same precise moment the girl released the fourth of five seals. Panic quickly ensued the island as it was not too hard to predict the massive tsunami that was now heading their way. As Luna settled into her beach resort to await her death, a power manifested inside the girl that the world had never seen in two hundred years.

In one single blast, the girl summoned the goddess from her resting place and together, the both of them moved the sacred tree and the people of the island to the Ore Region just seconds before they all would have perished beneath the waves. Collapsing in a heap after the exhaustive seven hour move was completed, the girl fell into a coma for five months, awaking in a Team Rocket Lab in Viridian City with little to no memory of what had happened beyond her physical connection with the goddess. It was not until four months later that it was published, in a newspaper, that a high ranking member of Team Rocket had caused the destruction of Alarayne and she was wanted, alive, by the Global Police Task Force, at a reward sum of twenty five million P. The girl, however, was not bothered by the somewhat ridiculous amount of money on her head. In a dream a few nights prior to the news report, she had been visited by the goddess.

The tree was now lost within the boundaries of the Johto Region. Pleading with the girl, pleading with the Child of the Forest, she begged for aide in finding and releasing the five seals of this area so that the tree might grow and prosper or the world would once again fall into the chaos it had once been enveloped in. Requesting aide from her adoptive father, leader of the evil organization Team Rocket (Giovanni for short) she was given a team, Team Drache to be precise, of new and old recruits, a team that would aide her in the search and release of the seals. However, a rumor soon flew through the halls of the Team Rocket base that two in her unit were spies, sent in by the G-Men to bring the girl to a kind of justice.

The girl in question? Her name was and still remains Mysterica (Mika) Ninian Blackthorn, Daughter of Claire Blackthorn and Lance Blackthorn, the leader of the very group trying to have her locked away for life for a crime she very well might not have committed.

Team Drache
(bold text indicates a need. Bolds will be replaced with names when the rooster is complete. If I have one of each, I‘ll start.)
Mika
Two Students straight from the Laboratory headed by Doctor Kain
Two G-Men Infiltraitors
Two Executive Rockets

Descriptions

A New TR Executive

You are accomplished in the Team Rocket Lifestyle in some mannor, (However, you are NOT an Elite Four Winner. A collection of Gym badges, winning small tournaments and/or Pokemon Contest Wins are examples of your accomplishments or possibly snagging a really rare high level pokemon in the wild or from another trainer), and jumped at the chance for a chance at the big leagues. You’re well known around everywhere and some of you might have a price on your head. Most of the executives are children of previous executives as the fact that being a second generation trainer makes the process go along much quicker for seemingly unknown reasons. Most of the executives who worked their way up from the grunt life have a sense of distaste and distrust of the Second Gen Executives because, in their mind, they haven't earned it.

A Lab Offspring

Expiramented on, you have been transformed from human, to super human. Mimicing the powers of the Viridian Bloodline, you are able to communicate with Pokemon through telepathic communications and your reaction, be it in battles or scenariors, is twice that of a human. However, if you chose to be one of these people, please note your character needs to be unstable. You have little to no memory of life outside the lab, nothing outside of rituals and schedules etc.

Please note:

I will be EXTREMELY picky on these character sheets. I do. Not. Tolerate. Powerplaying and/or Godmoding. The reason Mika is of the bloodline is to prove she has a weakness. If you think you’re going to control pokemon and what not, think again.

G-Men Spy

A spy for the government, you came into the TR program as an accomplished trainer but your true objective is to lead the G-Men to the TR base, to take and arrest your leader (Mika) and turn her over without being caught

Being found guilty of espionage against the company however would result in Team Rocket Style imprisonment… if not worse… (I don’t kill characters tho. Against TOS. -nodnod-)


Rules
(Taken from Alter Ego’s AD Roleplay with a few corrections WITH premission)
1. Follow all standard RP section rules (Self-explanatory).

2. Just to stress this; no powerplaying, godmodding, bunnying, or character control of any kind! If I see someone's character doing as much as raising an eyebrow without the creator's consent (Please note the word consent) then the person responsible will be warned, once, and if the violation is repeated then that person will be kicked out of the RP.

3. Bunnying. If you’re going to be gone and your friend is in the rp and can play them IC, then ask YOUR FRIEND to take over said character. I don’t want to bunny anybody unless I absolutely have to.

4. No posting beneath four lines. I'm serious about this one, if you can't manage four lines of coherent english then please don't sign up, I'm looking for people who can RP in proper detail, because short, flat, and emotionless posts just ruin the mood of an RP and have the tendency to infuriate me.

THIS IS NOT FOUR LINES:
Sally followed Charles closely til nighttime. Then it got cold so she turned and said to ty “warm me up” and the charizard moved to warm her up. Then she yawned and said “the sky is so beautiful when it is cold like this and i like it lots“ turning towards Charles she flashed him her killer smile

Yes it /has/ four lines, but it looks like something my sister wrote in third grade when she was learning how to type paragraphs. If this is all you can type (Chat speak, which is u = you r = are etc, is included in this) go find a different rp. You will be rejected without remorse.

5. Mind your spelling. If you have trouble spelling, don't just blame it on English not being your first language (It isn‘t Alter Ego‘s and his English is better than mine (and I am native speaker person) nor does he ever complain about it being difficult) but I will accept the minor mistake here and there. I misspell a lot and if you can tolerate me, I can tolerate you. ;3

6. If I tell you to edit a post, you will edit it or I will consider that post as a not-there post. =3 And I will ignore it. I don’t do it a lot, I like it when people add to my plotline, just not excessively.

7. Read the rules and read the plot. Clash with me and I stab you. With this spork. That doesn’t like you.
8. NO POKEMORPHS



Character Sign Up Sheet Template


-Out of Character-

Name: (What you want me and everyone to call you)
Contact: (PMs, AIM, MSN, etc)

-In Character-

x-- The Basics:

Full Birth Name:
Nick Names:
Age:MATURE 12 year olds + (Be realistic and I don’t have a problem with you age wise.)
Location of Childhood Home:
Type of Trainer: (Spy, Lab rat etc)

x-- Pokemon:(Read the following quote and obey it.)

Please try to use common sense when filling out this field. Your character can be a fairly experienced trainer, yes, but if I see something along the lines of Metagross/Milotic/Tyranitar/Salamence/Gengar/Swampert then I'm going to fluke you straight off. Your character is allowed to bee fairly experienced, but not a friggin' trainer god. Maximum four Pokémon, all of which should not be their last evolutionary stages in that case, and NO LEGENDARIES. Also, NO MINDLESS DRONE Pokémon, they need personality just as much as your character does.


Current Pokemon:
Pokemon at Full Potental: (Like, do you want me to provide a pokemon for you to capture or do you want to make pokemon appear out of your box?)

x-- Appearance:

Eye Color:
Hair Color/Style:
Height:
Weight:
Featured Characteristics:
General Appearance: (Please write it in proper detail. You are allowed to have a LINK to a picture to SUPPORT your PARAGRAPH of DETAIL but if you post a picture on my board…. -shakes fist- Please make this around 200 words long.)


x-- Personality:

Strengths | Fear:
Likes | Dislikes:
Goals:
Skills:
Quirks | Habits:
Secrets:
Reputation:
Personality: (Paragraph format 200ish words)


x-- History:

Past: (200 words)
(No League Champs but follow what I said under whatever your character is and write accordingly. Also note that it can be fun to not fully expose your entire character history on this sheet. Leave some mysteries!)

Family: (Just names, relationship and ages)

Other:
(If you don’t know what this means, go eat a poisoned banana.)



(I kid. If you don’t understand it, ask. :3 I’ll answer.)

RP example:(Everyone is expected to provide a sample. It can be a link, it can be fresh from your brain. It needs to be long, it needs to show me what you can do. Please note I‘ll judge you on this section more than ANYTHING ELSE.)

Scales
March 10th, 2007, 04:11 PM
Well Mika that looks like a moderatly good roleplay. Maybe I would join it if you made it.

Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
March 10th, 2007, 04:58 PM
I would join that to, sounds very interesting. good luck!

Mika
March 10th, 2007, 07:36 PM
Well Mika that looks like a moderatly good roleplay. Maybe I would join it if you made it.

o__o; I've spent like, two years on it. It's... <<... yeah.

parallelzero
March 10th, 2007, 07:56 PM
Holy cow. Mika, thats excellent. It's good to see that there are still members out there capable of taking their time to create a well organized plot and layout. I can really see no obvious flaws with it, and you even have me thinking of joining my first Pokemon RP in at least five months!

Well Mika that looks like a moderatly good roleplay. Maybe I would join it if you made it.
Was that really necessary? If anyones RPs are "moderately good", they are yours. You could learn a lot from Mika's RP content wise, whether you want to admit it or not.

Mika
March 10th, 2007, 08:08 PM
Holy cow. Mika, thats excellent. It's good to see that there are still members out there capable of taking their time to create a well organized plot and layout. I can really see no obvious flaws with it, and you even have me thinking of joining my first Pokemon RP in at least five months!

-flattered- o-o

Well, I'll be posting the final version on the 27th of March, when I get back from my San Antonio Band Trip (wh00t. 20 hours on a tour bus with a bunch of sleep deprived band nerds) if you're that interested. ^^;;; -hides under bed-

Anyways, just a random tidbit I'll add... since you have a very sexy Zelos on your banner... the little werid texty intoduction is based very losely off the opening to Tales of Symphonia. ^^;; I love the Tales games...

Anyways, if you do find any flaws (Minuet or big) please do let me know. I'm a horrible perfectionist.

Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
March 10th, 2007, 10:20 PM
Wow! Two Years? Now that's dedication, I amend you.

Alter Ego
March 11th, 2007, 12:31 AM
@ Mika: Well, since you asked: you misspelled 'minute'. xD Oh, but that's not in the plot so it doesn't count. Also, the 'less' in the goddess' statement should be 'lest'. But really, that's splitting commas.

I agree with Origin, certain people seem to be largely undervaluing the plot. Anyway, I see you've put a lot of effort into it, the plot is awesome (Hm...were you keeping that secret the last time to avoid spoilering us Showgan folks? Just curious. :3) and the sign-up form is very detailed. o.o *Applause* You've really made it practically impossible to waffle away any of the fields without providing the needed material and the sheer amount of them will probably scare away the lazy slackers. It's good for experienced people too since it keeps you from forgetting to mention things. Awesome. ^^ Oh, and now that there are such strict quotas on the number of every character type, do we rejoining types get a say in what role we get, sort of a reserving thing? Or will there be flexibility with the divisions as long as all necessary kinds are present? 'Cause...you know, if I'm playing spy as agreed and Clow is using his old char then that's the spies filled up already and that's not very fair for the others. :O But yeah, this stuff is more for the PMs. Just gimme' a heads up for when the new and improved Drache will appear, m'kay? Don't want to have all the good positions swiped from beneath my nose. xP

Oh yeah, where do we declare the character type (you know, spy, executive, or lab offspring)? There isn't a field for that one. Also, I take it that a former's child isn't an option this time? Or is that part of the executive thing? :3

Mika
March 11th, 2007, 07:06 PM
@ Alter, I found everything but the minute mispelling. Quote for mwe please?

And I think I fixed the second generation thing. o.o -points at TR Executive thingy- Does it pass your approval?

Alter Ego
March 12th, 2007, 06:36 AM
@ Alter, I found everything but the minute mispelling. Quote for mwe please?

And I think I fixed the second generation thing. o.o -points at TR Executive thingy- Does it pass your approval?

Heh, it's in your request to point out "any flaws (Minuet or big)". Like I said, it's not in the plot so it doesn't count. I just found it amusing. *Shot* That aside, yeah, I think any potential flaws or lackings have been liquidated. Nyu, now I've just got a huge profile to type up. ^-^

Clow
March 12th, 2007, 09:23 AM
*Blinks* I love it Mika-Chan, especially the sigh-up, it’s original and it works ^_^. And remember Alter, I’m “Tweaking” him quite a bit, same name, same personality (With a few minor Tweaks) and a few different pokemon (The Gardevoir, and Absol should be staying though, decently the Absol, I just spontaneously feel in love with that pokemon… I don’t know why XP) But yah, I’ll be there, the second I re joined that RP, after that long absence I apologized for many times, I said I would be dedicated to this baby, and I meant it.

Also, while I’m here, I thought I should just say, that I’m sorry if my RPing is a tad wonky in Gailardia Academy I’m a bit of a self-conscious RPer, I get a bit nervous RPing with good RPers, that I don’t RP with often, I don’t know why… Anyway, yah I agree with Origin, Mika is a great RPer, as is Alter, there two of the4 best I know, and I’m quite happy to RP along side them, and will most likely do it more often in the future.

Mika
March 12th, 2007, 06:16 PM
Anyway, yah I agree with Origin, Mika is a great RPer, as is Alter, there two of the4 best I know, and I’m quite happy to RP along side them, and will most likely do it more often in the future.

-flails- >w<;;;; I could never compare to Alter! -kicks Clow into clown-filled mirror mansion-

okie dokies. I'll most likely post it either this Saturday or the tuesday I get back from our Band Trip. Depends on how exausted I think I might be and or how much of an itch I get to do this.

Clow
March 12th, 2007, 06:33 PM
Well I think you can xp, and I happen to think quite highly of my fictional bro. Anyways, do I hate clowns? *scratches head* do I like them? Would anyone care if they were gone???... *Pulls out trade mark scythe, and smiles a very manic smile* *Walks out five minutes later covered with blood* What? Even I have my moments of insanity X3. Anyhow whenever your ready, I’ll start on a sign-up XP.

YoshiRiRu
March 12th, 2007, 08:26 PM
Sign up ready when you are, Mika! ^^ Can't wait for this thing to start.

-nod-

Midnight_Dragon249
March 13th, 2007, 10:50 AM
I'm bringing someting back that I bet no one remembers. At all. THE TEXT WALL. Mwahaha. Maybe someone will actually say, "Yeah, I'd join," this time. *sigh* It never hurt to be persistent, hm?

There is a legend in the world of Aedrys, speaking of a great war between the East and West over three mystic blades created by the God and Goddesses of this world. These three swords were the Blade of the Sun, the blade a blazing red-orange, was able to harness the Sun's great fury and call forth blazing rain, or create a blinding beam of light, and said to be forged by the Sun Goddess, Solarrin. There was the Blade of the Moon, a dazzling blue, forged by the Moon Goddess, Lunaria, said to be able to warp its wielder between any place instantaneously, as well as the wielder being able to warp the blade anywhere they wish. The last blade was The Blade of the Void, the blade a wicked black, created by the Shadow God, Kageriin, and was able to control shadows like puppets, as well as topple entire buildings with a single slash. If these three swords were ever brought together, an even greater power would be brought into the world, under the blades' wielder’s control, but this power was described simply 'Only one pure of soul shall not bring ruin to the world. Twisted of heart, or selfish of intention shall ruin the world and destroy themselves. To right this wrong, the pure must gather the blades of legend'. The three blades had been hidden by their forgers, never to be found, unless the time truly came when the whole of Aedrys was threatened. However, the greed of men did not heed these warnings, and sought the blades' great power.

This war raged for many years, until the West finally had all three blades in their possession. The West's king, a cruel Muro with a twisted heart had killed countless people, both innocent and warring. He craved only power, and didn't care what he had to do to get it. Once the three legendary blades were place together, they had vanished, and in their place was a great monster, a reflection of the king's lust for power. The beast, black as the king's heart, swallowed him up in dark tendrils sprouting from its body. The survivors of this incident named the beast, Exittaddo, 'Bringer of Destruction.' This monster then destroyed the West's capital, Doran, and the only thing that had stopped it was the Goddesses and God descending to Aedrys and destroying the wicked beast, but destroying their physical forms in the process. Their spirits took refuge in the blades they had forged, sealing the monster in a blade of its own, called the Arcumbre. This blade was made sure to be hidden well, as the Goddesses and God didn't have power to stop the beast again. The only way to access this blade was to bring together the three original blades at the Arcumbre's temple. To help guard the four blades, they 'touched' three people of Aedrys, of three different races, giving each and their bloodline a special ability, but this power has since faded from the bloodlines.

The people of Aedrys had then agreed to peace, not wanting a repeat incident. They rebuilt Doran, now a technological metropolis, and the three 'descendants' had guarded the blades, until, after a while, the people had forgotten the war and simply marked it down as a myth. The descendants, too, had forgotten where the swords rested, so the God and Goddesses used a bit more of their remaining powers to create special creatures, bound to the blades, and they were meant to keep all but the blades' respective descendants from ever entering the resting places.

One thousand years after the war was forgotten, the bloodlines no longer clearly identifiable, and the resting places left to ruin, the bloodline possessing Kageriin's power unknowingly found the Blade of the Void and took it from its shrine. Seeing the blade's great power, she began to feel the same lust for power as the ancient Muro king. The blade's guardian sensed this, but was powerless against the Blade of the Void. She had remembered the old legend, and craved the other blades' powers. This girl, a Kuria name Kurozyn, only 17, began to destroy other villages and towns, searching for the other descendants. Kageriin's spirit watched in horror as his power was being used to destroy the world he had helped create. He attempted to warn the Goddesses, and told them to somehow have their descendants claim the blades and defeat Kurozyn, whose fighting class has seemed to go out of normal people's abilities. She has the ability to call down ferocious beasts, as well as cast all elemental magic. Her skills with the sword are better than that of a well-trained swordmaster. After hearing of the descendants claiming the other two blades, Kurozyn had fled deep in the Demon's Maw Mountains. Using water and wind magic, she can view the descendants and attempt to kill them by controlling monsters she had created. But, unfortunately for the descendants, they have no knowledge of Kurozyn's location or abilities.

You play as either the Sun or Moon descendants, (if those spots are left) or one of their teammates. You will all travel as a Slayer group, people who kill monsters and protect travelers from attacks. This way, you will gain experience and knowledge from battles, to prepare you for the showdown with Kurozyn.

Name-Character's name
Gender-Dude or Dude-ett?
Race-Options in a min.
Personality-Err, you should know this.
Description-Make it race specific, but you can add your chara's personal touches.
Class-Just wait a sec, 'kay?
RP Sample-Just as long as you make decent posts and can spell...
Bloodline-I just need someone to take the place of the Sun descendant, which is a Veinn.

Races~

Humua-Human. That's about it.
Kuria-Full blood elf. They're tall, slender, and not harsh on the eyes.
KuKuria-Humua with longer, pointy ears, so half-elf, basically.
Lieroso-Animal people, y'know, human with animal attributes?
Veinn-Dragon-Humans. Because I love dragons. And veinn cannot fly. They can hover and glide, but cannot freely fly. Their faces are more human than dragon, and their skin can be whatever color you want. Their wings are generally small, and they have tails. Their ears are...like a two feathered wing...like...ear (http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9149/veinnearhw3.png).If you want a Veinn chara, please follow the description.
Muro-Demonic people, with horns, fangs, a slender tail, claws, ect. And they don't wear shoes. Their claws on their feet would just rip 'em.
Dragon-I only added this race because I have many a dragon character, so I thought that it would feel odd to me with no dragons. But please, I don't want 7 people wanting to be dragons. Anyways, dragons in Aedrys can wear clothes if they want to, although they usually don't. They're not very bulky, and stand on two feet. Their 'ears' can rage from two horns to cat-like ears, to nothing at all. Dragons also can have some sort of 'hairdo' such as Taiik (http://img157.imageshack.us/my.php?image=taiik1cv.png). Don't mind the little wings. I just doodled that. And didn't bother with the wings too much. Then there's Guardian (http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=guardian1xb.png), who wears a shirt (and pants, you just can't see that.) has no fuzz, and has two horns for 'ears'. So there ya go.

So, if you want the most freedom with your chara, choose Humua, or KuKuria.

NOW, classes.

Warrior
Physical combat specialist. High power and defense. Can use heavier armor, and can use just about any type of weapon.

Chaos Mage
Black magic specialist. Able to cast impairing and destructive magic. Can’t use strong armor, but can use a dagger, as well as a stave or wand.

Healing Mage
White magic specialist. Able to cast healing and repairing magic. Can’t use strong armor or weapons.

Spell Blade
Varied specializations. Able to cast weak white and black magic, and also able to use stronger weapons and armors, such as chain mail (no plate armor, etc), one-handed axes, and one-handed swords.

Ninja
A very agile class, allowing use of some black magic and daggers.

Assassin
Agile, like the Ninja class, but uses hand-to-hand, throwing daggers, and poisons in battle.

Musician {This class isn't a rip off of 'Soul Purpose.' I had this written down before it was ever posted.}
Odd specialization. Controls magic by playing certain types of music. Depending on what mood and beat the song has, different magic is used. Plus, you won’t get very bored.

Tamer
Tamers specialize in bows, and crossbows. They have no magic access, but have the ability to tame a wild creature to do their bidding. There may sound like no need for this class, with the use of Cyrun Gems, but Tamers can tame monster, creature, or animal.

Summoner
Summoners call forth both creatures from Cyrun Gems and can tap into the elemental streams to create powerful monsters of their own creation. Summoners can also wield both white and black magic, but their spells are weaker than a Chaos Mage’s or a Healing Mage’s.

Engineer
This class specializes in creating machines and AI robots to do their bidding. Engineers can create anything from a simple sword to a giant mechanical dragon. They can also make convenient gadgets, such as a “magic” map, that shows the owner’s location, along with anyone in that person’s group.

Thief
An offshoot of the Ninja and Assassin classes. Thieves are very agile, and can use daggers in both combat and as a long range weapon. They can’t use poisons, but have skills that allow them to steal items and money from monsters.


TOWN DESCRIPTON~And I will scan the map I drew, just as soon as I get to a scanner. And this is all that was left after Kurozyn's little killing spree.

Eeshi
Small port town on the West coast.

Zeinfel
Medium resort town on Teiyaros Island. Teiyaros is a relatively small island, north of Eeshi.

Doran
Large industrial city.

Sheiru
Small village in the middle of the Great Plains.

Reito
Small village on the edge of Reitio Forest and near Umisa Ocean.

Veirus
Medium town at the foot of the Demon’s Maw mountains.

Ryoset
Large town in the Demon’s Maw. Haven for Veinn and dragons.

Tsehi
Medium desert oasis town located in the Kinursi Desert.

Beirus
Small village on the Southern Plains.

Leis
Large, beautiful town located near Kyose Woods, Maris Lake, and Oakarza Mountains.

Kuro Outpost
Small outpost north of the Oakarzas.

Froswind
Medium town that has snowfall year round.

Revaldor
Large, grand city that is the Capital of Aedrys. In the middle of the city is the castle that houses King Veirallius and his son, Kazeryu.

The map is here (http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/2261/map2eb7.png).

ELEMENTS~

Fire
A very destructive element, possessing no healing or defensive abilities. Based on magical offense.
Subcategories of Fire are heat and explosion.
Opposite of Ice.
Ice
A defensive element, using barriers to deflect attacks and reflect magic. Based on magical defense.
Subcategories are snow, hail and cold.
Opposite of Fire.
Water
A balanced element, possessing healing, defensive and offensive maneuvers. Water is Multiuse.
Subcategories are mist, steam, and acid.
Opposite of Lightning.
Lightning
A very destructive element, having no healing and weak defensive abilities. Based on magical speed.
Subcategories are cloud and sound.
Opposite of Water.
Earth
A ‘tank’ element, having no healing abilities (unless using the ‘Nature’ subcategory), but strong defense, stamina, and strength. Based on physical defense.
Subcategories are nature and stone.
Opposite of Wind.
Wind
An elusive element, based on a ‘hit and run’ strategy, which is effective, as wind-based things are generally frail. Based on physical speed.
Subcategories are time and blades.
Opposite of Earth.
Light
The ‘healer’ element, having very weak offensive abilities, but strong healing, stamina, and defense. Also allows removal of negative effects, such as Slow, Poison, or Blind. Based on healing.
Subcategories are ray (an offensive version) and shield (an even more defensive version). Even damaging magics are classified as White Magic.
Opposite of Dark.
Dark
An offensive element, although it has weak physical traits and direct damage magic. It focuses on dealing damage through using enfeebling magic. Based on magical offense.
Subcategories are shade (a defensive version) and malice (+direct damage, -enfeebling.) Classified as Black Magic.
Opposite of Light.


MAINLY FOR THE SUMMONER CLASS, BUT YOU OTHERS SHOULD STILL READ IT.
Cyrun Gems are physical manifestations of elemental energy, formed the same way that monsters are, although gems take much more energy to form, making them a rare find. Gems have the ability to amplify magic of their element and capture monsters of their element, too. Each Cyrun Gem can hold up to 3 monsters. However, the only people who can call monsters out of the Gems are Summoners. Each different element of a Gem can only be found in a certain area, too.

MONSTERS~

Monsters are living, physical forms of the elements, created like Cyrun Gems, but they need much less energy to be created, making them much more common. Monsters are generally found in the same place that Cyrun Gems of their element are, but sometimes a Fire monster could be in a Light area. Monsters also can have two different elements, making them more versatile, but easier to find the right Cyrun Gem to catch them with.

Here's where monsters of certain elements are generally found.

Fire~Tsehi
Ice~Froswind
Water~Eeshi
Lightning~Leis (Oakarzas)
Earth~Reito (Reitio Forest)
Wind~Beirus
Dark~Demon’s Maw Mountains
Light~Leis (Kyose Woods)

I will also make a bestiary soon, and any contributions will be appreciated.

Scarlet Weather
March 13th, 2007, 01:30 PM
0_o

I just fell in love with this roleplay. I'm so in... I mean, freedom of race, class, etc, gives me the freedom to do basically whatever I need to, within certain guidelines. So yeah, if you were to create it, I'm in. That was a really well-thought out plot, btw. How long did it take you to come up with this?

Yesh, that was for MD. Everbody else, now:

Clow: Hmm... maybe we should Keyblade all the clowns to death. (Yes, ACC has finally got around to buying and playing KHII. I still can't beat Xemnas's final form though, dangit. I either run out of HP when he shoots at me, or Riku dies. Gah!) Seriously, not many people do compare to Alter. However...

Mika: You compare to Alter, at least occasionally. That much is kind of obvious. Get over it, and stop being so freakin' self-conscious. XD Seriously, your rp owns my soul, and if I don't join it, well, it's only because I'm too nervous to sign up.

Grim: Moderately good? Yeah, says the guy whose roleplay isn't gonna have me as a member without some major improvement. It looks like a modified Neopets RP plot. (No, I don't mean a plot where you roleplay as a Neopet, I meant a plot that you could find on the rp section of the boards: Short and doomed to peter out before its conclusion.)

ACC: Hold on, why am I talking to myself?

Midnight_Dragon249
March 13th, 2007, 02:09 PM
0_o

I just fell in love with this roleplay. I'm so in... I mean, freedom of race, class, etc, gives me the freedom to do basically whatever I need to, within certain guidelines. So yeah, if you were to create it, I'm in. That was a really well-thought out plot, btw. How long did it take you to come up with this?

Yesh, that was for MD. Everbody else, now:

Clow: Hmm... maybe we should Keyblade all the clowns to death. (Yes, ACC has finally got around to buying and playing KHII. I still can't beat Xemnas's final form though, dangit. I either run out of HP when he shoots at me, or Riku dies. Gah!) Seriously, not many people do compare to Alter. However...

Mika: You compare to Alter, at least occasionally. That much is kind of obvious. Get over it, and stop being so freakin' self-conscious. XD Seriously, your rp owns my soul, and if I don't join it, well, it's only because I'm too nervous to sign up.

Grim: Moderately good? Yeah, says the guy whose roleplay isn't gonna have me as a member without some major improvement. It looks like a modified Neopets RP plot. (No, I don't mean a plot where you roleplay as a Neopet, I meant a plot that you could find on the rp section of the boards: Short and doomed to peter out before its conclusion.)

ACC: Hold on, why am I talking to myself?

Thank you~! And it took me a few hours to type it. I'd been brainstorming the plot for awhile at school that day, and tweaked it while typing. And it's very texty, so that's why people probably didn't want to join... And if I can get about two more people to join, I'd post it.

Scales
March 14th, 2007, 11:29 AM
Okay I just ended New Generation Part 1. Im going to post part two in this thread first. Any ideas?

Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
March 14th, 2007, 12:37 PM
0_o

I just fell in love with this roleplay.

______________________________Me to 0_0

The Musician reminds me of Trigun.

That one Gung ho with the Saxaphone, He was awsome.
If I join, I'm going to be a musician, (Violen)

Scarlet Weather
March 14th, 2007, 12:43 PM
Clow: I just now noticed that you murdered the clowns. Couldn't you at least have left one for me to bonk with my patented ACC bone of justice?

AJ: What is this "Trigun" you speak of? XD

MD: You've got two people now. XD

Alter Ego
March 14th, 2007, 01:01 PM
@Mika: Heh, what's with the 'I can't compare' nonsense? Just take your bow for a plot well done and stop being modest. That plot is certainly up to my standards - heck, it's in much better shape than this mess of a new plot I currently have typed up - regardless of what you might think of your writing overall. ^-^

@Midnight_Dragon249: Actually, I do remember that plot and I was kind of wondering where it poofed off to. Anyway, a part here stuck out (And I think I mentioned this the first time around too):

She has the ability to call down ferocious beasts, as well as cast all elemental magic. Her skills with the sword are better than that of a well-trained swordmaster.

What's this chunk of present-tense doing in the middle of a past-tense narrative? o.O Stick to your tense, please, even if the character mentioned is still around. The last sentence is also kind of...meh, there's just not enough content there, really, try merging it with the previous one.

That aside, I like the elemental system you have, although some elements seem too narrowly defined to me (E.g. Air could certainly have defensive abilities in deflecting missile weapons and the like) but the class selection thing is a bit of a turn-off for me. Now that would be fine and dandy if this were an RPG the way I use the word (I.e. a computer game) but in the written RPs I prefer a bit more freedom with characters (At least what kind of weapons and equipment they use as mine tend to be...rather unorthodox.) and the last details (about towns and classes) are meager one-liners which seem awfully slapdash in comparison to your well-written plot. So meh, it's a good plot but the specifics of playing the RP kind of rub me the wrong way. Sorry. :3

Scales
March 14th, 2007, 03:14 PM
Here it is. Part two of New Generation

The New Generation: Angels and Demons

Rated PG 14

PLOT
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A few years after the defeat of Team Rocket and Team Aqua/Magma. They have decided to delve deeper. Team Rocket, Aqua and Magma have joined forces with a few other gangs and have merged into one ultimate pokemon laundering organization. Team Omni. They are recognized with White Magma uniforms.

After the domination of pokemon Gold/Silver and Crystal Team Omni had 1 powerfull leader. Giovanni who was studying pokemon for 3 years found out something. A mysterious plant found in Ilex Forest had a strange ability. Once ingested the plant would be able to change DNA. Which once ingested any DNA that would be admisitered to the patient would hybrid with the DNA and eventualy become it. Meaning if the plant was ingested into one patient and Charmander DNA would be administered to the patient the patient would warp into a Charmander.

So Giovanni decided to administer this treatment to highly advanced trainers that would be able to use this pokemon ability. One by one Team Omni has plundered trainers and their pokemon. They have kidnapped them and sent them to the Generation Labs. These have long been abandoned and have recently been opened again. It is located underground a few miles east of Vermilian. The trainers pokemon are in holding cells to the north of the complex and the trainers are in the medical labs to the south.

From Part 1:

As the trainers went into the recreational center. One by one they were taken away from the recreational center and ingected with pokemon serium. The pokemon serum worked with the food they ate. Then Giovanni made an appearence via widescreen. He told them about what they had been ingected with. Shortly after the Omni's gave the trainers a special kind of pill. When they took it they immediatly fell asleep. However some of them were already awake and they noticed that there was no longer any time limit for transformation. They mutated in front of their eyes. Then the hybrids broke out of the labs. Once they did so however the labs initiated a lockdown and traps with turrets formed.

The Hybrids managed to make it out after fighting their way. Most of them met a special mutant hybrid who was Blaziken, Scizor and had psy powers as well. It is unknown what his intentions were. He apparently was one of the first generation of pokemon hybrids. When Giovanni was still testing his formula. He disapeared however by teleporting away.

Soon the Hybrids went to the lobby of the Generation labs. But Giovanni was there waiting for them. After saying that the hybrids were to dangourous he detonated charges around the first floor. Then the floor beneath the lobby crumbled as the hybrids fell down it. But then they noticed they were now in a sewer pipe apparently forgoten when the building was built.
This is where they hybrids start. The sewer pipe.

However Omni's who survived the explosion are all around the lower floors of the Generation labs that werent destroyed. They are searching for a way out and to eliminate any hybrids they find.

But around Vermilan city trainers have noticed a large explosion coming out of the experimental labs. A few trainers flock towards the labs and try to find out what is going on.
YOUR ROLE
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Unlike the first part. You do not need to play as a hybrid. There are three templates

Hybrid

Omni

Trainer

Trainers do not meet up with hybrids or Omni's till later in the story.

Trainers are random trainers in Vermilian city, they could be starter trainers or pokemon masters.

Omni's are random team members who are still in the remaining part of the labs. They are searching for any trace of survivors of the blast


Final Notes
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Trainers will meet up with the Hybrids when they escape the complex via the old sewer tunnel. Omnis will escape the ruined complex eventualy and will still try to chase the hybrids even though their leader tried to kill them to take out the hybrids.


Only 10 other hybrids survived the blast Giovanni made.

Rules
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1. All PC rules apply

2. Spelling and grammer is not very crucial but recommended.

3. Please stick to this roleplay like glue. I need dedicated roleplayers

4. You can have legendarys. Actualy it is recomended. You have up to 4 people being legendary

5. Trainers can be beginning trainers to being pokemon masters. Plus they can have a random assorment of weapons if they wish

6. Omni's carry pokemon and weapons. Mostly non-leathal weapons but they may carry a small weapon if they wish

7. One of the biggest rules is NO POWERPLAYING OR BUNNYING

8. If you are a legendary then you will not be able to go through the full potential of it. You will barely be able to skim its powers. Legendary roleplaying is used for people who will not powerplay with it.

9. You cannot have 2 of the same legendary's in the roleplay. You can have 2 or more of the same regular pokemon but not legendarys

10. Last but not least please have fun






Sign-up Sheets
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Hybrid

Name: (self explanitory)

Age: (Please above 10)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Pokémon to hybrid with: (This is where it gets tricky. Only 4 people in the roleplay can hybrid with legendarys. But I implore you to choose your favorite.)

Description: (what your character looks like remember they look like pokemon now)

Personality: (What your character acts like)

History: (What happened that was so big that made you one of Omni's favorites? What happened in the labs? This is a crucal part to the roleplay)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

Omni

Hybrid

Name: (self explanitory)

Age: (Please above 15)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Pokémon: (if any. Please also post what their level is and anything else)

Description: (what your character looks like. Remember Omni's wear standard issue uniform. Which is a magma garb that is pure white with the Omni logo replacing the Magma one)

Personality: (What your character acts like)

Weapons: (if any. Omni's hold non leathal guns)

History: (How did you become an Omni? This is a crucial part of the roleplay)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

Trainer

Name: (self explanitory)

Age: (Please above 10)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Pokémon: (if any. Please also post what their level is and anything else)

Description: (what your character looks like. No restrictions)

Personality: (What your character acts like)

History: (How did you become a trainer? This is a crucial part of the roleplay)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

SLOTS
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1. Grim, Mewtwo, Mewtwo (Legendary)
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.

Here it is

Midnight_Dragon249
March 16th, 2007, 10:08 AM
@Mika: Heh, what's with the 'I can't compare' nonsense? Just take your bow for a plot well done and stop being modest. That plot is certainly up to my standards - heck, it's in much better shape than this mess of a new plot I currently have typed up - regardless of what you might think of your writing overall. ^-^

@Midnight_Dragon249: Actually, I do remember that plot and I was kind of wondering where it poofed off to. Anyway, a part here stuck out (And I think I mentioned this the first time around too):



What's this chunk of present-tense doing in the middle of a past-tense narrative? o.O Stick to your tense, please, even if the character mentioned is still around. The last sentence is also kind of...meh, there's just not enough content there, really, try merging it with the previous one.

That aside, I like the elemental system you have, although some elements seem too narrowly defined to me (E.g. Air could certainly have defensive abilities in deflecting missile weapons and the like) but the class selection thing is a bit of a turn-off for me. Now that would be fine and dandy if this were an RPG the way I use the word (I.e. a computer game) but in the written RPs I prefer a bit more freedom with characters (At least what kind of weapons and equipment they use as mine tend to be...rather unorthodox.) and the last details (about towns and classes) are meager one-liners which seem awfully slapdash in comparison to your well-written plot. So meh, it's a good plot but the specifics of playing the RP kind of rub me the wrong way. Sorry. :3

Can and will do... Later. I was planning on revising it anyways, if enough people decided to join. And it seems that enough people said they might join, so I'll start the revision asap. I could also give the classes and elements a wider range. I'll give the towns a better decription, too.

Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
March 16th, 2007, 07:06 PM
AJ: What is this "Trigun" you speak of? XD



An anime, yeppers. A very good one

Đ a r κ
March 16th, 2007, 10:16 PM
_____
)World(
)Wide( )War(
Part One: Rebirth

Every one-million years, when every planet's core starts to act up and large amounts of calamities begin, a meteor comes and revolves around that planet, giving random people special abilities. This meteor is as large as a human space ship. After revolving the planet for ten days, the meteor will land on the planet, waiting for five of the people that gained abilities to board it.

It will then take those five people to a planet far out in space called "Life". This planet holds a competition every one-million years. The leader of this planet gives the other dieing planets a chance of gaining back their life by having the inhabitants fight.

But what no one knows is that the leader of this planet is planning something that will decide the fate of every planet in the solar system. By giving each winning planet a rebirth stone, the leader has also given them something that is inside the stone. This devise is like a radar. Once the stone is in the planet's core, the leader of Life will then have complete control of it.

After he gains control of all the planets still alive, he will force them to give him their planet's life energy. After he has as many planets from one solar system, he will create multiple black wholes in that solar system and will move on to another solar system. He will continue this over and over until he has enough life energy to control another planet, a special planet so far in space that it would take one-million years to get there.

This planet controls time and whom so-ever takes control of this planet will be able to do as they please. The leader of Life wants to control this planet which is called Tock. After he controls Tock, he will travel back in time and will steal even more planet's life energies and will soon become the ultimate force in the universe.

But, a group of people stand in his way. They are the guardians of Tock called "The Saviors Of Time". They protect Tock with their lives. They have special abilities that would make the sun seem small. Even if the leader gets to Tock, he won't be able to defeat the saviors of time without an army of super human.

The winning planet of the competition will gain a stone that will keep their planet's core safe for another one-million years. The second place planet will gain a stone that only lasts for five hundred-thousand years. And the third winner will gain a stone that only lasts for three hundred-thousand years. But it really depends on the core's reaction.

Once these five people land on this unknown planet, they will take place in this competition. This competition only allows five people and will decide the fate of their world. If these five people win, they will be given a stone called "The Rebirth Stone".

Only three planets will get a stone. This stone, once placed in the core of a planet will calm the core and will stop the calamities. But only for a certain amount of years, months or days depending on the core's reaction.

It has been one-million years. The planets have gotten hot do to the core's soon to come destruction. Calamities have also begun on all of the planets. Just like the other millions of years, a meteor has come out of the blue and has started to revolve each planet.

After a few days, people have been reporting that they have strange abilities. Most are scared of themselves and some have killed themselves. It has now been ten days and the meteor has landed. On earth, it has landed in the middle of the Atlantic ocean. After five people boarded the meteor, it shot out into space and headed toward Life.

Your Role
You are one of the five people who have gotten a strange ability. You have just arrived on Life and you must take place in the competition, win and gain earth it's Rebirth stone, place it in the earth's core and save earth.

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Part One: Rebirth
Part Two: Race To Death
Part Three: The War
Part Four: The Trick and the allience
Part Five: Tock And The Saviors Of Time
Part Six: Things Change

typeZERO
March 17th, 2007, 11:39 AM
Midnight_Dragon: Dude , I think I just fell in love with your plot and RP. I think it's great! Hope you can post it soon =P

parallelzero
March 17th, 2007, 10:57 PM
Not really sure what the level of interest in the Sonic series is here, but ah well. I just threw it together on a whim anyways, so its not as long as it should be. XD;

Sonic Thunder

The events in this RP take place after the events of Sonic Rivals during the Adventure timeline (Adventure -> Adventure 2 -> Heroes -> Shadow -> Sonic the Hedgehog (360) -> Sonic Rivals). However, everyone’s memories of the events of Sonic the Hedgehog were erased at the games end, so we’ll consider that non-existent.

Plot
It has been but a year since the events of Rivals, when the evil Eggman Nega, Dr. Eggmans descendent from 200 years in the future, came back in time from the future and attempted to take control of the world. His attempt was thwarted by Sonic, Knuckles, Shadow and Silver, and Silver sealed Nega in a card and returned him to the future. Six months after Silver’s return to the future, Eggman Nega broke free of his prison, and escaped into the past once more.

Feeling responsible for allowing Nega to escape, Silver left his world and Blaze once more in pursuit of the past. Upon arriving in the past, however, he could not find Eggman Nega anywhere. Nega, however, was hiding aboard Space Colony ARK, a location that Silver was not aware of due to his lack of knowledge of the time. During the six months that followed, Silver continued to search for Eggman Nega with no results, while the evil being from the future began making modifications to the weaponry aboard ARK; particularly the Eclipse Cannon. In reality, Nega was converting the Eclipse Cannon into a weapon capable of creating much chaos throughout the planet without directly harming the planet itself. Using forbidden technology from the future, Eggman Nega transformed the Eclipse Cannon into a weapon capable of transforming human lifeforms into anthropomorphic animals, much like Sonic, Silver, and the majority of the cast.

The day of reckoning finally arrived as the end of the six months came to a close. Despite all of Nega’s planning and genius, he made one brutal miscalculation. Without the use of the Chaos Emeralds, the Eclipse Cannon was unable to reach maximum output, and thus was only capable of affecting a single city instead of the entire planet. Unfortunately, that single city was Station Square, and all of the cities inhabitants became anthropomorphic animals. The city plunged into chaos, and was eventually sealed off by G.U.N, the higher ups not wanting a worldwide panic.

One benefit of the incident, however, was that the issue was brought to the attention of those willing to step in and help. Sonic, who had been in Station Square at the time of the assault; Shadow, who had become an agent of the government after putting his past behind him; Silver, who had also been present in Station Square that day. Along with their allies, and most importantly, you, a human who had become caught up in the life changing blast from the Eclipse Cannon, this group of heroes must put a stop to the plans of Eggman Nega, gathering the Chaos Emeralds so that he is incapable of fulfilling his evil goals.

Overview
You are one of the many caught in the blast from the modified Eclipse Cannon, and have become an anthropomorphic creature as a result. Just to clarify, characters like Sonic, Shadow, Silver, Amy, Tails, Knuckles, etc are all examples of anthropomorphic creatures. Somehow, you have found yourself involved with the hero group. It soon becomes your responsibility to help see the groups efforts go through. Your journey will take you all over the world and beyond in search of the Chaos Emeralds, and you will face many dangers.

Character Profiles

Adding to final version; will go into detail on the main characters.

Form Can be an original or existing character. Maximum of two per person.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Animal: (What anthropomorphic animal are you?)
Appearance:
Personality:
Abilities: (For example, Sonic has super speed, Tails can fly, Knuckles has his strength. Something along those lines.)
History:
Other:

Clow
March 17th, 2007, 11:36 PM
I am actually quite the Sonic fan, and would happily join this RP, but this is just mine personally opinion, an RP like this is usually really good with actual canon characters as well, especially if you throw unexpected characters into the mix, such as a return of Mighty, or maybe Metal Sonic (I actually have a cool RP background for Metal Sonic ready to sue when I get the chance X3.) Well anyway looking forward to it, just wanted to get me 50 cents in. Also, is more then one character aloud??? Your note before sigh-up leads that you may be able to plain canon characters as well as original.

parallelzero
March 18th, 2007, 07:41 AM
It was late. When I said "You may play existing characters" I meant canon characters. XD; I'm going to put a cap on two characters, but that might change depending on the number of members we get. If you want to involve Metal Sonic somehow, you're welcome to.

Clow
March 18th, 2007, 09:22 AM
I knew you meant canon, I was just making sure you meant we could play them XP. Two character limit sound perfect to me, one canon, and on fan will probably be the norm. Anyhow, thanks, I think I will involve Metal, if you don’t mind, I’m dieing to right this history, so I think I’ll make it in a bit and PM it to you, just to got someone else’s opinion on it XP. After a post that is, till later you’ll see me there, glad to see another Sonic fan on PC ^_^.

Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
March 18th, 2007, 10:20 AM
The Chaos Gate

Once Upon a time, Angels, Demons and all the other creatures of the ancient time roamed freely among the planet Rem. To be expected, the world wasn't perfect and war between the two dominant races occurred. This war made Rem to be from, A perfect utopia to being a hellish land. Most of the creatures died off during the war between Angels and Demons. After countless years of battle a treaty was to be decided, to split the land of what they could have once called paradise.

The Angels and Demons met in the last green area, a sacred spot. “ The Garden Of Eden.” Two representatives were to meet; St. Peter And Beelzebub.

The two met at the center of the garden, a small pure white gazebo sat there. With a pedestal inside of it, As they approached the pedestal a paper appeared. The Treaty; It read;

The once enchanting realm of a planet, known as Rem has been soiled.
By the constant war of the two races; The Angels and The Demons.
The place where the two leaders of the two races reside is known as my garden.
The Garden Of Eden
I am known as the Messiah of Balance.
I am Rem, I am Eden, I am the land which you destroy.
I am the water you drink, the trees you destroy.
I am the planet.
And I wish for the Angels And the Demons to leave, to there proper homes.
The Land known as Heaven and The Land Known as Hell, This is the land known as Rem, as Eden.
To make proper that neither races return, I will seal the Three realms from each other with a gate.
The Chaos Gate.
And as that, the two races were sent to there respective lands, to be in peace with there own. And as the years went by, decades upon decades, Rem was repaired. The land was harbored with green, the water as fresh and pure as the clear blue sky. Messiah of Balance decided it was time to harbor creatures anew, Of course Angels and Demons and creatures from before still inhabited the planet, very few.
Balance called the creatures of what he had created, humanus. These creatures were called this for there humanoid shape, ( These are basically humans)

Over the years, Balance stopped communicating with the people of the world, leaving them to figure out the planet themselves. And within centuries The Messiah of Balance was known as just a legend.
The Garden of Eden had long been a myth, the sacred land was sealed off from the impure, and was secluded. The Humanus had by now figured out what there bodies can handle, what they can create with metals and all other kinds of secrets in the world, Civilization was coming to life.

Over the next period of X number of years, The people of Rem started to hunt for a profession, the demons of the world. This Angered Beelzebub and he started his plan on invading Rem and killing off all the Humanus, The Angels saw what he was trying to do and tried there best to stop him. Beelzebub knowing that he couldn't do anything from where he was decided to find an individual on Rem to do his dirty work, He would have the Humanus break the Chaos gate. The angels saw this and decided to guide the individual in the right direction, against breaking the gate.

The Two individuals were chosen, A girl named Lyndi and a Man named Judas, both around Seventeen, where there energy is at its peak.
Judas was a man from the village, Futani. His village was raided by demons and his family killed. He was spared for he was in a secret room, underground his house. Judas was enraged and swore his revenge on the Demons. Beelzebub wasn't aware of this man and neither was St. Peter till later. Judas made it his life's work to slay the demons.

Lyndi was a Woman from the village Hitori, she was guided by Beelzebub to find the Angels individual and kill him or her, she was gratified of the power given to her and agreed.

After Lyndi traveled afar, killing who's energy was the special kind to be chosen, she then met Judas and the two battled, Judas won but spared Lyndi, This caught Beelzebub's attention and decided to try to control Judas, knowing that Judas wouldn't listen to him he disguised himself as St. Peter and made a story. He told Judas that opening the Chaos Gate would seal the Demons forever.

The first task that Judas would have to accomplish would be to Find the Garden Of Eden, Judas was told that to find the Garden Of Eden he would have to create a special map, magically. He was told he would have to make a great sacrifice for the magical power, he was reluctant but did what he was told.
He went to the underground of a major city, Loprotsen and set up a spell, a very ancient and powerful spell that would extract the energy of masses. He activated the spell and the city was wiped off the map in the extraction of all the people in the city's energy, they all died.

The energy was used and he created the map to the Garden Of Eden, he went there and was stopped by Lyndi who had now realized what she was doing was wrong and would wipe Rem clean of what purity it had. Judas told her that what he was doing would save the world and for her to get out of his way, she
said she would fight to the death to defend what was right, The two fought once again and Judas once again won. But she wasn't spared this time, as he approached the gazebo and the pedestal he saw a fountain, he looked inside of it and gasped. His reflection showed him, he was half angel and half demon, he then realized he had been deceived. Beelzebub realized this as well and decided to talk to Judas, “ Okay Judas, you have reached the chaos gate. You must now destroy it by speaking the ancient words, Signum Exsisto Infractus (Seal Be Broken) Be careful not to send energy of both Angel And Demon in though, that would seal the gate completely and forever.” Beelzebub said to him smoothly.
Judas decided to do what had been said not to, he felt the two energies apear, one in each hand. St. Peter finally saw this and in a panicked tone yelled not to, Judas faced the Chaos Gate and clapped the two energies together, the gate shattered and the demons were freed, Judas was killed.

Your Role: You must find the Garden of Eden and repair the Gate, Demons inhabit the planet and are slayed by the Humanus. It has been Ten Years since the opening of the gate, the Humanus race isn't in danger, this isn't an Apocalypse RP. So yeah, all the cities and continents of the planet aren't destroyed.
Okay.

Races to Choose From:

Humanus: Pretty much Humans, can vary in height and weight; From 4'8 to 6'5. So yeah, Humanus are a smart race, not the smartest but pretty smart. A Medium in the strength department and speed department.

Dark Elf: An elf species that specialize in the dark arts, they are a tall species and are of blue skin tone. Eyes are mostly either red or green, they have great magic skill and are a little stronger then the Humanus, highly intelligent. A little slower then most Humanus. The Dark elf usually have white or black hair.
Light Elf: Another Elf Species that specialize in healing spells, they are also tall and are of a peach or pale skin tone. Eyes are always blue, they also have great magic skill but are around the same strength as the humanus, highly intelligent and about the same speed of humanus, hair is usually either blond or white.

Wood Elf: The regular elf species that are of the archery persuasion, they are tall and usually have peach or pale skin tone. Eyes can vary, they have no magic ability but have a great eagle eye, they are decently strong. Not as intelligent as the other elfs, but around Humanus standards. They are very fast, faster then the humanus. The wood elf always has blond hair.

Dwarf: A short ( 3'11 to 4'9) They are miners and blacksmiths, they have a light skin tone and mostly dull gray eyes. No Magic abilities, they are semi-intelligent, around Humanus, dwarfs are very strong, stronger then humanus but not as strong as a dark elf. They are pretty slow, they are usually either bald or brown hair. Almost always have a beard.

Fairy: Able to adjust size, from ( 3 inches to 4 feet) They specialize in healing magic and like to help others, they are a very intelligent species, more intelligent then the light and dark elfs. They have no strength power, very fast when flying small but when having to walk at full size are as fast as Humanus. Fairies consist of a peachy skin tone and blue or pink eyes, their wings are either blue or pink as well ( Usually the color of their eyes) Their hair color can be from, Blond, orange, red, pink, blue, green and pretty much any color.

Undead: Skeleton: Skeletons are the size of a Humanus and are, well skeletons. They have greater strength and might be able to cast magic. This is basically a humanus, they are slower then normal humanus.

Zombie: A rotting corpse, bleeding, rotting, well it pretty much speaks for it self. Zombies eyes are always milky white and wear whatever and look like whatever they once were. They are dangerous but dumb and easy to outrun.

Halfling: Pretty much a splice of humanus and wood elf, they are great archers, have little to none magic ability. They are height of 5 ft to 6 ft, peach or pale skin, decent strength and great speed, intelligent as a regular humanus. Always have blond hair.

Goblin: Mean green ugly machine, they wield spears and are menacing. They vary in height from five foot to six foot, green or gray skin tone, red or gray eyes. Stronger then humanus yet very unintelligent.
They can't use magic, they are pretty slow. Have no hair, they can dip their spears in poison.

Hobgoblin: Very large, Six Foot being the smallest and nine foot being tallest. They are always brown in skin tone, they are one of the strongest species but very unintelligent. They are still bald, they use large spears which can still be poisoned. They can't use magic or archery, extremely slow. There eyes are either gray or red.

Mountain Dwarf: Like the regular dwarf, they are from; 4'3 at smallest and 5'5 at tallest. They are usually pretty heavy from muscle. They are very strong, stronger then a dark elf. Cannot use magic or archery. Eyes are dull gray, these guys don't mine and blacksmith, they are pure combat. The solider of the dwarf's. A little faster then the average dwarf, but are a little more unintelligent. They usually wield either a war hammer or battle ax, heavy weapons.

Half Giant: Being from, eight foot to ten foot they are very large. Their skin tone varies from, Brown, peach, tan and pale. Their eyes are either white, black or red. They are very powerful, stronger then the average hobgoblin, but they are extremely stupid. Very aggressive yet slow, they can carry various weapons; Spears, war hammers, axes, clubs etc; Weaknesses: Eyes

Werewolf: Starting as a regular Humanus and changing at a full moon, increasing in height about six inches, and gaining black fur. Longer teeth, Wolfy white eyes and a vicious attitude. Still has control over self, yet is more reckless and aggressive. Nose power is increased and so is the strength, they are a little slower then the average wolf. They do not carry weapons when transformed. Weaknesses are: Silver, Wolfs bane and quick silver (Mercury)

Vampire: We're not talking about that stupid Dracula crap here. These will look like average humanus but might be a bit paler then normal, or more commonly photogenic. Vampires have control of there fangs, them being out or not. Vampires usually have either red or green eyes, some may wear black and stuff like that, but most will dress normally. Some have the ability to turn into bats, while others don't. They do require blood to live, not necessarily human. They are the speed of the average humanus unless a powerful vampire which are faster, same thing with strength. They are usually more athletic. Vampires can carry any sort of weapon as long as it isn't silver. Weaknesses: Silver ( All) Garlic (Some) and can be commonly killed by destroying the heart, not necessarily with a stake.

Siren: Always a female, these woman have the ability to sing a great song ( Wordless) which hypnotizes men and then the sirens can control them. They are the average size of a female humanus and almost always have either blond or orange haired. Eyes vary. Has the same speed, strength and intelligence of a humanus. Weaknesses: (Not really a weakness but it is smart to wear earmuffs. They can be killed traditionally)

Chaos Elf: The last kind of elf, likes it's relatives it is taller then the average humanus, having blue or green toned skin, Red, green or blue eyes, black hair. They are stronger then the dark elf and more intelligent, not as fast though. Usually in the dark alliance, they are aggressive and cold, they use dark and chaos magic, very powerful indeed. Weapons are usually magical staffs and rods. Weaknesses: Light magic

Liche: A liche is a poweful sorcerer that uses dark magic, usually undead but not always. They are slow creatures and not very strong, intelligence is very high though. They use magic to battle, if alive they will be pale skinned with crimson eyes and black hair. If undead they are skeletons with red eye glow and will most always be in a purple robe with gold lacing. They stand around six foot, though they can also be below at around five foot four. They will usually use a scythe to battle. Weaknesses: Light magic

Leechi: A humanus that can steal the energy of others, if in humanus form they will have white hair and gray eyes, pale skin. About five foot seven to six foot three, slow creatures and not very strong but make up with their high powered mind. If in Leechi form they will look monstrous, can be same heights but will have a slimy green flesh with several openings around the body that are mouths with rows of sharp teeth. They will have fleshy red pulsing eyes and powerful jawed mouths, their tongue alone and slice a sword in two, their palms of their hands have leechy openings that will suck energy right out of an individual. Weaknesses: Fire



Chimera\Hybrid: These creatures are usually humanus and other species spliced, since there are so many combinations you would have to either do it yourself or PM me what you want to hybrid.

Homuncules: No Not Full Metal Alchemist! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Homunculus

A homuncules are artificial creatures made by alchemy, basically flesh golem's. They will usually have white soul less eyes and be bald. They have advanced from nearly a foot long to much higher, Five to Six feet. These are controlled by the Alchemist that created them, sometimes if not perfected they will kill there creator. They are hollow soldiers, give them a weapon and orders and they will do it. Very hard to kill. Very slow unless sacrificed strength for so, Very powerful, not intelligent. Weaknesses: Mostly Fire

Elemental: An Elemental can look basically like a humanus with the hair color and eye color of the element used. Height is average. This is in categories.

Water: Will have blue hair and blue eyes, can basically control water and walk on it. Breathe underwater as well. One of the slower elementals but pretty average, average strength and intelligence. Will carry a rod with a blue orb in it. Average height, usually girl. Weakness: Electricity

Fire: Will have red hair and red eyes, can control fire and not be burnt by it, smoke will not choke the elemental of fire. A average speed elemental, immense power and average intelligence. Will carry rod with red orb inside of it. Average height. Weakness: Water

Air: Will have white hair and white eyes, can control winds and weather. Has the ability to hover and glide. Above average speed, low power and average intelligence. Will carry rod with white orb inside of it. Smaller then average size. Weakness: Earth

Earth: Will have brown hair and brown eyes, can control rocks and minerals, has the ability to raise ground and cause small tremors. Will be bigger then other elementals, bulky. Carries a rod with a brown orb inside of it. Very slow, very powerful, low intelligence. Weakness: Water

Forest: Will have green hair and green eyes, can control plants and make them grow the way they want.
Can attack with roots of tree's and will know more about plant healing and poisons. Smaller stature. Carries rod with green orbs inside of it. High intelligence, low power and speed Weakness: Fire

Electricity: Will have yellow hair and yellow eyes, can control electricity and thunder. Attacks will be electrical. Carries rod with yellow orb inside of it. Tall and slender. High speed, average intelligence and high power. Weakness: Earth

Serpentine: Serpent like creatures with humanoid shapes, can have a humanoid torso and snake bottom or other ways of doing it. Will always either have red or green eyes, tall. High intelligence usually, higher then average speed and above average power. Have the ability to poison others. Carries a spear for a weapon. Weaknesses: Fire and Ice

Shadow: A dark creature that looks like a humanus but is much more power, intelligence and power. Can overshadow people and turn themselves into mere shadows. Can make others do his or her dirty work, when in humanus form they will have black or white hair, crimson eyes and very pale skin.
Weaknesses: Light

Sin: There are seven, the seven deadly sins. All are in humanus form. Black Star On Forehead or hand or chest or back. All have the ability to track down each other.

Gluttony: Usually a little portly, height is vary. Has the ability to Vomit acid, no real fixed appearance.
Lust: Usually hot, Has the ability to seduce opposite sex and control them
Envy: Can change it's appearance. ( Shut up)
Pride: always a little tall, very powerful (Fist Fight!)
Sloth: Slow, but has very good defense and can evade most attacks. Can Read opponents mind.
Wrath: Usually a little on the small side but has great mental abilities ( Psychokinesis)
Greed: Can Change arm to any melee weapon.

Virtue: Like the sins, all are in humanus form and have a white start somewhere on their body.

Chasity: Has great healing abilities, enemy to Lust
Abstinence: Has the ability to puppet people, Enemy to Gluttony
Liberality: Can heal great wounds, only complete destruction will kill. Enemy to Greed.
Diligence: Has extreme speed and agility, Enemy to Sloth.
Patience: Can stretch all parts of body. Enemy to Wrath.
Kindness: Can turn body to metal and then shape themselves, Enemy to Envy
Humility: glare can stun enemies, Enemy to Pride.

I'm not done posting. Will post map soon, 0_o and abilitys.

Skills to choose from, ( Six Skill slots to start with, the more in one skill the better the skill)

Magic: All sorts of spells, elemental spells, Combat spells, and lots others.

Black Magic: Dark Magic, almost always for misfortune and evil. Will most always hurt people, higher spells can kill a man instantly.

Light Magic: Healing spells or spells used to repel darkness and evil creatures.

Paladin: A person who uses magic for his weapon, to increase the power or to repair it or even to add special attacks.

Alchemist: An Alchemist is a user of philosophy and science to create the unknown.

Rouge: A cross between a thief and an Assassin, or maybe even ninja. Can pick simple locks, use throwing knives and knows how to create common poisons.

Assassin: A person who kills others for money, can be a silent killer or not. Knows how to make complicated poisons and how to be stealthy.

Thief: Can pick complicated locks and pick pockets, breaks open combinations and safes.

Ninja: Close to the Assassin, knows well made poisons and is stealthy person. Well at throwing knifes and stars.

Necromancer: Summons the undead.

Blacksmith: Can smith metal objects such as, swords and sheilds.
Miner: Mines rare ores and other ores for blacksmithing.

Treasure Hunter: Hunts for ancient treasures, has a knack for puzzles.

Knight: A swordsman.

Samurai: A swordsman that doesn't use shields, they know important parts of the body to damage.

Demon Slayer: Slays demons for a living. Knows important weaknesses

Appraiser: Identifies rare objects and what they are worth.

Chemist: Creates potions to increase powers and heal wounds.

Farmer: Grows important herbs and plants.

Priest: Has a natural strength over demons and the undead.

Judo: A Judo fighter

Animal Breeder: Breeds rare pets that are useful in battles

Lumberjack: Cuts down trees and makes things.

Jeweler: Creates Jewelry which are sold for high prices.

Cook: Can cook things that are important for healing and improvement.

Dragon Slayer: slays dragons as a profession

Dragon Rider: Is able to ride a dragon

Merchant: Buys things and then sells them at a higher price.

The Map:

Continents:

Tyrol: A medium sized western continent, only real export is Meats and Furs.

Provinces Of Tyrol:

Huri: The largest Province in Tyrol, is mostly desert and uninhabitable. Not important.
Gyre: The Northest Point of Tyrol, Is a large hunting ground full of wild beasts.
Rini: The Only real cizilized Province in Tyrol, Has three main cities.
Cities Or Tyrol:
Fyre: The largest city in Rini, For merchanting.
Gorni: A smaller city in Rini, Has ancient temples for touristing.
Libili: The other small city in Rini, Used to stay while in Tyrol, full of Inns and pubs.
Villages Of Tyrol:

Lickiw: A small village in between Gorni and Libili, Has one Inn. Poor Village.
Gyure: A large village by Fyre, Home of many foreign alcohols


Continent: Umbrol: A small Northern island continent, Main Export is Furs and Ice remedies

Provinces:

Yutiki: The largest Province of Umbrol, A great area for hunting ice beast, There are herbs that are exclusively there that heal frostbite when mixed right.

Jihut: A smaller province that is a total iceland, it is to cold to live regulary there, but ice fishing is at it's peak here.

Cities:

Gui: The only city in Yutuki and it is very large, this is a market place and a place to stay. Great hospitals in this area.

Villages:

Limpwut: A the only village in Tyrol, it is between Yutuki and Jihut, it is there for stocking up for the trip upon Jihut, the wilderness.


Continent: Alumos, Northest area on the map and totally uninhabitable, temperatures reaching below sixty is common.

No cities or villages or provinces

Continent: Orsha: Orsha is a mid northern continent, it's main export is medicines and herbs.

Provinces:

Ukilate: The largest province, it is the northern top of the continent and dominant. It is a decent tempature up there, it snows most of the year long at a small rate. A great place to live, not to hunt.

Hituy: A smaller province that has a great river inside of it, full of very rare fish that have uses in medicines, It is a little warmer in Hituy then in Ukilate.

Joinjau: A very small province that is basically a large plain, full of wild animals and strange plants. Only one village here.

Gugola: Right next to Joinjau it is basically just a giant port, only one city and it is based on the port there. Not a good place to live.

Cities:
Burnita: A very large city in Ukilate, salespalce and all around industrial place.

Burmita: The sister city to Burnita, a little smaller but still big. For the rich, like a Beverly hills

Singdoesa: The last City of Ukiltate and a dump to say the least, very sleazy city.

Ugogog: A city near the river in Hituy, not a large one and it isn't as civilized. Better not to go.

Bureu: A city at the bottom of The province Hituy, again, not very civilized, maybe for a small stay but not to live forever.

Bovu: The only city in Gugola, relies on the nearbye port for money and goods. Its a small but nice city.

Villages:

Bul: The only village of the province, located in Joinjau, only place there to get supplies and to rest. Pretty small village.

Continent: Sirius: Most western continent, very desert and has only one use. There is a special tower there that is used for telling the future.

Tower Of The Desert: Only area that is used in Sirius, For telling the future.

Continent: Minerva: A mid western continent, very small. Main export is rare animals

Provinces:

Heji: The larger province of the two in Minerva, Full of rare exotic animals.

Hatorri: The smaller of the two in Minerva, Not a very good area. Dangerous due to poisonous animals.

Cities:

Lub: A large city in Heji, full of merchants and stalls with furs.

Ruba: A smaller city in Heji, main use is vacationing, has inns and pubs of all sorts.

Loprotsen: The only city of Hatorri, and it was destroyed by Judas years ago. This has collapsed Hatorri's economy.

Villages:

Bugle: Small village in between the two provinces, poor and not very important.

Continent: Azure: Largest continent on the planet, all sorts of things. Three large Provinces

Jin: The largest province in Azure, known for it's extremely rare metals.

Lumos: A smaller province in Azure, has great fishing spots and great forests with rare plants.

Yuri: The last province in Azure, is known for it's amount of merchanting, the cities here have everything under the sun.

Cities:

Jini: The largest city in Jin, and the main. Miners bring their ores into the city to sell or to make things with the help of blacksmiths. Rich City.

Renji: Another Large city in Jin. Has great caves full of rare ores.

Lumi: The largest city in Lumos, has many medical shops and nurseries ( Plant)
Lumres: The smallest city in Lumos. Has many inns and pubs.
Hubgi: A large city in Lumos, Is surrounded by heavy forest

Yuril: The largest city in Yuri, full of merchanting. The city of shops.
Yurbi: A large city full of inns and pubs, full of antique shops.

Villages:

Hungi: A small village by Renji, nothing special.
Jubi: A large village in Lumos, full of aggressive villagers.


Sign up sheet:

Name:
Age: ( 16 and up)
Sex:
Race:
Sub-race:
Main Occupation:
Skill slots: ( You get six)
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3.
4.
5.
6.
Height:
Weight:
Appearance:
Personality:
Nickname: (If Any)
Side: ( Good, bad or Neutral)
History:
Birthday:
Place of Birth:
Strength: ( The way these work, is you get six marks. Each one of these have one already, you can decide how much each gets)
Intelligence:
Courage:
Charisma:
Speed:
Weapon:
Sub-Weapon:
Goals:
Fears:
Vehicle: ( Dragon, wolf or what?)
Element: ( Earth, air, ice... etc;)

Zelos
March 18th, 2007, 12:53 PM
OOC: Anyone know how to get an accent mark over the second 'e' so it reads Bles-sed (Pronounced with two syllables)? Not very important, I just thought it sounded better.)

Anyway~ I was just sitting around and suddenly this popped in my head. It sort of reminds me of Melody's mission from the third movie (The Power of One), but this time it includes five people and a different plot. Tell me what'cha think, please? ^-^;

Plot:

Blessed Melody

Every 1000 years since the beginning of time, the spirits of old have called upon five infants from around the Pokemon world as “Tune Keepers.” These five chosen ones, unbeknownst to them, have been given the task of singing the Blessed Melody, an ancient song that ensures peace of the world for the next millennium.

The clock has run down, and five new Keepers have been selected. Their mission, whether they like it or not, is to travel to Aria temple, an ancient building located on a small island North of the trio of continents, Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn.

An instrument has appeared before each now-grown child, and delivered a message of the mission directely from their ancestors themselves.

But this time, things will be much harder. An evil organization bent on world domination has learned of this age-old tradition, and has decided to put a stop to it and throw the world into utter chaos. Will the five Keepers be able to persevere and play the Blessed Melody?

Well, that's all that I could think of. I was trying to make the plot much longer, but I just couldn't decide what info I should stuff in there or just leave in some sort of info section below it.

In short: Five kids have been chosen to play a magical song that will ensure peace for the coming years. Trials will await them as they venture forward to Aria Island along with their group (Which I will explain how they meet later... if I can think of something...Hehe).

Oh, and yeah... What I mean about the instruments is that each Keeper will magically be talented in whatever instrument has chosen them, and it will be their sort of guide through the mission. I was thinking along the lines of Flute, Ocarina, Violin, and some others. What do you all think?

This is still much in the work and I was just thinking about what some of the role-players here thought. If you would like to offer any suggestions or just a comment, please don't hesitate to post~ It would be greatly appreciated.

(Hope this is in the right place...)

Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
March 18th, 2007, 06:25 PM
Wow, that sounds like a really solid plot Tempest, except it was the second movie that was Power Of One. Well anyway, you have my attention with it.

Đ a r κ
March 20th, 2007, 08:45 AM
Long ago on a planet far out in space, a man tried to steal an ancient stone that controls the very fabric of time and space. A group of seven adults, had tried to stop this evil man from obtaining this stone.

These adults had ability's. The power of fire, water, earth, nature/ speech to animals, gravity, wind, telepathy, Jinxes and much more. The evil man was an old member of this group. he is the one possesses the ability of jinxes which cause things that wouldn't normally happen to people (Imagine just standing on a sidewalk, then your foot gets stuck in a hole that suddenly appeared).

His name is Melez. He was always the member of the team to cause trouble but, the rest of the team never suspected that one of their own would cause so much terror. The group succeeded in saving the stone. Melez ran and became the leader of a planet. Those seven adults still guard that stone up to this day and Melez is still planning on stealing it.

Now, the stone has been acting weird do to planet energies being stolen. Now the stone has been making time drifts on the planet and some myths are becoming reality. But this is only on the planet because the stone's power can not reach farther than the planet thanks to the seven guardians. But as the days go by, the stone's power is getting farther and farther and will soon cover the universe completely.

World
Wide War

Part One: Rebirth

Every one-million years, when every planet's core starts to act up and large amounts of calamities begin, a meteor comes and revolves around that planet, giving random people special abilities. This meteor is as large as a human space ship. After revolving the planet for ten days, the meteor will land on the planet, waiting for five of the people that gained abilities to board it.

It will then take those five people to a planet far out in space called "Life". This planet holds a competition every one-million years. The leader of this planet, who's name is Melez gives the other dieing planets a chance of gaining back their life by having the inhabitants fight.

But what no one knows is that the leader of this planet is planning something that will decide the fate of every planet in the universe. By giving each winning planet a rebirth stone, the leader has also given them something that is inside the stone. This devise is like a radar. Once the stone is in the planet's core, the leader of Life will then have complete control of it.

After he gains control of all the planets still alive, he will force them to give him their planet's life energy. After he has as many planets from one solar system, he will create multiple black wholes in that solar system and will move on to another solar system. He will continue this over and over until he has enough life energy to control another planet, a special planet so far in space that it would take one-million years to get there.

This planet controls time and whom so-ever takes control of this planet will be able to do as they please. The leader of Life wants to control this planet which is called Tock. After he controls Tock, he will travel back in time and will steal even more planet's life energies and will soon become the ultimate force in the universe.

But, a group of people stand in his way. They are the guardians of Tock called "The Saviors Of Time". They protect Tock with their lives. They have special abilities that would make the sun seem small. Even if the leader gets to Tock, he won't be able to defeat the saviors of time without an army of super human.

The winning planet of the competition will gain a stone that will keep their planet's core safe for another one-million years. The second place planet will gain a stone that only lasts for five hundred-thousand years. And the third winner will gain a stone that only lasts for three hundred-thousand years. But it really depends on the core's reaction.

Once these five people land on this unknown planet, they will take place in this competition. This competition only allows five people and will decide the fate of their world. If these five people win, they will be given a stone called "The Rebirth Stone".

Only three planets will get a stone. This stone, once placed in the core of a planet will calm the core and will stop the calamities. But only for a certain amount of years, months or days depending on the core's reaction.

It has been one-million years. The planets have gotten hot do to the core's soon to come destruction. Calamities have also begun on all of the planets. Just like the other millions of years, a meteor has come out of the blue and has started to revolve each planet.

After a few days, people have been reporting that they have strange abilities. Most are scared of themselves and some have killed themselves. It has now been ten days and the meteor has landed. On earth, it has landed in the middle of the Atlantic ocean. After five people boarded the meteor, it shot out into space and headed toward Life.

Your Role
You are one of the five people who have gotten a strange ability. You have just arrived on Life and you must take place in the competition, win and gain earth it's Rebirth stone, place it in the earth's core and save earth.

Sign Up
Name:
Age: (14- 20)
Gender:
Personality: (At lest five lines)
Description: (Same as above)
Previous occupation: (What did you do for a living before gaining an ability)
Ability: (What ability has the meteor given you)
Other: (Any extra info that you would like to tell about your character)

RULES
1.All PC rules apply
2.No powerplaying or bunnying
3.No compleate control over others withought permission.
4.Make sure you can stay with the RP.
5.If you do not post within a week withought telling me, you will be out of the RP.

.....Still under construction
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I figured that adding the plot of my other idea would help this RP.
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Part One: Rebirth
Part Two: Race To Death
Part Three: The War
Part Four: The Trick and the alliance
Part Five: Tock And The Saviors Of Time
Part Six: Things Change

Scales
March 20th, 2007, 01:29 PM
Here is a roleplay I was thinking of creating a long time ago. I joined a roleplay like this on another forum a year ago

Legend of Hogwarts

Rated PG 14

PLOT
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This is a Harry Potter roleplay. Meaning this takes place at the same time Harry potter goes on his train. But there are exceptions. We do not interact with the characters in any way. This is a story about our characters at hogwarts for approximetly 7 years. Throughout these seven years we will meet friends and enemies. But the main goal is to survive the year. This roleplay acts as a mirror to the novels and movies so whatever is going on at the time of the novels and movies it will affect the roleplay as well. Maybe someone will have a special power and make the roleplay much more exciting. Or maybe we will not survive the year. It all comes down to you.


YOUR ROLE
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You are a hogwarts student. You must go through hogwarts and make friends and enemies. Maybe something big will happen to you. But it is highly doubtfull.


Rules
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1. All PC rules apply

2. Spelling and grammer is not very crucial but recommended.

3. Please stick to this roleplay like glue. I need dedicated roleplayers

4. Remember your character is 11 years old. So do not make him act to mature or anything

5. You start on the hogwarts express. Not at hogwarts yet

6. Your wand has Dragonheartstring, Pheonix feather or unicorn tail hair. If you want a different type then these you will need to discribe it and its magical properties

7. One of the biggest rules is NO POWERPLAYING OR BUNNYING

8. This roleplay will focus on 7 years at hogwarts. Throughout these seven years your character will interact with other characters, go to classes to learn spells and such.

9. You cannot interact with main characters in the roleplay. It may have the ripple effect on the books and change the entire plot of the roleplay. You can however mention them or interact with secondary characters.

10. Last but not least please have fun






Sign-up Sheet
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Name: (self explanitory)

Gender: (self explanitory)

Special powers: (If you have a speical power. Meaning if you are an Animagus or a metamorphagus or anything like that. But it does mean that you will be a social outcast in the roleplay. This also applies if your character isnt human)

House: (Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw and Slytherin)

Description: (What your character looks like, Note they need to wear robes)

Personality: (What your character acts like. Remember their personality is also based on their house)

Wand: (Wand core and wood the wand is incased with. If you wish you could have a rare substance in your wand. But you must discribe what exactly it is)

History: (What happened before your character goes to Hogwarts? Is he/she pureblood? Did He/she see someone die? This is a crucial part of the roleplay)

Other: (anything else to add)

RP Sample: (Another important step. This is where you must show me what your writing style is so I can judge you.)

SLOTS
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Here it is

Đ a r κ
March 20th, 2007, 02:40 PM
Although I have been itching for a magic filled RP, there isn't really any plot if you ask me. It seems interesting but I think you should add a story. It doesn't look like the RPers would be working up to something, just getting through life.

Scales
March 20th, 2007, 05:40 PM
Although I have been itching for a magic filled RP, there isn't really any plot if you ask me. It seems interesting but I think you should add a story. It doesn't look like the RPers would be working up to something, just getting through life.

Yes I was thinking the same thing. But the problem is if you create a plot everyone needs to flow through it. Eventualy people will stray off from the plot and create their own plot. So I was thinking of sitting back and letting people form a plot by themselves.

EDIT: Okay telepathic I added a new option. I added special powers. Which means if your character is an animagus or something. But it means your character will be a social outcast. But it still means you have special powers and most students tend to abuse them *hint hint*. Anyway if you have anymore suggestions that arent plotwise name them.