Picture of Me! XD

[Haruka]

Yet again, I redrew myself on the computer with all my physical freatures in real life.. almost.. Clothing is just a uniform.. you get the point already. XD

I used 3 programs to make the final product. Flash, PSP7, and Adobe Photoshop 7 for the background (which i was unable to do in the past). Please make comments so I can improve. I knew I mess up the pic a little.. but who cares.. Just give suggestions! I am always practicing and need to learn some more new ideas for my imagination to take off! :)

Flaming is allowed... no... Flaming is absolutely not allowed here. You may not critize my work.. okay? n_n

Darn... it didn't attach.. but don't worry, I will try to uhhh... upload it at deviantart.

[Haruka]

Heres the link to the picture.. please post comments here, not there.. okay?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/3173899/

[22sa]

Heres the link to the picture.. please post comments here, not there.. okay?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/3173899/
Pokemon style?? Lol:P

I'm not sure what to suggest, it'd be helpful if I knew your detailed opinion of it first.;)

[Haruka]

Detailed Option... Well, No suggestion? Thats really not going to help me, 22sa. :\..

[Kairi]

How about a real picture of you to compare/contrast?

You did well on the hair it seems though.

[Haruka]

Hmmmm. I can't post a picture of me in real life due to... Child.. uhhh... Protection.. i don't want anyone to find where I live. What happen if it's a perverted man. I am in trouble then. :(

no offence.. but I shouldn't be talking about that here.

[22sa]

Detailed Option... Well, No suggestion? Thats really not going to help me, 22sa. :\..
Are you going to post your opinion or not?:/

Anyway, I've posted a lot of suggestions in your previous art threads but I'm not an artist anyway. You'll get a lot of suggestions eventually by the more skilled members later.

So you are basing this picture mainly on Pokemon style right? I think you should use an official Pokemon picture to base on than.

[Haruka]

Base on that? I drew a made up character. How can I make it pokemon style. I drew the character pokemon style. heh.

[Kairi]

Well, you are improving.

Don't worry about the previous. ^_^;

[MoonLight]

Hey that's not bad at all your getting better all give ya some tips ok first the ears one is higher up they should be right across from each other. and one of the arms is a little deformed by other then that is Great You'll get better.

[Haruka]

Hmmmm.. Maybe I should compare artwork... should I?

[22sa]

Hmmmm.. Maybe I should compare artwork... should I?
If you think it helps than yes..

I'm a little confused now, I thought you were trying to draw her Pokemon style but since it's your own style.. Heh I can't speak art language so me can't help x_x;

[Kayleigh]

I like it! ^_^ You did a very nice job on the hair, and the outift is cute. The only thing that I would work on would be the shape of the face, but that's my opinion.

[Master Hyperness]

Its pretty good:

Suggestions:

Make the arms straighter
Hands bigger
The body, it dosent curve like that, try learning more anatomy for that

and lastly make the skin color more peacher.

[Blaziken]

Will you upload it to http://www.uploadit.org

BESS won't let me view Deviantart.

[Haruka]

LOL... It's too bad you can't see it.. I can only attach files under the resolution of 604x something. the pic was much bigger than that..

Sure, I will attach those.. give me a minute. ^^;

Compare the pics I drew of me with the new one.. observe the improvements between the new one and the old one. n_n();

and don't forget, the old one has a boring white background and the new one looks like photoshop enhanced.. :D...


WHAT?! My pictures resolution is low and it won't attach.. darn..

[Haruka]

Let me try this again.. this better work..

[Kayleigh]

Ohh, how cute! I think you did a better job on this one. ^_^ The outfit looks a lot better too.

[Haruka]

.... Uhhhh...... *sarcastic in pain*

Oh My God...

[100marios]

Oh! This is a very good pic precious! very-*smacks self* Well, I'm glad I got that out of me! Now I just have to fix this kink in my neck....

[Kairi]

That was her old one she made a long time ago...

[Haruka]

Yea, It was pretty old... I drew that when I was in 8th grade last year. :P.. I need to try a new pose so I learn more about how to draw humans...

I mess up sometimes, I am not a expert artist yet, I had to learn on my free time to practice drawing. I will get better in november or early december.

[100marios]

This is besides the point but Haruka, your in 9th grade now? Funny, so am I hehe. You may carry on now....

[Haruka]

But, isn't that off topic.. Yets get back on topic, okay?

[100marios]

Sorry about that, I just thought that was kind of interesting.(I guess I'm wierd) I don't know a lot of people here so when I have something in common with someone else its well.....interesting. Anyway like you said back to the topic *clears throat* ahem, well I'd have to say that you put a lot more emotion into the character in this pic. (which is a good thing!) The only thing thats a little odd is the length of her neck, then again it might just be me.

[Miyu-chan]

nice picture, Alyssa! I saw it on Deviantart first, them came here. =P I love the coloring. BTW, do you draw with your mouse? :/

[Haruka]

Simple... use Flash MX and a optical mouse. :P