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Callydude™
December 8th, 2006, 12:32 AM
here r me first sprites

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Scratches:
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I know It needs a bit of work
but owell i cant be bothered at the moment

beauty. proletariat
December 8th, 2006, 01:36 AM
here r me first sprites35708

hmm... it looks alrite, but the colours are all messed up and there is no face...
7.9/10 for first
~NekrBoi~

Skymin
December 8th, 2006, 03:31 AM
hrrm, it looks okay for a beginner
the face is sorta messed up with the shirt covering half the face
and one arm is sorta bigger than the other
6/10

Pazuzu
December 8th, 2006, 05:30 AM
You have to provide at least 4 sprites, when making a showcase thread.
Please provide the 3 remaining samples, or this thread will be closed.

Shadow Weavile
December 8th, 2006, 09:26 AM
for a beginner i give a 4/10 because its realy bad dont like it anyway

Signomi
December 8th, 2006, 09:55 AM
Shadow Weavile: How about a more constructive post? -_-; A simple rating doesn't cut it, you should say what you dislike about the sprite as well.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
December 9th, 2006, 11:12 AM
its kinda messy, but creative. I suggest using more shading in some areas
and some distinct colors in other places.
I give it a 4.2/10

[NovaPirate]
December 9th, 2006, 01:15 PM
Havig visible shading would be nice, and show the face. To me it looks like Dfeault Paint colors, but I'm not entirely sure. 2/10

Callydude™
January 6th, 2007, 08:24 PM
Close this if noone posts in it in the next 2 weeks.

Jedite1000
January 6th, 2007, 10:14 PM
i like the style of his look but the colors doesnt suit each other purple and puke green dosnt blend in right..the hair style looks nice, if u change the color and add in some shade then it will be a great sprite

for now i will give it a 4.5/10...good job for first try, keep it up

[NovaPirate]
January 7th, 2007, 09:02 AM
The scratch isn't really much of a scratch, it's more of an attempted art piece. You drew lines with tools on paint and then used the bucket to fill them all in.

♥RanaRocket!☆
January 7th, 2007, 09:30 AM
hmmm.... i think you've been using default colours from Paint. thats a big no-no! lol and NEVER EVER save as a jpg! either PNG or even a GIF is so much better!
also... keep lines to ONE PIXEL. i.e. in the scratch round the 'feet' its chunky.
pixel art is painstaking and takes a long time, packing a TON of detail, crated pixel by pixel.
for things like scratches, avoid using anything other than the pancil tool for the lineart... possibly the bezier, if you think its really necissary.
i dont think these sprites/pixel arts are p'ticuly bad. especialy for a first shot. a lot better than some of the things ive seen!
try looking in the spriters resource thread thingy for tutorials, its sticked at the top of the PA area!
remember to add lots and lots of loverly shading next time! 8D
and i hope to see atleat two more sprites from you, so your thread wont be closed! >: (!!!!!!!!