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ProtrainerEon
December 22nd, 2006, 06:59 PM
This is a special poem of mine tying in Pokemon and Christmas, that I wrote just for the upcoming occasion.

I lie down on the frost-covered grass.
You sit beside me, happy and concerned.
We sit watching the shooting stars pass,
Remembering all the lessons we learned.

For together we are, we make a team...

My eyes are wet with joy.
You watch me in wonder.
I am feeling bad inside, just a boy.
Christmas is coming, but I feel deep under.

For together we are, we make a team...

No family to celebrate with.
No friends to hug and give gifts.
I've always been a nomad.
I never expected to feel so sad.

For together we are, we make a team...

I am all alone tonight.
You smile and pat my shoulder.
If we get the chance we just might.
Be with each other 'till we're older.

For together we are, we make a team...

I found you on the street, near the coast.
An abandoned chick on Mossdeep Island.
I nurtured you and we became most...
Most wonderful pals, and you grew strong.

For together we are, we make a team...

As a Blaziken, you followed me on my quest.
Yet tonight, we stop to rest.
Christmas is here.
A time for holiday cheer.

For together we are, we make a team...

I smile in thanks.
Having a friend like you feels great.
After having sailed through the ranks...
We stick together, Elite 4 champs.

For together we are, we make a team...

Now all is well.
No worries, you have helped.
I have the Christmas spirit!
My joyous shouting, let all hear it!

For together, we are a fullfilled dream!

melod.ii ous demyx~♪
December 25th, 2006, 11:39 PM
:classic: That... was so Beautiful!

Very nicely written. i liked the "For together we are, we make a team..."
throughout, and then the last line "For together, we are a fullfilled dream!"

Gosh it was Cute!

Nice vauge descriptions and wonderful for the holiday season!
Great Poem. ;) *clap**clap*

Yesterday
January 21st, 2007, 04:13 PM
it's an okay poem! Your rhymes wander a lot. I mean sometimes they're at the second and fourth line and then they're at the first and second line and they like to move places. You gotta tie em down! >.< it's a nice and cute poem anyways ^w^