Iced
January 1st, 2007, 02:19 AM
INTRODUCTION: One day a 10 year old boy named Mike went out on an adventure to catch legendary pokemon but Team Darklava used their all powerful Charizard to put Mike in the hospital for 3 years living on machines but now he is fully healed and he is a 13 year old teenager.
Chapter 1: Darklava Domination
*Editing Later*
Yami Rui
January 1st, 2007, 04:17 AM
....This is not a story, this is just 1 sentence. And the fact that you say your gonna be editing this means that this is being wrote in the reply box, which you never wan't to do.
No description, no thought, no interseting plot, good day for I'm reporting this.
Natsuki
January 1st, 2007, 05:23 AM
Sorry, but the Pokemon Fan Fiction rules apply and it would be better for you as well as your readers to post your fic once you have one chapter fully written, or at least a descriptive prologue. That way, people will be more enticed to read your fic and keep up with it as you add chapters. ^-^ I'm going to close this thread for now and once you have everything written to actually start the thread, you may post it again. You're also more than welcome to PM me first to make sure things are okay, if you'd like~
*closes*
~Kelsey