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Lordpenguin
January 3rd, 2007, 08:18 PM
I found this excellent art, and just had to make a card to go with it.

http://www.maj.com/gallery/jdee/fakes/darkninetales.png

Full art here: http://www.poke-amph.com/fanpics/darkninetales.jpg
QFred
January 3rd, 2007, 09:00 PM
The art you chose... form Suicune Wolf, awesome choice! ^^

Love the attacks, especially the first!

But the fonts... they're strange to me...
AC drain
January 3rd, 2007, 09:15 PM
I don't remember much about the card game, it's been seven years. But isn't that first move a bit extreme? if your opponent can't draw they're locked in.
Lordpenguin
January 3rd, 2007, 10:51 PM
That's what retreat costs are for :D

This card could be easily broken though. Thats why it is a promo, and a fake ¦D
Blennix
January 3rd, 2007, 10:53 PM
=OOO Your back. Nice card as usually ;)
Jaimes
January 4th, 2007, 12:49 AM
Woow.
That artwork is amazing.

The attacks need some heavy rewording though.

The 1000year curse attack doesn't really work since it needs to state when the opponents pokemon is active. It implies that it only works when the Defending Pokemon is active at the beginning of the opponents turn - so it's impossible for them to retreat to nullify the effect. The only way that the effect can end is if the Defending Pokemon is KOd between turns (by poison, burn or a power).
A better wording would be:

"As long as the Defending Pokemon remains active at the end of your opponents turn, your opponent does not draw a card at the start of their next turn"

NB - Defending always refers to the opponents active.

Same with Black Magic, needs some rewording. Your opponent discards a card from where? Nothing about not saying discarding your cards or anything in play. If you are referring to the hand then it should also read:

"Your opponent discards a card (if any) from his hand".


Layout and fonts are looking nice though ;)
Lordpenguin
January 4th, 2007, 12:04 PM
100-year curse would work better if if it read "As long as the CURRENT defeding pkemon remains your opponent's active pokemon"?

And yeah, discard means from the hand in most tcgs, forgot one had to specify in pokemon.

Ten secs, and I will be back with an update.

EDIT:
http://www.maj.com/gallery/jdee/fakes/darkninetales2.png
Superiore
January 4th, 2007, 07:09 PM
wow. cool card.
great image.

9.5/10