Sprite Comic

[Thunder]

Heres my sprite comic hope u like it this is the first 2

[Thunder]

Heres next 2 hope u like then and sry for dubble post but noone posted can u plz post

[MegaLightBlaze]

Your comics pretty good. Keep it up!!!

[Varied Deoxys]

A cool comic undone by crappy speech bubbles and bad grammer. I don't mind a little bad spelling on a message board, but in a comic it's good to use good grammer, so that people can understand it. And make sure to fill your speech bubbles with white, and make the speech bubble outline thinner. But, it seems original, and the plot is okay. I haven't seen the Sonic stretch thing before, which I think is very creative.

[Thunder]

SRY MR.GRUMPY Hmph if i have people with that attitude id cancel the whole thing

[Varied Deoxys]

Whoa, don't have a fit, I didn't mean to offend you. I was only pointing out your mistakes. Everyone makes mistakes. And don't sweat it kid, your on the right track. ^_^

[Flame_Latias]

-_______________- *grabs thunder* he can be so bad tempered *thinks back to old days* wth am i thinking about that! oh well thunder gets like that

[Thunder]

ok ok but next time dont say crappy justsay bad ok i talk to shadow and he thinks there kool and he likes story line