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PoKeSaFaRi
January 14th, 2007, 03:54 PM
Hello everyone! I know I haven't posted for ages..sorry about that, but better late than ever, right? I've recently drawn a picture on Flash using my mouse and I'm looking for comments.
Title: The Smell of the Breeze
Drawing at: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46633067/
I'm currently developing my unique style, so all comments are welcome =)
(those willing to stab me just because I've been idling for too long, go ahead, heh :P)
Forest Grovyle
January 14th, 2007, 04:45 PM
*waits for dA to load*
Wow, very nice! :D You always impress me with your work ^^ This definitely has its own original style. Did you base it off a photo or was it done from scratch?
As for crit, I'm not sure about the angle of her head. I don't know if it should be facing a bit more to the side as it looks a bit too front-facing considering her pose...but I am not an expert on anatomy XD
I love the way you have done the eyes and nose, it's very subtle and doesn't make it look too cartoony.
--FG :)
PoKeSaFaRi
January 14th, 2007, 05:40 PM
No references used, so the head could a bit off :P
Thanks, I'm glad you like my style, and the fact that doesn't look "too cartoony" ^__^
ptah
January 16th, 2007, 12:40 PM
I love the background. Nice colors @.@ *Loves greeny stuff*
PoKeSaFaRi
January 18th, 2007, 10:50 PM
It's been 2 days since I kept editing the image above. Finished version can be seen HERE (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46919063/)
Please comment and criticize ^_^
ptah
January 18th, 2007, 11:38 PM
BRO... I like it. You have the -fun- style.. i call it FUN.. It's so fun to look at @_@ Great shading..
PoKeSaFaRi
January 19th, 2007, 05:57 PM
I'm glad you find it "FUN". If the style was dull and boring I should kill it and start again, but that won't be done. :P
Thanks for posting here and your comments on DA too ^^