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PoKeSaFaRi
January 14th, 2007, 07:54 AM
Hello everyone! I know I haven't posted for ages..sorry about that, but better late than ever, right? I've recently drawn a picture on Flash using my mouse and I'm looking for comments.

Title: The Smell of the Breeze
Drawing at: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46633067/

I'm currently developing my unique style, so all comments are welcome =)

(those willing to stab me just because I've been idling for too long, go ahead, heh :P)

Forest Grovyle
January 14th, 2007, 08:45 AM
*waits for dA to load*

Wow, very nice! :D You always impress me with your work ^^ This definitely has its own original style. Did you base it off a photo or was it done from scratch?

As for crit, I'm not sure about the angle of her head. I don't know if it should be facing a bit more to the side as it looks a bit too front-facing considering her pose...but I am not an expert on anatomy XD

I love the way you have done the eyes and nose, it's very subtle and doesn't make it look too cartoony.

--FG :)

PoKeSaFaRi
January 14th, 2007, 09:40 AM
No references used, so the head could a bit off :P

Thanks, I'm glad you like my style, and the fact that doesn't look "too cartoony" ^__^

ptah
January 16th, 2007, 04:40 AM
I love the background. Nice colors @.@ *Loves greeny stuff*

PoKeSaFaRi
January 18th, 2007, 02:50 PM
It's been 2 days since I kept editing the image above. Finished version can be seen HERE (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46919063/)

Please comment and criticize ^_^

ptah
January 18th, 2007, 03:38 PM
BRO... I like it. You have the -fun- style.. i call it FUN.. It's so fun to look at @_@ Great shading..

PoKeSaFaRi
January 19th, 2007, 09:57 AM
I'm glad you find it "FUN". If the style was dull and boring I should kill it and start again, but that won't be done. :P

Thanks for posting here and your comments on DA too ^^