Magic

[~Night]

Chapter 1
Deoxys

James, Adrianna, Brandon and Cynthia were each training their pokemon by battling against eachother.James's pokemon was a Bulbasaur, Adrianna's pokemon was a Charmander, Brandon's pokemon was a Squirtle and Cynthia's pokemon was a Pikachu.

James's Bulbasaur had just dodged an Ember from Adrianna's Charmander and had sent a Vine Whip out of his bulb on his head that squeezed Charmander.

Brandon's Squirtle used Water Gun on Cynthia's charged up Pikachu, but suddenly, Pikachu used Thundershock at the water and electrocuted Squirtle.

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A meteorite was hurtling through space and crashed down at the earth's surface. It broke open to reveal a strange new pokemon with a purple crystal on it's chest. It could change shapes to help it with speed, defence or attack. It's regular shape was used when this pokemon didn't need to attack, nor defend, this was Deoxys!

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"Look,"shouted Cynthia, pointing he finger at the meteorite,"it's a shooting star! Make a wish!"Cynthia was jumping up and down at the site.

"I wish I would eventully discover a pokemon."wished James.

"I wish Charmander would learn flamethrower soon!"wished Adrianna.

"I wish I would eventully become a pokemon master!"wished Brandon.

"And I wish I was an astronaut!"wished Cynthia.At that moment, the meteorite disapeared from site.

***

Deoxys saw all the pokemon fleeing, but from what? Deoxys looked up, down, left and right, but nothing to scare the creatures. Deoxys tried to comunicate with the pokemon, but found speeking useless. Deoxys tried hearing what the pokemon were saying, but couldn't understand them. Deoxys started floating torward the pokemon and found out what they were running from, Deoxys. Eventully the only living creature left was Deoxys. Deoxys was lonely,so it floated torwards a small town where four kids each with a pokemon beside them were heading to their warm homes for hot cocoa and a good night sleep.

Deoxys saw many buildings that were both small and tall. Deoxys tried comunitcating with everything it saw, but all it heard as replies were,"Why are their strange noises outside mommy?"and,"It's just your imaganation honey." Deoxys could understand this language very well, but just couldn't speek it.

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In the morning, James woke up to see Deoxys floating in front of him. He stared at Deoxys and Deoxys stared back. Deoxys tried comunicating with James, but this was no use.

"Hows it going big guy?"was all James could say as he stared at the magnificent creature. Deoxys tried to say something to James, but as always, James couldn't understand what Deoxys was saying. James reached for his phone and told his friends to come to his house right away.

A half and hour later, Brandon, Adrianna and Cynthia arived to see Deoxys using it's psycic power to levetate James in the air.

"Hello, I am Deoxys,"Deoxys said through James's mouth,"I can give you the power to turn into pokemon by absorbing DNA from a pokemon."James's friends stared at Deoxys then at James.

"Put your hand on mine and you will become Pokemorphs."continued Deoxys, still talking through James's mouth,"Now."

"But...why?"asked Cynthia.

"Because,"Deoxys said,"of attackers."Everyone was silent."Did you hear me? I said-"

"We heard you the first time! You said attackers!"Brandon yelled,"Can you just tell us what attackers?"asked Brandon. It was easy to tell that Brandon was frustrated.

"They are called 'Combys'."Deoxys explained,"Combys are creatures that take over a human or pokemon body and control it by building a control center in the body of the a pokemon or human. You need to stop it from taking over the planet. Now, put your hand on mine."Deoxys let go of James who was completly aware of what was going on and put his hand on Deoxys hand just like his friends did.

Deoxys used James as a puppet one more time."To morph into a pokemon, you have to absorb its DNA. To absord a pokemon's DNA, you must touch the pokemon and concentrate on the pokemon. To morph into the pokemon, you have to close your eyes and remember what the pokemon looks like. After transformation, you can open your eyes,"explained Deoxys,"Don't stay in morph for more than 3 hours."Deoxys let go of James and disappeared.

[Yami Rui]

James's pokemon was a Bulbasaur, Adrianna's pokemon was a Charmander, Brandon's pokemon was a Squirtle and Cynthia's pokemon was a Pikachu.


Yawn, any description would be quite nice. Like what do they look like, and when I mean that I mean both trainer and pokemon. I mean when describe the battle scenes, the don't make sense. Like how did Bulbasaur use vine whip, does it have two vines in it's hands? Explain to us, otherwise we're just gonna be confused.

"Hello, I am Deoxys,"Deoxys said through James's mouth,"I can give you the power to turn into pokemon by absorbing DNA from a pokemon."James's friends stared at Deoxys then at James.

Out of personality here. I mean why would Deoxys use it's awesome power on people he had just met. He would be confused as to this world yes, but he wouldn't use power on people he just met, it's just out of character.

Go read the sticked threads in the Writer's Lounge, go ahead and improve.

[~Night]

Ok, I'll go to the sticked threads in the Writer's Lounge and see if they would help me improve.

[~Night]

Chapter 2
Combys Coming

The four friends wanted to see if Deoxys had told the truth, so they had gone to Virdian Forest with their pokemon.

"I'll try turning into my Pikachu!"exclaimed Cynthia who was the only one so far who beleved Deoxys because she was very gullible.She touched Pikachu and concentrated. Then, she took her hand off Pikachu, closed her eyes, and concentrated again. Cynthia started turning into a Pikachu. When the morphing was complete, she opened her eyes and exclaimed,"Pikachu!"

An hour later, everyone was their own pokemon. They had found out how to 'think at' people. To do this, they would direct their attention to a person or a group, and think of what they would want to say and bingo! The person would hear what the other person would say.

<I want to be Pikachu forever and ever and ever!>Cynthia thought spoke, <Pikachu is strong and very cute!> Cynthia let some energetic sparks out of her red cheeks.

<I love being Charmander!>thought spoke Adrianna. The flame on her tail got a little bigger.

<I can't beleve I'm actully Squirtle!>thought spoke Brandon. He showered himself with his Water Gun.

<I'm just happy Deoxys didn't fool us!>James thought spoke. At that moment, James saw an Articuno.<Look at that! It's Articuno!>thought spoke James. Suddenly, the earth was pelted with vast hail stones.

"Gyyyyoooooo!"shreaked Articuno as it hurled itself at James, Brandon, Adrianna, Cynthia, and their pokemon.

<AHHH!>thought screamed Cynthia,<It's coming torward us!>Cynthia and Pikachu scurried away and were fallowed by James and Bulbasaur.

<Let's get out of here!>Brandon thought yelled. He and Squirtle jumped into the nearbye pond.

Adrianna and Charmander were using Ember to melt the hail stones, but it was useless. A few seconds later, Adrianna and Charmander were running away from Articuno and the hail stones.

Another hour passed and Articuno was gone. The friends got out of their hiding places, demorphed, and returned their pokemon into their pokeballs.

"Why was the Articuno so evil!"asked Cynthia.

"It wasn't evil, it was mad at something you idiot!"James told Cynthia and struck her on the face.

"Waaaaaaaaa!!!!"cried Cynthia.

"I know your fake crying you dope!"yelled James and struck Cynthia again.

"Stop! I know what was wrong with the Articuno!"exclaimed Adrianna,"The Combys did it! Don't you remember? Deoxys said that the Combys were coming!" She stopped James from striking Cynthia again and covered Cynthia's mouth so she wouldn't cry like a sissy.

"You're right, Adrianna,"said Brandon,"but how do we stop the Combys?" Adrianna was about to say I don't know., but a bug like thing appeared and scared her to death.

The bug thing looked like a Kabuto except it had 100 legs, a red shell with black Aerodactyl wings coming out of it, 50 Dunsparce eyes, 10 Gligar claws, 12 Smeargle tails, a Ho-oh tail, 4 Kyogre arms, and a mutated Groudon face. The weird thing about this creature was that it was almost microscopic.

"He- Hello,"the thing said,"I am a- a- a- um- uh- a- a Co- Comby. A- a po- pokemon that- that can t- talk." The four friends just stared at the Comby.

"It's a Comby! Run!"shouted Cynthia,"It'll control us!"Cynthia started running around in circles screaming like a Caterpie.

"I- not- t- t evils- I fri- fri- end. I say no-no con- con- trol- trol- in- ing."the Comby lied.

"You won't control us? Well, I trust you no matter how small and ugly you are!"exclaimed the gullible Cynthia. The Comby smiled and then, in less than a half a second, the Comby was gone and Cynthia was throwing up like crazy. Adrianna, James, and Brandon carried Cynthia home even though she was also puking all over them.

A few days later Cynthia stopped barfing. Her friends came over to see if she was ok, but Cynthia still looked sick and strangly, hypnotized.

"Yes! Yes! I'm in the body, the fleshy body! Mwa ha ha ha ha!!!"laughed Cynthia.

"Are you ok?"asked James,"we just came by, but you are acting crazy!" Cynthia glared at James and morphed into Pikachu. She electricuted James, Brandon, and Adrianna."Stop it! I'm sorry that I struck you! I'm really sorry! Please stop shocking us! Please!"shouted James, but Cynthia kept shocking them.

"Cynthia! Brandon and I didn't do anything! Please stop shocking us! It hurts!"cried Adrianna. Then, Adrianna morphed into Charmander and used Ember on Cynthia. The small balls of fire stared burning Cynthia. Cynthia shreaked,"Pika! Pika- pi!" and demorphed. Adrianna stayed in morph just in case.

As soon as Cynthia finished demorphing, 2 Combys came out of her ear and went into James's ear and Brandon's ear. James and Brandon started throwing up. Adrianna ran out of the window without stopping to demorph. She knew that this was going to be one long day.

[Yami Rui]

An hour later, everyone was their own pokemon. They had found out how to 'think at' people. To do this, they would direct their attention to a person or a group, and think of what they would want to say and bingo! The person would hear what the other person would say

A change this direct would take a long time to adjust to, since life as a pokemon is so different than life as us humans. I'm sorry but your not following logic here.

The bug thing looked like a Kabuto except it had 100 legs, a red shell with black Aerodactyl wings coming out of it, 50 Dunsparce eyes, 10 Gligar claws, 12 Smeargle tails, a Ho-oh tail, 4 Kyogre arms, and a mutated Groudon face. The weird thing about this creature was that it was almost microscopic.

Umm if it was just about microscopic, then how do the pokemon see every single feature on it. Plus if it was almost microscopic, then the legs must be like below 1 cm. It doesn't make sense.

Really sorry but nothing here is really making sense, plus why did Deoxys pick these people out of the billions in the pokemon world to assist him. Based on what I've seen, there's nothing special about them.

[AC Coda X]

Um... can anyone say "Animorphs Knock-off?" Seriously, you could at least TRY to come up with something better....