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February 13th, 2007, 03:10 PM
cuz valentines day ish tomorrow!!! ^w^

"My Love Wants Roses"

My love wants roses

The roses that don’t die
Ones that won’t make her sigh

With pretty petals smooth as ivory
So she’ll write about me in her diary

Sir, she wants roses

The kinds with fresh dew
Ones that don’t fade hue

If I have nothing for Valentine’s,
“Surely,” she says, “you won’t be mine.”

No, not those ones!

She wants one with the smell of orchards
Oh please, before I get tortured!

Sir, please do understand,
My fate is in your hands!

Lily
February 13th, 2007, 06:45 PM
Que sweet~ Some rhymes seemed forced imo (second to last couplet), but the content is suitable for Valentine's day~ It's a simple, cute poem. Nice job. =)