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Blennix
March 3rd, 2007, 12:21 AM
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/129/previewbannerkj0.png
Well. I told KougaWolf that If I didn't post a revamp by the end of February, I'll fake again. Well I didn't post a new revamp in February and by that I knew I was going to get into Faking again.
So here it is. My First Delta Species Set. Enjoy.
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/1058/leafeonslq7.jpg
28/128 Crawdaunt (http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6232/crawdauntjj0.jpg)
34/128 Magneton (http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3416/magnetonck9.jpg)
39/128 Sandslash (http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/515/sandslashii8.jpg)
40/128 Scyther (http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/3751/scythereg7.jpg)
43/128 Ditto (http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9995/dittolz4.jpg)
91/128 Sandshrew (http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9800/sandshrewdd3.jpg)
92/128 Shellder (http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/4654/shelldernc1.jpg)
93/128 Spearow (http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2621/spearowak7.jpg)
123/128 Leafeon* (http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/1058/leafeonslq7.jpg)
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CREDITS
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- Thanks to WarBandit, Nintendo. Jr, ShadowShocker, AdamCharlie/Ethan621 and Plateface for the art
- Thanks to Pochama, Ethan621, Cursed, Cipher and KougaWolf for wording help.
カクンネコ
March 3rd, 2007, 02:41 AM
Awesome Scyther! I hope to see more from this set... and maybe do some art when I have the time. There should definately be a Mew in the set XD.
Ethan621
March 6th, 2007, 01:58 AM
SO what do you need drawn?
Blennix
March 7th, 2007, 05:16 AM
New Card Up: Spearow
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3039/spearowml6.jpg
I'll send you a PM AdamCharile
Blennix
March 9th, 2007, 04:58 AM
New Card up: Crawdaunt
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/1690/crawdauntay3.jpg
Blennix
March 11th, 2007, 11:09 PM
:) *Blows something....finds toilet tube and blows through that* Its that time again, where i release another card. This time it's Sandshrew
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9800/sandshrewdd3.jpg
Ethan621
March 12th, 2007, 11:51 PM
Aherm....
Both attacks are exactly the same. Redundant much?
Blennix
March 16th, 2007, 07:22 AM
Here's Shellder :)
I should be posting another card this weekend :)
http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/4654/shelldernc1.jpg
Blennix
March 22nd, 2007, 04:44 AM
:O This is disappointing, No one's replied <_< Anyways, have a look at Sandslash :D
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/515/sandslashii8.jpg
カクンネコ
March 22nd, 2007, 04:07 PM
Are you really gonna have 128 cards in this set!?
Blennix
March 22nd, 2007, 06:40 PM
yeah :) It's the most cards i've had in a set
Blennix
March 25th, 2007, 04:28 AM
It's that time again when I release a card and no one comments on it :)
Here you are. Ditto Time!
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1525/dittowg2.jpg
カクンネコ
March 25th, 2007, 07:17 PM
I'll comment! The illustration looks cool!
I don't know if I would have thought of a water-type Ditto, unless it was shiny.
It's strength is like an average Ditto, good job!
It does seem to have abilities that a real card would...
So as far as that goes, the card gets a 10 (from me)!
Blennix
April 2nd, 2007, 06:16 AM
It's been awhile since a posted a card, but Magneton has a pain with the attacks. I'm happy with that attacks that I've posted on this card and much thanks to Nintendo Jr for the Magneton.
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9080/magnetonyo8.jpg
カクンネコ
April 2nd, 2007, 09:29 PM
I dunno if that's a great attack... It may had been better if you had to get rid of 2 energies, but I guess the way you have it works. I'm no TCG expert...
Cipher 2008
April 2nd, 2007, 09:38 PM
That second attack is totally broken. It's a one-hit KO every turn. Make it "equal to half the Defending Pokémon's remaining HP" or change it to "half the Defending Pokémon's maximum HP" and discard two energies.
Cursed
April 3rd, 2007, 01:39 AM
Magneton's Gyro Ball should say something like half the total of the defending pokemon's max HP, that way it isn't always some 0mg ub3r ultr4 m3g4 h1t attack.
Geometric-sama
April 3rd, 2007, 04:37 PM
Uh, your Crawdaunt evolves from "Crophish". D:
Sandshrew's attacks are identical except in name, and I think that's a little pointless. Perhaps Scratch could be [C] instead?
With Spearow, does a 3-flip attack really only require one energy? I think 2 flips would be more realistic.
I'll also agree that Magneton's Gyro Ball is overpowered.
Apart from that, it's quite nice. :)
Ethan621
April 3rd, 2007, 08:18 PM
On magneton, use affected, not effected. And gyroball is so WRONG.
Blennix
April 4th, 2007, 01:55 AM
Uh, your Crawdaunt evolves from "Crophish". D:
:P Crophish :P I must see that fix, thanks also for the suggestion on Sandshrew.
I should have all these cards fixed sometime by the start of the weekend.
Geometric-sama
April 4th, 2007, 01:30 PM
If you're looking to fix typos, you may also want to change the "The" in Ditto's attack to "the". :)
Blennix
April 6th, 2007, 05:37 AM
Thanks Pochama, Ethan621, Cursed, Cipher and KougaWolf with the help with the wordings.
28/128 Crawdaunt (http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6232/crawdauntjj0.jpg)
34/128 Magneton (http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3416/magnetonck9.jpg)
43/128 Ditto (http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9995/dittolz4.jpg)
93/128 Spearow (http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2621/spearowak7.jpg)
Geometric-sama
April 6th, 2007, 03:54 PM
One more note on wording. Magneton should be "does damage equal to half the amount". :) I believe that's the standard wording for attacks such as that. The rest are looking good. :D
Blennix
April 6th, 2007, 11:15 PM
Also, do I need to add "Discard 2 Energies"? I'll fix that up, thanks alot Pochama. :)
Lihinel
April 7th, 2007, 12:03 AM
Nice set, espacially the Scyther and your water type Ditto are pretty sweet. Hope the rest of your set will be that good.
Blennix
April 7th, 2007, 06:37 AM
Thats very much. I'm glad you like the water Ditto ^_^
QFred
April 7th, 2007, 10:47 PM
All the cards are amazing, Blennix! I hope this thread lives so that the Fake Card forum doesn't die.
Blennix
April 8th, 2007, 02:53 AM
I hope that this set lives and I hope that more people may post here ^_^ I've just realised. This set won't move on because I don't have Microsoft Excel on my computer because I reformatted it.
Blennix
May 2nd, 2007, 08:10 AM
Huzzah for my returness!! Boy it certainly has been a while -_-. :) But nonetheless, I show you Leafeon Shining in all it's Fighting shining glory!! :lol: I love lame titles xD.
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/1058/leafeonslq7.jpg
thanks to the Nintendo. Jr