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Ethan621
March 4th, 2007, 05:32 PM
I want to know what you think, but don't tear me apart. It's my first one! First of hopefully many.


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b98/Neobacklash/halscharmander.png
Blennix
March 4th, 2007, 08:47 PM
What program you use? If Photoshop, theres a Tutorial for Faking.
Ethan621
March 4th, 2007, 09:23 PM
I used photoshop AND the tutorial...
Barboach
March 4th, 2007, 09:34 PM
The only two things I see wrong with this is that th picture is blurred a bit. nd the fire on his tail is a bit big. Sorry if the blurred is the style of it, but other then that its very good.
Ethan621
March 4th, 2007, 09:49 PM
Lol. the blurring was a spur of the moment decision. I hate it now. ANd the fire tail...eh, not what I was aiming for. It wasn't that big in the original sketch, but I ended up just going crazy w/ the mouse. ^_^
Cipher 2008
March 4th, 2007, 10:10 PM
The fonts are a little off...you forgot the nine-digit code and the set symbol...but apart from that, great.
Ethan621
March 4th, 2007, 10:19 PM
D'oh! the code! I purposely left off a set symbol because i wanted to make my own, but the code totally slipped me.
QFred
March 4th, 2007, 10:54 PM
Lawl! Pretty awesome! I find the fonts very small... prolly only me...
Ichaste Pekoni
March 4th, 2007, 10:56 PM
Eh, the spacing's a bit off on the attack text...but very good for a first try.
Girafarig-chan
March 5th, 2007, 08:51 PM
The only error I can see on it is Charmander's Weakness, of which is Fighting, instead of Water. Other than that, very good for first card.
Ethan621
March 6th, 2007, 12:54 AM
I didn't want to go with the standard water weakness. Mostly, because there's a rival named Dan coming up who has a sruitle-> blastoise line, and I wanted them to be on an even footing. Charizard will probably be weak to Lightning, still debating on him having the resistance or not.
Girafarig-chan
March 6th, 2007, 10:00 PM
I didn't want to go with the standard water weakness. Mostly, because there's a rival named Dan coming up who has a sruitle-> blastoise line, and I wanted them to be on an even footing. Charizard will probably be weak to Lightning, still debating on him having the resistance or not.

Fair enough. The weakness of Fighting is also fine as it is weak against Ground types.;)