Map Rating Thread

[.Pichu-kun]

Okay, here's some more maps for my hack of Gold Version:
Map Name: Azela Town
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/AzelaTown.jpg
This is Azela Town, now Azela City! I made it much bigger and better. NOTE: The Radio Tower is an IMPORTANT part in my hack! Here's the other:
Map Name: Blackthorn CityHack Name: Awakened Legends
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/BlackthornCity.jpg
This is Blackthorn City, just like in Gold. NOTE: The Radio Tower is also important! Just because there's a Radio Tower in both doesn't mean you should lower your score!
I tried to make this town look kind of like the last sanctuary for the 'good' people. You'll understand more when you play my hack!
1. It's very nice, nothing wrong with it in my eyes...10/10
2. I like the simplicity of the map, but the part where there is a lone stair isn't right, so...9.5/10

Map Name: ---
Rom: Fire Red
Credits: Kyledove.
Map Description: Its my starting town, so theres not much too it, im using Kyledoves DP tileset, hopefully Ill change some things around later.

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The graphics r beautiful and it's not too square, but it seems empty...9/10

[Melash]

Oh, right! Thanks for rating mine Eeveon! Here's two more maps:
Map Name: Saffron City
Map Game: Awakened Legends
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/SaffronCity.jpg
This is the secondary main city base of Team Rocket. Whew, long sentance! Here's the other:
Map Name: Underground Train
Map Game: Awakened Legends
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/atrain.jpg
pretty sweet and simple, so there's not much to rate about it! Just tell me if you spot any mistakes or anything!

[Woofer]

Map Name: ---
Rom: Fire Red
Credits: Kyledove.
Map Description: Its my starting town, so theres not much too it, im using Kyledoves DP tileset, hopefully Ill change some things around later.

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It's a great tileset. Also a good, simple map. Nothing looks wrong on first glance, but that may be the tileset. It needs something to fill it out, because it's a little empty. Maybe any added people ingame will improve that. I really do like the basic outlay though, and the winding path.

9/10.

[.Pichu-kun]

Oh, right! Thanks for rating mine Eeveon! Here's two more maps:
Map Name: Saffron City
Map Game: Awakened Legends
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/SaffronCity.jpg
This is the secondary main city base of Team Rocket. Whew, long sentance! Here's the other:
Map Name: Underground Train
Map Game: Awakened Legends
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/atrain.jpg
pretty sweet and simple, so there's not much to rate about it! Just tell me if you spot any mistakes or anything!
1. Good, but very empty...5/10.
2. Pretty good. but there r too many seats on 1 side...8/10.

[Melash]

Here are some more maps: Well, actually, they're the same map, just each of them done in a different tileset! Tell me which one you like better:
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/FushciaCity2.jpg
That one was the original. Here is the one done in the Jhoto tileset:
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/FushciaCity.jpg

[.Pichu-kun]

Here are some more maps: Well, actually, they're the same map, just each of them done in a different tileset! Tell me which one you like better:
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/FushciaCity2.jpg
That one was the original. Here is the one done in the Jhoto tileset:
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/FushciaCity.jpg
Not in a mean way, but it looks the same...
Make it a little more original, then I'll rate it, K? ^^
(Tomorrow though :P)

[Melash]

Oh, okay! Yeah, I'll get it on tomorrow, I have to go now!

[Neti]

Map Name: ---
Rom: Fire Red
Credits: Kyledove.
Map Description: Its my starting town, so theres not much too it, im using Kyledoves DP tileset, hopefully Ill change some things around later.

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Really good map, the tileset is great, the shape is not squarish, and it really has the feeling of a starter town: not complicated, calm athmosphere...
the path is also really nice
i give it 10/10 mainly because of the tileset

Repost of RuralTown Village without the grid.

i promised you il lrate yours:
the map itsself is really good and has a very original shape, but there are a few things that caught my eye:
the DP Pokecenter has a lil error at it roof at the top left, fix that. the next thing is that there should be a path... it just looks like theres somethiing missing without it. another thing is that the coast is really staright, you dont have to make completely round or sth, but edit it a bit so it looks more natural.
the last things, which is not so improtant, is taht youre using the normal FR Tiles (except for the pkcenter), which are not good in my opinion (mainly the palettes). You should try Partial DP Base or Super DP Base.
Rating: 7.5/10


Its my turn once again:

Map Name: Guaiwan (name of the city)

Hack: Pokemon Legend of Fenju

Hack of: Firered + Partial DP Base + Ice Tileset + Desert Tileset

Credits: dshayabusa for the palettes, fangking Omega for the tiles

Comments: Actually none...

Map Image:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/guaiwan.png

[.Pichu-kun]

Here are some more maps: Well, actually, they're the same map, just each of them done in a different tileset! Tell me which one you like better:
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/FushciaCity2.jpg
That one was the original. Here is the one done in the Jhoto tileset:
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/FushciaCity.jpg
I see u changed it, but not a lot...4/10

Really good map, the tileset is great, the shape is not squarish, and it really has the feeling of a starter town: not complicated, calm athmosphere...
the path is also really nice
i give it 10/10 mainly because of the tileset



i promised you il lrate yours:
the map itsself is really good and has a very original shape, but there are a few things that caught my eye:
the DP Pokecenter has a lil error at it roof at the top left, fix that. the next thing is that there should be a path... it just looks like theres somethiing missing without it. another thing is that the coast is really staright, you dont have to make completely round or sth, but edit it a bit so it looks more natural.
the last things, which is not so improtant, is taht youre using the normal FR Tiles (except for the pkcenter), which are not good in my opinion (mainly the palettes). You should try Partial DP Base or Super DP Base.
Rating: 7.5/10


Its my turn once again:

Map Name: Guaiwan (name of the city)

Hack: Pokemon Legend of Fenju

Hack of: Firered + Partial DP Base + Ice Tileset + Desert Tileset

Credits: dshayabusa for the palettes, fangking Omega for the tiles

Comments: Actually none...

Map Image:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/guaiwan.png
Very nice.
I also like the hole in the frozen lake.
Also an excellent mixture of snow covered mountains and trees...10/10

[garra911]

I posted this map earlier and didn't get a rating or much feedback, so I'm reposting it

Map Name: Aurum Town (Aurum is Latin for gold)
Hack of: Fire Red with Super D/P rom base
Hack name: Pokemon Dragon Flame (follow my sig)
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4507/aurumuj2.th.png (http://img299.imageshack.us/my.php?image=aurumuj2.png)

[PikachuEX]

Map Name: Cherrygrove City
Hack of: LeafGreen
Comments: Just a map for a Silver remake.
Mapshot:
http://i31.tinypic.com/9rnhw8.jpg

[armii8877]

I really Like It, 10/10! I think you should put a lil' island with a rock on it in the middle of the water!

[Neti]

i think its cool too, but ther are some heavey tile errors where the rocks meet the land and the one rock between the ebach and the trees at the top left, which could have easily been fixed with the block editor. you should spend some time learning how it (the block eidtor) works.
the rest is cool to me, really looks like cherrygrove!
rating: 8/10

[Melash]

All right, here are some more maps! They're all Gold maps for my hack, Awakened Legends. Some of these have already been posted by me, but I've changed the way the look:
Map Name: Olivine City
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/OlivineCity.jpg
Comments: This is Team Rocket's new base in Awakened Legends. NOTE: The mountain on the bottom and right sides are important! You have to sneak around them in part of the game!

Map Name: Whirl Caves
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/WhirlCaves.jpg
Comments: I have already posted this before, but this oen is a little different! Do you think it looks better with mountains along the edges or water 'walls'?

[Neti]

dont have much time, but i can tell you one thing: if it is not possible for th player to get into the water at the qhirl island map there shouldnt be a border/wall . it just doesnt look as good as if there is just water... and wow... many cave entrances^^

[Melash]

^I know, they got off of the cliffs on Route...uh...39, I think! I'll post that map in after a few people rate the above ones!

[.Pichu-kun]

All right, here are some more maps! They're all Gold maps for my hack, Awakened Legends. Some of these have already been posted by me, but I've changed the way the look:
Map Name: Olivine City
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/OlivineCity.jpg
Comments: This is Team Rocket's new base in Awakened Legends. NOTE: The mountain on the bottom and right sides are important! You have to sneak around them in part of the game!
Not very edited...3/10

Map Name: Whirl Caves
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/WhirlCaves.jpg
Comments: I have already posted this before, but this oen is a little different! Do you think it looks better with mountains along the edges or water 'walls'?
Pretty good.
Very maze-like...7.5/10

[Melash]

Yeah, I wanted to make it like a maze and really complicated! Here are some more maps, same game:
Map Name: New Bark Town
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/NewBarkTown.jpg
Comments: I've already posted this map, but I changed it a little, so just tell me what you think of it! Should I keep the grass? It does make it look more destroyed,

Map Name: Route 40
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route40-WhirlCaveEntrance.jpg
Comments: This is the Route right before the Whirl Caves, where Lugia resides. The caves are a major part of the storyline in Awakened Legends. I put a lot of mountains to make it look like you were getting closer and closer to the final scene in the game!

Map Name: Route 39
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route39-OlivineEntrance.jpg
This is the Route that leads to Olivine City. You know, where the Miltank farms are? Anyway, I wanted to look it make a little ruined and have a lot of mountains!

[.Pichu-kun]

Yeah, I wanted to make it like a maze and really complicated! Here are some more maps, same game:
Map Name: New Bark Town
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/NewBarkTown.jpg
Comments: I've already posted this map, but I changed it a little, so just tell me what you think of it! Should I keep the grass? It does make it look more destroyed,

Map Name: Route 40
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route40-WhirlCaveEntrance.jpg
Comments: This is the Route right before the Whirl Caves, where Lugia resides. The caves are a major part of the storyline in Awakened Legends. I put a lot of mountains to make it look like you were getting closer and closer to the final scene in the game!

Map Name: Route 39
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route39-OlivineEntrance.jpg
This is the Route that leads to Olivine City. You know, where the Miltank farms are? Anyway, I wanted to look it make a little ruined and have a lot of mountains!
1. 5/10
2. 4/10
3. 6.5/10
They're pretty good...

[Punk Rocker]

Map 2
Thanks to Kyledove for the main tileset.
This is the first route in my hack.

Map 3
Thanks to Kyledove for the main tileset, Peyi for the PC & Mart.
The second town in my hack, Gym is relocated somewhere else :).

Maps are in attachments.

[.Pichu-kun]

They r both perfect!
Beautiful graphics too!
All together...
1. 10/10
2. 10/10

Now time for my next map.
See attachments.

[Melash]

I give it a...9/10! I like how the PK Center is up on a mountain and the scenery. One thing though, fix the mountains behind the mart!

[_-TRAVIS-_]

The big map i managed to make!
41071

[.Pichu-kun]

I really don't see any tile errors...10/10!

[Neti]

Map 2
Thanks to Kyledove for the main tileset.
This is the first route in my hack.

Map 3
Thanks to Kyledove for the main tileset, Peyi for the PC & Mart.
The second town in my hack, Gym is relocated somewhere else :).

Maps are in attachments.

The route looks really nice, i think its perfect except for onee thing: how do you get up?^^
so because of this major problem which is easy to fix: 9/10

The town: well, nothin to say here... 10/10

They r both perfect!
Beautiful graphics too!
All together...
1. 10/10
2. 10/10

Now time for my next map.
See attachments.

Easy to see that you used Viridian City and just modified it... when you do taht you should first vanish the whole map and start from the beginning, not leave parts of it.
the next thing is that i dislike the mountains thee pkcenter and amrt are on, they look really unnatural...
and there is a tile error at the bottom of the bridge where it meets the water, fix that one.
Something that is quite good at your map is that you used different types of trees in a really good way, many people forget it or mess it up...
and the shape of your map is also nice
Rating: 7/10

The big map i managed to make!
41071

wow, this is a really huge map^^ the only thing i dislike is that the water borders are too straight.. .so 9/10

[Punk Rocker]

The route looks really nice, i think its perfect except for onee thing: how do you get up?^^
so because of this major problem which is easy to fix: 9/10

The town: well, nothin to say here... 10/10



Well, the point was so you couldnt get back up :)
Cause theres a river in the first town, thats the only way to get back without fly, which you get later in the game.

[Thrace]

Map 2
Thanks to Kyledove for the main tileset.
This is the first route in my hack.

Map 3
Thanks to Kyledove for the main tileset, Peyi for the PC & Mart.
The second town in my hack, Gym is relocated somewhere else :).

Maps are in attachments.
Town: 9.0/10
It looks superb! The paths are made beautifully and the tiles look great! I have a few problems with it though, a few tree placements look a little weird, the town is overly large and will look quite empty in-game and the tiles, while they look nice they're not very bright and Pokemon games are supposed to be bright aren't they? Well thats my opinion anyway.

Route: 9.5/10
Excellent placement of grass and the division with the trees good use of ledges too. The only problem is unless you open a path between the top half and the bottom half then the division on the bottom half is pointless and looks like it is only there to look good.

They r both perfect!
Beautiful graphics too!
All together...
1. 10/10
2. 10/10

Rating: 7/10
Its actually quite good if you forget about the tile errors. The size of the paths are not the same size which I don't like. The ledges are a little pointless. The mountains are pointless. If you get rid of the mountains and some of the thin trees and then fix it up a bit it'll look great.

Now time for my next map.
See attachments.

The big map i managed to make!
41071
Rating: 5/10
Although there is quite a lot of bad mapping the fact that you made it this is big is very impressive. The random grass, although it says in a lot of tutorials that it is good, honestly dosn't look good if you make it as random as you have. The placement of trees that hinders your path will get really annoying to the player and don't look good anyway. The lake is way too straight and a bit of randomness to it. Theres a few tile errors and bunches of empty space. The best part of this map is the top left hand corner.

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My Map:
It's been a while since I did some mapping so I decided to make this map for some practice. I might use it for my hack, but if I do it'll be modified here and there. I don't really like how it came out but I can't really tell what I don't like about it. Maybe its the amount of trees...? Well anyway please rate and be as critical as possible.

[megiddo]

Here's a map that I made. http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=silent3.jpg (http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=silent3.jpg)

[Tropical Sunlight]

Here's a map that I made. http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=silent3.jpg

It's okay, but you should fix the grass with the fuschia trees
There are also 2 tile errors, in/on the bridge

[megiddo]

Alright, how is this one? http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/silent4.jpg

[Tropical Sunlight]

Alright, how is this one? http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=silent4.jpg
Erm... The bridge makes no sense now...
I also wonder what are you going to use for border blocks

[Tony™]

New versions of my maps :D
~Starting Town(Help me think up of a name)~
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u137/PokemonTmaster/StartingTown.png[/B]
~Nature Village~
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u137/PokemonTmaster/SecondTown.png
Notes: Top Part with fences, meteor crashed there, police investigate.

~Route 1~
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u137/PokemonTmaster/Route1.png
~Path of Kyota~
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u137/PokemonTmaster/PathofKyota.png

[megiddo]

Eh, it's there for decoration? lol. I was thinking the normal tree for a border block.

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's my fixed Viridian City.
Also, that little house behind the PC, is where Nurse Joy keeps her medicine.

[megiddo]

The gym looks a little odd with that roof.

[Renji Abarai]

New versions of my maps :D
~Starting Town(Help me think up of a name)~
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u137/PokemonTmaster/StartingTown.png[/B]
~Nature Village~
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u137/PokemonTmaster/SecondTown.png
Notes: Top Part with fences, meteor crashed there, police investigate.

~Route 1~
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u137/PokemonTmaster/Route1.png
~Path of Kyota~
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u137/PokemonTmaster/PathofKyota.png
Starter Town
Preety cool Starter town, different from most ones ;). I realy like it, however the Stoneds look "Random". 9.5/10

Nature Village
Wow, nice big map filled with a lot of things ;D. The house in the water brings me back to Venice. Awesome! 10/10

Route 1
Nice Route, I hate routes because they're common And they Sound Weird. This route is nice, the mountain in the middle. however preety plain. 7/10

Path of Kayota
Sounds Cooler ;) Yeah! now that looks really cool. No complaints! You're a cool Mapper ;D.

You're Probably 8.5 - 9 level Mapper. That is so awesome, if I'm doing a hack, you're my mapper.

[garra911]

I've posted this twice already and got no rating, so ill try again

Map Name: Aurum Town (Aurum is Latin for Gold)
Hack Name:Pokemon Dragon Flame (follow sig)
Hack of: Fire Red with Super D/P rom base

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4507/aurumuj2.png

[megiddo]

I give it a 9/10. The only thing I don't like is the signs on the houses

[garra911]

that will be changed, thanks

[Punk Rocker]

I have some maps here. Three have already been rated, but I want them all rated again. And with some thought :)
They are in the attachments.

Evergreen Town
Description: The starting town, the map is empty because it is the starting town, I tried to make it nice and simple for the start of the game. The river leads up to the other side of the region. Which can only be reached after you get a certain badge, even if you manage to get surf without it.

Route 1
Description: The route is nice and simple, you can follow your own path through the route, but halfway through you wont be able to get back. Though that was the point of the map, you cannot go back until you get fly. I used the ledges because these few towns are on a massive hill, which wont have much detail until later routes and towns.

Froma City
Description: Again a nice and simple town. There are a few mysteries behind the town, and in the top left corner lives the elder of the town. You get a bit of storyline from there. The river leads down to a massive lake. And no, it doesnt contain one of the legendary lake Pokemon.

Route 2
Description: This route basically sets off the complications around the rest of the region, the small paths that dont have much grass have cut trees, to prevent you from going across to quickly. The house in the middle is where you get fly, instead of flash, like the original FireRed. This is also where you battle your rival for the first time.

Rockham City
Description: It is a WIP, I havent finished adding all the tiles, which will include a path instead of that busy ground. The bottom half is the place where people befriend Pokemon, while the top is a town with no courtesy for any type of Pokemon. The gym used to be there, but when these conflicts started it left for a different place, which you will find later in the game.

Cant have six attachments ;(.

The maps go from left to right in the attachments, so make sure you know which one your rating. : )

[Mitchman Is]

Meh there all nice
9/10
9/10
10/10
8/10
7/10- this is for having an invisible gym!

[Punk Rocker]

Meh there all nice
9/10
9/10
10/10
8/10
7/10- this is for having an invisible gym!

It would help if you read the descriptions, and actually rated my maps properly as I asked.

[Mitchman Is]

Αha ok um
Evergreen town- 9/10 because although its simple I dont see a river like in the description
Route 1-10/10 because a starting route is supposed to be simple and I love the fact that you cant return to your hometown.
Froma town- 9/10 its nice but meh not to my liking how the houses are placed. As an elder shoudnt he have a house in the middle and the pc in the houses place? Also I dont know if thats a tile error or a secret but 2 trees ar missing.
Route 2- Like you said its simple so not much to rate. 10/10
Rockham city-9/10 I like it but how does a gym get up an leave. Mabye the thing was wreked and all that stands is a platform where battle took place.

That was good enough right?

[Kunoichi.King.]

could someone rate this route remake please.
i am having a few troubles with the bridges and the level permissions of the ground atm, so it is likely to be modified. tell me wat ya think!

[Mitchman Is]

Perfect! Its really good so 9/10

[BigSteve]

Nice map all in all
few errors down the right hand side
lots of the rocks near the edge of the land are cut in half or just have pieces missing
there is also missing bits of darkened water there too
hope that helps :)
will be an 8/10 when you fix that :)

[cε׀׀]

Sirwillis04-
Tha map is overall very good except for the errors all over the place. Once you fix them, it should look very good. I would also suggest you to use bridges of two blocks rather than just one block. The map looks very good though.
8/10

[Cartmic]

could someone rate this route remake please.
i am having a few troubles with the bridges and the level permissions of the ground atm, so it is likely to be modified. tell me wat ya think!

6/10
Remove the land along the left hand side, put in some rocky tiles around the trees.
Im not a great fan of remakes due to there's very little of peoples own thought gone into it.

[Kunoichi.King.]

ok, so i implemented a few of those changes. does it look better?

and here's a redo of mount moon! =D you like?
oh and here's part of my hidden cave. i just need to make some stairs which go up and right =D

[BigSteve]

ok, so i implemented a few of those changes. does it look better?

and here's a redo of mount moon! =D you like?
oh and here's part of my hidden cave. i just need to make some stairs which go up and right =D

much better on the route 9/10

but i dont like mount moon or the secret cave
trees and grass in a cave?

[Kunoichi.King.]

much better on the route 9/10

but i dont like mount moon or the secret cave
trees and grass in a cave?
well, my reason there was because i was bored of all the old **** like the cave tiles. it's mount moon, it's full of fairies, and abnormal stuff should happen in the crater, which is what I am working on, therefore, I added trees.

so what about this one? this is route 4 redone, and where that second cave entrance is where you get to the secret cave. it is normally blocked by a guard until you get misty's badge, but i don't know what here flag is yet, so it can't be used yet. the thrid cave entrance is of course the exit.
and i also redid the secret cave.

[Mitchman Is]

Nice job! I like the route 4 and the cave is..meh. 9/10 and 6/10

[Kunoichi.King.]

Nice job! I like the route 4 and the cave is..meh. 9/10 and 6/10
yeh, that's mainly cause it's the lead up to the crater...where you battle a shiny clefable...which has special moves...but only if you've beaten misty. ;P

[.Pichu-kun]

I got bored.
So I made a random map.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/rm.jpg
Plz rate and comment.

[Kunoichi.King.]

I got bored.
So I made a random map.
Plz rate and comment.

I would rate 7/10.
reason: It's way too square. there's no exit. the small tree tile is wrong. and you don't need a pokemon center and a pokemart in a starting town, as the lab should have a healing machine.

[.Pichu-kun]

Another boring map made by boring, old me...
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/nr.jpg
Plz rate and comment.

[JA_The_Dude]

8/10
But wheres the love...
Here is mine
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/Map.jpg

[Kunoichi.King.]

Another boring map made by boring, old me...
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/nr.jpg
Plz rate and comment.
Again, the stairs are too...i dunno. perhaps you could add a few ledges so that they aren't just straight up. make it interesting.
8/10
But wheres the love...
Here is mine
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/Map.jpg
it's ok, but the dark blue, in my opinion, stands out too much. perhaps you could make the buildings frosted over instead.

now, whenever i say, improve the squarishness, i mean have something like this: see attatchment
can you rate it also?

[Ninja Caterpie]

Hmmm....
Back to good ol rating...

Well...Sirwillis04...
Hmmm...8/10...
Well, it's good ...but it's square...
It has a nice mazy feel to it...Hmmm
Well, there's a tile error on the left side...know what I mean?

[Kunoichi.King.]

Hmmm....
Back to good ol rating...

Well...Sirwillis04...
Hmmm...8/10...
Well, it's good ...but it's square...
It has a nice mazy feel to it...Hmmm
Well, there's a tile error on the left side...know what I mean?
yeh now i only just noticed it. lol.

[JA_The_Dude]

Again, the stairs are too...i dunno. perhaps you could add a few ledges so that they aren't just straight up. make it interesting.

it's ok, but the dark blue, in my opinion, stands out too much. perhaps you could make the buildings frosted over instead.

now, whenever i say, improve the squarishness, i mean have something like this: see attatchment
can you rate it also?

WILL YOU PEOPLE PLEASE! IGNORE THE COLORS! Gawd... this is worst than my weird dream last night...
Any way... here is a map of a mini-village... Great for weary trainers... right next to a town...
Name: Rest Stop Route
If I had a signpost script, it would say, "Welcome to the Rest Stop. This is a great spot for weary trainers."
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/Map1.jpg

[Neti]

WILL YOU PEOPLE PLEASE! IGNORE THE COLORS! Gawd... this is worst than my weird dream last night...
Any way... here is a map of a mini-village... Great for weary trainers... right next to a town...
Name: Rest Stop Route
If I had a signpost script, it would say, "Welcome to the Rest Stop. This is a great spot for weary trainers."
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/Map1.jpg

ok, i will ignore the colors, even if i dont understand if theyre on prupouse or not...
the map is totally sqaure, the path is too straight and wide, and why make a route with a pokecenter when there is a town next to it? its really pointless...
sorry but i dont want to rate this...
maybe you would like to read my mapping tutorial, link is in my signature

[cε׀׀]

WILL YOU PEOPLE PLEASE! IGNORE THE COLORS! Gawd... this is worst than my weird dream last night...
Any way... here is a map of a mini-village... Great for weary trainers... right next to a town...
Name: Rest Stop Route
If I had a signpost script, it would say, "Welcome to the Rest Stop. This is a great spot for weary trainers."
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/Map1.jpg

OMG, what kind of pallete is that *_*
Anyways, the map is what counts. It's totally square though, not what it should look like. It's fairly empty and I guess that's all I can say about this map. You should definitely improve it (and the pallete)

[.Pichu-kun]

ok, i will ignore the colors, even if i dont understand if theyre on prupouse or not...
the map is totally sqaure, the path is too straight and wide, and why make a route with a pokecenter when there is a town next to it? its really pointless...
sorry but i dont want to rate this...
maybe you would like to read my mapping tutorial, link is in my signature

Well, because it's a rest stop, maybe the interior of that PC won't heal ur Pokemon, but has beds for people to rest in...maye heals them...
I love the palette!
It is too square though...
....8/10

~EDIT~
My map: Treeshroud City
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/TC2.jpg

[JA_The_Dude]

10/10 I like it so much! I envy you...
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/DJGSFlowerField.jpg
Well... this is the Flower Field of Shaymin... please ignore the green water... I think it got out of hand due to the stupid Advanced Palette Editor... It wasn't supposed to be green...

[.Pichu-kun]

It's really good!
I love the shape.
I like the green water too.
Maybe Shaymin wanted the water like it's plants, lol! :laugh:
I give it........9.5/10

[JA_The_Dude]

Hey, Thanks. I am going to post another one... WARNING! WILL BREAK PAGE!
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/MDandRC.png

[One Winged Angel]

Whats wrong with the gym? Also, whats up with the palletes?
Also, its kind of empty, and a path would make it look better.

[JA_The_Dude]

Whats wrong with the gym? Also, whats up with the palletes?
Also, its kind of empty, and a path would make it look better.

The gym is a Ghost type Gym (See the skull-looking face?)
And why the mountains? Because it is a ground type gym. (Dang... I thought I was detailer... I'll explain this fully next time I post a map...)
Anyway... Its a town called Ruwi Town. The route on the right is the east side. The reason its a east side... is because... A move deleter lives there with a wife and no kids. XD
This move deleter is known to give details almost identical to God's... Nerdy Husband...

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's one of my maps:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/ST.png
Sireouthe Town
I took me a while to make the PC on paint...

[M.I.A]

Hi lol my first time posting here...uhh i dont have that much experience with maps but here goes..
Map Name: Fluerona City

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: Umm...not much, i just took veridian,edited it,added events,sprites etc and here it is...
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/49/fleuronabr5.th.png (http://img92.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fleuronabr5.png)

[Punk Rocker]

There barely are any changes, and theres alot of tile errors :/. 4/10.

[M.I.A]

Lol yea im aware of tile errors...this was quikly slapped 2gether so i could get it on my hack..and not many changes?wut about the flowers,the grass,the trees *and their positions* the science-ie building, no gym,trainer sqaure..the grass,and the street....w/e i wasnt expecting anything good.

[Kunoichi.King.]

10/10 I like it so much! I envy you...
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/DJGSFlowerField.jpg
Well... this is the Flower Field of Shaymin... please ignore the green water... I think it got out of hand due to the stupid Advanced Palette Editor... It wasn't supposed to be green...

OMG i really really like it

seriously, the water suits it, it really does. perhaps you could make the rocks mossy?
i would rate it about 9/10

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's one of my maps:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/ST.png
Sireouthe Town
I took me a while to make the PC on paint...
There r 2 I would like u to rate: ^ that one.
And:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/ET.jpg
Evergreen Town

[Punk Rocker]

10/10 I like it so much! I envy you...
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/DJGSFlowerField.jpg
Well... this is the Flower Field of Shaymin... please ignore the green water... I think it got out of hand due to the stupid Advanced Palette Editor... It wasn't supposed to be green...

Wow, that is the most eye hurting map ive seen. How many flowers are there? o.O
Theres also cut off rocks at the beginning of the map. Plus, again, too many flowers. The maps is way too big, you couldve done so much more with it. :/ 2/10.

Hey, Thanks. I am going to post another one... WARNING! WILL BREAK PAGE!
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/MDandRC.png

You changed the palettes of the rom base too much, and the trees stick out too much. But that not your fault. The gym is a bit wierd, the roof would of fallen off if its hanging out the side o.o Plus the roof is way too small for it to look natural. The whole map is kinda empty btw. 4/10.

There r 2 I would like u to rate: ^ that one.
And:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/ET.jpg
Evergreen Town

I recommend not using my rom base, the palettes are iffy. Plus they look disgusting o.O
The map is kinda boring, theres no where to go. Plus you've made heaps of tile errors.
*looks at trees* Hey! You took my towns name ;O!

[Ninja Caterpie]

10/10 I like it so much! I envy you...
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/DJGSFlowerField.jpg
Well... this is the Flower Field of Shaymin... please ignore the green water... I think it got out of hand due to the stupid Advanced Palette Editor... It wasn't supposed to be green...

Uh...WOW...
I...can't...believe... SOMEONE COULD RATE THIS 9??
Well...It...has far too many flowers, even for Shaymin's flower field.
Put some empty land...
Or grass.
The flowers...
My eye hurrts
5/10

[Kunoichi.King.]

Uh...WOW...
I...can't...believe... SOMEONE COULD RATE THIS 9??
Well...It...has far too many flowers, even for Shaymin's flower field.
Put some empty land...
Or grass.
The flowers...
My eye hurrts
5/10
well, see...the reason i like it is because....well....i dunno.....i just do....
don't be harsh on me just because i like it.
remember, the real shaymin route is just flowers, so whats wrong with this? maybe some different coloured flowers would help?

[Gabe_c]

My first time to post in this thread... I need to know about this map is good enough or Neos should do it... Don't care about the tiles, if I know him right then he will make some at some point...
I have not done ANY mappng since Crescent Version...:P
Hack of: Fire red
Hack: Sea Blue
Orginal Map: rock tunnel
New map: Some ice cave, with no name yet...
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2604/darkcavedu6.png

[cε׀׀]

My first time to post in this thread... I need to know about this map is good enough or Neos should do it... Don't care about the tiles, if I know him right then he will make some at some point...
I have not done ANY mappng since Crescent Version...:P
Hack of: Fire red
Hack: Sea Blue
Orginal Map: rock tunnel
New map: Some ice cave, with no name yet...
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2604/darkcavedu6.png
Wow, the map looks very nice. It looks like a nice little snowy cave. The wraps are placed in a very good way. I like the ropeways and all...Overall, the map looks very nice.
9.5/10

[.Pichu-kun]

Siro Village
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/SV2.jpg
Plz rate and comment.

[Kunoichi.King.]

Siro Village
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/SV2.jpg
Plz rate and comment.

7/10
mainly because it looks too crowded. that's the only problem i have with it.
the bottom house is over the path, so you could get rid of the hedge and put it back behind the path.
notice how you have moss rocks up against the water? why is that? i see no reason why there couldn't be an item on the ground in the bottom right corner?

[cε׀׀]

Siro Village
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/SV2.jpg
Plz rate and comment.

Nice, I like the map. It looks nice and simple. The map does look alittle crowded though...you shouldn't make the map too crowded. The map looks very nice with the bridges and all. You should've used the other type of houses. But I like the map 8D
9/10

[v1tje]

My first map it's not totally finished but i like it a bit. I've got advanced map since an hour:

41272

[Melash]

^Hmm, not bad... I give it a 4/10. Reasons? Well, don't add so many flower boxes in a row, fix the trees, get rid of the lighthouse thing, and clear the space in the bottom right corner. It's to empty...

[Tony™]

My first map it's not totally finished but i like it a bit. I've got advanced map since an hour:

41272

A lot of tile errors. Some empty space...
I'll give it a 1/10...
Try reading some tutorials in the tutorial section.

[v1tje]

Okay, i had an hour advanced map so a little mistakes are not bad i think.

[Wiro]

Hi!

here's my green route, where you start the game:
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/5314/greenroutebp3.png

and here's evergreen ville: (eeveon i got the name b4 i saw your post)
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5298/evergreenvillecq1.png

[Woofer]

Hi!

here's my green route, where you start the game:

Looks good, especially if you've just started recently. I like the use of "mountain" tiles, because it shows you've really got a sense of depth behind your mapping. Overall, however, it seems a little empty and "short" for a "route". Also, there's no grass; I don't remember there being a route without at least some wild grass.

8/10

and here's evergreen ville: (eeveon i got the name b4 i saw your post)

Again, here, I like the concept. (The Gym being right there, and you're forced to pass it.) I don't like the use of just that particular house; I would expand the map a little, eliminate one of the houses, and re-arrange the others. Again though, nice sense of depth.

8/10

[Wiro]

Looks good, especially if you've just started recently. I like the use of "mountain" tiles, because it shows you've really got a sense of depth behind your mapping. Overall, however, it seems a little empty and "short" for a "route". Also, there's no grass; I don't remember there being a route without at least some wild grass.

8/10


it's like where you start the game, when you go through the house the route continues and there's no grass because you can't fight without pokemon

Again, here, I like the concept. (The Gym being right there, and you're forced to pass it.) I don't like the use of just that particular house; I would expand the map a little, eliminate one of the houses, and re-arrange the others. Again though, nice sense of depth.

8/10

yeah, it's going to be a way up to a mountain somewhere, but i dunno yet where...

but 8/10 is pretty good anyway :) thx

[.Pichu-kun]

Hi!

here's my green route, where you start the game:
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/5314/greenroutebp3.png

and here's evergreen ville: (eeveon i got the name b4 i saw your post)
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5298/evergreenvillecq1.png

Map 1:
I really like the map.
But there is too much empty space, u should fix that...8/10

Map 2:
Again, another very good map, but too much empty space.
U should be careful of that, that's a mistake a lot of people make....9/10

(For the name, u could use whatever name u like, that map of mine was just a random map and felt like renaming it. So don't worry, it's OK if u use the names that u want, even if they r the same as someone else. I try to make the names fit in with the town. ^^)

[Neti]

Map 1:
I really like the map.
But there is too much empty space, u should fix that...8/10

Map 2:
Again, another very good map, but too much empty space.
U should be careful of that, that's a mistake a lot of people make....9/10

(For the name, u could use whatever name u like, that map of mine was just a random map and felt like renaming it. So don't worry, it's OK if u use the names that u want, even if they r the same as someone else. I try to make the names fit in with the town. ^^)

the second map has a bit too mcuch empyt space at the elft, but where do you find empty space at the first one? maybe theres some unsued space, but maps do need those places that dont serve a real purpose or they look unnatural
i think thats one thing i critisized at your maps: you dont give the player any opportunity to leave the path

[.Pichu-kun]

Well, in some hacks, some places that have no exits, maybe it's a place to get warped to and from.

[Melash]

Okay, here are some of my new maps:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack of: Gold
Map Name: New Bark Town
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/NBT.jpg
Description: Although I have already posted this map before, this one is a little differenent.

Map Name: Cave ? ? ?
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Cave.jpg
Description: This is just some cave in the game. Tell me how you like it.

Hack Name: Ancient Ruby
Hack Of: Gold
Map Name: Littleroot Town
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/LittlerootTown.jpg
Description: This is a map of Littleroot Town. Sound familar? Well, this game is a remake of Ruby with 2nd Gen graphics. Tell me if it sounds like a good idea.

On this one just tell me which row is better. Top or bottom?
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/compare-1.jpg

[.:God:.]

Map Name: Faelniwt Town (fail-new-ta)

Map Game: Firered

Comments: First for the new hack Pokemon- The Lost Kingdom: War Lords

Mapshot: Check Attachments


@Melash

Rating:
Map 1: 7/10
Map 2: 8.5-9.9/10
Map 3: 6/10

Reason:
Map 1: What happened? It looks like a meteor hit! It's a mess! And also, how many stories does the lab have? Like 24?
Map 2: This depends on when the map shows up in the game. I mean. you need surf to get through it, so... halfway decent. What's the point of the rocks?
Map 3: Extremely boring and empty. But.... it does look a lot like Rooty.

Suggestions:
Map 1: Give it a more spicy look and not a funeral-looking type of city like Lavender Town.
Map 2: Not really a lot... just change the storyline like getting Surf after the 1st gym or something.
Map 3: Fill it up, if you want it to be intresting.

[M.I.A]

Sorry i have no time for rating right now X_X as im mapping at this very instant,but just checking to see what the hack is looking like so far.
Map Name: HERATIO TOWN.

Map Game: Fire Red
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2200/beachislandns1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Comments: Uhh, not much, used a tileset i found in the hackers resource (forgot name X_X) and uhh it'll be where you start for my hack (I'm redoing all maps with this tileset).

[Mitchman Is]

Aha cool. Its sergios by the way. I say it is a map worthy of.....9.5/10!

[cε׀׀]

Sorry i have no time for rating right now X_X as im mapping at this very instant,but just checking to see what the hack is looking like so far.
Map Name: HERATIO TOWN.

Map Game: Fire Red
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2200/beachislandns1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Comments: Uhh, not much, used a tileset i found in the hackers resource (forgot name X_X) and uhh it'll be where you start for my hack (I'm redoing all maps with this tileset).

Ow Mannn, you used my rombase T_T
Anyways, the map doesn't look so good to me. Plenty of errors I could see there. The houses and some other stuff. The map is empty and you should not have added the grass all over the place. You're border has also got a problem.
5/10

[Melash]

Okay, here are some more maps:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack of: Gold
Map Name: Cove Island
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/CoveIsle.jpg
Okay, in my hack, Awakened Legends, instead of the Kanto Region, (Which got destroyed! Yes! Wait, how good of an idea is that...?) there's a different region (no name yet) that is made up of islands. This is an island that is more of a...er...comfty one. You know? Well, anyway, there are two legendaries here. The bottom path leads to Celebi's Forest (not the name!) and the bridge leads to Moltrase's Cave (no name yet!)

Map Name: Reef Island
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/ReefIsle.jpg
Okay, this is the first city you arrive after you take the boat from Jhoto. Nothing else to say about it!

Map Name: Mewtwo Cave
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/MtMoon.jpg
This is the cave where Mewtwo resides. NOTE: There is supposed to be a cave entrance in the right corner. I forgot to put it in!

Enjoy!

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's my map:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/lala.jpg
Plz rate and comment! ^^

[Kunoichi.King.]

Here's my map:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/lala.jpg
Plz rate and comment! ^^

it's a nice map, but i would recommend using the right tree tiles.
it looks a little crowded, try and have just a little bit of free space in the map.
also, try and distinguish the lab from the rest, so that it stands out as a 'lab'
i would rate...8/10

[.Pichu-kun]

Thanx, and I think there is enough "free space" and there's no lab, it could be a starter village, but the lab is at the next town.
(Kinda like D/P)

[.:God:.]

This is my 2nd Post, no one replied...

Map Name: Faelniwt Town (fail-new-ta)

Map Game: Firered

Comments: First for the new hack Pokemon- The Lost Kingdom: War Lords

Mapshot: Check Attachments


@Melash

Rating:
Map 1: 7/10
Map 2: 8.5-9.9/10
Map 3: 6/10

Reason:
Map 1: What happened? It looks like a meteor hit! It's a mess! And also, how many stories does the lab have? Like 24?
Map 2: This depends on when the map shows up in the game. I mean. you need surf to get through it, so... halfway decent. What's the point of the rocks?
Map 3: Extremely boring and empty. But.... it does look a lot like Rooty.

Suggestions:
Map 1: Give it a more spicy look and not a funeral-looking type of city like Lavender Town.
Map 2: Not really a lot... just change the storyline like getting Surf after the 1st gym or something.
Map 3: Fill it up, if you want it to be intresting.

[M.I.A]

Ok RTW, i say...6/10

Reasons: the new doors dont go well with ur mark/poke center etc...,the wierd building in the bottom is left is ...well..wierd,and looks too big. The closed tree across from it has only 1 patch of grass on its left side....??,theres a wierd house with no door on the right,the sign put DIRECTLY ON the long building look...yes,wierd. I mean they look painted on?and more importantly what is the Mart doing with a mail box? -_- oh one more thing,and i olmost missed this...you overused the vegetation!Flowers,bushes etc are all over the place, not to mention it looks very clustered....

EDIT: lol,ynow wat? i think i was to hard on u ^^ i was just pissed kuz ppl rated my maps suxish -_- u derserve an 8/10

[.Pichu-kun]

I give it a...4/10
Reason(s):
1. Too square (common mistake)
2. Regular doors don't go very well on Gyms, marts, and P.C.s
3. Don't put signs on the buildings
4. The house in the middle has no windows and serves no purpose, unless it's a shed of some sort
5. Bottom left house is weird and also has no windows

[Melash]

Uhh...no one rated my new maps! Here they are again:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack of: Gold
Map Name: Cove Island
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/CoveIsle.jpg
Okay, in my hack, Awakened Legends, instead of the Kanto Region, (Which got destroyed! Yes! Wait, how good of an idea is that...?) there's a different region (no name yet) that is made up of islands. This is an island that is more of a...er...comfty one. You know? Well, anyway, there are two legendaries here. The bottom path leads to Celebi's Forest (not the name!) and the bridge leads to Moltrase's Cave (no name yet!)

Map Name: Reef Island
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/ReefIsle.jpg
Okay, this is the first city you arrive after you take the boat from Jhoto. Nothing else to say about it!

Map Name: Mewtwo Cave
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/MtMoon.jpg
This is the cave where Mewtwo resides. NOTE: There is supposed to be a cave entrance in the right corner. I forgot to put it in!

Enjoy!

EDIT:
Here's another map:
Map Name: Barren Island
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/BarrenIsland.jpg
This is actually the first island you reach when traveling from the Jhoto to the next region. Note: The tower is a home to a legedary. Maybe Ho-oh! You get into it from the cave!

[.Pichu-kun]

Uhh...no one rated my new maps! Here they are again:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack of: Gold
Map Name: Cove Island
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/CoveIsle.jpg
Okay, in my hack, Awakened Legends, instead of the Kanto Region, (Which got destroyed! Yes! Wait, how good of an idea is that...?) there's a different region (no name yet) that is made up of islands. This is an island that is more of a...er...comfty one. You know? Well, anyway, there are two legendaries here. The bottom path leads to Celebi's Forest (not the name!) and the bridge leads to Moltrase's Cave (no name yet!)

Map Name: Reef Island
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/ReefIsle.jpg
Okay, this is the first city you arrive after you take the boat from Jhoto. Nothing else to say about it!

Map Name: Mewtwo Cave
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/MtMoon.jpg
This is the cave where Mewtwo resides. NOTE: There is supposed to be a cave entrance in the right corner. I forgot to put it in!

Enjoy!

They r all pretty good! ^^
Map 1: 7.5/10
Map 2: 5/10
Map 3: 8/10
The reason I rated ur map so less is because it seems empty to me...

[M.I.A]

Alrite i gots another map.

Made in : Fire Red,o course.
Map name: uhh....dont have a name..Bloopi Town.
hehe thx pl0x rate,just felt like doing a random map....
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9476/loolwp2.png (http://imageshack.us)

[.Pichu-kun]

Melash:
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/BarrenIsland.jpg
It's good, but there r tile errors behind the house on the left and cave on left, and a tile error on the right side ledge of the mountain.
Overall...6/10

[Kunoichi.King.]

Alrite i gots another map.

Made in : Fire Red,o course.
Map name: uhh....dont have a name..Bloopi Town.
hehe thx pl0x rate,just felt like doing a random map....
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9476/loolwp2.png (http://imageshack.us)
well, fix up the tile errors first. that's important.
get rid of that dark brown path
make that tree in the middle a clump of 2 or three trees instead
The PC and the Gym's rooves are too narrow, make them longer, it's ill proportioned
overall i'd say a 6.5, mainly cus of the errors.
(and you don't normally find grass in a city/town)

[Meowth]

I'm using some of KyleDove's tiles, this is my first EVER time tile editing and pallete editing successfully. Tell me what you think. (this is a small Starter town with an event that happens at the Pokecenter)

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9954/kyledovenl4.png

[Kunoichi.King.]

I'm using some of KyleDove's tiles, this is my first EVER time tile editing and pallete editing successfully. Tell me what you think. (this is a small Starter town with an event that happens at the Pokecenter)

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9954/kyledovenl4.png
well, the water patches and the ledge don't make sense. why jump down a ledge if it goes nowhere?
try working on the squareness, that's the big old problem. make it special! work on a better placement of the tree stump thingies, it's either those OR the rocks that you should have on the map.
and the house really stands out o_o
i would say 6/10, but if you make those changes then post it again ok?

[Meowth]

The ledge is for a reason, a little girl hides down there when the bandits attack, and there will also be a pokeball down there.

(The town is up on a mountain)

[thethethethe]

Okay my first map in probably four months or so just trying to get into the rhythm again.
Map Name: Umber Town
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: This is just a concept, I'm going to be making a few different versions of this same map.
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z24/thethethethe_photo/Map1.png

[Kunoichi.King.]

The ledge is for a reason, a little girl hides down there when the bandits attack, and there will also be a pokeball down there.

(The town is up on a mountain)

ah ok, but still, if it's a mountain town then why is there only one layer of rock surrounding it? is the mountain flat? O_o

[Meowth]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7243/kyledoveod0.png

Heres my update.

And my opinion for Thethethethe:

It looks good to me except for the building with the signpost out in front and the awkward windows... so 7.5/10 from me :)

EDIT: No, its just not in the center of the mountain, its off to the right.

[Kunoichi.King.]

[img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7243/kyledoveod0.png[img]

Heres my update.

much better! but it still doesn't look very mountainous hmmmm...well, a little more rocky... 8.5/10
it's just something about the house...i dunno what...try editing the brightness of everything else to suit the house. outlines of the house so they aren't as dark.

EDIT: oh and thethethe, 7/10...mainly because i cant see any paths! but other than that it is good

[Meowth]

.try editing the outlines of the house so they aren't as dark.


Tried that... I had another attempt at it, but it sucked. There are no other colors that are dark but not too light to screw everything up.

I cant fix that...

[Kunoichi.King.]

Tried that... I had another attempt at it, but it sucked. There are no other colors that are dark but not too light to screw everything up.

I cant fix that...
oh, that's a shame, it really is a shame. based on that i will up it to 8.5/10!
anyways, i shall post a map up here soon O_o
my last map was last week or something O_o

[Meowth]

oh, that's a shame, it really is a shame. based on that i will up it to 8.5/10!
anyways, i shall post a map up here soon O_o
my last map was last week or something O_o

Alright, thanks for your help :D

[Punk Rocker]

Okay my first map in probably four months or so just trying to get into the rhythm again.
Map Name: Umber Town
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: This is just a concept, I'm going to be making a few different versions of this same map.
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z24/thethethethe_photo/Map1.png

I like it, nice and plain, which is good with in game play.
Though I do have a problem with that building (the brown one), it doesn't seem to fit in with the background of the town. But I guess the map is alright.

[Kunoichi.King.]

well, here's that new map i was talking about
though it was a printscreen, because i am having problems with the map capture [which i am reporting to LUHO]
see attatchment
and it's not completely finished, i just want some opinions =D

[thethethethe]

I like it, nice and plain, which is good with in game play.
Though I do have a problem with that building (the brown one), it doesn't seem to fit in with the background of the town. But I guess the map is alright.

EDIT: oh and thethethe, 7/10...mainly because i cant see any paths! but other than that it is good
Thanks for the feedback. That brown building is just there because of the limitations of unedited tiles. If I was going to have it in a hack, it would have a building similiar to the Power Plant Building or something similiar to the lab on cinnabar. I'm just trying to map with default tiles. I'm really just more interested on some feedback on how I've placed things.

[Punk Rocker]

Thanks for the feedback. That brown building is just there because of the limitations of unedited tiles. If I was going to have it in a hack, it would have a building similiar to the Power Plant Building or something similiar to the lab on cinnabar. I'm just trying to map with default tiles. I'm really just more interested on some feedback on how I've placed things.

In that case.
The placement is very good, it gives the natural sought of feel, but it is a bit too small to get a detailed rating. I reckon some tree shadows will make it look better, plus your flowers should be a bit more organised, I don't care what mapping tutorials say, to a certain extent, they look nice being organised. Plus you need more :)

[Thrace]

Alrite i gots another map.

Made in : Fire Red,o course.
Map name: uhh....dont have a name..Bloopi Town.
hehe thx pl0x rate,just felt like doing a random map....
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9476/loolwp2.png (http://imageshack.us)
Rating: 4/10
Incorrect sizes of buildings, inconsistent path sizes and really strange pallete (bright and dim?). Improvements would probably be to use a bigger map or resize that one and change the pallete and locations of buildings. It's probably best to start again.

Okay my first map in probably four months or so just trying to get into the rhythm again.
Map Name: Umber Town
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: This is just a concept, I'm going to be making a few different versions of this same map.
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z24/thethethethe_photo/Map1.png
Rating: 8/10
Seems a little boring. This is just my own preference but I like to have more than just one house for any town, no matter how small, otherwise it doesn't seem like a town to me. Flower placement is good. The position of the mart looks awkward. I would suggest moving the mart right next to the trees on the left side, pushing the brown building up a bit and making the lake a little bit smaller (or making the map bigger).

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7243/kyledoveod0.png

Heres my update.

And my opinion for Thethethethe:

It looks good to me except for the building with the signpost out in front and the awkward windows... so 7.5/10 from me :)

EDIT: No, its just not in the center of the mountain, its off to the right.
Rating: 7/10
It looks great, but in-game it will be quite frustrating with the movement-hindering log placement. The colour of the trees makes the grass look bluish. The Kyledove house looks out of place, I recommend replacing it with the original house in that tileset and pallete editing it for originality. I think it would be good it you made the mountain multi-levelled (1 more level should do it) too because right now that town looks like its in a crater or something. Also the amount of bikes is unnecessary and makes the town even more crowded, 2 should be enough.

EDIT:
Whoops, one more.
well, here's that new map i was talking about
though it was a printscreen, because i am having problems with the map capture [which i am reporting to LUHO]
see attatchment
and it's not completely finished, i just want some opinions =D
Rating: 6/10
Its quite good except for a few things. The inaccessible mountains with grass are pointless, you should remove the grass and add some levels. The randomness of the grass is over the top, grass looks much better when you have a balance, I like to have a random border but have groups of grass. The steps look really bad you should have sticked with the normal ones. Good use of the ledge. The cave in the middle looks a bit weird. Make it so that there is no space between the two levels. The only other thing I don't like is the pallete, because it is overused and doesn't look that great anyway/

[Kunoichi.King.]

Rating: 6/10
Its quite good except for a few things. The inaccessible mountains with grass are pointless, you should remove the grass and add some levels. The randomness of the grass is over the top, grass looks much better when you have a balance, I like to have a random border but have groups of grass. The steps look really bad you should have sticked with the normal ones. Good use of the ledge. The cave in the middle looks a bit weird. Make it so that there is no space between the two levels. The only other thing I don't like is the pallete, because it is overused and doesn't look that great anyway/
as i said, still in progress, i'll work on some of those changes.
i'n not changing the pallette though.
i will post it again when it's done

[Tropical Sunlight]

Map name: Seaflow River
Original map: Route 7
http://shrani.si/f/K/105/4i4DgL3Y/seaflow-river.png
Connections: Seaflow River (up), Wish Town (right)
Notes: You'll se in the beta :P
Credits: CheesePeow for the white-sand rombase

[Neti]

looks quite cool, but where is the water going?^^ i mean theres more and more water coming from the waterfall but it doesnt get more

[Tropical Sunlight]

looks quite cool, but where is the water going?^^ i mean theres more and more water coming from the waterfall but it doesnt get more
Oh, I knew someone's gonna ask this... It's a secret :P
The water goes underground and comes out in Miry Swamp and Lake Liberty, there's an underground tunnel leading them and the underground water tunnel splits

EDIT: lol, made a new map xD

Map name: Summerland
Original map: Six Island
http://shrani.si/f/3p/HL/4cOuvwYh/summerland.png
Notes: There are going to be houses on the platforms in the final version
Connections: Olive Jungle (up)
Credits: CheesePeow for rombase

[Neti]

why do you post unfinished maps? not gonna vote the unfinished version...

[Melash]

Okay, I only have one map this time:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack Of: Gold
Map Name: Clover Island
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/CloverIsland.jpg
Okay, see the mountains surrounded by fences? Well, that's where a legendary is. Anyway, I'm not sure what the purpose of the big building is, but it'll be important!

Please rate and comment!

[Mitchman Is]

Lol nice. As always its a bit empty. Put windows and stuff. 7/10

[Melash]

Okay, I'll add windows onto the building. You said it's a little empty, should I add some more buildings?

[t.A.T.u]

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/AwatapIsle-1.jpg

Finished map of mine. But, this one little map crashed my game. In fact, even if I don't edit anything then save the game using Advanced Map 1.92 it crashes. V_V

Edit: Errors on the trees near the house with the red roof.

[Sacred Dragon]

These are maps I made, I guess to have something to do, but well here they are. I am putting them up mainly to see what other people think of my maps nad to be given advice on what I need to improve on, so please rate honestly. There is a lot of open spaces, but hopefully people will help me fill it with something... I took some things out of the maps because I only use those parts for testing purposes. Anyway, just click on the pictures below. Oh yea, on the fourth map, I need to center the shrine-like structure lol.

[Kunoichi.King.]

These are maps I made, I guess to have something to do, but well here they are. I am putting them up mainly to see what other people think of my maps nad to be given advice on what I need to improve on, so please rate honestly. There is a lot of open spaces, but hopefully people will help me fill it with something... I took some things out of the maps because I only use those parts for testing purposes. Anyway, just click on the pictures below. Oh yea, on the fourth map, I need to center the shrine-like structure lol.

well, they're all eye-scarringly square. SERIOUSLY, fix it!
they don't look like the inside of a mountain at all!
there's awy too much space...way too much
i would give them all a 4/10
some serious improvements should be made
[sorry if i'm harsh, but really, you can do better]
(and if they are unfinished, don't post them]

EDIT; OOPS, forgot one!
http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/AwatapIsle-1.jpg

Finished map of mine. But, this one little map crashed my game. In fact, even if I don't edit anything then save the game using Advanced Map 1.92 it crashes. V_V

Edit: Errors on the trees near the house with the red roof.

ja, there's also some tile errors with the fence near the boat. and can i ask why the boat is there? it's completely inaccessible so there's no point in it.
tile errors in the trees near the top left house.
cave is absolutely tiny
the island is overcrowded with water. try and make it a little less of that
overall a 7/10

[Tropical Sunlight]

New map!

Map name: Stone Path
Original map: Route 2
http://shrani.si/t/31/12h/3tikY4vX/stone-path.jpg (http://shrani.si/?31/12h/3tikY4vX/stone-path.png)
Notes: You have to use HM08 to get to Destiny Cave 1 (the small cave)
Connections: Crystole City (up), Greenbush City (left)

[Sacred Dragon]

[quote=Sirwillis04;3665200]well, they're all eye-scarringly square. SERIOUSLY, fix it!
they don't look like the inside of a mountain at all!
there's awy too much space...way too much
i would give them all a 4/10
some serious improvements should be made
[sorry if i'm harsh, but really, you can do better]
(and if they are unfinished, don't post them]


Thank you for being honest lol. :D I'll improve them, thank you.

[t.A.T.u]

well, they're all eye-scarringly square. SERIOUSLY, fix it!
they don't look like the inside of a mountain at all!
there's awy too much space...way too much
i would give them all a 4/10
some serious improvements should be made
[sorry if i'm harsh, but really, you can do better]
(and if they are unfinished, don't post them]

EDIT; OOPS, forgot one!


ja, there's also some tile errors with the fence near the boat. and can i ask why the boat is there? it's completely inaccessible so there's no point in it.
tile errors in the trees near the top left house.
cave is absolutely tiny
the island is overcrowded with water. try and make it a little less of that
overall a 7/10

Thanks for the advice! ^^

Here is a new map. Its the starting town in my Fire Red hack. And it didn't crash my game! ^^

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/AngeRiver.png

Yes the house on the peninsula is supposed to be inaccessible until you get surf because you get a certain Pokemon in that house! ^^ Also, it is SUPPOSED to be bright. So don't go "ITS TO BRIGHTERZ!1!!!!1!1! D:"

Also, the Professor takes you into the lab ^^ So that makes the map better in my opinion since everything works! :D

[Melash]

To Awatap Aavy: ^Wow, that map is really good! I'll give it a 9/10! I really like the green colors and flowers and stuff!
Here's my map:
Hack Name: Beginning Truths
Hack Of: FireRed
Map Name: Pellat Town (Not a spelling error
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/PellatTown.jpg
Description: Okay, this is the starting town. It's hard to describe the game in a few paragraphs, but you start in a large city. The top two buildings are a school and apartment. You live in the apartment on your own.
Please rate!

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's my first gold map:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/NBT.png
I will take any critism, I'm not very good at gold maps...

[Melash]

^Not bad, I give it a...5/10.
Reasons? Well, I think it's too empty, add a mart and few other houses. And it seems like it's squished together, I think it's a little to small to be a town. Maybe add some more houses among the trees and make it more loose!

[t.A.T.u]

Melesh- Well, there are a few tile errors and the building that is the school has too many windows. They both have a lot but since one is an apartment building one is fine. But a school shouldn't have that many windows. Just looks kind of strange.

All in all its a 7/10 in my opinion. ^^

[Kunoichi.King.]

New map!

Map name: Stone Path
Original map: Route 2
http://shrani.si/t/31/12h/3tikY4vX/stone-path.jpg (http://shrani.si/?31/12h/3tikY4vX/stone-path.png)
Notes: You have to use HM08 to get to Destiny Cave 1 (the small cave)
Connections: Crystole City (up), Greenbush City (left)

well perhaps you could get rid of all that grass, cus there's just too much.
about an 8/10

Thanks for the advice! ^^

Here is a new map. Its the starting town in my Fire Red hack. And it didn't crash my game! ^^

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/AngeRiver.png

Yes the house on the peninsula is supposed to be inaccessible until you get surf because you get a certain Pokemon in that house! ^^ Also, it is SUPPOSED to be bright. So don't go "ITS TO BRIGHTERZ!1!!!!1!1! D:"

Also, the Professor takes you into the lab ^^ So that makes the map better in my opinion since everything works! :D
well it is better than the last one, i will admit. but i still feel that the water is overtaking the map...:\
7.5/10

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's another map:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/CC.png
Plz, any kind criticizing is fine as long as u don't say, ur the worst mapper in history or anything like that.
I'm not very good at Gold maps.

[Melash]

^Wow, I really like this map! I like the winding path and the mountains in the water! I give it a 9.5/10. Suggestions: Add some more flowers!

BTW, what map was that from?

[t.A.T.u]

well perhaps you could get rid of all that grass, cus there's just too much.
about an 8/10


well it is better than the last one, i will admit. but i still feel that the water is overtaking the map...:\
7.5/10

Thats the point of the map...Its a river. -rolls eyes-

[Kunoichi.King.]

well, if it is a river then it should run all the way through the map, this one just goes through half and stops, more of a stream sort of thing. unless it goes underground O_o

[t.A.T.u]

well, if it is a river then it should run all the way through the map, this one just goes through half and stops, more of a stream sort of thing. unless it goes underground O_o

In case you haven't noticed, it connects to another map. Which continues the river. Rivers have to start and end somewhere....

[Kunoichi.King.]

In case you haven't noticed, it connects to another map. Which continues the river. Rivers have to start and end somewhere....
yes, they normally start at somekind of waterfall and end flowing out to sea, correct? so shouldn't there be some kind of sea which that river flows into?

[t.A.T.u]

yes, they normally start at somekind of waterfall and end flowing out to sea, correct? so shouldn't there be some kind of sea which that river flows into?

Yes but its kind of hard to fit an entire river and a sea on a map of that size. And not all rivers start with a waterfall. I can name one near where I live that doesn't. Infact, 2. The Ohio River and The Cuyohoga River. :P

[Tropical Sunlight]

well perhaps you could get rid of all that grass, cus there's just too much.
about an 8/10
It's supposed to be like this, as everything was formed by nature :P
And I think we're a little offtopic by the river here

[Melash]

Okay, I've got some Gold Maps:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack Of: Gold
Map Name: Route 27
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route27.jpg
Comments: Okay, this is the Route that connects New Bark Town into the Kanto. I blocked it off because in my game...Kanto is gone! Yes!

Map Name: Route 44
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route44.jpg
Comments: Okay, this leads from BlackThorn City to Egrotek (Spelling!) and I made it all flooded and destroyed looking. Actually this doesn't lead to Egrotek, it leads to another route:

Map Name: Route 42?
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route42.jpg
Comments: Okay, this leads from the above Route to Egrotek. Once again, this got flooded. I made it so you have to go through Mt. Motar to reach the city.

Please rate!

[.Pichu-kun]

Okay, I've got some Gold Maps:
Hack Name: Awakened Legends
Hack Of: Gold
Map Name: Route 27
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route27.jpg
Comments: Okay, this is the Route that connects New Bark Town into the Kanto. I blocked it off because in my game...Kanto is gone! Yes!

Map Name: Route 44
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route44.jpg
Comments: Okay, this leads from BlackThorn City to Egrotek (Spelling!) and I made it all flooded and destroyed looking. Actually this doesn't lead to Egrotek, it leads to another route:

Map Name: Route 42?
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/HQC/Route42.jpg
Comments: Okay, this leads from the above Route to Egrotek. Once again, this got flooded. I made it so you have to go through Mt. Motar to reach the city.

Please rate!

They're all pretty good.
Overall...6/10
There's too many rocks, try adding something different.

~EDIT~
Gold map
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/nc.png
Plz rate and comment.

[ShineGreymΘn]

Hi, i have two map.
Pls rate and comment.

Map name : ---
Map : http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/FirstTown.jpg
Credits : CheesePeow for rombase.

Map name : ---
Map : http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/Route.jpg
Credits : CheesePeow for rombase.

[Ninja Caterpie]

Hi, i have two map.
Pls rate and comment.

Map name : ---
Map : http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/FirstTown.jpg
Credits : CheesePeow for rombase.

7.5/10
It's good.
Not square and well built.
The funny tower is a bit weird...
There are minor tile errors in the houses
I don't think there should be moving water when there isn't anything making it move...

Map name : ---
Map :http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/Route.jpg
Credits : CheesePeow for rombase.

This one's good.
The grass is used well as an obstacle but it allows easy movement back (as always does on Route 1)
The grass blocks are too square though.
8/10

[ShineGreymΘn]

Thanks for rating and comment.^^

Edit: I remap my first town(or city?).
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/FirstTown2.jpg
Pls rate and comment.

[Ninja Caterpie]

Well, I felt like a comeback to mapping...so...
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/4966/mtmoonmainmr4.png

[Tropical Sunlight]

Well, I felt like a comeback to mapping...so...
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/4966/mtmoonmainmr4.png

The map's great, but that's not all of it, is it?
And I think ladders shouldn't go down, make two go down and two up? or something tile that. And, It's veeery empty, you should fill the blank space with something (rocks, water,...)
6/10

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's a Gold map.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/nc.png
Plz rate and comment.

[chaotic_soma]

Here's a Gold map.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/nc.png
Plz rate and comment.

3/10
Alright first off the town is a little too bare it lacks thing to make it memorable i believe that the gym shouldn't be so close to the entrance but that is a personal preferance and maybe you should have custom tiles aswell to add interest into the level, why the amount of trees? you have no fences, no signs again nothing to make it memorable not even 1 flower.

PS. Sorry if i sound harsh or rude i am just upfront with my opinions and thoughts and in the end it will help you create better maps.

[Ninja Caterpie]

The map's great, but that's not all of it, is it?
And I think ladders shouldn't go down, make two go down and two up? or something tile that. And, It's veeery empty, you should fill the blank space with something (rocks, water,...)
6/10

Oh...water...
I forgot!
Lawl...No, it's meant to have all ladders straight down, it's the top level of the mountain.

Here's a Gold map.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/nc.png
Plz rate and comment.

Well, it's kinda bare.
No flowers... no twisty paths...and it's kinda crammed together.

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's a map of FR.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/rotflmao.jpg
Plz rate and comment.

[Melash]

^Nice, I kinda like it! I'll give it a 7/10. Reasons? Well, I didn't really like the bridge, and I think the towns a little too squished together. I think it would be better if the houses had more space apart, like the ones at the bottom. Just make another path or a little more free space.

[Atlas]

EEveon, if you added some sort of water below that bridge, it would work, but with its current configuration, it just looks out of place.
(posted at 9:00 this morning)

Edit:
Ok, as Eeveon asked me to post one of my maps here, I will.

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/673/forshowed6.png

[Kunoichi.King.]

EEveon, if you added some sort of water below that bridge, it would work, but with its current configuration, it just looks out of place.
(posted at 9:00 this morning)

Edit:
Ok, as Eeveon asked me to post one of my maps here, I will.


i would recommend fixing up all of those horrible tile errors.
try and fill up the map with things, but don't make it overcrowded.
that path doesn't work, it starts at ground level, and unless you have sideways stairs, it doesn't work. see what i mean?
i would give a 6/10

anyways, as for me, i am posting a prototype of an underground city.
the main reason it's a prototype is because i haven't implemented any of your ideas yet guys......
i quite like the shape of it though.
tell me what ya think
EDIT: and i dunno what to do with the houses, that's why they look ****
Oh and there's only one warp at the moment...because i can't decide where to put the other one =/
:)

[Ninja Caterpie]

It looks very nice!
The shape is great!
It's just, there are too many watery holey thingos.
8.5/10
That's only rating the shape and mountains of the map...you DID say the houses weren't ready.

[Kunoichi.King.]

It looks very nice!
The shape is great!
It's just, there are too many watery holey thingos.
8.5/10
That's only rating the shape and mountains of the map...you DID say the houses weren't ready.

yeh, i'm just not sure what would suit it =/
i was thinking blue rooves...but that doesn't work with the cave tiles.
what do you think i should do?

[Neti]

hey guys, i think i havent posted a map for a while, so here is a map i just made to test the tileset i created for the 2nd Region of my hack.
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/huoshi%20test.png
Credit goes to Serg!o for the desert tiles and to PHO for those Trees

[.Pichu-kun]

Very good!
I love the desert tiles and I like how u put grass behind the house...10/10!

[chaotic_soma]

Here's a map of FR.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/rotflmao.jpg
Plz rate and comment.

6.5/10
In one word squishy Also what is the point of the bridge it looks outta place and to be honest it make my eyes bleed lol i like the little flowers and the use of the little trees as a contrast though, the huge building idk seems kinda flat the way you set it up with the ridge Directly behind it make it seem unnatural you'd think a large building would appear over the ridge but altogether i quite like it.

hey guys, i think i havent posted a map for a while, so here is a map i just made to test the tileset i created for the 2nd Region of my hack.
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/huoshi%20test.png
Credit goes to Serg!o for the desert tiles and to PHO for those Trees

9.95/10
Now this is a work of art you really have captured a desert feel with this map from small details of the terracotta roof for insulation, to the little red flowers which are actually seen in those regions.
The placement of the wildlife looks very natural and i would have the feel of actually walking through the desert with this one.
My only fault is that imo those little greenbushes look outta place they seem too idk vibrant maybe a more browny looking dead bush would be appropriate (that and i have never really liked them :P) Great work!

[Austinia]

I just finally finished a map of a forest that I may put in my hack. I haven't made too many maps before.

Anyone care to rate it? :)

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-1.png
And credit to PHO for tiles. :p

And the reason the paths are so long is because part of them warp you out :s and I don't want the player to see the end of it which leads to the border block which is a tree, which would look weird...er. Its kinda awkward looking... idk how to fix it.

[Ninja Caterpie]

I just finally finished a map of a forest that I may put in my hack. I haven't made too many maps before.

Anyone care to rate it? :)

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-1.png
And credit to PHO for tiles. :p

And the reason the paths are so long is because part of them warp you out :s and I don't want the player to see the end of it which leads to the border block which is a tree, which would look weird...er. Its kinda awkward looking... idk how to fix it.
Well, just put trees on the path...xD

Anyway, I'd rate it 7/10
The grass is placed erratically and very well :)
It's really confusing and mazy looking..."
I dun really know what's WRONG...xD
Well, the pallete is dodgy o.O
BUt...it's pretty good.


Now for MINE!
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4130/rroute1hc9.png
It'sa Route 1!

[Neti]

6.5/10
In one word squishy Also what is the point of the bridge it looks outta place and to be honest it make my eyes bleed lol i like the little flowers and the use of the little trees as a contrast though, the huge building idk seems kinda flat the way you set it up with the ridge Directly behind it make it seem unnatural you'd think a large building would appear over the ridge but altogether i quite like it.



9.95/10
Now this is a work of art you really have captured a desert feel with this map from small details of the terracotta roof for insulation, to the little red flowers which are actually seen in those regions.
The placement of the wildlife looks very natural and i would have the feel of actually walking through the desert with this one.
My only fault is that imo those little greenbushes look outta place they seem too idk vibrant maybe a more browny looking dead bush would be appropriate (that and i have never really liked them :P) Great work!

ah thx, nice idea

I just finally finished a map of a forest that I may put in my hack. I haven't made too many maps before.

Anyone care to rate it? :)

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-1.png
And credit to PHO for tiles. :p

And the reason the paths are so long is because part of them warp you out :s and I don't want the player to see the end of it which leads to the border block which is a tree, which would look weird...er. Its kinda awkward looking... idk how to fix it.

so you finally managed to insert everything? nice!
but im not gonna rate it, im kinda bored of rating maps xD

[t.A.T.u]

Map name: Mako Trail
Game: Fire Red

I changed the palettes a little. Few shades darker.

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/MAKATRAIL.png

[megiddo]

Map Name: A desert of Orre.
The left building goes to Pyrite Town.

http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=orre.jpg

[Shining Dragonite]

megiddo 3/10;

The rocks look too cluttered, the transition from grass to sand is too harsh, and the buildings look flat.

[M.I.A]

Megiddo

mmhm....4 out of 10 for u :( the grass looks bad and randomly placed amog the sand, the buildings ``outlining``dont match with the sand, bridge is verrry wierd looking,mountains stairs look horrid!! not to mention 2222222 many rocks......doesn`t seem like u spent much time on it,or that u have much experience in mapping,sorry...

EDIT: ive seen ur other work,and its amazing :O why does this one look so bad..?

[thethethethe]

I've got a couple.

Map Name: Umber Town
Comments: Ummm... I've shown this before, this is just a slight edit of it.
Map:http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z24/thethethethe_photo/StartTown.png

And another one.
Map Name: Route 72
Comments: I need to fix the headbutt tree tile.
Map: http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z24/thethethethe_photo/route1.png

[Thrace]

Map name: Mako Trail
Game: Fire Red

I changed the palettes a little. Few shades darker.

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/MAKATRAIL.png
Rating: 9/10
It is very nicely mapped. Excellent placement of paths. The grass placement looks really natural too. I recommend getting rid of the flower under the cuttable tree and adding a layer on the mountain to go over the entrance. Also use some variation in the ground tile. From what I can see you've only used one when you can use like 5.

Map Name: A desert of Orre.
The left building goes to Pyrite Town.

http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=orre.jpg

Rating: 2/10
No offense but that map is just bad. Tile errors everywhere. Stones as a boundary? A cave? Weird looking bridge, wrong use of paths and bad palletes. I would recommend getting a lot more practice.

I've got a couple.

Map Name: Umber Town
Comments: Ummm... I've shown this before, this is just a slight edit of it.
Map:http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z24/thethethethe_photo/StartTown.png
Rating: 7.5/10
Bit of an odd looking town. Everything looks a bit crowded. The house looks a little squashed. I recommend that you make that long column of trees next to the house 1 tree smaller, then you can make the lake a bit bigger. Not much more to say, its certainly not bad. Maybe you could make the map itself a bit bigger?


And another one.
Map Name: Route 72
Comments: I need to fix the headbutt tree tile.
Map: http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z24/thethethethe_photo/route1.png
Rating: 8/10
Good use of ledges, but the mountain bit makes them useless because theres less grass that way. The placement of the grass is good, it looks very natural. I don't like how you've used that tile for the mountain ground, personally I never use that tile if you are able to walk on it, Nintendo doesn't either. Also for the stairs I would use at least two of them because it looks a lot better.

[ShineGreymΘn]

I got two map.

Map name : ---(Still thinking)
Map : http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/FirstTown2.jpg

Map name : ---
Map : http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/Route2.jpg

Credit : CheesePeow for the rombase.

Pls rate and comment.

[megiddo]

Yeah I just made it quick. I can do much better.

[+Sneasel™]

ShineGreymOn -
1st map - This is a very well done map, I can see nothing wrong with it. I like the way the river flows in the middle.

2nd map - A basic route, but done very nicely. The only thing I don't like is that it looks just like Route 1 from Fire Red, but I don't know if you did that on purpose or not.

[chaotic_soma]

I got two map.

Map name : ---(Still thinking)
Map : http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/FirstTown2.jpg

Map name : ---
Map : http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj278/lanjiao123456789/Route2.jpg

Credit : CheesePeow for the rombase.

Pls rate and comment.

9/10
Okay in the maps not too many problems actually here's a few:
The grass sprites are all same.
With the trees the all look a little square boxed in you a little unnatural imo.
This goes espicially with the grass it's all so square i mean is someone tending the grass I don't think so, make it more erractic to give it more of a natural feel.
The little trees by the house in town look really out of place.
Remember 75% of nature is natural and wild not contained and neat.
Hope i helped :3

[Ninja Caterpie]

Uh..well, I got a map...for rating...
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4130/rroute1hc9.png
It's the first route!

[cε׀׀]

Uh..well, I got a map...for rating...
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4130/rroute1hc9.png
It's the first route!
Rating: 8.5/10
Reason: It's a very nice route map. Looks very elegant and simple, and it looks like a very good first route. The patches of grass are placed in a nice simple way. The only thing that bothers me is that you can go across the whole route without meeting a single pokemon. That's a negative thing for a route. Some places are empty. Else, the map looks really nice.
Suggestions: Just improve it as I've stated above.

[megiddo]

Map Name: Spectrum City

http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=s2.jpg

[.Pichu-kun]

I like the placement of everything, but it's too square...
6/10

[Quilava's Master]

Nothing reli just a starter town.

Map Name: Pilot Town
Map:
http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk241/VortexTeam/Pilot.jpg

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's a Random map.
Info: The house has a bike shop behind it because it those people own the bike shop.
http://i