Map Rating Thread

[Ninja Caterpie]

O.o...Spam much...? xD
Well, I'm going to...RATE YOUR MAP AMONITAS!
Hmmm...
Well, it's got good shape!
Grass and trees placed nicely.
No tile errors (except the one Neti pointed out)
Well, that's your first map?
Amazing... .(Yeah, great tut Neti!)
9/10
If the tile error can't be fixed (Or it's not a tile error at all O.o)
I can change it to 9.5

[Amonitas]

O.o...Spam much...? xD
Well, I'm going to...RATE YOUR MAP AMONITAS!
Hmmm...
Well, it's got good shape!
Grass and trees placed nicely.
No tile errors (except the one Neti pointed out)
Well, that's your first map?
Amazing... .(Yeah, great tut Neti!)
9/10
If the tile error can't be fixed (Or it's not a tile error at all O.o)
I can change it to 9.5
sry if this is a spam, but I dunno what tile error are you talking about, I don't know how to modify tiles.

[Ninja Caterpie]

No, I mean a problem with how you place the tiles.
The ledge is meant to have a curved end to it.

[.Exiled]

Well I did a simple map trying of the name: NELT TOWN.

(the green item is later for the Shaymin Sky Forme Statue).


please rate it, and give me some advice onto it./Improvements

http://img37.picoodle.com/img/img37/4/6/26/f_wootm_1a12daa.png

[Cartmic]

Well I did a simple map trying of the name: NELT TOWN.

(the green item is later for the Shaymin Sky Forme Statue).


please rate it, and give me some advice onto it./Improvements

http://img37.picoodle.com/img/img37/4/6/26/f_wootm_1a12daa.png

4/10

Remove the "snow" and move the lab and houses. Its clearly derrived from Pallet Town.

[.Exiled]

No it doesn't the houses are supposed to be there, I used a custom map button

Well the Lab may look like from pallet town but it's not. ^^


and the snow is my snow hack...

[Cartmic]

No it doesn't the houses are supposed to be there, I used a custom map button

Well the Lab may look like from pallet town but it's not. ^^


and the snow is my snow hack(I really dislike ellipsis there is no need for them)

I would modify the tree pallet a bit, also I would wash out the flower's colour a bit, as remember this is a colder climate and it would probably have frost on.

Finally try and add some snow to the roofs' and a little snow on the little green things next to the flower

[.Pichu-kun]

Better...errors with the paths...8.5/10

Here r my maps:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/dewf.jpg

http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/fall2.jpg

http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/little.jpg

http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/old.jpg

Could someone rate these, plz! ^^

[cε׀׀]

Well I did a simple map trying of the name: NELT TOWN.

(the green item is later for the Shaymin Sky Forme Statue).


please rate it, and give me some advice onto it./Improvements

http://img37.picoodle.com/img/img37/4/6/26/f_wootm_1a12daa.png

I like the map. It looks really nice with a cold touch to it. The map is fairly squarish though, and I don't like the little grass infront in the doorstep of that house. The houses are placed in a sort of congested way. The map looks fairly good though.
7.5/10

[.Exiled]

@Eeveon

2nd Map:
5/10 it looks like that one town cept minor edits

3rd map:
7.5/10
You need to make more building without the doors : )

[Ninja Caterpie]

I have...another map!!
Whadaya think, eh?
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/7894/town2py0.png

[FenderX]

Well, I finally finished inserting Don Patch's tiles (credits to him) after 3 hours(im kinda slow eh?), so here is a map i made using some of his tiles. I know the little pond looks empty, well its because i had no more room for Don's water plants.... And the second lab is supposed to be there, part of the story...heres the map!


http://i32.tinypic.com/282dzb5.jpg

[.Pichu-kun]

It's very good! ^^
Of course, there r a couple spots that feel empty to me...9/10

[.Exiled]

http://img26.picoodle.com/img/img26/4/6/28/f_terhm_061140f.png

I recreated the palletes for the snow to make it brighter, and I have recreated the ground road into a snowish, and I have added a snow bush, and a snowish long bush thing.

C&C, also rate ^^

[Neti]

Well, I finally finished inserting Don Patch's tiles (credits to him) after 3 hours(im kinda slow eh?), so here is a map i made using some of his tiles. I know the little pond looks empty, well its because i had no more room for Don's water plants.... And the second lab is supposed to be there, part of the story...heres the map!


http://i32.tinypic.com/282dzb5.jpg


a really nice map, ive seeen quite a couple of maps with don patchs tiles but you made good palettes i think which fit them
and dont consider yourself slow, i was inserting tiles a whole day long once^^ well i made 4 tilesets...
i got nothin to complain about except for the pond being squarish...
maybe you could have added a bit more stuff on such a big map, instead of placing so many trees
Rating: 7/10

[KakerZone Y]

@.Aaron:

Nice. 10/10
The pals are much better, and they really stand out.

[BlackRainbow*]

Here is a starting towns from my hack.
GreenBush Town
http://i25.tinypic.com/2wmmn2g.png

Hope You Like It

[Ninja Caterpie]

Aww...Won't anyone rate mine?

Well, .Aaron, your map is quite nicely shaped.
Just, edit the houses to have icy roofs.
8/10

[Tropical Sunlight]

Here is a starting towns from my hack.
GreenBush Town
http://i32.tinypic.com/214329e.jpg

Hope You Like It

The placement is very nice, though you have the same name as my hack (Greenbush)
Will you rename it or do I have to do it?
8/10

[.Exiled]

Unfortunately, I dont pal create.

:/ I can some people who have pals of snow hacks,

I wonder if I ask Neti, would he yell at me?


@Dark Lakitu:
Woah I didn't see, your map

It's quite empty, D:

7/10

[Ninja Caterpie]

No, Neti isn't mean. He would let you...-cough- I think.

Well, I sorta couldn't fix up the emptyness...:(

BlackRainbow, 8/10

It's pretty startertownish...and small...and quiet...so yeah.

[Neti]

i did not make those palettes i got them from dshayabusa
ask him if he gives them to you
anyway ill release my rombase soon with a full ice tileset

[JA_The_Dude]

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/YamiTownPartA.jpg
Yami Town Part A

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/YamiTownPartB-1.jpg
Yami Town Part B
The wild grass there is the entrance to a forest.

I'm not taking:
Its a little too square,
Its too small,
or
it should be together.

[Ninja Caterpie]

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/YamiTownPartA.jpg
Yami Town Part A

http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm181/JAing_AfterShock/YamiTownPartB-1.jpg
Yami Town Part B
The wild grass there is the entrance to a forest.

I'm not taking:
Its a little too square,
Its too small,
or
it should be together.

Why aren't you taking "It's too small" or "It's to square"??
Those are the NUMBER 1 BIGGEST PROBLEM with maps around.
Are the supposed to be joined together?
Why not have them together then?

Well, Map 1
It's... uh...too rectangular (I didn't say it!)
Other than that, it looks quite nice... :)
7/10 for rectangularness

Map 2
This one is much better.
I can't see any problems... (why is there a sign in a flower field?)
...Hmmm...
Why is there wild Pokemon grass in a town?
8/10

For both of them, the grass is too even. Use a different tile sometimes!

[JA_The_Dude]

Why aren't you taking "It's too small" or "It's to square"??
Those are the NUMBER 1 BIGGEST PROBLEM with maps around.
Are the supposed to be joined together?
Why not have them together then?

Well, Map 1
It's... uh...too rectangular (I didn't say it!)
Other than that, it looks quite nice... :)
7/10 for rectangularness

Map 2
This one is much better.
I can't see any problems... (why is there a sign in a flower field?)
...Hmmm...
Why is there wild Pokemon grass in a town?
8/10

For both of them, the grass is too even. Use a different tile sometimes!

I'm sorry for saying this but, you need to freakin' figure the god dang piece of crap out on your own...
Me and eeveon had this conversation via PM. I mide these maps on my own. If I can't be respected for what I make, then kiss my shiny metal ass good-bye...
I feel sorry for anyone who reads this and I'll take full respondibility for what I said... I am, from now on, always been ready to take all respondsibility...

[Disturbed]

Name: Maraudah's Icy Cave of Perpentual Doom
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/Icy.jpg

[Ninja Caterpie]

I'm sorry for saying this but, you need to freakin' figure the god dang piece of crap out on your own...
Me and eeveon had this conversation via PM. I mide these maps on my own. If I can't be respected for what I make, then kiss my shiny metal ass good-bye...
I feel sorry for anyone who reads this and I'll take full respondibility for what I said... I am, from now on, always been ready to take all respondsibility...

I did freaking respect you by rating those maps.
It was some CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM for those freaking maps. It's what you put them in this thread for!

An I don't get the part about "figure out the god dang piece of crap on your own..."

ANYWAYS
Maraudah.
I don't really...uh...get the cave and...uh...it's kinda weird.
Is it meant to be really deep with a funny border or something?

Anyway, it's well shaped and *seems* to be some puzzle.

8/10

[.Pichu-kun]

This is my first time mapping a cave.
Any comments r greatly appreciated.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/icy.jpg

[Ninja Caterpie]

It seems quite nice and small, Eeveon. It's a good map for a first try :)
I can perfectly understand the puzzle and the shapes of the cave are nice.
Great map, overall!

Just a SMALL question, what is the border?

EDIT:
Ack!
I forgot to give a rating!
8.5

[.Pichu-kun]

Thanx! ^^
The border is the white part on top of the mountains.

[Neti]

I'm sorry for saying this but, you need to freakin' figure the god dang piece of crap out on your own...
Me and eeveon had this conversation via PM. I mide these maps on my own. If I can't be respected for what I make, then kiss my shiny metal ass good-bye...
I feel sorry for anyone who reads this and I'll take full respondibility for what I said... I am, from now on, always been ready to take all respondsibility...

*lowers reputation points*

why do you post maps here if you offend ppl who critisze them? that is the purpouse of this thread!
you dont post your maps here to be told that they are good. if they are perfect, you dodnt need to post them here. if youre still learning and need to know whats not good about your maps, then post them here and let ppl tell you what they dont like.
and if you have another opinion about the things they say: fine. but dont be offensive

[Ninja Caterpie]

Eeveeon, if the border's going to be the white stuff, then you can run into the border at the place with the hole!!

Ah, and Neti, great job.
I could tell you were flared up because your grammar there is absolutely terrible.

[Neti]

did you mean my grammar? xD thats possible since im no native englsih speaker xD

[GiantGroudon]

Togepi Paradise - Pokemon Black Doom


http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll227/giantgroudon2/togepiParadisemapshot.png

Please rate. constructive critism is always welcome.

[Neti]

i like that big building and the small eggs^^ where did you get the tiles from? or did you make them on your own?
i dislike the gyms roof and that there is a lot of unused space
the shape is cool with me
rating? well caused by all this unused space and so much path on the map: 6/10

[Tropical Sunlight]

Map name: Eidolon Forest (not from FF9!)
Original map: Viridian Forest
Map:http://shrani.si/t/R/Tz/3uDCg0ve/eidolon-forest.jpg (http://shrani.si/?R/Tz/3uDCg0ve/eidolon-forest.png)
Connections: none
Credits: CheesePeow for rombase, me for some palette changing and most importantly, Grosser Block, it helped me to finish this map in 38 minutes 6 seconds

[FenderX]

Ok, i made two more maps. Lets go in order shall we?
Ever Green Town (Starting Town) - Here, the player will start out, and the purpose of the other lab at the lower side is that it is a Cloning Lab, where scientist do weird experiments with Pokemon, this area will be reachable after the 5th gym leader has been defeated.

http://i32.tinypic.com/344ftwl.jpg

Silver Waters (where you receive your Pokemon and catch the "Sacred Legend") - Here, you will receive you very first Pokemon, (the choices will be out of Trapinch, Dratini, and Bagon) in the upper right cave. The bigger cave on the left side will be the Legendary Pokemon's hideout, and after you exit the cave, there will be a secret place to the very left (thats why you see some stairs to the left end) where you catch the Sacred Legend (after seeing him in the cave, he runs away to the left end). Theres nothing special about the little island..and i guess thats it for this map.

http://i25.tinypic.com/2wn8yuc.jpg

Route 1 - Well, here you will battle against your rival for the first time, and the lake down on the lower left is just so you use surf across to the Cloning Lab.


http://i32.tinypic.com/14ng5t5.jpg

[Ninja Caterpie]

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/3263/town1cd7.png
Well, my ROM crashed so I restarted and here's my First Town Take II.

[score_under]

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/3263/town1cd7.png
Well, my ROM crashed so I restarted and here's my First Town Take II.
It's sorta squarish, and looks like you just got the original Pallet Town (which was horribly square :D ) and rearranged it and added a few trees. Also, on the trees in the top-left and top-right there is a tiling error (shadow).
Also, there's a distinct lack of any "activity" in the map - more flowers, small blocks in the route, ledges, some interesting filler for the top-right corner would all be welcome!
5/10

[.:God:.]

[img=http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/4709/littleroottownliterallyey8.th.png] (http://img360.imageshack.us/my.php?image=littleroottownliterallyey8.png)
Ok, here's my map. It is littleroot town. Over they years, it has split off and shifted across to the region of Deserto (sorta like africa) where it is really hot. Notes:
1= This is where you catch Salamence after the 5th Gym and where you catch Scrought (new desert legendary) after E4.
2= This is Professor Birch 5th lab. The "5th" is because it has been so long since the split off so Birch has died. There were more Birches too.
3= Hero and May 4th's houses. Same drill with May, except May and Brendan had babies.
4= Path to where you catch Ho-Oh. There is a cut tree, a rock and a surf zone so you have to have all 8 badges.

[f0r3v3r-70x1c]

two maps from my upcoming hack white light
the first is the route leading up to the final city

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m225/bitrzo/6copy.gif

and here is the final city

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m225/bitrzo/4.jpg

[megiddo]

http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/?action=view&current=cm.jpg
The empty island at the bottom is where you arrive by a flying vehicle.

[.Pichu-kun]

The map is good, but there r some tile errors...7/10

[.:God:.]

[img=http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/4709/littleroottownliterallyey8.th.png] (http://img360.imageshack.us/my.php?image=littleroottownliterallyey8.png)
Ok, here's my map. It is littleroot town. Over they years, it has split off and shifted across to the region of Deserto (sorta like africa) where it is really hot. Notes:
1= This is where you catch Salamence after the 5th Gym and where you catch Scrought (new desert legendary) after E4.
2= This is Professor Birch 5th lab. The "5th" is because it has been so long since the split off so Birch has died. There were more Birches too.
3= Hero and May 4th's houses. Same drill with May, except May and Brendan had babies.
4= Path to where you catch Ho-Oh. There is a cut tree, a rock and a surf zone so you have to have all 8 badges.

Why doesn't anyone ever rate my maps?

[Cammy25]

My littleroot town:

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj7/Cammy-2k8/mapformew_rynandmyhack.jpg

[.Pichu-kun]

The map looks the same, just a bigger place with a few added thing. :\

[t.A.T.u]

Why doesn't anyone ever rate my maps?

Ugh -.-

Your map doesn't look very natural. Too many cacti. Those trees shouldn't be there. Trees like that die in deserts. And there are no ledges like that in real deserts. There are only cliffs and sand duns. Ledges like that are weathered away extremely quickly if they do appear. Which the usually don't.

Edit: Now I realize that it is just like the normal LittleRoot Town. Just a new connections and tiles.

0.1 for the tiles. And even those aren't really "wow". Sorry.

[Ninja Caterpie]

My littleroot town:

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj7/Cammy-2k8/mapformew_rynandmyhack.jpg

Three small things.
1. Don't save it in grid mode, hard to look at.
2. It's the exact same as Littleroot but bigger and with grass, a Mart and a rock.
3. You don't REALLY need all those trees at the bottom.

If I gave you a rating, I would cringe...
0.5 for trying...

[Alizée Jacotey]

Map Name: Sonara Desert
Map of: Pokémon Zephyr
Map:
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/9186/desertbm7.png

Rate please and also positive and constructive comments :D

[t.A.T.u]

Map Name: Sonara Desert
Map of: Pokémon Zephyr
Map:
http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/9186/desertbm7.png

Rate please and also positive and constructive comments :D

I give it a 8 out of 10. It looks very natural. The cliffs look weird to me though. :3

Here is the starting town Navzi Town for my Fire Red hack called Naturo Verde.

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/map.png

[Tropical Sunlight]

Map name: Updated Eidolon Forest
Original map: Viridial Forest
Map (Warning! Big map!):http://shrani.si/f/1H/d7/42i0XmKN/eidolon-forest.png
Connections: none
Credits: CheesePeow for rombase

[Ninja Caterpie]

I gotta say, IC, I love the shape, even if is gets square sometimes...
Hang on...why is there moving water in a forest?
Oh well...
Grass and trees are pretty well placed...but don't you think a forest would be teeming with wild Pokemon? *cough* Ilex Forest *cough*

8.5/10

[Dark Ryuzaki]

Map Name: Torment Village
Map Game: Ruby
Comments: This is the main area for my hacks Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Temporal exploration and Spacial exploration.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=995&pictureid=5700

[Ninja Caterpie]

Map Name: Torment Village
Map Game: Ruby
Comments: This is the main area for my hacks Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Temporal exploration and Spacial exploration.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=995&pictureid=5700

Wow.
Er...sorry if this sounds like flaming, but...
Tile error here, tile errors there, tile errors everywhere! And lots of unused land.
I suggest you try to put some more things in and stuff...
And try to get the tiles right. >.>
It's also extremely bland and way too empty to be a major place...
Read some mapping tutorials around and...yeah.
2.5/10 just for trying...and originality O.o...

[Tropical Sunlight]

I gotta say, IC, I love the shape, even if is gets square sometimes...
Hang on...why is there moving water in a forest?
Oh well...
Grass and trees are pretty well placed...but don't you think a forest would be teeming with wild Pokemon? *cough* Ilex Forest *cough*

8.5/10

1 noobish question.
What's teeming?

[Ninja Caterpie]

It means full of...or something like it...xD
We're going offtopic aren't we?

I give it a 8 out of 10. It looks very natural. The cliffs look weird to me though. :3

Here is the starting town Navzi Town for my Fire Red hack called Naturo Verde.

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/map.png

Wow...nice map and tree placement! The path is strange...but I'm not here to comment on tiles..so yah...
Well, 8/10...xD

[M.I.A]

Erm...been a while since i last posted. Since i figured i like Fire Red tiles better than custom ones, I thought I'd make a map...

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/223/mybigmapea2.png (http://imageshack.us)




It's not completely finished, but i basically finished it. I just got bored of 90 minutes of straight mapping. Comments,crit, and also what more should i add/fix?

[Alizée Jacotey]

Map Name: Torment Village
Map Game: Ruby
Comments: This is the main area for my hacks Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Temporal exploration and Spacial exploration.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=995&pictureid=5700

I don't want to be rude or be like rude but honestly it is bad, very bad.
Sorry, no imagination, lot of tile errors, and... a lot of empty space. Sorry :/

1/10, like dark lakitu said, just for trying...
Read some mapping tutorials...

Erm...been a while since i last posted. Since i figured i like Fire Red tiles better than custom ones, I thought I'd make a map...

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/223/mybigmapea2.png (http://imageshack.us)


It's not completely finished, but i basically finished it. I just got bored of 90 minutes of straight mapping. Comments,crit, and also what more should i add/fix?

It looks good! Though it has some tile errors and some empty space but it good.
Also the waterfall doesn't looks good it should have like a little mountain for make the water fall from there.

7.5/10


Map name: Updated Eidolon Forest
Original map: Viridial Forest
Map (Warning! Big map!):http://shrani.si/f/1H/d7/42i0XmKN/eidolon-forest.png
Connections: none
Credits: CheesePeow for rombase

Ok, it looks good too! But it is kinda squarish and t has some empty space.

For a forest it is recomendable to make like a maze to make it more difficult to pass.
I like the cave and also the bridge. Cool!

8/10

[t.A.T.u]

Map Name: Torment Village
Map Game: Ruby
Comments: This is the main area for my hacks Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Temporal exploration and Spacial exploration.

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=995&pictureid=5700

Oh wow. No offense meant but that is one of the worst maps I have seen. I mean, it is actually so obvious that it is bad EVEN TO THE MAKER that it's almost like you intentianally put it up just to see the reviews. -_-

0.5 for trying.

It means full of...or something like it...xD
We're going offtopic aren't we?



Wow...nice map and tree placement! The path is strange...but I'm not here to comment on tiles..so yah...
Well, 8/10...xD

Well thank you. :3 The path is my favorite part! XD

[0m3GA AR$3NAL]

Sorry about the quality... I had to reduce it a lot for it to fit here... (I have no other place to put it, computer is retarded...)

This is Vellos town, a spacious town in the heart of a large valley, the waters unusual currents caused the natural bridges to form above its crystal clear waters! ^_^ This is the first map I ever took seriously, please rate it, and I would like feedback, on how I could improve! (BTW, I made a few of the tiles there, but I suck at tile making, so I only made a few easy ones... If only I knew a good tileset maker...)

[Ninja Caterpie]

Sorry, but it's too patchy.
Just upload it onto ImageShack and post a link or insert an image (with the button thingo next to hyperlink).

Well, I can see a bit...so...I'll rate what I can understand.

You say there are "currents" but...the water has NO currents. Eh?
Also, if that's a bridge, then it shouldn't be the same level above the water as the ground around...
Well, I'll rate it properly once I can see it...
But, just a thing.
I don't think anyone, be it in the game or real life, would want to have a town with gaps that big between the houses.
Sure, it can be spacious, but think literally!

PS. About the tiles, from what I can see, they look fine! :)

[0m3GA AR$3NAL]

Sorry, but it's too patchy.
Just upload it onto ImageShack and post a link or insert an image (with the button thingo next to hyperlink).

Well, I can see a bit...so...I'll rate what I can understand.

You say there are "currents" but...the water has NO currents. Eh?
Also, if that's a bridge, then it shouldn't be the same level above the water as the ground around...
Well, I'll rate it properly once I can see it...
But, just a thing.
I don't think anyone, be it in the game or real life, would want to have a town with gaps that big between the houses.
Sure, it can be spacious, but think literally!

PS. About the tiles, from what I can see, they look fine! :)


Ahh, I see, I was planning on adding more houses, but I wanted to see what others thought... about the current... it is more under water currents, that wore away all but what is showing above ground... (It ties into a major event in the storyline of the hack I plan to make!) This should work better... hehe it is BIG btw... 1200 X 1200 pixels

http://www.0m3ga-ars3nal.webs.com/Vellos Town.png

I give it a 8 out of 10. It looks very natural. The cliffs look weird to me though. :3

Here is the starting town Navzi Town for my Fire Red hack called Naturo Verde.

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/map.png

Hmm... I think it looks like Petalburg City, with some buildings replaced and a few things thrown in... Also... that path, it is a bit squiggly. Try straightening it out and lining it up with the buildings if you can do that.

I give it a 5/10 for squigly path and close similarity to petalburg o.o

[Ninja Caterpie]

Holy shitaki mushrooms!!!!
That's one HUGE map!
It's nice...but I don't like what you did to the edges...

It's...scarily big...REALLY scarily big.
Well, I love the shape of the rocks, musta taken you a little bit of time, eh?
There are tile errors in the mountains (sand, see?)
Well, the bland empty areas have a lot of stuff that's in them so...yeah...

It's so empty near the Mart....
Big maps aren't an awesome idea...they get hard to put things into....so...yah...

6.5/10

[0m3GA AR$3NAL]

Holy shitaki mushrooms!!!!
That's one HUGE map!
It's nice...but I don't like what you did to the edges...

It's...scarily big...REALLY scarily big.
Well, I love the shape of the rocks, musta taken you a little bit of time, eh?
There are tile errors in the mountains (sand, see?)
Well, the bland empty areas have a lot of stuff that's in them so...yeah...

It's so empty near the Mart....
Big maps aren't an awesome idea...they get hard to put things into....so...yah...

6.5/10


Shitaki Mushrooms... hehehe

I updated the map, I still havent fixed the sand in the mountains (It is part of the tile, i have to go into tile editor and fix....)
EDIT: I fixed the sand in the mountains, and some other small tile problems... I think I made it better... rating?

http://www.0m3ga-ars3nal.webs.com/Vellos Town3.png

[t.A.T.u]

Ahh, I see, I was planning on adding more houses, but I wanted to see what others thought... about the current... it is more under water currents, that wore away all but what is showing above ground... (It ties into a major event in the storyline of the hack I plan to make!) This should work better... hehe it is BIG btw... 1200 X 1200 pixels

http://www.0m3ga-ars3nal.webs.com/Vellos Town.png



Hmm... I think it looks like Petalburg City, with some buildings replaced and a few things thrown in... Also... that path, it is a bit squiggly. Try straightening it out and lining it up with the buildings if you can do that.

I give it a 5/10 for squigly path and close similarity to petalburg o.o

How does it look like petalburg city?

The path is supposed to be squiggly because it is slowly decaying away due to the over growth of plant life. You seriously need to look at my thread. So basically the only reason you gave me a bad rating actually should be reasons why it is good. Maps for games do need to follow the story line you know. -_-

Compare for yourself everyone!

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png

sPrough93 (8: 20:42 PM): http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png
sPrough93 (8: 20:47 PM): Do they look alike at all?
atomicreactor334 (8:21:20 PM): not in anyway... what so ever
sPrough93 (8: 21:27 PM): Thank you
sPrough93 (8: 21:34 PM): someone said they looked alike
sPrough93 (8: 21:35 PM): -_-
atomicreactor334 (8: 21:39 PM): wtf

And for your map, I give it a 1.3/10. So SO many map errors. The blue house at the top left has NO windows and it is giant. o.o The map is so empty. Just because it has a lot of stuff that doesn't make it good. You need to make the map smaller. -_-

To make this post from being complete spam...here is a new map. :D

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/Wow.jpg

Oh, I am sorry. Is it too much like Route 1?!

And no, the doduo is NOT on top of the house. -_-

[.Pichu-kun]

The map is just simply wonderful, no doubt about it! ^^
Hmm...9/10! ^^

[Ninja Caterpie]

How does it look like petalburg city?

The path is supposed to be squiggly because it is slowly decaying away due to the over growth of plant life. You seriously need to look at my thread. So basically the only reason you gave me a bad rating actually should be reasons why it is good. Maps for games do need to follow the story line you know. -_-

Compare for yourself everyone!

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png

sPrough93 (8: 20:42 PM): http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png
sPrough93 (8: 20:47 PM): Do they look alike at all?
atomicreactor334 (8:21:20 PM): not in anyway... what so ever
sPrough93 (8: 21:27 PM): Thank you
sPrough93 (8: 21:34 PM): someone said they looked alike
sPrough93 (8: 21:35 PM): -_-
atomicreactor334 (8: 21:39 PM): wtf

And for your map, I give it a 1.3/10. So SO many map errors. The blue house at the top left has NO windows and it is giant. o.o The map is so empty. Just because it has a lot of stuff that doesn't make it good. You need to make the map smaller. -_-

To make this post from being complete spam...here is a new map. :D

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/Wow.jpg

Oh, I am sorry. Is it too much like Route 1?!

And no, the doduo is NOT on top of the house. -_-

What kind of idiot would think it looks like Route 1? I mean, it OBVIOUSLY looks like Saffron City. xD

Just...Why is there a RS-able rock behind a TREE?
Can you REALLY go behind it? O.o

I see.
The Doduo is behind the house. People events act on tiles like you do...So yah...

Well, I'll give it a 7/10

[t.A.T.u]

What kind of idiot would think it looks like Route 1? I mean, it OBVIOUSLY looks like Saffron City. xD

Just...Why is there a RS-able rock behind a TREE?
Can you REALLY go behind it? O.o

I see.
The Doduo is behind the house. People events act on tiles like you do...So yah...

Well, I'll give it a 7/10

1. XD
2. What to you mean RS-able rock? o.O
3. Obviously XD
4. Ok XD

Thank you

[0m3GA AR$3NAL]

How does it look like petalburg city?

The path is supposed to be squiggly because it is slowly decaying away due to the over growth of plant life. You seriously need to look at my thread. So basically the only reason you gave me a bad rating actually should be reasons why it is good. Maps for games do need to follow the story line you know. -_-

Compare for yourself everyone!

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png

sPrough93 (8: 20:42 PM): http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png
sPrough93 (8: 20:47 PM): Do they look alike at all?
atomicreactor334 (8:21:20 PM): not in anyway... what so ever
sPrough93 (8: 21:27 PM): Thank you
sPrough93 (8: 21:34 PM): someone said they looked alike
sPrough93 (8: 21:35 PM): -_-
atomicreactor334 (8: 21:39 PM): wtf

And for your map, I give it a 1.3/10. So SO many map errors. The blue house at the top left has NO windows and it is giant. o.o The map is so empty. Just because it has a lot of stuff that doesn't make it good. You need to make the map smaller. -_-

To make this post from being complete spam...here is a new map. :D

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/Wow.jpg

Oh, I am sorry. Is it too much like Route 1?!

And no, the doduo is NOT on top of the house. -_-

Damn dude, you diddnt have to go batshit insane over it, I just thought it looked like peatlburg, Chill man, were all cool here, this really isnt the place to flip out over a review. XD



Anywho... here is a better map than my last one...
It is also pretty big, but not as big...
http://www.0m3ga-ars3nal.webs.com/Faunal Forest.pngThe small gaps (Like near the entrance) Are where cut trees are btw

[Eeveon II]

Hey Everyone Can Soemone Rate This Pic. Becareful Its Big

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn179/Kevin33193/Bababababa.jpg

[0m3GA AR$3NAL]

Hey Everyone Can Soemone Rate This Pic. Becareful Its Big

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn179/Kevin33193/Bababababa.jpg

Ok, I am going to list the bad, then the good, ok...

Bad
1:There is a blue ground beneath those trees, is it a tile error, or are you trying to do that?
EDIT: Ok, there are a few more tile error than I expected, there is a missing block in the tree along the right edge of the map, as well as that along that same edge, the large, bright green trees have no ending tiles, eg. follow from the top of the screen down along right edge of bright green large trees, and there is no ending tiles...
2:The borders may end up a little funky, try using one type of tree for your level edges, that way, the borders blend in with them.


Good

1: I personally like the maze quality, I don't see to many maze like maps in pokemon games... other than berry forest in FR, but that was an easy maze...
2: I like the placement of the hop-able cliffs, but try to tone them down a bit, there are a lot of them, hehe!
3: Caves are good, and bad... there is something about the cave at the top that bothers me... like, the mountain like thing it is on is too square....

I give it a professional score of 5/10

I give it a personal score of 7.5/10! (after tile edits of course)

Keep it up!

[.Pichu-kun]

Haven't made a map in a while! :P:P:P:P:P:P:P
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/ov.jpg

[EarthsVisitor]

How does it look like petalburg city?

The path is supposed to be squiggly because it is slowly decaying away due to the over growth of plant life. You seriously need to look at my thread. So basically the only reason you gave me a bad rating actually should be reasons why it is good. Maps for games do need to follow the story line you know. -_-

Compare for yourself everyone!

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png

sPrough93 (8: 20:42 PM): http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/3441161754a5419081841m-1.png
sPrough93 (8: 20:47 PM): Do they look alike at all?
atomicreactor334 (8:21:20 PM): not in anyway... what so ever
sPrough93 (8: 21:27 PM): Thank you
sPrough93 (8: 21:34 PM): someone said they looked alike
sPrough93 (8: 21:35 PM): -_-
atomicreactor334 (8: 21:39 PM): wtf

And for your map, I give it a 1.3/10. So SO many map errors. The blue house at the top left has NO windows and it is giant. o.o The map is so empty. Just because it has a lot of stuff that doesn't make it good. You need to make the map smaller. -_-

To make this post from being complete spam...here is a new map. :D

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk112/sprough93/Wow.jpg

Oh, I am sorry. Is it too much like Route 1?!

And no, the doduo is NOT on top of the house. -_-

Oh come on, be a little more mature dude. He was just giving an opinion. Take it.
No need to be sarcastic and personally attack him. This isn't a place to defend yourself, you post maps to have them criticised. If you can't take it, then don't post them. :]

And we both know, that map doesn't deserve a 1.3.

The map isn't the best, it has many flaws and the layout strange, but not 1.3.
I'd give it a 4/10.

Now, I'm not attacking him right now. He was just the last person to do it.
This is for everyone. If you post a map here, expect to be criticized. Do not take it personally and attack the other person or make it seem like you are. You don't need to defend yourself. Let people have their opinions.

<3 αωαταρ αανγ (sorry. I'm just using you. <3)

EDIT: Haha, and. No. I don't think it looks like Petalburg City, if anything, the other one looks more like Petalburg City, but neither do.
As for a rating, i'd give "Petalburg City" a 7/10. It's nice. I just hate the placement and shape of the lake. Also, lacks alot of creativity. Looks like an average town. Which can be good. In fact, almost necessary in a pokemon game. But I still wish it had a few "WOAH! Cool!" surprises in there

[Lucario 9]

my first ever map put on to this thread well hope you like it

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1.jpg?t=1215955244

[.Pichu-kun]

@riolu 9: The map is great. It's not too square, enough space, good vegetation, and a cave! ^^
Of course the cave could be a little more realistic...9/10

This map is actually by my friend.
I made one for him because he's new to hacking.
I'm posting it because he 4got his password.
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m392/nickimon5000_PC/nick.jpg
Plz rate and comment.

[Eeveon II]

@riolu 9: The map is great. It's not too square, enough space, good vegetation, and a cave! ^^
Of course the cave could be a little more realistic...9/10

This map is actually by my friend.
I made one for him because he's new to hacking.
I'm posting it because he 4got his password.
http://i333.photobucket.com/albums/m392/nickimon5000_PC/nick.jpg
Plz rate and comment.


Well I Got To Say Its Cool All Sides Are being Used Lol Not Really That Square Sort Of And Cool. Lol

I Will Give It A 8.5 Out Of 10 Sort Of Lol.

[megiddo]

Map Name: Irobrum Town
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/possibleirobrumtown.jpg?t=1216012197
I have a reason for using that door on the gym. Theme of the town is mind and body both strong. Instead of the door opening for you, you must open it. (I know it still opens automatically XD)

[.Exiled]

http://i33.tinypic.com/5l6qvd.jpg
Yup it's a route give c&c, I take wide criticism.

http://i34.tinypic.com/zt7sdk.jpg

I tried making a small village cause I'm lazy xD.

Map Name: Irobrum Town
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/possibleirobrumtown.jpg?t=1216012197
I have a reason for using that door on the gym. Theme of the town is mind and body both strong. Instead of the door opening for you, you must open it. (I know it still opens automatically XD)
Lot's of tile errors
the maps are wide, alot of unspaced used
the long bush is square.
the road is connected.
6/10

[.Pichu-kun]

@Ryousha:
Map 1: Looks good, but, the bottom seems too empty and the ledge at the far left has no use...9/10
Map 2: It's good, but u don't really need that ledge...9.5/10

[Ninja Caterpie]

http://i33.tinypic.com/5l6qvd.jpg
Yup it's a route give c&c, I take wide criticism.

http://i34.tinypic.com/zt7sdk.jpg

I tried making a small village cause I'm lazy xD.

Ok...let's see now...
Hmmm...
The caves on the Route basically have no roof. I'm serious, look at them. It basically counts as a tile error.
It's a bit empty at the bottom...
7.5/10

The town...OMG!! It's the haunted NET Center!!!!
xD
Some places you have too many headbutt trees (how do you script them?!)
I don't see why there's that funny yellow thing...
But..meh...
8/10

Now for my own.
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5739/forestrouteeg0.png
If it's too small, go to http://img294.imageshack.us/my.php?image=forestrouteeg0.png
Still, it's very long and will probably be shrunk...x.x

[.Exiled]

Ok...let's see now...
Hmmm...
The caves on the Route basically have no roof. I'm serious, look at them. It basically counts as a tile error.
It's a bit empty at the bottom...
7.5/10

The town...OMG!! It's the haunted NET Center!!!!
xD
Some places you have too many headbutt trees (how do you script them?!)
I don't see why there's that funny yellow thing...
But..meh...
8/10

Now for my own.
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5739/forestrouteeg0.png
If it's too small, go to http://img294.imageshack.us/my.php?image=forestrouteeg0.png
Still, it's very long and will probably be shrunk...x.x

my route doesnt have any tile error.. >_>(the cave doesnt.)

your map scares me, xD.
8/10

Yes I scripted it..

[Krissel095]

I'll give it 8/10 too^^
I like it...

[.Pichu-kun]

@riolu 9: The top of the map is a tiny bit empty.
The top of the cave is empty, and looks too Nintendo-ish.
Um...The water is empty, and the big green hedge, doesn't look good there. :\
Other than that, it's great...6.5/10

[Eeveon II]

@ Riolu 9 Yea Not Really That bad. Just Have To Work On The Top Part And The Water..
I Give It A 7.5/10
l

[Lucario 9]

@riolu 9: The top of the map is a tiny bit empty.
The top of the cave is empty, and looks too Nintendo-ish.
Um...The water is empty, and the big green hedge, doesn't look good there. :\
Other than that, it's great...6.5/10 thank's i will do what you said and i will improve it anyway thank's im going to put a town in there next so look forward to that

[.:God:.]

Here are my 2 maps for my 2 games
Pokemon Jungle Version- Pallet Town (Credits to Armando)
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/rtw2.jpg
And Pokemon Fossil Version- New Bark Town (credits to Blasting_Falkner)
*****uploading in IMAGESHACK*****
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1893/newbarktownvp4.th.png (http://img377.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newbarktownvp4.png)
or
[img=http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1893/newbarktownvp4.th.png] (http://img377.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newbarktownvp4.png)

[.Pichu-kun]

@RTW: New Bark looks good, but, u really shouldn't use a path like that.
That's something Nintendo and Gamefreak would do.
Fix that and the fact that it will be partly empty...7/10

[.Exiled]

this is my second map on the thread please rate well here it is

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route2.jpg?t=1216043357


this took me 20 minutes impressive isnt it
[B] No it isn't. all the right side is square, the water is useless it's square.

lessen the grass, add some shrubs,ledges,flowers.

[Lucario 9]

[b] No it isn't. all the right side is square, the water is useless it's square.

lessen the grass, add some shrubs,ledges,flowers. no i didnt mean the map i ment it was impressive that i done it in 20 minutes duh

and yeah your a real expert at mapping arnt you not

[.Exiled]

I've reached that goal, by taking my time, and listen to other people comment who don't know what they're saying

a map is what values from custom to awesome.

You need to check if it's square, add some roads, and mostly add the misc. stuff. that map if I did what I said would take 1 hour with using ctrl and right click on the grosser, since I never do that.

[Lucario 9]

I've reached that goal, by taking my time, and listen to other people comment who don't know what they're saying

a map is what values from custom to awesome.

You need to check if it's square, add some roads, and mostly add the misc. stuff. that map if I did what I said would take 1 hour with using ctrl and right click on the grosser, since I never do that.ok then i will do that thank's im going to listen im going to do a town now so look out for it and iv deleated the other one cause it wasnt good anyway i was racing my friend see who could do the longest map but anyay thanks im nearly done with the town i started it yesterday so its nearly done

[.Exiled]

I've reached that goal, by taking my time, and listen to other people comment who don't know what they're saying

a map is what values from custom to awesome.

You need to check if it's square, add some roads, and mostly add the misc. stuff. that map if I did what I said would take 1 hour with using ctrl and right click on the grosser, since I never do that.

[Lucario 9]

iv just made a town so here it is it look's much better

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/endoncity.jpg?t=1216063791

please rate

[M.I.A]

@Riolu 9 even though the path covers pretty much the whole town, It's too wide IMO and distratcs me from other stuff O_O,not to mention the tile errors...and how I like it except for the path and the small Pond that looks rather boring*square* 7.5/10

[Lucario 9]

@Riolu 9 even though the path covers pretty much the whole town, It's too wide IMO and distratcs me from other stuff O_O,not to mention the tile errors...and how I like it except for the path and the small Pond that looks rather boring*square* 7.5/10the path doesnt take up the whole path and where are the tile error's

[.Pichu-kun]

iv just made a town so here it is it look's much better

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/endoncity.jpg?t=1216063791

please rate

Add like too flowers above the lake and ur good! ;)...9.5/10

[Eeveon II]

Heres Another Pic From Me Enjoy.Oh And Forget The Tree I Fixed That Already
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn179/Kevin33193/dsdsdsdsds.jpg

[M.I.A]

Sorry, Kevin33193, But I'm not going to rate that one :P it's much too...large and confusing..I'll leave that to someone else. anyhow, I am posting one of my own.
I don't know why,but I hate this so much...O_O
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4922/myuglyroute64zu1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Eeveon II]

@ Momoko Its Ok. I Know Lol
Well I Got To Admit I Like Your Mapping Its Really Good I Can See Why you Hate It Lol

Id Give It A 9/10

[.Pichu-kun]

Heres Another Pic From Me Enjoy.Oh And Forget The Tree I Fixed That Already
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn179/Kevin33193/dsdsdsdsds.jpg
I see a couple tile errors.
Too much unused space and hedges shouldn't really look like that! :P
...8.5/10

Sorry, Kevin33193, But I'm not going to rate that one :P it's much too...large and confusing..I'll leave that to someone else. anyhow, I am posting one of my own.
I don't know why,but I hate this so much...O_O
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4922/myuglyroute64zu1.png (http://imageshack.us)
I see a few tile errors and some unused space...8.5/10

Here's a map by me! ^^
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/fm.jpg
Hope u like!

[Eeveon II]

@ eeveon Well Lets See I Really Dont Understand Whats With The Mart Lol. And The Cutting Tree Is On Top Of The Bigger Tree. Lol I Know It Goes Below I See No Errors For Now

9.5/10

[Lucario 9]

I see a couple tile errors.
Too much unused space and hedges shouldn't really look like that! :P
...8.5/10


I see a few tile errors and some unused space...8.5/10

Here's a map by me! ^^
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/fm.jpg
Hope u like! good mapping Eeveon whats with the poke mart i love the tile's aswell i give this 8.5 out of 10

[.Pichu-kun]

I deleted my post to post a map I re-edited for riolu 9's hack, Pokemon Mystic Moon.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/fixedit.jpg

[Darthatron]

I deleted my post to post a map I re-edited for riolu 9's hack, Pokemon Mystic Moon.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/fixedit.jpg
It's pretty good, however I don't like the Palette that much. I also see some tile errors, the paths for example, they are the wrong colors. :P Also, in the water, the corners seem to be non existent. :S Everything else is pretty good, though.

7/10

------------------

Now, can somebody please rate my map? :D

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn295/darthatron/hack/RuinMaze.jpg

In case you can't tell, it's a maze. >_>

[.Pichu-kun]

The maze is nicely made! :)
I like the way u put obstacles in front of some items.
Very good...10/10

[~Fire]

Whoa!
its a nice map darthatron, but just because its a maze, it doesn't mean it has to be bushes.
you should've added some trees and more ledges to make it seem more natural.
7.5/10 for having nice mountains and a confusing maze.

[Ninja Caterpie]

Now, can somebody please rate my map? :D

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn295/darthatron/hack/RuinMaze.jpg

In case you can't tell, it's a maze. >_>


I'd be honoured to. :D
Obviously, those guys are all lost...
I don't see anything wrong, I love the mountains...
But...why are they hedges?

Meh, 9/10

[Darthatron]

The maze is nicely made! :)
I like the way u put obstacles in front of some items.
Very good...10/10
Thankyou, very much. :)
Whoa!
its a nice map darthatron, but just because its a maze, it doesn't mean it has to be bushes.
you should've added some trees and more ledges to make it seem more natural.
7.5/10 for having nice mountains and a confusing maze.
Thanks for the high rating. :)

I was going to make some custom tiles, like stone hedges, but then I got lazy. xD
I'd be honoured to. :D
Obviously, those guys are all lost...
I don't see anything wrong, I love the mountains...
But...why are they hedges?

Meh, 9/10
Honored, huh? :D

As I said above, I was planning on making custom tiles, but due to laziness, I didn't. :P

--------------------

Thanks everyone, for the kind words.

[EarthsVisitor]

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn295/darthatron/hack/RuinMaze.jpg

Meh. This map does not have much going for it.
For one, you obviously have not played it. No one is going to go into the paths the lead into the trainer if they can obviously see it leads to the trainers, which your map allows them to do. Also, it feels weird with only bushes. Add trees and other things as boundaries.
Feels random and unplanned.
The shape of the overall map is nice I think.

4/10

[.Exiled]

http://i38.tinypic.com/24yvlg2.jpg

Made in 30 minutes to challenge Trace, and another guy,

I got second place for such a forest route.


route 2 of Dark Era B)

[t.A.T.u]

http://i38.tinypic.com/24yvlg2.jpg

Made in 30 minutes to challenge Trace, and another guy,

I got second place for such a forest route.


route 2 of Dark Era B)

Tree placement is decent. Grass placement is EXTREMELY poor. While the map is empy. However, I really like the palettes.

4/10

[.Exiled]

:\, the grass are there cause that hosue over there is the lumberjack and cuts grasses and such :/

[M.I.A]

http://i38.tinypic.com/24yvlg2.jpg

Made in 30 minutes to challenge Trace, and another guy,

I got second place for such a forest route.


route 2 of Dark Era B)


Waa??Tree placement and erm..other stuff is okay. Definately not enough grass!! I could go through the whole "forest route" which doesnt really count as a route to me (kuz on no grass!) with only encountering none or one pokemon...:/ Oh and the water...why is it ocean water?isnt it a pond...so it should be normal. anyhow, i like it overall. 6.5/10

EDIT: L-lu-lumberjacks don't cut grass do they??

[.Exiled]

Waa??Tree placement and erm..other stuff is okay. Definately not enough grass!! I could go through the whole "forest route" which doesnt really count as a route to me (kuz on no grass!) with only encountering none or one pokemon...:/ Oh and the water...why is it ocean water?isnt it a pond...so it should be normal. anyhow, i like it overall. 6.5/10

EDIT: L-lu-lumberjacks don't cut grass do they??
they do, and thats where a guy lives, and thats why he does that, and the pond is sort of like you can go underwater, I'm just figuring out how to do so.

[Darthatron]

Meh. This map does not have much going for it.
For one, you obviously have not played it. No one is going to go into the paths the lead into the trainer if they can obviously see it leads to the trainers, which your map allows them to do. Also, it feels weird with only bushes. Add trees and other things as boundaries.
Feels random and unplanned.
The shape of the overall map is nice I think.

4/10

1st: They're not trainers. They are people lost in the maze. >_>

2nd: Are you trying to tell me that the maxes that GmaeFreak made a better? Made with single rocks?

3rd: I can tell you, it's not random. You're only suppose to make it to certain parts of the maze, based on where you are in game.

4th: Thanks for the comment of the shape. :)

(Quiet frankly, I'm shocked I didn't get a 4 or below earlier. :P)

[Ninja Caterpie]

Darth?
- Only Maps and ratings.
You are only allowed to post Maps you want to have rated or ratings for Maps that have been posted. Do not ask questions about Maps, instead, send a PM to the Map-Maker or a Moderator.
I dunno if it means you can't reply to ratings but...it seems that way. :\

EDIT: Ryousha, lumberjack's don't cut grass.
A lumberjack or logger is a man who harvests lumber.
They cut trees.
Lumberjack's are also a type of alcohol but that's not relevant

[.Exiled]

Meh, I'll add more grass later <3

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's a map by me! ^^
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/pmm.jpg
It's for Pokemon Mystic Moon by riolu 9.

[M.I.A]

@Eeveon.Hokay, i like the path! it seems to go to every single...important place on the map! The tree and berry tree placement is good, but i dont like howt he flowers are placed :/. anyhow i like the idea of the bridge and the town overall looks nice. 9/10...somethings missing

[Ninja Caterpie]

Here's a map by me! ^^
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/pmm.jpg
It's for Pokemon Mystic Moon by riolu 9.

It's ok, I guess...
The shape is alright but you have to pallete edit the sandy trail.
Other than that, it's good!

8/10

[.:God:.]

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5526/kenjitowngr9.th.png (http://img229.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kenjitowngr9.png)

This is my First Starting town for my Hack Pokemon Fossil. The bigger brick house is the lab because I screwed up the tiles for Oak's lab.

[.Pichu-kun]

I see a few tile errors and the map has some unused space...6/10

[.:God:.]

I see a few tile errors and the map has some unused space...6/10

Can you point the tile errors out for me so Ican fix them please? Thanx...

[Austinia]

Heres a new map I made =)

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/snowmap.jpg

Tell me what you guys think? =) Thanks!

[Lucario 9]

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5526/kenjitowngr9.th.png (http://img229.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kenjitowngr9.png)

This is my First Starting town for my Hack Pokemon Fossil. The bigger brick house is the lab because I screwed up the tiles for Oak's lab. its too empty and i think the lake is too big so just try to fill it up more
rate
6/10

[.Pichu-kun]

Heres a new map I made =)

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/snowmap.jpg

Tell me what you guys think? =) Thanks!

Very beautiful! =)
Of course, a house with no windows and some empty space...8.5/10

[Austinia]

The house without windows was going to be a shed of some sort... but I'm not sure yet.

[EarthsVisitor]

1st: They're not trainers. They are people lost in the maze. >_>

2nd: Are you trying to tell me that the maxes that GmaeFreak made a better? Made with single rocks?

3rd: I can tell you, it's not random. You're only suppose to make it to certain parts of the maze, based on where you are in game.

4th: Thanks for the comment of the shape. :)

(Quiet frankly, I'm shocked I didn't get a 4 or below earlier. :P)

Haha. No one is gonna want to go talk to the lost people, they are going to assume they are trainers like me. :]
And hahah. Anything is better than Gamefreak. They suck. :D

But, with this understanding I'd bump it up to a 5.5/10
:P
I know the things aren't random. The map itself feels random. Like. Hey. Look. Random maze in the middle of a convenient area. I guess I shouldn't judge that though. considering how you tie it into the story. :]

[EJames2100]

Heres a new map I made =)

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/snowmap.jpg

Tell me what you guys think? =) Thanks!

Very Nice, on a couple of the houses it looks like there are too many windows imo.



I am not working o a hack but I can map a little and was wondering about joining a team sometime and was wondering if I would be able to create a map and still get it rated here ?

[Austinia]

I think you can post maps here even if you aren't working on a hack and made them for fun.

[EJames2100]

Thank you, I'll have a go tonight and hope they'll be good :)

[megiddo]

Map Name: Musical Forest
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/musicalforestgtwo.jpg?t=1216162772

[.Pichu-kun]

@megiddo: It's too square and there is too many grass...5.5/10
-----------------------------
Here's my map.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/snowmap.jpg
It's for my hack, Pokemon Blizzard™

[.Exiled]

@megiddo: It's too square and there is too many grass...5.5/10
-----------------------------
Here's my map.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/snowmap.jpg
It's for my hack, Pokemon Blizzard™

You used my rombase *hugs* = D!

OMG, you copied my style, and those extra tile inserts on the bottom :(.

judging by the shape of the trees at the bottom it doesn't rly match.

and grass isn't needed.

8/10

(I knew I should've taken out those extra features, now you're mapping is similiar to mine and neti's!) Bad boy!

[FenderX]

@megiddo: It's too square and there is too many grass...5.5/10
-----------------------------
Here's my map.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/snowmap.jpg
It's for my hack, Pokemon Blizzard™
Nice, i see you got the snow tiles...you arranged everything nicely and i like how you placed the houses and the path... 8.5/10

P.S.- There is going to be a border problem on top of the house..

[Ninja Caterpie]

This is just a small route to get me warmed up to the ice tiles.
I'll take all kinds of CC cept for something that's absolutely ridiculous.
Such as saying "it has too much snow".
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/7629/routeoutsideforturinerc2.png

[.Pichu-kun]

Very good, but the right and left side of the mountains r a little empty. :\
Also...Too much snow!...jk, jk! XD
Very good...8.5/10

[.Exiled]

Very good, but the right and left side of the mountains r a little empty. :\
Also...Too much snow!...jk, jk! XD
Very good...8.5/10

AGAIN MORE SNOW PEOPLE?

GODS SAKE STOP ASKING DSHAYABUSA FOR THE SNOW >_<!

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@Dark Lakitu
the tree at the bottom right with the stack of 3 is weird.
7/10

[.Pichu-kun]

AGAIN MORE SNOW PEOPLE?

GODS SAKE STOP ASKING DSHAYABUSA FOR THE SNOW >_<!

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@Dark Lakitu
the tree at the bottom right with the stack of 3 is weird.
7/10
U don't have to get so mad! :P
Those r the only good snow tiles/palettes for FR!
------------------------
Here's route 1 for my hack.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/PBR1.jpg

[.Exiled]

9/10 it's not square it's perfect.

also you guys, stop using snow bases, Before I get in my angry mood like I warned everybody if you use snow tiles.

[Ninja Caterpie]

U don't have to get so mad! :P
Those r the only good snow tiles/palettes for FR!
------------------------
Here's route 1 for my hack.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/PBR1.jpg

Lovely route.
Can't see one distasting thing in it.
9/10

Ryousha, what else do you suggest I do for my extra town, Neti's desert tiles?
I just can't draw tiles for crap.
Well...I could use the Sevii tiles...but...they're in use too...x.x

[.Pichu-kun]

Thanx for the comments! ^^
Also, it doesn't matter what tiles u use.
He's just a little upset because everywhere he goes he sees snow tiles, and I feel bad for him.
But it's our decision if we use snow tiles or not.

[.Exiled]

Yeah look at me, I started off using Dark Era with FR tiles, then changed it to christos pal,

but that didnt change anything until I used tile changes, tile changing isn't hard, just index it, or recolour it to the right pals so it can be inserted.

[Ninja Caterpie]

Are these posts even allowed?
Yeah...I guess it must be annoying...I mean, the only maps on this whole thread are ice ones...x.x
I meant the actual drawing, Ryousha...

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's the edited Viridian City, now known as: Kira Town in my hack. :)
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/6mdicm.jpg

[Ninja Caterpie]

There's a tile error in the corner there.
Other than that, it looks pretty good.
The town's pretty squashed up, so you might want to enlarge it.
I have to admit, I'm sick of ice tiles as well, especially when it's only some of the things iced up.
8/10. It's too squashed...I guess.

[.Pichu-kun]

Thanx, and I knew about the corner error right when I posted it unfortunately. :\
I'm to lazy to upload it again! :P
Well, It is a little squashed.
I'm always afraid that it will be to empty.
About the ice tiles, I'm using them only for Pokemon Blizzard.

[.Exiled]

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg80/PokeSpeRed/baw/kakaka.jpg
This is the first town in Dark Crusade.

[Elite Salamance09]

This is the first map I've ever made for ratings. Please rate and give comments.

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6301/routeix7.png (http://imageshack.us)

Credit goes to riolu 9 for the wonderful rombase.

EDIT: @Ryousha: The maps great! I can't see any errors! 10/10.

[Thrace]

Think I'll start rating maps again and this time I'm going to be very very critical.
http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg80/PokeSpeRed/baw/kakaka.jpg
This is the first town in Dark Crusade.
Rating: 5.5/10
Comments: Pretty clever map design in some places, other places look weird. The puddle next to the lake looks strange. Don't really like the palletes either except for the green roof. Way too much empty space and the mountain just looks weird. Don't like the empty houses and the path is pretty standard so no points there.

This is the first map I've ever made for ratings. Please rate and give comments.

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6301/routeix7.png (http://imageshack.us)

Credit goes to riolu 9 for the wonderful rombase.

EDIT: @Ryousha: The maps great! I can't see any errors! 10/10.
Rating: 0/10
Comments: I said I would be critical. There is really nothing that appeals to me about this map. The palletes are blinding. Those stairs lead up not sideways. The ledges look bad and so do the trees and flowers. And I don't understand why people insist on using that type of ground tile for walkable mountains. It should only be used when you can't walk on it.

[Platinum Lucario]

OK, this is my first map on this thread, and this is what you'll see. Please rate this map and tell me what should be improved.
I didn't make it any square like or anything. Well here it is:
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll209/SilverRiolu/map00.jpg
Nice map isn't it?

[.Pichu-kun]

I like the shape of the map, but the r some empty spaces and too many ledges...8.5/10

[Thrace]

OK, this is my first map on this thread, and this is what you'll see. Please rate this map and tell me what should be improved.
I didn't make it any square like or anything. Well here it is:
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll209/SilverRiolu/map00.jpg
Nice map isn't it?
Rating: 1.5/10
Comments: You guys worry way too much about your map looking square. Take a look at the maps that are already in FR (the Sevii Island ones). Why is there so much randomly placed grass everywhere? It looks terrible, so do the placement of stones and flowers. Same with the trees. Just bad, sorry. I do like how you've tried to incorporate the ledges. But you used way too many and it just looks bad.

[Neti]

OK, this is my first map on this thread, and this is what you'll see. Please rate this map and tell me what should be improved.
I didn't make it any square like or anything. Well here it is:
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll209/SilverRiolu/map00.jpg
Nice map isn't it?

Nice shape and good placing of stuff like rocks, flowers and grass
at the left part there are too many ledges, that should be changed
and the small trees there are standing in rows, which is not good
the right part is cool to me
rating: 7/10

I like the shape of the map, but the r some empty spaces and too many ledges...8.5/10
where do you see empty space? Oo

Rating: 1.5/10
Comments: You guys worry way too much about your map looking square. Take a look at the maps that are already in FR (the Sevii Island ones). Why is there so much randomly placed grass everywhere? It looks terrible, so do the placement of stones and flowers. Same with the trees. Just bad, sorry. I do like how you've tried to incorporate the ledges. But you used way too many and it just looks bad.
just cause the original FR maps are square doesnt mean we have to do the same mistake ;-)
everybody can work things out on their maps that they think are important. in my opinion the shape is like the most important feature of a map, so it shouldnt be boring

[.Pichu-kun]

Well, not empty "space", just empty spots. ^_^"

[Neti]

i dont think so, i think he didnt overdo it or put too less stuff on the map. the placing is nice
but thats a matter of taste

[.Pichu-kun]

Well, I guess I'm seeing it in a weird way! :P
Overall, the map is good. :)

[Ninja Caterpie]

dshayabusa was talking about how good the shape of the Sevii Islands were, not how bad!

[.Pichu-kun]

Here's a map by me! :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/abcd.jpg

[Lucario 9]

Here's a map by me! :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/abcd.jpg
its really good not to square nice tiles good and small as what your good at but too many flower's for me accept that i like it i give you 9/10 well done

[Neti]

thats a beautiful palette you made there Eeveon

[Lucario 9]

i just made a map without trying but you might like it so here it is

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/canyon.jpg?t=1216560298

please vote

[.Pichu-kun]

@Neti: That's a Rom Base by Christos! XD

@riolu9: It's very good, and the mountains keep it from being too empty.
Of course, about the ledges:
1. U can jump onto the rock! O.o
2. The tiny ledges should look like that. :\
...9/10

[Austinia]

Here, check out this forest I made :D

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4338/forestmaphg2.jpg

Its for a event to catch celebi :) please tell me what you think!

[.:God:.]

Here, check out this forest I made :D

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4338/forestmaphg2.jpg

Its for a event to catch celebi :) please tell me what you think!

This is for Oak's Murder? I'm a fan of it... that's one thing. And 2. the rating:

I'll give it a... 7.5/10

Why?
Props:
Nice and long, keeps the player going
Grass is placed well

Slops:
Kinda too long... it would get boring
And since I can't see the tile errors, there are probably a ton. Now... for my map:

It's the first map for Pokemon Revelation. Here it is: Techlabo Town!
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5637/gamegameboogeynq1.th.png (http://img257.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gamegameboogeynq1.png)

[Ninja Caterpie]

The house's shape is funny...
But...oh well.
Let's see...
The flowers at the bottom are disturbing...Too many of them.
The paths are dodgy...
And the house has tile errors galore.
Also, it's very unrealistic. Who would want ONE LITTLE bit of room to walk in?
5/10

Now for my own map

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8333/deisaxv9.png

[Austinia]

This is for Oak's Murder? I'm a fan of it... that's one thing. And 2. the rating:

I'll give it a... 7.5/10

Why?
Props:
Nice and long, keeps the player going
Grass is placed well

Slops:
Kinda too long... it would get boring
And since I can't see the tile errors, there are probably a ton. Now... for my map:

It's the first map for Pokemon Revelation. Here it is: Techlabo Town!
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5637/gamegameboogeynq1.th.png (http://img257.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gamegameboogeynq1.png)
There are not many tile errors, I don't think anyways. And I noticed its kinda long :s but its to get celebi! So, I guess the player will have to endure it :p You also go back in time--- erm.... yea.... ;)

Your map- 7/10 tiles placed kinda weird and hard to navigate through the town, but overall its pretty nice.

[.Pichu-kun]

http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/somemap.jpg

[Dark Ryuzaki]

Here is another map of mine.

Map Name: A random town.

Map Game: Firered using the Super DP rombase (credit to X buster for it)

Comments: This is just for the ratings.

Mapshot: http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=995&pictureid=6545

[Austinia]

Anyone care to rate Apricoa city? :D

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/oldtown.png

back in time town.

[Neti]

you made that map in advance map in a 3rd gen game right?

[Melash]

Map Name: ????
Map Game: Fire Red
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm92/Melash59/TheRiver.jpg
Comments: Okay, I realize that there's some tile errors by the fence on the left and the trees on the top. Ignore them! Anyway, this is just a river that probably connects a town/city to a Route. I was just bored, so I made it!

[.Pichu-kun]

I found the tile errors...8.5/10

[Eeveon II]

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn179/Kevin33193/pokemon.jpg

[Austinia]

you made that map in advance map in a 3rd gen game right?
Yepp, pokemon Firered :) put in the tiles and used them. lol.

[.Pichu-kun]

@Kevin33193:
Hmm....
9/10 for effort.
6.5/10 for errors.

[Austinia]

I finally inserted desert tiles, and most of them are complete. Heres a map I made with them:

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-2.jpg

Please rate this map for me? :D

[Osher99]

Map Name: Bloom Town

Map Game: FireRed | Veridian City

Comments: Just Rate it Quickly, My VERY First map hack.
I'm new in hack rom

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1212/veridiancityok1.jpg

[.Pichu-kun]

@Austinia: It seems very nice, and I'm not gonna say it's too square because it's a desert! :P
The little water supply like the ponds and lake is very good...9.5/10

@Osher99: I'm not gonna rate ur map for obvious reasons...:\

[Austinia]

@Austinia: It seems very nice, and I'm not gonna say it's too square because it's a desert! :P
The little water supply like the ponds and lake is very good...9.5/10

@Osher99: I'm not gonna rate ur map for obvious reasons...:\lol. You can't demand much in a desert =D If its got water, you gotta live with the square-ness :o

[.Pichu-kun]

Too many errors, too empty, too square, and too obvious what place u edited.
This obviously deserves a...0/10
Sry for the harsh rating...:\

[Neti]

Yepp, pokemon Firered :) put in the tiles and used them. lol.

i did the same thing and rebuilt whole azelea town, tin tower, ecruteak city and olivine city^^
if you put my map next to a mapshot of the gold map you cant tell which is the original one

[Ninja Caterpie]

Not unless you know the GSC palletes because I've seen your's and the pallete is just a tiny bit different.

Anyway, Austinia, loving it. I like the water, shallow ponds, shape (don't care if it's square) and the cacti placement. Lovely. 8/10

[.Iramet]

Fosleaf town.jpg (http://www.pokecommunity.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=42106&stc=1&d=1216768504)
fosleaf
ruby
i like

[BlackRainbow*]

First of all you can't use those tiles because they were made by Lex. But i i rate your map. Well its really squarish. the water don't look good.
4.5/10

[Neti]

I finally inserted desert tiles, and most of them are complete. Heres a map I made with them:

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-2.jpg

Please rate this map for me? :D
is this for ruby or FR?
did u take the tiles out of the rombase on your own or did i send mine to you and you just edited the tileset a bit?
im just wondering

[Austinia]

is this for ruby or FR?
did u take the tiles out of the rombase on your own or did i send mine to you and you just edited the tileset a bit?
im just wonderingI inserted them myself :p And they are in FireRed.

EDIT: I think its against the rules to double post so I'll add my newest map to this post!

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/mytown.png

Could someone rate it please? :D

[Neti]

those desert maps look truely awesome, the ygive me a good preview of how my desert region will turn out since im using the same tiles^^

i did so many ice maps, theyre so normal to me now that i like desert once much more xD
i think ill continue mapping LoF now

edit: what do you think of my latest map:
Map Name: Shaqiu
Hack: Legend of Fenju
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu.png
Comments: First Village of Huoshi

and pls tell me, whicch palette would you prefer, the first one or this one:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu2.png

i think the sand iss better in the first one and the roofs, plants and mountains look better in the second one, so ill probably mix em up

[EarthsVisitor]

Okay, back to rating maps. Like db, I am very critical and harsh with my ratings. Maybe not AS harsh, but still harsh. Here we go!

I finally inserted desert tiles, and most of them are complete. Heres a map I made with them:

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/map-2.jpg

Please rate this map for me? :D

There is ONE thing I like, sort of. And that is the placement of the houses. The tiles are gorgeous. But. The map saddens me. The river on top looks so awkward along with the fence around the whole town, that just looks bad. And in terms of pokemon gameplay, there so many places for him to exit the town. I don't like the area behind the mart.
3.5/10

Map Name: Bloom Town

Map Game: FireRed | Veridian City

Comments: Just Rate it Quickly, My VERY First map hack.
I'm new in hack rom

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/1212/veridiancityok1.jpg

Too many flowers together. Lots of emptiness. Many tile errors. Weird placement and bad overall structure.
1/10

Fosleaf town.jpg (http://www.pokecommunity.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=42106&stc=1&d=1216768504)
fosleaf
ruby
i like

Boxy, random placement of houses. Random lake which feels disconnected with the rest of the map. Palette is weird and disalarming.
1/10


I inserted them myself :p And they are in FireRed.

EDIT: I think its against the rules to double post so I'll add my newest map to this post!

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/mytown.png

Could someone rate it please? :D

Now, this is MUCH, MUCH better. I LOVE the concept of this map, with the river flowing inbetween and coming off the mountain into the desert. I love that idea! And I think you pulled it off pretty nicely. I enjoy the bottom area. There is just enough trees and rocks. There are only 2 things I would address. The house tiles, don't seem to fit well in the rocky area. And the right area of the mountain, it feels disconnected and out of place. Make the are more shapely.
8/10

those desert maps look truely awesome, the ygive me a good preview of how my desert region will turn out since im using the same tiles^^

i did so many ice maps, theyre so normal to me now that i like desert once much more xD
i think ill continue mapping LoF now

edit: what do you think of my latest map:
Map Name: Shaqiu
Hack: Legend of Fenju
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu.png
Comments: First Village of Huoshi

and pls tell me, whicch palette would you prefer, the first one or this one:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu2.png

i think the sand iss better in the first one and the roofs, plants and mountains look better in the second one, so ill probably mix em up

Alright, the map itself first. Nice tiles. My issues with this map are:
It feels crowded.
The house on the left feels too close to the exit.
The gray rocks do not fit in the desert.
Everything else seems alright. It's a nice little town. I think the placement of the houses could be improved though. Make the map a little bigger.
6/10

As for which palette, I leave you instead with a question.
Do you want a more evil looking town, or a happier, more pleasant town?
Cause the first palette gives the town this dark and mysterious look such as in the old western movies.
The second palette gives it a more welcoming and inviting town look.
:]

[Neti]

Alright, the map itself first. Nice tiles. My issues with this map are:
It feels crowded.
The house on the left feels too close to the exit.
The gray rocks do not fit in the desert.
Everything else seems alright. It's a nice little town. I think the placement of the houses could be improved though. Make the map a little bigger.
6/10

As for which palette, I leave you instead with a question.
Do you want a more evil looking town, or a happier, more pleasant town?
Cause the first palette gives the town this dark and mysterious look such as in the old western movies.
The second palette gives it a more welcoming and inviting town look.
:]

I noticed those 3 things too already
but i dont think theyre too bad, so i jsut posted the map to look what other ppl think about them. i think ill change tose things

about the palettes: ive decided to take the second one, but with another palette. the sand is darker as in the first image, but still more yellow, not so orange

[0m3GA AR$3NAL]

Ok, two new maps here, what do you people think?

http://www.0m3ga-ars3nal.webs.com/CEPHALOS CITY.png

And Map #2

http://www.0m3ga-ars3nal.webs.com/ROUTE.png

Ratings and opinions please?
(are the images showing up? My comp sometimes wont show them to me, but can you see them, if not, please tell me)

[Austinia]

those desert maps look truely awesome, the ygive me a good preview of how my desert region will turn out since im using the same tiles^^

i did so many ice maps, theyre so normal to me now that i like desert once much more xD
i think ill continue mapping LoF now

edit: what do you think of my latest map:
Map Name: Shaqiu
Hack: Legend of Fenju
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu.png
Comments: First Village of Huoshi

and pls tell me, whicch palette would you prefer, the first one or this one:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/shaqiu2.png

i think the sand iss better in the first one and the roofs, plants and mountains look better in the second one, so ill probably mix em up

I like the first palette better.


Ok, two new maps here, what do you people think?

http://www.0m3ga-ars3nal.webs.com/CEPHALOS%20CITY.png

And Map #2

http://www.0m3ga-ars3nal.webs.com/ROUTE.png

Ratings and opinions please?

I'm not sure why, but no images are showing up for me.

[Neti]

i dont see the images either

[0m3GA AR$3NAL]

[img=http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1377/cephaloscityoc4.th.png] (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cephaloscityoc4.png)


[img=http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7386/routebu8.th.png] (http://img146.imageshack.us/my.php?image=routebu8.png)


Try these (I wasn't using Imageshack before, Try it now in these spoilers ^)

[.Iramet]

yea i knew that map wasnt very good i was just trying to get a map on here becuz ive been trying for a while to do it^_^
@blackrainbow:Everyone uses others tiles its not wrong^_^
At least my map is original.LOL

[BlackRainbow*]

oh yeah it is. You have to get permission to use it.
Sorry for spamming

[~Fire]

Or else it would be considered thievery.

here is a map i made, its supposed to be a semi-tropical route.
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4682/route1qo7.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4682/route1qo7.4f6976b94a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=140&i=route1qo7.png)
tell me if you don't see it.
and please use constructive criticism since this is the first completed map i've made in a while.
honestly, im a bit dissapointed in this map.

Edit: If anyone woders why the trees are like that, its because i just hate trees with patterns.
its not very natural to me.And also, i have changed the grass to be R/S/E like, leaving more space.

[Neti]

hey i love that map, it looks really nice!

[~Fire]

hey i love that map, it looks really nice!

erm, thanks but could you tell me what is wrong and give a honest rating?

Anyways, i found another map, but i made this map more mountainous since a crater apparently landed into the center(erosion took care of the crater).
i made this map to be more mountainous, but i put trees because i just hate treeless areas.
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6154/pewtercityog2.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6154/pewtercityog2.d773922bdb.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=135&i=pewtercityog2.png)
like before, please give a detailed description about what is wrong.
i really don't like this map much because it seems really crowded, but i do like the mountain tile placement.
And again, tell me if you don't see it.

Oh, and the barred door is just as useless as the white rock in mossdeep.
Just an easter egg.

[Avatar Ryan]

Hiya! i've got a map i've been working on here...
what do u people think 'bout it?

Map Name: Frotus Town
Hack: Legend of Hatichu
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://i34.tinypic.com/ir2hkx.jpg

[.Pichu-kun]

Hiya! i've got a map i've been working on here...
what do u people think 'bout it?

Map Name: Frotus Town
Hack: Legend of Hatichu
Game: FireRed
Mapshot:
http://i34.tinypic.com/ir2hkx.jpg

The shape looks good to me, but it's a tiny bit empty at the bottom, and that Rom Base is over used...8/10

[44tim44]

Hi, I've been
working on a Desert Town
for some time now and I thought I ought to post it
and see what people thinks of it.

Map Name: Subaku Town
Hack: Pokemon Nature Force (Not posted on PC yet)
Game: Firered BPRE Sorry xP Ruby AXVE
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5898/subakutowncn4.png

[BlackRainbow*]

44tim44 i really like your map. it has a nice layout and really awesome tiles. maybe you should put some more trees in it?
8/10

[.Iramet]

44tim44 that is a really good map i wish i could do somthing like that i would give it a 9/10 only because nothing is ever perfect
@blackrainbow-thnks for telling me and ill just use the ones atr whack a hack cuz they already give you permission as long as you give the creator credit for the tiles

[.Pichu-kun]

@44tim44: It's a good map, the tiles r excellent, just add a few more holes and rocks...8.5/10

[~Fire]

Hi, I've been
working on a Desert Town
for some time now and I thought I ought to post it
and see what people thinks of it.

Map Name: Subaku Town
Hack: Pokemon Nature Force (Not posted on PC yet)
Game: Firered BPRE Sorry xP Ruby AXVE
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/5898/subakutowncn4.png

Its okay but can be much better.
The town is too bunched up and gets too empty.
there are no rocks in the water, it seems really dull, the top of the mountain tiles seem weird,and the mountain placement just doesn't look that good.
there isn't much to expect from a desert town but it could still be better.
6.8/10 for emptiness.

Edit: I know no one ever reads the page before the last page, so i'll put my previous maps on here.
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4682/route1qo7.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4682/route1qo7.4f6976b94a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=140&i=route1qo7.png)

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6154/pewtercityog2.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6154/pewtercityog2.d773922bdb.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=135&i=pewtercityog2.png)

[Mr.Fury]

i really like your map, nice simple with great tiles. 9/10 ^_^

*edit* didnt feel like double posting, so ill post my map here.

Name: Sequil Village (iunno were it came from, just liked it)
ROM: Fire Red
Original: Pallet Town

Please rate and comment 1-10
And keep in mind this is my first succesful map i have made, just for fun.

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/2892/sequilvillagexj9.th.png (http://img76.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sequilvillagexj9.png)



Also i am possibly looking for a tutor/mentor for hacking. ^_^

[Netdot5]

On the map, the ends of the path are kinda not so good. Make sure you are using the right tiles that make it flow. You need to find the connecter for the vertical and horizontal paths. Right now, they are just clashing together.

[Austinia]

I have to say I am pretty happy with this city I just made... it took forever making the palettes and inserting the tiles but here it is!


http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f246/1918293456/SitruaCity.png

Sitrua City

from my Pokemon hack (Oak's Murder)

[.Pichu-kun]

I simply love the placement of everything, especially the trees! :D
Very good...9.5/10

[~element]

okay this is the first map of my hack pokemon deep blue/transform

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7205/waterfalltownyj6.th.png (http://img244.imageshack.us/my.php?image=waterfalltownyj6.png)
yes i know that there are some errors this is just a rough copy of it
please rate!