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Osher99
July 29th, 2008, 03:30 PM
yeah i know the error tilles just forgot to fix it..

.:God:.
July 29th, 2008, 03:31 PM
Map Name: Foret Island

Map Game: Fire Red.

Comments: Littel Island =) Rate it Thanks ^^

Mapshot:

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8214/foretislandtwoislandyq5.jpg



eh... what can i say? double post?

cooley
July 29th, 2008, 04:54 PM
Hey guys! The last map I posted, was earlier in the Year, and I think it's time to post another one.

Map Name(s): Malrock City, Route 24

Map Game: Pokemon FireRed

Map Shot:
WARNING! HUGE MAPhttp://i35.tinypic.com/awcmfa.jpg

Map Comments: Two maps put together, please rate. And the wierd Rock Tiles, they're a secret ;) Anyone want to guess?

Bishopk
July 29th, 2008, 05:48 PM
Map Name: Radell City
Map Game: FireRed
Map:
800 x 800
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2439/radellus0.png
Yeah, the flowers do spell BRAI - LLE in Visual Braille
Looking at it now, there doesn't seem to be much going on. I'll probably add more houses or something later

.Exiled
July 29th, 2008, 06:44 PM
Hey guys! The last map I posted, was earlier in the Year, and I think it's time to post another one.

Map Name(s): Malrock City, Route 24

Map Game: Pokemon FireRed

Map Shot:
WARNING! HUGE MAPhttp://i35.tinypic.com/awcmfa.jpg

Map Comments: Two maps put together, please rate. And the wierd Rock Tiles, they're a secret ;) Anyone want to guess?

I see a tile error on the route, and a tile error on the city/town where the mountains are and next is a tree.

and OMG. It's MT. Eruption :P.

8/10

.Pichu-kun
July 29th, 2008, 09:18 PM
@cooley: O.o
~faints~

Nice map. :)
I do see a couple tile errors too, one of them is the bridge next to the edge of the water, it's missing the water ledges...8.5/10

0m3GA AR$3NAL
July 30th, 2008, 07:36 AM
Hey guys! The last map I posted, was earlier in the Year, and I think it's time to post another one.

Map Name(s): Malrock City, Route 24

Map Game: Pokemon FireRed

Map Shot:
WARNING! HUGE MAPhttp://i35.tinypic.com/awcmfa.jpg

Map Comments: Two maps put together, please rate. And the wierd Rock Tiles, they're a secret ;) Anyone want to guess?

Do I spot a Rock climb wall? I bet that is it isn't it? Well, I give you a 9.9/10 on the route, and a 9.0 on your town there. (Nothing can be perfect! ^_^) I noticed there is a hole in the rocks in the water, where the player could surf down, unless blocked that with a movement permission... Great maps though!

44tim44
July 30th, 2008, 09:26 AM
Okay everyone, here's another
of my Maps for Pokemon Nature Force:

Map Name: Sabaku Outskirts
Game Type: Ruby AXVE
Map Shot:
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/4776/sabakuoutskirtsei9.png
Comments: The entrance to a Desert in my Hack
(Right of map: 2nd town, Below Map: Sabaku Desert)

Mr.Fury
July 30th, 2008, 05:35 PM
Rom: Firered
Name: Iunno some route
Original: Sea route above cinibar island.

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5169/ehheja8.th.png (http://img254.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ehheja8.png)

~Fire
July 30th, 2008, 08:14 PM
Do I spot a Rock climb wall? I bet that is it isn't it? Well, I give you a 9.9/10 on the route, and a 9.0 on your town there. (Nothing can be perfect! ^_^) I noticed there is a hole in the rocks in the water, where the player could surf down, unless blocked that with a movement permission... Great maps though!
Actually...it isn't that.
i used those "weird rock tiles" because the stairs would ruin everything since they would all be clumped together and look ugly.
but i shall not tell anyone unless Cooley tells me to.

Okay everyone, here's another
of my Maps for Pokemon Nature Force:

Map Name: Sabaku Outskirts
Game Type: Ruby AXVE
Map Shot:
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/4776/sabakuoutskirtsei9.png
Comments: The entrance to a Desert in my Hack
(Right of map: 2nd town, Below Map: Sabaku Desert)

Ah, thats much better.
The ledges are placed neatly, there is a second path, the trees have near perfect placements, its just great overall.
But the non bike path(you know what i mean) has too little grass. You can go through the whole area by touching 6 pokemon grass only. Not only that, the tree tiles seem really crowded.
Rating:8/10
suggestions: Make less crowded tree tiles and put more wild grass on the first path.

Well, i know no one checks page 58 anymore, and since my maps only got 1 rating, i will post it again.
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4682/route1qo7.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4682/route1qo7.4f6976b94a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=140&i=route1qo7.png)

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6154/pewtercityog2.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6154/pewtercityog2.d773922bdb.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=135&i=pewtercityog2.png)

.Pichu-kun
July 30th, 2008, 08:23 PM
@makunouchi:
Map 1: Everything is put in there nicely, except, add 1 flower at the bottom...9.5/10
Map 2: The shape is nice an the path is used nicely...10/10

KhaosKnight
July 30th, 2008, 08:35 PM
@makunouchi

Map1: Hmm nicely done, though i think the ledge in the north east corner is a bt uneeded. My Rate 9.5/10


Map2: I Really like this one, all of the house are nicly placed. and the way the sand/rocky walkways that go well with the grass walkway. Though the path that leads to the southern most house does seem a bit uneeded(because it doesnt give the player a way to detour from the path), and that steel door in the north eastern mountain face seems a bit uneeded as well(i dont see a way the player could get to it) overall i give you a 9/10

.Exiled
July 31st, 2008, 03:01 AM
http://i38.tinypic.com/98ufxv.jpg
I remade the first town of Faded Horizons, cause my first map was getting weird.

Credits:
Xiderwrong- The Complete Rombase!! <3

Notice:
the water has tile errors, I cant fix that. tough luck

.Pichu-kun
July 31st, 2008, 03:10 AM
It's a good map Ryousha, very good! :)
Only one tile error.
See attachments...9.5/10

~EDIT~
Never mind, u already saw it! :P

44tim44
July 31st, 2008, 08:35 AM
Ah, thats much better.
The ledges are placed neatly, there is a second path, the trees have near perfect placements, its just great overall.
But the non bike path(you know what i mean) has too little grass. You can go through the whole area by touching 6 pokemon grass only. Not only that, the tree tiles seem really crowded.
Rating:8/10
suggestions: Make less crowded tree tiles and put more wild grass on the first path.


Well, the reason I did, was because otherwise
the border would get screwed up, but that's
fixed now + now there's a minimum of 10 grass tiles to walk. ^^

//44tim44

PS. Rating of your maps:

Map 1: 8/10
The map is overall really good,
but there's to many and too big "empty spots".
(Try and add some flowers, paths or maybe a tree
in those "empty spots")

Map 2: 8.5/10
This map is really good, but the roads at some places
looks like it's too... (fat? xD)
And also here, too many "empty spots".

DS.

loitraitim
July 31st, 2008, 01:25 PM
Map Name: Route 1
Map Game: FireRed (U)
Comments: Custom tile by X-Richie ;)

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/1585/route1wc3.png

Osher99
July 31st, 2008, 01:25 PM
Map Name: Koral Town

Map Game: Ruby

Comments: Just made it on D/P Base rom.. quickly Rate it. Thanks ^^

Mapshot:

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/7190/koraltownbf6.jpg


Map Name: Route 1
Map Game: FireRed (U)
Comments: Custom tile by X-Richie ;)

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/1585/route1wc3.png

Wow very cool tile!..I like it 9/10

Lucario 9
July 31st, 2008, 02:31 PM
i just made a quick map

hack of fire red

please rate

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1-3.jpg?t=1217514595

its not one of my greatest maps

Disturbed
July 31st, 2008, 02:40 PM
i just made a quick map

hack of fire red

please rate

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1-3.jpg?t=1217514595

its not one of my greatest maps

No kidding. The placement of the grass is HORRIBLE. You seem to use WAY too much grass, and it looks like it is just a space filler. The stairs don't have their usual shadow on the left side. But, I enjoy the layout and the placement of trees.
6/10

My most recent firered map:
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/FireRedMap.jpg

Osher99
July 31st, 2008, 04:33 PM
Map Name: Froma Island.

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: Not a Island of Fire Red Just Made It From Sea!

Mapshot:

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/4821/fromaislandrw6.jpg

loitraitim
July 31st, 2008, 04:39 PM
Map Name: Froma Island.

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: Not a Island of Fire Red Just Made It From Sea!

Mapshot:

http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/8513/fromaislandtr5.jpg


I vote it: 5/10 :|

You can fix...

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/4393/fromaislandtr5us1.jpg

Osher99
July 31st, 2008, 05:32 PM
How's That 1??

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/4821/fromaislandrw6.jpg

Disturbed
July 31st, 2008, 05:52 PM
How's That 1??

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/4821/fromaislandrw6.jpg

Eh, it is okay, and you really dont need that rock in the middle of the caves.
5.5/10. The placement is bad.



Also, can you people rate my map above, it was kinda forgotten and not rated >.<

loitraitim
July 31st, 2008, 06:04 PM
Map Name: Route 1
Map Game: FireRed (U)
Comments: Custom tile by X-Richie ;)

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/1585/route1wc3.png

I needed estimated about folding^^ this map.
If possible, give indorsement to a couple and can snub careenage ;)

To Osher99 (http://www.pokecommunity.com/member.php?u=96326): That proximately empty backing up map still your that many voids whopping, you ought to use something!
Gently more beautiful such ^^

Good luck :P

.Pichu-kun
July 31st, 2008, 06:05 PM
No kidding. The placement of the grass is HORRIBLE. You seem to use WAY too much grass, and it looks like it is just a space filler. The stairs don't have their usual shadow on the left side. But, I enjoy the layout and the placement of trees.
6/10

My most recent firered map:
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/FireRedMap.jpg

Ur tree and grass placement is used good.
Other vegetation is good to. :)
Except, what's with the PC and mart?
...9/10

Disturbed
August 1st, 2008, 01:53 AM
I added the PC and Mart there mainly because that is the only PC and mart for a WHILE. And also, considering it is the very beginning of the hack, you need Pokeballs ^_^

Quickster
August 1st, 2008, 03:34 AM
Map Name:N/A(havent thought of name)

Map Game:Fire Red

Map Comments:This is supposed to be a starter town and its my 1st map.

Mapshot:

http://i38.tinypic.com/xll289.jpg

Commando125
August 1st, 2008, 07:35 AM
Map Name:N/A(havent thought of name)

Map Game:Fire Red

Map Comments:This is supposed to be a starter town and its my 1st map.


Rating: 5/10

There is no variety at all to the landscape. Its just plain sand and a grass path. The map is also....square. Try to curve the sides of the beach and make it look more realistic. Maybe some trees...flowers...etc.

cε׀׀
August 1st, 2008, 02:45 PM
Map Name:N/A(havent thought of name)

Map Game:Fire Red

Map Comments:This is supposed to be a starter town and its my 1st map.

Mapshot:

http://i38.tinypic.com/xll289.jpg

Rate: 4/10
Reason: Pretty plain map. You just used some sand and made some paths and added some boulders. But you can make that map a whole lot better. There are some errors and make a nice border!
Suggestions: Just remove the plainness XD

Quilava's Master
August 1st, 2008, 03:12 PM
Name:Cegrass Town
Comments:If you've played the old Shattered Dreams beta you should know the story. For those who havent played it.. Go download it. But while you wait: This is one of the towns caught in the battle of Mewtwo vs Lucario. It was destroyed but Celebi resotred it. She even added extra trees to add to the beauty of the town. The stream was filled with water by Suicune

http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk241/VortexTeam/CegrassTownMap.jpg

Disturbed
August 1st, 2008, 03:37 PM
Name:Cegrass Town
Comments:If you've played the old Shattered Dreams beta you should know the story. For those who havent played it.. Go download it. But while you wait: This is one of the towns caught in the battle of Mewtwo vs Lucario. It was destroyed but Celebi resotred it. She even added extra trees to add to the beauty of the town. The stream was filled with water by Suicune

http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk241/VortexTeam/CegrassTownMap.jpg


Oooh, a very well done map. I love the shape, and the placement of houses! 9/10



Now my maps:

I posted this before, but still...
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/FireRedMap.jpg


And now Tidal Beach:
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/SeaBeach.jpg

.Pichu-kun
August 1st, 2008, 09:08 PM
Um, there's nothing in the spoilers. :\

Disturbed
August 1st, 2008, 09:16 PM
Um, there's nothing in the spoilers. :\


Huh? What are you talkin about? I can see em perfectly fine

I'll post without spoilers:
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/SeaBeach.jpg

.Pichu-kun
August 1st, 2008, 09:27 PM
Hmm...
That's strange.
Maybe u removed them on accident? XD
...:\

Disturbed
August 1st, 2008, 09:30 PM
Hmm...
That's strange.
Maybe u removed them on accident? XD
...:\


<.< you still cant see them?

.Pichu-kun
August 1st, 2008, 09:31 PM
Nope, u didn't even remove the spoilers like u said u would. >.>

Disturbed
August 1st, 2008, 09:34 PM
Nope, u didn't even remove the spoilers like u said u would. >.>

I know, I put it without the spoilers in a newer post... >.<

Here it is in GIF format >.< (lost lots of quality)
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/TranquilBeach.gif

.Pichu-kun
August 1st, 2008, 09:54 PM
Still not there.
Try uploading in .png

Disturbed
August 1st, 2008, 10:34 PM
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/TranquilBeach-1.png

Please tell me it worked THIS time >.<

Ninja Caterpie
August 2nd, 2008, 01:04 AM
Wind~, you have a problem with your computer.

Maraudah, I can see every one of the maps.

Tidal Beach:
It's kind of empty and you can surf into the black water.
The mountain also looks a bit unnatural with only one layer.
Also, I don't see any light grass (the type with light patches in the grass)
Other than that, it's pretty well done and I quite like it.
8/10

Lucario 9
August 2nd, 2008, 03:15 AM
map name:sweetness town
this is a little plain map by me so i just want people think of my plain maps im much better but as its done in 4:14am in the morning im pretty tired so please vote my map here it is

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/town1.jpg?t=1217646705

.Pichu-kun
August 2nd, 2008, 03:54 AM
map name:sweetness town
this is a little plain map by me so i just want people think of my plain maps im much better but as its done in 4:14am in the morning im pretty tired so please vote my map here it is

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/town1.jpg?t=1217646705

It's not exactly a town with 1 house...XD
It's still very good, and the shape is good too. :)
...9/10

Dark Wolf X
August 2nd, 2008, 04:53 AM
Map Name:Siberial Town
Map Game:Fire Red(X-Busters Rombase)
Map Comments:Starting Town Of The Hack Pokemon Quest For Mewtwo
Map:

http://i332.photobucket.com/albums/m350/DarkWolfX_photo/SiberialTown.jpg

megiddo
August 2nd, 2008, 06:44 AM
Another town I made in firered.
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/orchestontowntwo.jpg?t=1217658861

Orcheston Town.

SerenadeDS
August 2nd, 2008, 07:05 AM
map name:sweetness town
this is a little plain map by me so i just want people think of my plain maps im much better but as its done in 4:14am in the morning im pretty tired so please vote my map here it is

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/town1.jpg?t=1217646705

Looks good, nice and simple. Be sure to give credit to give my buddy Kyledove, those being his tiles, everything but the signpost's and the house. Don't quite like the town name IMO.

9/10

Thrace
August 2nd, 2008, 10:13 AM
map name:sweetness town
this is a little plain map by me so i just want people think of my plain maps im much better but as its done in 4:14am in the morning im pretty tired so please vote my map here it is
http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/town1.jpg?t=1217646705
Rating: 6/10
Suggestions:
Those tiles are really nice but you haven't used them very effectively. That lake is oddly shaped. The paths are not even. Just a whole lot of poor placement.

Map Name:Siberial Town
Map Game:Fire Red(X-Busters Rombase)
Map Comments:Starting Town Of The Hack Pokemon Quest For Mewtwo
Map:
http://i332.photobucket.com/albums/m350/DarkWolfX_photo/SiberialTown.jpg
Rating: 0/10
Suggestions:
Read some tutorials and look at some maps that are already in the game and maps by some of the better mappers here. I shouldn't even have to say whats wrong with the map, its just terrible. Don't use rom bases either, they are way overused.

Another town I made in firered.
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/orchestontowntwo.jpg?t=1217658861
Orcheston Town.
Rating: 3/10
Suggestions:
I personally don't agree with this type of mapping but to each his own I guess. Those stairs don't look very good though. I don't like how you have grass in the town either. You should have an exit for the building at the bottom. I don't like the placement of the buildings or trees either. Not too fond of the tiles either.

Sorry if I was too harsh.

My Maps:
Mt. Berous Level 1
http://i38.tinypic.com/2j4zifc.png
Mt. Berous Level 2
http://i34.tinypic.com/21cy95.png

Ninja Caterpie
August 2nd, 2008, 11:33 AM
OMG!
You're re-mapping Mt. Berous! And it might give me some inspiration to do that mountain in my hack!

Map 1:
8/10
I like the shapes of the mountain and the way the sand was used...
But the rocks are too bundled together.

Map 2:
8/10
Same here, the shape's nice but the rocks are too bunched up.
They seem to match, too...

Lucario 9
August 2nd, 2008, 06:44 PM
Rating: 6/10
Suggestions:
Those tiles are really nice but you haven't used them very effectively. That lake is oddly shaped. The paths are not even. Just a whole lot of poor placement.


Rating: 0/10
Suggestions:
Read some tutorials and look at some maps that are already in the game and maps by some of the better mappers here. I shouldn't even have to say whats wrong with the map, its just terrible. Don't use rom bases either, they are way overused.


Rating: 3/10
Suggestions:
I personally don't agree with this type of mapping but to each his own I guess. Those stairs don't look very good though. I don't like how you have grass in the town either. You should have an exit for the building at the bottom. I don't like the placement of the buildings or trees either. Not too fond of the tiles either.

Sorry if I was too harsh.

My Maps:
Mt. Berous Level 1
http://i38.tinypic.com/2j4zifc.png
Mt. Berous Level 2
http://i34.tinypic.com/21cy95.pngas i said it was done early in the morning and i was tired and a bit drunk even though im 14 lol i can make much better maps

anyway map 1
its alright not the greatest cave iv seen i give that 6/10

map 2
its very good i love it keep it up i give you 9/10

.Pichu-kun
August 2nd, 2008, 10:04 PM
My new map! :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/CNRB.jpg

Lucario 9
August 2nd, 2008, 10:12 PM
My new map! :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/CNRB.jpg its awsome i like the shape of the map well we know that rombase is awsome and also kyledove's last rombase well i give this map
... 10/10 well done

+Sneasel™
August 2nd, 2008, 10:20 PM
My new map! :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/CNRB.jpg

Oooh, I just saw that ROM base at Pkmnhackersonline.com, I liked them when I saw them, and I like them on this map. I do think that there is too much water though, and that it takes up a lot of space. I give it a 8/10 due to its simplicity.

.Pichu-kun
August 3rd, 2008, 12:39 AM
1 more map by me. :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/kickbutt.jpg

Xray
August 3rd, 2008, 12:54 AM
1 more map by me. :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/kickbutt.jpg

I like the Tree's, However the House at the top right has a tile error..

8/10

Alizée Jacotey
August 3rd, 2008, 12:58 AM
1 more map by me. :D


Cool! I like it!
I love the tiles, that are very well known, but cool!
I like the bridge and the little (lake?).
The only thing I don't like is how you putted the mart and the other house sooo together.
Anyway, 8.5/10

Well here I go...

Map Name: Aztec Territory.
Map Game: Pokémon Zephyr
Map Comments: Credtis to sk0ria for the palm tiles, and also the top of the tower is incomplete cause it can't be seen in gameplay so that's it.
Map (big map):
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7090/aztecterritoryxi2.png

Ninja Caterpie
August 3rd, 2008, 01:26 AM
Twilite, you'll be able to see the tower from the top of the trees.
You need at least 6, 7, or 8 tiles between the tower and the trees to block it from view.

Other than that, lovely!
The tree placement is great as well as the houses, rocks and whatever.
8/10

PS. The small rocks remind me of Runescape. O.o

Lucario 9
August 3rd, 2008, 01:31 PM
i just made a quick map
please rate

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route.jpg?t=1217770150

Quickster
August 3rd, 2008, 07:21 PM
Heres the forst town in my upcoming hack.

Map name:Greenleaf town.

Map Game:fire red

Comments:credit to x-buster and forgoten memmory for rom base.

http://i33.tinypic.com/2q8txqh.jpg

Austinia
August 3rd, 2008, 07:29 PM
1 more map by me. :D
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/kickbutt.jpg
Did you learn to insert tiles? =O

And the map is nice. Only thing I don't like is the mart so close to the building.
8.9/10

.Pichu-kun
August 3rd, 2008, 07:46 PM
@riolu 9: Everything is good, but the only thing I found wrong, was at the top of the mountain, ur missing a piece...9/10

@Austinia: Nope, that was just a Rom Base on page 2 of the ROM Hacking Resources thread! XD

Lucario 9
August 3rd, 2008, 07:48 PM
@riolu 9: Everything is good, but the only thing I found wrong, was at the top of the mountain, ur missing a piece...9/10

@Austinia: Nope, that was just a Rom Base on page 2 of the ROM Hacking Resources thread! XD
yeah i just missed that cause i was in a rush but if you were playing it you couldnt see it anyway thanks for the rate

Quilava's Master
August 3rd, 2008, 09:12 PM
Heres the forst town in my upcoming hack.

Map name:Greenleaf town.

Map Game:fire red

Comments:credit to x-buster and forgoten memmory for rom base.

http://i33.tinypic.com/2q8txqh.jpg

eh...again with that rombase which was quite buggy (goto the Sevii Islands to get what im tlkin bout)
well there are WAY to many rocks...the floweres in a row no comment >.< This maybe the first town but jeeze add a little life into it..And it looks like you avoided the its too square comment by adding extra trees to tha bottom sides..

I give this map a 6/10

Neti
August 3rd, 2008, 09:16 PM
eh...again with that rombase which was quite buggy (goto the Sevii Islands to get what im tlkin bout)
well there are WAY to many rocks...the floweres in a row no comment >.< This maybe the first town but jeeze add a little life into it..And it looks like you avoided the its too square comment by adding extra trees to tha bottom sides..

I give this map a 6/10

wait... did you say there are too many rocks?
there are WAY to many rocksoh yes, you really did...
Thre is not a SINGLE Rock on that map! Dude what are you talkin about?^^
btw its not good that there is no rock, but therefor there are too many bushes and flowers
and the flowers are too ordered like you already said

Quilava's Master
August 3rd, 2008, 09:56 PM
wait... did you say there are too many rocks?
oh yes, you really did...
Thre is not a SINGLE Rock on that map! Dude what are you talkin about?^^
btw its not good that there is no rock, but therefor there are too many bushes and flowers
and the flowers are too ordered like you already said

lol well i thought the green things were rocks...arent they? the thingies next to the door of the houses

Neti
August 3rd, 2008, 09:58 PM
those are bushes^^
i dont know no green rocks... maybe when theyre covered with moss

Lucario 9
August 3rd, 2008, 11:40 PM
those are bushes^^
i dont know no green rocks... maybe when theyre covered with mossyeah they could be lol and there are too many flowers and its too small i give it 3/10

Quickster
August 3rd, 2008, 11:46 PM
eh...again with that rombase which was quite buggy (goto the Sevii Islands to get what im tlkin bout)
well there are WAY to many rocks...the floweres in a row no comment >.< This maybe the first town but jeeze add a little life into it..And it looks like you avoided the its too square comment by adding extra trees to tha bottom sides..

I give this map a 6/10

could you maybe give me some tips on how to make it more lively and less squarish without the trees?

MudMast
August 4th, 2008, 01:15 AM
I'm here again. (For my second? post)

Anyway:

Map Name: Twinleaf Town
Map Game: Pokémon Alpha (Ruby)
Comments: The first Town in my Hack. Set 20 Years Later than the events of DP.
I know there are no Signposts on Your /Your Rivals houses, they are meant to be like that.
I know the map is square in some parts.

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee148/MudMast/09.jpg

Osher99
August 4th, 2008, 06:29 AM
Map Name: Rotel Town.

Map Game: FireRed.

Comments: Just Rate it. Thanks. ^^

Mapshot:

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/8571/roteltownuh3.jpg

Ninja Caterpie
August 4th, 2008, 09:11 AM
Hey there!
I got a new map!
It's the first floor of Mt. ... Name Pending.

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/7771/mtmap1mb9.png

PokemonRoxMed
August 4th, 2008, 01:44 PM
I don't know what to say! It's just awesome!!

.Iramet
August 4th, 2008, 01:50 PM
NAME-fonley town
GAME-ruby
COMMENTS-supposed to be a harbor town

PokemonRoxMed
August 4th, 2008, 01:52 PM
your probably a NewB like me, right? Lots of tile errors. Why is Raikou just standing there?

loitraitim
August 4th, 2008, 02:00 PM
Map Name: Ishika Town
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: Just Rate it. Thanks. ^^ (tile by XRichie and leader group Marble)
Mapshot

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3285/pallettownij0.png

Quilava's Master
August 4th, 2008, 02:09 PM
Map Name: Ishika Town
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: Just Rate it. Thanks. ^^ (tile by XRichie and leader group Marble)
Mapshot

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3285/pallettownij0.png

Loitraitim strikes again! Only thing i dont like is the random tree next to the house..Either add another tree to another house or jus remove it eihter way

9.5/10

Neti
August 4th, 2008, 02:41 PM
just thought i should post a map here again^^
Map Name: Route 12
Game: FR BPRE
Comments: Theres a Sandstorm on that route
The South is blocked with a strength stone cause you will be able to get there later
The player will be comin from the right and leave tthe map at thee top left
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/route12.png

.Iramet
August 4th, 2008, 02:55 PM
pokemonroxmed can you show me the tile errors other than the ones for the white things border^_^

cε׀׀
August 4th, 2008, 03:04 PM
just thought i should post a map here again^^
Map Name: Route 12
Game: FR BPRE
Comments: Theres a Sandstorm on that route
The South is blocked with a strength stone cause you will be able to get there later
The player will be comin from the right and leave tthe map at thee top left
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/route12.png

Rating: 9.5/10
Reason: An excellent map. I've never seen such a great desert type map before. It looks really nice with the tiles you've used and the placement of all the rocks and ledges is good.
The whole idea of the map looks superb. Nice!
Suggestions: None apparently, but I think you've used alot of those small rock tiles. Anyways, the map looks really good.

destinedjagold
August 4th, 2008, 03:07 PM
Map Name: Ishika Town
Map Game: Fire Red
Comments: Just Rate it. Thanks. ^^ (tile by XRichie and leader group Marble)
Mapshot

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3285/pallettownij0.png

COMMENT: the lab-like building is a bit thin, is it not?
RATINGS: 9/10
REASON: I truly love it.
SUGGESTION: The lab. Eek... >.<

Osher99
August 4th, 2008, 04:07 PM
Map Name: Rotel Town.

Map Game: FireRed.

Comments: Just Rate it. Thanks. ^^

Mapshot:

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/8571/roteltownuh3.jpg

Neti
August 4th, 2008, 04:14 PM
I think you already posted that one...
There are a lot of sqarish parts and straight lines of trees and mountains in it
also you have overdone it with paths and there are a lot of empty areas
just check the parts i marked:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/mistakes.png
the nred stuff are squarisch and straight things, the blue things are useless paths
and add some life to it.. maybe add some elevations or fences, that divide the town into parts

.Iramet
August 4th, 2008, 07:02 PM
NAME-dunno yet
GAME-fire red
COMMENTS-thanks to pho for the rombase

Ninja Caterpie
August 5th, 2008, 09:46 AM
Ok...no one looks at the page before and the only reply I got was "It's awesome!" so...here it is again...
First floor of a mountain...

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/7771/mtmap1mb9.png

And...another one. A peninsula.

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2352/peninsulavy8.png

Yeah, so...just rate them please!

Lucario 9
August 5th, 2008, 01:04 PM
Ok...no one looks at the page before and the only reply I got was "It's awesome!" so...here it is again...
First floor of a mountain...

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/7771/mtmap1mb9.png

And...another one. A peninsula.

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2352/peninsulavy8.png

Yeah, so...just rate them please!the shape of the cave *i love it* its really good but i think you should put a bit more rocks i give it 10/10 well done

the second map a bit small and i love them little cliffs and its near a beach whoo i give it 8/10
them maps are really good

Neti
August 5th, 2008, 04:34 PM
remember this map i posted on the last site?
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/route12.png
Ive edited the Tileset a bit and adjusted thee map, ratings plz:
http://eugenier.eu.ohost.de/hack/maps/2route12.png
This time i made the mapshot without events, just sayin this cause some people might wonder where all the trainers went^^
the new grass and trees are made by PHO, credit goes to them
btw im currently editing that crater thing cause i find it ugly^^ pls rate the map without it, cause otherwise i have ti upload the new image again

Turtwigtoon
August 5th, 2008, 04:38 PM
hey Neti, the new maps great! However can you take a few of the small rocks? There still are too much in one place! (Bottom Right Corner!) The grass fits in and it is a great desert route that blends everything within together!

Rating: 9.9/10

Anyway, can anyone rate my map? Its already been posted for a hack that I'm helping on, but can it be improved?

Name: (Name Here) Forest

Description: A forest.

Comment: Can anything be improved? Can you rate it too please?

Mitchman Is
August 5th, 2008, 04:45 PM
COMMENT: the lab-like building is a bit thin, is it not?
RATINGS: 9/10
REASON: I truly love it.
SUGGESTION: The lab. Eek... >.<
Jagold i would complain to baro bout that. Its his lab if i remember

Neti
August 5th, 2008, 04:47 PM
hey Neti, the new maps great! However can you take a few of the small rocks? There still are too much in one place! (Bottom Right Corner!) The grass fits in and it is a great desert route that blends everything within together!

Rating: 9.9/10
The many rocks are supposed to be all at one spot, theyre blocking the entrance to crossbone graveyard. that entrance is a bit like a canyon and so there are many rocks

Turtwigtoon
August 6th, 2008, 10:22 AM
Thank you for clearing that up Neti. I still stand by my statement of too many rocks, but I now know why that is. Can anyone rate my map still?

Name: (Name Here) Forest

Description: A forest

Comments: Can you rate it please?

MudMast
August 6th, 2008, 05:29 PM
please don't attach the image, put it in image tags.
Thank you for clearing that up Neti. I still stand by my statement of too many rocks, but I now know why that is. Can anyone rate my map still?

Name: (Name Here) Forest

Description: A forest

Comments: Can you rate it please?

http://www.pokecommunity.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=42270&d=1218018184

like that.
oops, 7/10 - EDIT

anyway, its actually, quite good.
I like how it bends round, forcing you to follow it, but there are a few things I suggest you do.

I suggest you change how it is too square, how the trees are at a right angle, doesn't look real.
Also, with the grass, don't make it as a rectangular shape, like in the middle.
3: Not all of the space has to be filled, klike in the bottom right corner, leave some blank grass tiles.
Last: Too many signposts! Too many, and too many cramped up together. Try moving some around the map, and maybe remove a few.

1215912159
August 6th, 2008, 07:51 PM
Map Name: Rotel Town.

Map Game: FireRed.

Comments: Just Rate it. Thanks. ^^

Mapshot:

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/8571/roteltownuh3.jpg


um...im not a pro at mapping but...this map looks sort of...blank.

a lot of it is square which never makes a good map. those trees are at a perfect / so its not a good set up. a sugestion from me would be to take out the bottom three trees, move the mart to behind the pokecenter (Cuz that REALLY looks blank) and put up a big building or sky scraper just to give it a little more...city look.

around...6.5/10 its too blank!

.Iramet
August 6th, 2008, 07:55 PM
hey I give oshers map a 6 it is waay to square

cooley
August 6th, 2008, 08:33 PM
Name of Map: Route 24

From: Pokemon FireRed :D

Screenie:

http://i35.tinypic.com/35kirs3.jpg

Comments:
Part of my hack, I just finished it today, and I have to say...I am proud of it!
Please rate, I'll accept ratings from 10 or higher! :P

P.S. I made those GSC headbutt trees myself ;)
P.S.S. I did not use that guys RomBase, I only took some tree and path tiles...

+Sneasel™
August 6th, 2008, 08:40 PM
Map Name: Route 24

From: Pokemon FireRed :D

Screenie:

http://i35.tinypic.com/35kirs3.jpg

Comments:
Part of my hack, I just finished it today, and I have to say...I am proud of it!
Please rate, I'll accept ratings from 10 or higher! :P


Great map!
I love the tiles and palletes, the trees look great! The placement of them rocks too! I like the way the mountain starts off rocky, and then turns to grass, its cool :)
I give it a 10/10, there is honestly nothing wrong with it and it looks great!

Alizée Jacotey
August 6th, 2008, 08:45 PM
Name of Map: Route 24

From: Pokemon FireRed :D

Screenie:

http://i35.tinypic.com/35kirs3.jpg

Comments:
Part of my hack, I just finished it today, and I have to say...I am proud of it!
Please rate, I'll accept ratings from 10 or higher! :P

P.S. I made those GSC headbutt trees myself ;)
P.S.S. I did not use that guys RomBase, I only took some tree and path tiles...


Hey cooley!
Lovely map! i love the tiles and also the palettes.
The unique thing I see wrong with it is about the rocy path after you climb the stairs. it should be other tile unless you make a grass-rock connection. :P
By the way, you should also insert some grass (pokémon) to it.
Anyways, I rate it 9/10!

~Fire
August 6th, 2008, 11:46 PM
No map ratings for now.
alright, i have found a new tree tile that i loved.
Map name:Skull woods
Game:Firered
comments: I named it skull woods because to me, it looked like the trees resembled skulls.
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2326/skullwoodsdk8.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2326/skullwoodsdk8.a9d55177db.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=150&i=skullwoodsdk8.png)
Credits To Alistair and PHO for the trees

Aquila
August 7th, 2008, 12:38 AM
No map ratings for now.
alright, i have found a new tree tile that i loved.
Map name:Skull woods
Game:Firered
comments: I named it skull woods because to me, it looked like the trees resembled skulls.
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2326/skullwoodsdk8.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2326/skullwoodsdk8.a9d55177db.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=150&i=skullwoodsdk8.png)
Credits To Alistair and PHO for the trees

Rating: 7/10
Reason: I get the feel that the mountains don't belong in there. And the trees on the top of your map is in a line and pretty square compared to the other places..

~Fire
August 7th, 2008, 12:41 AM
Rating: 7/10
Reason: I get the feel that the mountains don't belong in there. And the trees on the top of your map is in a line and pretty square compared to the other places..

Yeah, i was trying to make it better, but the connections would screw up.
and i just hate maps without rocky tiles in them.
i also had the feeling that it was too empty to be a forest.

.Iramet
August 7th, 2008, 01:36 PM
I give cooleys map a 10 10

Mr.Fury
August 7th, 2008, 04:41 PM
Name: ?
Rom: Firered
Its the starting town.
Comments:
I made half of it at like 3 in the morning and woke up and finished it.
Its like my fifth map.

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/4997/startingtownhc4.th.png

Lornami
August 7th, 2008, 08:00 PM
Map Name: ???

Map Game: FireRed

Comments:
I literally started mapping last night. LOL. So I don't have any custom tile sets for the fact that it wasn't until this morning I learned how to edit them to try to fix a problem. (Which wasn't fixed, hah.)
This town is ment to be very nature 'secret stuck in the woods' town even if it is big. Thus there is not defined routes out of the town. The second one is only a square big, but I actually havn't made the route for there yet.

Mapshot:
:o Clicky (http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii25/Rachae_Bossier_Art/blanktown.png)

~Areku-San
August 8th, 2008, 01:44 AM
Hi n_n.
Is my 1st post in this thread.
I present my 2 best maps of the Second Beta of my Hack, Pokemon Darkblue.

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb243/Hacker_Lex/Gym-2.png
The Fire gym. (With Switches, it changes the lasers)

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb243/Hacker_Lex/Saka-Mizu.png
The Saka-Mizu Falls
Other Map. With a second map variation. (With Water, i do not the map yet)

EDIT:
My 1600th Post. jojo :P

Alizée Jacotey
August 8th, 2008, 01:53 AM
Hi n_n.
Is my 1st post in this thread.
I present my 2 best maps of the Second Beta of my Hack, Pokemon Darkblue.

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb243/Hacker_Lex/Gym-2.png
The Fire gym. (With Switches, it changes the lasers)

Wow, lex this map is great! I love how you placed the lasers, and also the lava, but you should change the palettes, of the floor, put it like green or something or gray.
Cool map!
9/10

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb243/Hacker_Lex/Saka-Mizu.png
The Saka-Mizu Falls
Other Map. With a second map variation. (With Water, i do not the map yet)

Cool! Map I love the mazes in it also the placement fo the rocks.
Awesome palettes too, though they look like if it was already filled with water:P
9.5/10

Islander Jon
August 8th, 2008, 04:37 AM
Map Name: Route 1 (New)
Game: Pokémon Sunset (Name Pending)

Here's a Map for a New Game I'm working on called Pokémon Sunset, which is supposed to be a Pokémon Orange Islands Remake. Anyone, please rate! :)

http://i33.tinypic.com/iy341l.png

P.S. I've realized the tree tile errors. I plan to edit those later :)

Also, the PokéCenter and PokéMart are there just for visual purposes. I've realized that you can't enter them. AND the end of the route leads somewhere...just sayin' ;)

Neti
August 8th, 2008, 10:52 AM
Hi n_n.
Is my 1st post in this thread.
I present my 2 best maps of the Second Beta of my Hack, Pokemon Darkblue.

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb243/Hacker_Lex/Gym-2.png
The Fire gym. (With Switches, it changes the lasers)

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb243/Hacker_Lex/Saka-Mizu.png
The Saka-Mizu Falls
Other Map. With a second map variation. (With Water, i do not the map yet)

EDIT:
My 1600th Post. jojo :P

absolutely beuatiful tiles! did you make them on yourself?
and the maps are brilliant as well
goodluck with your hack!

Osher99
August 8th, 2008, 06:22 PM
Map Name: Gorip Town

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: Just made it.
Rate it quickly.
Thanks ^_^

Mapshot:

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6629/goriptowngz3.jpg

Lucario 9
August 8th, 2008, 10:08 PM
map name : route 1 duh
gamebase:ruby
comments:iv inserted a few tiles and im trying to get better at mapping ruby cause ruby isnt my game to hack so anyway please rate

map:

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1-4.jpg?t=1218232942

~element
August 8th, 2008, 10:14 PM
map name : route 1 duh
gamebase:ruby
comments:iv inserted a few tiles and im trying to get better at mapping ruby cause ruby isnt my game to hack so anyway please rate

map:

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1-4.jpg?t=1218232942
the route itself is good but i don't really like the color of the tiles, with that said...
9/10 just the route
6/10 the tiles.

Osher99
August 8th, 2008, 11:02 PM
map name : route 1 duh
gamebase:ruby
comments:iv inserted a few tiles and im trying to get better at mapping ruby cause ruby isnt my game to hack so anyway please rate

map:

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1-4.jpg?t=1218232942

Really good map I like the tilles 8/10

BTW:

Some1 can rate my map?

http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=3839943&postcount=1605

.Pichu-kun
August 9th, 2008, 02:51 AM
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/sentas.jpg
Sentas Village

Blazichu
August 9th, 2008, 03:07 AM
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/sentas.jpg
Sentas Village

Maybe add an outline to the smaller trees and the shrubs; and use some new houses that suit the DP style. Other then that the map is fine. So I'll give it an 8/10.

.Pichu-kun
August 9th, 2008, 03:13 AM
Wow!
Thanks for rating my map Blazichu! :D
But, what do you mean by: "Maybe add an outline to the smaller trees and the shrubs"? :\

Blazichu
August 9th, 2008, 03:23 AM
Wow!
Thanks for rating my map Blazichu! :D
But, what do you mean by: "Maybe add an outline to the smaller trees and the shrubs"? :\

Add a darker outline to the smaller trees and shrubs to make them stand out more, like the DP style trees.

Osher99
August 9th, 2008, 08:32 AM
Map Name: Gorip Town

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: Any1 Rate it !!

Mapshot:

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6629/goriptowngz3.jpg

Alizée Jacotey
August 9th, 2008, 03:02 PM
Map Name: Gorip Town

Map Game: Fire Red

Comments: Any1 Rate it !!

Mapshot:

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/6629/goriptowngz3.jpg


Well this map is too square, the placement of the buildings is kinda like parallel, the lake is too big but it is good, no tile errors, well, the only bad thing is that is too square, I rate it with 6/10

+Sneasel™
August 9th, 2008, 05:19 PM
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/sentas.jpg
Sentas Village

I like the map a lot! It's not square, has no tile errors. The only thing I'm wondering is why put the path into the trees? Well, anyway, 9/10 until I find out the reason behind the path into the trees ;)

.Pichu-kun
August 9th, 2008, 05:48 PM
Thanks! :D
-----------------
Well, the ips patch for Emerald finally worked, so I got to make a map with this Rom Base! :Dhttp://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/emermap.jpg

Does anyone remember this Rom Base? ;)
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/aeiou.jpg

maoh4567
August 10th, 2008, 09:44 AM
Map Name: (No name) cave
Map Game: FireRed
Comments: This is my first map post, i made this map for my upcoming hack. pls rate this one, i will also accept any comments or suggestions :D

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/3673/namelesscavetr5.th.png (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=namelesscavetr5.png)

Neti
August 10th, 2008, 09:50 AM
this is your first map? wow^^
its better than some peoples 10th map xD
there might be problems with the elevations where the mountains hover each other, i think at the bottom theres a mistake
but you have a lot of details on the map and its not squarish
also youve added an additonal path which you can only go with a hm, most ppl forget about that possibility
you could add more rocks (even big ones that consist of 4 or more mountain tiles) onto the path, to make it a bit more winded
but for a first map its really damn good!
7/10

maoh4567
August 10th, 2008, 10:17 AM
this is your first map? wow^^
its better than some peoples 10th map xD
there might be problems with the elevations where the mountains hover each other, i think at the bottom theres a mistake
but you have a lot of details on the map and its not squarish
also youve added an additonal path which you can only go with a hm, most ppl forget about that possibility
you could add more rocks (even big ones that consist of 4 or more mountain tiles) onto the path, to make it a bit more winded
but for a first map its really damn good!
7/10

thnx for ur suggestions Neti XD, ive created another map again...
Map Name: Spring Village
Game:FireRed
Comments: The starter town in my hack... pls rate,comment or suggest

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9471/springvillageee0.th.png (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=springvillageee0.png)

Lucario 9
August 10th, 2008, 01:39 PM
iv made a map but a bit small but oh well

rom map :fire red

map :

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/map.jpg?t=1218375152

please rate

cε׀׀
August 10th, 2008, 03:37 PM
thnx for ur suggestions Neti XD, ive created another map again...
Map Name: Spring Village
Game:FireRed
Comments: The starter town in my hack... pls rate,comment or suggest

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9471/springvillageee0.th.png (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=springvillageee0.png)
Rate: 7.5/10
Reason: It looks like a pretty nice map. The placement of the trees is great. There are some empty spaces. The house without the door looks wierd in come way XD And I don't like the boulders. The map looks pretty good though.
Suggestions: Don't leave too many spaces empty and don't use too many boulders. It ruins the map. Try to add some more creativity to the map.

.Pichu-kun
August 10th, 2008, 04:06 PM
@riolu 9: Nice map, not that square, but some empty spaces.
8/10
----------------------
You see?!
People almost always skip my maps here! >_<
Could someone please rate them? :)
Click here. (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=3843011&postcount=1616)

Osher99
August 10th, 2008, 07:17 PM
Map Name: SandBeach Town

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: Just made it! Brand new! Rate it!

Mapshot:


http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5482/sandbeachtownzl9.jpg

.Pichu-kun
August 10th, 2008, 07:29 PM
Could someone rate my maps please? >_<
(Second time people skipped me!!!)
Click here. (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=3843011&postcount=1616)

KhaosKnight
August 10th, 2008, 07:33 PM
Map Name: SandBeach Town

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: Just made it! Brand new! Rate it!

Mapshot:


http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5482/sandbeachtownzl9.jpg


Rating: 5/10
Reason: To square, there are alot of unneaded paths, and the beach line is rather...dull.

Turtwigtoon
August 10th, 2008, 07:37 PM
Could someone rate my maps please? >_<
(Second time people skipped me!!!)
Click here. (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=3843011&postcount=1616)

Nice map. not too square and is nicely put. However, the path istoo bright in my eyes, but thats all I can see.

9/10, I'd say.

Mr.Fury
August 10th, 2008, 07:42 PM
Could someone rate my maps please? >_<
(Second time people skipped me!!!)
Click here. (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=3843011&postcount=1616)
9/10
Everything is nicely done, i dont see any tile errors and it just looks great.
But i really dont like the rocks, i dont know why, it just doesnt seem to fit in.
And btw I checked out that map tutorial you sent me, it helped my maps greatly.
Thank you.

Heres one i made with the help of it:
Please rate. ^_^

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/424/firstroutexe8.th.png (http://img150.imageshack.us/my.php?image=firstroutexe8.png)

~Fire
August 10th, 2008, 07:54 PM
Map Name: (No name) cave
Map Game: FireRed
Comments: This is my first map post, i made this map for my upcoming hack. pls rate this one, i will also accept any comments or suggestions :D

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/3673/namelesscavetr5.th.png (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=namelesscavetr5.png)

wow, this map is really good for the first try.
Before i rate it, i am wondering if you have read any tutorials before you made this.
well, the map looks really nice but straightforward.
It'd be better if you made it at least a bit more complex because the exit is only 10 steps away, and i just hate plain maps.
the mountain tiles were placed really good and professionally, it looks great because of that.
However, it doesn't make sense why its like that unless you plan to make it like mt. coronet.
7.5/10
suggestions: Make it more complex is all. It looks great otherwise.

thnx for ur suggestions Neti XD, ive created another map again...
Map Name: Spring Village
Game:FireRed
Comments: The starter town in my hack... pls rate,comment or suggest

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9471/springvillageee0.th.png (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=springvillageee0.png)

Eh... i don't like it that much.
There are too much flowers on the right side, not enough on the left side.
there are too much rocks and the rocks seem really crowded.
The house has no purpose, but the vegetation(trees only) is placed good.
however, there could be more small trees on the left side.
The path seems nice, and its really peaceful.
6.5/10
Suggestions: More flowers, spread them apart, and less rocks.
also, remove the windowless, doorless house.
it looks creepy.

Could someone rate my maps please? >_<
(Second time people skipped me!!!)
Click here. (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=3843011&postcount=1616)
Its just me, but it would look better with the original tileset.
The path looks bad, there's only 3 flowers, and the skinny tree border seems...bad.
however, the other vegetation is good,and so is the placement of the ladge.
7/10
Suggestions: It would be better with the original tileset, add more flowers, don't make the path so fat, and fix the house placement.

I'll probably rate the other maps later, so don't worry.

.Pichu-kun
August 10th, 2008, 08:05 PM
Thanks, but you all do realize that there IS another map in the spoiler.

Lucario 9
August 10th, 2008, 08:26 PM
iv made route 1

rom game : fire red

map:

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1-5.jpg?t=1218399945

please rate

.Pichu-kun
August 11th, 2008, 01:43 AM
I guess I'll rate it now. :\

Rating: 9.6/10
Errors: N/A
Suggestions: Add 2 more flowers at the very top of your map and lessen the grass and your good. ;)
Comments: I really love the shape. :)
The ledges, some people won't exactly "approve" of them being like that, but I like it! XD

~element
August 11th, 2008, 01:53 AM
hi! well here's the second route for my hack pokemon blue revelation! (also known as deep blue)
rome game:fire red
comments: well this is for the water sector of my hack!
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2759/route22uf3.th.png (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=route22uf3.png)

.:God:.
August 11th, 2008, 02:00 AM
hi! well here's the second route for my hack pokemon blue revelation! (also known as deep blue)
rome game:fire red
comments: well this is for the water sector of my hack!
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2759/route22uf3.th.png (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=route22uf3.png)

Not very good graphics but....
WAY TOO MUCH GRASS!! It's boring, there are tile errors on the bottom of the pond and there are no consistent border blocks.
I give it 4.7/10

megiddo
August 11th, 2008, 05:57 AM
Game: Firered
A route I made with a lot of choices of where to go.
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/multichoiceroute.jpg?t=1218434012

Disturbed
August 11th, 2008, 04:03 PM
iv made route 1

rom game : fire red

map:

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/route1-5.jpg?t=1218399945

please rate


Rating, 5/10
Reason: WAY too much grass once again. Some of the trees have tile errors, and most of the ledges are completly unnecessary. Also, grass in unreachable places is not good and not original. Sorry to say that again, you don't have the shadows on the left side of the stairs. Fix all that up and it'll be a 9/10. Sorry if I sounded harsh.
hi! well here's the second route for my hack pokemon blue revelation! (also known as deep blue)
rome game:fire red
comments: well this is for the water sector of my hack!
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2759/route22uf3.th.png (http://img521.imageshack.us/my.php?image=route22uf3.png)
Rating- 3/10
Reason: The map does not even need to be half that size. Too many empty areas throughout the whole map, and there are tile errors by the bottom. Also, the grass as a filler is horrible. It just needs to be fixed all over the place.

Game: Firered
A route I made with a lot of choices of where to go.
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/oddigem/multichoiceroute.jpg?t=1218434012
Rating: 6.5/10
Reason: I like this map. It seems to flow well. The grass is very well placed. It is a little square to me, and also, there are tile errors above the waterfall that need fixing.

.Iramet
August 11th, 2008, 04:15 PM
I love your map meggido the one with the waterfall...but the mountans on th etop have tile errors but other than that i love it 8/10

Osher99
August 11th, 2008, 11:27 PM
Map Name: Loret City

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: Just made it
Rate it Please =)

Mapshot:

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/561/loretcitywu6.jpg

.Pichu-kun
August 11th, 2008, 11:30 PM
@Osher99: You seem to have gotten a little better at mapping. :)
There are no tile errors, but, the only problem you are having with your maps are, that they are too square, and WAY too much unused space.
5.673/10

~element
August 12th, 2008, 12:27 AM
well i know no one likes my maps but i decided to make one for my friends hack...
map name: tropica town

game base: fire red


comments: i did not make the marts color

map:http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk126/example_02/tropicanatown.jpg

+Sneasel™
August 12th, 2008, 12:58 AM
well i know no one likes my maps but i decided to make one for my friends hack...
map name: tropica town

game base: fire red


comments: i did not make the marts color

map:http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk126/example_02/tropicanatown.jpg
I like this map, its simple yet perfect. The marts color is fine, I mean, it doesn't have to be blue! There are some tile errors near the waterfall, the cave should just extend into it, not curve up. All in all, great map, 9/10
Another suggestion is that I would make the rocks a little zigzag at the bottom, not just in a straight line, cause that's boring ;)

~element
August 12th, 2008, 01:01 AM
Thanks :) and i will work on the suggestions :)

.Pichu-kun
August 12th, 2008, 01:15 AM
Yo peeps. :D
I gots me a new map to post:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/mynewpalsmap.jpg
Please rate and comment. :)
P.S. This is a sneak peek of some new palettes I made. ;)

.:God:.
August 12th, 2008, 01:33 AM
Yo peeps. :D
I gots me a new map to post:
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/mynewpalsmap.jpg
Please rate and comment. :)
P.S. This is a sneak peek of some new palettes I made. ;)

Pretty cool Eevee. Don't like the use of the one particular house the whole way and one house has no windows. Unless it's meant to have a lot of rocks or something, I'd say there are too uch. | I'll give it a 8/10.

+Sneasel™
August 12th, 2008, 03:57 AM
Hey, rate this :)

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg90/itman/Amityville.jpg

Yay, hope you guys like it!

.Pichu-kun
August 12th, 2008, 04:30 AM
I love it. :)
The only problem is that it has way to much unused space.
7.3/10

Lucario 9
August 12th, 2008, 11:49 AM
hey i fixed my map
please rate now

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/map-1.jpg?t=1218541694

Neti
August 12th, 2008, 12:36 PM
Hey, rate this :)

http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg90/itman/Amityville.jpg

Yay, hope you guys like it!
hey i like it, you seeem to have some serious skills
but as wind already said, theres too much unused space
if you practice a bit more you can become a great mapper for sure

Disturbed
August 12th, 2008, 04:50 PM
hey i fixed my map
please rate now

http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm104/GOLDENRIOLU/map-1.jpg?t=1218541694

Much better!! I like the sand too. BTW, you didnt fix the small trees in the top left corner though. 8.5/10


EDIT: Forgot to mention, if you surf to the west side, you can see the Cliff go into the border

EDIT: (again: Since nobody has posted since I did, I have to edit this post. Here is my most recent Map.

Forest Pathway (FireRed)
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/GreenForest100.png

.Pichu-kun
August 13th, 2008, 03:15 AM
@maraudah: The shape is good and everything is put together nicely, but, there are a few empty spots.
9.8/10
------------------------------
Here's my map.
It's the starter town for my hack re-done.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/nstpb.jpg
Please rate and comment. :)
Thank you.

Osher99
August 13th, 2008, 09:51 AM
Map Name: Tombe Cave

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: 2 Maps of Tombel Cave.. Rate ut Thanks ^^

Mapshot:


Map 1:
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/973/tombelcaveaws5.jpg

Map 2 :

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9426/tombelcavebcz8.jpg

Bishopk
August 13th, 2008, 03:09 PM
Here's my map.
It's the starter town for my hack re-done.
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/nstpb.jpg
Please rate and comment. :)
Thank you.

I love snow towns, and this one is beautiful. My only complaint would be that the path seems to dominate the map, but in such a small town I understand that.
9.7/10

Map Name: Tombe Cave

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: 2 Maps of Tombel Cave.. Rate ut Thanks ^^

Mapshot:


Map 1:
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/973/tombelcaveaws5.jpg

Map 2 :

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9426/tombelcavebcz8.jpg

No cave is that square. While it may be quicker just to make squares, try to take the extra time and make it more convoluted, like a natural-made cave.
The second map, since it's tiny, is acceptable. I would fix the second set of stairs in the middle, I think it's going the wrong way.
6/10

.Pichu-kun
August 13th, 2008, 03:23 PM
Thanks for the rating. :)
I think I know how to fix it. ;)

Mr.Fury
August 15th, 2008, 03:06 AM
Alright guys after looking over netis tut and many failed attempts i believe that for once i have made a decent map. but i am not the judge here, you are.

what do you think:
name: iunno that one map

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9976/mehthatoneplacezu3.th.png (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mehthatoneplacezu3.png)

.Pichu-kun
August 15th, 2008, 03:31 AM
This is a pretty good map. :)
The path and pond are nice, the building placement is descent.
But, two pokemon centers? :\
Also, your gonna have border errors and an empty spot below the PC at the left.
5.3/10

Mr.Fury
August 16th, 2008, 06:11 AM
This is a pretty good map. :)
The path and pond are nice, the building placement is descent.
But, two pokemon centers? :\
Also, your gonna have border errors and an empty spot below the PC at the left.
5.3/10

There is a cave that you go through. So you should be pretty roughed up after you get out of the cave.

Seraron~
August 16th, 2008, 12:04 PM
Here I prove to be two maps of my game: Pkmn Lost Treasure.

Isla Zero ->

http://i38.tinypic.com/35bf8e9.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/35bf8e9.jpg (http://i38.tinypic.com/35bf8e9.jpg)

Inverse World ->

http://i37.tinypic.com/o791yh.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/o791yh.jpg

For Mr.Fury: 7, two centers?? xD
For Wind: 8 ;)
For Osher99: 6,5 has some Mistakes

cε׀׀
August 16th, 2008, 12:38 PM
Here I prove to be two maps of my game: Pkmn Lost Treasure.

Isla Zero ->

http://i38.tinypic.com/35bf8e9.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/35bf8e9.jpg (http://i38.tinypic.com/35bf8e9.jpg)

Inverse World ->

http://i37.tinypic.com/o791yh.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/o791yh.jpg

For Mr.Fury: 7, two centers?? xD
For Wind: 8 ;)
For Osher99: 6,5 has some Mistakes

1st map:
Rating: 9/10
Reason: I think it's a great map. I like everything about it. The tiles are great and the palletes really match. Everything looks really neat and tidy and I love your way of mapping. It looks really good. Superb job.

Inverse World
Rating: 9.5/10
Reason: OMG where did you get that idea? *steals idea* XD. That's like the most imaginative map I've ever seen. It seems to be like somewhere in space. Really super job. The tiles look really awesome and I like the complete Idea of the map. Well done.

Mr.Fury
August 16th, 2008, 04:32 PM
Wind~ and Seraron~
if you enlarge the picture you can see that there is a huge cave dividing the area, its a cave that is early on so you have to go through it. and you should be pretty beat up by the time you get out.

@ Seraron your maps are great.

9 for the first one because i dunno. XD
its to good to give it anything less but not good enough to give a 10.
if that clears things up.

same for the second one.

colcolstyles
August 17th, 2008, 05:21 AM
Map Name: Route 5 (?)

Map Game: http://members.optusnet.com.au/soanevalcke/famepublication/badge-firered.png BPRE

Comments: This a route I have been working on for quite some time now. I thought I'd put it up here for some suggestions. This is my first time posting here so let me know of anything I need to change so I can break any bad habits now.
EDIT: Oh and there's a trainer blocking the exit in the southwest corner between the two smaller trees.

Mapshot: http://homepage.mac.com/loristyles/.Pictures/newmapstuffsplzkthanxbai/route5_6-NO-EVENT.jpg

.Pichu-kun
August 17th, 2008, 05:42 AM
This is absolutely a wonderful map! :D
I love the shape, the waterfall, and the little sandy area! XD
Except, your missing 2 tiles in the little crater on the left mountain near the bottom. :\
9.7/10

Neti
August 17th, 2008, 08:42 AM
Map Name: Route 5 (?)

Map Game: http://members.optusnet.com.au/soanevalcke/famepublication/badge-firered.png BPRE

Comments: This a route I have been working on for quite some time now. I thought I'd put it up here for some suggestions. This is my first time posting here so let me know of anything I need to change so I can break any bad habits now.
EDIT: Oh and there's a trainer blocking the exit in the southwest corner between the two smaller trees.

Mapshot: http://homepage.mac.com/loristyles/.Pictures/newmapstuffsplzkthanxbai/route5_6-NO-EVENT.jpg
this is such a wonderful map!
i really dont see anything you could have done better, the shape of the river is awesome, the mountains looks natural, the grass and trees are placed brilliant!
that you even placed a shadow under the bridge is really nice, i would have forgotten to do that
it looks a bit like a route of ruby, but your version is way better^^
10/10
if we would be in need of a mapper i would ask you whether you want to join RomReaverz :p
im sure when applying with this map every hacking team will accept you if theyre in need of a mapper

44tim44
August 17th, 2008, 11:41 AM
Map Name: Route 1 (Couldn't come up with a better name...)

Map Game: Fire Red BPRE

MapShot:
http://i33.tinypic.com/14xdyxv.png


//44tim44

Ninja Caterpie
August 17th, 2008, 11:44 AM
Colcostyles, everything about that map is absolutely wonderful.
The shape of the trees, the shape of the mountain, everything. It's so big, but so good, that the minuscule tile errors don't change anything.
I don't normally give something like this but...
10/10

44Tim44...
You can walk through the whole thing without touching any grass. At all.
Other than that...hmm...
7/10

44tim44
August 17th, 2008, 11:54 AM
Colcostyles, everything about that map is absolutely wonderful.
The shape of the trees, the shape of the mountain, everything. It's so big, but so good, that the minuscule tile errors don't change anything.
I don't normally give something like this but...
10/10

44Tim44...
You can walk through the whole thing without touching any grass. At all.
Other than that...hmm...
7/10

Well... That's kinda the thing, xD.

You're supposed to be able to get to
the 2nd town without a Pokemon,
since you will get your starter
in the 2nd town...
(I'm going to add scripts that keep
you away from the grass)


//44tim44

Ninja Caterpie
August 17th, 2008, 12:04 PM
How about fencing most of it off and leaving cut trees there? Saves the space you would have used for the scripts...

44tim44
August 17th, 2008, 12:10 PM
How about fencing most of it off and leaving cut trees there? Saves the space you would have used for the scripts...

Stop it, xD
Now you got me hesitating,
as to what to do T_T'

Wel, well, anyway thanks for the
rating DL ^^

//44tim44

Lucario 9
August 17th, 2008, 12:12 PM
Map Name: Route 5 (?)

Map Game: http://members.optusnet.com.au/soanevalcke/famepublication/badge-firered.png BPRE

Comments: This a route I have been working on for quite some time now. I thought I'd put it up here for some suggestions. This is my first time posting here so let me know of anything I need to change so I can break any bad habits now.
EDIT: Oh and there's a trainer blocking the exit in the southwest corner between the two smaller trees.

Mapshot: http://homepage.mac.com/loristyles/.Pictures/newmapstuffsplzkthanxbai/route5_6-NO-EVENT.jpgw w w wow it amazing i love the shape its nice and big and i love cliff maps there so amazing well i give this 10/10 well done
keep the good mapping up i would love to see more maps from you

colcolstyles
August 17th, 2008, 05:14 PM
it looks a bit like a route of ruby, but your version is way better^^
hehe, yeah I drew some inspiration from Route 119 in Ruby.
if we would be in need of a mapper i would ask you whether you want to join RomReaverz :pWow, you have know idea how much that means to me. I know you guys have a pretty full roster but let me know if anything comes up ;)

Neti
August 17th, 2008, 05:39 PM
hehe^^
thats exactly the route it reminded me of^^
if we should ever need a mapper ill contact you

¿TB Pro™
August 17th, 2008, 11:01 PM
Been Awhile since I posted here. I'm...well very rusty with mapping. I just need some suggestions.

Map Name: N/A

Base ROM: Fire Red

Map: http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh290/Blazikendude/town-1.png

Comments: Eh, like I said I need to practice, since I took a respite.

Disturbed
August 17th, 2008, 11:28 PM
I'll repost probably my favorite map again, since... its my favorite map and only got 1 review, so:

Map Name: Green Forest
Used to be: Route 2 (FireRed)

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/GreenForest100.png

Austinia
August 18th, 2008, 03:00 AM
I felt like inserting some tiles... not sure if I like em all that much... I'd only use them for this one map...

Please rate it :)

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/2996/forestmapzf4.png

Disturbed
August 21st, 2008, 01:03 PM
Uh... I posted this before, and apparently the whole last page got cut out, so, I present to you Edgepeak Cliffs

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/Edgepeak.png


WARNING: It is a page breaker.

Osher99
August 21st, 2008, 06:51 PM
Map Name: Geoya Path & Bloom Path

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: Made it 1 week ago please rate those 2

Mapshot:

Geoya Path:

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/2528/geoyapathom7.jpg

Bloom Path:

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/4941/bloompathzi7.jpg

Mr.Fury
August 22nd, 2008, 02:53 AM
Hello guys.
So i spent a couple days making and editing this map.
I think its the best thing ive made.
And i hope you think so to.
Fire Red
Rate from 1-10.
Please.

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8070/bestthingiveevermadevt7.th.png (http://img80.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bestthingiveevermadevt7.png)

:)

colcolstyles
August 22nd, 2008, 05:03 PM
Rated Map: Uh... I posted this before, and apparently the whole last page got cut out, so, I present to you Edgepeak Cliffs

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/Edgepeak.png


WARNING: It is a page breaker.

Rating: 7.5/10

Reason: This is pretty good. I really like the shape of the entire route. The tree placement is good, it's not square, it's a pretty good route. I also really like how you used the space (the player has to travel through the entire map to reach the other side.

Suggestions: Maybe I'm missing something but ... is it possible to go through the entire route without surf? If you moved one tree on the it would work (maybe that was intentional, I don't know). Anyways, the grass placement is pretty good but sometimes you put too much and there are areas with too little. There are a few empty spots you could fill with trees or grass. The non-grass mountain tiles are kinda weird amongst all of the grass but the contrast does make it look less empty. The river gets a little square at the bottom. The only problems with this map are little ones. If you fix them all, you've got yourself one hell of a map. :)

Disturbed
August 22nd, 2008, 08:28 PM
Can someone please rate my map instead of skipping it... :

Uh... I posted this before, and apparently the whole last page got cut out, so, I present to you Edgepeak Cliffs

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/Edgepeak.png


WARNING: It is a page breaker.

Map Name: Geoya Path & Bloom Path

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: Made it 1 week ago please rate those 2

Mapshot:

Geoya Path:

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/2528/geoyapathom7.jpg

Bloom Path:

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/4941/bloompathzi7.jpg



First Map: 7/10
Reason: The ledges at the top don't work, and the small trees in the middle have tile errors. I like the shape though.

Second Map: 6/10
Reason: Is kinda square to me, and I don't like the placement of trees, also, the random pathways kinda ruin it.

map name: breeze town
hack of: pokemon emerald
comments: well here's a map I just made, i made it out of boredom so i'm not expecting to win any awards

map: http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk126/example_02/map.jpg
Rating: .2/10
Reason: This map is not very good at all there are tile errors ALL over the place, the cliffs are way too square.. the placement of the trees is utterly horrible, along with the pathways. Another thing that bad is the placement of flowers. The waterfall does not look good there, and the borders will not work at all, and there is no way to get to the pokecenter. Sorry if I sounded harsh, but this map just needs to be fixed a little too badly.



EDIT: I didn't see your post before Colcolstyles... I guess I forgot to add that you will need surf to complete this map.. (Yes, you definetely get and need to use surf before here...)


Now onto 2 of my newest maps... (Yes, I finally attempted a city, my first attempt at an actually city ^_^)

Here's yet another route map:

There are connections from the bottom and from the right side... Also, I realize there is no grass on this map. There is a MAJOR reason for that, which I will not give away, as you will have to find that out in a future hack of mine.

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/sacredpathway.png

And now for my first CITY, not town, CITY. I think it came out pretty well. There are connections on the northern, eastern, and southern sides of this city.

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/CityofDoom.png

Osher99
August 22nd, 2008, 10:11 PM
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/sacredpathway.png

And now for my first CITY, not town, CITY. I think it came out pretty well. There are connections on the northern, eastern, and southern sides of this city.

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/CityofDoom.png

First map: 9.3
Wow i like the path and the placement of the trees.

Second map: 8.6
The city alright I didn't like the space in the road to the left house..

------

Map Name: Geoya City & Lorans Trick Path

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: The citty i made 1 week ago and the path today
Please rate those 2 , Thanks

Mapshot:

Geoya City:

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/3209/geoyacityix4.jpg

Lorans Trick Path 1:

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/9740/loranstrickpath1yc5.jpg

Disturbed
August 22nd, 2008, 10:29 PM
First map: 9.3
Wow i like the path and the placement of the trees.

Second map: 8.6
The city alright I didn't like the space in the road to the left house..

------

Map Name: Geoya City & Lorans Trick Path

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: The citty i made 1 week ago and the path today
Please rate those 2 , Thanks

Mapshot:

Geoya City:

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/3209/geoyacityix4.jpg

Lorans Trick Path 1:

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/9740/loranstrickpath1yc5.jpg

First Map: 7/10
Reason: I kinda like this map, but there is a tile error in the top left. The pathways are excellent, but I think you should reshape the water a little better.
Second Map: 5.5/10
Reason: I dont see any tile errors so thats good :), also, the grass and flower placement could use some help, along with the shapes of the cliffs.

After looking at your maps, I think you should try reshaping them, using a method that works wonders for me. ^_^

For water, jus scribble water around the general area you want the water to be. Tidy it up a little bit so it looks less square, like this: http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/Before.png, then add the finishing touches and you have a pretty good looking sea/river http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/After.png.


For cliffs, just scatter around the 4 sides of the cliffs all around where you want the cliffs to be, like this: http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/Before1.png, then just add the finishing touches, like before, and pretty cool and better looking cliffs. http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/After1.jpg...

Doing that, you could really help your maps out. If you do that, I will really rate your maps alot higher than before.

Neti
August 23rd, 2008, 09:24 AM
@maraudah:
thats exactly the method im using as well, its really good

Disturbed
August 23rd, 2008, 02:47 PM
Maraudah made yet another map!? oh em ghee!!!

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/11111.png

Austinia
August 23rd, 2008, 08:45 PM
@maraudah- thats the same method I use, for trees, grass, practically everything :p

Mr.Fury
August 23rd, 2008, 11:20 PM
Maraudah made yet another map!? oh em ghee!!!

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg19/Mecharatchet/11111.png

At the end of the little cliff that enters the map you can surf there and get passed the blocking stones.
Not sure if you intended to do that or not.

colcolstyles
August 23rd, 2008, 11:33 PM
Map Name: N/A

Map Game: http://members.optusnet.com.au/soanevalcke/famepublication/badge-firered.png BPRE

Comments: I made this while PC was moving servers. I'm not all that great at making towns/cities but I figured I give it a try. Not much else to say ... the mansion tiles were ripped from Emerald's Battle Frontier.

Mapshot: http://homepage.mac.com/loristyles/.Pictures/newmapstuffsplzkthanxbai/3rdCity_7.jpg

Disturbed
August 23rd, 2008, 11:40 PM
Map Name: N/A

Map Game: http://members.optusnet.com.au/soanevalcke/famepublication/badge-firered.png BPRE

Comments: I made this while PC was moving servers. I'm not all that great at making towns/cities but I figured I give it a try. Not much else to say ... the mansion tiles were ripped from Emerald's Battle Frontier.

Mapshot: http://homepage.mac.com/loristyles/.Pictures/newmapstuffsplzkthanxbai/3rdCity_7.jpg


Another map that I find quite impressive. Although I don't like the arrangement of houses and trees, and the fact that somehow you made the map look circular towards the bottom, and square on the top, I'm gonna give you a solid 9/10


@ Mr. Fury, no i did not intend that, I'll be sure to fix that >.< *inserts bush*

.Pichu-kun
August 23rd, 2008, 11:41 PM
OMG!!!
It's teh map of awesomenezz!
XD
Seriously, that's a wonderful map. :)
I completely love the shape, it's perfect, and I see no tile errors.
I LOVE that temple tower you used. ;)
10/10
Can't wait to see another awesome map by you! :D

Mr.Fury
August 24th, 2008, 12:04 AM
I have finally completed the map with the help of wind~
:)
Without further ado (or w/e the rich ppl say XD)
Made in firered:
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j44/WHATEVA_2006/bestthingiveevermadecopy-1.png

~Fire
August 24th, 2008, 12:16 AM
Map Name: N/A

Map Game: http://members.optusnet.com.au/soanevalcke/famepublication/badge-firered.png BPRE

Comments: I made this while PC was moving servers. I'm not all that great at making towns/cities but I figured I give it a try. Not much else to say ... the mansion tiles were ripped from Emerald's Battle Frontier.

Mapshot: http://homepage.mac.com/loristyles/.Pictures/newmapstuffsplzkthanxbai/3rdCity_7.jpg

another gorgeous map(sorry, but i can't rate your other one yet).
The mountain placement, trail, and tree placement is very good.
however, i don't like the small mountain in the top left, it just seems uneedded and like it only put there to make exiting a few steps longer.
i also think you have over vegetated it and put too little flowers in it.
the blue roofed house just seems strange, and the house with the brown door seems strange also.
Lastly, the mansion seems more like a lake resort considering what is behind it.
I'll give it an 8/10.
suggestions: I've posted what was wrong, so i think you can figure it out. But just remove about 3-4 big trees and 2-4 small trees.
now, i was wondering if you have read neti's mapping tutorial or if you made it all by yourself. and now, seeing this map, i think you are near neti's level of mapping.
i hope to see more maps from you colco_styles, because they just look so simplistically complex.

Ninja Caterpie
August 24th, 2008, 01:13 AM
Anyway, I'll give it a 9/10
I love the map in itself, just there are small parts that irk me.
There are too many trees... So much tree colour and so much rock colour don't really mix.
Some of the small rocky parts kinda irk me... Other than that, it's awesome!

A town in the mountains by me...
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5630/jenimietownxy6.png
Do you guys think I should make it like that, in a crater? Or should I change it?

colcolstyles
August 24th, 2008, 01:27 AM
another gorgeous map(sorry, but i can't rate your other one yet).
Why can't you rate the other one?
The mountain placement, trail, and tree placement is very good.
however, i don't like the small mountain in the top left, it just seems uneedded and like it only put there to make exiting a few steps longer.Yeah now that I think about it, it does look kind of odd. But if I didn't have it there, I would probably have ended up putting in (even) more trees
now, i was wondering if you have read neti's mapping tutorial or if you made it all by yourself.Well I did read his Mapping Tutorial and it definitely helped but I think I have developed a style different from what he teaches in the tutorial.
and now, seeing this map, i think you are near neti's level of mapping.
i hope to see more maps from you colco_styles, because they just look so simplistically complex.Wow, that really means a lot, thanks. But it's hard to call someone better than the other because different mappers have different styles (mine consists of heavy vegetation, as you have noted, while Neti's could be completely different).

edit: @dark lakitu
I appreciate the compliment but, as I said above, you can't really call a mapper better than another due to differing styles. Mapping is a form of art and is therefore open for interpretation; there is no perfect map (or mapper).

.Pichu-kun
August 24th, 2008, 03:43 AM
Here are three Blizzard mades, re-made. ;)
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/holyomfg3.jpg
Katae Town
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/holyomfg2.jpg
Route 901
http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk301/Eeveon_PC/holyomfg.jpg
Kira Town

P.S. In Kira Town, the reason why there isn't another exit there is because you get warped to the forest after completing a certain event. ;)

Mr.Fury
August 24th, 2008, 06:36 AM
The first one is really good. Nothing wrong with it as far as i can see.
The second one is pretty good, it seems a bit cramped but i think its fine.
The thrid one is really good, its just i dont like the random grass tiles. Even tho you cant get to them, they just seem out of place.

Anyways I re-did the starting area, and I believe its rather tile free. But the corners of the water are messed up. I couldnt find the correct tiles so i had to wing it and try to make some.

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j44/WHATEVA_2006/mehcopy-1.png

.Pichu-kun
August 24th, 2008, 06:43 AM
The house at the top right has a tile error, and the trees at the bottom need the two other tree tiles that connect to it, so it looks like they go on and on. ;)
7.9/10

Mr.Fury
August 24th, 2008, 06:49 AM
The house at the top right has a tile error, and the trees at the bottom need the two other tree tiles that connect to it, so it looks like they go on and on. ;)
7.9/10

Yeah I realized the house was wrong when i looked at the picture and when i tried to open the map to fix it. My old crappy map opened and evidently saying yes to saving means saying no. :/

.Pichu-kun
August 24th, 2008, 06:51 AM
Oops, I noticed tile erros one your mountains, so your rating drops to...6.8/10

trebuh12345
August 24th, 2008, 10:46 AM
these are my maps.pls rate them /10

Tropical Sunlight
August 24th, 2008, 10:57 AM
Can't see the maps O.o

Trees are green

Neti
August 24th, 2008, 10:58 AM
you shouldnt copy the text from imageshack into the img alert^^
you entered two images urls and brackets in the files where you are supposed to enter one image url
i know that from the text i received via email

windwos
August 24th, 2008, 10:47 PM
Name: Glacier Lake
Game: Ruby
Comments: I mad this map to be a tried up man made lake high up in he mountins. I know its saqarey but dont grade off that.

[img=http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/1483/glalcierlakeeventsvz4.th.png] (http://img292.imageshack.us/my.php?image=glalcierlakeeventsvz4.png)

cε׀׀
August 25th, 2008, 03:20 PM
Name: Glacier Lake
Game: Ruby
Comments: I mad this map to be a tried up man made lake high up in he mountins. I know its saqarey but dont grade off that.

[img=http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/1483/glalcierlakeeventsvz4.th.png] (http://img292.imageshack.us/my.php?image=glalcierlakeeventsvz4.png)

Rating: 3/10
Reason: The blue pallete doesn't look at all good. The mountain tiles are not well placed (I mean in the proper manner). The path doesn't look good. There is a dark pallete under the small trees. And the map is too empty.
Suggestions: Change the pallete. Try not to keep the places empty. Try to add more greenery and try to make it better ;)

windwos
August 25th, 2008, 06:30 PM
Rating: 3/10
Reason: The blue pallete doesn't look at all good. The mountain tiles are not well placed (I mean in the proper manner). The path doesn't look good. There is a dark pallete under the small trees. And the map is too empty.
Suggestions: Change the pallete. Try not to keep the places empty. Try to add more greenery and try to make it better ;)

Thanks for your suggtesions and in the future ill place my mountins better. And no more blue pallete:)

Zephiel
August 25th, 2008, 06:42 PM
Map Name: Pallet Town
Game: Pokemon Fire Red
Description: The new version of Pallet Town for my hack. The cave is an optional area available after beating the elite four, and I found flowers boring so I included a lake instead. This is my first map that's completely serious.

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Blaz/Pokehack/pallet_town.bmp

Shiny Mudkip
August 25th, 2008, 08:01 PM
Map Name: No Name, yet...

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: My First Map ever, enjoy!

Mapshot:
http://i33.tinypic.com/30ufztc.png

Austinia
August 25th, 2008, 08:20 PM
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/1527/fffffffgj7.pngNew map I made ^^ please rate <3 thanks!

Disturbed
August 25th, 2008, 09:13 PM
Map Name: Pallet Town
Game: Pokemon Fire Red
Description: The new version of Pallet Town for my hack. The cave is an optional area available after beating the elite four, and I found flowers boring so I included a lake instead. This is my first map that's completely serious.

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Blaz/Pokehack/pallet_town.bmp
1/10
Reason: There needs to me more vegitation, the mailbox is facing directly at the water, making it impossible to view from the front until surf, which is completely unrealistic. Also, the house at the bottom has a tile error, the lab just looks messed up, and also the corners on the water at the bottom are wrong. One last thing is the lab has a tile error on the roof.

Sorry if I sound harsh
Map Name: No Name, yet...

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: My First Map ever, enjoy!

Mapshot:
http://i33.tinypic.com/30ufztc.png

That is very good for your first map, so wow, nice start.
8/10
Reason: It is not square, which is good, kinda empty in places, and overall a pretty good map.

http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/1527/fffffffgj7.pngNew map I made ^^ please rate <3 thanks!
Rating- 7/10
Reason- The cliffs going into the lava look beyond awkward to me, also you can maybe add a couple trees at the bottom and the left side. Also, you can probably patch the grass some more.

Shiny Mudkip
August 25th, 2008, 10:24 PM
Map Name: No Name, yet...

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: An edit of my first map ever, enjoy!

Mapshot:

http://i36.tinypic.com/zkmlpt.png

Xray
August 25th, 2008, 10:30 PM
6/10 very un original, That looks exactly like The Starter town for Flame of Rage, just a shorter version, and the connection moved -_-

Shiny Mudkip
August 25th, 2008, 10:40 PM
I don't even know what the starter town in Flame of Rage looks like. This map was completely original and made by me and was not an intentional copy of it.

.Pichu-kun
August 25th, 2008, 11:00 PM
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/1527/fffffffgj7.pngNew map I made ^^ please rate <3 thanks!
I'm in love with this map! :D
I love the way you made the lava river. :)
A hard, and HOT map to go through. ;)
9.7/10
Map Name: No Name, yet...

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: An edit of my first map ever, enjoy!

Mapshot:

http://i36.tinypic.com/zkmlpt.png
Hmm...
This looks much better from the first time you posted your map. :)
I don't know what X-Ray is saying, this looks nothing like Flame of Rage. :)
The lab looks the same, but anyone could have made it! ;)
Nice for your first try...:)
8/10

Xray
August 25th, 2008, 11:20 PM
Uhh.. Let's not turn this into a rant, and Yes, it does look like FoR's starter town, and you are very Imature Shiny Mudkip to put "I hate Xray" in your signature.. -_-

To keep this post on topic, @Austinia, I love this map! 9/10

Jolteon1
August 26th, 2008, 01:10 AM
6/10 very un original, That looks exactly like The Starter town for Flame of Rage, just a shorter version, and the connection moved -_-

-_-Just because the house placements are almost the same?I uploaded them both!They both are differnt!-------------------Shiny Mudkip : I rate the map a 9!

~Fire
August 26th, 2008, 01:16 AM
Map Name: No Name, yet...

Map Game: FireRed

Comments: An edit of my first map ever, enjoy!

Mapshot:

http://i36.tinypic.com/zkmlpt.png

It looks pretty good for a beginning town, but it is an obvious change of firered.
Its pretty simple, like it should be, but the beach is too short and the rocks look too bunched up.the doorless houses are very disturbing to me, there should be more vegitation, and try to make it look more original.
rating:7/10
but please, don't leave PC for that reason