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phantom_zangetsu
April 26th, 2007, 04:28 AM
On and Off
the streetlamp lits, my love once grew
the streetlamp dies, my love now flew

my medal shines, and a kiss from you
my medal rusts and goodbye to you

the campfire burns, and happy moments we share
the campfire dies, and loving moments we tear

oh, see how it always goes?
it never stops from high to low
our happy times turn on and off
without a happy smile to think of


hope you guys like that....sorry if there are typos or some grammar errors....

fallen_angel
April 28th, 2007, 06:14 AM
That was really good. ^_^ Way better than my poems. XD I really liked how it rhymed. Great job!

phantom_zangetsu
April 28th, 2007, 06:38 AM
no way! my poems can never be better than yours!

you know? funny thing where the idea came from...i was so bored at 2am, there was me, on my bedroom, looking at the streetlamp....then it hit me....hahaha...weird huh?

.dumeli
May 7th, 2007, 12:52 PM
Wow, really good :) Did it take you a while or was it just off the top of your head?