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Lt. Surge's Raichu
May 10th, 2007, 01:49 AM
He walks in twilight but not for long.
Preparing for battle and sings a sad song.
A song about love and peace that never will fulfill.
The day is here he rides for his country.
Never to look back

She-Elf
May 10th, 2007, 01:52 AM
Oh, what a beautiful poem :) I really loved it ^^ The way you wrote it, it is so special ^^ Very good.

Lt. Surge's Raichu
May 10th, 2007, 01:53 AM
Thanks for giving me a great response :)