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Xhaiden
May 6th, 2004, 12:15 PM
((This was turned into a song by my band called Shattered Wings))


These faces they stare back at me,
Seeing things that they shouldn't see,
Ever watching as I slip away,
Away from this world,
into the dark,

I can't feel you,
I can't feel me,
Caught on the other side of reality,
Please don't turn from me,
Don't shut me out,
I close my eyes and fall apart.

These Faces surround me,
pulling me down.
All of this sadness,
It makes me unsound.
Maddness creeps into my soul,
All that I was is not anymore.

I can't feel you,
And I can't feel me,
Lost away from reality.
What can I do now that you're gone?
Somthing tells me I'm only a pawn.

These Faces they haunt me,
inside my head,
Nothing is sacred,
And never ends.
I look in the mirror and all that I see,
Perfection that stares back at me.

None of it's true and all that I know,
Is that the mirror is broken...

As is my soul....

Mew13
May 14th, 2004, 03:25 PM
That was awesome! I think it'd make an awesome song.... wish I could hear it.... You've got some talent! Keep it up!

Blitz~2005
May 14th, 2004, 03:32 PM
yeah did u write that it was pretty good i didnt read al of it but from what i read i could amagine it as a song

~Ozy~
May 14th, 2004, 05:23 PM
It is good as a song. As a poem, it's almost as good, although you switch your rhymes scheme a bit too much for my tastes. But that's just me.