My deck (just built) (yugioh)

[fudge01]

hi im building a deck to beat this guy at school who thinks he is so good but he didn't even know how to play untill i taught him and he thinks he taught me gz ok here is my deck i need people to help me improve
blue eyes white dragon
sonic duck
shining abyss
bottomless trap hole
graceful charity
soul exchange
gagagigo
enchanted javelin
man-eater bug
little wingaurd
karate man
rogue doll
stop defense
castle walls
rush recklessly
reinforcements
robbin' goblin
fissure
luminous spark
aqua madoor
giant soldier of stone
man-eating treasure chest
monster reborn
waboku
injection fairy lily
trap hole
black pendant
blast with chain
the flute of summoning dragon
lord of d.
ryu-kishin powered
battle ox
red eyes black dragon
judge man
rain of mercy
emergency provisions
dian keto the cure master
the releaible guardian
ray of hope
la jinn the mystical genie of the lamp
7 coloured fish
ryu kishin powered (again)
enchanted javelin
dark hole
dark magician
d.d. trainer
share the pain
yami
type zero magic crusher
snake fang
sword of drak destruction
penguin soldier
fissure (again)
giant soldier of stone (again)
ookazi
karate man
ryu-ran
dark energy
ominous fortunetelling
dragon capture jar
ryu-ran (again)
ceremonial bell
trap hole
harpie's brother

[Pokepoop]

Well it looks like an ok deck, But i think you shoud try and get some better cards. If you can PM me or post a list of all your good cards and maybe his deck i'll see what i can do to help you.

[fudge01]

well the reason i dont have much good cards is because someone stole them all *crys* i hate people who steal my cards
and i dont know all his deck because he is making a new one but he has 3 blue eyes or more ummm well see i dont really know o yeah and mirror force

[Intuition]

Why do you give peepz the chance to steal them?? :\
And you shouldn't have any monsters less than 1800 atk..

[fudge01]

mewther i am abosolutely sure i know that your not supposed t do what you just said you can have alot of cards lower than that expecially effect cards like karate man penguin soldier and alos big defenders -_-" power isnt everything

[Intuition]

That wasn't what I meant.. You CAN have effect monsters, I only have them!!(almost) (Exodia deck), and there are much cards with more than 1800 atk. I just mean that Rogue Doll etc. are pretty weak!! U must have stronger (no effect) lv 4 monsters!

[Kenny_C.002]

I c what you mean. So you still rate like Witch of the Black forest over the gemini elf, right Mewther?

[fudge01]

meh well anyway my deck caned him still on 8000 life points i was invincibble through the whole game i didnt even give him a chance so if oyu say my deck is crap its tottaly awesome and i didnt even have my best cards in it

[Kenny_C.002]

Well then, I guess you haven't been facing Spikes, have you? Take it from me, who likes to hurt Spikes with wacky decks, you want teh deck size to be small. It's fine if you dont' want to see your blue eyes on the field and kicking butt 7 out of 10 games instead of 5 out of 10 games. Fine with me.

As for the thing about rogue dolls, even I agree with Mewther. Harpie's Brother/Cyber Harpie/7 coloured fish/etc. > Rogue Doll any day.