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One Charmed Dude
June 29th, 2007, 10:20 AM
ok I haven't written poems since a while after I joined here so this probably sucks...lol I just want to vent my feelings...

Some people think they are above it all,
but really they are far below,so they can't hear they're mind's call.

To tell the truth people like that are worse than you,
they're not worth the gum on my shoe!!!

I now know why certain people make me cry,
they never were there for me, if I needed them they would fly.
I lost a friend that way, or so I thought she was,
perhaps it was just a dream because, she ended it.

At first I wished otherwise,
But now I see with new found eyes.

I'll add more poems as I come back...I'd like to hear opinions...

diamondpearl876
July 2nd, 2007, 06:31 AM
I like it. (: A little short, but I like it. I can also relate to it very easily.

The only error I saw was that "they're" in the second line of the first stanza should be "their". "They're" means 'they are', which wouldn't make sense if you tried to fit it in there.

One Charmed Dude
July 3rd, 2007, 05:29 AM
oops lol I know that...but I just wasn't doing all that well that day lol!!!Thanks!!!

Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
July 11th, 2007, 02:33 PM
It's a nice, poem, safe when we talk about rhythm. I can only find the third stanza rather uncertain... The last verse didn't rhyme, and the thing's bigger than the other ones. Nevertheless, good poem, I hope you post more.

One Charmed Dude
July 16th, 2007, 10:00 AM
^^^ thanks, I know one part doesn't ryme, I sort of did it on purpose...lol, thanks here's a new one, it's short and kind of corny but most of my peoms are lol!!!

I know it's been a long long time,
since I've seen my world in it's prime.

I now see with a new found light,
the darkness its self put up a fight.

Now I know what to say:
I need to see the light of day!
I've finally made the shadows...go...away!

One Charmed Dude
August 2nd, 2007, 07:25 AM
hi, everyone new poem here!!! excuse me if I spelled anything wrong...

It's time for a fight,
in the dead of night.

This wasn't always ideal,
but now it holds appeal.

I'll show you what I can do.
It's time to put an end to you.

Bring it on, I can take this.
I'm sick of these unfrienly faces.

I'll wipe that smirk of your face,
You need some one to put you in your place!!!

One Charmed Dude
August 13th, 2007, 07:51 AM
wow, no posts, huh??? ok well here's a new poem.

All has been well,
now is the time to tell,
what the future will bring.
In my ear anger shall ring.

When I return to that place,
I know I will see your face.
I'll do my best to stay confined,
if you stay in the area that's been outlined.

Let's try to go on another day,
don't let the temperary peace fade away.

One Charmed Dude
August 29th, 2007, 06:29 AM
This one is quite short but hey it's still something

Is this really what peace can do,
It has stirred something inside me and you.

How long will it stay,
until tomorrow or the next day?

I do not know for sure,
But I will not follow you false lure.

I will prevail, peace or neigh,
I am here to stay!

One Charmed Dude
September 23rd, 2007, 05:38 AM
really short one here, thought of it and just had to right it down XP
Todays the day,
a good one to play.
The best of all,
Summer's finally handed power to fall!!!
that one was really happy and kinda stupid, but I'll liv lol!!!

One Charmed Dude
October 20th, 2007, 10:20 AM
I'm a little upset right now and I think it's effected my poetry, so have at it...
Reality is one thing I can say sucks,
You can argue that it's a clash of lucks.
But how do you know such things,
No one does, not until the warning bell rings.
It's out of our power to see the exact events of a future hour.
We can struggle and put up a fight,
but that's as good as trying to see in the darkest of nights.
We all hope for the best,
and as for that, I'm like the rest.
We con only hope we win in the end,
and still love those we thought as a friend.

One Charmed Dude
November 3rd, 2007, 03:04 PM
Hi everyone here's a really short one...
Many people say roses are red,
and violet's are blue. but I say,
You've made me mad so now I'll stop you!!!

Romance Hero
November 4th, 2007, 06:11 PM
I'd say you're poems have a point to them, nobody should say anyone elses poetry sucks, as long as they're original, and come from your heart. In your case, I enjoy reading any love poem. xD

One Charmed Dude
November 13th, 2007, 03:55 PM
Why, thank you I appreciate that, as no one else has commented and I feel the same way about poetry, people can disagree with the message it sends, but that doesn't mean the poetry is bad!!!

One Charmed Dude
November 24th, 2007, 07:46 AM
haven't posted any new poems for a while...but here's a short one

Hello goodbye,
why oh why?
People just leave, they just fly.

Sometimes it's bad, sometimes it's good.
I have always handled as mucha s I could.

There's a power in that, and not just you,
so hold to your dreams and let go less than a few!

comments would be appreciated

One Charmed Dude
December 3rd, 2007, 03:31 AM
please comment on this one!!!
You cry, oh wa, poor you!
I'm sick of your attitude and of your face, can't you just get a clue?

You betrayed all you had,
but that's no longer my problem, I'm not sad.

Get out of my face,
get out of this place.

You ruin it for us all,
so get out and let yourself fall!!!

One Charmed Dude
December 27th, 2007, 01:57 PM
HEY YOU GET OFF MY CLOUD,
Fall in with the rest of the crowd.

I'm over you and your friends,
Your control is at its end.

I've overcome all my woes
I no longer fear you, my foes.

One Charmed Dude
January 6th, 2008, 05:18 PM
I'd like to devote this to my friends and merry christmas and happy new year everyone!!!It's the joy I feel when you're near,
It wipes away any tear.
Banished is every fear.

Thank you all my dear friends,
I know we'll be together until our ends.

One Charmed Dude
January 14th, 2008, 11:59 AM
here's a new one...Everything is connected,
but rudeness should be rejected.

Hatred, love, excitement and fun,
which ever you feel, we all see the same sun.

Though our alikenesses aren't complete,
the things that are, are set in concrete.

One Charmed Dude
February 1st, 2008, 11:39 AM
this is a bit different from normal but here...PLEASE COMMENT I WANT FEEDBACK!

Power within us all,
Here for sring, summer, winter, and fall.
All around us, here natur's powerful call.

Wonders are forever, just as space,
For everything has its very own place.

One Charmed Dude
February 24th, 2008, 08:03 AM
Haven't posted a new one in a while, but here it goes...
Power is power, that's what most people say,
But it forces us to praise it everyday.
I'm sick of this nonsense,
Let's end it forward and hence.

Resolve our problems, we can, oh yes,
How? Well take a guess.
Rebell and stand up,
Take authority's power, and throw it to the floor

Posts would be greatly appreciated...

here...kinda corney, like something one of those old oracles would say in like a book of fairie tales or something, lol
Dark and light,
Circle each other in an eternal fight.

Powers smite and clash,
Causing the skies to flash.

One must win, not yet, but someday,
This will happen, when one side's might fades away.

Superjub
March 2nd, 2008, 01:19 AM
The poems are quite good.
It would be good if you would have more of a variety between short and long poems but that is just my opinion.
Anyway, keep up the good work.

Superjub :t257:

One Charmed Dude
March 2nd, 2008, 03:41 PM
OMG A COMMENT!!! Thanks!!!I'll keep that in mind, here:
Water, Fire, Earth, Air,
They all keep each other's odds fair.

Their power is of all
They could never fall.

Forever they will be,
That's not up to you or me.

Ember
March 3rd, 2008, 02:12 AM
nice poems ^^
can you make some sad poems ^^

One Charmed Dude
March 3rd, 2008, 03:52 PM
thanks, well sad, i can try, they're not really my style though but here it goes...
The darkness falls,
And within the halls,

Sadness rules inside.
It's something from which no one can hide.

Despair fills the surroundings,
It's all puzzling and confounding.

What can you do?
I always ask too.

Good question they say,
But the darkness rules until day.

One Charmed Dude
March 20th, 2008, 12:46 PM
wow, haven't been on in a while but here it goes...it's a very short one...

Life isn't always a beautiful field,
Sometimes cruel people penetrate your shield.

There will always be at least one way,
That an idiot trys to ruis your day.

Romance Hero
March 21st, 2008, 03:38 PM
A lot of great short poems since I last read them. They're kind of like small life lessons, each telling something important about nature and the ways of life. Wonderful work. :)

P.S.: Watch your spelling, buddy. :D

One Charmed Dude
March 21st, 2008, 09:03 PM
Thanks for the feedback, and ok I will!

One Charmed Dude
April 29th, 2008, 01:34 PM
I hope I'm not breaking any rules by posting now, but I've been busy, I suppose if it's necessary and a mod asks, I'll make a new thread but that would suck, lol:Here...
To be defensive,
is sometimes a great offensive.
It teaches you how you must live.
And takes all the patience you can give.

Now and then, it's hard to do.
But I'll do anything, I mean anything for you.
I wish you had a clue,
about the way I feel for you.

Never before have I loved like this,
It's filled with hardships, and it's filled with bliss.
I know, one day, your attention won't miss.
Maybe then, we'll be together, if it fits.

I hope you can accept me.
Then, I'll be filled with glee.
You'll finally find my feelings and you see,
If that's the case, I'll set my feelings free.
Now, an explaination is probably required, because I don't usually write this way. As is probably obvious, I like a girl.But much less obvious is the beginning's story, which is, she's currently dating, and I've been very civil to her boyfriend, they don' even know I like her the way I do.

One Charmed Dude
May 23rd, 2008, 06:25 AM
This is still on a similar topic as the last poem...yeah...I'm love sick.

You're the only one.
You make me feel as though my life has just begun.
With your love I can finally feel the sun,
But without it, I fear my life is without fun.

The beauty within you,
Controls my dreams about us two.
Like I said, this feeling seems new,
But I would still do near anything for you.

Please open up to me.
Give me a chance and you will see,
I am the one, it is not he,
THe one who quickly stole you from me.