Need Some Help with my team

[drogontimer]

Ok this is what I have got so far. I've been tinkering for monthstrying to get it right and i just cant get it. Heres my Current team of 5

Torterra Lonely Shell Bell
Wood Hammer
Earthquake
Crunch
Rock Slide
Arcanine Quirky Destiny Knot
Flamethrower
Flame Wheel
Dragon Pulse
Extreme Speed
Tyranitar Serious Leftovers
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Crunch
Dragonite Sassy Draco Plate
Dragon Rush
Aqua Tail
Steel Wing
Ice Beam(only there temporarily)
Alakazam Brave Leftovers
Psychic
Focus Blast
Hidden Power
Substitute

I want to know what you guys and girls think I should add to me team. I am replacing alakazam with gallade as soon as i get a dawn stone but until then hes my best psychic.The gallade will be as follows
Gallade ? Leftovers
Leaf Blade
Psycho Cut
X-Scissor
Brick Break
I have no idea what to put in plz give feedback.

[Anti]

Get rid of flame wheel on arcanine. The only big problem I see off the bat is there are no strong walls. Go for more defense. It's kinda hard to read.

[sims796]

Get rid of flame wheel on arcanine. The only big problem I see off the bat is there are no strong walls. Go for more defense. It's kinda hard to read.

Stop going easy on him. Everybody does this, and no one seems to read the rules. I can't help, and I really wan't to (I have insomnia tonight) but I can't read this all bunched together. Space it out.

[Anti]

If I'm not going easy, this team would get MURDERED by a strong defensive tank and/or a wall or two. It is all sweepers, you have to have some other roles. You can find them all on the web and the best Pokes for those roles, but here are some recommended roles you incorperate into your team:
-physical wall, EX-torkoal
-special wall, EX-Regice
-rapid spinner, EX-blastoise
-baton passer (BPer), EX-Eeveelutions
-TANK, EX-Snorlax
-hazer/PHazer (someone w/ haze/roar or WWind), EX-crobat
-pseudo passer, EX-Claydol
-cleric, EX-blissey
-annoyer, EX-ludicolo
-subpuncher (substitute, focus punch)
-sunnybeamer (sunny day, solarbeam, and/or HP Fire/Flamethrower
-thunderdance (rain dance, thunder, and/or HP water/surf)

There ya go. Some pokemon can combine those roles, like blissey.
The last 3 are combos to use on your sweepers. Give your team some D and it will be much better.

[sims796]

That's not what I meant (although you are right...) I meant him posting his team in the wrong format. Alot of people do it, and the more experienced site members (you, me, and others) are too leneant, so others put it in unreadable format as well.

[Anti]

Oops, at 1:30 in the morning I'm not sharp like when I'm drinking my Coke. As for the team, I think my Scizor could put a monster dent in three of the five pokemon with silver wind. In other words, a big bug weakness (at least it's not ground!) Steelix could be a nice addition to the lineup. Screech+Explosion=doom! You can breed EQ to an onix w/ a geodude/graveler/golem w/o wasting the TM.

[sims796]

Will ya stop helpin him out! :laugh: Now he'll never xhange the format. And this is silly, it's 1:30 here too. In New York.

[Anti]

Wasn't trying to be mean, just constructive critizism. If I was, I'm sorry! I am in the eastern time zone as well. Groan...
I guess I have no more suggestions right now. Maybe replace one or two pokemon with more D-orriented pokes. That's all I got.

[sims796]

No your not being mean, your being too nice...

[Anti]

Now I'm just confused! A more balanced team would destroy this one like Chef Ramsey vs. Josh (for those of you who watch Hell's Kitchen). In other words, no contest. Some strategy would make this team better very fast.

[sims796]

*Sigh* I give up. I guess I will try to help too. I am saying when you help him and his format is like that, I mean the way he wrote his team, others will write their team like that too. Your advice is good.

[Anti]

Thanks, you wouldn't expect good advice from me based on my team. Too many common pokemon could mow through this team. That's the problem. BTW this is random but I have to ask what does lol mean? I'm new to the forums and I'm ashamed I don't know. Back to the team, those natures are god awful. Rebreed dragontimer and it will pay off a lot.

[sims796]

lol: laugh out loud, apparently

[Anti]

Holy "I cant come up with a word right now cuz its 2 in da morning"!!!!! My mom was right! Time to go get some medication... Staying on topic (again, hard at 2 in tha morning), maybe gorbyss could BP Iron D and amnesia to the team to make it have rock solid D (but if it gets OHKO'ed...)

[drogontimer]

This is sort of the reason for the thread but not really. Guys I'm sorry but I cannot have wall. It just bugs me. I need guys with good att ot sp att and ok def. Those are my standards usually. What I want to know is what pokemon should be the 6th party guy. I have access to everything I just need to know what to use. I like Muk. Here learns lots of attacks and has good sp def. but i don't know that was the purpose of the thread. Sorry i didn't specify before.

[Shiraishi]

When I saw Alakazam@leftovers with Brave nature, I died inside. give him focus sash or wise glasses o.o timid nature as well.