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The Seven Deadly Sins.

Posted December 1st, 2012 at 02:07 PM by Gleam Noiyam

"Commited to her"

I look at her with my eyes
that's when I feel the jealousy inside.
She's surrounded by men
hundreds and thousands of men.
It's like she's a magnet I don't understand.

I felt a pull on the inside
I wanted her all for myself and I would do anything I could try.
I'll kill all the men around her they can suffer my wrath
...But I'm far too lazy to kill
far too much effort to kill.
I'd rather thrust myself upon you right here and now.

I'll hoard you and I'll steal you from everyone else
that's the main thing I want.
To steal you from all those men
oh to destroy that harem of men!
While at the same time keeping my ego up
my splendid of ego...
And will have you at my hands!
So here we go.



Do you guys believe in the seven deadly sins?

The seven deadly sins are:

Pride
Lust
Gluttony
Envy
Greed
Sloth
Wrath.

In my opinion there should be a few more: desire should be one of them. ...I can't think of anything else. Maybe ignorance? Nah. How about deceit? (As in decieving someone.)

As for me I do beleive in them. I've committed... a few of them: greed for sure and sloth. I've committed those two and I know it.

Oh yes in case you can't identify where I hid all the seven deadly sins:

Line two is where I hid the sin envy.

Line seven I hid the sin greed.

Line eight I hid the sin wrath. (Not a good one, sorry.)

Lines nine and ten I hid the sin sloth.

I'm not good with the sin lust but it's somewhat hidden in line eleven.

I believe line twelve has gluttony in it?

And finally, I'm also not sure if I pursued it right but lines sixteen and seventeen have the sin pride in it. ...I think...

Um.... I tried. ; It needs work, I know.

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    Desire is either greed or lust, isn't it? Desire to be "with" another person is lust. Desire to own a person or thing is greed. Or desire to own something someone else owns is envy.
    Posted December 1st, 2012 at 04:13 PM by Oryx Oryx is offline
 

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