The reason I didn't answer before is because you're supposed to wait at least 24 hours before contacting a moderator about a thread awaiting approval. As well as that, you're not supposed to hassle them about it- ie, don't send a PM AND a Vm, just send one VM.
Your thread was not approved because it doesn't really fit in the Beginners Lounge:
It says clearly in the Rules thread,
Hacking groups cannot be created here and still belong in the Team Discussions forum.
So your thread would have been more appropriate in the Teams Discussions forum.
But, it wouldn't have met all the requirements for that, either- it was a bit lacking in an introduction, it basically said "I need a hacking team to help me out". Yes, the story was pretty lengthy but that's not really a factor in Team threads.
So, if you want to make a stab at it again, then have a look at the Rules and Requirements of Teams Discussions. You should also have a look around at other team threads that have been approved to get an idea of what is needed. A lot of them have fancy CSS layouts, don't worry about that, it's the content that's important :)