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  1. Cirrus
    May 19th, 2012 07:18 AM
    ... Golden Sun-based name?!

    Isaac ... and Blados.

    Also - uh, after reading over it again - there aren't any aristocrats in Calis, not the conventional variety anyway.. Perinth is a mercantile and oligarchical nation, and wealth is essentially power. Also, it doesn't make too much sense for his family to have huge amounts of power but be unable to prevent one of their relatives from being murdered by a rival family (and I don't detect too much presence from them in your backstory altogether, except for the palace, which would probably be more like a mansion) - was his family ruined by something?
  2. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    May 18th, 2012 12:51 PM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    Alright.. I still see no problem with it, lol.

    I'll see into editing my post right away.
  3. Cirrus
    May 18th, 2012 12:48 PM
    It's the line spacing ... I don't think it's my bandwidth, nor do I think it's a problem with a theme, but I'll just format it myself when I'm reading it. '_' I mean the lack of a line between your first and second paragraphs though (like this line right here below this paragraph).

    The shortsword exists, as does the rapier. Anything remotely European exists, essentially.
  4. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    May 18th, 2012 12:34 PM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    I see nothing wrong with the formation of my SU, really.. lol Maybe it's just your bandwidth? As for the spelling mistakes, I think more than I type. Hope that's understandable, as I've no spell check. xD I'll fix 'em, though

    Hm. What kind of light swords exist, then?

    Last line should explain it now.
  5. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    May 18th, 2012 12:19 PM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    I have literally no idea what you're talking about. Just tell me how to fix it. xD
  6. Cirrus
    May 18th, 2012 12:07 PM
    Be very careful with your formatting for your SU; I think you might have directly transferred it from a word processor onto PC, which screws up the spacing badly. : o
  7. Cirrus
    May 17th, 2012 08:08 AM
    No. ; U

    Arianne ... hmm, where to start? I'll send you a private message on my vision of the story and what I have planned for that specific character. (This is partially /probably/ why I'm going to end up playing her, by the way - it would be fairly awkward for anyone else to do it, on second thought, because of specific plot-related details... x_x)

    Note that her gender pronoun is never ambiguous throughout the entire thing, though.
  8. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    May 17th, 2012 05:23 AM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    So you're actually greek? ;B

    Well the thing is I, umm.. kinda started writing about a character with a similar personality to the muse. xD; Maybe you'd like to have a look at it? I can write something else, though, I have something in mind.

    I'll do my best. Your RP looks so pro. xD
  9. Cirrus
    May 17th, 2012 05:10 AM
    Hahahaha, yes, that Eleusis. I do some Classics, so.

    No, actually - you can just sign up for a non-legend character if you desire, since there are actually those now. (In fact since I'm writing the SU for Arianne myself, it would be ideal if you did : o).

    I feel a little iffy about including extra people, but I think if your SU is very good it should be perfectly fine.
  10. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    May 16th, 2012 11:26 AM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    Eleusis? As in, Ελευσίνα? ;D

    Is there another spot in your RP, by the way? I see Arianne's legend open, but I'm not sure if I HAD to choose a legend or not.

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