Ok, here's the link to the guide on how to make better characters;
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthr...91&styleid=168
Once you've read it, feel free to redo your SU in Fuyu's RP if you still want to join it. There is nothing saying you can't try again.

That's what Crebirk did, and he got accepted after he changed it a little. Of course, you don't have to if you don't want to. See ya around.
