NO RANDOMNESS! It makes the hack seem unbearable "Here, have a Pokedex"... Why?
Grammar - Check it!
Maps - Improve, not natural enough! Also, play through your maps, checking there are no errors (Especially with the borders!
Scripts... Need work.
Tiles - Insert your own! Mine are good as a start point, but you need to add your own!
Cannot access the cave - Wrong entrance on it as well.
Beginning is kinda... Weird.