Thanks a lot for the review man. I'm physically cringing on the amount of mistakes that I have made. I'm about to throw up. X_x Anyway, I'm glad that you reviewed and hopefully I'll rework it. I posted my initial thoughts on the review in the thread. Check it out.
I have to give you a review on your fan fiction but I have reviewed myself out of reviews today. XD I like the way it is going. I'm curious what is going to happen next.