I don't mean to rush you or anything, but 3 out of 5 of the members of A new Start have already posted their first chapter. Take your time though... but I think I will have chapter 2 up tomorrow or Monday.
Well, I can definitely say that you're accepted. If you want criticism... The only thing I noticed is that personality was a bit short, but like I said in the thread, I know it's probably the toughest thing to do.