my latest post has chapter 3 posted... And I'm not a fan of digimon so sorry I won't join the RP

Hey i made a digimon rp if you're interested you should sign up

yeah you pick those up very soon... right when the next chapter starts. Just waiting on 2 people. If they don't reply back tomorrow I will move on without them

Oops sorry i thought we had one already because i was reading the front page and you said we did I'll go fix it

when did you get a pokeball? You haven't gotten your items yet. That is the next chapter

And to get the bonuses you can just make another post that is more descriptive. Talk about the battle mainly. You can get into the other info like character development but the main thing I care about is the battle, just elaborate there.

And for items it depends on how you set up your environment to find it. Do you find it on the floor? On a pokemon? Someone giving it to you? And what obstacles had you have to go through to get it? You do those and it will help you

You two charged each other and just struck each other head on. Most of the times people who are trainers, especially these NPC made to guide you guys, are smarter than to just go head on. Especially in a type disadvantage.

It was a good post but not extraordinary. If you read Charzeon's post to deal with the battle scene, that was good. Although not great as she could have also been more descriptive of how the pokemon dodged.

You have a lot to learn and there is still a lot left in the game so don't be discouraged...

You can even try to battle a wild pokemon now, seeing how your pokemon took only 1 hit and thus has a lot of energy left. After that you can try to get an item, and I might even reward you with a quite special one...

You could have improved the battle. There are also times when you dodge and miss attacks. It isn't always a hit. Especially when the trainer has a type disadvantage he isn't just going to let his Bellsprout get hit twice. You could have worked on the dodging also...

The fight definitely should have been longer. The length of the entire piece was okay, but the length of the battle was very short.

what do i need to improve to get the level up/item bonus

you can choose to battle a pokemon and get a level up if you make it decent. Your post was good but not great so I didn't give a level up. Another good post will guarantee the level up though. Or make a post and go for an item. I'll do a number generator if I like it enough. If not I'll just give you dusk (or nothing)