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Conversation Between Nakuzami and The Last Sentinel
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  1. The Last Sentinel
    May 2nd, 2011 06:12 PM
    The Last Sentinel
    xD, I know. Thanks for the criticism, it was helpful. I understand what you're saying so I'll try to touch things up.
  2. Nakuzami
    May 2nd, 2011 05:44 PM
    Well, I read your post...and yes, you did kinda fail with first person XP
    Okay, for one thing you seemed to be talking in past tense a lot, and when you weren't it just sounded a little odd. Like this sentence:

    'I can see and hear people beside their houses yelling, some screaming.'

    Well, it wouldn't sound weird if you made 'can' could. Well...it was like you had past tense when not needed and you didn't have when it was needed.

    It also seemed just a bit rushed, but it wasn't bad. That's my little bit of constructive criticism. Or at least, I hope it was constructive :3
  3. The Last Sentinel
    April 28th, 2011 05:50 PM
    The Last Sentinel
    Alright, guess I talk to you Monday than.
  4. Nakuzami
    April 28th, 2011 05:27 PM
    Okay, we can start Monday then. I'll have to make a new OOC thread too as it's over a month old...
  5. The Last Sentinel
    April 28th, 2011 05:08 PM
    The Last Sentinel
    I'm perfectly find with it. Also, as soon as people see us with a good plot they'll likely want to join too.
  6. Nakuzami
    April 27th, 2011 05:50 PM
    Herro. Do you want to start Worlds Collide with just you, me and Michaela? She thinks we can, and if we don't it will just die anyways. If you think we can/should, then we will.
  7. Nakuzami
    April 14th, 2011 02:44 PM
    Okay, sorry. We can discuss over PM to make it easier.
    When you do send me the PM, send a small list of some "Special Features" that you would like.
  8. The Last Sentinel
    April 14th, 2011 01:38 PM
    The Last Sentinel
    I'm ready to discuss the special features.
  9. The Last Sentinel
    April 11th, 2011 04:36 PM
    The Last Sentinel
    Ok, I think I edited my SU enough. *Crosses fingers*
  10. The Last Sentinel
    April 11th, 2011 04:20 PM
    The Last Sentinel
    I agree, anyone and everyone is able to make great plots as long as they try. These plots also may keep everyone(even you) on our toe.

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