Your fine just the way you are.But if you really want to please people like Sky,read there posts,and read a good book or too.I know I hate reading a lot,but I don't mean a lot,just maybe a chapter or too.Usually real authers are very good at being discriptive.
Okay dude your not listening at all. All your posts in this thing have been one liners, and your Legendary is Zekrom, who as part of the Tao Trio, is the yang. Yang means bad if you didn't know. Your biggest problem is you don't even use punctuation.
((OOC: Okay I feel the need to [COLOR=blue ! important][COLOR=blue ! important]post[/COLOR][/COLOR] this again, for future reference. Some of you, no names seem prone to posting one or two liners. This really isn't good, your posts should be descriptive, at least one paragraph. And like I said before, please do try to keep in mind the real personalities of the legendaries. I'm not going to say that my posts are the best or something, but they are descriptive and they tell why my pokemon did what it did, and how it felt about doing this. When you write rp posts, try and describe your characters surroundings or the way he/she is feeling and what he/she is thinking, as well as expressions. Try and look at other peoples posts and learn from them, thats how you get better. Sorry if it came out as harsh but, I think it needed to be said.))
Honestly, when I said no names, I was including you