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Conversation Between Astinus and Ray Maverick
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  1. Ray Maverick
    August 18th, 2013 08:42 AM
    Ray Maverick
    RTFRP (Read the Rules Please)

  2. Ray Maverick
    May 30th, 2013 02:56 PM
    Ray Maverick

    It's finished and not a single review, lol, can you move it to the Archive?

  3. Ray Maverick
    December 21st, 2012 03:03 AM
    Ray Maverick
    Oh, by the way... I'm curious, what did LMFAO post exactly? I didn't see you deleted his post until now.

  4. Ray Maverick
    December 20th, 2012 02:38 AM
    Ray Maverick
    Ah... well I don't feel comfortable asking, because I don't know if I'd be able to review their fanfics myself.

    That's a tough question... I've actually written much more of it, and my writing style improved throughout it if I say so myself, but I haven't posted any of that stuff yet. You can review it chapter-by-chapter, then.

  5. Astinus
    December 20th, 2012 02:03 AM
    Reviewing challenge! If you want, you can ask the others to look at your fic as well. They might not be able to get to it before the month is over, but it never hurts to ask.

    How much of your story would you like me to review? Would you like me to read all that you've posted and review on that, or would you prefer a chapter-by-chapter review series? Either way is fine by me.

  6. Ray Maverick
    December 18th, 2012 02:33 AM
    Ray Maverick
    It's all right, thanks.

    I'll be waiting! But, review challenge?

  7. Astinus
    December 17th, 2012 07:29 PM
    Okay, it's all set. Let me know if there's anything that needs changing.

    I was planning on reviewing your fanfic for the review challenge. So by the end of the week, I'll post something about it.

  8. Ray Maverick
    December 17th, 2012 12:59 PM
    Ray Maverick
    Originally Posted by Poll
    In which aspect do you think this fan fic is lacking?
    - Character interaction. More drama & comedy!

    - Fighting. More action!

    - Writing, descriptions and scenes. Put more thought in those!

    - Plot. I want a more solid and gripping story.

    - I enjoyed it as it is.

    That should be it for the question and the answers. A secret, closed poll is fine. And give the fan fic a look if you'd please - an opinion would do me good. Thanks in advance. And happy belated birthday, mate.

  9. Astinus
    December 17th, 2012 12:14 PM
    I have to do it for you. If you let me know what you want the poll about, I'd be happy to add one to your thread.

  10. Ray Maverick
    December 17th, 2012 10:51 AM
    Ray Maverick
    Hey. How do I add a poll to my thread? I don't see the 'Yes, post a poll with this thread' checkbox anywhere when I edit my post. I thought of asking you in case polls are not permitted in Fan Fiction and Writing forum.

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