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  1. Lash
    May 25th, 2008 11:35 PM
    Fearow would look sex with him. XD But, ya still gotta admit, Marowak would look awesome with him. Like Sneasel, a Pokemon that is ready to kickass.

    And, for the Ouija board Pokemon thought.. That, obviously, is still in process. The main idea, though, is a couple of teens go into that one spooky place in Eterna Forest. Through the power of writing, the place would be even spookier. But, the couple of adolescent peeps enter the place, one the doubtful, turnback type, and the other the lets go this'll be fun type.
    They continue venturing on through the building, through spooky hallways, till they get to, "the main room" so to speak. The lets-carry on type as a Ouija board, to talk to the dead. They begin the contact, and ask if its a Pokemon, and its not. The thing contacting them is also an evil thing, poor people. They try to survive the night, not being able to stay still since literally everything in the haunted house is trying to kill them. They can't even open the doors. This fashion of life and death continues on, till they try to fight back with their own Pokemon. Eventually, that leads to once again, the main room again.
    The Ouija board they brought with them has been destroyed. A weak, but good Rotom living in the house tried to help them. (lol Supernatural show) They put salt on every entrance into the room, and draw pentagrams for backup. For the temporarily safe moment, they try to think up of a plan. Nothing comes up, so they make a Ouija board of their own. The main character has a Weezing, and they use its sludge to draw the numbers and letters on the floor, to try and reason with the angry spirit, which doesn't work. Then, they strike a deal. If they let the spirit in, it has to manifest a physical form as a Pokemon for one final battle.
    They let it in, by scratching out the pentagrams and dusting away some salt. Making its away in, the Rotom splits in two; One pure evil form, and one good form for the battle, the evil form obviously being the only one to battle. Weezing tries to battle it, but it can barely touch the evil little Rotom. The only one that can defeat the evil Rotom, is the timid, little good Rotom. The battle takes place, good Rotom obviously getting its ass handed to it, not wanting to fight. It somehow defeats the evil Rotom (still working on that winning the battle part >_>), laying the bad spirit to rest, and the barely alive adolescents rush the hell out of there with Rotom. The end.

    I wish we could use spoilers here. And, obviously, I have much work to do o this one. But, go ahead and suggest a different version of an OT fic.

    edit; And, in the little time that is left in May, I will try and write my own FFC, quite obviously the Death prompt >_>;;
  2. Astinus
    May 25th, 2008 10:58 PM
    8D Yay! Two posts I can respond to!

    For non-OT fics that are good, there's Bay's Nothing, Everything. And...uh... Well, nothing more is coming to my mind, since most fics that I've read deal with original trainers in some way. But if you want a different kind of OT fic (like not just "Imma gonna get all teh badges!" plot), then I have a few more recs for that.

    Ouija-board and Pokemon? O_o

    Oh! It took me forever to find my notebook where I wrote down his team, but I found the Pokemon I gave to Harrison for my fanfic where he's a main character. (Just know that I'm a fan of the "forgotten" Pokemon. He would still have Blaziken, of course, but then there would also be Fearow, Sandslash, Crobat, Golduck, and Tangrowth. His Sinnoh team is a bit less...odd. XD; (Whoo for Fearow though!)
  3. Lash
    May 25th, 2008 8:49 PM
    Hey Asty~ :3

    Do you have any good references for non-OT fics? A side project, if you will. I somehow got the idea of a Ouija Board + Pokemon mix XD;
  4. Lash
    May 12th, 2008 4:30 PM
    Ever since he was introduced, he has been in my top favorite trainers. It would be fun to see a side story like Pokemon Chronicles focusing on Harrison--- Wait, thats why we have fanfiction XD

    But I remember he said something about going to Kanto after the Johto League. I could totally see him with Pokemon like.. Jolteon, Scyther, Starmie, Marowak, Fearow. Those would just naturally look good with him.
  5. Astinus
    May 12th, 2008 4:19 PM
    I now <3 you forever. I'm just so glad to meet another person who's even heard of Harrison. He's the only character keeping me in this fandom, since he's the main character of my fanfics.
  6. Lash
    May 12th, 2008 4:13 PM
    Random comment that sounds like a reply rofl: Well, I am a Hazuki fan too. Can't blame ya, the guys cute ;D
  7. Lash
    May 8th, 2008 12:45 AM
    rofl, lack of mojo, you and Silver have? April and May must be bad months- I have seen some bad irl breakups, and other stuff in life that I don't feel like mentioning.
    I think I have lost some mojo too. Last month, I finished the first chapter of my fic, and now I am going to revise it, and I haven't gotten much of that done ;; Hope I get in the mood soon o3o

    So, hows it going?
  8. Astinus
    April 26th, 2008 12:08 PM

    It really depends on how you want to approach your fic. You can post the first chapter now, and wait to see what reviewers say so you can use the advice in your next chapter. Or, if you don't want to have gaps between postings, you can have a few chapters written before posting.

    Like I said, it really depends on what you want to do. Personally, I'm waiting to have a few chapters ready to go, since it takes me forever to write. But if you want to see what people have to say about your fic, then post the first chapter when you're ready.
  9. Lash
    April 25th, 2008 10:36 PM

    Would it be a good idea to write more than one chapter in the fic before releasing it? I am done with the first chapter, and TK is my reviewer, but I am jittery and intense especially since i have had to go a week without inferior beer.
  10. Lash
    April 17th, 2008 12:16 AM
    Ironically the same year I was born. Sometimes I think god gets a kick out of Patrick involved irony.

    But, it doesn't need reviewing. I only changed like, 40% of the song. I need to get better at one-shots XD;
  11. Astinus
    April 16th, 2008 11:45 PM
    I would review your one-shot, but I so don't know the song. ;; My knowledge of current music stops at 1993.
  12. Lash
    April 16th, 2008 12:45 AM
    I wrote an iffy one shot.
  13. Lash
    April 14th, 2008 5:56 AM
    Ah, thanks. That lifted a lot off of my mind.
    And yes, I should lay off the Starbucks. They kept me up till 4AM, then I slept at 5AM, after which at 6AM I made break feast.

    I just hope I can continue writing my fic soon. Like I said, TK and Gummy are all "WRITE WRITE WRITE RELEASE RELEASE RELEASE", for like the past month or so XD Hooray for internet schooling giving me more time to be creative~
  14. Astinus
    April 14th, 2008 3:25 AM
    XD I think you need to lay off the Starbucks.

    Just because your character is based off of Ruby doesn't mean that he has to be exact, or else manga fans will kill you. I mean, I've read plenty of fics where the main characters have some small similarity to either a video game character or a manga character, but they tweaked it just enough to separate the two. Seriously, I've read plenty of fics where the main character looks exactly like the FireRed/LeafGreen girl trainer.

    In less words: Your character is fine. Since you aren't writing about Ruby the manga character, no one can claim that you're messing up his character. You're writing about your own character who has his basis in Ruby.
  15. Lash
    April 13th, 2008 7:49 PM
    Well, I do have one thing on my mind that might or might not be an issue with Manga fans.

    Ruby is one of my favorite characters, making Hoenn one of my favorite regions. The fic will be called, "Jade Adventures", the main character being a base of Ruby. Jade is a hue of Emerald. My main characters, Jade and May (not going with Sapphire) will start off their journey in their Emerald clothing. I am not too much of a fan of the RS clothing. And, though the main male is off of Ruby's base, Jade isn't like Ruby. He likes gym battles, not contests. Same goes with May. So, the thought of people not liking the main character because he is off of Ruby's base, but not like him, and not using his name, nor a hue of it. And with May, name not being a hue of Sapphire.

    Think there will be any troubles among Manga fans, or are my Starbucks hyped energy levels (I had like two or three Grande Fraps today) just messing with my head? XD;
    Though, despite the possible facts, I am still planning to release it. One, I just love Hoenn and trainer fics, two, TK and Gummy are pressuring me, and three, I am really inspired. I have the storyline all planned out, the final battle is always buzzing in my dreams, and much more.

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