well there is one difference from Lu :p He always liked spilling the beans on the story heck he told me how WAR 2 was suppose to end (he also focused way too much on the Pokemon side to the point the humans didn't really have a role at the end of WAR 2).
Also please tell me no silly "god"/legendary plot like Lu had for 2... The RP was good focusing on the WAR between humans and Pokemon.
Oh ahahaha that was meant as a joke xD; Most of the mods/people in Other Chat were using the same Lady Gaga avatar, so I searched creepy face and picked this one xD It's only temporary though, I'll get the totem one back soon d:
Um Character wise I have some issues with him first is your use of several Pokemon game items... remove those. You can have some minor magic items (enchanted ones...) that can do something, but not items taken from the game.
Also you can't be faithful to Rivir and be a thief since being a thief honestly contradicts what Rivir stands for (especially honor). Rivir is more for a character who walks the path of a honorable warrior, and not a thieving rogue. I realize I don't have a god/goddess that would fit for a thief so I may add one for you (or others to use).